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gaten

Flower wrote:

Hi~ random mod~


[Insane]
I suggest AR 8.33
00:21:940 (8,9) - I suggest you reverse them, to make the rhythm more dynamic, and emphasize the drum hit. // Fixed
00:21:044 (4,5,6,7) - the diagonal jump is a bit too forced to me. make smaller? // no, thanks
00:25:858 (7,8) - maybe change rhythm; same reason. (I won't repeat, if you take the advice please do same thing to 00:36:268 (7,8) - , etc.)
00:29:337 - add note? // Fixed, and 00:25:746 also added
00:32:910 (2,3,4) - spacing is inconsistent. // no, thanks
00:49:253 (2) - I'm almost convinced that it's better to place it at 00:49:477 - // Fixed
00:52:835 (2,3) - 00:56:417 (2,3) - same as above. I suggest to change rhythm. // Fixed
01:16:119 (4,5,6,7) - it hears bad because of overmapping. maybe you should consider using 40% volume Normal sample. // Fixed

That's as far as I can help. Please contact with me whenever you have question. Good luck with the map!
Thank you :)
gaten

Trust wrote:

Hi, from m4m~ Lets see here.

Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended, very questionable
Black: Suggestion

[General]

There's an an incorrect tag in gaten's insane. Make sure to change it from "Biryori" to "Biyori".
Preview time is appears to be unsnapped (that or it's just in 1/16). Snap it to 01:02:686.

[gaten's Insane]

00:08:507 (6) - Move this closer to 00:08:955 (1). Would make it easier to read that there is only 1/4 between them.
00:30:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Use bigger spacing increases here, it would be more exciting to play. Kind of like 00:38:955 (4,5,6,7,8) but increasing instead of decreasing.
00:33:022 (3) - Fix so that distance is the same between.
00:56:417 (2) - This slider doesn't start with anything in the music. It would be better to shorten it to 1/2 and start it on 00:56:641 instead
01:11:417 (6) - Turn off grid snap and stack perfectly on the tail of 01:11:641 (1).
01:15:671 (2,3) - There's actually a triplet in the music I think you should map since the drum hit on 01:15:783 is pretty loud. Feels better than a jump here imo.
01:16:119 (4,5,6,7) - Like Flower mentioned, this is over-mapped because there are no sounds in the music on 01:16:678 and 01:16:902. Either of these rhythms fit better: 01:18:805 (1) - Move the end sliderpoint one grid left (x:248 y:156) to perfectly blanket with 01:18:358 (4). You can move 01:18:581 (5) a bit left as well so it isn't so cluttered. Should look like this: 01:25:970 (7) - NC to fit your pattern
01:26:193 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:761 - No spinner? Every other diff has one, and it would be nice to stay consistent.

Best of luck with this~
It's actually pretty well done if this is your first map. Just make sure your volume changes make sense and it'll be much better!
All Fixed except spinner on music end
thank you :D
Atrue
Hello~
From



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Maybe the bg is streched= = I think......Not so beautiful.
And you can have a reference of tag in ranked version: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/126224 by -Umi- :)
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵
[Easy]
General
Good map.
Placement
00:41:641 (1) - Blanket
Hitsound
00:41:641 (1) - Finish? Hmm..not so fit here imo.
[Normal]
General
Some sliders can be made shaped better, e.g., make the arc of sliders unified.
Anyway, good map.
Beats
00:56:865 (3,4) - Maybe start the sliders on the stress of the vocal like this?
Placement
00:28:656 (4,5) - Blanket better.
00:34:477 (2,3) - I don't know if it is a blanket. But if it is, a better shape is needed.
Hitsound
00:41:641 (2) - Finish here is not so fit I think.
[Hard]
General
Good map. But if more blanket is used the map will be better.
Placement
00:14:328 (1,2) - Blanket is still to be improved.
00:17:910 (1,2) - ^
00:26:417 (4,1) - Quite a big jump.. Seriously here is not a important place to fix. Just smaller distance is better and no change is ok.
00:57:537 (4,6) - Parallel? Seems better.
[gaten's Insane]
General
Good sense of beat~ But still something to do for a better placement.
Placement
00:08:955 (1,2) - The flow is not on the direction and the jump is bigger than I think. Maybe you can smaller the distance.
00:18:581 (4,5) - The flow can be smoother if you bend the stream 56789... in another direction(up to right but not right to up)00:21:716 (7,8) - A jump with a counter flow may not so easy to play, quite a sharp turn. But not so easy to change the pattern here.
00:34:477 (2,3) - Looks not pretty I think. And flow is also a sharp turn. Maybe you can make the slider slide to right and change the place of the following note 4,5.
00:34:477 (2,3) - Here the slider is like folded and the cursor may have to pause here to catch the slider 3. I think just let 3 move a little right is a good choice.
01:21:940 (5,1) - Also matter of flow and distance. Really hard to catch the slider 1.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting. If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Topic Starter
TAIN

