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actually im worrying about the normal-hard one lolCherry Blossom wrote:
Concerning difficulty gap between Hard and Insane,
There could be a solution, it is making another diff between hard and normal...Aka wrote:
actually im worrying about the normal-hard one lol
But the transition between Normal and Hard can be fine... Up to the next bat to decide.
hhype
I would be so happy if you would implement this:
Awaken's Challenging:
01:07:775 (7,8) - make those two nodes a slider instead
01:18:324 (7,8) - ^
01:59:203 (7,8) - ^
02:09:753 (7,8) - ^
02:45:358 (7,8) - ^
02:55:907 (7,8) - ^
This would make the map perfect from my point of view. because that's like the only thing that messes up the flow a bit.
Please try it out!
no kd
Awaken's Challenging:
01:07:775 (7,8) - make those two nodes a slider instead
01:18:324 (7,8) - ^
01:59:203 (7,8) - ^
02:09:753 (7,8) - ^
02:45:358 (7,8) - ^
02:55:907 (7,8) - ^
This would make the map perfect from my point of view. because that's like the only thing that messes up the flow a bit.
Please try it out!
no kd
As requested by Awaken.
rinsukir神马破
好久没用中文啦，好爽
[Easy]
取消勾选 Widescreen Support。
00:18:490 (2) - 弯一弯更好玩qwq？ http://puu.sh/cIVoI/c0169790f2.jpg
00:21:127 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/cIVsh/353a9ca887.jpg
00:34:314 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/cIVww/9b63855b43.jpg
01:53:105 加个note？因为 01:58:380 (2) - 这里有
02:00:028 (1,2) - 再修一下blanket：http://puu.sh/cIVJ9/978fcc9de1.jpg
02:54:753 (2,3) - 滑条？
00:47:501 (2) - 在00:48:160 结束， 在 00:48:490 加一个note？
很好啦~
Good Luck！
rinsukir神马破
好久没用中文啦，好爽
[Easy]
取消勾选 Widescreen Support。
00:18:490 (2) - 弯一弯更好玩qwq？ http://puu.sh/cIVoI/c0169790f2.jpg
00:21:127 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/cIVsh/353a9ca887.jpg
00:34:314 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/cIVww/9b63855b43.jpg
01:53:105 加个note？因为 01:58:380 (2) - 这里有
02:00:028 (1,2) - 再修一下blanket：http://puu.sh/cIVJ9/978fcc9de1.jpg
02:54:753 (2,3) - 滑条？
00:47:501 (2) - 在00:48:160 结束， 在 00:48:490 加一个note？
很好啦~
Good Luck！
Firstly try English mod
[Easy]
You need to disabled Widescrren Support in this diff.
02:27:720 (3) - Maybe you can add hitsound on head.
02:55:083 (3) - For keeping the rhythm consistent, I advise you to delete this circle.
01:17:830 (2) - The flow would be much better if you move the last tick to x447y164,
01:46:841 (1) - This is really dangerous in Easy, spinners which didn't run up to 4 beats are not allowed now.
02:00:028 (1) - You can try finish here, sounds much better for me.
02:13:215 (1) - Same as above, you need to lengthen the spinner to 4 beats.
02:32:995 (1) - Same as above
00:55:413 (1) - Same as above
Good Luck~~~!
[Easy]
You need to disabled Widescrren Support in this diff.
02:27:720 (3) - Maybe you can add hitsound on head.
02:55:083 (3) - For keeping the rhythm consistent, I advise you to delete this circle.
01:17:830 (2) - The flow would be much better if you move the last tick to x447y164,
01:46:841 (1) - This is really dangerous in Easy, spinners which didn't run up to 4 beats are not allowed now.
02:00:028 (1) - You can try finish here, sounds much better for me.
02:13:215 (1) - Same as above, you need to lengthen the spinner to 4 beats.
02:32:995 (1) - Same as above
00:55:413 (1) - Same as above
Good Luck~~~!
[easy]
- 00:44:204 (1,2,3,1) - try this? i got better rythm here
- 00:47:501 (2) - since you put notes on the 3rd white tick here 00:50:138 (2,3) - , i prefer you make the slider shoter to get same effect with notes after
- 00:52:775 (2,3) - add clap on 2's end and 3's head?
- 01:06:621 (1) - use a note here is better for me
- 01:58:380 (2) - remove this sounds better for me
- 02:55:083 (3) - ^
Hello.
Assume i can rebubble this map since it got self popped by mapper.
Call me back after applying my suggestions.
Assume i can rebubble this map since it got self popped by mapper.
Easy
- 00:54:753 (3) - Add NC here to be consistent with other measures.
- 01:17:830 (2,1) - i don't really recommend this kind of movement for the easiest diff, this is tricky to play and understand for a beginner, make something else, more readable and easier instead of this slider 01:17:830 (2) -
- 01:52:116 (1,2,3) - the transition could be a bit more improved here, for a better flow, if you move 01:53:105 (2,3) - a bit on the left, just see (don't forget to fix distance issues)
- 02:32:995 (1) - this spinner ends on nothing audible, or something close to inaudible, i suggest you to remove it because it will be too short if you end this spinner here 02:34:314
So i only see 1 solution, it's making a long slider instead.
I don't find any major issues, safely mapped.
Normal
- 00:38:270 (1) - missing hitsounds on this slider
- 00:41:237 (5,1) - swap NC here, the measure is supposed to start here 00:40:907 but this is the place for a slider's end, so add NC on the next object.
I see that you have added some 1/2s to balance the diff spread, i find them sparingly used, so that's fine.
Awaken's Challenge
- 01:27:061 - missing note ? i don't really remember there was a blank here.
Call me back after applying my suggestions.
Topic Starter
Fixed all except the point of Awaken's Challenge, he said only a reverse slider there could be better than before.
Easy
- 00:54:753 (3) - NC has not been added here, i told you to add a NC here.
- 02:32:995 (1) - End this slider at 02:34:314 in easy
Edit, now it is fine.
Rebubbled.
I see that this is bubbled, but the bg/video/mp3 could all be improved tbh
background
using a screencap from the video is generally a bad idea, since each frame of a video is usually much more heavily compressed than a standstill image should be. Also, it is very obvious that the image has been upscaled.
I made an alternate background that uses the same original artwork from NZ. It's the same character, since it's the same base artwork, but the framing and setting is a bit different (and the quality is much higher). Here is the alternate background image.
I made an alternate background that uses the same original artwork from NZ. It's the same character, since it's the same base artwork, but the framing and setting is a bit different (and the quality is much higher). Here is the alternate background image.
video
your video file was 8 mb, but there was a good amount of room left over to improve its quality. I rendered a version (from the niconico video that is ~15 mb. Here is the new video.
here is an example of the quality difference: original | new
here is an example of the quality difference: original | new
mp3
no kudosuyour audio file was a 128 kbps mp3, but I found a ~300 kbps AAC version of the song, thus making a 192 kbps mp3 very possible.
So, I extracted the raw AAC from the video and gave it over to pishifat. He cut the audio so that it matches your current mp3 exactly, so that you don't have to change any timing points (and people who already downloaded the map won't need to redownload if you keep the filename the same as the original). Here is the new mp3.
So, I extracted the raw AAC from the video and gave it over to pishifat. He cut the audio so that it matches your current mp3 exactly, so that you don't have to change any timing points (and people who already downloaded the map won't need to redownload if you keep the filename the same as the original). Here is the new mp3.
Ringating rules o.o
Hi. I better pop it than derank, right?
[General]
The following hitsounds appear to be unused, please check:
On a side note (not related to pop):
[General]
The following hitsounds appear to be unused, please check:
- drum-sliderslide.wav
- normal-sliderwhistle.wav
- 02:35:138 (1) - too short after spinner; it also starts on offbeat, which makes it harder to catch, especially after silence
- 02:23:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - these sliders are overstretched and should be 1/2 long instead
Honestly speaking, I'd also ask you to cut 02:31:676 (1,2,3,4) too, but it can be said they are "following" vocals (not). At least decrease the volume on their ends.
