Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)

Natsume Chiaki - Hanairo Biyori

posted
Total Posts
340
show more
Xantaria
274 posts
Joined July 2013
Xantaria
wow so much fun to play, great map!
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
OD8.5, let's go
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
rinsukir
@Asphyxia: maybe all fixed
@Zero__wind: 很抱歉 我不想改那些有1/6的地方 1/6太难1/2不爽 所以就不去管它吧 我想这可以被接受 大概
@lkx_Shore: thx for mod! 那我就不给kd咯..
and thanks others.
F D Flourite
811 posts
Joined March 2013
F D Flourite
Requested by Awaken to check the wkyik's Insane, sry for being late ;w;

[wkyik's Insane]
  1. No Video，Widescreen Support on，这样真心大丈夫？
  2. 00:59:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里flow不好，前面891一个距离大的椭圆flow然后接一个距离很小的反向三角>.< Change a pattern, plz.
  3. 02:41:566 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^
  4. 01:02:336 (3,4) - 如果你愿意友好一点就Ctrl+G，而且音乐这里没有跳点。当然，这样的话56和78就随着pattern一起Ctrl+G。
  5. 01:52:446 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 把五角星修好么？
  6. 02:38:929 (5,4,7) - 和附近的note一样也弄成距离梗么？
  7. 整个diff似乎有很多反向跳和flow连续锐角转向，难度比一般有这星数的图的难度要大。
  8. nazi stuff有点多，有点像是赶出来的，不过那都不重要，就不说了。 ;)
Good luck on Rerank~ :)
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
路过一说
wkyik's Insane has no video
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
As requested by Awaken, i could check this map.
Poke me in-game or send a forum pm when you feel ready for a check, that means you have fixed things which have to be fixed.
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia

F D Flourite wrote:

Requested by Awaken to check the wkyik's Insane, sry for being late ;w;

[wkyik's Insane]
  1. No Video，Widescreen Support on，这样真心大丈夫？
  2. 00:59:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里flow不好，前面891一个距离大的椭圆flow然后接一个距离很小的反向三角>.< Change a pattern, plz. 這個好
  3. 02:41:566 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^ 我覺得這裡的還可以 所以不改
  4. 01:02:336 (3,4) - 如果你愿意友好一点就Ctrl+G，而且音乐这里没有跳点。当然，这样的话56和78就随着pattern一起Ctrl+G。 不了
  5. 01:52:446 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 把五角星修好么？ 很好
  6. 02:38:929 (5,4,7) - 和附近的note一样也弄成距离梗么？ 好
  7. 整个diff似乎有很多反向跳和flow连续锐角转向，难度比一般有这星数的图的难度要大。 這是想控制但控不了的後果
  8. nazi stuff有点多，有点像是赶出来的，不过那都不重要，就不说了。 ;)
Good luck on Rerank~ :)
67547645
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: zz.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57555
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14533,25083,35632,46182,58050,68599,81786,87061,97610,109479,120028,133215,143764,155632,166182,179369
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Hanairo Biyori
TitleUnicode:花色日和
Artist:Natsume Chiaki
ArtistUnicode:なつめ千秋
Creator:rinsukir
Version:wkyik's Insane
Source:
Tags:thousands of gifts vocaloid2 hatsune miku niconico douga mei awaken kawaiwkyik
BeatmapID:507728
BeatmapSetID:143397

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"hiyorii.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,81986,86461
2,133415,143164
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
14534,329.67032967033,4,2,3,70,1,0
46182,-133.333333333333,4,2,3,70,0,0
55413,-100,4,2,3,70,0,0
58050,-100,4,2,3,80,0,1
81457,-100,4,2,3,50,0,1
81786,-100,4,2,3,80,0,0
87061,-133.333333333333,4,2,3,80,0,0
92336,-100,4,2,3,80,0,0
97610,-133.333333333333,4,2,3,80,0,0
109479,-100,4,2,3,80,0,1
132885,-100,4,2,3,50,0,1
133215,-100,4,2,3,80,0,0
143764,-200,4,2,3,80,0,0
155632,-100,4,2,3,80,0,1
179369,-100,4,2,3,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 164,121,253
Combo2 : 255,239,128
Combo3 : 253,91,224
Combo4 : 254,166,129

