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livetune adding Yuuki Ozaki(from Galileo Galilei) - FLAT TV

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No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年7月9日 星期三 at 17:22:17

Artist: livetune adding Yuuki Ozaki(from Galileo Galilei)
Title: FLAT TV size edit.
Source: Hamatora THE ANIMATION
Tags: ハマトラ kz ガリレオ ガリレイ 尾崎雄貴 mintong89 KantoKun
BPM: 180
Filesize: 14016kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.7 stars, 281 notes)
  2. Easy (1.7 stars, 100 notes)
  3. Insane (4.47 stars, 406 notes)
  4. Kanto's Insane (4.08 stars, 350 notes)
  5. mint's Normal (2.1 stars, 145 notes)
Download: livetune adding Yuuki Ozaki(from Galileo Galilei) - FLAT TV size edit.
Download: livetune adding Yuuki Ozaki(from Galileo Galilei) - FLAT TV size edit. (no video)
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#62

kz*3
Normal - Mintong
Insane - No_Gu / Kantokun
Last edited by No_Gu , edited 13 times in total.
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
-.-
Last edited by Azure , edited 3 times in total.
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
来上元点赞
Hatori-kun
84 posts
Joined December 2012
Hatori-kun
Kz + Gu = <3

Have a Star, good luck ;D
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Hatori-kun wrote:

Kz + Gu = <3

Have a Star, good luck ;D
ww thank you
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Can i make a Normal diff?
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Can i make a Normal diff?
I'd finish this myself.sorry
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
livetune + Galileo Galilei???
这组合好意外！
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Mintong wrote:

livetune + Galileo Galilei???
这组合好意外！
kz最近各种人都抓来用。。
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Kazuya
Hello. Mod 4 mod (Sorry. My english = 0)

[Easy]

AR: +1 (4) ? and only 2 ideas

00:42:877 (1) - 01:16:210 (1) - Remove spinners, and map these parts!
00:48:210 (1) - remove slider ?
------------------------
00:46:877 - Start spinner here, and end point: 00:48:210 ?
00:48:544 (1) - put repeat slider here ?

^^ --> Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7iw7H.jpg
-------------------------------------------------------

[Normal]
Change Overall diff: 4 or 5?

00:21:544 (1,2,3,4) - replace: two slider? timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7iwbB.jpg
00:32:210 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ?
00:42:877 (1) - remove spin, map these parts?
-------------------------
00:46:877 spinner start, and end point: 00:48:210 ?
00:48:210 (1) - remove slider and
put repeat slider here: 00:48:544
Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7iw7H.jpg
-------------------------
01:10:377 (7) - remove mini slider? and put circles here: 01:10:544 (7) - 01:10:710 (8) - ?
01:16:210 (1) - remove spin, map these parts

[Insane]
HP & Overall: 7 ?

00:42:210 (5,6,7,8) - remove mini sliders and replace 2 slider ? timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7iwuF.jpg
00:44:877 (3,4) - remove cirles and put circle here: 00:45:377 (5) - and put slider here: 00:44:710 (3) - timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7iwz2.jpg
00:46:710 (1) - remove slider, and put spinner here! Siinner start: 00:46:710 & end point : 00:48:210.
00:48:210 (1) - Remove circle

[Hard]
00:46:710 (1) - remove slider, replace one spinner (look at insane, normal, easy diff)
------------------------------------------
00:57:210 (1) - remove repeat and slider start here: 00:57:544 (1) -
put circles here: 00:57:210 (4) - 00:57:377 (5) -
timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7ix14.jpg
------------------------------------
01:02:544 (1) - remove repeat and slider start here: 01:02:877
put slider here: 01:02:544 (4) - slider end: 01:02:710
timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7ix5b.jpg
-----------------------------------------
01:07:877 (5) - remove slider
put circles here: 01:07:877 (5) - 01:08:044 (6) -
01:08:377 (1) - remove circle 01:08:544 (2) - remove slider
01:08:210 (7) - put slider here. end point: 01:08:377
01:08:544 (8) - put slider here. end point: 01:08:710
timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7ix9H.jpg
-------------------------------------------

Good luck.
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
M4M well, i hope i'll be useful :I?

[General]
make easy normal (1:27) have the same drain time as hard and insane (1:28)?

[Hard]
i cant really hear the hitsounds either :/ bleh
thats a pretty hard hard you may want to consider lowering hp drain a bit cuz i realized ive lost a lot of hp on you longer sliders especially this one 00:46:710 (1) - lost almost a quarter. and this is already pretty hard compared to some other hard difficulties
anyway, useless comments aside, lets get to the mod

00:15:710 (4,1) - stack :o?
00:28:044 (1,1) - ^ (to do this, relocate (4) a bit)
00:21:210 (1) - flows better imo if you curve it the other way
00:25:377 (1) - just looks more symmetrical if you moved it 1 grid to the left
00:46:710 (1,1) - blanket could be better :/, maybe if you used grid 4, or turned off grid snap
00:51:877 (1,2) - same here, blanket is considerably off
00:54:127 (4,5) - ^ meh i dun wana get too nazi but yah :|
01:02:127 (3,2) - umm, stack?
and 01:02:127 (3,1) - blanket? if you dont want to break flow you can make something like this;
SPOILER
01:15:877 (7) - this is just kinda confusing since the repeat leads away from the next slider.
01:17:877 (2,3) - the rest of these kind of patterns you have are not stacked, but this one is. any particular reason for that?
01:25:544 (1,2,3) - more consistent spacing?

-stuff u can probably ignore-
00:06:044 (2) - i have no idea but i randomly added a clap here and it sounded really good owo
00:08:710 (2) - ^
00:11:377 (2) - ^
00:14:044 (2) - ^
00:06:377 (5,1,2) - why is this distance snapped differently from the rest? ( 00:05:544 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
00:09:044 (5,1) - DS here as well actually, you can probably ignore.


[Insane]
00:04:210 (1,5) - why not stack owo?
00:34:377 (6,5) - ^
01:00:044 (5,1) - ^
00:15:877 (7) - a bit hard to read, people ma mistake that for a circle o-o, maybe increase SV slightly here
00:46:710 (1) - ehh ugly and maybe hard to read why not just use a spinner
00:53:377 (1) - since u made a curve already, why not blanket 00:53:877 (2) with it?
01:03:877 (6) - suggestion: 352|96
01:19:210 (2) - ctrl g =D?

-nazi stuff-
00:09:377 (1,2) - fix blanket a bit :o use grid level 4 *-*
00:40:044 (6,1) - ^
00:56:044 (1,2) - ^
00:57:544 (1,2) - ^
01:10:877 (1,4) - ^
01:12:044 (1,2) - ^ sry i have to point so many of these out ._. they just bothered me
00:29:544 (1,4) - not parallel


[Mint's Normal]
00:00:211 (1,3) - aururgggg these blankets bother me sorry i had to point this out
00:28:710 (4,3) - stack better
00:48:210 (1) - this rhythm seems more appropriate :| (1) is at 00:48:544
SPOILER


[Easy]
._. i got nothing, idk how to mod symmetry style maps


well i hope this helped... :o
Neta
536 posts
Joined May 2011
Neta
Hi~ from your M4M Queue

My mod is all suggestion

[general]
  1. Don't check 'Widescreen Support' http://puu.sh/7jE36.png

[Easy]
  1. Check AI mod http://puu.sh/7jDD4.png
  2. 01:16:210 (1) - Make this slider to 01:18:544 Beginners will confused when the notes come out until spinning
  3. 01:25:544 (3) - http://puu.sh/7jDH5.jpg This will be better

[Normal]
  1. 00:02:210 (3) - http://puu.sh/7jDN4.jpg make like this?
  2. 00:18:877 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make pentagon more clearly will be good
  3. 00:21:544 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend this one http://puu.sh/7jDRd.jpg
  4. 00:32:210 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Insane]
  1. 00:24:877 (4) - i think straight one is better
  2. 00:48:210 (1) - http://puu.sh/7jE5C.jpg this is right beat maybe

[Hard]
  1. 00:37:544 (1,2,3) - ALL NC? ( Slider's fast is diffrent )
  2. 00:40:210 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:40:732 (2) - Why is this diffrent? (http://puu.sh/7jEcu.jpg, http://puu.sh/7jEcJ.jpg) This should be move to 00:40:710 if this is mistake