On a side note (not related to pop):
- Consider unstacking 02:39:588 (1) on Extra for a better play experience
- Awoken's Challenge:
- 02:47:995 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is too noisy for a stream that is mapped to background sounds
- 03:03:985 (5,6) - there should be a triplet instead of 03:04:479 (1,2,3)
except this 02:47:995 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
you won, hehe.
you won, hehe.
I downloaded this beatmap and there is no .mp3 in the folder.
slashy86 wrote:
I downloaded this beatmap and there is no .mp3 in the folder.
lol what happened
no mp3 wut
i guess the mp3 issue on above is fine now since i didnt have this map before
anyway as Awaken's request
poke me back
anyway as Awaken's request
General
- lot of unsnapped greenlines here. check AiBAT
Easy
- 01:08:599 (1) - hmm usually Easy diff isnt allowed to have overlapping notes, try avoid it? i suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2274087 would be fine here
- 01:19:149 (1) - hmm a little bit boring here, maybe try curve for this slider wont be hurt https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2274095, 01:20:468 (2,3) - when you follow
this, arrange them like http://puu.sh/d3tcj.jpg - 01:36:951 (2,1) - avoid the overlap as i told in above
- 01:40:248 (1) - how about ctrl+H and then move to 24,212? the design looks more clearly for me, just my taste though :3
- 02:07:940 (1,2) - just my personal taste that the overlap here looks a little bit messy for me, how about try make blanket instead http://puu.sh/d4Lbj.jpg
- 02:30:358 (2) - nazi, try make this slider more symmetrical if it supposed for that? http://puu.sh/d4LnG.jpg
- from 02:46:182 - until 02:58:709 - why suddenly 1st and 3rd whiteticks use clap here? in previous kiai times use whistle here. maybe try make them consistent
Normal
- AR 5 please. AR 4 for Normal and AR 8 for Hard have quite big gap here (if you agree so OD 4 here to keep the spread)
- 00:30:358 (1,3) - how about make them become symmetrical? the design would be look neater here
- 00:41:566 (2) - so nazi but try make the spacing more consistent? 1,0x to 1,05x isn't unrankable but a little bit has different spacing from editor, i guess
move to 296,160 to have 1,02 and 1,03 would be nice - 00:48:819 (1) - how about add finish for this head? it will make consistency with 00:51:457 (1) - imo
- 01:16:512 (1) - quite painful to fix but i feel this rhtyhm can improved here with remove repeat and add 1/1 slider at 01:17:171 - coz at that time has a
kinda loud music sound - 01:21:457 - maybe add note here? just feel a little bit weird with 1/1 break lol
- 02:12:885 - same as above
- 02:36:786 (4) - your main rhtyhm mostly just 1/2 circle for one pattern, when you did for this time imo it feels quite hard (especially when remember Easy use 2/1 gap mostly), consider to remove this circle (well if you want to keep that's fine too for me)
- 02:39:588 (4) - flow can improved here imo, when you move the middle curve around 341,82 (curve on upward instead)
- 02:40:907 (1) - add whistle on head for consistency?
- 02:42:061 (4) - same as 02:36:786 (4) -
- 02:47:336 (4) - ^
- 02:54:094 (1) - same as 01:16:512 (1) -
Hard
- 00:23:270 (3) - i still feel the whitetick sound there a little bit loud so need to map it, how about make 1/2 slider or 1/2 slider repeat?
- 00:42:226 (6,7,8,9) - a little bit painful to catch 4 circles in short time when remember normal has 1/1 rhythm mostly on the map. try make this become 1/2 slider repeat and circle or 2 of 1/2 sliders instead
- 00:55:083 (5) - the jump is a little bit far for me since yeah remembering the spread from Normal lol, try remove this circle and make 00:54:753 (4) - become 1/2 slider repeat? or at least reduce the jump's spacing here
- 00:58:050 (1) - so sad but let me say this when you only have 330ms for recover time and the place of this slider a little bit far from centre, try make them closer? a little bit for me, well it just my two cents though
- 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4) - hmm just my taste that i feel use 1/1 circles better here, when see the higher diffs didnt do this, well just feel quite weird for me
for the spread (do for 02:10:577 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:56:731 (1,2,3,4) - if you agree) - 02:35:797 (2,3,4) - hmm just my taste that i feel play better when it changed with 1/4 slider repeat for easier, since previous and next objects are circle
here - 02:32:665 (3) - it has cymbal sound at tail, add soft finish here?
