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Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-03-01T03:54:01+00:00

谷歌妹妹说好的来看图这么晚对不起> <
~~modding~~
好清新的曲子~ 挺喜欢的
[General]

音效里面normal-sliderslide.wav和normal-slidertick.wav中只能选一个无声哦
曲子没有kiai咩还是要加一点的吧不过这么轻柔的曲子也没关系 > < (个人感觉kiai一闪一闪的感觉还挺有节奏感的）
widescreen support还是建议不要开因为这会占用sb load （有人认为这没有关系的确没有但是真的没必要> <

[yf's Hard]

看了一下上面的mod 也有人提出部分地方应该5连击 bpm低的话就更应该增加一些梗乃突出可玩性不然会很枯燥的哦
前面做的真好就是后面00:38:775 - 00:41:083 - 00:43:390 - 00:48:006 - 00:49:304 - 00:50:313 - 00:50:313 - 00:52:621 - 00:54:929 - 00:57:237 - 00:59:544 - 01:01:852 - 01:04:304 - 01:07:765 - 01:08:775 - 01:10:073 - 01:11:083 - 01:12:237 - 这些音都漏掉了让人感觉玩起来始终打的音不太对的感觉， 01:06:467 - 这里就做的非常好> < 然后后面又都恢复正常了。还是建议这些音再考虑考虑吧，因为是很轻柔的曲子这些没map上的地方还是挺可惜的，而且中间部分太枯燥平常了可以再难一点。
00:55:650 (4,5,6) - 这里是很明显的5连或尾巴+4年三个circle玩起来不太对
01:12:381 (2,3) - 这里也应该是三连加上前面那个蓝线音是四连
01:50:458 - 这个音也建议map上红线还是挺重要的（不过二连也可以就是感觉5连更舒服而已> <
01:52:044 (6) - 这个circle建议去掉因为这样比较符合结尾的音律原因是感觉比三连要适合做结尾（强烈建议
01:14:977 (1) - 这里离转盘还是时间比较短而且不太好读（个人观点> < 三连挺好

[Normal]

00:06:323 (4,5) - 这个overlap不太好看...blanket怎么样呢？
00:21:035 (1,3) - 00:30:265 (1,3) - 这两个为了整洁可以叠起来normal这一点的间接覆盖应该没有问题的
00:46:419 (1) - 这个覆盖不太好新手会挺困扰的
01:53:631 - 做声音渐小的话这里空出来的部分感觉不能理解呢

[Easy]

00:00:265 (1) - 这里不太好哦因为后面24拍子的白线都没有摆但是第一个note的节奏一般都代表后面的节奏所以第一个滑条在这里00:00:842 - 放了音会让新手非常困扰的而且 easy 一般大家都喜欢map24拍而不是13拍哦
后面挺好啦QvQ

这个曲子mapset好像还要改改不过音效做的不错呢> < 加油

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-03-01T05:19:56+00:00

至于Hard的insane like 其实也没那么夸张只要bpm低不要太跳就没关系> < imo 当然spacing和位置也很重要

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-03-02T15:25:55+00:00

[Easy]
00:03:150 (3,5) - 总感觉overlap在easy里不好..
00:30:842 (2) - 你跟的是乐器所以感觉应该在这里nc 其它地方也一样
01:52:188 - 转盘这里开始啊啊啊
[Normal]
00:06:323 (4,5) - overlap丑
00:36:035 (1,2) - 这里弧度可以大一点blanket起来美观些
00:44:688 (1,2) - 没blanket好
01:19:015 - 感觉drum音效不适合这个曲
01:51:035 - 这里也是可以拉一个1/1滑条然后下一个长白线起转盘
不喜欢CS4的N...
[Hard]
00:09:352 (4,5) - 这么坑不怕被玩家怒黑1分?
00:25:073 (2) - 不ctrl+g?
00:26:804 (3) - nc然后去掉上一个nc感觉对
01:19:015 - 这里drum音效真违和差评
后面音效感觉下的不好我不太懂你自己仔细去看看...爱抚神马坡别打我QAQ

美丽

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-03-15T11:10:42+00:00

Winek

Winek wrote:
Hello! Coming from No Dap's Form Q.
I really like the song o3o

[Easy]
Your easy seems clear, But really, it misses notes at the beggining, as they break all the clap chain.
00:09:509 (1) - This note seems completely awkward and out of the rythm... Please, change the position, I suggest removing it, and placing a note at 00:08:932 and 00:10:086 . It will feels better than the current awkward note, as it break (constant) , my english is not perfect o3o Fixed :3
00:15:278 (1) - This note would totally feel better without reversearrow. Instead, place a simple circle. I would eeven see a simple 1/1 slider instead of 2/1.Fixed :3
00:34:894 (3) - That's about the same problem as upper there. Breaks (constant) again, so just place a note on the two white tick between the note. Didn’t quite unterstand...sorry><
00:44:702 (1,2) - Well, please Swap NC. You should new combo mostly on on downbeats. You might make some exeption such as SV change, but most will land on downbeats. (Not all <.<)Here I put NC mostly because it's a long combo(>5 in easy) Fixed as well
00:47:586 (1,1,1) - I do not see the use of these NCs. Please remove them.Fixed :3
00:56:240 - Add a note here? It breaks the (constant)no ><
01:22:201 (3) - I'm not sure but it miss a whistle here. Leaving blank feel.. ughK
01:51:913 (1) - This spinner feel random, while the ending is just a tune down of original music, so i'd rather remove it.Personally I like spinner...

