AW-sama wrote:

Hello! From #modreqs (Sorry. My english is bad!)

[Easy]
00:05:841 (1) - 00:14:730 (1) - 01:17:174 (1) - Map parts here (remove spinners)
00:09:841 (2) - Remove circle, and remove new combo & move 00:08:952 (1) - slider the timeline! e.g.: http://puu.sh/75h7B.jpg
00:08:952 - put a circle here with new combo
00:44:730 (1) - Spinner end here: 00:46:730
Fixed!
[Normal]

00:05:619 (1,2,3) - Remove all object, and remap! e.g.: http://puu.sh/75hsl.jpg timeline: http://puu.sh/75hu7.jpg
00:19:841 (2) - slider end (red tick to blue tick)! e.g.: (timeline) http://puu.sh/75hBk.jpg
00:34:952 (3) - ^ e.g.: http://puu.sh/75hE1.jpg
01:01:841 (3) - ^ blue tick is bad! pls move slider end to white tick e.g.: http://puu.sh/75hLz.jpg
01:04:063 (4) - ^ too short slider! End point to red tick!
01:16:952 (1) - map parts here! Remove spinner!
01:23:063 (4) - omg. Remap this part! :O It's bad.Put a slider here: start point: 01:23:063 (4) - end point: 01:23:063 (4) - | put a slider here: start: 01:23:619 (5) - end: 01:23:619 (5) - put a circle here: 01:24:063 (6) -
Fixed!
[hard]
00:21:619 (3) - slider end the white tick! timeline: http://puu.sh/75i6H.jpg
00:23:396 (5) - move slider the white tick, (slider end point: 00:23:619) and put a circles here: 00:23:396, 00:23:507. Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/75ihq.jpg
00:25:063 (4) - Move slider the red tick, and enpoint the next red tick. timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/75iqj.jpg
00:39:174 (7) - slider end point to white tick!
00:39:730 (1) - remove repeat slider. o_o Replace simple slider: start: 00:39:619 end: 00:39:619
00:40:285 (9) - move slider the red tick! put a circle here: 00:40:952
00:41:174 (1) - Move slider the red tick and resize slider! (start point: 00:41:174 end point: 00:41:174)
00:42:730 (1) - remove slider! Put a circle here: 00:42:730. put a slider here: start: 00:42:952 end point: 00:42:952
00:52:952 (4) - Move slider the white tick! (start: 00:52:952 end: 00:52:952)
00:54:730 (4) - remove repeat, and resize slider! : end point: 00:54:730 and put a circle here: 00:55:396
01:00:063 (5) - move slider thewhite tick! (start: 01:00:063 end: 01:00:063)
Fixed!
[Insane]

00:22:285 (4) - remove circle, and resize slider: 00:21:619 = endpoint: 00:21:619
00:29:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - unnecessary triplets! Remove circles: 00:29:507 (2,3) - and 00:29:952 (5,6) -
00:35:952 (7) - Slider start the red tick and resize slider! start: 00:35:841 endpoint: 00:35:841
00:44:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - unnecessary streams! replace the spinner here! start: 00:44:730 - end: 00:46:730 -
00:48:063 (1,2,3) - unnecessary triplets: 00:48:063 (1,2,3) - remove circles: 00:48:174 (2,3) -
00:50:285 (1,2,3) - ^ remove circles 00:50:285 (1,2,3,4) - 00:50:952 (6) - , and put a 1x repeat slider: start: 00:50:285 end point: 00:50:285 timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/75jIV.jpg
00:55:063 (4) - remove finish
01:01:841 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Unnecessary streams. Remap!
01:08:952 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - unnecessary triplets. Remove circles and put a sliders here: start: 01:08:952 end point: 01:08:952. put a circle here: 01:09:619
Fixed! Some to your mod and some on my own accord. I kept the streams and most of the triplets because I like them, and I feel it adds some "flare" to the map. Thanks for the mod!!!!
Good luck!

Raisa12 wrote:

Hello, I here by random mod o.o

test put the offset at 500 Tried it out, but I think 508 is a tad better.

1er kiai time comienza en 00:48:507 y termina 01:02:285
2do kiai time comienza en 01:02:730 y termina 01:16:952

[Easy]
00:13:841 (2) - slider not think this should end in 00:14:285 ?
00:38:730 (3) - distance error
01:25:611 (1) - this spinner must be completed 01:27:611
Fixed!
[Normal]
00:02:952 (5) - remove this slider whistle
00:05:619 - if you want you can try this http://puu.sh/75lhh.jpg
00:19:841 (2) - I think this slider should end here 00:20:507 delete the note there
00:11:841 (3) - please do not break you snap Distance in diff Normal and Easy
00:30:285 (3) - ^
01:15:841 (3) - ^
01:16:063 (4) - ^
01:16:396 (5) - ^
01:16:730 (6) - ^
01:25:396 (1) - add whistle to the spinner
Fixed!
[Hard]
00:21:619 (3) - expand this slider to 00:22:285
00:22:507 - try this ?