[HitObjects]
80,84,14533,6,0,P|120:76|184:72,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,124,14863,2,0,P|284:132|348:136,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,116,15193,2,0,P|449:146|413:200,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,187,15440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,187,15523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,308,15687,5,2,0:0:0:0:
452,308,15770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,308,15852,2,0,P|408:312|364:296,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,212,16182,1,8,0:0:0:0:
210,364,16347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,364,16429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,364,16512,2,0,L|304:352,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,232,16841,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,280,17006,5,2,0:0:0:0:
140,280,17088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,280,17171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,148,17336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,232,17501,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,232,17665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,136,17830,2,0,P|260:120|320:92,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,191,18160,2,0,P|374:236|384:280,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,56,18490,6,0,P|352:36|244:132,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,232,18984,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,232,19066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,232,19149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,300,19314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,300,19396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,300,19479,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,148,19643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,328,19808,6,0,B|312:344|312:344|420:324,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,316,20138,2,0,P|452:268|428:216,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,184,20468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,156,20550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,116,20632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,80,20715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,20797,2,0,P|416:64|456:96,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,280,21127,6,0,P|296:280|256:248,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,21374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,21457,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,272,21621,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,380,21786,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,376,21869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,372,21951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,368,22033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,364,22116,1,10,0:0:0:0:
244,236,22281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,184,22446,6,0,P|408:128|408:64,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,22775,2,0,P|232:180|232:116,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,184,23105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,340,23270,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,340,23352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,340,23435,1,10,0:0:0:0:
244,236,23599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,76,23764,5,0,0:0:0:0:
308,160,23929,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,92,24094,5,8,0:0:0:0:
200,200,24259,1,10,0:0:0:0:
108,88,24424,5,8,0:0:0:0:
84,216,24588,2,0,L|80:244,4,22.5,0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,56,24918,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,92,25083,6,0,P|248:84|296:68,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,200,25413,2,0,P|156:187|112:182,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,272,25742,2,0,P|336:264|384:248,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,380,26072,2,0,P|244:367|200:362,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,372,26402,5,2,0:0:0:0:
32,336,26566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,248,26731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,184,26896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,220,27061,2,0,L|256:204,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,180,27308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,156,27391,2,0,L|192:172,1,90
48,160,27720,6,0,L|180:135,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,132,28050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,200,28215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,260,28380,2,0,P|196:312|196:372,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,380,28709,2,0,P|283:335|284:290,1,90
268,200,29039,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,124,29204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,220,29369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,136,29533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,29698,2,0,P|336:316|335:361,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,340,30028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,368,30193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,316,30358,5,2,0:0:0:0:
112,228,30523,2,0,P|136:188|132:128,1,90
48,160,30852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,284,31017,2,0,P|222:284|272:251,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,168,31347,2,0,P|347:167|308:188,1,90
472,216,31676,5,2,0:0:0:0:
472,124,31841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,80,32006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,124,32171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,216,32336,2,0,P|356:252|408:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,348,32665,2,0,P|257:336|214:348,1,90
121,258,32995,6,0,P|164:247|196:216,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,168,33325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,168,33490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,308,33654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,308,33819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,216,33984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,216,34149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,34314,5,2,0:0:0:0:
280,316,34479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,296,34561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,34643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,224,34808,6,0,L|380:164,2,45,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,136,35138,2,0,L|252:76,2,45,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,239,35468,5,0,0:0:0:0:
174,252,35550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,264,35632,6,0,L|44:256,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,184,35880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,184,35962,2,0,L|114:192,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,116,36209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,116,36292,2,0,L|-2:108,1,90
216,124,36621,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,124,36786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,239,36951,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,336,37116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,356,37281,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,259,37446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,140,37610,2,0,B|80:144|80:144|40:172,1,90
36,308,37940,2,0,B|84:304|84:304|124:276,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,168,38270,6,0,P|337:165|387:209,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,260,38599,2,0,P|384:304|352:336,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,236,38929,2,0,P|196:192|228:160,1,90
252,152,39176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,152,39259,2,0,L|364:196,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,356,39588,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,39753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,148,39918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,272,40083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,40248,2,0,P|164:280|92:288,1,90
96,292,40495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,292,40577,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,200,40742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,200,40825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,200,40907,6,0,L|36:96,1,90
136,48,41237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,48,41402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,41566,2,0,P|308:204|364:168,1,90
360,168,41814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,168,41896,2,0,L|468:156,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,42226,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,72,42391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,42555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,212,42720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,100,42885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,100,43050,2,0,P|72:144|44:184,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,296,43380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,179,43544,6,0,P|20:232|44:332,1,135
60,340,43874,2,0,L|156:328,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,352,44204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
149,328,44369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,44534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,352,44698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,340,44863,6,0,L|80:248,1,90
88,228,45110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,45193,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,128,45358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,45440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,45524,2,0,L|240:215,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,44,45852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,44,45935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,44,46017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,44,46099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,44,46182,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,280,46512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,280,46676,2,0,L|228:184,1,67.5000025749208
24,344,47171,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,344,47336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,344,47501,6,0,P|40:276|60:264,1,67.5000025749208
104,240,47830,2,0,P|172:256|184:276,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,320,48160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,140,48490,2,0,P|64:120|144:116,1,101.250003862381,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,120,48819,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,320,49149,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,49314,2,0,L|196:236,1,67.5000025749208
368,360,49808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,360,49973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,360,50138,6,0,L|352:276,1,67.5000025749208
268,236,50468,2,0,L|280:169,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,120,50797,2,0,L|351:143,1,67.5000025749208
240,48,51127,2,0,L|292:91,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,104,51457,6,0,P|108:96|24:140,1,135.000005149842,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,16,51951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,180,52116,2,0,P|75:214|71:308,1,135.000005149842,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,181,52610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,264,52775,6,0,P|204:260|236:248,1,67.5000025749208
322,162,53105,2,0,P|288:163|256:172,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,224,53435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,96,53764,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,96,53929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,172,54094,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,172,54259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,264,54424,2,0,P|204:240|216:216,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,54753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,54918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,328,55083,2,0,P|112:376|136:388,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,260,55413,6,0,L|256:212,3,45,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,196,55742,2,0,L|284:104,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,56072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,56154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,56237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,56319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,56402,2,0,L|196:88,8,22.5,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56814,12,0,57885,0:0:0:0:
128,80,58050,5,4,0:0:0:0:
60,248,58215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,224,58297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,196,58380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,230,58544,1,0,2:0:0:0:
220,208,58626,1,0,2:0:0:0:
205,181,58709,2,0,L|196:312,1,90
284,152,59039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,216,59204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,348,59369,6,0,P|224:348|268:316,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,152,59698,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,260,59863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,60028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,244,60193,2,0,P|312:192|300:136,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,244,60687,6,0,P|112:332|112:368,1,90
248,360,61017,2,0,P|333:340|369:334,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,224,61347,2,0,P|399:214|356:203,1,90
232,184,61676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,32,61841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,203,62006,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,62171,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,360,62336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
274,271,62501,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,332,62665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,249,62830,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,240,62995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
71,185,63160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,332,63325,6,0,P|176:336|224:308,1,90
208,172,63572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,164,63654,2,0,P|136:160|88:188,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,336,63902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,344,63984,2,0,P|180:348|228:320,1,90
156,256,64314,2,0,L|64:264,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,168,64643,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,320,64808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,256,64973,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,168,65138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,65303,2,0,P|400:248|444:232,1,90
388,140,65632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,312,65797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,312,65880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,312,65962,6,0,L|184:296,1,90
68,324,66292,2,0,P|72:260|88:228,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,384,66621,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,384,66704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,384,66786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,312,66951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,372,67116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,240,67281,5,2,0:0:0:0:
353,222,67363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,204,67445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,186,67528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,168,67610,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,150,67693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,132,67775,1,2,0:0:0:0:
365,115,67857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,98,67940,5,2,0:0:0:0:
379,82,68022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,66,68105,2,0,L|448:56,1,45
496,128,68270,2,0,L|435:138,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,200,68435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,200,68517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,200,68599,6,0,L|404:304,1,90
304,353,68847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,353,68929,2,0,L|312:264,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,212,69176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,212,69259,2,0,L|228:308,1,90
119,368,69588,2,0,P|76:372|33:352,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,212,69918,5,0,0:0:0:0:
227,301,70083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,368,70248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,252,70413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,380,70577,2,0,L|244:368,1,90
136,280,70907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,252,71072,2,0,P|312:204|296:140,1,90
184,68,71402,5,0,0:0:0:0:
228,204,71566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,68,71731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,192,71896,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,76,72061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,116,72226,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,188,72391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,288,72555,6,0,L|32:280,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,280,72803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,280,72885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,320,73050,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,320,73132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,320,73215,2,0,L|140:312,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,332,73544,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,232,73709,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,188,73874,6,0,L|408:136|416:84,1,90
413,99,74121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,99,74204,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,44,74369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,44,74451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,44,74534,2,0,L|256:96|248:148,1,90
352,284,74863,2,0,P|321:248|259:233,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,264,75193,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,312,75358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,75523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,292,75687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,292,75770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,292,75852,2,0,L|140:392,1,90
224,328,76182,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,284,76347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,232,76512,6,0,P|268:252|392:272,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,156,77006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,264,77171,2,0,P|168:284|44:304,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,184,77665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,92,77830,5,2,0:0:0:0:
264,68,77913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,60,77995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,78077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,80,78160,2,0,P|404:100|432:100,3,45,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,84,78490,5,2,0:0:0:0:
464,112,78572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,148,78654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,184,78737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,208,78819,2,0,P|416:248|416:280,3,45,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,288,79149,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,356,79479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,288,79808,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,208,80138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,294,80468,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,383,80798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,294,81127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,81457,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,300,81786,1,6,0:0:0:0:
112,112,87061,6,0,P|156:112|232:80,2,101.250003862381,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,120,87885,2,0,P|140:172|156:272,1,135.000005149842
64,360,88380,6,0,P|72:320|80:288,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,294,88627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,294,88709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,360,88874,2,0,P|184:356|220:344,1,67.5000025749208
288,328,89204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,328,89286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,328,89369,2,0,P|269:291|253:262,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
384,352,89698,6,0,P|424:344|460:332,1,67.5000025749208
472,324,89946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,232,90193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,232,90276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,232,90358,2,0,P|380:222|413:216,2,67.5000025749208,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,90852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,90935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,91017,6,0,P|236:272|208:268,1,67.5000025749208
120,256,91347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,200,91512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,200,91594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,200,91676,2,0,P|68:152|88:60,1,135.000005149842
120,256,92171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,256,92253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,256,92336,6,0,P|128:324|132:364,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,184,92665,1,4,0:3:0:0:
200,184,92830,1,8,0:3:0:0:
52,200,92995,2,0,P|44:132|40:92,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,110,93242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,110,93325,1,4,0:3:0:0:
108,40,93490,1,8,0:3:0:0:
184,104,93654,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,40,93819,2,0,L|272:96,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
416,28,94149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,28,94231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,28,94314,2,0,L|472:24,3,45,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,108,94643,2,0,L|432:104,3,45,4|0|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,160,94973,5,4,0:3:0:0:
468,236,95138,2,0,L|480:288,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
356,308,95468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,95550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,95632,2,0,L|308:320,3,45,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,336,95962,1,4,0:3:0:0:
236,336,96044,1,4,0:3:0:0:
236,336,96127,1,8,0:3:0:0:
84,296,96292,6,0,P|76:240|64:188,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,232,96621,2,0,P|184:176|196:124,1,90,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
212,112,96869,1,4,0:3:0:0:
244,92,96951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,92,97034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,97116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,132,97198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,168,97281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,204,97363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,232,97446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,244,97528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,244,97610,6,0,L|80:228,1,135,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,328,98105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,328,98270,2,0,L|116:312,1,135,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,168,98764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,168,98929,6,0,P|296:184|252:188,1,67.5000025749208
448,276,99259,2,0,P|402:253|368:225,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,352,99588,2,0,P|292:324|376:328,1,135.000005149842,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,100083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,326,100248,6,0,P|420:360|512:348,1,135.000005149842,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,276,100742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,356,100907,2,0,L|272:208,1,135.000005149842,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,326,101402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,336,101566,6,0,L|194:247,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,101896,2,0,L|234:107,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,272,102226,2,0,L|368:262,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,336,102555,2,0,L|468:326,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,372,102885,5,4,0:0:0:0:
80,312,103215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,372,103544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,236,103874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,104204,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,348,104534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,104863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,368,105193,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,220,105523,6,0,L|212:140,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,105852,2,0,L|300:112,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,106182,2,0,L|388:88,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,140,106511,2,0,L|476:60,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,106841,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,107006,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,308,107171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,308,107336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,292,107501,6,0,L|304:280,3,33.7500012874604,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,292,107830,2,0,L|247:294,8,16.8750006437302,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108242,12,0,109314,0:0:0:0:
156,68,109479,5,4,0:0:0:0:
228,172,109643,2,0,L|220:236,2,45,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,72,109973,2,0,L|304:8,2,45,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,200,110303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,172,110468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,136,110632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,288,110797,6,0,L|204:280,1,90
136,328,111127,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,368,111292,2,0,P|396:320|364:208,1,180
312,288,111786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,232,111951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,256,112116,6,0,P|228:312|260:360,1,90
372,224,112446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,168,112610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,288,112775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,132,112940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,256,113105,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,224,113270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,168,113435,6,0,L|136:180,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,148,113682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,112,113764,2,0,L|176:100,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,92,114012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,114094,2,0,L|356:76,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,114424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,28,114588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,240,114753,6,0,P|168:220|196:172,1,90
200,168,115001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,115083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,56,115248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,56,115330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,68,115413,2,0,P|17:113|17:168,1,90
112,326,115742,2,0,P|124:283|113:240,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,140,116072,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,116237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,284,116402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,360,116566,2,0,P|260:351|304:344,1,90
496,328,116896,2,0,P|451:336|407:344,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,117226,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,117308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,117391,2,0,P|332:180|336:128,1,90
212,56,117720,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,184,117885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,56,118050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,148,118215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,48,118380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,48,118544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,118709,6,0,L|272:248,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,252,119039,2,0,L|208:316,3,45,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,204,119369,5,2,0:0:0:0:
89,196,119451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,200,119533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
31,215,119616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
11,239,119698,1,2,0:0:0:0:
1,269,119781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
3,300,119863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
17,329,119945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,350,120028,5,4,0:0:0:0:
208,360,120193,2,0,L|252:336,2,45,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,120523,2,0,L|76:276,2,45,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,120852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,356,121017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,276,121182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,252,121347,6,0,P|324:200|304:144,1,90
228,112,121676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,320,121841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,320,121924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,320,122006,2,0,P|212:288|228:236,1,90
128,96,122336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,122418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,122501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,122583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,122665,6,0,L|32:108,1,90
208,160,122995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,208,123160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,123325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,320,123490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,123654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,384,123819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,284,123984,6,0,L|456:184,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,76,124314,2,0,L|336:176,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,165,124643,2,0,L|184:76,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,194,124973,2,0,L|68:284,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,348,125303,5,4,0:0:0:0:
252,228,125468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,228,125550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,228,125632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,348,125797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,348,125880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,348,125962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,184,126127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,308,126292,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,276,126457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,156,126621,6,0,P|300:108|308:52,1,90
416,184,126951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,308,127116,2,0,P|256:332|104:344,1,180
52,288,127610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,248,127775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,368,127940,6,0,P|384:328|380:280,1,90
228,248,128270,2,0,P|208:288|212:336,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,180,128599,2,0,P|261:135|233:95,1,90
79,148,128929,2,0,P|81:192|109:232,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,219,129259,5,2,0:0:0:0:
346,189,129341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,157,129423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,126,129506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,96,129588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
318,69,129671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,44,129753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,24,129835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,8,129918,2,0,L|192:24,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,44,130248,2,0,L|64:59,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,148,130577,5,4,0:0:0:0:
48,164,130907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,180,131237,1,4,0:0:0:0:
56,196,131566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,68,131896,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,84,132226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,100,132556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,264,132885,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,133215,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,88,143764,6,0,P|152:84|208:80,1,90
272,132,144424,2,0,P|316:128|361:124,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,228,145083,2,0,P|387:223|342:220,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,272,145743,2,0,L|222:268|177:264,1,90
88,284,146402,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,196,146731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,147061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,20,147391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,136,147720,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,148050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,80,148380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,52,148709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,149039,6,0,P|264:188|276:144,1,90
316,80,149534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,149698,2,0,P|348:208|360:164,1,90
400,100,150193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,252,150358,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,268,150687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,240,151017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,168,151347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,92,151676,5,4,0:0:0:0:
332,180,152006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,152336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,356,152665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,320,152995,6,0,L|156:264,1,45,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,224,153325,2,0,L|242:169,1,45
160,128,153654,2,0,L|168:92,3,22.5,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,64,153984,2,0,L|228:48,8,11.25,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,96,155632,6,0,L|280:196,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,240,155880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,260,155962,2,0,P|280:272|336:248,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,136,156210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,116,156292,2,0,P|276:104|220:128,1,90
156,176,156621,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,280,156786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,236,156951,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,72,157116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,268,157281,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,92,157446,2,0,L|344:80,1,90
472,184,157775,2,0,L|382:194,2,90,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,158270,5,0,0:0:0:0:
328,116,158435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,184,158599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,336,158764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,264,158929,2,0,L|148:240,1,90
68,316,159259,2,0,L|155:336,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,159588,5,0,0:0:0:0:
40,228,159753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,348,159918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,224,160083,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,228,160248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,344,160413,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,188,160577,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,228,160742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,352,160907,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,304,161072,2,0,L|336:352,1,45
348,276,161237,2,0,P|364:232|352:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,161484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,161566,2,0,P|356:104|412:128,1,90
420,336,161896,2,0,P|368:360|312:336,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,232,162226,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,162391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,162555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,264,162720,2,0,P|340:216|312:156,1,90
176,120,163050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,232,163215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,96,163380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,212,163544,5,0,0:0:0:0:
308,152,163709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,96,163874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,260,164039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,298,164204,2,0,P|153:255|144:212,1,90
60,256,164534,2,0,P|49:299|58:342,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,328,164863,5,2,0:0:0:0:
314,305,164945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,276,165027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,245,165110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,216,165192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
293,193,165275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,181,165357,1,2,0:0:0:0:
233,179,165439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,190,165523,6,0,L|196:252,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,288,165687,2,0,L|112:226,1,45
88,136,165852,2,0,L|8:156,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,108,166182,5,4,0:0:0:0:
152,84,166347,2,0,L|208:68,1,45
240,60,166512,2,0,P|280:96|340:96,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,100,166759,2,0,L|436:80,1,45
492,168,167006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,167171,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,20,167336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,167501,6,0,L|256:192,1,90
168,256,167830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,352,167995,2,0,P|346:344|392:337,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,360,168490,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,236,168654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,316,168819,6,0,P|80:268|88:216,1,90
144,104,169149,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,256,169314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,230,169479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,148,169643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,100,169808,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,52,169973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,232,170138,6,0,L|256:336,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,172,170468,2,0,L|352:68,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,170797,2,0,P|172:64|124:68,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,216,171127,2,0,P|52:204|100:200,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,228,171457,5,0,0:0:0:0:
44,296,171621,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,296,171704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,296,171786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,116,171951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,116,172034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,116,172116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,212,172281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,372,172446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,296,172610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,172775,6,0,P|136:88|128:40,1,90
96,212,173105,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,304,173270,2,0,P|256:312|344:208,1,180
227,129,173764,2,0,P|233:173|248:216,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,24,174094,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,60,174259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,48,174424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,224,174588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,224,174671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,224,174753,2,0,P|104:160|108:112,1,90
168,280,175083,2,0,P|156:344|152:392,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,232,175413,5,2,0:0:0:0:
280,244,175495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,248,175577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,243,175660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,228,175742,2,0,L|380:180,3,45,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,256,176072,2,0,L|432:300,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,332,176402,2,0,L|368:384,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,348,176731,6,0,P|240:352|204:368,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,284,177061,2,0,P|140:280|176:264,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,148,177391,2,0,P|252:152|216:168,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,84,177721,2,0,P|152:80|188:64,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,232,178050,5,4,0:0:0:0:
52,156,178380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,64,178709,5,4,0:0:0:0:
52,244,179039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,179369,6,0,P|112:272|152:288,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,176,179698,2,0,P|232:167|274:152,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,180028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,180193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,180275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,180358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,312,180523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,180687,6,0,P|64:188|68:136,1,90
136,112,181017,2,0,P|140:67|145:22,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,184,181347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,92,181512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,92,181594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,92,181676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,188,181841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,188,181924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,188,182006,6,0,P|384:256|380:300,1,90
300,92,182336,2,0,P|308:24|312:-20,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,182665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,88,182830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,72,182913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,182995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,168,183160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,152,183243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,136,183325,6,0,P|180:152|92:160,1,135
68,152,183654,2,0,P|72:104|84:56,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,63,183902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,63,183984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,248,184149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,248,184231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,248,184314,2,0,P|124:292|114:336,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,184643,6,0,P|228:168|216:96,1,135
224,84,184973,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,32,185138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,185220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,185303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,124,185468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,144,185550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,152,185632,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,148,185715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,128,185797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,185962,6,0,P|276:232|276:280,1,90
275,257,186209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,257,186292,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,352,186457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,272,186621,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,186704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,208,186786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,176,186869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,144,186951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,48,187116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,264,187281,6,0,P|84:216|88:160,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,288,187610,2,0,P|276:240|280:184,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,76,187940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,188105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,188187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,188270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,156,188435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,296,188599,6,0,P|88:284|56:284,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,180,188929,2,0,P|244:176|288:167,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,189259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,164,189424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,164,189506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,164,189588,6,0,P|420:228|420:272,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,332,189918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,280,190083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,192,190248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,360,190413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,360,190495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,360,190577,6,0,P|216:352|184:352,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,372,190907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
8,296,191072,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,192,191237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,160,191402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,191484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,160,191566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,360,191731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
Noobish
63 posts
Joined September 2010
Noobish
rip stream on awaken's diff ;_; never forget
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
uuuh, Mp3 could not load correctly, i redl'ed it ~ 15 times, still same thing. Idk if it's me or not, try to resubmit your map or give me the map's package (File>Export package) And then i'll check.
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
same problem here
I suppose the map should be checked after being uploaded properly
Yousei
70 posts
Joined October 2013
Yousei
好吧咱不会mod图.....
于是咱就去试着打了一下Awaken的难度.....
ctb模式的.....
这是图/w\
甩起来好爽
不过最后一段简直丧心病狂
差点死掉qwq