Feedback
The diff is well made; But you miss some opportunity of doing blankets, that's something that could mmake your map prettier. Overall is good.
[Normal]
00:04:894 - I feel there should really be a note here. You see, you added one at 00:02:586 (1) and some other place. if you meet similar areas, try to add a not there.K
00:06:336 (4,5) - Little overlap, Try to blanket well? It helps make the map prettier.re-arranged :3
00:30:279 (1,3) - Give us a stack!K
00:32:586 (1,2) - This doesn't feel good at all. I mean 00:36:048 (1,2) those feels good, but not these. Convert them into simple 1/1 sliders, please..I would keep for now><
00:46:432 (1) - Why NC? It serve nothing.Fixed
00:53:932 (3) - That drum hitsound feels awkward, It really prefer a soft one.K
01:23:644 (2,3) - Please move them a bit so that they can avoid overlap. Same little situation for 01:28:259 (2,3)K
01:51:048 (1) - Same as Easy, this spinner look too random. I suggest removing it. Personally I like spinner...
Feedback
Seems rather fine to me, it was my favorite from all.
Good luck on your map! I hopes i helped!

Thx for mod>.< really helpful !!

kamisamaaa

kamisamaaa wrote:
from my queue~
[normal]
00:04:881空的很违和加个note重叠到滑条脑袋吧K
00:05:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一坨挤成一堆了你用cs4就应该为了能更舒展才对结果往一堆挤。那还不如用大圈呢修了
01:29:112 (3) - 凸的方向换一下。。难受死了为何要换。。。
01:38:342 (2,3) - 。。。。。。。。。= =？
感觉就是小圈没必要版面基本就利用了中间那一块下面就没有note
然后过分blanket。。。其实没必要注意flow要好别光blanket额谢谢提醒><不过我觉得flow还好？
[easy]
00:12:958 (3,1) - 别遮挡删了
00:29:112 (2,1,2,1,2) - easy这么放肯定会被喷出翔的。。。看情况
00:36:035 (1) - 这个节奏不对怎么听都觉得这样才对节奏的确是这样的。。这里只是试图混过去。。
00:45:265 (2) - ctrl+G flow比较好K
01:49:881 (1) - 这个节奏也是3/4折返额试图混的结果。。。

谢谢mod>.<!!

Raphael

[Raphael] wrote:
Hi~! from my queue!

[Easy]
00:49:881 (1) - remove NC.K
00:52:188 (1,3) - stack completelyK
01:15:842 (3) - move to (198,312) for triangleK
01:15:842 (3,5) - stack completelyK
[Normal]
00:06:323 (4,5) - try blanket rearranged
00:30:265 (1,3) - try overlap rearranged
00:36:035 (1,2,1) - better blanket K
00:47:573 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - avoid back and forth pattern. it is bored D: hmmmm><
01:23:631 (2,3) - remove that overlap lightly K
01:28:246 (2,3) - ^ rearranged

Thx for mod~

Sweet Vanilla

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
谷歌妹妹说好的来看图这么晚对不起> < 没有问题啦~我也懒www
~~modding~~
好清新的曲子~ 挺喜欢的
[General]
音效里面normal-sliderslide.wav和normal-slidertick.wav中只能选一个无声哦
曲子没有kiai咩还是要加一点的吧不过这么轻柔的曲子也没关系 > < (个人感觉kiai一闪一闪的感觉还挺有节奏感的）> <实在找不到地方加kiai
widescreen support还是建议不要开因为这会占用sb load （有人认为这没有关系的确没有但是真的没必要> <关掉了
[Normal]
00:06:323 (4,5) - 这个overlap不太好看...blanket怎么样呢？
这里重排了
00:21:035 (1,3) - 00:30:265 (1,3) - 这两个为了整洁可以叠起来normal这一点的间接覆盖应该没有问题的K
00:46:419 (1) - 这个覆盖不太好新手会挺困扰的keep><
01:53:631 - 做声音渐小的话这里空出来的部分感觉不能理解呢我脑残的以为osu会自动渐弱了;w;
[Easy]
00:00:265 (1) - 这里不太好哦因为后面24拍子的白线都没有摆但是第一个note的节奏一般都代表后面的节奏所以第一个滑条在这里00:00:842 - 放了音会让新手非常困扰的而且 easy 一般大家都喜欢map24拍而不是13拍哦先留着了。。。
后面挺好啦QvQ
这个曲子mapset好像还要改改不过音效做的不错呢> < 加油

谢谢mod>.<~!!

ZZHBOY

ZZHBOY wrote:
[Easy]
00:03:150 (3,5) - 总感觉overlap在easy里不好..
00:30:842 (2) - 你跟的是乐器所以感觉应该在这里nc 其它地方也一样
01:52:188 - 转盘这里开始啊啊啊 K
[Normal]
00:06:323 (4,5) - overlap丑改惹
00:36:035 (1,2) - 这里弧度可以大一点blanket起来美观些^
00:44:688 (1,2) - 没blanket好^
01:19:015 - 感觉drum音效不适合这个曲 /.\
01:51:035 - 这里也是可以拉一个1/1滑条然后下一个长白线起转盘 K
不喜欢CS4的N...

美丽

谢mod~

Last edited by Nepu 2014-04-12T18:46:20+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-04-12T04:09:18+00:00

sorry for delaying TnT

special thanks to Sweet Vanilla, changed a lot.