- 02:49:808 (4) - the jumps a little bit hard imo, for me jumps would be nicely (better flow too) when you ctrl+g this slider
- 02:31:676 (1,2,3) - blanket can improved here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2277514
Insane
- 00:35:632 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 01:08:599 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 00:20:468 (3,4,5,6) - (can changed with 1/4 slider repeat instead) , consider make them easier, since imo a little bit hard for Insane when remember we have the Hard diff which not really hard w
- 01:08:270 (10) - ctrl+G please, so tricky
- 01:34:643 (6) - ^
- 01:27:061 (1) - snap the repeat on whitetick? the vocal start on whitetick here, having blue tick on relax part quite weird imo
- 02:08:599 (3) - just my taste that flow from previous slider would be nice when you move this slider around 328,200
- 02:29:039 (1) - add finish on head, cymbal so strong here
- 03:08:105 (4,5,6) - and 03:11:402 (5,6,7) - consider to make 1/4 slider repeat here. players usually being so nervous at last part so dont make the part
harder than other parts or player would say "damn damn" lol
Extra
- 00:16:676 (5,6,7) - nazi but the overlap looks not really good here, try move them to 392,280 to avoid it
- 00:28:380 (3,4) - nazi but try make (3) curving as (4) for give more natural flow here
- 00:47:830 (2) - just my taste that i feel both flow (for previous and next slider) would be better when ctrl+g this slider
- 00:57:555 (6) - maybe flow would be better when move to 368,128, just my taste here
- 01:27:226 (2) - forgive me if you follow the music here but for me the vocal on whitetick sounds quite important here, try map it? use circle and then 1/2
slider would be fine - 02:26:072 (3) - the slider looks a little bit too close with previous slider here, try move to 28,96 to make neater?
- 02:28:709 (6) - music of this tail heard quite weak when the 02:28:709 - heard quite strong, move the whistle from tail to head?
- 02:32:995 (1) - add finish coz cymbal sound here
- 02:36:209 (6) - move to 72,160 for more natural flow on stream :C
- 03:09:259 (5) - the jump from this circle to next object looks quite hurt here, also try move this circle to centre of 03:08:599 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern for
neater design, move 03:09:259 (5) - 108,272 would be nice for me
Awaken
- 00:21:374 - 00:21:539 - 00:21:704 - 00:21:869 - would be nice if you add notes here for making stream so different that other diffs do
- 01:05:962 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern played a little bit boring for diff which harder than Extra, at least try make small jump for these circles http://puu.sh/d5pno.jpg
- 02:31:676 (1,2,3,4) - hmm im not agree with this pattern at all coz skipping important vocal at 02:32:171 - , maybe something like this http://puu.sh/d5qav.jpg with huge jumps
- super jumpy diff XD
poke me back
all fixed! 谢谢 Xinely ><Xinely wrote:
Hard
- 00:23:270 (3) - i still feel the whitetick sound there a little bit loud so need to map it, how about make 1/2 slider or 1/2 slider repeat?
- 00:42:226 (6,7,8,9) - a little bit painful to catch 4 circles in short time when remember normal has 1/1 rhythm mostly on the map. try make this become 1/2 slider repeat and circle or 2 of 1/2 sliders instead
- 00:55:083 (5) - the jump is a little bit far for me since yeah remembering the spread from Normal lol, try remove this circle and make 00:54:753 (4) - become 1/2 slider repeat? or at least reduce the jump's spacing here
- 00:58:050 (1) - so sad but let me say this when you only have 330ms for recover time and the place of this slider a little bit far from centre, try make them closer? a little bit for me, well it just my two cents though
- 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4) - hmm just my taste that i feel use 1/1 circles better here, when see the higher diffs didnt do this, well just feel quite weird for me sorry i really want to keep this ;; i think it fits the music verey well so plz ;;;
for the spread (do for 02:10:577 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:56:731 (1,2,3,4) - if you agree)- 02:35:797 (2,3,4) - hmm just my taste that i feel play better when it changed with 1/4 slider repeat for easier, since previous and next objects are circle
here- 02:32:665 (3) - it has cymbal sound at tail, add soft finish here?
- 02:49:808 (4) - the jumps a little bit hard imo, for me jumps would be nicely (better flow too) when you ctrl+g this slider
- 02:31:676 (1,2,3) - blanket can improved here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2277514
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Artist:Natsume Chiaki
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208,44,132226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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444,136,133215,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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396,200,144753,2,0,L|280:216,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,180,145413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,180,145577,2,0,P|144:232|144:248,1,52.5000020027161,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,304,145907,2,0,P|216:356|216:372,2,52.5000020027161,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,252,146402,6,0,P|296:284|368:288,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,172,147061,2,0,P|156:180|116:240,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,151,147720,2,0,P|315:111|283:47,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,268,148380,6,0,L|420:336,1,52.5000020027161,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,148709,2,0,L|340:380,1,52.5000020027161,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,352,149039,6,0,P|188:360|132:348,2,105.000004005432,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,268,150028,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,224,150193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,148,150358,2,0,P|344:72|376:32,2,105.000004005432,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,151347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,156,151676,6,0,P|169:216|126:243,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,316,152171,2,0,P|63:273|59:223,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,171,152665,2,0,P|66:153|112:175,1,105.000004005432,4|4,0:0|0:2,2:0:0:0:
256,192,153160,12,0,154314,0:0:0:0:
232,116,155632,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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84,200,156292,2,0,B|104:222|144:232|144:232|168:264|216:276,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,172,157281,2,0,L|420:104,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,40,157940,2,0,P|136:80|132:104,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,144,158599,2,0,L|280:100,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,72,158929,2,0,B|364:68|392:80|392:80|368:112|356:144|368:176,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,152,159424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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348,328,160742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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228,248,161154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,161237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,180,161402,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,100,161566,2,0,P|324:88|376:80,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,104,162061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,308,163050,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,260,163215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,300,163380,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,364,163544,6,0,L|268:372,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,280,163874,2,0,L|324:288,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,364,166429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,344,166512,2,0,P|36:296|32:264,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,203,166841,2,0,L|144:200,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,276,167171,2,0,L|144:280,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,220,167501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,140,167665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
329,114,167830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,194,167995,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,340,168325,2,0,P|456:348|508:352,2,70,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,168819,6,0,B|296:300|251:308|251:308|192:304,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,260,169314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,260,169479,2,0,P|124:308|120:332,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,92,170797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,56,170962,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Xinely wrote:
Insane
- 00:35:632 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 01:08:599 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 00:20:468 (3,4,5,6) - (can changed with 1/4 slider repeat instead) , consider make them easier, since imo a little bit hard for Insane when remember we have the Hard diff which not really hard w but i think this is more fit the song here
- 01:08:270 (10) - ctrl+G please, so tricky
- 01:34:643 (6) - ^
- 01:27:061 (1) - snap the repeat on whitetick? the vocal start on whitetick here, having blue tick on relax part quite weird imo only vocal on white tick, i want to follow the01:27:061 - 01:27:308 - 01:27:555 -
- 02:08:599 (3) - just my taste that flow from previous slider would be nice when you move this slider around 328,200 i think it's great now
- 02:29:039 (1) - add finish on head, cymbal so strong here
- 03:08:105 (4,5,6) - and 03:11:402 (5,6,7) - consider to make 1/4 slider repeat here. players usually being so nervous at last part so dont make the part
harder than other parts or player would say "damn damn" lol changed some 1/6 slider (i can hear there had 1/6)
thanks for mod
poke me back
awesome map awaken's challange nice work almost have all of the hard things in the game jump streams big jumps really play this diff for practice everything lol
Topic Starter
Xinely wrote:
i guess the mp3 issue on above is fine now since i didnt have this map before
anyway as Awaken's request
General
- lot of unsnapped greenlines here. check AiBAT
Easy
- 01:08:599 (1) - hmm usually Easy diff isnt allowed to have overlapping notes, try avoid it? i suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2274087 would be fine here fixed
- 01:19:149 (1) - hmm a little bit boring here, maybe try curve for this slider wont be hurt https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2274095, 01:20:468 (2,3) - when you follow no..i prefer mine ;w;
this, arrange them like http://puu.sh/d3tcj.jpg- 01:36:951 (2,1) - avoid the overlap as i told in above fixed
- 01:40:248 (1) - how about ctrl+H and then move to 24,212? the design looks more clearly for me, just my taste though :3 no, i dont like this flow(
- 02:07:940 (1,2) - just my personal taste that the overlap here looks a little bit messy for me, how about try make blanket instead http://puu.sh/d4Lbj.jpg fixed
- 02:30:358 (2) - nazi, try make this slider more symmetrical if it supposed for that? http://puu.sh/d4LnG.jpg fixed, hope it's better now.
