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Hello! Coming from No Dap's Form Q.
I really like the song o3o

[Easy]
  • Your easy seems clear, But really, it misses notes at the beggining, as they break all the clap chain.
  1. 00:09:509 (1) - This note seems completely awkward and out of the rythm... Please, change the position, I suggest removing it, and placing a note at 00:08:932 and 00:10:086 . It will feels better than the current awkward note, as it break (constant) , my english is not perfect o3o
  2. 00:15:278 (1) - This note would totally feel better without reversearrow. Instead, place a simple circle. I would eeven see a simple 1/1 slider instead of 2/1.
  3. 00:34:894 (3) - That's about the same problem as upper there. Breaks (constant) again, so just place a note on the two white tick between the note.
  4. 00:44:702 (1,2) - Well, please Swap NC. You should new combo mostly on on downbeats. You might make some exeption such as SV change, but most will land on downbeats. (Not all <.<)
  5. 00:47:586 (1,1,1) - I do not see the use of these NCs. Please remove them.
  6. 00:56:240 - Add a note here? It breaks the (constant)
  7. 01:22:201 (3) - I'm not sure but it miss a whistle here. Leaving blank feel.. ugh
  8. 01:51:913 (1) - This spinner feel random, while the ending is just a tune down of original music, so i'd rather remove it.

    Feedback
    The diff is well made; But you miss some opportunity of doing blankets, that's something that could mmake your map prettier. Overall is good.
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:894 - I feel there should really be a note here. You see, you added one at 00:02:586 (1) and some other place. if you meet similar areas, try to add a not there.
  2. 00:06:336 (4,5) - Little overlap, Try to blanket well? It helps make the map prettier.
  3. 00:30:279 (1,3) - Give us a stack!
  4. 00:32:586 (1,2) - This doesn't feel good at all. I mean 00:36:048 (1,2) those feels good, but not these. Convert them into simple 1/1 sliders, please..
  5. 00:46:432 (1) - Why NC? It serve nothing.
  6. 00:53:932 (3) - That drum hitsound feels awkward, It really prefer a soft one.
  7. 01:23:644 (2,3) - Please move them a bit so that they can avoid overlap. Same little situation for 01:28:259 (2,3)
  8. 01:51:048 (1) - Same as Easy, this spinner look too random. I suggest removing it.


Feedback
Seems rather fine to me, it was my favorite from all.
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:567 (2,3,4) - Please approach, or i would say stack, Because it get a bit too "Insane-like".
  2. 00:25:663 (1) - There is no use for this New Combo.
  3. 01:14:990 (1,1) - Just me, I think this is more Insane-like. I would more say one slider isteand of many reversearrow.
  4. 01:26:528 (8,9) - This feels compeltely overmapped, as we don't really hear them. please use a simple slider...
  5. 01:31:865 (2) - This note also feels overmapped, Consider removing it
  6. 01:43:692 (2) - Again, Overmapped. Consider Removing it.

    Feedback
    A bit too overmapped, i would say, but overall correct. Also avoid unuseful NC. The diff is good though.
Good luck on your map! I hopes i helped!
posted
from my queue~

[hard]
00:09:352 (4) - 这梗感觉特别坑 强烈要求叠到后面滑条上 一般这样的梗都是1/2节奏额 根本看不出来是1/4 00:14:112 (4,5) - 你看你这里1/2的距离 和那里有啥不一样
00:07:477 (4) - 这个不合适 还是换成圆弧的吧 前面那两个看着虽然不爽 但是也能说得通 但这个没道理 用的生硬
00:17:573 (1,2,3) - 这个也是 距离近一些啊 你的1/4和1/2距离完全一样 根本读不出来
00:22:188 (1) - 感觉ctrl+G更好 前后都是反向flow 不过位置稍微要变一点点
00:23:631 (3) - 这个这么强的音不做个大点的跳么 比如把他和00:22:188 (1) - 的头叠起来
00:24:496 (1,2) - 后面两个完全反向 这两个感觉也别同向比较好 比如这样 当然我随便摆的。。只是这个意思额
00:26:804 (3,4) - 建议ctrl+G
00:33:727 (1,2,3) - 你这是hard啊 hrad hard。。。
00:56:804 (1) - 从这里开始复制的啊。。建议排列改一下 看着感觉特别偷懒
01:14:977 (1) - 是从蓝线开始的1/8三连 不是红线起的 和01:26:515 (8,9) - 这个一样的 顺便这种建议放弃1/8节奏 正常弄个三连比较好
01:38:342 (1,2) - 第一个开头没音 第二个和后面的是一组 你这更比较奇怪
01:43:679 (2,3) - 感觉不如换成个滑条额 后面又是一个五连 感觉你这里节奏有点密集 然后玩着也不爽
总结。。这完全就是一个披着hard名字的insane。。
[normal]
00:04:881空的很违和 加个note重叠到滑条脑袋吧
00:05:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一坨挤成一堆了 你用cs4就应该为了能更舒展才对 结果往一堆挤。那还不如用大圈呢
01:29:112 (3) - 凸的方向换一下。。难受死了
01:38:342 (2,3) - 。。。。。。。。。
感觉就是小圈没必要 版面基本就利用了中间那一块 下面就没有note
然后过分blanket。。。其实没必要 注意flow要好 别光blanket额
[easy]
00:12:958 (3,1) - 别遮挡
00:29:112 (2,1,2,1,2) - easy这么放肯定会被喷出翔的。。。
00:36:035 (1) - 这个节奏不对 怎么听都觉得这样才对
00:45:265 (2) - ctrl+G flow比较好
01:49:881 (1) - 这个节奏也是3/4折返额
posted
Hi~! from my queue!