SPOILER

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164,324,34881,6,0,P|144:276|152:232,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,68,35458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,68,35602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,68,35746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,68,36035,6,0,P|230:114|192:168,1,113.999996520996,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,246,36467,2,0,P|142:228|115:168,1,113.999996520996,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,121,36900,2,0,P|88:92|153:98,1,113.999996520996,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,164,37477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,172,37621,1,0,3:0:0:0:
364,168,37765,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,152,37910,1,0,3:0:0:0:
412,128,38054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,128,38342,6,0,P|400:192|408:248,1,114,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,276,38919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,352,39208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,292,39496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,276,39785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,336,40073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,336,40650,6,0,P|312:360|256:360,1,114,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,352,41227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,332,41515,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,276,41804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,152,42381,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,224,42669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,164,42958,6,0,P|231:142|174:139,1,114,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,144,43535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,164,43823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,220,44112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,144,44400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,88,44688,5,2,0:0:0:0:
80,88,44977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,88,45265,2,0,P|132:68|196:68,2,114,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,164,46419,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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288,328,48150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,296,48438,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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336,156,50313,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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196,140,52621,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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76,296,54496,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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364,68,58535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,68,59112,6,0,P|312:44|256:44,1,114,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,52,59689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,252,60843,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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284,239,61420,6,0,P|231:260|174:263,1,114,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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60,240,62285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,184,62574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,260,62862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,316,63150,5,2,0:0:0:0:
80,316,63439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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60,240,64881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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139,84,66035,6,0,P|191:63|248:66,1,114,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,76,66612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,108,66900,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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336,248,68775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,268,68920,2,0,L|360:348,1,76,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,344,69497,2,0,P|424:336|468:360,2,114,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,70650,2,0,L|216:292,1,76,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,264,71083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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96,244,71804,5,6,0:0:0:0:
4,112,72237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,112,72381,2,0,L|0:152,1,38
16,172,72670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,140,72958,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73246,12,0,74688,0:0:0:0:
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340,356,75842,2,0,P|356:304|348:260,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
180,196,76419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,196,76708,2,0,P|164:248|172:292,1,95,6|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,77285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,77573,6,0,P|348:104|320:44,1,142.5,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,28,78150,2,0,P|264:68|284:132,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,176,78727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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324,184,79881,6,0,P|292:148|276:100,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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344,172,89977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,268,90842,2,0,L|383:361,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,272,91419,6,0,P|220:276|180:260,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,92,92285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,84,92429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,88,92573,2,0,P|303:88|348:73,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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400,56,93150,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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460,244,94304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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422,329,95313,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,329,95458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,360,95746,6,0,P|238:349|194:365,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96323,1,4,0:3:0:0:
116,312,96612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,216,96900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,97188,6,0,P|96:120|24:104,1,142.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,80,97765,2,0,P|40:44|88:48,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,36,98342,6,0,P|268:44|312:24,1,95,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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420,176,99496,2,0,P|428:224|408:268,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
504,276,100073,2,0,P|486:321|447:349,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,372,100650,6,0,P|302:343|286:299,1,95,6|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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152,236,102525,1,4,0:3:0:0:
152,236,102669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,164,103823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,208,111467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Maboyu 2014-04-14T07:02:49+00:00

谷歌>w< 說好的mod!!!

[Easy]
00:00:265 (1,2) - 沒包好!
00:17:573 (1) - 刪除NC?
01:31:419 (1) - 這邊的NC移到01:29:112 (5) - 這邊?
01:40:650 (4) - NC?

[Normal]
00:06:323 (5,6) - blanket?
00:30:265 (1,2) - ^

[yf's Hard]
00:30:554 (4,5) - blanket?
01:11:804 (1) - 這邊的NC移到到01:10:650 (5) - 這邊?
01:12:237 - NC?
到處都可見YF的GD QAQ

泥萌都好會做圖QAQ MOD還有點不成熟><
祝早日rank

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-04-14T07:44:52+00:00

周末才能看图所以请尽情找摸ww

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2014-04-16T10:58:22+00:00

hellow!
mod from my queue ~ :3
~~kinda late, sorry about that~~

[Easy]
plays nicely, just some minor suggestions -

00:07:188 (1) - delete NC?
and move NC from 00:08:919 (1) - to 00:10:073 (2) -
00:47:573 (2) - movement feels nicer if this is reversed, you had to change 00:49:881 (3) - then, as well
00:52:188 (1,3) - stack correctly
01:26:227 (2) - move to 376|124 for improved movement

[Normal]

increase AR, atm you have a 3/3/7 spread, which doesn't make much sense.. o.o
00:05:169 (2) - middle anchor too close to 00:05:746 (3) -
00:06:323 (5) - move to 416|200, DS is slightly off
00:29:112 (3) - I'd prefer stack with 00:30:265 (1) - here, cause atm 3 is placed 'against' the movement 00:28:246 (2) - indicates
00:30:554 (2) - last anchor is too far away
00:32:573 (1,2) - maybe you wanna try some different shapes here?
that way you add some variety and if the shapes face each other you improve the flow as well
random bad example
00:45:265 (2,3) - I'd prefer if you don't stack them but place 3 further up and bend in the other direction
screen
00:48:727 (3,1) - blanket, middle anchor too close
00:51:035 (3,1) - ^
01:02:573 (2,3,4) - ^
01:07:188 (2) - if you reverse this the movement is improved by a lot, you had to change up the following then, tho
01:23:631 (2,3) - overlap doesn't look nice, imo, place 3 further down?
01:32:573 (4,1) - refine blanket
01:34:881 (3,4) - ^
01:49:881 (1,2) - ^

[yf's Hard]
can't say much here, cause the diff looks fine. .o.
personally I'd prefer less stacks, but I guess that's your mapping style, so.. xD

00:24:496 (1,2) - symmetry is a bit off here, rotate 2 by -6° and move to 164|172
00:27:669 (6) - NC? (or somewhere around here, the combo is just rather long..)
00:45:265 (3) - why don't you blanket 00:44:400 (5) - here?
hmh, afterwards I had prefered if you hadn't just flipped the previous.. it's kinda boring. >:
especially since the song is extremely short already..

hmh, that's all I can say, nice mapset! owo
and good luck! *squee*

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-04-17T17:07:10+00:00

Hey, mod from queue

yf's Hard

00:07:477 (4,5) - The stack here is really random, since it does not appear again in the next nor the previous rhythm. In fact, shouldn't this be a jump, like how you did for 00:05:169 (4,5) - , in the previous rhythm? It'd make the pattern look more consistent here.

00:28:535 (9,10,11) - Consider unstacking these from 00:29:112 (1) - , the way it is now may trick players into thinking that 00:28:823 (11,1) - is also spaced 1/4 beats apart, when really it's 1/2 beats apart. So there's a bit of inconsistency with the stacking, in relation to timing here.
00:35:458 (2,3,4,1) - ^ Same suggestion as above.