- from 02:46:182 - until 02:58:709 - why suddenly 1st and 3rd whiteticks use clap here? in previous kiai times use whistle here. maybe try make them consistent I want to emphasize the last part xD
Normal
- AR 5 please. AR 4 for Normal and AR 8 for Hard have quite big gap here (if you agree so OD 4 here to keep the spread) okay but AR5 looks too quick so I adjust it to 4.5
- 00:30:358 (1,3) - how about make them become symmetrical? the design would be look neater here fixed
- 00:41:566 (2) - so nazi but try make the spacing more consistent? 1,0x to 1,05x isn't unrankable but a little bit has different spacing from editor, i guess fixed
move to 296,160 to have 1,02 and 1,03 would be nice- 00:48:819 (1) - how about add finish for this head? it will make consistency with 00:51:457 (1) - imo add whistle instead.
- 01:16:512 (1) - quite painful to fix but i feel this rhtyhm can improved here with remove repeat and add 1/1 slider at 01:17:171 - coz at that time has a
kinda loud music sound fixed another way- 01:21:457 - maybe add note here? just feel a little bit weird with 1/1 break lol
- 02:12:885 - same as above I actually dont want the rhythm here to be so crowded, coz it's before the spinner >_<
- 02:36:786 (4) - your main rhtyhm mostly just 1/2 circle for one pattern, when you did for this time imo it feels quite hard (especially when remember Easy use 2/1 gap mostly), consider to remove this circle (well if you want to keep that's fine too for me) I think I can increase the difficulty a bit in the last part
- 02:39:588 (4) - flow can improved here imo, when you move the middle curve around 341,82 (curve on upward instead) fixed
- 02:40:907 (1) - add whistle on head for consistency? fixed
- 02:42:061 (4) - same as 02:36:786 (4) -
- 02:47:336 (4) - ^
- 02:54:094 (1) - same as 01:16:512 (1) -
Extra
- 00:16:676 (5,6,7) - nazi but the overlap looks not really good here, try move them to 392,280 to avoid it fixed
- 00:28:380 (3,4) - nazi but try make (3) curving as (4) for give more natural flow here I think current is fine too >_<
- 00:47:830 (2) - just my taste that i feel both flow (for previous and next slider) would be better when ctrl+g this slider um I want these objects to be consistent 00:47:501 (1,2,4) -
- 00:57:555 (6) - maybe flow would be better when move to 368,128, just my taste here I prefer a increasing-DS jump here~
- 01:27:226 (2) - forgive me if you follow the music here but for me the vocal on whitetick sounds quite important here, try map it? use circle and then 1/2 fixed
slider would be fine- 02:26:072 (3) - the slider looks a little bit too close with previous slider here, try move to 28,96 to make neater? fixed
- 02:28:709 (6) - music of this tail heard quite weak when the 02:28:709 - heard quite strong, move the whistle from tail to head? whistle in tail can emphasize this finish better imo :3 02:29:039 (1) -
- 02:32:995 (1) - add finish coz cymbal sound here added
- 02:36:209 (6) - move to 72,160 for more natural flow on stream :C I prefer keeping it >_<
- 03:09:259 (5) - the jump from this circle to next object looks quite hurt here, also try move this circle to centre of 03:08:599 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern for
neater design, move 03:09:259 (5) - 108,272 would be nice for mefixed
xinely好萌Xinely wrote:
i guess the mp3 issue on above is fine now since i didnt have this map before
anyway as Awaken's request
Awaken
- 00:21:374 - 00:21:539 - 00:21:704 - 00:21:869 - would be nice if you add notes here for making stream so different that other diffs do um I hope I can get the hard stream into the last part, and I think it would cause some progressive feeling
