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SWAN K feat. Asuka M - LOVE B.B.B

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 13 сентября 2016 г. at 14:30:41

Artist: SWAN K feat. Asuka M
Title: LOVE B.B.B
Source: beatmania IIDX 19 Lincle
Tags: DRUM'N'BASS dnb AgeSheRi ZZHBOY NextNaix
BPM: 173
Filesize: 4292kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. AgeSheRi's Another (4,69 stars, 527 notes)
  2. Beginner (1,55 stars, 112 notes)
  3. Extra (5,15 stars, 622 notes)
  4. Hard (2,83 stars, 243 notes)
  5. Standard (2,03 stars, 161 notes)
  6. ZZHBOY's Hyper (3,78 stars, 352 notes)
Download: SWAN K feat. Asuka M - LOVE B.B.B
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3 years, finnally)
Hyper by ZZHBOY
AgeSheRi's Another by AgeSheRi

other diffs:
Ayaex by AyaSakura
Chordzi's love by Chordzi
kiryu's set by 反映
enjoy \:D/ спс !

- 这歌中文名叫什么,爱逼逼?
- ... 对啊
AgeSheRi
卧槽无敌了老大
-shuko
国人麻婆我就写中文了
[Another]
00:42:353 (1,2) - overlap
00:42:787 (2,3,4) - 同上
01:04:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - 间距不一致
01:32:642 (2) - 间距不一致
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-shuko wrote:

国人麻婆我就写中文了
[Another]
00:42:353 (1,2) - overlap
00:42:787 (2,3,4) - 同上
01:04:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - 间距不一致
01:32:642 (2) - 间距不一致
谢谢,但是another需要remap,所以暂不采用你的建议
ego_17
i hope this count as mod )

beginer
i think you shoud check ds sometimes you use 1.1 but mos of the time its 1 (try smlaller grid)
like here :
00:10:445 (4,1) - distanse
00:19:463 (4,1,2) - distanse
00:21:544 (3) - try not to use various slider speed on easy next time )
00:22:931 (1,2) - i think you can rearrange some previous notes to make this flow better like - http://puu.sh/kSqDF/075c091c3b.jpg
00:41:659 (5,1) - try to fif this overlap
00:44:781 (5,1) - ds
00:57:613 (2) - i think its out of gred
00:57:613 (2,3) - not a good flow for easy
01:04:896 (2,3) - there is too many circles for easiest diff
01:48:249 (6,1) - this may unfrendly for new players

this easy looks to hard for me try use les circles nex time

normal
00:22:931 (6) - new combo
00:35:590 (4,1) - 00:38:365 (4,1) - not a good choise of flow for normal
00:41:139 (4,2,3) - slider hides 2 circles - hard to read
i think this 4 circles is to hard for normal, but mb its only me
00:48:596 (6,1,2) - also hard to read
01:01:428 (8,1) - ^

much better than easy diff )

standard
00:41:486 (1,2,3,4) - this sleder 00:06:284 (3) - feels out of place - try to move it up (takes a litle remaping)
00:23:451 (2,3) - mb add circle betwin them ? (00:26:226 (2,3) - 00:29:000 (2,3) - 00:31:775 (2,3) -
01:46:168 (1) - up a litle
01:48:943 (1,2) - i think there is no need to keep DS, or replace previous slider to keep this on grid

hyper
looks fine
00:26:746 (4) - blanket better
01:04:203 (8,1) - note mised/ mb intentional//
01:08:885 (4,5) - blanket better
01:43:047 (4,5) - ^
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ego_17 wrote:

i hope this count as mod )

beginer
i think you shoud check ds sometimes you use 1.1 but mos of the time its 1 (try smlaller grid)
like here : thx for remind
00:10:445 (4,1) - distanse fixed
00:19:463 (4,1,2) - distanse fixed
00:21:544 (3) - try not to use various slider speed on easy next time ) ok, but i feel its rly suit the music! will change if necessary
00:22:931 (1,2) - i think you can rearrange some previous notes to make this flow better like - http://puu.sh/kSqDF/075c091c3b.jpg
thx i fixed these flows a little
00:41:659 (5,1) - try to fif this overlap fixed a little
00:44:781 (5,1) - ds fixed
00:57:613 (2) - i think its out of gred fixed
00:57:613 (2,3) - not a good flow for easy
01:04:896 (2,3) - there is too many circles for easiest diff fixed
01:48:249 (6,1) - this may unfrendly for new players fixed

this easy looks to hard for me try use les circles nex time

thx a lot, it rly helps since i not play easy for many years.