01:12:670 (4,5) - May sound better as a whole slider instead, imo.

01:23:342 (5,6) - Change to a whole slider, and re-position it along with 01:23:198 (4) - like this:

So that it brings back that similar flow style from 00:49:881 (1,2,3) -

Normal

00:01:419 - 00:06:035 Shouldn't the NC pattern be going like this?

The Combo break should be happening between every stanza (shown as the bit white tick mark).

00:10:650 (2) - NC instead of 00:09:785 (1) - . Again, here is how the NC breaks should appear for 00:09:785 - 00:15:265

I'll leave the rest for you to figure out.

Pretty much the combo break should be occurring in this pattern:

Easy

00:01:419 (2) - NC, because it appears in a new stanza, where the music officially starts. 00:00:265 (1) - is more like a sub-intro.

00:10:650 (2) - NC instead of 00:10:073 (1) - .

Okay, so in this diff (due to the low number of hit objects) you'r NC pattern should go something like this:

00:36:035 (1) - Consider re-angling it a bit. It looks weird how it's tail is closer to the previous note, then the actual head itself.

Neat mapset

Good luck!

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2014-04-18T11:00:54+00:00

Free Mod from The Coffee Party Free Mods

(See the requesting post)

[yf's Hard]
* Follow the unapplied mods suggestions (from 10crystalmask01 and so on)
♥ I loved this diff, it feels amazing to me (:

[Normal]
♥ Nice rhythms and hitsounds
00:06:323 (5) - You can make the blanket better by moving the last node by 1 grid left and 1 grid down.
00:12:092 (2) - For same reason, move the 2nd node by 1 grid right, and also snap the 3rd (last) node on grid (x:436 y:56).
00:16:708 (2) - For same reason, snap the 2nd node at the grid (x:416 y:192) and also the 3rd node (x:448 y:212).
♥ 00:19:015 (1) - The blanket here feels good (:
00:23:342 (1,2,3,4) - You can improve this pattern by making it a bit more regular, like → http://puu.sh/8dslw.jpg (note how, after the fix, the approach circle touches all objects at same time; so you can use it for alligning blankets and circle patterns like this). I'll give the code, since the fix is quite complex:

96,136,23342,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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00:25:650 (5) - Try blanketing this around 00:24:208 (3)'s head. Since it depends on the prior mod (that may be applied or not), I can't give the specific coordinates.
00:26:804 (6) - Rotate it by 19 degrees clockwise, with Selection Centre checked (like here → http://puu.sh/8dsBr.jpg), so it'll blanket better with the next object.
00:30:554 (2) - Move the 2nd dot to y:180, then move the 3rd dot to x:432 y:212, so the blanket will get fixed.
00:30:265 (1,3) - They aren't stacked perfectly. You can delete (3) and re-copy it from (1) or vice-versa.
00:48:727 (3) - Move the middle node by 1 grid left to curve it a bit more.
00:51:035 (3) - For same reason, snap the middle node on x:368.
01:24:496 (3) - Move to x:244 y:244, so you'll fix the overlaps.
01:32:573 (4) - Move the 2nd node by 2 grids down, then move the last node to 3 grids right, for better blanketing.
01:34:881 (3) - Move the middle node to x:292 y:300, for same reason.

[Easy]
* Nothing to point out as mod. I just noticed here the slidertick-sound is the same intensity (volume) as of the hitnormal. It gives a good effect on the rhythms ♥ although it may be pointed by further modding or even by a BAT member.

Well, after some polishing and a few mods more, it can get ranked (:

Att.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

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Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-04-20T08:21:55+00:00

Ok fixed many of them. thank you all!!

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Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2014-04-24T13:04:32+00:00

hello mod from game PM.

Easy

00:57:381 (2) - 滑条头有个很轻的鼓声，试试选中滑条头，然后把左上角的sampleset改成drum（觉得太重可以降低音量
00:59:688 (2,2) - ^
好像也没什么问题了

Normal

00:16:419 (1,2,3,4) - 四个头部可以组成正方形
00:56:804 (1) - 滑条尾同EZ
01:23:631 (2,3) - 这两个拉开点不要重叠
01:32:573 (4,1) - 没包好？
01:34:881 (3,4) - ^，没有平行各种不舒服

yf's Hard

00:55:794 (7) - 感觉放成两个note比较好，现在这边对于hard有点混乱
00:57:381 (2) - 这个鼓声不加点drum音效么
00:59:689 (2,2) - ^
下面美丽

hope this helps

eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2014-04-27T20:33:24+00:00

Hi, from modding queue.
Sorry this is very late!

[Easy]
00:08:919 (3) - add clap
00:10:073 (1) - ^
00:47:573 (2) - nc
01:17:573 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:25:650 (5) - nc
00:45:265 (2,3) - to make these curve the same way.
- change (2) the middle point to x444 y269 and the end point to x424 y348
- OR change (3) middle point to x424 y172 and end point to x328 y148
01:23:631 (2) - add clap at 2nd hit of the slider

[yf's Hard]
00:07:477 (4) - add clap at 2nd hit of the slider
00:25:650 (1,3) - nc on (3) instead of (1)
00:33:727 (1,2,3) - only 1/4 time between them so try moving it closer
00:34:881 (1) - remove nc
01:42:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - suggestion for hitsounds, try adding a clap at the end of (1), whistle at (3), and whistle at the end of (8)

That's all. Nice and relaxing song, and great map! Have a star

Best of luck

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-05-05T14:54:48+00:00

from in-game

General

Add an audio lead-in of 2000 ms manually because the current one is too short.
Would u please change the combo colors? It doesn't match with the color tone of the background :c
The Artist should be 'Abo Takeshi' instead.
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean).