- 01:05:962 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern played a little bit boring for diff which harder than Extra, at least try make small jump for these circles http://puu.sh/d5pno.jpg nice idea, fixed
- 02:31:676 (1,2,3,4) - hmm im not agree with this pattern at all coz skipping important vocal at 02:32:171 - , maybe something like this http://puu.sh/d5qav.jpg with huge jumps I prefer keeping it >_<
- super jumpy diff XD
poke me back
sorry i miss this one
02:46:759 (2) -for Awaken, hmm remove clap here? i only hear a vocal for this time so i feel clap feels inconsistency and too loud
and poke me back to get rebubble :3
02:46:759 (2) -for Awaken, hmm remove clap here? i only hear a vocal for this time so i feel clap feels inconsistency and too loud
and poke me back to get rebubble :3
the reason why I set a clap here is that I set many claps afterwards, and these two claps can have them got a great transition ;DXinely wrote:
sorry i miss this one
02:46:759 (2) -for Awaken, hmm remove clap here? i only hear a vocal for this time so i feel clap feels inconsistency and too loud
and poke me back to get rebubble :3
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[Awaken's Challenge]
00:17:171 (1,2) - should be 1/2 rhythm consistency, moreover, it will be much better because even if this diff is supahardextraforproplayers overloaded beginning is not that thing what you expect to see
00:17:830 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - makes flow unnatural and due to this it plays badly, what about 00:17:995 (5,6,7,8) - swapping it?
00:18:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kinda nazi. I'd made something more star-ish to be honest, because current pattern looks kinda messy, moreover it will help to keep flow smooth
00:28:215 (2) - no-no, it shouldn't be mapped like this because with his slider you're leaving strong beat at the white tick unclickable what feels not really good in game. You could fix it by replacing it by circles or making something like this
01:07:857 (8,1) - i strongly recommend you to start second part of this stream at x:97 y:155, it will make stream more playable (because it flows more naturally) with keeping your 1/4s jump idea
01:18:406 (8,1) - same about this one (x:158 y:351)
01:35:138 (2) - mind replacing it by circles? It really feels more fitting to me because music have no "extended"my english sucks sounds here
01:59:286 (8,1) - again moving it a bit closer will be the good choice (184|25 for 01:59:369 (1) - )
02:13:297 (1) - wow wow, no, hitsounds almost inaudible rise volume to 25 at least (but i'd rise it to 30), also what about finish at the end of this spinner?
02:22:610 (2) - same thing about volume
02:22:775 - it was really unexpected that you didn't add a note here, consider adding a note here for the rhythm consistency
[Extra]
00:29:039 (1,2) - Kinda Nazi. These overlaps looks kinda messy, mind moving pattern a bit to avoid it?
00:46:676 (2,3) - not properly stacked
02:08:435 (2,3) - and this
02:39:259 (6,1) - honestly, i'd unstack it because it kinda breaks flow hardly
02:47:830 (3,4) - slider instead of circles will work much better, because 1/2s here not that hard to map it like circles, it feels kinda overloaded
02:53:105 (3,4) - same goes to these two
other diffs looks okay-ish
00:17:171 (1,2) - should be 1/2 rhythm consistency, moreover, it will be much better because even if this diff is supahardextraforproplayers overloaded beginning is not that thing what you expect to see
00:17:830 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - makes flow unnatural and due to this it plays badly, what about 00:17:995 (5,6,7,8) - swapping it?
