Tsukasa - The Clear Blue Sky

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Lust
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 19, 2014 at 11:39:58 PM

Artist: Tsukasa
Title: The Clear Blue Sky
Source: DJMAX
BPM: 178
Filesize: 9853kb
Play Time: 01:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.16 stars, 83 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 180 notes)
  3. Insane (4.86 stars, 211 notes)
  4. Normal (4.17 stars, 105 notes)


Download: Tsukasa - The Clear Blue Sky
Download: Tsukasa - The Clear Blue Sky (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Its all complete now! Mod away~

Hitsounds by elly <3
amir
easy: mod.
normal: mod.
hard: mod.
insane: mod.

your welcome. ^^ <3
Topic Starter
Lust
dang yo best mod EU
-[Koinuri]
This song sounds so nice <3

Bad mod

00:54:197 - Ugh this part of the video needs epilepsy warning or something >.< so flashy, it hurts my eyes

[Easy]
This feels too hard for Easy; lots of 1/2s, high slider velocity. I suggest lowering the amount of 1/2
Other than that, nothing bad


[Normal]
00:16:950 - Note here, Hard, Insane, and the other similar part in Normal starts here
00:59:253 - Place a note here

[Hard]
I couldn't find anything here either >.<


[Insane]
00:14:759 (4) - (299,60) for perfect zigzag with 1,2, and 3
00:20:826 (6) - Move it to (312,271) so it makes better curve?
00:26:557 (3) - Stack with 00:25:714 (10) - or move 10
01:07:175 (7,8,9) - Make a slider that blankets 01:07:680 (1) - and do convert to circles?

Sorry I take forever modding for something so short :(
toybot
sup, love procrastination

[General]
Epilepsy warning for the video, pls, my eyes died
and also, make final spinner for all of the diffs have finish

[Easy]
Well, the SV is too high, way too high for an easy.
-so AR +1?
00:20:489 - finish on spinner
not really anything else that stands out besides the 1/2 patterns, that i think you should delete :w (as in delete the circles that make the combos 1/2)

[Normal]
AR +1 for this too, makes the small jumps a little more fun :p
And this is really difficult for a normal, like the easy diff.
00:17:287 (2) - remove, creates feeling like stream
00:19:815 (2) - ^, if you do then probably should rearrange the slider on 00:20:489.
00:20:489 - start spinner here? and add finish
00:32:287 (4) - remove, then put (5) at x36 y244 to keep with distance snap (also nicely blanketed by slider after <3)
00:42:916 (1,2) - you should change these two notes into a slider
00:49:278 (1,2) - make this into a slider that replicates the previous slider, looks nicer and plays better -
00:59:085 (3) - umg this note is so awkward, i think you should put like this -
01:05:826 (2,3) - change to slider that goes straight up, keeps with DS

[Hard]
CS -1 ? dont want it as near difficult as insane
00:20:321 - add a note here and move the spinner forward a red tick.
00:46:950 (4,5) - change to slider
00:48:467 (3) - move on top of (4), confusing
00:49:815 (3) - move this closer to the next slider, confusing spacing - i put it at x112 y328
00:54:029 - spinner should start here instead
01:00:770 (4) - make a slider like this?

[Insane]
00:36:164 (7) - change this to a slider
00:52:849 (5) - NC
01:03:635 (1) - NC, and this combo is confusing ;w;
01:04:647 (3,4) - should do ctrl+g, flows better than having the largest jump in your mapset
01:11:894 (5) - put as reverse slider?
01:15:096 (4,5) - snapped to the wrong beats, make these one red tick earlier, and move 5 somewhere else


Love your hitsounds so much
& u betr mod teh map i sed gawd
Esti
Eh, at this point everything I state in this crappy mod will probably have been suggested already (and if not my reasoning will likely be flawed), but regardless ... Here goes, woopiee \o/

EDIT: I didn't download with video once you told me to get the new version but apparently it's too flashy and kills eyes and needs a warning, so yeah :^) Also I realized that I probably should have puushed sections for screencaps instead, so beware of big images.