不过曲子好好听\w/

希望能顺利Re-Rank
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Here is my check
I really recommend you to apply these suggestions, if you deny them, please, explain why.

Normal

  1. 02:32:995 (1) - i guess this spinner is supposed to end here instead 02:34:314

Mei's Hard

  1. disable widescreen support
  2. 00:38:929 (3) - i guess this slider is misplaced because the DS is not the same here, try to keep the same DS and make something neat like this
    SPOILER
  3. 00:48:654 - I don't really understand why you didn't make this tick followed, you're currently following vocals on this section, and it is more intuitive to click on this tick.
  4. 00:56:566 (1) - this spinner looks out of place because it is supposed to start here 00:56:731 but it will be too short and not handleable, i recommend you to add some objects instead of this spinner. same as 01:47:995 (1) -
  5. 02:55:413 (1) - this could be considered as a ninja spinner because i'm pretty sure 95% of hard players can not expect a spinner when playing this section, you should add objects instead of this spinner.

wkyik's Insane


  • There are still things which could be a little undermapped for the sake of the diff gap between this diff and Mei's.
    Try to manage how you can do it.

Extra

  1. 00:46:676- i don't really understand why you didn't follow this tick, because vocals could be followed, and it is more intuitive to follow this tick. Plus this diff is challenging so it is another reason to suggest you to make this tick followed. same as 00:49:314 and 00:51:951
  2. 02:34:314 - same as Normal.

Awaken's Challenge

  1. Disable widescreen support
  2. 00:56:072 (1) - could you explain me why you used a 1/8 kick slider here ? there is nothing audible on 1/8 between 00:56:072 and 00:56:402, this should be 1/4 instead.
  3. 01:09:588 (2) - missing clap
  4. 02:23:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1) - i don't really understand why there are 3/4 here, there is no reasons imo, blue ticks are not audible and you are ignoring red ticks, plus, for the same kind of sound you used 1/2 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so, i recommend you to use this kind of pattern instead of the current one which uses 3/4 sliders.
  5. 02:33:984 (1) - same as i mentioned for Normal and Extra

I've read modposts on this thread, and i assume there were 1/6 rhythms and they were removed. I think this was a bad idea, there are audible 1/6, more audible than 1/4. Vocals follow 1/4, the song follows 1/6 that's simple, there are discutable 1/6s and 1/4s.
Try to get more opinions from BATs, i won't rebubble this map unless you find some BATs to give you opinions, because i'm really attentive with rhythm.

As people said, there is a large difficulty gap between Hard and Insane, it could be better if there is some triples in Hard, but use them sparingly, because it might hurt the difficulty gap between Hard and Normal.