Atrue wrote:

Hello~ Hi!
From



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Maybe the bg is streched= = I think......Not so beautiful. Hmm...I'll think about it.
And you can have a reference of tag in ranked version: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/126224 by -Umi- :)
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ star thank you!
[Easy]
General
Good map.
Placement
00:41:641 (1) - Blanket - Fix
Hitsound
00:41:641 (1) - Finish? Hmm..not so fit here imo.- I seem to be decent..
[Normal]
General
Some sliders can be made shaped better, e.g., make the arc of sliders unified.
Anyway, good map.
Beats
00:56:865 (3,4) - Maybe start the sliders on the stress of the vocal like this? - Fix
Placement
00:28:656 (4,5) - Blanket better. - Fix
00:34:477 (2,3) - I don't know if it is a blanket. But if it is, a better shape is needed. - Fix
Hitsound
00:41:641 (2) - Finish here is not so fit I think.- I seem to be decent.
[Hard]
General
Good map. But if more blanket is used the map will be better.
Placement
00:14:328 (1,2) - Blanket is still to be improved. - Fix
00:17:910 (1,2) - ^ - Fix
00:26:417 (4,1) - Quite a big jump.. Seriously here is not a important place to fix. Just smaller distance is better and no change is ok. - I seem to be decent.
00:57:537 (4,6) - Parallel? Seems better. - I seem to be decent.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting. If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Thank you! :)
gaten

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From


[gaten's Insane]
General
Good sense of beat~ But still something to do for a better placement.
Placement
00:08:955 (1,2) - The flow is not on the direction and the jump is bigger than I think. Maybe you can smaller the distance. // Fixed
00:18:581 (4,5) - The flow can be smoother if you bend the stream 56789... in another direction(up to right but not right to up) // Fixed
00:21:716 (7,8) - A jump with a counter flow may not so easy to play, quite a sharp turn. But not so easy to change the pattern here. // idk
00:34:477 (2,3) - Looks not pretty I think. And flow is also a sharp turn. Maybe you can make the slider slide to right and change the place of the following note 4,5. // idk
00:34:477 (2,3) - Here the slider is like folded and the cursor may have to pause here to catch the slider 3. I think just let 3 move a little right is a good choice. // idk
01:21:940 (5,1) - Also matter of flow and distance. Really hard to catch the slider 1.
// no, thanks

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting. If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
thank you, Atrue
RatedNC17
hello~

[Easy]
00:41:641 (1) - make this slider more curvy so that the blanket could look nicer
01:02:686 (1) - move your slider end point to x:352 y:44
01:24:178 (1) - move your slider end point to x:336 y:40

[Normal]
00:41:641 (2) - the finish here to me does not go with the music
00:51:044 (5) - clone this slider then ctrl + H then move it to x:380 y:140
01:01:343 (1,2,3) - how about make these just completely silent or remove the whistles since they seem out of place with the music

[Hard]
00:17:910 (1) - make this curve just about 2 grids to the left
01:01:343 (1,2,3) - same suggestion as the one in Normal
thats about it but your blanket sliders could use a bit more curve to make them look neater

[gaten's Insane]
what no video?
i can't find any problems here but how about adding a spinner at 01:27:649 and end it 01:29:104. and make it silent if you do
Topic Starter
TAIN