yf's Hard

為甚麼每次我都覺得yf的hitsounds好大聲 :c 減個10-20%?
00:30:554 (4) - 這blanket有改善空間
00:32:573 (4) - 頭有個好響亮的高音,whistle好像不錯
00:34:881 (1) - 為甚麼要NC!!
00:44:688 (1) - yf的NC pattern駿馬不理解,在00:45:265 (3)NC才對阿
00:52:188 (5) - ^ ;w;
00:56:083 - 這個音漏了我感覺有點空,然後前面的節奏有點錯手指,打得不舒服,CTRL+G 00:55:073 (4,5,6,7)這些就好;00:56:660 - 這個也是漏得好明顯,因為歌曲本身比較靜,漏音讓我打得有點錯愕
01:10:650 (5) - NC :c
01:24:929 (2) - This is overmapping!!!
00:25:650 (1) - 不需要NC,都不是跳;在00:26:804 (3)NC吧
01:26:515 (8,9) - 我有點糾結,中間藍線是沒音的,有overmap的嫌疑 :c 這樣會不會比較好啊?
SPOILER
01:27:237 (2) - 其實這個是不是1/6
01:42:958 (1) - 這clap是故意漏的?
01:50:602 (4) - ;w;這藍線又是沒音
SPOILER
不想摸音效 >_> QwQ

Normal

Reduce OD by 1 to make the setting of the whole mapset clean.
00:06:323 (5) - blanket能改善!
00:46:419 (3) - 這種stack在N來說真的比較難接受
01:06:035 (1,2) - blanket please ;w;
全部blanket check一遍吧,有改善的空間喔
01:18:727 (1,2,3) - 這三個的排列有點不順眼,試試這樣:
SPOILER
01:24:496 (3) - overlap了少許,spread開會整潔一點
音效不摸啦駿馬好懶怎麼辦 \:D/

Easy粗略看了一遍沒什麼

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-05-30T14:15:21+00:00

mostly fixed thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 03 Firefly.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38067
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 111192
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Firefly
TitleUnicode:Firefly
Artist:Takeshi Abo
ArtistUnicode:阿保剛
Creator:- [ Google ] -
Version:yf's Hard
Source:Memories Off 2nd
Tags:Shirakawa Hotaru original soundtrack OST visual novel KID 5pb yf_bmp troogle
BeatmapID:369146
BeatmapSetID:142953

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Nepu

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-10-25T06:24:50+00:00

Well after a loooooong time, I decide to rank this map

AliomLoung

AliomLoung wrote:
谷歌>w< 說好的mod!!!

[Easy]
00:00:265 (1,2) - 沒包好!K
00:17:573 (1) - 刪除NC?K
01:31:419 (1) - 這邊的NC移到01:29:112 (5) - 這邊?K
01:40:650 (4) - NC?K

[Normal]
00:06:323 (5,6) - blanket? K
00:30:265 (1,2) - ^ K

泥萌都好會做圖QAQ MOD還有點不成熟><
祝早日rank
结果被我坟了这么久TAT

谢谢mod~

Squirrel

Squirrel wrote:
hellow!
mod from my queue ~ :3
~~kinda late, sorry about that~~

[Easy]
plays nicely, just some minor suggestions -
00:07:188 (1) - delete NC?K
and move NC from 00:08:919 (1) - to 00:10:073 (2) -
00:47:573 (2) - movement feels nicer if this is reversed, you had to change 00:49:881 (3) - then, as wellHmmm..I think current one is enough
00:52:188 (1,3) - stack correctlyK
01:26:227 (2) - move to 376|124 for improved movementK
[Normal]
increase AR, atm you have a 3/3/7 spread, which doesn't make much sense.. o.o It was a stupid mistake...fixed
00:05:169 (2) - middle anchor too close to 00:05:746 (3) - K
00:06:323 (5) - move to 416|200, DS is slightly off Rearranged this part
00:29:112 (3) - I'd prefer stack with 00:30:265 (1) - here, cause atm 3 is placed 'against' the movement 00:28:246 (2) - indicates Rearranged this part
00:30:554 (2) - last anchor is too far away K
00:32:573 (1,2) - maybe you wanna try some different shapes here?
that way you add some variety and if the shapes face each other you improve the flow as well

The puush gone missing Q_Q
00:45:265 (2,3) - I'd prefer if you don't stack them but place 3 further up and bend in the other direction
Fixed
00:48:727 (3,1) - blanket, middle anchor too close K
00:51:035 (3,1) - ^ K
01:02:573 (2,3,4) - ^ K
01:07:188 (2) - if you reverse this the movement is improved by a lot, you had to change up the following then, tho K
01:23:631 (2,3) - overlap doesn't look nice, imo, place 3 further down? K
01:32:573 (4,1) - refine blanket K
01:34:881 (3,4) - ^ K
01:49:881 (1,2) - ^ K
hmh, that's all I can say, nice mapset! owo
Thx a lot www
and good luck! *squee*

Thx for your mod :3

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, mod from queue
Normal
00:01:419 - 00:06:035 Shouldn't the NC pattern be going like this?
The Combo break should be happening between every stanza (shown as the bit white tick mark).

00:10:650 (2) - NC instead of 00:09:785 (1) - . Again, here is how the NC breaks should appear for 00:09:785 - 00:15:265

I'll leave the rest for you to figure out.

Pretty much the combo break should be occurring in this pattern:

Sorry but I think the current NC is fine...
Easy
00:01:419 (2) - NC, because it appears in a new stanza, where the music officially starts. 00:00:265 (1) - is more like a sub-intro.

00:10:650 (2) - NC instead of 00:10:073 (1) - .

Okay, so in this diff (due to the low number of hit objects) you'r NC pattern should go something like this:

I think the current NC is fine...
00:36:035 (1) - Consider re-angling it a bit. It looks weird how it's tail is closer to the previous note, then the actual head itself.
Thx for pointing it out..though I didn't want to fix it since it leaves enough time for people to react.(also the tail is the reverse so I think it's fine)

Neat mapset Good luck!