normal
00:22:931 (6) - new combo added
00:35:590 (4,1) - 00:38:365 (4,1) - not a good choise of flow for normal
00:41:139 (4,2,3) - slider hides 2 circles - hard to read
i think this 4 circles is to hard for normal, but mb its only me
00:48:596 (6,1,2) - also hard to read
01:01:428 (8,1) - ^ i do understand ur suggetions , will change if necessary

much better than easy diff )

standard
00:41:486 (1,2,3,4) - this sleder 00:06:284 (3) - feels out of place - try to move it up (takes a litle remaping) fixed
00:23:451 (2,3) - mb add circle betwin them ? (00:26:226 (2,3) - 00:29:000 (2,3) - 00:31:775 (2,3) - feels no sounds there
01:46:168 (1) - up a litle done
01:48:943 (1,2) - i think there is no need to keep DS, or replace previous slider to keep this on grid thx, fixed

hyper
looks fine
00:26:746 (4) - blanket better
01:04:203 (8,1) - note mised/ mb intentional// added
01:08:885 (4,5) - blanket better will remap this part later
01:43:047 (4,5) - ^fixed alittle
thx for mod !
buhei

Extra

  1. 00:00:648 (4) - remove whistleたらいいと思う 00:00:388 (1,3) - ここに入れませんか?
  2. 00:12:180 - このnormalhitはなんか違う
  3. 00:25:706 - ここにclap入れましょう
  4. 00:28:480 - 00:31:255 - うえのと同じです
  5. 00:50:763 (1) - このポションあまり好きじゃないな、もっと遠い場所へ移動しましょうか?
  6. 00:59:174 (3) - softclapのほうがよっかたと思う
  7. 01:00:388 (1,2,3) - CTRL+Gはどうだ?
  8. 01:04:550 (4) - これはちょっと見えないと思うでしたか、もっと遠い場所へ移動しませんか?
  9. 01:11:486 (1) - もっと近くに?
  10. 01:17:989 (1) - このリズムは違うと思う
  11. 01:49:636 (4,5,6) - 流石rs god mapper、私は死亡を選べる!
  12. 01:50:503 (1,2) - これを01:50:763 (2) - に移動したらいいと思う

私の負けた!
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buhei wrote:

Extra

  1. 00:00:648 (4) - remove whistleたらいいと思うубирал уже 00:00:388 (1,3) - ここに入れませんか?это устраивает
  2. 00:12:180 - このnormalhitはなんか違う так убирал
  3. 00:25:706 - ここにclap入れましょうтеперь есть)
  4. 00:28:480 - 00:31:255 - うえのと同じですтоже дабавил
  5. 00:50:763 (1) - このポションあまり好きじゃないな、もっと遠い場所へ移動しましょうか?даа
  6. 00:59:174 (3) - softclapのほうがよっかたと思うясно, чесно не умею хитсаунд
  7. 01:00:388 (1,2,3) - CTRL+Gはどうだ? знаю, что здесь плохо flow бывает, буду пересделать скоро
  8. 01:04:550 (4) - これはちょっと見えないと思うでしたか、もっと遠い場所へ移動しませんか?Я сомневаюсь что такой джамп играбелен. еще подумаю
  9. 01:11:486 (1) - もっと近くに?ладно
  10. 01:17:989 (1) - このリズムは違うと思う угу, точно
  11. 01:49:636 (4,5,6) - 流石rs god mapper、私は死亡を選べる!ыыы, подумаю
  12. 01:50:503 (1,2) - これを01:50:763 (2) - に移動したらいいと思うстоят