Call me back for a recheck after applying changes and things i mentionned about difficulty gap and opinions from other BATs.
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Awaken's Challenge

  1. Disable widescreen support disabled.
  2. 00:56:072 (1) - could you explain me why you used a 1/8 kick slider here ? there is nothing audible on 1/8 between 00:56:072 and 00:56:402, this should be 1/4 instead. changed..though i think both are ok..
  3. 01:09:588 (2) - missing clap added
  4. 02:23:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1) - i don't really understand why there are 3/4 here, there is no reasons imo, blue ticks are not audible and you are ignoring red ticks, plus, for the same kind of sound you used 1/2 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so, i recommend you to use this kind of pattern instead of the current one which uses 3/4 sliders. I really feel 3/4 here would be much fitter the music than 1/2.
  5. 02:33:984 (1) - same as i mentioned for Normal and Extra ok.
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
rinsukir

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Here is my check
I really recommend you to apply these suggestions, if you deny them, please, explain why.

Normal

  1. 02:32:995 (1) - i guess this spinner is supposed to end here instead 02:34:314

Mei's Hard

  1. disable widescreen support
  2. 00:38:929 (3) - i guess this slider is misplaced because the DS is not the same here, try to keep the same DS and make something neat like this
    SPOILER
  3. 00:48:654 - I don't really understand why you didn't make this tick followed, you're currently following vocals on this section, and it is more intuitive to click on this tick.
  4. 00:56:566 (1) - this spinner looks out of place because it is supposed to start here 00:56:731 but it will be too short and not handleable, i recommend you to add some objects instead of this spinner. same as 01:47:995 (1) -
  5. 02:55:413 (1) - this could be considered as a ninja spinner because i'm pretty sure 95% of hard players can not expect a spinner when playing this section, you should add objects instead of this spinner.

Extra

  1. 00:46:676- i don't really understand why you didn't follow this tick, because vocals could be followed, and it is more intuitive to follow this tick. Plus this diff is challenging so it is another reason to suggest you to make this tick followed. same as 00:49:314 and 00:51:951
  2. 02:34:314 - same as Normal.


I've read modposts on this thread, and i assume there were 1/6 rhythms and they were removed. I think this was a bad idea, there are audible 1/6, more audible than 1/4. Vocals follow 1/4, the song follows 1/6 that's simple, there are discutable 1/6s and 1/4s.
Try to get more opinions from BATs, i won't rebubble this map unless you find some BATs to give you opinions, because i'm really attentive with rhythm.

As people said, there is a large difficulty gap between Hard and Insane, it could be better if there is some triples in Hard, but use them sparingly, because it might hurt the difficulty gap between Hard and Normal.

Call me back for a recheck after applying changes and things i mentionned about difficulty gap and opinions from other BATs.
all fixed in my diff and Mei's diff, thanks for mod~ :)

@AlectZero: 触 已瞎qwq 谢谢test啦:3
Yousei
70 posts
Joined October 2013
Yousei
好吧咱又来惹/w\

上次测试完Awaken难度后这次再打......尾杀出现惹QAQQQQQQQQQQ其实是因为泥很鶸吧...哭哭

感觉有些地方变得很跳

于是就打不过去惹=A=

然后只能去测Extra

上图\w/



这还是图.w.


ar9果然比ar9.2容易一点啊=A=(有眼疾qwq)



最后也是差点尾杀

而且咱前边老是路人断...

哭了个哭qvq




想了想还是上rep吧...
/v\



说说咱对Extra的打(诶?)后感(仅限ctb模式)

柑橘里边的变间距连跳对于那些在天上飞的家伙们来说有点简单挺好玩的，打起来很爽

但是结尾那点简直.......ExGon:간단하다(简单)把咱打得差点大小便失禁跳起来

还好这图hp没有8...要不然咱非得死一死q.q

这图在ctb模式里最后是连续变间距连跳+连续红果...

真是吓了一跳呢=w=

但是好好玩*\*w*/*←这是佐仓千代小天使哦(被打飞

(ctb模式下)甩起来也十分舒服，没有过分大跳的地方



突然有感而发(希望不是神论什么的qwq)
一些图柑橘在std还好，一到ctb立马变成跳远冠军qwq

完全不知道怎么去打

本想举点例子，但一想这可能会变神论咱就不去举例惹/*.*\



总之加油哦\w/


祝早日re-rank~


再补个wkyik's Insane的测试结果/v\


因为眼有点小问题所以好几次断在zz的地方qwq

这里是rep哦~

总体问题不大

连跳设计挺合理的

不过连打段在ctb里表现得有点曲折，有点挑战性\w/


rinsukir wrote:

@AlectZero: 触 已瞎qwq 谢谢test啦:3
举手之劳啦=w= 而且这曲子咱也很喜欢哦\>w</

p了个s.咱不是触啊QvQ


第二天回来看看柑橘自己就是在班门弄斧，哭哭qwq
Last edited by Yousei , edited 1 time in total.
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Mei's Hard

  1. disable widescreen support
  2. 00:38:929 (3) - i guess this slider is misplaced because the DS is not the same here, try to keep the same DS and make something neat like this
    SPOILER
  3. 00:48:654 - I don't really understand why you didn't make this tick followed, you're currently following vocals on this section, and it is more intuitive to click on this tick.because vocal is the most obvious here and i always want to follow the most obvious part in music
  4. 00:56:566 (1) - this spinner looks out of place because it is supposed to start here 00:56:731 but it will be too short and not handleable, i recommend you to add some objects instead of this spinner. same as 01:47:995 (1) -
  5. 02:55:413 (1) - this could be considered as a ninja spinner because i'm pretty sure 95% of hard players can not expect a spinner when playing this section, you should add objects instead of this spinner.
if i dont mention it means fixed
thank you cb >.<
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
I don't see any improvement for difficulty gap, so let me leave suggestions for Mei's Hard.
There should be triples for a decent gap. I assume Kiais are the most difficult parts of this diff, so you can add some triples in Kiais.
TRIPLE DOES NOT REALLY MEAN 3 CIRCLES, if you find the pattern too hard, you can use reversed 1/4s, but mainly use triples with circles.

I found a good place for triples like here 00:58:215 and here 00:58:544
They are fine because they still follow vocals and they are intuitive to play.
Other places :
01:03:490 - 01:03:819 -
01:08:764 - 01:09:094 -
01:14:039 - 01:14:369 -
And same as other kiais.
Note that you are not forced to use 3 circles, you can use reversed 1/4s as i said above.
Last thing, if the star rating exceeds 3.75 (there will be a I icon instead of a H icon), catch me in game to see with you how you can get rid of this.

btw, missing clap here 01:14:204

Don't give up guys, this set has to be reranked !!!
For the rest concerning 1/6s i'll see with other BATs.
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei

Cherry Blossom wrote:

I don't see any improvement for difficulty gap, so let me leave suggestions for Mei's Hard.
There should be triples for a decent gap. I assume Kiais are the most difficult parts of this diff, so you can add some triples in Kiais.
TRIPLE DOES NOT REALLY MEAN 3 CIRCLES, if you find the pattern too hard, you can use reversed 1/4s, but mainly use triples with circles.

I found a good place for triples like here 00:58:215 and here 00:58:544
They are fine because they still follow vocals and they are intuitive to play.
Other places :
01:03:490 - 01:03:819 -
01:08:764 - 01:09:094 -
01:14:039 - 01:14:369 -
And same as other kiais.
Note that you are not forced to use 3 circles, you can use reversed 1/4s as i said above.
Last thing, if the star rating exceeds 3.75 (there will be a I icon instead of a H icon), catch me in game to see with you how you can get rid of this.

btw, missing clap here 01:14:204

Don't give up guys, this set has to be reranked !!!
For the rest concerning 1/6s i'll see with other BATs.
i totally changed kiai's rhythm according to cb's mod and the vocal. And in my point the difficulty gap is not that large as your guys think since this is a BPM180 song. Those tirplets are not as easier as a soft tvsize you guys played. It is much harder. And i asked many guys to test it and all of them said this hard is QUITE HARD enough. If you guys said 'uhh you should add triplets on here and there' which is totally overmapped i will ignore this.(BTW i am not saying cb's suggest is bad but i just want to notice guys plz forcus on the diff itself but not only focus on how many stars)
Anyway the reason why i said this is i am boring about you guys doing unrank twice for this map.(although i cant play the highest diff)this is a nice mapset and it should be supported by mappers(since many people are having fun on this map) i really dont want to see this is unrank again and no bats will be brave enough to rank this after that :( :( :(

And thank you for suggest cb <3
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Well, i hope it will be the last check.
Concerning 1/4s instead of 1/6s, it's fine, I got a few opinions and people are not disturbed by this and 1/4s still make sense...

Mei's Hard

  1. Check aimod, tag conflicts with other diffs.
  2. at the beginning, i guess NCs are a bit inconsistent, there is no equal length between 00:17:171 (1) - and 00:14:533 (1) - for example, is that intentional ?
  3. 00:42:226 (1) - remove NC here
  4. 01:17:830 (5) - if i follow your logic with NCs there should be a NC here as you did here 01:07:281 (1) -
  5. 01:47:171 (1) - same as ^, make NCs consistent, i refer to 00:55:742 (7) -
  6. 02:01:347 (1) - remove NC here and add here 02:02:665 (11) - and remove this one 02:03:984 (1) -
  7. 02:50:138 (1) - remove NC here
  8. 02:55:413 (1) - there is still a ninja spinner here ? was it supposed to be removed ?

Extra

  1. 00:46:841 (3,4) - Due to stack leniency, these objects are overlapped when playing, so increase a bit the distance between them. (1 or 2 grids right)
  2. 03:09:424 (6) - avoid this 1/6 since you are using 1/4 for the same sound, use 1/4 instead, to be consistent on this section. Same as 03:10:413 (6) -

Awaken's Extra

  1. 03:10:413 (6) - i don't really find this NC necessary since you didnt add NC here 00:17:830 (4) - , so be consistent.
  2. 00:37:610 (1) - same as here, remove NC here and add NC on this object 00:38:270 (5) -
  3. 00:53:435 (1) - remove NC here.
  4. 01:42:226 (1) - Wrong place, i guess you are using NC to follow guitar buuut, guitar begins here 01:41:566, so add NC here 01:41:566 (5) - and remove NC here 01:42:226 (1) -
  5. 01:50:303 (4) - Missing NC, according to other kiais.
  6. 01:55:248 (4) - same as ^
  7. 01:55:577 (7) - ^
  8. 02:00:687 (1) - wrong place for NC, it should be here 02:00:523 (4) - and here 02:00:852 (7) -
  9. 02:05:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same scenario ^
    Please recheck consistency concerning NCs in last kiai especially in places like this 02:35:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , it is important because NCs are giving recovery.

Call me back for rebubble.
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
rinsukir

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Well, i hope it will be the last check.
Concerning 1/4s instead of 1/6s, it's fine, I got a few opinions and people are not disturbed by this and 1/4s still make sense...

Extra

  1. 00:46:841 (3,4) - Due to stack leniency, these objects are overlapped when playing, so increase a bit the distance between them. (1 or 2 grids right)
  2. 03:09:424 (6) - avoid this 1/6 since you are using 1/4 for the same sound, use 1/4 instead, to be consistent on this section. Same as 03:10:413 (6) -

Call me back for rebubble.
all fixed, thank you! :)
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Awaken's Extra

  1. 03:10:413 (6) - i don't really find this NC necessary since you didnt add NC here 00:17:830 (4) - , so be consistent. umm I think in the last jump part, adding NC to separate the jumps is needed
  2. 00:37:610 (1) - same as here, remove NC here and add NC on this object 00:38:270 (5) -
  3. 00:53:435 (1) - remove NC here. as above, I think removing this NC will make the jumps look in a mess
  4. 01:42:226 (1) - Wrong place, i guess you are using NC to follow guitar buuut, guitar begins here 01:41:566, so add NC here 01:41:566 (5) - and remove NC here 01:42:226 (1) - fixed
  5. 01:50:303 (4) - Missing NC, according to other kiais.
  6. 01:55:248 (4) - same as ^
  7. 01:55:577 (7) - ^ fixed all
  8. 02:00:687 (1) - wrong place for NC, it should be here 02:00:523 (4) - and here 02:00:852 (7) -
  9. 02:05:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same scenario ^ fixed both
    Please recheck consistency concerning NCs in last kiai especially in places like this 02:35:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , it is important because NCs are giving recovery. Changed all NCs

Call me back for rebubble.
thx for the last check~ ~:D
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
fixed all what cb said :D thank you for moding
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Everything looks fine now.
Disable widescreen support in Mei's Hard and then i'll rebubble.