[General]
  • Good.

    [Easy]
    • 00:49:881 (1) - remove NC.
      00:52:188 (1,3) - stack completely
      01:15:842 (3) - move to (198,312) for triangle
      01:15:842 (3,5) - stack completely

      [Normal]
      • 00:06:323 (4,5) - try blanket
        00:30:265 (1,3) - try overlap
        00:36:035 (1,2,1) - better blanket
        00:47:573 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - avoid back and forth pattern. it is bored D:
        01:23:631 (2,3) - remove that overlap lightly
        01:28:246 (2,3) - ^

        [yf's Hard]
        • It is good to me
posted
Cute avatar. I mean good song XD
posted

Winek wrote:

Hello! Coming from No Dap's Form Q.
I really like the song o3o
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:567 (2,3,4) - Please approach, or i would say stack, Because it get a bit too "Insane-like". It is okay now
  2. 00:25:663 (1) - There is no use for this New Combo. Yea fixed
  3. 01:14:990 (1,1) - Just me, I think this is more Insane-like. I would more say one slider isteand of many reversearrow. It is okay now, I think
  4. 01:26:528 (8,9) - This feels compeltely overmapped, as we don't really hear them. please use a simple slider... It is okay now, I think
  5. 01:31:865 (2) - This note also feels overmapped, Consider removing it Here is a drum sound, really
  6. 01:43:692 (2) - Again, Overmapped. Consider Removing it. Here is a drum sound, really

kamisamaaa wrote:

from my queue~

[hard]
00:09:352 (4) - 这梗感觉特别坑 强烈要求叠到后面滑条上 一般这样的梗都是1/2节奏额 根本看不出来是1/4
00:14:112 (4,5) - 你看你这里1/2的距离 和那里有啥不一样
00:07:477 (4) - 这个不合适 还是换成圆弧的吧 前面那两个看着虽然不爽 但是也能说得通 但这个没道理 用的生硬
00:17:573 (1,2,3) - 这个也是 距离近一些啊 你的1/4和1/2距离完全一样 根本读不出来 这里不了
00:22:188 (1) - 感觉ctrl+G更好 前后都是反向flow 不过位置稍微要变一点点 这里不了
00:23:631 (3) - 这个这么强的音不做个大点的跳么 比如把他和00:22:188 (1) - 的头叠起来 稍微改了下
00:24:496 (1,2) - 后面两个完全反向 这两个感觉也别同向比较好 比如这样 当然我随便摆的。。只是这个意思额 这里不了
00:26:804 (3,4) - 建议ctrl+G 这里不了
00:33:727 (1,2,3) - 你这是hard啊 hrad hard。。。弄近了
00:56:804 (1) - 从这里开始复制的啊。。建议排列改一下 看着感觉特别偷懒 没关系
01:14:977 (1) - 是从蓝线开始的1/8三连 不是红线起的 和01:26:515 (8,9) - 这个一样的 顺便这种建议放弃1/8节奏 正常弄个三连比较好先不
01:38:342 (1,2) - 第一个开头没音 第二个和后面的是一组 你这更比较奇怪 这一段是鼓点和旋律兼顾的
01:43:679 (2,3) - 感觉不如换成个滑条额 后面又是一个五连 感觉你这里节奏有点密集 然后玩着也不爽 先不
总结。。这完全就是一个披着hard名字的insane。。BPM低...
谢谢莫得

osu file format v12

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Title:Firefly
TitleUnicode:Firefly
Artist:Takeshi Abo
ArtistUnicode:阿保剛
Creator:Troogle
Version:yf's Hard
Source:Memories Off 2nd
Tags:Shirakawa Hotaru original soundtrack OST visual novel KID 5pb yf_bmp
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60,164,46419,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,276,46852,2,0,L|32:288,3,38,8|2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,320,47573,6,0,P|174:336|211:339,1,76,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,328,48150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,296,48438,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,296,48727,2,0,P|416:280|472:296,2,114,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,252,49881,6,0,L|304:172,1,76,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,136,50458,2,0,L|360:56,1,76,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,60,51035,2,0,P|424:68|468:44,2,114,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,104,52188,2,0,L|216:112,1,76,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,52765,2,0,L|92:160,1,76,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,160,53342,5,2,0:0:0:0:
92,160,53919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,224,54208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,296,54496,6,0,L|68:376,1,76,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,372,55073,2,0,L|152:292,1,76,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,296,55506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,296,55650,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,265,55938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,275,56227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,325,56515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,276,56804,6,0,P|408:196|416:124,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,52,57669,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,112,57958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
415,125,58246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,58535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,64,59112,6,0,P|296:44|220:48,1,152,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,59977,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,120,60265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,60842,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,178,61131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,61419,6,0,P|212:260|136:256,1,152,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,240,62285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,184,62573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,256,62862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,312,63150,5,2,0:0:0:0:
84,312,63438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,312,63727,2,0,P|136:332|200:332,2,114,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,240,64881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,128,65313,2,0,L|32:116,3,38,8|2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,88,66035,6,0,P|180:68|252:72,1,114,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,84,66612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,108,66900,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,108,67188,2,0,P|416:124|472:108,2,114,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,68342,6,0,L|304:232,1,76,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,268,68919,2,0,L|360:348,1,76,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,344,69496,2,0,P|424:336|468:360,2,114,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,70650,6,0,L|216:292,1,76,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,236,71227,2,0,L|92:244,1,76,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,244,71804,5,6,0:0:0:0:
92,244,72381,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,180,72669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,108,72958,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73246,12,0,74688,0:0:0:0:
416,112,74977,6,0,L|422:134,3,23.75,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,144,75265,6,0,L|436:244,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,356,75842,2,0,P|356:304|348:260,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
180,196,76419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,196,76708,2,0,P|164:248|172:292,1,95,6|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,77285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,77573,6,0,P|348:104|320:44,1,142.5,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,28,78150,2,0,P|264:68|284:132,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,176,78727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,176,79015,2,0,P|468:176|512:200,2,95,6|8|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,79881,6,0,P|292:148|276:100,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,148,80458,2,0,P|182:100|192:51,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,180,81035,2,0,P|94:227|104:276,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
8,276,81612,2,0,P|23:321|56:359,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,368,82188,5,2,0:0:0:0:
204,368,82477,1,4,0:3:0:0:
204,368,82765,2,0,L|212:272,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,273,83198,1,4,0:3:0:0:
211,273,83342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,200,83631,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,108,83919,2,0,L|288:56,2,47.5,8|4|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,84496,6,0,P|396:192|456:196,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,197,84929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,197,85073,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,104,85362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,104,85506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,104,85650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,276,85938,2,0,L|360:372,1,95,6|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,336,86515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,336,86660,2,0,L|184:328,2,23.75,0|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
260,248,87092,5,4,0:3:0:0:
260,248,87237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,248,87381,2,0,L|268:152,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,108,87958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,108,88246,1,6,0:3:0:0:
272,132,88535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,60,88823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,40,89112,6,0,P|256:104|308:160,1,142.5,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,172,89688,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,172,89977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,248,90265,2,0,L|444:152,1,95,0|6,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
364,268,90842,2,0,L|383:361,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,272,91419,6,0,P|220:276|180:260,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,244,91852,1,4,0:3:0:0:
140,220,91996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,92,92285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,84,92429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,88,92573,2,0,P|303:88|348:73,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
372,60,93006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,56,93150,1,10,0:0:0:0:
428,64,93294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,93438,1,4,0:3:0:0:
452,80,93727,6,0,P|424:144|440:212,1,142.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,324,94881,2,0,P|464:340|420:328,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
422,329,95313,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,329,95458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,360,95746,6,0,P|238:349|194:365,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96323,1,4,0:3:0:0:
116,312,96612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,216,96900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,97188,6,0,P|96:120|24:104,1,142.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,80,97765,2,0,P|40:44|88:48,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,36,98342,6,0,P|268:44|312:24,1,95,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,98919,2,0,P|365:102|393:63,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,176,99496,2,0,P|428:224|408:268,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
504,276,100073,2,0,P|486:321|447:349,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,372,100650,6,0,P|302:343|286:299,1,95,6|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
286,299,101083,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,299,101227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,204,101515,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,204,101660,1,4,0:3:0:0:
300,204,101804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,102092,1,4,0:3:0:0:
152,236,102381,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,236,102525,1,4,0:3:0:0:
152,236,102669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,324,102958,6,0,P|246:249|216:164,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,103679,1,4,0:3:0:0:
216,164,103823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104112,1,4,0:3:0:0:
172,80,104256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104688,2,0,L|164:32,2,47.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,84,105265,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,168,105842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,106419,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,106708,1,6,0:3:0:0:
488,156,106996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,252,107285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,348,107573,5,4,0:0:0:0:
348,308,108006,1,4,0:3:0:0:
348,308,108150,2,0,P|304:328|256:324,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
136,248,108727,2,0,P|182:250|225:231,1,95
344,152,109304,2,0,P|297:154|254:135,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
156,32,109881,5,4,0:2:0:0:
116,168,110169,1,4,0:3:0:0:
116,168,110313,1,4,0:0:0:0:
254,135,110602,1,4,0:3:0:0:
254,135,110746,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,244,111035,5,4,0:3:0:0:
484,220,111323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,220,111467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,220,111612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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392,112,112044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,112,112188,1,4,0:0:0:0:
posted
谷歌妹妹 说好的来看图这么晚 对不起> <
modding
好清新的曲子~ 挺喜欢的
[General]
  1. 音效里面normal-sliderslide.wav和normal-slidertick.wav中只能选一个无声哦
  2. 曲子没有kiai咩 还是要加一点的吧 不过这么轻柔的曲子也没关系 > < (个人感觉kiai一闪一闪的感觉还挺有节奏感的)
  3. widescreen support还是建议不要开 因为这会占用sb load (有人认为这没有关系 的确没有但是真的没必要> <