私の負けた!
cпс за мод. Я потерял !
Xelasto
Incoming mod from the Gentleman's Modding Queue! :)

Beginner
00:09:058 (3) - Improve this blanket. Make it look perfect.
00:13:914 (4,5) - Change 4's shape so It doesn't overlap 5?
00:20:850 (2,3) - I'm pretty sure you can space 3 farther away
00:21:544 (3,1) - Make 1 blanket 3?
00:28:827 - Why an empty pause? Please no
00:45:128 (1,2) - Blanket?
00:49:289 (1,2,3,4) - Don't do long streams of notes. Put at least 1 slider in there
01:00:388 (4,1) - Blanket much better.
01:29:521 - While this is not bad, do you HAVE to spend the ENTIRE kiai time doing "note,note,slider"? Switch it up a bit.
01:40:619 - ^

Just try to improve you shapes and get rid of overlaps.Nice job! :D

Normal
00:03:162 (4,5) - Don't overlap PLEASE.
00:03:509 (5) - New combo
00:09:058 (2) - NC (new combo) here and NOT on 1
00:20:156 (4) - Please use a different shape.
00:26:746 (3) - Make this blanket 1
00:28:480 (1) - Make this blanket 4
00:31:255 (5) - NC
00:32:295 (7) - Improve blanket
00:35:937 (1,2,3,4) - Don't start this from on TOP of 00:35:590 (4) Please make start infront of 4
00:36:457 (4,2) - Stack the end of 2 onto 4
00:38:711 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing. Start in front of 4
00:39:232 (4,1) - Blanket?
00:41:139 (4,1,2,3,4) - Do not overlap these.
00:42:353 (5) - NC
00:45:128 (1) - Curve less
00:44:781 (10,3) - Stack?
00:47:208 (4) - Blanket 3 better
00:52:064 (4) - NC
00:53:451 (7) - NC
00:54:839 (1,2,3) - Are you sure normal mode players could even do this?
00:56:746 (2,3) - Position these straight under 1
00:59:000 (4) - NC
01:05:417 (3) - Remove this note. Unnecessary
01:18:422 (1,3) - Stack
01:19:116 (2,3) - Blanket better
01:21:197 (1,2) - ^
01:23:971 (5) - NC
01:26:746 (1) - Add a clap?
01:29:521 - While there is no problem with this part, are you ABSOLUTELY SURE that normal mode players could do this? It seems way too hard.
01:49:636 (2,4) - Stack

This is a nice difficulty. The biggest problem is that slider shape and placement is kinda odd. That's all ;)

Standard
00:00:735 (3) - Blanket better
00:02:122 (6) - Make this blanket 4
00:02:815 (1,2,3,4) - Do NOT do this. This is way too confusing for standard mode. This goes for all the rest like this
00:03:509 (4) - Blanket better
00:07:324 (5) - Move this down so it doesn't touch the slider above
00:13:914 (6) - NC
00:15:301 (8,9,10) - Don't put 8 and 9 in front of 10 like that
00:18:769 (6) - NC
00:23:451 (2,3) - Once again, these pauses without spaces in between are REALLY tricky. Don't use them.
00:27:787 (7,1,2,3) - Don't overlap
00:40:272 (3) - Curve more
00:40:619 (4) - Blanket 2
00:42:353 (1) - Stack with 00:41:139 (5)
00:45:128 (1) - This is unbelievably difficult for standard mode. Completely remap this.
00:46:515 (5) - NC
00:47:902 (9) - NC
00:49:289 (1,1) - Stack
00:58:133 (6) - Blanket 5
01:23:971 (8) - NC
01:41:313 (3) - Blanket better
01:42:700 (7) - Blanket 6
01:46:168 (1,4) - Don't overlap
01:47:729 (5) - Fix blanket