RatedNC17 wrote:

hello~

[Easy]
00:41:641 (1) - make this slider more curvy so that the blanket could look nicer
01:02:686 (1) - move your slider end point to x:352 y:44
01:24:178 (1) - move your slider end point to x:336 y:40

[Normal]
00:41:641 (2) - the finish here to me does not go with the music
00:51:044 (5) - clone this slider then ctrl + H then move it to x:380 y:140
01:01:343 (1,2,3) - how about make these just completely silent or remove the whistles since they seem out of place with the music

[Hard]
00:17:910 (1) - make this curve just about 2 grids to the left
01:01:343 (1,2,3) - same suggestion as the one in Normal
thats about it but your blanket sliders could use a bit more curve to make them look neater

[gaten's Insane]
what no video?
i can't find any problems here but how about adding a spinner at 01:27:649 and end it 01:29:104. and make it silent if you do
;)
Boncho
Hi!~ from my Queue :D

Easy


00:19:701 (1) - try to make (1) curvy like this:


00:19:701 (1) - copy the new slider like on the picture and replace it with 00:23:283 (1)

00:28:656 (2,3) - make (3) curvy like this:


blank 01:10:746 (2) with the end of this slider 01:08:059 (3)

01:18:805 (3) - klooks kinda ugly, tro to shape it round


Normal

00:14:328 (4) - place it on x148 y300
00:18:805 (5) - place it on x512 y248
01:16:119 (2) - place it on x360 y112
01:16:567 (3) - place it on x452 y152
01:17:014 (1) - rotate it by -12 / it should look like this:


01:22:164 (3) - place it on x396 y288 (to follow the slider!)

Hard


00:23:059 (5) - add a cricle

thats the only thing, good diff :)

Insane


00:36:716 (8) - please change the position of this slider.kinda like this:


add spinner from 01:27:649 to 01:29:552

nice map and good luck! :D
Topic Starter
TAIN

Bonch0 wrote:

Hi!~ from my Queue :D

Easy


00:19:701 (1) - try to make (1) curvy like this:


00:19:701 (1) - copy the new slider like on the picture and replace it with 00:23:283 (1)

00:28:656 (2,3) - make (3) curvy like this:


blank 01:10:746 (2) with the end of this slider 01:08:059 (3)

01:18:805 (3) - klooks kinda ugly, tro to shape it round


Normal

00:14:328 (4) - place it on x148 y300
00:18:805 (5) - place it on x512 y248
01:16:119 (2) - place it on x360 y112
01:16:567 (3) - place it on x452 y152
01:17:014 (1) - rotate it by -12 / it should look like this:


01:22:164 (3) - place it on x396 y288 (to follow the slider!)

Hard


00:23:059 (5) - add a cricle

thats the only thing, good diff :)

Insane


00:36:716 (8) - please change the position of this slider.kinda like this:


add spinner from 01:27:649 to 01:29:552

nice map and good luck! :D
;)
Spring Roll
hello,mod from m4m ~

i really love this song! non non biyori is the best \o/

Easy

  1. ar-1
  2. 00:32:238 (2) - what about this?
  3. 00:59:104 (1) - finish at01:00:895 - and add a finish with normal sampleset
  4. 00:18:805 - add a clap

Normal

  1. 00:18:805 - add a clap
  2. 00:47:014 (1) - ^
  3. 00:53:283 - ^
  4. 00:33:134 - ^
  5. 00:54:178 (2) - remove the clap
  6. 00:59:104 (1) - use the normal sampleset as easy diff
  7. 01:03:581 (2) - use a 3/2 slider like01:17:686 (2) -

Hard

  1. 00:21:044 (5) - move to (152.252)
  2. 00:32:014 (3) - Ctrl+G
  3. 00:59:104 (1) - finish and normal sampleset
  4. 00:18:805 - add a clap
  5. 00:50:596 (5,6) - blanket
  6. 00:52:164 (2) - move to (216.156)
  7. 00:54:402 (5) - move to (244.228)
  8. 00:55:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Insane

  1. 00:30:671 (2) - move to (408.112)
  2. 00:59:216 (1) - use the normal sampleset
  3. 01:09:402 (4,1) - can blanket better
  4. 00:19:252 (9) - add a clap
  5. 01:13:880 (2) -
  6. 00:18:358 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?its only a suggestion ,i think note4 and 5 should be near or it will be uncomfortable while playing.if you think 2 and 3 is too near and its not good you can use Ctrl+Gto change 1 and 2,too.