[yf's Hard]
  1. 看了一下上面的mod 也有人提出部分地方应该5连击 bpm低的话就更应该增加一些梗乃突出可玩性 不然会很枯燥的哦
  2. 前面做的真好 就是后面00:38:775 - 00:41:083 - 00:43:390 - 00:48:006 - 00:49:304 - 00:50:313 - 00:50:313 - 00:52:621 - 00:54:929 - 00:57:237 - 00:59:544 - 01:01:852 - 01:04:304 - 01:07:765 - 01:08:775 - 01:10:073 - 01:11:083 - 01:12:237 - 这些音都漏掉了 让人感觉玩起来始终打的音不太对的感觉, 01:06:467 - 这里就做的非常好> < 然后后面又都恢复正常了。还是建议这些音再考虑考虑吧,因为是很轻柔的曲子这些没map上的地方还是挺可惜的,而且中间部分太枯燥平常了 可以再难一点。
  3. 00:55:650 (4,5,6) - 这里是很明显的5连或尾巴+4年 三个circle玩起来不太对
  4. 01:12:381 (2,3) - 这里也应该是三连 加上前面那个蓝线音是四连
  5. 01:50:458 - 这个音也建议map上 红线还是挺重要的(不过二连也可以 就是感觉5连更舒服而已> <
  6. 01:52:044 (6) - 这个circle建议去掉 因为这样比较符合结尾的音律 原因是感觉比三连要适合做结尾(强烈建议
  7. 01:14:977 (1) - 这里离转盘还是时间比较短 而且不太好读 (个人观点> < 三连挺好

[Normal]
  1. 00:06:323 (4,5) - 这个overlap不太好看...blanket怎么样呢?
  2. 00:21:035 (1,3) - 00:30:265 (1,3) - 这两个为了整洁可以叠起来normal这一点的间接覆盖应该没有问题的
  3. 00:46:419 (1) - 这个覆盖不太好 新手会挺困扰的
  4. 01:53:631 - 做声音渐小的话这里空出来的部分感觉不能理解呢

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:265 (1) - 这里不太好哦 因为后面24拍子的白线都没有摆 但是第一个note的节奏一般都代表后面的节奏 所以第一个滑条在这里00:00:842 - 放了音会让新手非常困扰的 而且 easy 一般大家都喜欢map24拍而不是13拍哦
  2. 后面挺好啦QvQ

这个曲子mapset好像还要改改 不过音效做的不错呢> < 加油
posted
至于Hard的insane like 其实也没那么夸张 只要bpm低不要太跳就没关系> < imo 当然spacing和位置也很重要
posted
[Easy]
00:03:150 (3,5) - 总感觉overlap在easy里不好..
00:30:842 (2) - 你跟的是乐器所以感觉应该在这里nc 其它地方也一样
01:52:188 - 转盘这里开始啊啊啊
[Normal]
00:06:323 (4,5) - overlap丑
00:36:035 (1,2) - 这里弧度可以大一点blanket起来美观些
00:44:688 (1,2) - 没blanket好
01:19:015 - 感觉drum音效不适合这个曲
01:51:035 - 这里也是可以拉一个1/1滑条然后下一个长白线起转盘
不喜欢CS4的N...
[Hard]
00:09:352 (4,5) - 这么坑不怕被玩家怒黑1分?
00:25:073 (2) - 不ctrl+g?
00:26:804 (3) - nc然后去掉上一个nc感觉对
01:19:015 - 这里drum音效真违和 差评
后面音效感觉下的不好 我不太懂你自己仔细去看看...爱抚神马坡别打我QAQ

美丽
posted

Winek wrote:

Hello! Coming from No Dap's Form Q.
I really like the song o3o

[Easy]
  • Your easy seems clear, But really, it misses notes at the beggining, as they break all the clap chain.
  1. 00:09:509 (1) - This note seems completely awkward and out of the rythm... Please, change the position, I suggest removing it, and placing a note at 00:08:932 and 00:10:086 . It will feels better than the current awkward note, as it break (constant) , my english is not perfect o3o Fixed :3
  2. 00:15:278 (1) - This note would totally feel better without reversearrow. Instead, place a simple circle. I would eeven see a simple 1/1 slider instead of 2/1.Fixed :3
  3. 00:34:894 (3) - That's about the same problem as upper there. Breaks (constant) again, so just place a note on the two white tick between the note. Didn’t quite unterstand...sorry><
  4. 00:44:702 (1,2) - Well, please Swap NC. You should new combo mostly on on downbeats. You might make some exeption such as SV change, but most will land on downbeats. (Not all <.<)Here I put NC mostly because it's a long combo(>5 in easy) Fixed as well
  5. 00:47:586 (1,1,1) - I do not see the use of these NCs. Please remove them.Fixed :3
  6. 00:56:240 - Add a note here? It breaks the (constant)no ><
  7. 01:22:201 (3) - I'm not sure but it miss a whistle here. Leaving blank feel.. ughK
  8. 01:51:913 (1) - This spinner feel random, while the ending is just a tune down of original music, so i'd rather remove it.Personally I like spinner...