This difficulty has some problems. First, it's REALLY REALLY REALLY hard for a standard mode. Just rename it to hard. (Don't worry, hyper modes are generally harder than hard modes) Second, some of the combos are too long. Third, the beginning is super confusing. And fourth, Quite a few blankets are off. This difficulty needs some work before it can get ranked, but it's getting there. Keep working at it! 8-)

Nice map, but every difficulty seems to have a re-occurring problem. Fixing them will take some time and more mods. However, your map does have good flow and is fun. Just work at the problems I listed and don't give up. :)
Gordon123
привет(немного приболел на днях,но вот он мод)
[General]

  • add in tags NextNaix
    check AiMod(in all difficults)
[Beginer]
[Hyper]

  • 00:12:873 (8) - ctrl-g не очень играбильно
    01:50:330 (3,4) - в место этого скучного конца , я предлагаю сделать вот так > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3858157
[Extra]

  • сделай CS = 4.5 (5 это перебор)
    00:26:052 (2) - пододвинь ближе к слайдеру
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крч,доведи до ранка лол)
Good Luck ;)
Topic Starter
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Xelasto wrote:

Incoming mod from the Gentleman's Modding Queue! :)

Beginner
00:09:058 (3) - Improve this blanket. Make it look perfect. fixed
00:13:914 (4,5) - Change 4's shape so It doesn't overlap 5? remaped
00:20:850 (2,3) - I'm pretty sure you can space 3 farther away fixed
00:21:544 (3,1) - Make 1 blanket 3? done
00:28:827 - Why an empty pause? Please no
00:45:128 (1,2) - Blanket? seems not
00:49:289 (1,2,3,4) - Don't do long streams of notes. Put at least 1 slider in there remaped here and same before
01:00:388 (4,1) - Blanket much better. ok
01:29:521 - While this is not bad, do you HAVE to spend the ENTIRE kiai time doing "note,note,slider"? Switch it up a bit. im quite agree u , i ll fix it
01:40:619 - ^
posting.php?mode=quote&f=10&t=179834&p=4610884#
Just try to improve you shapes and get rid of overlaps.Nice job! :DWell, i gonna remap a lot of this diff, thx


Normal
00:03:162 (4,5) - Don't overlap PLEASE.
00:03:509 (5) - New combo ok
00:09:058 (2) - NC (new combo) here and NOT on 1 fixed
00:20:156 (4) - Please use a different shape. sure , ill try
00:26:746 (3) - Make this blanket 1 ok
00:28:480 (1) - Make this blanket 4 ok
00:31:255 (5) - NC fixed
00:32:295 (7) - Improve blanket fixed
00:35:937 (1,2,3,4) - Don't start this from on TOP of 00:35:590 (4) Please make start infront of 4 i will try to change this part
00:36:457 (4,2) - Stack the end of 2 onto 4 ok
00:38:711 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing. Start in front of 4 ok
00:39:232 (4,1) - Blanket? sure
00:41:139 (4,1,2,3,4) - Do not overlap these. will fix it
00:42:353 (5) - NC fixed
00:45:128 (1) - Curve less done
00:44:781 (10,3) - Stack? ok
00:47:208 (4) - Blanket 3 better it is
00:52:064 (4) - NC added
00:53:451 (7) - NC ok
00:54:839 (1,2,3) - Are you sure normal mode players could even do this? not, let me ask s1 else
00:56:746 (2,3) - Position these straight under 1 fixed a little
00:59:000 (4) - NC added
01:05:417 (3) - Remove this note. Unnecessary l will see how to work on it
01:18:422 (1,3) - Stack
01:19:116 (2,3) - Blanket better
01:21:197 (1,2) - ^ this part patterns seems bad, will try remap
01:23:971 (5) - NC added
01:26:746 (1) - Add a clap? seems not good
01:29:521 - While there is no problem with this part, are you ABSOLUTELY SURE that normal mode players could do this? It seems way too hard. seems , i will think about it
01:49:636 (2,4) - Stack