GL,hope this helps
Topic Starter
TAIN

Spring Roll wrote:

hello,mod from m4m ~

i really love this song! non non biyori is the best \o/

Easy

  1. ar-1
  2. 00:32:238 (2) - what about this?
  3. 00:59:104 (1) - finish at01:00:895 - and add a finish with normal sampleset
  4. 00:18:805 - add a clap

Normal

  1. 00:18:805 - add a clap
  2. 00:47:014 (1) - ^
  3. 00:53:283 - ^
  4. 00:33:134 - ^
  5. 00:54:178 (2) - remove the clap
  6. 00:59:104 (1) - use the normal sampleset as easy diff
  7. 01:03:581 (2) - use a 3/2 slider like01:17:686 (2) -

Hard

  1. 00:21:044 (5) - move to (152.252)
  2. 00:32:014 (3) - Ctrl+G
  3. 00:59:104 (1) - finish and normal sampleset
  4. 00:18:805 - add a clap
  5. 00:50:596 (5,6) - blanket
  6. 00:52:164 (2) - move to (216.156)
  7. 00:54:402 (5) - move to (244.228)
  8. 00:55:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

GL,hope this helps

;)
IamKwaN
Hi, from my queue here.

General

  1. 'Letterbox in breaks' is not consistent.

Insane

  1. 00:08:955 (1) - Adding a finish at the head? Use S instead of S:C1.
  2. 00:12:537 (1) - [Nazi](328,48) so that 00:12:089 (7,8,9,10,1) form a straight line.
  3. 00:12:537 (1) - ^ In fact, I think u can add finish at the heads of the sliders on the large white tick to emphasize the 'ah' of the vocal, like what u do on 00:05:372 (1) .
  4. 00:38:507 (3,4) - The flow sounds a bit weird to me, I would rather prefer something like this:
  5. 00:44:775 (1) - Ending at 00:47:462 would be a good choice too. Then, streams can be placed from 00:47:910 to 00:48:246 , which makes the map more fun!
  6. 01:07:611 (5,1) - Intentional not doing a blanket?!
  7. 01:25:746 (6) - Deleting this circle to make a pause and stack with 01:25:970 (1) sounds nice, because there is no vocals, strings or drums there.

Hard

  1. 00:05:372 (1) - The finish on the head is a bit loud to me, use 70-80% instead.
  2. 00:08:955 (1) - Add a S but not a S:C1 finish on the head to emphasize the vocal. In fact, I think u can add finish at the heads of the sliders on the large white tick to emphasize the 'ah' of the vocal, like what u do on 00:05:372 (1) .
  3. 00:21:044 (5,1) - CTRL+G sounds better imo.
  4. 00:44:552 (1) - Adding a circle followed by a spinner is more consistent to the pattern u use on 00:44:104 (6,7) .
  5. 00:52:164 (2,3) - Slightly overlapping bothers me a lot. /.\ U may use a DS of 1.25x (alt+shift+mouse wheel) or separate them a bit. I skip those at the back.
  6. 01:11:417 (7) - NC? The Combo number seems way too long.
  7. 01:13:208 - Circle here. It's kind of hollow atm.
  8. 01:17:014 (1) - The finish on head is a bit too loud.
  9. 01:24:178 (1) - ^
  10. 01:27:313 (1) - Do something similar to what I suggest on 00:44:552 (1) .

Normal

  1. What?! Same time point having different sample and volume?! I think u should change the setting of red line to that of green line. 80% is loud enough imo.
  2. 00:08:955 (1,1,1) - Add a finish on each of them. See what I mention in Hard.
  3. 00:41:641 (2) - Why adding a finish here!? I cannot hear the same hitsound in Hard. Try making the hitsound more consistent.
  4. 01:08:059 (3) - Make it more curvy like this. I think the flow would be more suitable.
  5. 01:17:014 (1) - As mentioned above, the finish sounds a bit too loud.
  6. 01:24:178 (1) - ^

Easy

  1. Hitsound stuff is the same as that in N and H. I skip them below.
  2. 00:30:447 (1) - A bit awkward imo. Try to do some blanket with 00:29:104 (3) .
  3. 00:41:641 (1) - Why finish again.
  4. 01:07:611 (2,3) - I don't think stacking is acceptable in an Easy. ;_;

Nice song and anime! I love Renge so much! Nyan-pasu!
Good luck for ranking!
Avishay
Hey! M4M from my queue :)

I like this song! :D Just to note, I couldn't really find any techinal problems, so most of my suggestions are probably from a player perspective, so my suggestion and pointed to make the map more enjoyable! Let's get started!

[Insane]
00:06:940 (7,8,1) - I don't think the flow here is good, I think making it more curvier will be nicer, here's how I think it flows good:

00:08:507 (6) - X3 reverse slider doesn't really fit here, at first I thought it will be X1 reverse, so it will flow nicer with the slider, but is is not the case, I suggest splitting it into 2 sliders like that:

00:25:746 (7) - NC
00:38:059 (2,3) - What about making this a bit spicier and reverse them? Just put them in the same area but make the flow be a bit more jumpy and enjoyable.

^ This also flows great with the next pattern
00:41:641 (2,3) - Just like I suggested at 00:38:059 (2, 3) - The pattern is great but the placement is wrong in my opinion, it may be too easy or not too entertaining.


[Hard]
00:24:178 (3) - I think the placement here can be better, is there's was a note between it'd be good, but it doesn't so it lacked any interest, my suggestion is to place it like that:

it flows great in all aspects and it does make this make a bit better!

00:47:238 and 00:48:134 - I think you should add notes here, it is not going to be hard and I can hear the beat here all the time
00:51:940 (1,2,3) - Isn't the pattern here a bit ugly? I suggest making it a bit more spacy and maybe change a bit the angle of the slider.


Well I couldn't really spot anything wrong on Easy and Normal (I guess I am not that noob-friendly, or your map is just too good!) :shock:


Good luck!
Topic Starter
TAIN
:)

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.

General

  1. 'Letterbox in breaks' is not consistent.

Hard

  1. 00:05:372 (1) - The finish on the head is a bit loud to me, use 70-80% instead.
  2. 00:08:955 (1) - Add a S but not a S:C1 finish on the head to emphasize the vocal. In fact, I think u can add finish at the heads of the sliders on the large white tick to emphasize the 'ah' of the vocal, like what u do on 00:05:372 (1) .
  3. 00:21:044 (5,1) - CTRL+G sounds better imo.
  4. 00:44:552 (1) - Adding a circle followed by a spinner is more consistent to the pattern u use on 00:44:104 (6,7) .
  5. 00:52:164 (2,3) - Slightly overlapping bothers me a lot. /.\ U may use a DS of 1.25x (alt+shift+mouse wheel) or separate them a bit. I skip those at the back.
  6. 01:11:417 (7) - NC? The Combo number seems way too long.
  7. 01:13:208 - Circle here. It's kind of hollow atm.
  8. 01:17:014 (1) - The finish on head is a bit too loud.
  9. 01:24:178 (1) - ^
  10. 01:27:313 (1) - Do something similar to what I suggest on 00:44:552 (1) .

Normal

  1. What?! Same time point having different sample and volume?! I think u should change the setting of red line to that of green line. 80% is loud enough imo.
  2. 00:08:955 (1,1,1) - Add a finish on each of them. See what I mention in Hard.
  3. 00:41:641 (2) - Why adding a finish here!? I cannot hear the same hitsound in Hard. Try making the hitsound more consistent.
  4. 01:08:059 (3) - Make it more curvy like this. I think the flow would be more suitable.
  5. 01:17:014 (1) - As mentioned above, the finish sounds a bit too loud.
  6. 01:24:178 (1) - ^

Easy

  1. Hitsound stuff is the same as that in N and H. I skip them below.
  2. 00:30:447 (1) - A bit awkward imo. Try to do some blanket with 00:29:104 (3) .
  3. 00:41:641 (1) - Why finish again.
  4. 01:07:611 (2,3) - I don't think stacking is acceptable in an Easy. ;_;

Nice song and anime! I love Renge so much! Nyan-pasu!
Good luck for ranking!

;)
Topic Starter
TAIN
:)

Avishay wrote:

Hey! M4M from my queue :)

I like this song! :D Just to note, I couldn't really find any techinal problems, so most of my suggestions are probably from a player perspective, so my suggestion and pointed to make the map more enjoyable! Let's get started!

[Insane]
00:06:940 (7,8,1) - I don't think the flow here is good, I think making it more curvier will be nicer, here's how I think it flows good:

00:08:507 (6) - X3 reverse slider doesn't really fit here, at first I thought it will be X1 reverse, so it will flow nicer with the slider, but is is not the case, I suggest splitting it into 2 sliders like that:

00:25:746 (7) - NC
00:38:059 (2,3) - What about making this a bit spicier and reverse them? Just put them in the same area but make the flow be a bit more jumpy and enjoyable.

^ This also flows great with the next pattern
00:41:641 (2,3) - Just like I suggested at 00:38:059 (2, 3) - The pattern is great but the placement is wrong in my opinion, it may be too easy or not too entertaining.


[Hard]
00:24:178 (3) - I think the placement here can be better, is there's was a note between it'd be good, but it doesn't so it lacked any interest, my suggestion is to place it like that:

it flows great in all aspects and it does make this make a bit better!

00:47:238 and 00:48:134 - I think you should add notes here, it is not going to be hard and I can hear the beat here all the time
00:51:940 (1,2,3) - Isn't the pattern here a bit ugly? I suggest making it a bit more spacy and maybe change a bit the angle of the slider.


Well I couldn't really spot anything wrong on Easy and Normal (I guess I am not that noob-friendly, or your map is just too good!) :shock:


Good luck!
;)
gaten

Spring Roll wrote:

hello,mod from m4m ~

i really love this song! non non biyori is the best \o/

Insane

  1. 00:30:671 (2) - move to (408.112) // Fixed
  2. 00:59:216 (1) - use the normal sampleset // Why?
  3. 01:09:402 (4,1) - can blanket better // Fixed
  4. 00:19:252 (9) - add a clap // this is stream
  5. 01:13:880 (2) - // not good
  6. 00:18:358 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?its only a suggestion ,i think note4 and 5 should be near or it will be uncomfortable while playing.if you think 2 and 3 is too near and its not good you can use Ctrl+Gto change 1 and 2,too.
// it also good


GL,hope this helps
Thank you
gaten

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.

General

  1. 'Letterbox in breaks' is not consistent.

Insane

  1. 00:08:955 (1) - Adding a finish at the head? Use S instead of S:C1.
  2. 00:12:537 (1) - [Nazi](328,48) so that 00:12:089 (7,8,9,10,1) form a straight line.
  3. 00:12:537 (1) - ^ In fact, I think u can add finish at the heads of the sliders on the large white tick to emphasize the 'ah' of the vocal, like what u do on 00:05:372 (1) .
  4. 00:38:507 (3,4) - The flow sounds a bit weird to me, I would rather prefer something like this:
  5. 00:44:775 (1) - Ending at 00:47:462 would be a good choice too. Then, streams can be placed from 00:47:910 to 00:48:246 , which makes the map more fun!
  6. 01:07:611 (5,1) - Intentional not doing a blanket?!
  7. 01:25:746 (6) - Deleting this circle to make a pause and stack with 01:25:970 (1) sounds nice, because there is no vocals, strings or drums there.

Nice song and anime! I love Renge so much! Nyan-pasu!
Good luck for ranking!

Thank you
some fixed :D
gaten

Avishay wrote:

Hey! M4M from my queue :)

I like this song! :D Just to note, I couldn't really find any techinal problems, so most of my suggestions are probably from a player perspective, so my suggestion and pointed to make the map more enjoyable! Let's get started!

[Insane]
00:06:940 (7,8,1) - I don't think the flow here is good, I think making it more curvier will be nicer, here's how I think it flows good:

00:08:507 (6) - X3 reverse slider doesn't really fit here, at first I thought it will be X1 reverse, so it will flow nicer with the slider, but is is not the case, I suggest splitting it into 2 sliders like that:

00:25:746 (7) - NC
00:38:059 (2,3) - What about making this a bit spicier and reverse them? Just put them in the same area but make the flow be a bit more jumpy and enjoyable.