00:38:507 - try this ?

I like the changes you suggested.
[Insane]
00:16:285 (3) - remove finish
00:30:730 (9) - New Combo
00:53:296 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/75nXe.jpg
Fixed!


good luck ~

Some of what you said was fixed by the previous mod. Thanks for everything!

Quack wrote:

Insane done by me.
Hard done by myself.
Normal done by I.
Easy done by Quack aka me.

No Dap wrote:

Quack wrote:

Insane done by me.
Hard done by myself.
Normal done by I.
Easy done by Quack aka me.

lel

pinataman wrote:

Hi there! Random mod from mod request.

Easy:

00:40:507 (6) – a little awkward flow
00:43:174 (2) – there is no rhythmical justification for this slider to start here
01:17:174 (1) - I don't like a slider so close to another slider that ends the song. It's like a spin, wait forever, then spin again. Would rather see you mapping the harmony.

All fixed!

Normal:

00:16:063 - felt weird not having a note here, might be because of the preceding slider
00:41:841 (3) – needs to repeat one more time to keep with the music
00:49:396 (3) – part of this slider is off the screen, which may or may not be a problem
01:04:063 (4) – not snapped
01:16:063 (4,5) – was hard to read because the polarity changes (the 5 is on a blue tick, see t/55282 for more). To fix I would either do what you did earlier and in your other maps and space it out as opposed to stack it (which helps us read the music better), or delete 5 and make a slider from 4 to where 5 was.

Took a peek at that polarity video, it was helpful. The slider felt like a good fix.

Hard:

00:14:730 (3) – was not expecting a second repeat of the slider the first time through, especially since the beat stops a half-beat earlier
01:22:285 (3) - ^
00:42:063 (4) – don't like the overlapping
00:51:841 (1) - ^
01:06:952 (3) - ^ would rather see it blanketed
01:08:063 (2,3) - would like to see these blanketed, perhaps by moving (3) to where 01:07:174 (4) – ends?

Most of these were just derps on my part. The new blankets look good!

Insane:

Your sliders flow very well, but I feel like they could be spiced up just a little because it feels a little too repetitive the way it curves. Take a look at the Cendrillion difficulty in this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/72834. I feel like the sliders here look amazing and they also make the map flow seemingly effortlessly. For instance, the way Smoothie blankets the sliders by using a linear point on the long slider is just mesmerizing: http://puu.sh/7djtJ.jpg. Just thought I'd mention these techniques for the future, the overall simplicity of the sliders here is actually quite good. I have played that Cendrillon map before and it is quite good. I'll probably branch out my techniques as I am still a novice at mapping.

Seemed sparse on hitsounds. I would add some whistles on some of the slider heads at the beginning, or on some of the streams, though I suck at hitsounding XD Me too.

00:03:174 (9) – looks a little out of line with the previous note, I like it at x=296, y = 220
00:25:841 (1) – move in line with the previous slider, it looks crooked since you're not curving that way
00:38:396 (6) – would like to see this with the same curvature as the notes above it
00:38:507 (6,7) – I don't like how it runs out of space. Perhaps trying a linear point at this slider would be better, like so (though it might not fit the music): http://puu.sh/7dfnn.jpg Fixed the spacing before it so that it doesn't run out. Also ignored the distance snap for 7 to create a little drop down jump.
01:02:285 (10) – Mostly curiosity, but why the break in the kiai time? Maybe the stream builds up into the next kiai. I don't know haha.


Good job, I like it! A lot of good flows going on with a really good song. Would love to see this ranked.

Clyine wrote:

RANDOM MOD

GENERAL
Offset 504~
Tick rate 1 for all difficulties. <<<<< This is important.

Insane
00:16:507 (1,2) - Remove the note after the slider, make the slider end at the white tick.
00:18:063 (7,8) - End Slider at red tick. Add note on blue tick.

00:19:841 (5,1) - Change this to maybe this.

00:25:174 (5) - Change to this to be consistent with previous pattern.

00:28:730 (4) - Change this to the following pattern. Then make sure from 00:29:174 (5,1), there's a jump. Maybe around 2.5 DS.

00:35:841 (7) - End slider on white tick.
00:44:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I would suggest using a spinner here. Since a stream without any audio backing it up is quite annoying. And it doesn't really "flare" up the map much.
01:00:063 (6) - Change this to a 1/2 slider
01:16:063 (5,1,2,3,4) - Change to this

01:16:952 (4) - Add a note after the slider on the white tick
01:18:730 (4) - Add a note after the slider on the white tick
01:20:507 (3) - Add a note after the slider on the white tick
01:25:063 (2) - Make this slider go upwards from the previous note with a DS of 1.00
Overall needs more work on the patterns i guess.

