1. 00:27:079 (1) - 转盘刚结束的note离屏幕中心近一点比较好比如 http://puu.sh/6Ip9w.jpg
2. 01:23:260 - Clap比较好？

1. 开头音效有点空，可以和后面一样多用一用whistle的地方：
   00:10:715 (2) - 00:11:806 - 00:13:988 (1) - 00:15:079 - 00:17:260 (1) -
   同样适用于Normal
2. 01:28:170 (5) - 加个NC提示下变速。为了美观可以把下一个NC扔到01:29:533 (6) -
3. 01:40:715 (3,4) - Kiai的难度低了点，可以夹带一些跳，比如交换这两个
4. 01:49:715 - 感觉还是Add一下，毕竟vocal和鼓点都有。可以叠在01:50:533 (2) - 头上

Autumn wrote:

From req

[Normal]

1. 00:27:079 (1) - 转盘刚结束的note离屏幕中心近一点比较好比如 http://puu.sh/6Ip9w.jpg嗯好的
2. 01:23:260 - Clap比较好？嗯嗯手误加错了

[Hard]

1. 开头音效有点空，可以和后面一样多用一用whistle的地方：
   00:10:715 (2) - 00:11:806 - 00:13:988 (1) - 00:15:079 - 00:17:260 (1) -
   同样适用于Normal 嗯好的
2. 01:28:170 (5) - 加个NC提示下变速。为了美观可以把下一个NC扔到01:29:533 (6) -好的
3. 01:40:715 (3,4) - Kiai的难度低了点，可以夹带一些跳，比如交换这两个挺好的建议，不过感觉还是善良点吧哈哈哈
4. 01:49:715 - 感觉还是Add一下，毕竟vocal和鼓点都有。可以叠在01:50:533 (2) - 头上 好的，这附近排列做了改动

挺好的，支持华语歌，star ^^谢谢！

Akabato wrote:

hi~ mod from pm request~ 顺便求个MU啊～ 好啊~
图本身已经很完善了，所以下面的基本都是建议啦

[General]
- 文件夹里有个.osb，把它消灭掉？我的文件夹里没有也- -
- 背景图的尺寸是既不是16:9也不是4:3，我把原图截取成了1024x768的一张，并且构图也基本保持与原图一致（人物主体在左侧，右侧部分留白），看看是不是可以替换上？ http://puu.sh/6WUuo.jpg太好了谢谢！
- 萧亚轩的英文名最好用官方的“Elva Hsiao”；可以把专辑名“爱的主打歌·吻”添加到tags里～名字想先放着 问看看battags里加入了

[Normal]
00:12:351 (4) - nazi.这个跟前面的间距1.05了，开DS挪到（172，252），前后就都是1.00了～
00:15:624 (3) - 还是nazi.可以移到（400，88）
00:21:624 (6) - 还是间距，这个直接到1.09了……感觉虽然打得时候看不太出来，不过既然是最低难度的话还是尽量让间距的浮动小一点为好～ 这3个部分没有改，当时是弄对称所以间距忽略了点，不过觉得这一点应该不要紧吧- -
00:28:170 (3) - 改成向外侧凸的滑条？像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337123好的
00:42:351 (3) - 不跟下面的4包一下吗？稍微再包了一下
01:00:351 (4) - 改成一个1/1的滑条加一个在01:01:442的circle？01:01:442这里歌词中“还”的重音还挺明显的，搁滑条尾感觉有点漏音好，这附近排列修改了
01:28:170 (2) - 跟3包的意味明显一点？觉得包了的话形状不好看
01:49:988 (1,2,3,4) - 这一组排列上感觉有点挤，放不开的意味。在整张图排列风格都比较舒展的情况下这一组就显得比较违和。试试大概这样？ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337146 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337150 嗯，修改了一下这附近的排列

[Hard]
00:11:806 (4) - 可以往外移一些，感觉跟3靠得有点近 好的
00:13:988 (1) - 不知道算不算出格，圆心已经在格外了 应该不算吧··· 想到如果这样 某些人的图出格到外太空了233
00:48:079 感觉可以加个note，这里有音的说，对应歌词里的“间”字。还有就是感觉从00:36:351到00:50:533全都是直滑条，感觉可以适当掰弯一部分【。 就像00:52:442 (6)这样的，微微的弧度，感觉很不错～ 这里想有种停顿的感觉 后面同音的地方00:56:533 (2) - 也没有note所以就没加了 确实啊都是直滑条 我的弱点 怎么说呢 觉得直滑条会比较整齐 直弯滑条的过渡和转换还在学习中~
01:15:079 (1) - nazi.头部没有跟01:13:988 (2)的尾完美重合。把1关DS，GS移到（252，241）好的，果然不怎么会叠啊T.T
01:18:351 (4) - 感觉可以搁得稍远一些- -觉得和前面已经挺远的了，后面间距变小是缓冲一下
01:22:715 (1,2,3) - 这三个之间间距浮动有点大，0.77到0.82了，调整一下？已调整
01:35:806 (1,2,3) - 同上，这里又变大了……0.95到1.08 orz ^
01:38:806 (4) - 让尾部冲左下方？咦 我觉得原来的样子比较顺
01:52:442 (1,2) - 感觉虽然有NC及combo color提示，这个梗还是有点违和……考虑就让1跟2的头单纯地stack不要错开？后面的01:54:079 (1,2)同理，整张图就这两处有这样的梗，而且两处还挨得很近，比较突兀 嗯嗯 一时兴起弄的 还是改掉好了 用重叠