^ This also flows great with the next pattern
00:41:641 (2,3) - Just like I suggested at 00:38:059 (2, 3) - The pattern is great but the placement is wrong in my opinion, it may be too easy or not too entertaining.

Good luck!

some fixed :)
Thx
[ Raphael ]
안녕하세요~ 쿠도스 주지마세요.

[Easy]
  • 00:07:164 (3) - 이런 모양보단 그냥 곡선으로 만들어주시는게 더 나을 것 같습니다.
    00:41:641 (1,3) - 블랭킷 시도 해보시는건?
    01:09:402 (1) - (420,264)로 옮겨주시면 플레이 할 때 더 나을 것 같아요.

    [Normal]
    • 01:07:611 (2,3) - 블랭킷 시도 해보시는건?

      [Hard]
      • 00:06:044 (2,3) - Ctrl + G
        00:13:432 (3) - 반대로 뒤집어주셔도 괜찮을 것 같습니다.
        00:24:178 (3) - (312,304)로 옮기시는 건?

        [Insane]
        • 괜찮아보입니다 :3
Topic Starter
TAIN

[ Raphael ] wrote:

안녕하세요~ 쿠도스 주지마세요. 안드릴려고했는데 화면 막 클릭하다보니까 저절로 됬네요.. 선택창같은거 있으면 좋은데;;


Easy
00:07:164 (3) - 이런 모양보단 그냥 곡선으로 만들어주시는게 더 나을 것 같습니다.
00:41:641 (1,3) - 블랭킷 시도 해보시는건?
01:09:402 (1) - (420,264)로 옮겨주시면 플레이 할 때 더 나을 것 같아요.



Normal
01:07:611 (2,3) - 블랭킷 시도 해보시는건?



Hard
00:06:044 (2,3) - Ctrl + G
00:13:432 (3) - 반대로 뒤집어주셔도 괜찮을 것 같습니다.
00:24:178 (3) - (312,304)로 옮기시는 건?



Insane
괜찮아보입니다 :3
모딩 감사합니다!


그리고 쿠도스는 안드릴려고했는데 잘못눌러서;; 죄송합니다.


왜 눌려져있는지도 모르겠네요 ;w;
jogfi2002
[General]

nano.RIPE's voice is always so special~

The combo color 2 and 3 look similar in default skin with the background.
You can convert the png background image to jpg in order to reduce the file size.

[Easy]

00:40:298 (3) - You can bend the tail to make symmetry with 1.


[Normal]

Everything is fine.


[Hard]

00:23:283 (1,2) - Arrange as 2notes+1slider
00:51:940 (1,2,3) - Arrange like this:


01:15:671 (1,2,3,1) - I suggest using the same snap distance of 1.20 as you did before.


[gaten's Insane]

I do think AR9 is too high for a 134BPM song.

00:18:805 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Although drums could be heard, I don't think a stream is friendly here.
01:09:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The snapping of this part is confusing, try to make it more comfortable.
desudesud
Sorry for the late mod from my queue! As a replacement for the lateness, I went ahead and did 3 diffs instead of the regular 2.




[Easy]
SPOILER
00:30:447 (1) - May want to make it more symmetrical, it looks a bit weird at the end

00:44:775 (1) - End at 00:46:567

00:52:387 (2) - Make it more symmetrical, make the end a lot shorter but make the rest longer

00:59:104 (1) - End at 01:00:895

01:13:432 (1) - Enda t 01:15:223

[Normal]
SPOILER
01:06:268 (1) - May want to reconsider slider shape

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:31:902 - Distance Snap error around that area, may want to make them a bit closer, but you don't have to completely fix it

01:07:835 (6) - May want to reconsider slider shape

01:22:164 (5) - May want to reconsider slider shape

[gaten's Insane]
SPOILER
I didn't actually mod it, but I seriously think that Approach Rate is 9 is waaaaay too high, especially considering the BPM of this song.
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