Easy
The SV feels a little bit high for an Easy. I'm having trouble expressing how I feel about this difficulty. Much of the first half played kind of awkward for me, I keep feeling like the note placements aren't in time to the music and the 1/1 and 1/2 shifts threw me off. Kiai time was nice though, I liked the consistent timing better. I guess what I'm saying is the 1/2s feel awkward :S


Normal
I missed (and got 100s/50s) a lot more than I expected on this diff. Also I feel the SV is a bit high for a normal and the AR is a bit low for placement of the notes timeline wise. It should also be noted I don't play or know much about normals so everything I suggest should be taken with a grain of salt.

00:27:568 (2) - This slider follows way too closely and doesn't fit the song or the flow. Maybe move the the slider earlier by a red tick and the first note of the combo down the timeline to where the slider ends? I fiddled around with this part and couldn't really come up with something I felt really satisfied with though :/

00:32:624 (1) - This slider also follows a bit too closely, I suggest shifting it a red tick down the timeline and getting rid of the repeat half. Also adjust the direction/positioning to accommodate for the following slider. Perhaps reversing the direction and rotating it a bit to go left to right.

00:43:916 (1,2,3) - Replace this with a repeat slider?

00:59:085 (3) - Hard to read because of the gap, a slider starting a red tick earlier and ending on the timing of this note might work better.


Hard
00:19:647 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern looks weird here, it isn't a square and it isn't 4 points of a pentagon. Also I don't feel like it's symmetrical, I copied, and rotated half of the pattern then overlapped it with the other half to confirm it's a very small difference but enough to be visually discernible while playing. Perhaps making it a square?

00:20:321 (1) - The spinner feels like it's sync'd to the drawn out part of the vocals and should end two red ticks earlier to accommodate that.

00:37:680 (5) - This note felt a bit weird to read, instead of overlapping with the end of the slider maybe overlapping with 00:37:006 (2) this note would make it easier to read. Though as far as adding a bit of difficulty through use of overlaps I quite like it.

00:46:613 (2,3,4,5,6) - The way these 5 notes curve isn't very, um, aesthetically pleasing. Also maybe consider changing 00:46:613 (2,3,4) to a repeat slider.

00:49:310 (2,3) - This part was actually hard to read, the gap threw me off. I feel like this slider 00:49:815 (3) should be moved up earlier on the timeline by a red tick and the spacing adjusted accordingly.

01:14:591 (1,2,3,4,5) - Symmetry feels weird here, the two notes leading in and the two notes following the slider don't feel aligned towards the start and endpoints of the slider.


Insane
00:36:164 (7) - This part is hard to read because of the lack of another note at 0:36:332, adding one there or making this note a slider that ends on that point would make it flow better.

00:51:838 (2,3,4,5) - I like the circular feel of the sliders here, but I think it'd flow better if you rotated 00:52:512 (4,5) these two sliders clockwise by 30-45 degrees.

01:09:703 (8,9) - These two sliders feel kind of awkward visually because they go for symmetry but are slanted on an angle. I feel like straight sliders would be better if keeping the angle, or making them upright if keeping the sliders curved. Bear in mind that this is VERY subjective, I recognize it as my own preference, the sliders play fine with the flow of the map I just so happen to find it a bit weird visually.

01:11:388 (3) - This note feels a bit too far away to me, it follows the flow of 01:10:377 (1,2) these sliders but the placement of being in the corner feels a bit off when transitioning to the slider here 01:11:557 (4). To move the note elsewhere while maintaining the flow will require rearranging these two sliders 01:10:377 (1,2) in some way though, and if you're opposed to that it's not a big deal. Shifting the two sliders closer together and bringing the note down with the second slider would help though.
Again, it's pretty trivial.


Um yeah, that's my two cents >.>
Zexous
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Toyosaki
Hi ~
From the sky ~

General

  1. You should change "AudioFilename: The Clear Blue Sky.mp3" to "AudioFilename: 132"
    or remove "The Clear Blue Sky" song and rename "132" to The Clear Blue Sky.
    It adds weight for nothing. Consider to do something please.

Insane

  1. I suggest you to CTRL + G 00:19:815 (2,3) it fit nicely with the song imo.
  2. 00:25:208 (8,10,3,4) - Stack.
  3. 00:45:265 (2) - Unsnapped slider.

Hard

  1. hummm..

Normal

  1. Nothing to say. I don't see anything awkward.

Easy

  1. 00:56:894 (1) - Unsnapped slider.

That's all, sorry.
Good Luck ~
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