Thx

Alarido

Alarido wrote:
Free Mod from The Coffee Party Free Mods
(See the requesting post)
[Normal]
♥ Nice rhythms and hitsounds
00:06:323 (5) - You can make the blanket better by moving the last node by 1 grid left and 1 grid down.K
00:12:092 (2) - For same reason, move the 2nd node by 1 grid right, and also snap the 3rd (last) node on grid (x:436 y:56).K
00:16:708 (2) - For same reason, snap the 2nd node at the grid (x:416 y:192) and also the 3rd node (x:448 y:212).K
♥ 00:19:015 (1) - The blanket here feels good (:
00:23:342 (1,2,3,4) - You can improve this pattern by making it a bit more regular, like → http://puu.sh/8dslw.jpg (note how, after the fix, the approach circle touches all objects at same time; so you can use it for alligning blankets and circle patterns like this). I'll give the code, since the fix is quite complex:
96,136,23342,5,0,0:0:0:0:
59,65,23631,2,0,P|96:56|128:64,1,72,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,132,24208,2,0,P|170:166|149:195,1,72,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,208,24785,2,0,P|32:184|20:156,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Fixed.. Really thx for the code ><!
00:25:650 (5) - Try blanketing this around 00:24:208 (3)'s head. Since it depends on the prior mod (that may be applied or not), I can't give the specific coordinates.K
00:26:804 (6) - Rotate it by 19 degrees clockwise, with Selection Centre checked (like here → http://puu.sh/8dsBr.jpg), so it'll blanket better with the next object. K
00:30:554 (2) - Move the 2nd dot to y:180, then move the 3rd dot to x:432 y:212, so the blanket will get fixed.
00:30:265 (1,3) - They aren't stacked perfectly. You can delete (3) and re-copy it from (1) or vice-versa.
Rearranged this part
00:48:727 (3) - Move the middle node by 1 grid left to curve it a bit more. K
00:51:035 (3) - For same reason, snap the middle node on x:368. K
01:24:496 (3) - Move to x:244 y:244, so you'll fix the overlaps. K
01:32:573 (4) - Move the 2nd node by 2 grids down, then move the last node to 3 grids right, for better blanketing.K
01:34:881 (3) - Move the middle node to x:292 y:300, for same reason. K

[Easy]
* Nothing to point out as mod. I just noticed here the slidertick-sound is the same intensity (volume) as of the hitnormal. It gives a good effect on the rhythms ♥ although it may be pointed by further modding or even by a BAT member.
Thx for that
Well, after some polishing and a few mods more, it can get ranked (:

Att.

Really thx for this mod :3

Spring Roll

Spring Roll wrote:
hello mod from game PM.

Easy
00:57:381 (2) - 滑条头有个很轻的鼓声，试试选中滑条头，然后把左上角的sampleset改成drum（觉得太重可以降低音量
00:59:688 (2,2) - ^
唔。。我觉得要改的话有点多。。先这样吧
好像也没什么问题了

Normal
00:16:419 (1,2,3,4) - 四个头部可以组成正方形姑且改了改
00:56:804 (1) - 滑条尾同EZ同Easy
01:23:631 (2,3) - 这两个拉开点不要重叠 K
01:32:573 (4,1) - 没包好？K
01:34:881 (3,4) - ^，没有平行各种不舒服 K

hope this helps

谢mod

eeezzzeee

eeezzzeee wrote:
Hi, from modding queue.
Sorry this is very late!

[Easy]
00:08:919 (3) - add clap K
00:10:073 (1) - ^ K
00:47:573 (2) - nc Nope
01:17:573 (4) - ^ K

[Normal]
00:25:650 (5) - nc K
00:45:265 (2,3) - to make these curve the same way. Rearranged this part
- change (2) the middle point to x444 y269 and the end point to x424 y348
- OR change (3) middle point to x424 y172 and end point to x328 y148
01:23:631 (2) - add clap at 2nd hit of the slider K

Best of luck

Thx

IamKwaN

IamKwaN wrote:
from in-game

General
Add an audio lead-in of 2000 ms manually because the current one is too short.
audio lead-in beautiful
Would u please change the combo colors? It doesn't match with the color tone of the background :c
The Artist should be 'Abo Takeshi' instead.
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean).
Fixed Thx!

Normal
Reduce OD by 1 to make the setting of the whole mapset clean.
00:06:323 (5) - blanket能改善! 这段重排了
00:46:419 (3) - 這種stack在N來說真的比較難接受重排+1
01:06:035 (1,2) - blanket please ;w; K
全部blanket check一遍吧,有改善的空間喔 QvQ
01:18:727 (1,2,3) - 這三個的排列有點不順眼,試試這樣:
SPOILER
Q_Q图美丽
01:24:496 (3) - overlap了少許,spread開會整潔一點 K
音效不摸啦駿馬好懶怎麼辦 \:D/

Easy粗略看了一遍沒什麼

Thx KwaN www

yf_bmp

yf_bmp wrote:

mostly fixed thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 03 Firefly.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38067
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 111192
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Firefly
TitleUnicode:Firefly
Artist:Takeshi Abo
ArtistUnicode:阿保剛
Creator:- [ Google ] -
Version:yf's Hard
Source:Memories Off 2nd
Tags:Shirakawa Hotaru original soundtrack OST visual novel KID 5pb yf_bmp troogle
BeatmapID:369146
BeatmapSetID:142953

