1. Hard (4.6 stars, 216 notes)
2. Normal (2.18 stars, 112 notes)

dkun wrote:

I love the map, but the one notable thing would be the song cutting out so suddenly.

Could just do a small fade out worth ~5 seconds. It really doesn't hurt!

Fycho wrote:

hi~in game req. Happy

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]

1. Offset：27079的地方必须插一根红线修正downbeat啊 嗯嗯，难怪一直觉得有点不对劲
2. 00:10:715 –我觉得第一根红线在这，然后6/4，不过这点很不确定你可以问问别人没明白，我问问看看吧~
3. 背景尺寸是1280x768真奇葩，改成1280x720的或者1366x768的吧原图就是这样尺寸= =
4. 所有难度Widescreen和letterbox都去掉好的

[Hard]
你的whistle当鼓真的不好听啊，如果加过红线过后就在2,4白线上了，建议选个好点的作为鼓T。T 想看看呀~

1. 00:16:170 –其实可以弄个那个有回声的铃铛音效，开头配合默认的whistle加点效果不错嗯！
2. 01:14:806 –加个circle试试。这附近都改动了
3. 01:17:260 (5) –离4的距离可以大点，比3和4的距离大点，有层次感，方向改成向右下角更舒服点嗯，不过这部分排列我改动了
4. 01:49:170 (7,8) –间距略大嗯，改小了点

没什么好挑的啊，主要是有些地方可能作为hard太难了，不过这作为最高难度也不是特别难哈哈哈嗯

[Normal]

1. HP+1 OD+1。配置有点像easy好
2. 00:25:442 (1) –这个转盘在normal太短了吧，干脆去掉吧，改成一个note在00:26:533 (1) – 加长了转盘
3. 00:53:260 –这个其实是大白线（改过timing），最好别被滑条盖掉嗯 修改了

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From forum pm req


[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
图确实不错 谢谢！

[Normal]
General
挺好
Placement
01:01:988 (1,3) - 交叠，我感觉是改不改都可以的地方 有想过呢，不过后来还是想让2处于3的中间，所以就保持原状吧
01:45:624 (2,3) - 做成blanket？仅是建议 嗯好，之前是直接复制前面的滑条，现在做成blanket感觉不错

[Hard]
General
打了一遍也是不卡手
mod也是找不出啥来，有点挑刺的感觉
Placement
01:04:715 (3,4) - 挑一点blanket，也是挑刺无所谓的地方其实我有blanket了- - 只是不是那么完全
01:23:533 (1) - 要是稍微往上拱一点跟滑条3差不多的形状会有利于flow 嗯好
01:26:806 (1,2) - 这个地方我觉得容易读图失误，我差点读成1/2间距，这里差的还是有点大，跳的也是有些突然先保留原状
01:49:442 (4) - 跳有点大，这里没那么明显的跳的感觉吧，难度跟前边比有一点点大了嗯，这附近改动了

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

ZZHBOY wrote:

上面两个神马坡都说没问题了 我简单提点建议吧
注意一下蓝字部分

• [Hard]
  00:45:079 - 多余的绿线前面想插绿线减音量 忘插了
  开头滑条的whistle音感觉好违和啊感觉可以多少去掉一些后面3个soft whistle吗？是跟原曲加的
  然后开头的音效总的来说感觉好奇怪啊.-. 哈哈是有点不过先保留吧
  00:28:715 (4,5) - 这里不要stack 把4往右移 感觉flow也好点改动了一下位置 保留stack
  00:34:442 - 这个音比较明显可以考虑加个note 本来是想弄个停顿梗 不过加了之后感觉不错
  01:06:897 (3,4) - 可以blacklistblanket？嗯修正了
  01:25:170 (5) - 滑条头试试去whistle感觉好一点保留了 原曲这种音的地方都加了whistle 或许要换个音效···
  01:26:806 (1,2) - 间距会不会大了 好歹是4.5星 跟其他部分比这样摆明显不合适先留着吧，思考中
  01:31:442 (1,2,3) - 建议改成向下的移动连打感觉flow会好些保留

• [Normal]
  AImod里有几个ds1.2的地方感觉没必要为了对称美观来这样做 虽然影响不太大但毕竟是最低难度还是建议统一ds 用旋转代替翻转修整DS
  开头音效感觉奇怪同Hard diff
  00:35:260 - 把我妹妹吓一跳;w;233 现在好像流行奇怪滑条呀
  01:01:988 (1,3) - overlap有点丑 可以移开一点改了下滑条形状 没想好怎么移
  01:36:897 (5) - nc 然后去掉下一个nc已调整

1. 00:27:079 (1) - 转盘刚结束的note离屏幕中心近一点比较好比如 http://puu.sh/6Ip9w.jpg
2. 01:23:260 - Clap比较好？

1. 开头音效有点空，可以和后面一样多用一用whistle的地方：
   00:10:715 (2) - 00:11:806 - 00:13:988 (1) - 00:15:079 - 00:17:260 (1) -
   同样适用于Normal
2. 01:28:170 (5) - 加个NC提示下变速。为了美观可以把下一个NC扔到01:29:533 (6) -
3. 01:40:715 (3,4) - Kiai的难度低了点，可以夹带一些跳，比如交换这两个
4. 01:49:715 - 感觉还是Add一下，毕竟vocal和鼓点都有。可以叠在01:50:533 (2) - 头上

Autumn wrote:

From req

[Normal]

1. 00:27:079 (1) - 转盘刚结束的note离屏幕中心近一点比较好比如 http://puu.sh/6Ip9w.jpg嗯好的
2. 01:23:260 - Clap比较好？嗯嗯手误加错了

[Hard]

1. 开头音效有点空，可以和后面一样多用一用whistle的地方：
   00:10:715 (2) - 00:11:806 - 00:13:988 (1) - 00:15:079 - 00:17:260 (1) -
   同样适用于Normal 嗯好的
2. 01:28:170 (5) - 加个NC提示下变速。为了美观可以把下一个NC扔到01:29:533 (6) -好的
3. 01:40:715 (3,4) - Kiai的难度低了点，可以夹带一些跳，比如交换这两个挺好的建议，不过感觉还是善良点吧哈哈哈
4. 01:49:715 - 感觉还是Add一下，毕竟vocal和鼓点都有。可以叠在01:50:533 (2) - 头上 好的，这附近排列做了改动

挺好的，支持华语歌，star ^^谢谢！

Akabato wrote:

hi~ mod from pm request~ 顺便求个MU啊～ 好啊~
图本身已经很完善了，所以下面的基本都是建议啦

[General]
- 文件夹里有个.osb，把它消灭掉？我的文件夹里没有也- -
- 背景图的尺寸是既不是16:9也不是4:3，我把原图截取成了1024x768的一张，并且构图也基本保持与原图一致（人物主体在左侧，右侧部分留白），看看是不是可以替换上？ http://puu.sh/6WUuo.jpg太好了谢谢！
- 萧亚轩的英文名最好用官方的“Elva Hsiao”；可以把专辑名“爱的主打歌·吻”添加到tags里～名字想先放着 问看看battags里加入了

[Normal]
00:12:351 (4) - nazi.这个跟前面的间距1.05了，开DS挪到（172，252），前后就都是1.00了～
00:15:624 (3) - 还是nazi.可以移到（400，88）
00:21:624 (6) - 还是间距，这个直接到1.09了……感觉虽然打得时候看不太出来，不过既然是最低难度的话还是尽量让间距的浮动小一点为好～ 这3个部分没有改，当时是弄对称所以间距忽略了点，不过觉得这一点应该不要紧吧- -
00:28:170 (3) - 改成向外侧凸的滑条？像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337123好的
00:42:351 (3) - 不跟下面的4包一下吗？稍微再包了一下
01:00:351 (4) - 改成一个1/1的滑条加一个在01:01:442的circle？01:01:442这里歌词中“还”的重音还挺明显的，搁滑条尾感觉有点漏音好，这附近排列修改了
01:28:170 (2) - 跟3包的意味明显一点？觉得包了的话形状不好看
01:49:988 (1,2,3,4) - 这一组排列上感觉有点挤，放不开的意味。在整张图排列风格都比较舒展的情况下这一组就显得比较违和。试试大概这样？ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337146 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337150 嗯，修改了一下这附近的排列

[Hard]
00:11:806 (4) - 可以往外移一些，感觉跟3靠得有点近 好的
00:13:988 (1) - 不知道算不算出格，圆心已经在格外了 应该不算吧··· 想到如果这样 某些人的图出格到外太空了233
00:48:079 感觉可以加个note，这里有音的说，对应歌词里的“间”字。还有就是感觉从00:36:351到00:50:533全都是直滑条，感觉可以适当掰弯一部分【。 就像00:52:442 (6)这样的，微微的弧度，感觉很不错～ 这里想有种停顿的感觉 后面同音的地方00:56:533 (2) - 也没有note所以就没加了 确实啊都是直滑条 我的弱点 怎么说呢 觉得直滑条会比较整齐 直弯滑条的过渡和转换还在学习中~
01:15:079 (1) - nazi.头部没有跟01:13:988 (2)的尾完美重合。把1关DS，GS移到（252，241）好的，果然不怎么会叠啊T.T
01:18:351 (4) - 感觉可以搁得稍远一些- -觉得和前面已经挺远的了，后面间距变小是缓冲一下
01:22:715 (1,2,3) - 这三个之间间距浮动有点大，0.77到0.82了，调整一下？已调整
01:35:806 (1,2,3) - 同上，这里又变大了……0.95到1.08 orz ^
01:38:806 (4) - 让尾部冲左下方？咦 我觉得原来的样子比较顺
01:52:442 (1,2) - 感觉虽然有NC及combo color提示，这个梗还是有点违和……考虑就让1跟2的头单纯地stack不要错开？后面的01:54:079 (1,2)同理，整张图就这两处有这样的梗，而且两处还挨得很近，比较突兀 嗯嗯 一时兴起弄的 还是改掉好了 用重叠

that's all
音效感觉没什么说的，跟歌曲契合度很高，赞～
图很不错，又这么善良，还是中文歌，star~and GL!~ 谢谢！

1. Make sure to use the same colors on both the difficulties, they're inconsistent right now.
2. Same goes for the Kiai Time, please make them the same.

1. 00:10:169 (1,2) - I'd try to avoid to start the map with a stack, since it might be confusing for beginners.
2. 00:27:079 (1) - Add a new combo on this circle after spinner, it's missing right now.
3. 00:34:715 (4) - This slider shape is kinda tricky for a Normal, please make it simple.
4. 01:04:169 (1) - Remove the new combo from here, it's breaking your consistency otherwise.
5. 01:17:260 (6) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing for beginners to read, do something else here.

1. 00:18:351 (4,5) - I think these would flow and play better if you make them like (2) and (3).
2. 00:48:079 - It feels like you're missing a note here if you listen to the vocals and music, add it please.
3. 01:01:442 (5) - Maybe add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
4. 01:12:351 (1) - Even though there's the new combo, this slider is still kinda hard to see, move it a bit more to the right.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Make sure to use the same colors on both the difficulties, they're inconsistent right now.Fixed
2. Same goes for the Kiai Time, please make them the same.OK

~Normal~

1. 00:10:169 (1,2) - I'd try to avoid to start the map with a stack, since it might be confusing for beginners.yep~ but i keep stacking in the rest of this map , i will try to avoid stacking in the future , stack does hard for beginners
2. 00:27:079 (1) - Add a new combo on this circle after spinner, it's missing right now.Fixed
3. 00:34:715 (4) - This slider shape is kinda tricky for a Normal, please make it simple.Fixed
4. 01:04:169 (1) - Remove the new combo from here, it's breaking your consistency otherwise.OK
5. 01:17:260 (6) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing for beginners to read, do something else here.Fixed

~Hard~

1. 00:18:351 (4,5) - I think these would flow and play better if you make them like (2) and (3).make sense ,fixed
2. 00:48:079 - It feels like you're missing a note here if you listen to the vocals and music, add it please.OK,another modder said this too, thus added a note
3. 01:01:442 (5) - Maybe add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.OK
4. 01:12:351 (1) - Even though there's the new combo, this slider is still kinda hard to see, move it a bit more to the right.Fixed

Good map ^.^

1. Kiai Time is still inconsistent through the difficulties.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Kiai Time is still inconsistent through the difficulties.

That's it, call me back.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Kiai Time is still inconsistent through the difficulties.Fixed. (It's really a stupid mistake XD

That's it, call me back.

woshiguabi wrote:

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Kiai Time is still inconsistent through the difficulties.

That's it, call me back.

wpcap 2页rank的节奏

Andrea wrote:

Everything checks out.

Bubbled~

BeatofIke wrote:

nice :3

dkun wrote:

Please keep mapping!

BeatofIke wrote:

:OOO
Congratulations! ^_^

Akabato wrote:

快rank～ XD

No Dap wrote:

Congratz!!

OMGPingu wrote:

(*^^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ’★,｡･:*:･ﾟ’☆ Congratulations!!
I even made a video of this beatmap. ^^

Fycho wrote:

六级又一页泡两页rank