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tokainitomarou

tokainitomarou 2014-02-28T00:44:37+00:00

初めまして　mod初心者ですがよろしくお願いします

normal
01:24:984 - 最後のサークルは2連打にしたらどうでしょう？

それだけです～
opもよかったです～
rank待ってます

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

Guy 2014-02-28T17:59:15+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Hi,Guy,M4M.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Nothing.

[Easy]

Clear.

[Normal]

00:04:694 (3) - It change a different music,so I think about setting NC this here.
00:34:865 (3) - Try delete medium whistle? This is a quiet part,so I think whistle no need all added.(I think you can delete one whistle better in this part) - fixed
00:42:065 (2) - Perhap you can try 00:39:665 (2) ?
00:44:465 (1) - Forget add finish? You have added finish in easy diff. - fixed
00:49:951 (1) - Nazi,seems stack crooked off? - fixed
01:14:637 (1) - As the same 00:44:465. (slider end) - fixed

[Hard]

00:12:237 (3) - Forget add finish? You have added finish in normal diff here. - fixed
00:44:122 (4) - Perhaps can stack 00:44:465 (1) .
00:45:494 (4) - Perhaps can stack 00:45:322 (3) add sense of rhythm.
00:49:608 (5) - I feel no need add finish at this here ,there is no strong beat. (As easy and nm diff ,you haven"t no here) - fixed
00:58:180 (1) - Try to stack 00:56:122 (3) ? It can make a jump,too.
01:03:665 (1) - I feel add finish in slider end have a good effect (strong beat).
01:04:522 (2) - Nazi,stack crooked off. - fixed
01:10:351 (4) - Try to stack 01:08:637 (2) ?
01:17:380 (1) - Try to stack 01:15:665 (4) ?

[Insane]

00:42:408 (3) - Try to do ctrl +g?
00:49:608 (5) - As the same Hard diff. - fixed
01:00:237 (5) - Suddenly come a big jump, try add NC at this here? - fixed
01:04:351 (3) - I feel add finish in slider end have a good effect (strong beat).
01:15:322 (3) - ^
01:18:065 (4) - ^
01:23:722 (4) - Maybe can move to (34|104) make a jump.

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.Overall is quite good,so I shoot a star for you,Good Luck!
5.My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/153614 ,thx !