This is a nice difficulty. The biggest problem is that slider shape and placement is kinda odd. That's all ;)
thx,ur mod helped a lot, i will remap it a lot and more care about the blanket problems

Standard
00:00:735 (3) - Blanket better fixed
00:02:122 (6) - Make this blanket 4 ok
00:02:815 (1,2,3,4) - Do NOT do this. This is way too confusing for standard mode. This goes for all the rest like this ok,i will fix it
00:03:509 (4) - Blanket better done
00:07:324 (5) - Move this down so it doesn't touch the slider above fixed
00:13:914 (6) - NC added
00:15:301 (8,9,10) - Don't put 8 and 9 in front of 10 like that fixed
00:18:769 (6) - NC added
00:23:451 (2,3) - Once again, these pauses without spaces in between are REALLY tricky. Don't use them. will fix it later
00:27:787 (7,1,2,3) - Don't overlap mark. w8 to fix
00:40:272 (3) - Curve more done
00:40:619 (4) - Blanket 2 this 1 stay
00:42:353 (1) - Stack with 00:41:139 (5) fixed
00:45:128 (1) - This is unbelievably difficult for standard mode. Completely remap this. mark. w8 to fix
00:46:515 (5) - NC ok
00:47:902 (9) - NC ok
00:49:289 (1,1) - Stack fixed
00:58:133 (6) - Blanket 5 fixed
01:23:971 (8) - NC added
01:41:313 (3) - Blanket better nop. seems fine
01:42:700 (7) - Blanket 6 done
01:46:168 (1,4) - Don't overlap ok
01:47:729 (5) - Fix blanket fixed

This difficulty has some problems. First, it's REALLY REALLY REALLY hard for a standard mode. Just rename it to hard. (Don't worry, hyper modes are generally harder than hard modes) Second, some of the combos are too long. Third, the beginning is super confusing. And fourth, Quite a few blankets are off. This difficulty needs some work before it can get ranked, but it's getting there. Keep working at it! 8-)

Nice map, but every difficulty seems to have a re-occurring problem. Fixing them will take some time and more mods. However, your map does have good flow and is fun. Just work at the problems I listed and don't give up. :) yep,i really not good at Ez Normal. I will force on these diffs, and try to fix them as i can
thx for ur mod, it helps a lot :)
Topic Starter
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Gordon123 wrote:

привет(немного приболел на днях,но вот он мод)
[General]

  • add in tags NextNaix done
    check AiMod(in all difficults)
[Beginer]

  • сделай CS = 2.5 я тоже так думал
    00:28:480 --- 00:29:000 - ты пропустил слайдер > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3858117 пересделал
[Hyper]

  • 00:12:873 (8) - ctrl-g не очень играбильно я изменил 00:12:526 (7) - , теперь лучшее
    01:50:330 (3,4) - в место этого скучного конца , я предлагаю сделать вот так > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3858157 да, хорошая идеа

[Extra]

  • сделай CS = 4.5 (5 это перебор) стоят, ещё посмотрю
    00:26:052 (2) - пододвинь ближе к слайдеру да, отлично)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

крч,доведи до ранка лол)
Good Luck ;)
Спасибо \:D/
sodarose
M4M

我是新人,所以写的不一定全都听
检查AImod
[Aya's Extra]
00:15:214 (3) - 前后间距不一致,很难看
00:17:035 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么这里的间距特别大
01:02:122 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 建议这段用note+滑条表现
00:33:682 (13,14,15) - 为什么这里的间距特别大,间距乱变会显得乱
01:04:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段让我感觉放的很随便
01:24:665 (4) - 前后间距不一致
01:26:052 (4) - ^

这个diff给我的感觉就是一直在放梗,不考虑整体性,显得比较乱。两段kiai中间的那段特别明显

[Extra]
00:00:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距怎么怪怪的
00:05:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:16:775 (5,1,2,3) - 叠一起
00:18:769 (1,4,5,6,7,8) - Blanket。00:19:636 (8) - 往右放
00:23:971 (4,9) - 没叠好
01:02:122 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 最好不要单纯用note来表现1/3
01:26:746 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