    Feedback
    The diff is well made; But you miss some opportunity of doing blankets, that's something that could mmake your map prettier. Overall is good.
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:894 - I feel there should really be a note here. You see, you added one at 00:02:586 (1) and some other place. if you meet similar areas, try to add a not there.K
  2. 00:06:336 (4,5) - Little overlap, Try to blanket well? It helps make the map prettier.re-arranged :3
  3. 00:30:279 (1,3) - Give us a stack!K
  4. 00:32:586 (1,2) - This doesn't feel good at all. I mean 00:36:048 (1,2) those feels good, but not these. Convert them into simple 1/1 sliders, please..I would keep for now><
  5. 00:46:432 (1) - Why NC? It serve nothing.Fixed
  6. 00:53:932 (3) - That drum hitsound feels awkward, It really prefer a soft one.K
  7. 01:23:644 (2,3) - Please move them a bit so that they can avoid overlap. Same little situation for 01:28:259 (2,3)K
  8. 01:51:048 (1) - Same as Easy, this spinner look too random. I suggest removing it. Personally I like spinner...


Feedback
Seems rather fine to me, it was my favorite from all.
Good luck on your map! I hopes i helped!

Thx for mod>.< really helpful !!

kamisamaaa wrote:

from my queue~
[normal]
00:04:881空的很违和 加个note重叠到滑条脑袋吧K
00:05:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一坨挤成一堆了 你用cs4就应该为了能更舒展才对 结果往一堆挤。那还不如用大圈呢修了
01:29:112 (3) - 凸的方向换一下。。难受死了为何要换。。。
01:38:342 (2,3) - 。。。。。。。。。= =?
感觉就是小圈没必要 版面基本就利用了中间那一块 下面就没有note
然后过分blanket。。。其实没必要 注意flow要好 别光blanket额谢谢提醒><不过我觉得flow还好?
[easy]
00:12:958 (3,1) - 别遮挡删了
00:29:112 (2,1,2,1,2) - easy这么放肯定会被喷出翔的。。。看情况
00:36:035 (1) - 这个节奏不对 怎么听都觉得这样才对节奏的确是这样的。。这里只是试图混过去。。
00:45:265 (2) - ctrl+G flow比较好K
01:49:881 (1) - 这个节奏也是3/4折返额试图混的结果。。。

谢谢mod>.<!!

[Raphael] wrote:

Hi~! from my queue!

[Easy]
  • 00:49:881 (1) - remove NC.K
    00:52:188 (1,3) - stack completelyK
    01:15:842 (3) - move to (198,312) for triangleK
    01:15:842 (3,5) - stack completelyK


[Normal]
  • 00:06:323 (4,5) - try blanket rearranged
    00:30:265 (1,3) - try overlap rearranged
    00:36:035 (1,2,1) - better blanket K
    00:47:573 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - avoid back and forth pattern. it is bored D: hmmmm><
    01:23:631 (2,3) - remove that overlap lightly K
    01:28:246 (2,3) - ^ rearranged

Thx for mod~


Sweet Vanilla wrote:

谷歌妹妹 说好的来看图这么晚 对不起> < 没有问题啦~我也懒www
modding
好清新的曲子~ 挺喜欢的
[General]
  1. 音效里面normal-sliderslide.wav和normal-slidertick.wav中只能选一个无声哦
  2. 曲子没有kiai咩 还是要加一点的吧 不过这么轻柔的曲子也没关系 > < (个人感觉kiai一闪一闪的感觉还挺有节奏感的)> <实在找不到地方加kiai
  3. widescreen support还是建议不要开 因为这会占用sb load (有人认为这没有关系 的确没有但是真的没必要> <关掉了

[Normal]
  1. 00:06:323 (4,5) - 这个overlap不太好看...blanket怎么样呢?
    这里重排了
  2. 00:21:035 (1,3) - 00:30:265 (1,3) - 这两个为了整洁可以叠起来normal这一点的间接覆盖应该没有问题的K
  3. 00:46:419 (1) - 这个覆盖不太好 新手会挺困扰的keep><
  4. 01:53:631 - 做声音渐小的话这里空出来的部分感觉不能理解呢我脑残的以为osu会自动渐弱了;w;

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:265 (1) - 这里不太好哦 因为后面24拍子的白线都没有摆 但是第一个note的节奏一般都代表后面的节奏 所以第一个滑条在这里00:00:842 - 放了音会让新手非常困扰的 而且 easy 一般大家都喜欢map24拍而不是13拍哦先留着了。。。
  2. 后面挺好啦QvQ

这个曲子mapset好像还要改改 不过音效做的不错呢> < 加油

谢谢mod>.<~!!