that's all
音效感觉没什么说的，跟歌曲契合度很高，赞～
图很不错，又这么善良，还是中文歌，star~and GL!~ 谢谢！

1. Make sure to use the same colors on both the difficulties, they're inconsistent right now.
2. Same goes for the Kiai Time, please make them the same.

1. 00:10:169 (1,2) - I'd try to avoid to start the map with a stack, since it might be confusing for beginners.
2. 00:27:079 (1) - Add a new combo on this circle after spinner, it's missing right now.
3. 00:34:715 (4) - This slider shape is kinda tricky for a Normal, please make it simple.
4. 01:04:169 (1) - Remove the new combo from here, it's breaking your consistency otherwise.
5. 01:17:260 (6) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing for beginners to read, do something else here.

1. 00:18:351 (4,5) - I think these would flow and play better if you make them like (2) and (3).
2. 00:48:079 - It feels like you're missing a note here if you listen to the vocals and music, add it please.
3. 01:01:442 (5) - Maybe add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
4. 01:12:351 (1) - Even though there's the new combo, this slider is still kinda hard to see, move it a bit more to the right.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Make sure to use the same colors on both the difficulties, they're inconsistent right now.Fixed
2. Same goes for the Kiai Time, please make them the same.OK

~Normal~

1. 00:10:169 (1,2) - I'd try to avoid to start the map with a stack, since it might be confusing for beginners.yep~ but i keep stacking in the rest of this map , i will try to avoid stacking in the future , stack does hard for beginners
2. 00:27:079 (1) - Add a new combo on this circle after spinner, it's missing right now.Fixed
3. 00:34:715 (4) - This slider shape is kinda tricky for a Normal, please make it simple.Fixed
4. 01:04:169 (1) - Remove the new combo from here, it's breaking your consistency otherwise.OK
5. 01:17:260 (6) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing for beginners to read, do something else here.Fixed

~Hard~

1. 00:18:351 (4,5) - I think these would flow and play better if you make them like (2) and (3).make sense ,fixed
2. 00:48:079 - It feels like you're missing a note here if you listen to the vocals and music, add it please.OK,another modder said this too, thus added a note
3. 01:01:442 (5) - Maybe add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.OK
4. 01:12:351 (1) - Even though there's the new combo, this slider is still kinda hard to see, move it a bit more to the right.Fixed

Good map ^.^

1. Kiai Time is still inconsistent through the difficulties.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Kiai Time is still inconsistent through the difficulties.

That's it, call me back.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Kiai Time is still inconsistent through the difficulties.Fixed. (It's really a stupid mistake XD

That's it, call me back.

woshiguabi wrote:

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Kiai Time is still inconsistent through the difficulties.

That's it, call me back.

wpcap 2页rank的节奏

Andrea wrote:

Everything checks out.

Bubbled~

BeatofIke wrote:

nice :3

dkun wrote:

Please keep mapping!

BeatofIke wrote:

:OOO
Congratulations! ^_^

Akabato wrote:

快rank～ XD

No Dap wrote:

Congratz!!

OMGPingu wrote:

(*^^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ’★,｡･:*:･ﾟ’☆ Congratulations!!
I even made a video of this beatmap. ^^

Fycho wrote:

六级又一页泡两页rank

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

乃们都好神...恭喜

lkx_Shore wrote:

yes we can

Akabato wrote:

好好，中文歌再多些～

sennank wrote:

Can you upload the full version of song? I can't t find the mp3 full version D: .. This beautiful song, I like it, thanks for create thos map :3

sorry for being late

link: http://puu.sh/aNPT5/c5274d4913.mp3

Thank u ~

sennank wrote:

sorry for being late

link: http://puu.sh/aNPT5/c5274d4913.mp3

Thank u ~

Thank you very much, you're the best :3

CET 6 wrote: