Unsfamiliar wrote:

M-M-Mochi! :3


Laurier's Insane

• No major complaints really. Laurier <3
  
  Just one thing maybe:

1. 00:43:005 (1) - The first point of this slider is slightly closer to the circle being blanketed. Move it to x:172 y:268 fixed!!

1. Artist: Hashimoto Chinami, Ogura Yui & Kanemoto Hisako
2. ArtistUnicode: 橋本ちなみ, 小倉唯 & 金元寿子
   If you use the name of the three, you should use "&" instead of ",". like this map
   
3. About Tags: Add "Saikin, Imouto no Yousu ga Chotto Okashiin daga."
   I recommend that you add the romanised (anime name).
4. AudioLeadIn: Change to 1500. I feel just a little faster.
5. PreviewTime: Change to 61348. I recommend the start point of vocal.
6. There is a green line that is not used in large quantities. I strongly recommend that you remove it

1. HP+1. HP1 is too kind x_x
2. StackLeniency: Please set to the default (0.7). Does not make sense in this diff D:
3. 00:05:291 (3) - I feel a little strange. not 1/2. 1/1 would be nice. Therefore, change to 00:05:463 the start point. If you change, do not forget to remove the green line.
   
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4. 00:32:034 (2) - Try to create a slider on the left and right symmetry?
   
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5. 00:43:863 (3) - Don't stack. Move to x:216 y:180.
6. 00:44:205 (1) - Change the shape of the slider for blanket. It would be nice.
   
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7. 01:23:977 (4) - Move to x:164 y:208. I think this is making a good flow.

1. StackLeniency: Same as Easy diff.
2. 00:05:120 (2) - Add a finish on the end point (S:C1).
3. 00:55:520 (1) - ^ on the start point (S:C1).
4. 01:00:834 (5) - Please raise the volume (+10%).
5. 01:08:548 (3) - Add a clap on the end point.
6. 01:09:234 (4) - ^
7. 01:11:120 (2,3,4) - suggestion of rhythm. I prefer this. and I think it's very good rhythm.
   
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8. 01:20:205 (3) - Add a clap on the middle point. You have forget to add.
9. 01:21:577 (1) - ^

1. StackLeniency: I recommend that you set to the default.
2. OD or HP -1. Since you are set to AR8, adjust the balance.
3. 00:23:634 (3) - Change the shape of the slider for blanket.
   
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4. 01:02:377 (2) - Add a new combo. Because it is the start point of the kiai time.
5. 01:10:605 (1) - Move to x:355 y:332 for stack
6. 01:12:834 (4) - Rather than a straight slider, change to the slider like this.
   
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7. 01:16:948 (2) - Add a clap on the end point.
8. 01:24:320 (1) - ^

1. このdiffだけWidescreen Supportが付いているので外しといてください。
2. StackLeniencyはデフォルトの0.7にするのがいいかも。（特に理由がなければ）
3. 00:03:063 (5) - 始点にclapを追加。ここだけ外れているのはなんか変に感じる。
4. 00:05:463 (4) - 強い音があるのでfinishを入れたい。
5. 00:10:091 (9) - whistleを入れたい。
6. 00:10:263 (1) - finishを入れる？
7. 00:11:291 (6) - ^
8. 00:11:291 (6,7,8) - x:304 y:308. ずれているので。
9. 00:22:263 (2) - ここでDrumの音を使っていて、スライダーの流れる音が入っちゃってるので、無音のdrum-sliderslideを入れてもらうといいかも。
10. 00:29:291 (1) - whistle
11. 00:29:634 (3) - ^
12. 00:37:863 (1,2) - CTRL+Gで配置逆にしたほうが好き。
13. 00:40:605 (3) - whistle
14. 01:00:491 (7) - 終点ではなく、始点にwhistleを付けた方が合うと思います。
15. 01:01:348 (2) - 個人的にはnew combo欲しい。
16. 01:03:063 (3) - 始点にwhistle
17. 01:11:805 (1) - 終点ではなく、始点にfinishのほうが合うと思います。
18. 01:12:148 (2) - ここにもfinishを入れちゃう？(始点)
19. 01:27:748 (5) - 終点にもclapを・・
20. 配置よりもhitsoundばっかになりましたx_x

jacob wrote:

from request by PM

[General]
laurier's insane has a slightly different third combo color http://prntscr.com/2qoben fix
remove the "♡" from the title. it doesnt show up properly and its fine without it. ah.. it's actually about the original title, you can see that on video near the kiai times. Dunno again, i may ask KSHR for confirmation later ~
if you want i can move the title text to 00:11:291. yes pls ww

[Easy]
HP +1. the diff is short and easy, no need for hp 1 ok
00:48:491 (3) - curve this slider like this so it matches the shape of 00:50:205 (1), i think it looks cool and neater like this rearranged this one

SPOILER

[Normal]
HP +1 again for same reason nope for this one, HP 3 is more balance imo since this is CS 4
00:07:520 (3) - NC to match your combo pattern sure

[Hard]
00:02:377 (2) - reverse this. it would flow a lot better. ok
00:08:377 (3) - same as above
00:18:148 (4) - ^ nope for this two, i kinda like how they were flowing one each other
01:02:377 (2) - NC for obvious reasons i try to following the vocal here since they're connected. So it will give more pressure imo, well personally it was how i arrange my NCs pattern that has been work to most of my ranked map until now. I hope you can understand this


kinda lazy mod, but there isnt much wrong with this map. good luck

1. There are a lot of unused green lines, it would be nice if you could remove all of them.

1. There are a lot of unused green lines, it would be nice if you could remove all of them.
2. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:11:634 (1) - This new combo here isn't needed, remove it.
2. 00:44:548 (1,2) - Spacing feels too close, try to move them a bit more.
3. 00:47:291 (1,2) - Same as above.

1. Increase OD by 1 tick, it's too low right now imo.

1. 01:02:377 (2) - I think it would be better to add a new combo here, due to the kiai time start and SV change.

1. 00:21:063 (1,2) - Spacing is a bit confusing here, I'd suggest you to make them closer.
2. 01:00:834 (1) - Remove this new combo from here.
3. 01:01:348 (2) - Then add it here to follow properly with the lyics and music.
4. 01:16:091 (1) - This slider repeat is somehow covered by the previous circle, try to move it somewhere else if possible.
5. 01:28:263 (1) - Even though there's a new combo here, I really dislike this anti-jump. Try moving it somewhere else.

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

1. There are a lot of unused green lines, it would be nice if you could remove all of them.

~Normal~

1. There are a lot of unused green lines, it would be nice if you could remove all of them. done both diff ><
2. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

it's already balanced imo because i used CS 4

1. 00:11:634 (1) - This new combo here isn't needed, remove it. ok~
2. 00:44:548 (1,2) - Spacing feels too close, try to move them a bit more.
3. 00:47:291 (1,2) - Same as above. fixed both

~Hard~

1. Increase OD by 1 tick, it's too low right now imo.

OD 6 fit Hard the best imo, 7 would be pretty hard for me.

1. 01:02:377 (2) - I think it would be better to add a new combo here, due to the kiai time start and SV change. I try to give more pressure to the vocal. I already explained this several times to Bats and other modders before. Hope you can understand lol

~Laurier's Insane~

1. 00:21:063 (1,2) - Spacing is a bit confusing here, I'd suggest you to make them closer. done
2. 01:00:834 (1) - Remove this new combo from here.
3. 01:01:348 (2) - Then add it here to follow properly with the lyics and music. ^fix both
4. 01:16:091 (1) - This slider repeat is somehow covered by the previous circle, try to move it somewhere else if possible. i make it blanketing instead
5. 01:28:263 (1) - Even though there's a new combo here, I really dislike this anti-jump. Try moving it somewhere else. not sure about this, but i like it personally.