Kill the Alarm - Fire Away

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hanyuu_nanodesu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, April 19, 2014 at 12:03:21 PM

Artist: Kill the Alarm
Title: Fire Away
Tags: Rock English
BPM: 167
Filesize: 3176kb
Play Time: 02:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.91 stars, 154 notes)
  2. Hard (4.84 stars, 341 notes)
  3. Insane (4.99 stars, 456 notes)
  4. Normal (3.51 stars, 205 notes)


Download: Kill the Alarm - Fire Away
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All diffs was done by me, hope you like it :)
Topic Starter
hanyuu_nanodesu
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Kazuya
First! Sorry. My english = 0. :|

Hello, from my queue.

[Design]

Uncheck: Countdown, Widescreen support, letterbox during breaks

[Easy]

Press: CTRL + SHIFT + U, and check the "Check distance snap" funcion, and refresh! Please fix the all distance. Too many distance problem = unrankable.

00:03:466 (1) - blanket: http://puu.sh/85f6N.jpg ?
00:11:011 (3) - It's better blanket: http://puu.sh/85foC.jpg
00:12:089 (4) - move circle here: http://puu.sh/85fw2.jpg (the slider end.)
00:16:041 (2) - blanket http://puu.sh/85fyW.jpg
00:22:149 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/85fBT.jpg
00:26:820 (6,1,2) - 00:28:257 (2) - slider covered. :| Move slider. Only Example: http://puu.sh/85fIU.jpg
00:30:772 (4) - blanket: http://puu.sh/85fLu.jpg
00:31:850 (5) - Circle position: Example: x: 324 y: 212 Result: http://puu.sh/85fPQ.jpg
00:33:646 (3) - Blanket ?
00:36:880 (3) - ^
00:39:395 (4) - ^
00:42:628 (3) - ^
01:10:652 (1) - Reverse arrow can't be covered. It's unrankable.
01:35:802 (4) - ^
02:11:011 (4) - Slider head covered. It's ugly, and unrankable. :|
02:31:850 (3) - ^

Okay. The map is good, but too many cosmetic, and distance error. Please fix.

[Normal]

Press: CTRL + SHIFT + U, and check the "Check distance snap" funcion, and refresh! = Too many distance problem.
Approach rate: -1. Please change to 5. It's normal!


00:19:993 (2) - Reverse arrow can't be covered. It's unrankable.
00:25:742 (4) - ^
00:36:161 (2) - It's little ugly. Slider head is half covered the previous slider body.
00:43:706 (2) - ^
02:24:305 (1,2) - Remove sliders and replace here: Timeline example: http://puu.sh/85gAo.jpg (Slider + Slider with once repeat + Circle + Slider)
02:47:299 (2,3,4) - replace: one repeat slider. It's unrankable, because "mini stream/triplet", and it's too hard for normal users. Replace here: http://puu.sh/85gGX.jpg

Okay. The map is good, but too many cosmetic, and distance error. Please fix.

[Hard]

AR: -1. Change here: 7

00:27:449 (3) - Remove circle. It's unnecessary.
00:28:886 (3) - ^
01:42:269 (1) - Remove spinner, and map these parts.
02:51:969 (5) - Reverse arrow can't be covered.

Many little problem: blankets. Example: http://puu.sh/85h0X.jpg or http://puu.sh/85h2a.jpg
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[Insane]

HP: +1 (7)

00:34:724 (1,2,3,4) - Unnecessary stream.
00:45:682 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:01:311 (1) - Reverse arrow can't be covered.
01:04:185 (1) - ^
01:20:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unnecessary stream. Delete circles: 01:20:621 (2,3,4,5,6) - and put circles here: 01:20:353, 01:20:443, 01:20:892, 01:20:981 timeline: http://puu.sh/85hhP.jpg
01:26:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unnecessary stream.
01:31:670 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:43:167 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 01:43:167 (1,2) - 01:43:795 (3,4,5) - remove circles.
02:06:161 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped. Unnecessary stream.
02:17:658 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:34:904 (4,5) - remove circles.
02:48:556 (4,5,6) - Unnecessary triplet.
02:50:173 (4,1,2) - ^
02:51:431 (5) - Unnecessary 1/4 repeat slider.
02:58:617 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream. Unnecessary.

Big problems: Too many unnecessary streams / triplets. It's overmapped!
Little: Cosmetic.

Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
hanyuu_nanodesu
Thank you very much >.<
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