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Easy]
00:03:150 (3,5) - 总感觉overlap在easy里不好..
00:30:842 (2) - 你跟的是乐器所以感觉应该在这里nc 其它地方也一样
01:52:188 - 转盘这里开始啊啊啊 K
[Normal]
00:06:323 (4,5) - overlap丑改惹
00:36:035 (1,2) - 这里弧度可以大一点blanket起来美观些^
00:44:688 (1,2) - 没blanket好^
01:19:015 - 感觉drum音效不适合这个曲 /.\
01:51:035 - 这里也是可以拉一个1/1滑条然后下一个长白线起转盘 K
不喜欢CS4的N...

美丽

谢mod~
posted
sorry for delaying TnT

special thanks to Sweet Vanilla, changed a lot.

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38067
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Artist:Takeshi Abo
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Source:Memories Off 2nd
Tags:Shirakawa Hotaru original soundtrack OST visual novel KID 5pb yf_bmp
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posted
谷歌>w< 說好的mod!!!

[Easy]
00:00:265 (1,2) - 沒包好!
00:17:573 (1) - 刪除NC?
01:31:419 (1) - 這邊的NC移到01:29:112 (5) - 這邊?
01:40:650 (4) - NC?

[Normal]
00:06:323 (5,6) - blanket?
00:30:265 (1,2) - ^

[yf's Hard]
00:30:554 (4,5) - blanket?
01:11:804 (1) - 這邊的NC移到到01:10:650 (5) - 這邊?
01:12:237 - NC?
到處都可見YF的GD QAQ


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祝早日rank :D
posted
周末才能看图 所以请尽情找摸ww
posted
hellow!
mod from my queue ~ :3
kinda late, sorry about that

[Easy]
plays nicely, just some minor suggestions -
  1. 00:07:188 (1) - delete NC?
    and move NC from 00:08:919 (1) - to 00:10:073 (2) -
  2. 00:47:573 (2) - movement feels nicer if this is reversed, you had to change 00:49:881 (3) - then, as well
  3. 00:52:188 (1,3) - stack correctly
  4. 01:26:227 (2) - move to 376|124 for improved movement


[Normal]
  1. increase AR, atm you have a 3/3/7 spread, which doesn't make much sense.. o.o
  2. 00:05:169 (2) - middle anchor too close to 00:05:746 (3) -
  3. 00:06:323 (5) - move to 416|200, DS is slightly off
  4. 00:29:112 (3) - I'd prefer stack with 00:30:265 (1) - here, cause atm 3 is placed 'against' the movement 00:28:246 (2) - indicates
  5. 00:30:554 (2) - last anchor is too far away
  6. 00:32:573 (1,2) - maybe you wanna try some different shapes here?
    that way you add some variety and if the shapes face each other you improve the flow as well
  7. 00:45:265 (2,3) - I'd prefer if you don't stack them but place 3 further up and bend in the other direction
  8. 00:48:727 (3,1) - blanket, middle anchor too close
  9. 00:51:035 (3,1) - ^
  10. 01:02:573 (2,3,4) - ^
  11. 01:07:188 (2) - if you reverse this the movement is improved by a lot, you had to change up the following then, tho
  12. 01:23:631 (2,3) - overlap doesn't look nice, imo, place 3 further down?
  13. 01:32:573 (4,1) - refine blanket
  14. 01:34:881 (3,4) - ^
  15. 01:49:881 (1,2) - ^


[yf's Hard]
can't say much here, cause the diff looks fine. .o.
personally I'd prefer less stacks, but I guess that's your mapping style, so.. xD
  1. 00:24:496 (1,2) - symmetry is a bit off here, rotate 2 by -6° and move to 164|172
  2. 00:27:669 (6) - NC? (or somewhere around here, the combo is just rather long..)
  3. 00:45:265 (3) - why don't you blanket 00:44:400 (5) - here?
  4. hmh, afterwards I had prefered if you hadn't just flipped the previous.. it's kinda boring. >:
    especially since the song is extremely short already..


hmh, that's all I can say, nice mapset! owo
and good luck! *squee*
posted
Hey, mod from queue 8-)

yf's Hard


00:07:477 (4,5) - The stack here is really random, since it does not appear again in the next nor the previous rhythm. In fact, shouldn't this be a jump, like how you did for 00:05:169 (4,5) - , in the previous rhythm? It'd make the pattern look more consistent here.

00:28:535 (9,10,11) - Consider unstacking these from 00:29:112 (1) - , the way it is now may trick players into thinking that 00:28:823 (11,1) - is also spaced 1/4 beats apart, when really it's 1/2 beats apart. So there's a bit of inconsistency with the stacking, in relation to timing here.
00:35:458 (2,3,4,1) - ^ Same suggestion as above.

01:12:670 (4,5) - May sound better as a whole slider instead, imo.