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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204,368,82477,1,4,0:3:0:0:
204,368,82765,2,0,L|212:272,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,273,83198,1,4,0:3:0:0:
211,273,83342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,200,83631,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,108,83919,2,0,L|288:56,2,47.5,8|4|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,84496,6,0,P|396:192|456:196,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,197,85073,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,104,85362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,104,85506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,104,85650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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220,336,86515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,336,86660,2,0,L|184:328,2,23.75,0|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
260,248,87092,5,4,0:3:0:0:
260,248,87237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,248,87381,2,0,L|268:152,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,108,87958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,108,88246,1,6,0:3:0:0:
272,132,88535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,60,88823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,40,89112,6,0,P|256:104|308:160,1,142.5,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,172,89688,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,172,89977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,248,90265,2,0,L|444:152,1,95,0|6,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
364,268,90842,2,0,L|383:361,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,272,91419,6,0,P|220:276|180:260,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,244,91852,1,4,0:3:0:0:
140,220,91996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,92,92285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,84,92429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,88,92573,2,0,P|303:88|348:73,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
372,60,93006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,56,93150,1,10,0:0:0:0:
428,64,93294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,93438,1,4,0:3:0:0:
452,80,93727,6,0,P|424:144|440:212,1,142.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,324,94881,2,0,P|464:340|420:328,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
422,329,95313,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,329,95458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,360,95746,6,0,P|238:349|194:365,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96323,1,4,0:3:0:0:
116,312,96612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,216,96900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,97188,6,0,P|96:120|24:104,1,142.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,80,97765,2,0,P|40:44|88:48,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,36,98342,6,0,P|268:44|312:24,1,95,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,98919,2,0,P|365:102|393:63,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,176,99496,2,0,P|428:224|408:268,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
504,276,100073,2,0,P|486:321|447:349,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,372,100650,6,0,P|302:343|286:299,1,95,6|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
286,299,101083,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,299,101227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,204,101515,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,204,101660,1,4,0:3:0:0:
300,204,101804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,102092,1,4,0:3:0:0:
152,236,102381,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,236,102525,1,4,0:3:0:0:
152,236,102669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,324,102958,6,0,P|246:249|216:164,1,190,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,103679,1,4,0:3:0:0:
216,164,103823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104112,1,4,0:3:0:0:
172,80,104256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104688,2,0,L|164:32,2,47.5,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,84,105265,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,168,105842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,106419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,106708,1,6,0:3:0:0:
488,156,106996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,252,107285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,348,107573,5,4,0:0:0:0:
348,308,108006,1,4,0:3:0:0:
348,308,108150,2,0,P|304:328|256:324,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
136,248,108727,2,0,P|182:250|225:231,1,95
344,152,109304,2,0,P|297:154|254:135,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
156,32,109881,5,4,0:2:0:0:
320,40,110169,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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392,32,110602,2,0,L|444:40,1,47.5
344,152,111035,5,4,0:3:0:0:
212,208,111323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,208,111467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-10-29T13:41:09+00:00

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

名字跟姓氏應該要空一格跟Romanise Artist一樣，所以那中文字應該是打成"阿保剛"，而不是連在一起。
WidescreenStoryboard suggest all canceled. (Check yf's Hard diff)

[Easy] This rhythm have a bit simple

00:19:046 (3) - Suggest add a note here,make play this part will be better
00:35:200 (4) - 這兒聽起來是音樂節奏比較多的部分，所以可以加多一點節奏，just like this (Don't forget adjust the hitsound) :
SPOILER
00:56:546 (4) - The same as 00:19:046 (3)
01:10:392 (3) - Sounds like this music is so high part there ,why not add a note here?
01:33:469 (4) - Have a downbeat rhythm here,add a note?

[Normal] CS4 feel have bit small in normal diff,try to reduce to 3 or 3.5 here?

00:09:238 (7) - At easy diff has been added this note rhythm here,why not add a note for this diff? (Don't forget adjust the hitsound)
00:39:527 (2) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.
00:41:834 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
00:44:142 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
00:57:123 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 跟上面一樣情況，應該知道加哪裡吧。
01:48:757 (4) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.

[yf's Hard]

00:25:969 (1) - Feel this is unnecesary NC here,it doesn't help to read or play this part better,so remove it and 00:27:123 (3) - add a NC here?
00:29:431 (1) - Seems missed a finish here?
00:35:200 (1) - The same as 00:25:969.
01:15:296 (1) - Need to delete this slider,because at hard diff,the spinner end and object space between 1/1 beat there. (So this place at 1/2 rhythm is unsubmitted)
01:29:142 (7) - Listen to this part music,seems missed a whistle hitsound?
01:44:431 (4,5,6,7) - Feel this note stream have a bit difficult to play at hard diff,maybe can change a 1/2 beat (1 or 2) reverse slider here?
01:46:161 (2) - I suggest follow this piano at this part,move to 01:46:017 this to follow it will be played better (This note place white line feel play a bit weird)
01:46:450 (3) - Why not add a note follow the piano voice?
01:46:594 (4) - The same as 01:46:450 (3).
01:50:921 (4) - Make the head move to 01:51:065 here,because the 01:50:632 (3) - the downbeat you follow the head,I think move it can play better.
01:52:652 (1) - Add a spinner with the same another diff?

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-10-29T18:34:38+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
名字跟姓氏應該要空一格跟Romanise Artist一樣，所以那中文字應該是打成"阿保剛"，而不是連在一起。 K
WidescreenStoryboard suggest all canceled. (Check yf's Hard diff)Changed
[Easy] This rhythm have a bit simple This is basicly becasue of the map was made of the time of old stars and to control difficulty.
00:19:046 (3) - Suggest add a note here,make play this part will be better
00:35:200 (4) - 這兒聽起來是音樂節奏比較多的部分，所以可以加多一點節奏，just like this (Don't forget adjust the hitsound) :
SPOILER
00:56:546 (4) - The same as 00:19:046 (3)
01:10:392 (3) - Sounds like this music is so high part there ,why not add a note here?
01:33:469 (4) - Have a downbeat rhythm here,add a note?
All Fixed..Thx !
[Normal] CS4 feel have bit small in normal diff,try to reduce to 3 or 3.5 here?At that time there is no 3.5... changed to 3.5
00:09:238 (7) - At easy diff has been added this note rhythm here,why not add a note for this diff? (Don't forget adjust the hitsound)
00:39:527 (2) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.
00:41:834 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
00:44:142 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
00:57:123 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 跟上面一樣情況，應該知道加哪裡吧。
01:48:757 (4) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.
All Fixed..Thx !

