I'm pretty sick at the moment with the flu, but I took a play through your Hard on this just cause I was bored and happened to just wake up.
Your rhythm is not good on Hard. Barely any of your triplets make sense, and your streams make no sense. This map isn't meant to be fully mapped at 152 bpm if you've looked at my map, I'm assuming you did because the offset was only changed by +1ms.
That part with those triplets like in Distorted Pain [Insane] is absolutely terrible. You have a number of maps ranked now, you shouldn't be doing stuff like this. You know better than that.
You people who have modded this map and let this kind of rhythm slip is just unacceptable.
I will give you a star if you can put your heart into this song and make a better map. I'm sorry but I just can't star this right now, I like this song a lot too and this is rather disappointing to see.
[Normal]
Yeah ztrot's right you need an Easy.
00:13:49 (1) - Silence it, at least at the end.
There's a nice constant drum sound in the background here, you could follow that as a hitsound pattern. Nice and simple.
00:29:68 (4) - Remove this?
00:31:26 (8) - Too loud.
00:41:72 (1) - Lower the Normal hitsound samples for this part. Use higher volume later at 00:52:57.
00:43:10 - Kiai burst here? Why?
00:49:41 (6) - Low volume finish here.
Remove all the claps, they don't fit this song. Add finishes sparingly instead.
00:52:57 - Another kiai burst? Well I can kinda see why here but why not just have a kiai section instead for this part since it's a climax?
Good switch back to soft.
01:43:30 (1) - Lower Normal here in my opnion. Same as the above suggestion.
01:53:36 (4,1) - Not cool for Normal difficulty. I see you have a few of these...
Again remove claps and add a few finishes instead.
02:22:57 (1) - Fade this out and silence the end.
Your rhythm is not good on Hard. Barely any of your triplets make sense, and your streams make no sense. This map isn't meant to be fully mapped at 152 bpm if you've looked at my map, I'm assuming you did because the offset was only changed by +1ms.
That part with those triplets like in Distorted Pain [Insane] is absolutely terrible. You have a number of maps ranked now, you shouldn't be doing stuff like this. You know better than that.
You people who have modded this map and let this kind of rhythm slip is just unacceptable.
I will give you a star if you can put your heart into this song and make a better map. I'm sorry but I just can't star this right now, I like this song a lot too and this is rather disappointing to see.
[Normal]
Yeah ztrot's right you need an Easy.
00:13:49 (1) - Silence it, at least at the end.
There's a nice constant drum sound in the background here, you could follow that as a hitsound pattern. Nice and simple.
00:29:68 (4) - Remove this?
00:31:26 (8) - Too loud.
00:41:72 (1) - Lower the Normal hitsound samples for this part. Use higher volume later at 00:52:57.
00:43:10 - Kiai burst here? Why?
00:49:41 (6) - Low volume finish here.
Remove all the claps, they don't fit this song. Add finishes sparingly instead.
00:52:57 - Another kiai burst? Well I can kinda see why here but why not just have a kiai section instead for this part since it's a climax?
Good switch back to soft.
01:43:30 (1) - Lower Normal here in my opnion. Same as the above suggestion.
01:53:36 (4,1) - Not cool for Normal difficulty. I see you have a few of these...
Again remove claps and add a few finishes instead.
02:22:57 (1) - Fade this out and silence the end.