01:23:342 (5,6) - Change to a whole slider, and re-position it along with 01:23:198 (4) - like this:


So that it brings back that similar flow style from 00:49:881 (1,2,3) -

Normal


00:01:419 - 00:06:035 Shouldn't the NC pattern be going like this?
The Combo break should be happening between every stanza (shown as the bit white tick mark).

00:10:650 (2) - NC instead of 00:09:785 (1) - . Again, here is how the NC breaks should appear for 00:09:785 - 00:15:265


I'll leave the rest for you to figure out.

Pretty much the combo break should be occurring in this pattern:


Easy


00:01:419 (2) - NC, because it appears in a new stanza, where the music officially starts. 00:00:265 (1) - is more like a sub-intro.

00:10:650 (2) - NC instead of 00:10:073 (1) - .

Okay, so in this diff (due to the low number of hit objects) you'r NC pattern should go something like this:


00:36:035 (1) - Consider re-angling it a bit. It looks weird how it's tail is closer to the previous note, then the actual head itself.

Neat mapset :)Good luck!
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Free Mod from The Coffee Party Free Mods


(See the requesting post)



[yf's Hard]
* Follow the unapplied mods suggestions (from 10crystalmask01 and so on)
♥ I loved this diff, it feels amazing to me (:

[Normal]
♥ Nice rhythms and hitsounds
00:06:323 (5) - You can make the blanket better by moving the last node by 1 grid left and 1 grid down.
00:12:092 (2) - For same reason, move the 2nd node by 1 grid right, and also snap the 3rd (last) node on grid (x:436 y:56).
00:16:708 (2) - For same reason, snap the 2nd node at the grid (x:416 y:192) and also the 3rd node (x:448 y:212).
♥ 00:19:015 (1) - The blanket here feels good (:
00:23:342 (1,2,3,4) - You can improve this pattern by making it a bit more regular, like → http://puu.sh/8dslw.jpg (note how, after the fix, the approach circle touches all objects at same time; so you can use it for alligning blankets and circle patterns like this). I'll give the code, since the fix is quite complex:
96,136,23342,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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00:25:650 (5) - Try blanketing this around 00:24:208 (3)'s head. Since it depends on the prior mod (that may be applied or not), I can't give the specific coordinates.
00:26:804 (6) - Rotate it by 19 degrees clockwise, with Selection Centre checked (like here → http://puu.sh/8dsBr.jpg&#41;, so it'll blanket better with the next object.
00:30:554 (2) - Move the 2nd dot to y:180, then move the 3rd dot to x:432 y:212, so the blanket will get fixed.
00:30:265 (1,3) - They aren't stacked perfectly. You can delete (3) and re-copy it from (1) or vice-versa.
00:48:727 (3) - Move the middle node by 1 grid left to curve it a bit more.
00:51:035 (3) - For same reason, snap the middle node on x:368.
01:24:496 (3) - Move to x:244 y:244, so you'll fix the overlaps.
01:32:573 (4) - Move the 2nd node by 2 grids down, then move the last node to 3 grids right, for better blanketing.
01:34:881 (3) - Move the middle node to x:292 y:300, for same reason.

[Easy]
* Nothing to point out as mod. I just noticed here the slidertick-sound is the same intensity (volume) as of the hitnormal. It gives a good effect on the rhythms ♥ although it may be pointed by further modding or even by a BAT member.

Well, after some polishing and a few mods more, it can get ranked (:

Att.
posted
Ok fixed many of them. thank you all!!
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38067
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Firefly
TitleUnicode:Firefly
Artist:Takeshi Abo
ArtistUnicode:阿保剛
Creator:Troogle
Version:yf's Hard
Source:Memories Off 2nd
Tags:Shirakawa Hotaru original soundtrack OST visual novel KID 5pb yf_bmp
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BeatmapSetID:142953

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OverallDifficulty:6
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SliderTickRate:2

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posted
hello mod from game PM.

Easy

  1. 00:57:381 (2) - 滑条头有个很轻的鼓声,试试选中滑条头,然后把左上角的sampleset改成drum(觉得太重可以降低音量
  2. 00:59:688 (2,2) - ^
  3. 好像也没什么问题了

Normal

  1. 00:16:419 (1,2,3,4) - 四个头部可以组成正方形
  2. 00:56:804 (1) - 滑条尾同EZ
  3. 01:23:631 (2,3) - 这两个拉开点不要重叠
  4. 01:32:573 (4,1) - 没包好?
  5. 01:34:881 (3,4) - ^,没有平行各种不舒服

yf's Hard

  1. 00:55:794 (7) - 感觉放成两个note比较好,现在这边对于hard有点混乱
  2. 00:57:381 (2) - 这个鼓声不加点drum音效么
  3. 00:59:689 (2,2) - ^
  4. 下面美丽

hope this helps :)
posted
Hi, from modding queue.
Sorry this is very late!