[Hyper]
这个质量有点低。而且和下一个难度的gap有点大。建议remap成一个4星左右的Insane

[Standard]
可以用ar6
00:45:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 不建议低难度放这么长的单点
其他低难度同上

GL :)
Topic Starter
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sodarose wrote:

M4M

我是新人,所以写的不一定全都听
检查AImod
[Extra]
00:00:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距怎么怪怪的 没问题,又检查了一遍
00:05:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:16:775 (5,1,2,3) - 叠一起 没太懂
00:18:769 (1,4,5,6,7,8) - Blanket。00:19:636 (8) - 往右放 稍微修饰了下
00:23:971 (4,9) - 没叠好
01:02:122 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 最好不要单纯用note来表现1/3
01:26:746 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ 这两处先保留,等梗

[Hyper]
这个质量有点低。而且和下一个难度的gap有点大。建议remap成一个4星左右的Insane
因为这个难度是两年前做的,会考虑remap

[Standard]
可以用ar6 改了
00:45:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 不建议低难度放这么长的单点 mark ,等修改
其他低难度同上

GL :)
谢谢 mod! :)
AyaSakura_old_1

sodarose wrote:

[Aya's Extra]
00:15:214 (3) - 前后间距不一致,很难看
00:17:035 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么这里的间距特别大
01:02:122 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 建议这段用note+滑条表现
00:33:682 (13,14,15) - 为什么这里的间距特别大,间距乱变会显得乱
01:04:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段让我感觉放的很随便 我改改
01:24:665 (4) - 前后间距不一致
01:26:052 (4) - ^

这个diff给我的感觉就是一直在放梗,不考虑整体性,显得比较乱。两段kiai中间的那段特别明显
Skubi
Hi, You've requested in my modding queue.

Hi,as your requires,i think maybe i can have a try :D
style:drum'n'bass
bpm:173
diff: Ex and Aya's Ex
link : https://osu.ppy.sh/b/758189
thx~
[Aya's Extra]
[General]

Nah

[Mapping and NCs]

00:00:735 (4) - I would NC here
00:03:162 (1) - and delete NC here
00:03:509 (3) - and NC here
00:05:937 - ^ same combo pattern here
00:19:636 (5,1) - that is problematic to read
00:20:156 (5) - NC!
00:24:318 (6) - NC
00:25:706 - ^ same here
and in next the same
00:30:214 (11,12) - closer please
00:42:353 (7) - that is too overlappy
00:42:353 (7) - also NC here
01:00:388 - This pattern is definitely to hard. Its too hard to read and even if it is readable its too hard to play!
01:02:122 - looks like a stream but it isnt a stream, so make shapes with these, not a snake like in streams
01:07:324 - please avoid situations like here. Avoid having a long time without a slider.. Slider = fingers rest
01:18:422 (1,2,3,4) - too hard to read
01:37:844 - 01:40:619 - Omg I love this pattern! I love you <3

I gotta say... This diff is just awesome, it's really good! Great job here!

[Extra]
[General]

Two diffs with high CS? Well that would be a no no from me but i dunno...

[Mapping and NCs]

00:20:156 - I had a little problem on reading that...
00:49:723 (2) - NC
00:53:971 (2) - NC
00:57:613 (1,2) - Nonsense in comparition with (3,4)
01:02:122 - same as in previous mod here, dont make snakes!
01:18:422 - That's too fast imo
01:19:896 (1) - Delete that circle
01:26:746 - ehh

Overally. I love both of these diffs. I'm with you guys! Good luck! :3
Topic Starter
rs_fadeaway

CptSqBany wrote:

[Extra]
[General]

Two diffs with high CS? Well that would be a no no from me but i dunno...