Nice map ~ GL :)
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
thx for mods \w/
KanaRin
1,886 posts
Joined April 2010
KanaRin
加油
KantoKun
1,114 posts
Joined December 2011
KantoKun
fix some form Fumika suggest~

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: FLAT.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 48210
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:FLAT (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:FLAT (TV Size)
Artist:livetune adding Yuuki Ozaki(from Galileo Galilei)
ArtistUnicode:livetune adding Yuuki Ozaki(from Galileo Galilei)
Creator:No_Gu
Version:Kanto's Insane
Source:Hamatora THE ANIMATION
Tags:ハマトラ kz ガリレオ ガリレイ 尾崎雄贵 mintong89
BeatmapID:380932
BeatmapSetID:142915

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.69999990463257
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,479,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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LyudSilver
18 posts
Joined April 2013
LyudSilver
Wow!, Great work :D
I love it *-*
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
[Hard]

  1. 00:40:732 (2) - unsnapped.

Gonna full mod later.
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
livetune and galileo galilei is an awesome collaboration

best of luck
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
great insanes 8-)
twogrup
6 posts
Joined March 2014
twogrup
Hope this map become better in near future, i really like this map (y) and of course , be Ranked 8-)
Flower
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Joined August 2011
Flower
123456788

[Insane]
00:05:044 (7) - 比较建议0.75，既然这里开始声音大起来了，就给一点提示
00:20:794 (3,4) - 感觉在靠近一点比较好读的样子
00:34:044 (3,4,5) - 右移一小格，auto stack导致blanket错位

[Kantokun]
00:40:210 (1,2,1,2) - this... um, I'm not sure, but what if exchange each 1 and 2, and make its rhythm same as 00:37:544 (1,2,1,2) - ?
00:46:710 (1) - I'm not sure either, but I think it's better to make the path more clear to avoid nitpicks
00:52:794 (3) - I don't know, but is it better to be put at 00:52:877 - ? or be put at x:492, y:132? or this rhythm?
SPOILER
01:02:210 - add note? clear beat here
01:24:210 (2,3,4) - space larger to avoid misreading? I'm not sure

[Hard]
略坑，打了几遍都没有fc，这里建议一下stack leniency改成6方便读图
00:32:710 (2) - nazi
SPOILER
01:14:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 坑
01:17:877 (2,3) - 游戏里显示重合，所以建议手动堆叠
01:23:210 (2,3,4,5) - 这个貌似是全图唯一一个这样的……01:23:460 (3) - 放到01:23:544 - 也无不可

[mintbaka]
00:40:210 (1,2) - blanket有些瑕疵
01:07:710 (5) - 移动到x:188 y:376，以避免重叠。以及调整之后的note

[Easy]
Cool.

Good luck then :3/~
No_Gu
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Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Flower wrote:

123456788

[Insane]
00:05:044 (7) - 比较建议0.75，既然这里开始声音大起来了，就给一点提示0.75有点长 啊
00:20:794 (3,4) - 感觉在靠近一点比较好读的样子我看看改下好了
00:34:044 (3,4,5) - 右移一小格，auto stack导致blanket错位k

[Hard]
略坑，打了几遍都没有fc，这里建议一下stack leniency改成6方便读图我还是习惯不stack啊
00:32:710 (2) - nazi一般不用这样的。。感觉有点突兀
01:14:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 坑改了下
01:17:877 (2,3) - 游戏里显示重合，所以建议手动堆叠我倒是喜欢重合。。再说吧
01:23:210 (2,3,4,5) - 这个貌似是全图唯一一个这样的……01:23:460 (3) - 放到01:23:544 - 也无不可跟鼓节奏不能改啊。。为了不难才填的那边

Good luck then :3/~
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thx
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
yoooooooo

[General]
I think the right source is Hamatora: The Animation (not sure about the colon, but for sure, hamatora is not in all caps D:)

I know you have Mintong89 in tags, but you should add his new name, Mintong, in tags also. When i searched up "Mintong" in the pending maps, this map didn't come up :<

[Insane]