Rebubbled.
@To next BAT : there are discutable 1/6s and 1/4s, don't really take care of them since i've got opinions about them. 1/4s play fine and still make sense.
Concerning difficulty gap between Hard and Insane, it looks fine now imo, triples have been added and this Hard is quite harder than a traditional one.
Last edited by Cherry Blossom , edited 4 times in total.
Xantaria
274 posts
Joined July 2013
Xantaria
Nice to see this is about to get bubbled (again)!
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
泡了！差一步ranked :)
Skubi
841 posts
Joined December 2013
Skubi
Can I make guest diff? ;w;
Aka
1,777 posts
Joined January 2012
Aka

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Concerning difficulty gap between Hard and Insane,
actually im worrying about the normal-hard one lol
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom

Aka wrote:

actually im worrying about the normal-hard one lol
There could be a solution, it is making another diff between hard and normal...
But the transition between Normal and Hard can be fine... Up to the next bat to decide.
X Light
456 posts
Joined August 2012
X Light
Good luck!
hehe
1,959 posts
Joined November 2012
hehe
hhype
Xantaria
274 posts
Joined July 2013
Xantaria
I would be so happy if you would implement this:

Awaken's Challenging:
01:07:775 (7,8) - make those two nodes a slider instead
01:18:324 (7,8) - ^
01:59:203 (7,8) - ^
02:09:753 (7,8) - ^
02:45:358 (7,8) - ^
02:55:907 (7,8) - ^

This would make the map perfect from my point of view. because that's like the only thing that messes up the flow a bit.
Please try it out!

no kd
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
To Zantaria : Sorry but I prefer keeping them.
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
As requested by Awaken.
rinsukir神马破

好久没用中文啦，好爽
[Easy]
取消勾选 Widescreen Support。

00:18:490 (2) - 弯一弯更好玩qwq？ http://puu.sh/cIVoI/c0169790f2.jpg
00:21:127 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/cIVsh/353a9ca887.jpg
00:34:314 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/cIVww/9b63855b43.jpg
01:53:105 加个note？因为 01:58:380 (2) - 这里有
02:00:028 (1,2) - 再修一下blanket：http://puu.sh/cIVJ9/978fcc9de1.jpg
02:54:753 (2,3) - 滑条？

00:47:501 (2) - 在00:48:160 结束， 在 00:48:490 加一个note？
很好啦~
Good Luck！
[ Oneiroi ]
18 posts
Joined June 2013
[ Oneiroi ]
Firstly try English mod

[Easy]

You need to disabled Widescrren Support in this diff.
02:27:720 (3) - Maybe you can add hitsound on head.
02:55:083 (3) - For keeping the rhythm consistent, I advise you to delete this circle.
01:17:830 (2) - The flow would be much better if you move the last tick to x447y164,
01:46:841 (1) - This is really dangerous in Easy, spinners which didn't run up to 4 beats are not allowed now.
02:00:028 (1) - You can try finish here, sounds much better for me.
02:13:215 (1) - Same as above, you need to lengthen the spinner to 4 beats.
02:32:995 (1) - Same as above
00:55:413 (1) - Same as above

Good Luck~~~!
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
[easy]
  1. 00:44:204 (1,2,3,1) - try this? i got better rythm here
    Picture
  2. 00:47:501 (2) - since you put notes on the 3rd white tick here 00:50:138 (2,3) - , i prefer you make the slider shoter to get same effect with notes after
    Picture
  3. 00:52:775 (2,3) - add clap on 2's end and 3's head?
  4. 01:06:621 (1) - use a note here is better for me
  5. 01:58:380 (2) - remove this sounds better for me
  6. 02:55:083 (3) - ^
Last edited by Mei , edited 1 time in total.
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
rinsukir
Mostly fixed! Thanks for mods <333!!
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Hello.
Assume i can rebubble this map since it got self popped by mapper.

Easy

  1. 00:54:753 (3) - Add NC here to be consistent with other measures.
  2. 01:17:830 (2,1) - i don't really recommend this kind of movement for the easiest diff, this is tricky to play and understand for a beginner, make something else, more readable and easier instead of this slider 01:17:830 (2) -
  3. 01:52:116 (1,2,3) - the transition could be a bit more improved here, for a better flow, if you move 01:53:105 (2,3) - a bit on the left, just see (don't forget to fix distance issues)
    SPOILER
  4. 02:32:995 (1) - this spinner ends on nothing audible, or something close to inaudible, i suggest you to remove it because it will be too short if you end this spinner here 02:34:314
    So i only see 1 solution, it's making a long slider instead.

    I don't find any major issues, safely mapped.

Normal

  1. 00:38:270 (1) - missing hitsounds on this slider
  2. 00:41:237 (5,1) - swap NC here, the measure is supposed to start here 00:40:907 but this is the place for a slider's end, so add NC on the next object.

    I see that you have added some 1/2s to balance the diff spread, i find them sparingly used, so that's fine.

Awaken's Challenge

  1. 01:27:061 - missing note ? i don't really remember there was a blank here.

Call me back after applying my suggestions.
saiyuri
215 posts
Joined June 2013
saiyuri
there's some problems with the download. no audio ; ;
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
rinsukir
Fixed all except the point of Awaken's Challenge, he said only a reverse slider there could be better than before. :)
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom

Easy



  1. 00:54:753 (3) - NC has not been added here, i told you to add a NC here.
  2. 02:32:995 (1) - End this slider at 02:34:314 in easy


Edit, now it is fine.
Rebubbled.
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
212 / 340