[Mapping and NCs]

00:20:156 - I had a little problem on reading that... i will try if there is some easier way for this part
00:49:723 (2) - NC ok
00:53:971 (2) - NC mb not, seems a little .. odd
00:57:613 (1,2) - Nonsense in comparition with (3,4) truely,im not very satisfied with this part. w8 for fix
01:02:122 - same as in previous mod here, dont make snakes! w8 for farther revise
01:18:422 - That's too fast imo seems it is ,thx for remind
01:19:896 (1) - Delete that circle thx for remind
01:26:746 - ehh w8 for revise\:D/

Overally. I love both of these diffs. I'm with you guys! Good luck! :3
Thx for ur support and mod , will keep on working this \:D/
AyaSakura_old_1

CptSqBany wrote:

[Aya's Extra]
[General]

Nah

[Mapping and NCs]

00:00:735 (4) - I would NC here ok
00:03:162 (1) - and delete NC here ^
00:03:509 (3) - and NC here ^
00:05:937 - ^ same combo pattern here ^
00:19:636 (5,1) - that is problematic to read change to the slider
00:20:156 (5) - NC! ok
00:24:318 (6) - NC ^
00:25:706 - ^ same here ^
and in next the same ^
00:30:214 (11,12) - closer please ok
00:42:353 (7) - that is too overlappy change
00:42:353 (7) - also NC here ok
01:00:388 - This pattern is definitely to hard. Its too hard to read and even if it is readable its too hard to play!
01:02:122 - looks like a stream but it isnt a stream, so make shapes with these, not a snake like in streams well
01:07:324 - please avoid situations like here. Avoid having a long time without a slider.. Slider = fingers rest
01:18:422 (1,2,3,4) - too hard to read fix some
01:37:844 - 01:40:619 - Omg I love this pattern! I love you <3


I gotta say... This diff is just awesome, it's really good! Great job here!
thx:)
yf_bmp
chordzi->cs4.5
recommendation
Lily Bread
M4M from queue

看一下AIMOD
http://puu.sh/op7IB/f518d07798.png
这几个都是unrankable的点,改掉吧

[Beginner]
还是AImod,3个DS问题
http://puu.sh/op7LT/69140abb71.png

01:29:174 - 这个音还是挺重的,考虑跟一下

[Normal]
00:58:306 (3) - 滑条尾没对齐时间轴
00:54:839 (1) - 不要做1/2和更长的多次折返...无论在什么难度这样都是很别扭的
01:24:665 (6,7,8) - 这附近的几个1/3单点..在normal里有点危险,建议还是老老实实用单次折返。

[Standard]
00:21:544 (1,1) - 仔细看看这两个,感觉很别扭..转盘刚开始没多久下一个物件就出来了。把AR调高一点点可能会好一些
00:27:787 (7,1) - 这个叠的不太好,有点难看

00:54:839 (1) - 同normal
01:22:758 (3) - 同上,而且你这里比normal更简单...
01:38:191 (3) - ^
01:39:578 (6) - ^

01:01:428 (8,1) - 小毛病,轻微的刮蹭
01:35:070 (1,3) - ^

你说hyper在remap,所以我就跳过了

[N Ass]
难度名是怎么回事

00:59:000 (1) - 滑条自身边界不清晰,有点unrankable
太乱不看

[Aya's Extra]
注意一下最好不要overmap,因为这曲子本身的节奏已经很丰富了,能跟全就挺好
比如 - 00:24:665 (3,4) - 00:25:359 (3,4,5) - 等等

00:49:636 - 这附近有点不在节奏上,一种比较舒服的下法是这样: http://puu.sh/op9bp/a376abb1fb.jpg,只跟鼓点

后面紧跟着的几个二连的地方也类似..你也可以尝试一下跟钢琴
自创节奏不违和的话也不是不行..别的还不算违和的地方我就不说了
总体不错

[Extra]
01:09:058 (2) - 这个的结尾和 - 01:09:318 (3,4,5,6) - 构成一个五连,你这样摆就看不出结构了..而且这样是不是太难了一点..算了EX我也打不动,还是你自己看吧
太难,看不出什么,不过看起来还行的样子

[Chordzi's Love]
节奏没什么问题..太难所以看不动。看上去不错

gl
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