Thx smallboat

Waiting for yf_bmp's response...

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-10-30T06:35:23+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[yf's Hard]
00:25:969 (1) - Feel this is unnecesary NC here,it doesn't help to read or play this part better,so remove it and 00:27:123 (3) - add a NC here?
00:29:431 (1) - Seems missed a finish here? 这不
00:35:200 (1) - The same as 00:25:969.
01:15:296 (1) - Need to delete this slider,because at hard diff,the spinner end and object space between 1/1 beat there. (So this place at 1/2 rhythm is unsubmitted) 去掉了转盘
01:29:142 (7) - Listen to this part music,seems missed a whistle hitsound?
01:44:431 (4,5,6,7) - Feel this note stream have a bit difficult to play at hard diff,maybe can change a 1/2 beat (1 or 2) reverse slider here?
01:46:161 (2) - I suggest follow this piano at this part,move to 01:46:017 this to follow it will be played better (This note place white line feel play a bit weird) 不了难跟而且后面有个声音不知道是1/8还是1/6组合的不好做
01:46:450 (3) - Why not add a note follow the piano voice?
01:46:594 (4) - The same as 01:46:450 (3). 不了
01:50:921 (4) - Make the head move to 01:51:065 here,because the 01:50:632 (3) - the downbeat you follow the head,I think move it can play better. 没事为了简化难度
01:52:652 (1) - Add a spinner with the same another diff? 没啥必要.....

谢船业, 没回复的就是fixede

@谷谷感觉有挺多音效有延时的我剪了下(没改别的) 音效也更新下吧
http://puu.sh/cvZx8/a9bc6d76a6.zip

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-10-30T17:35:26+00:00

updated

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-10-31T16:50:12+00:00

Overall looks fine.

Bubbled !

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-10-31T16:56:28+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Overall looks fine.

Bubbled !

Thx a lot smallboat
/me hugs

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-11-01T11:43:29+00:00

>.<

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-11-01T11:51:44+00:00

Fix the tags,so reb it.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-11-02T03:18:33+00:00

[General]

Audio-leadin 1000 ms.

[Hard]

00:38:661 - Whistle.
00:46:738 (4) - 背景沒高音建議移除whistle.
00:57:700 (2,2) - Drum clap不舒服啊還有01:02:315 (2) 基本上他們跟00:39:238 (2,2,2) - 一樣怎麼有些有音效有些沒有

[Normal]

01:08:661 (1) - 提議一個更好的排版避免那少許的overlap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195915
01:10:969 (1,2,3) - 滑條頭用whistle跟finish更能突出重音啊那個clap太低音啥都聽不到
01:19:334 (2,3) - 這排列有點醜.. 我說的是這部分 http://puu.sh/czHdq.jpg
01:27:123 (1) - 不要開grid snap阿....尤其EZ NM這些用DS的難度 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195935
01:35:200 - Whistle. 以及01:35:632 - 01:37:507 - 01:37:940 - 01:41:834 -
01:38:661 - 為什麼whistle? 好像沒有高音建議移除 01:44:431 (2) - 01:49:046 - Same
01:42:700 (5,1) - Stack.
01:47:892 - Finish.

[Easy]

00:46:882 - 01:15:007 - Unsnapped green line.
01:10:969 (1,2,3) - Finish+Whistle.
01:15:007 (1,2) - 現在跟前面黏太近放在右下角是夠位置的阿懶調整的話就把(1)跟前面的圓圈stack好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195971
01:35:200 - Whistle (maybe with a lower volume). Same for all these: 01:37:507 -
01:38:661 (2) - Remove whistle. Applies also on 01:44:431 - 01:49:046 -
01:51:931 - Clap.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-11-04T01:54:09+00:00

帮我改阿

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-11-06T11:02:11+00:00

Sorry for being late...really busy recently.

IamKwaN wrote:
[General]
Audio-leadin 1000 ms.
是不是要手动改啊。。
[Hard]
00:38:661 - Whistle. K
00:46:738 (4) - 背景沒高音建議移除whistle. K
00:57:700 (2,2) - Drum clap不舒服啊還有01:02:315 (2) 基本上他們跟00:39:238 (2,2,2) - 一樣怎麼有些有音效有些沒有
唔。。我觉得这里有底鼓前面的好像没底鼓。。
[Normal]
01:08:661 (1) - 提議一個更好的排版避免那少許的overlap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195915 K
01:10:969 (1,2,3) - 滑條頭用whistle跟finish更能突出重音啊那個clap太低音啥都聽不到 K
01:19:334 (2,3) - 這排列有點醜.. 我說的是這部分 http://puu.sh/czHdq.jpg
01:27:123 (1) - 不要開grid snap阿....尤其EZ NM這些用DS的難度 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195935 我顺带就这段整个重排了;w;
01:35:200 - Whistle. 以及01:35:632 - 01:37:507 - 01:37:940 - 01:41:834 -K
01:38:661 - 為什麼whistle? 好像沒有高音建議移除 01:44:431 (2) - 01:49:046 - Same其实只是长白。。fixed
01:42:700 (5,1) - Stack.K
01:47:892 - Finish.K
[Easy]
00:46:882 - 01:15:007 - Unsnapped green line. Fixed
01:10:969 (1,2,3) - Finish+Whistle. K
01:15:007 (1,2) - 現在跟前面黏太近放在右下角是夠位置的阿懶調整的話就把(1)跟前面的圓圈stack好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195971 K
01:35:200 - Whistle (maybe with a lower volume). Same for all these: 01:37:507 - K
01:38:661 (2) - Remove whistle. Applies also on 01:44:431 - 01:49:046 - K
01:51:931 - Clap.K

updated.