[Easy]
00:08:919 (3) - add clap
00:10:073 (1) - ^
00:47:573 (2) - nc
01:17:573 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:25:650 (5) - nc
00:45:265 (2,3) - to make these curve the same way.
- change (2) the middle point to x444 y269 and the end point to x424 y348
- OR change (3) middle point to x424 y172 and end point to x328 y148
01:23:631 (2) - add clap at 2nd hit of the slider

[yf's Hard]
00:07:477 (4) - add clap at 2nd hit of the slider
00:25:650 (1,3) - nc on (3) instead of (1)
00:33:727 (1,2,3) - only 1/4 time between them so try moving it closer
00:34:881 (1) - remove nc
01:42:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - suggestion for hitsounds, try adding a clap at the end of (1), whistle at (3), and whistle at the end of (8)

That's all. Nice and relaxing song, and great map! Have a star

Best of luck :)
posted
from in-game

General

  1. Add an audio lead-in of 2000 ms manually because the current one is too short.
  2. Would u please change the combo colors? It doesn't match with the color tone of the background :c
  3. The Artist should be 'Abo Takeshi' instead.

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean).

yf's Hard

  1. 為甚麼每次我都覺得yf的hitsounds好大聲 :c 減個10-20%?
  2. 00:30:554 (4) - 這blanket有改善空間
  3. 00:32:573 (4) - 頭有個好響亮的高音,whistle好像不錯
  4. 00:34:881 (1) - 為甚麼要NC!!
  5. 00:44:688 (1) - yf的NC pattern駿馬不理解,在00:45:265 (3)NC才對阿
  6. 00:52:188 (5) - ^ ;w;
  7. 00:56:083 - 這個音漏了我感覺有點空,然後前面的節奏有點錯手指,打得不舒服,CTRL+G 00:55:073 (4,5,6,7)這些就好;00:56:660 - 這個也是漏得好明顯,因為歌曲本身比較靜,漏音讓我打得有點錯愕
  8. 01:10:650 (5) - NC :c
  9. 01:24:929 (2) - This is overmapping!!!
  10. 00:25:650 (1) - 不需要NC,都不是跳;在00:26:804 (3)NC吧
  11. 01:26:515 (8,9) - 我有點糾結,中間藍線是沒音的,有overmap的嫌疑 :c 這樣會不會比較好啊?
  12. 01:27:237 (2) - 其實這個是不是1/6
  13. 01:42:958 (1) - 這clap是故意漏的?
  14. 01:50:602 (4) - ;w;這藍線又是沒音
  15. 不想摸音效 >_> QwQ

Normal

  1. Reduce OD by 1 to make the setting of the whole mapset clean.
  2. 00:06:323 (5) - blanket能改善!
  3. 00:46:419 (3) - 這種stack在N來說真的比較難接受
  4. 01:06:035 (1,2) - blanket please ;w;
  5. 全部blanket check一遍吧,有改善的空間喔
  6. 01:18:727 (1,2,3) - 這三個的排列有點不順眼,試試這樣:
  7. 01:24:496 (3) - overlap了少許,spread開會整潔一點
  8. 音效不摸啦 駿馬好懶怎麼辦 \:D/

Easy粗略看了一遍沒什麼
posted
mostly fixed thanks!
osu file format v12

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Artist:Takeshi Abo
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Source:Memories Off 2nd
Tags:Shirakawa Hotaru original soundtrack OST visual novel KID 5pb yf_bmp troogle
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140,220,91996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,92,92285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,84,92429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,88,92573,2,0,P|303:88|348:73,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
372,60,93006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,64,93294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,93438,1,4,0:3:0:0:
452,80,93727,6,0,P|424:144|440:212,1,142.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,324,94881,2,0,P|464:340|420:328,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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422,329,95458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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116,312,96323,1,4,0:3:0:0:
116,312,96612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,216,96900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,97188,6,0,P|96:120|24:104,1,142.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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220,36,98342,6,0,P|268:44|312:24,1,95,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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420,176,99496,2,0,P|428:224|408:268,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
504,276,100073,2,0,P|486:321|447:349,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,372,100650,6,0,P|302:343|286:299,1,95,6|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
286,299,101083,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,299,101227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,204,101515,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,204,101660,1,4,0:3:0:0:
300,204,101804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,102092,1,4,0:3:0:0:
152,236,102381,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,236,102525,1,4,0:3:0:0:
152,236,102669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,324,102958,6,0,P|246:249|216:164,1,190,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,103679,1,4,0:3:0:0:
216,164,103823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104112,1,4,0:3:0:0:
172,80,104256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104688,2,0,L|164:32,2,47.5,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,84,105265,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,168,105842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,106419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,106708,1,6,0:3:0:0:
488,156,106996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,252,107285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,348,107573,5,4,0:0:0:0:
348,308,108006,1,4,0:3:0:0:
348,308,108150,2,0,P|304:328|256:324,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
136,248,108727,2,0,P|182:250|225:231,1,95
344,152,109304,2,0,P|297:154|254:135,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
156,32,109881,5,4,0:2:0:0:
320,40,110169,1,4,0:3:0:0:
320,40,110313,2,0,L|368:48,1,47.5
392,32,110602,2,0,L|444:40,1,47.5
344,152,111035,5,4,0:3:0:0:
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212,208,111467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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