Might be better to add a spinner somewhere for score variation even though this diff is already pretty difficult :P Somewhere around 00:46:710 (1) ?
00:20:210 (1,2,3) - might be confusing to read at first because the distance is the same even though the rhythm is different D: maybe unstack 00:20:794 (3,4) so that the distance between (2) and (3) is smaller, but there's still a jump?
00:22:544 (7,1) - maybe delete (1) and and extend (7) so it's a 1/1 slider for consistency with 00:21:544 (1) ?
00:22:877 (1,2) - since the stronger beat is on the red tick, how about this rhythm? (maybe you can apply the above suggestion too! :P)
SPOILER
(the timeline starts at 00:22:544 (7) )
00:33:210 (5,1) - consider deleting (1) and extending (5) so it's a 1/1 slider to be similar to 00:32:210 (1) ?
00:35:877 (5,6) - maybe ctrl+G these two, i think having 5 on top would flow better from 00:35:544 (4) :D
00:42:877 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just an idea for the pattern, since this section is building up to the kiai, maybe have 00:42:877 (1,2,3,4) be stacked in the center first, then have 00:44:210 (1,2,3,4) spread around the map, so it builds up to the exciting part :D
00:53:877 (2) - maybe adjust this so it's blanketed by 00:53:377 (1) ?
SPOILER
00:56:877 (5,6) - listening carefully to the music, it seems that there's a stream in the background :P imo, it'd be nice if you could map it
01:28:044 (1) - might seem nazi, but maybe you could move this up so it blankets 01:27:544 (3) ?

[Kantokun's Insane]

Yo you need to add your own name to tags
really nice use of drums & normal samples ^___^

00:00:211 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Personally, I'd switch each circle-slider combo so that the slider comes first and then the circle in order to better match the sound in the background D: (not sure how to describe the sound haha)
00:02:877 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:29:544 (1) - i think it would match the vocals better to have some sort of jump here
00:34:294 (4) - sorry i can't hear any supporting beat in the background for this note, and the singing is only in 1/2 rhythm
00:46:710 (1) - this is like the exact same slider No_Gu did in his diff HAHAHAH
00:54:544 (6) - just a suggestion, why not stack the end of this slider on the end of 00:53:877 (3) for a cleaner look? It will make the jump wider though:
SPOILER
01:01:210 (5) - hmm this plays a bit awkwardly for me atm, how about this?
SPOILER
... another suggestion you could do is switch the direction of 01:01:377 (1,2) and move 01:01:877 (3,4) so it flows better, example:
SPOILER
01:06:544 (5) - consider switching these on timeline to better fit vocals
01:13:377 - add a circle maybe :O ?
01:19:960 (5) - i don't really hear anything in the music supporting this note either :((

[Hard]

00:37:544 (1,2,3) - maybe NC to signal SV change? Also, i find it interesting you lowered SV here, but in the insane you raised the SV in this section :P
00:40:210 (1,2,3) - NC too?
01:18:877 (1) - maybe normal sampleset on slider head to emphasize the beat
01:20:044 (1) - ^
01:21:210 (1) - normal sampleset on repeat, and other similar sections with a heavy beat
01:26:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is more confusing than in Insane :((( As this is only a Hard diff, you should probably spread this out more

[mint's Normal]

Your OD is really low compared to the rest of your settings & compared to the other diffs, perhaps raise it by 2-3 ticks

00:09:377 (3) - maybe normal sampleset on head, but keep additions soft so your hit-whistle is soft
00:14:044 (2) - whistle on head for consistency with 00:06:710 (3) -
00:38:877 (2) - hmm this slider sounds strange because there's actually nothing going on in the music until 00:39:210 @_@ try this?
SPOILER
00:41:544 (2) - same problem here, maybe get rid of the slider and put a circle at 00:41:877 ?
00:49:544 (2) - since this is the start of the kiai & climax part, NC here?
01:19:544 (1,2,3,4) - how about adjusting the rhythm to emphasize the sound in the bg?
SPOILER

[Easy]

balance difficulty settings & spread by raising OD by 1?
were your easies always symmetrical? o_o

00:00:211 (1) - whistle on slider end?
00:02:877 (1) - ^
00:30:544 (2) - woah this is really far compared to the overall distance snap of all your notes D:
00:31:877 (1) - i think it would match the singing better if this was moved to 00:32:210 -
01:10:544 (5) - maybe move the red anchor point to the slider tick (01:10:877), would make more sense imo because that's when new stanza/measure begins, the next circle could be adjusted, if you do this, make sure you adjust on the other side for symmetry!!
SPOILER

that is all, goodluck!! :D
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