Thank you for modding & star!
it was helpful mod about hitsounds

tokainitomarou wrote:
初めまして　mod初心者ですがよろしくお願いします

normal
01:24:984 - 最後のサークルは2連打にしたらどうでしょう？

それだけです～
opもよかったです～
rank待ってます

modありがとうございます～　ご指摘された箇所のsectionが合っておらずnote置けなかったのでno changedです

maaagic

433 posts

Joined October 2011

maaagic 2014-03-03T03:22:12+00:00

IRC

11:51 maaagic: 00:04:865 (2) -
11:51 maaagic: ちょっと遠い気がする
11:51 maaagic: そんなに離すようなところでもないと思うから
11:51 Guy: ここはゆずれねえ・・・
11:51 maaagic: わかった
11:51 Guy: でもちょっと近づけた
11:51 maaagic: 00:09:322 (5,1) - ちょっと近いと思った
11:52 maaagic: 00:07:437 (1,1,1) -
11:52 maaagic: なんていうんだろう
11:53 maaagic: この音意識して少しジャンプさせたら楽しいかなって思った
11:53 Guy: 前者は特に違和感ないんでno changeです
11:53 Guy: ｆｍｆｍ
11:53 maaagic: この中で00:09:322 (5,1) - ここだけちかいかなって
11:53 Guy: この辺も流れ意識してるからいじりづらいな
11:53 maaagic: まあ別にこのままでも良いと思うけど
11:53 maaagic: そうだな
11:54 maaagic: 00:28:008 (1,2) -
11:55 maaagic: これ曲がり方ちょっと違うからあわせたほうがきれいだなーって思った
11:55 Guy: お
11:55 Guy: ここに気付くとは
11:55 Guy: やはりまじっくさん
11:55 Guy: これ配置決まらないから
11:55 maaagic: わざとか？
11:55 Guy: ほとんど適当においてた
11:55 maaagic: お？
11:55 maaagic: ｗ
11:55 Guy: ちょっと考えるかあ
11:55 maaagic: 00:40:351 (1,2) - ここもか？
11:56 maaagic: 01:05:722 (1,2) - ここ近い割りにつぎの3が遠くて違和感
11:56 Guy: 向き合わせておいた
11:57 Guy: ここは考えてなかったな・・・
11:57 maaagic: 曲的には同じくらいのスペーシングが合うと思った
11:57 maaagic: あいにきてーってそのまま言ってるし
11:57 Guy: とりあえず00:40:008 (5,6,7,8,1) - こっちだけど
11:57 Guy: ここが直線だからスライダーまげづらいんだよなあ
11:57 maaagic: うむ
11:57 maaagic: まあそうだなそこは俺も思いつきで言ったからあんまり気にしないで
11:57 Guy: ここはこのままにしておくね
11:57 Guy: ｋｋ
11:57 Guy: ここもなー
11:58 Guy: なんか飛ばしちゃった
11:58 Guy: ちょっと近づけてみる
11:58 maaagic: 俺は2を1から遠ざけるかなーって思ったんだけど
11:59 maaagic: ちょっと難しいよね結構きれいな配置なだけに動かすのも
11:59 Guy: この流れは気に入ってるから
11:59 maaagic: (´ε｀；)ｳｰﾝ…
11:59 Guy: ちょっとあれだな
11:59 Guy: むずいねｗ
11:59 Guy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1383859
11:59 Guy: こんな感じで整えてみようと思う
11:59 maaagic: まじか;_;
12:00 Guy: なんかぐちゃぐちゃになってしまた・・
12:00 maaagic: 01:06:408 (1,2) - これ反転使ってるかと思ったから
12:00 maaagic: そこ動かすとは思わなかった;_;
12:00 Guy: ちょい全部やり直す
12:00 maaagic: はい
12:02 maaagic: 01:05:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - こんなんじゃダメ？
12:02 Guy: 底反転使ってたから
12:02 Guy: やはり厳しかった
12:03 Guy: こんなんじゃとは
12:03 maaagic: あｗ
12:03 maaagic: もうぼけてるわ
12:03 maaagic: http://puu.sh/7gX7F.jpg
12:03 maaagic: これｗ
12:03 maaagic: 1もじゃっかん左に動かしてるんだけど
12:04 maaagic: 右だわ
12:05 Guy: おお
12:05 Guy: これでいってみるか・・
12:05 maaagic: おお
12:06 maaagic: 01:09:837 (4) - ここジャンプさせると気持ちいいかなと思った
12:07 Guy: 位置が思いつかねえ・・
12:07 maaagic: そう俺もそう思ったまあスルーで良いよ
12:07 maaagic: 01:11:465 (2) -
12:07 maaagic: ここ俺が一番直してほしいというか俺が何回やっても100でる
12:08 Guy: ｗｗｗ
12:08 Guy: 頑張りましょう
12:08 maaagic: だからhttp://puu.sh/7gXoF.jpg
12:08 maaagic: こういうのはどうだろう
12:08 maaagic: 100もでにくいし音楽的にはあってると思うんだ
12:08 Guy: いやーここは変えないですね
12:09 Guy: まじっくさんの配置もやってみたいけど
12:09 Guy: 一回配置しちゃうと愛着がね
12:09 Guy: うん
12:09 maaagic: 一個飛ばしてた戻って00:54:237 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
12:10 Guy: おｋ
12:10 maaagic: 3連打連続はここにあってるかな～？っ手思った
12:10 maaagic: 特に配置とか音取りは考えてないけど
12:10 Guy: 曲が
12:10 Guy: 全部ストリーム入れてもいいような音だから
12:10 Guy: これでもいいかと
12:10 maaagic: ならいいかな
12:11 maaagic: Insaneはそのくらいしか

HNEはなんもなかったです。
がんばってください

xclaudioh

49 posts

Joined September 2012

xclaudioh 2014-05-25T19:57:12+00:00

i love this song <3

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-06-02T00:50:06+00:00

modding soon!

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2014-06-12T16:57:32+00:00

here's the ticket

[General]
~~the video is a bit H at the ending >////<~~

[Easy]
00:04:522 - how about put circle (2) here? would fit the song better imo(you may need to start the spinner at 00:04:865 - if you accept this)

[Normal]
01:25:437 - I'd like to add sth here instead the spinner, and start the spinner later a bit. it would fit the song better imo

[Hard]
00:47:208 (1) - the drums hitsounds sound too loud imo, I suggest turn the volume down a bit for them
00:49:951 - ^
the above suggestions are suitable for all diffs

[Insane]
00:14:294 (1,2,3) - I hope the spacing could be a bit larger for shis triangle.. or it's a bit eary to read as they're 1/2 beats imo
01:08:465 (3) - blanket better?
this diff is a bit harder than I thought ：o

nice map, feel free to call me back

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

Guy 2014-06-12T19:21:21+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
here's the ticket

[General]
~~the video is a bit H at the ending >////<~~ - i like it xD

[Easy]
00:04:522 - how about put circle (2) here? would fit the song better imo(you may need to start the spinner at 00:04:865 - if you accept this) - fixed!

[Normal]
01:25:437 - I'd like to add sth here instead the spinner, and start the spinner later a bit. it would fit the song better imo - okay

[Hard]
00:47:208 (1) - the drums hitsounds sound too loud imo, I suggest turn the volume down a bit for them - fixed at all diffs
00:49:951 - ^ - ^
the above suggestions are suitable for all diffs

[Insane]
00:14:294 (1,2,3) - I hope the spacing could be a bit larger for shis triangle.. or it's a bit eary to read as they're 1/2 beats imo - fixed
01:08:465 (3) - blanket better? - okay
this diff is a bit harder than I thought ：o - aha lol

nice map, feel free to call me back