( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)
[Normal]
Hitsounds may be a little strange
00:12:091 (4) - Move to left by 1 grid (nazi)
00:16:404 - Break here
00:29:904 - Something like Clap hitsound can be placed here
00:32:904 - ^
01:01:404 (3) - Arrange this for a little to look like (Try moving without Grid Snap):
01:10:029 (3) - This too, arrange the tail to look neater, you can try without Grid Snap:
01:11:529 (1) - Make this a blanket with 01:11:154 (4) - may look better
01:20:529 (5) - This may be a little hard to react cuz it appears again in the same place as 01:18:654 (1) - , try moving the shape or rotating it and stack with 01:19:779 (3) -
01:22:404 (2) - Nazi mod, bend the slider more looks better
01:28:591 - Break here, looks like you did some offset change before
01:40:779 (2) - Nazi blanket, make it look like:
01:54:654 (4) - Blanket with 01:53:716 (3) - , it looks like it's forced to place there
02:23:529 (1) - Better blanket:
02:39:466 - Try 25% or 20% volume, hitsounds here should be soft
02:51:091 - Try lowering the volume of here, include spinning volume
02:52:029 - Break starts here
03:42:654 (1) - Nazi blanket
03:43:404 (2,3) - Swap place, (3) first looks flowy
03:48:091 - Missed clap (likely drum snare), can try some more hitsounds
04:16:591 (1) - Make it 1.0x DS for consistency
04:26:341 (2,3) - Nazi blanket
Btw the last KIAI part looks very hard cuz all the notes are sticking together in 1/2 , try to decrease their density like using more 1/1
[Hard]
00:09:466 (7,8,9) - Prefer not to stack, will look better
00:16:404 - Break here, maybe due to offset change
00:36:279 (6,7) - Swap their timing place suits the flow
00:50:716 - Add a note here feels better for me to hit accurately for 00:50:904 (1) -
00:53:529 - Add something here like 00:59:529 (9) -
00:56:529 - ^ Applies
01:05:529 - ^
01:08:529 - ^ For easier timing too
01:14:529 - ^
01:17:341 (3) - I would prefer this to be placed above 01:16:779 (2) - and then blanket 01:18:091 (5) - with 01:17:529 (4) - , also arrange the shape of (4) by a little if possible
01:21:091 (6) - Place at the ride side of 01:20:529 (5) - 's tail fits the flow of 01:21:466 (1) -
01:26:716 (1) - Ctrl+G? Looks fun and a little symmetry with 01:27:654 (3) -
01:28:591 - Break here
01:54:091 (5,6) - Swap their place, then use Ctrl+G for 01:54:654 (8) -
02:05:529 - A note here, applies for all big white ticks behind like 02:08:529 -
02:13:779 (6) - Ctrl+G
02:14:154 (7) - ^ better flow and pattern
02:22:779 (7) - Ctrl+G
02:24:466 (3) - Place it above 02:24:654 (4,5) -
02:32:154 (4) - Ctrl+G (optional pattern suggestion)
02:33:091 (6) - Unstack, place at left top of 02:32:529 (5) - 's tail
02:34:591 (5) - Ctrl+G for pattern
02:39:466 - Try 25% or 20% volume, hitsounds here should be soft
02:51:091 - Try to lower the volume here, include spinning volume
02:52:029 - Break here
04:23:529 (1) - Inconsistency 1.2x DS
04:25:029 (1) - ^