00:18:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kinda nazi. I'd made something more star-ish to be honest, because current pattern looks kinda messy, moreover it will help to keep flow smooth
00:28:215 (2) - no-no, it shouldn't be mapped like this because with his slider you're leaving strong beat at the white tick unclickable what feels not really good in game. You could fix it by replacing it by circles or making something like this
01:07:857 (8,1) - i strongly recommend you to start second part of this stream at x:97 y:155, it will make stream more playable (because it flows more naturally) with keeping your 1/4s jump idea
01:18:406 (8,1) - same about this one (x:158 y:351)
01:35:138 (2) - mind replacing it by circles? It really feels more fitting to me because music have no "extended"my english sucks sounds here
01:59:286 (8,1) - again moving it a bit closer will be the good choice (184|25 for 01:59:369 (1) - )
02:13:297 (1) - wow wow, no, hitsounds almost inaudible rise volume to 25 at least (but i'd rise it to 30), also what about finish at the end of this spinner?
02:22:610 (2) - same thing about volume
02:22:775 - it was really unexpected that you didn't add a note here, consider adding a note here for the rhythm consistency
[Extra]
00:29:039 (1,2) - Kinda Nazi. These overlaps looks kinda messy, mind moving pattern a bit to avoid it?
00:46:676 (2,3) - not properly stacked
02:08:435 (2,3) - and this
02:39:259 (6,1) - honestly, i'd unstack it because it kinda breaks flow hardly
02:47:830 (3,4) - slider instead of circles will work much better, because 1/2s here not that hard to map it like circles, it feels kinda overloaded
02:53:105 (3,4) - same goes to these two
other diffs looks okay-ish
remind to mapper to add video at wkyik's Insane, i missed this before orz(thanks 4 NewRulerNA for telling me) i should more careful later ;c
thx~EvilElvis wrote:
[Awaken's Challenge]
00:17:171 (1,2) - should be 1/2 rhythm consistency, moreover, it will be much better because even if this diff is supahardextraforproplayers overloaded beginning is not that thing what you expect to see ah I actually think 1/2+triplets *2 can have players got the rhythm more quickly
00:17:830 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - makes flow unnatural and due to this it plays badly, what about 00:17:995 (5,6,7,8) - swapping it? fixed
00:18:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kinda nazi. I'd made something more star-ish to be honest, because current pattern looks kinda messy, moreover it will help to keep flow smooth fixed
00:28:215 (2) - no-no, it shouldn't be mapped like this because with his slider you're leaving strong beat at the white tick unclickable what feels not really good in game. You could fix it by replacing it by circles or making something like I set a turning-back jumps 00:28:544 (3,4,5) - , and I think it would be great to set this slider here.this
01:07:857 (8,1) - i strongly recommend you to start second part of this stream at x:97 y:155, it will make stream more playable (because it flows more naturally) with keeping your 1/4s jump idea fixed
01:18:406 (8,1) - same about this one (x:158 y:351) fixed
01:35:138 (2) - mind replacing it by circles? It really feels more fitting to me because music have no "extended"my english sucks sounds here fixed
01:59:286 (8,1) - again moving it a bit closer will be the good choice (184|25 for 01:59:369 (1) - ) fixed
02:13:297 (1) - wow wow, no, hitsounds almost inaudible rise volume to 25 at least (but i'd rise it to 30), also what about finish at the end of this spinner? fixed ahead
02:22:610 (2) - same thing about volume umm here I think the object should be quiet then I did it.
02:22:775 - it was really unexpected that you didn't add a note here, consider adding a note here for the rhythm consistency I hope this rhythm also works because I actually have an idea like o-oo-ooo
Topic Starter
no common = fixed Thanks!EvilElvis wrote:
[Extra]
00:29:039 (1,2) - Kinda Nazi. These overlaps looks kinda messy, mind moving pattern a bit to avoid it?
00:46:676 (2,3) - not properly stacked
02:08:435 (2,3) - and this
02:39:259 (6,1) - honestly, i'd unstack it because it kinda breaks flow hardly
02:47:830 (3,4) - slider instead of circles will work much better, because 1/2s here not that hard to map it like circles, it feels kinda overloaded I make the objects circles because I think it can cause the comparison with something like them 02:01:841 (4,5) -
02:53:105 (3,4) - same goes to these two
other diffs looks okay-ish
@Xinely added video in Insane!
我賭五個星它還會被unrank