I don't play alot of hards and below so i can't help much but i will try

Hard
00:35:841 (6,7) - Remove 6. and start slider on red tick. The end of the slider stays at white.
00:39:619 (8,1,2,3) - Add another note at the white tick.
00:43:619 (3) - Change to this.

01:13:396 (3) - End this slider on a white tick
01:16:396 (6,1) - Join the note to the repeating slider.
01:18:730 (3) - End this on a white tick
01:20:507 (3) - End this on a white tick
Overall this is better than insane imo.

Normal
00:43:619 (3) - i think this should be changed to 5 stacked notes. Changed to something similar. 2 stacked notes are better than 5 in a normal imo.
01:04:063 (4) - Change to this

01:16:063 (4) - End this on a white tick
01:20:507 (1) - End this on a white tick

Easy
00:41:396 (1) - Start this on the red tick

Sorry i can't help with hitsounding.
Yeap. Thats all good luck!!!

Mao wrote:

Random mod from #modreqs sicne I was bored :3

General

1. Disable "Widescreen Support" and "Letterbox in Breaks"
2. Resize your Background since the recommended size is 1024x768

Insane

1. 00:05:837 (2) - Blanket with the tail of 00:04:948 (6) -
2. 00:11:170 (4,5) - Blanket between 4's tail and 5 would be cool. Just drag the last anchor point in 4 a little bit left and down to create a blanket but try to make it perfect!
3. 00:13:615 (4) - Imo, this would be better timelinewise
   
   Screenshot

   
4. 00:16:059 (1,2,3,1) - Let the triplet overlap with the slidertrack or just simply don't let them touch. You could try to rotate the slider for both cases.
5. 00:17:837 (5,6) - Blnaket these two
   
   Screenshot

   
6. 00:19:615 (4,5) - Keep the same distance here as you did with all the other circles. (1,36) It would also look better if the square would have sides with the same lenght...
7. 00:20:948 (2,3,4) - Move 3 a bit up and blanket 4 with 2
   
   Screenshot

   
8. 00:26:726 (4,5) - Do a blanket between these two
9. 00:31:837 (4) - Make this follow the slider's track
   
   Screenshot

   
10. 00:35:392 (5,6,7) - Keep the distances constant here. Just vary them where it fits!
11. 00:38:503 (6,7) - Blue tick jump doesn't play very well and doesn't even fit the rest of the map. Consider snapping it.
12. 00:43:392 (3,4,5) - A real traingle would be cool here.
    
    Screenshot

    
13. 00:49:392 (3) - Blnaket this with 1's End
    
    Screenshot

    
    00:54:726 (4) - Rhythm would be better like this:
    
    Screenshot

    
14. 01:01:837 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Use the convert slider to stream tool for Streams
15. 01:06:059 (1,2) - Blanket these two
16. 01:11:170 (4,5,6) - 4 touches the track of 6 so awkward, also try to make a better triangles with the same distances between the circles.
    
    Check your blankets. This diff also needs more whistles and claps! Try to add them in a constant pattern fitting the music. Also your NC placement seems a bit messed up but probably I just don't understand your pattern~

Hard

1. 00:04:059 (3,4,5) - Blanket 4 and 5 with 3
2. 00:17:170 (2,3,4,5) - Why is distance snap higher than at 00:18:948 (1,2,3,4) - ? There's no sign in the songs that tells you to do this.
3. 00:35:837 (6) - Reduce to 3 anchor points, the curve isn't good with 4
   
   Screenshot

   
4. 01:04:503 (6) - Consider changing rhythm like:
   
   Screenshot

   
   
   Hitsounding is missing, add some claps and whistles where they fit. NC problems are there too.

Easy & Normal

• 
  Normal

1. 00:04:948 (4) - Distances too high. Your normal DS is 0,80 but here it is over 0,90
2. 00:09:392 (2) - ^
3. 00:28:726 (4) - Such big distances variation.
   
   Easy
4. 00:09:392 (2) - Distances x.x
   
   I'm not going to mod these, just giving you an advice. Always use ONE Distance Snap in your Normal and Easy diffs. Never vary with it. A variation of 0,03 from your standrad distance snap is okay but NOT MORE. Consider remapping these difficulties since your distances are kinda messed up. This may sound harsh but you really have to use a constant distance snap at these easy diffs for better readability!
   Also in Easy 00:14:726 (1) - you've placed a spinner here and right after it a slider. Don't do that since newbies are going to be confused. Talking of myself when I was a newbie or listening to other newbies you alway see how they fail hitting something after a spinner. Consider leaving one tact unmapped!
   Also consider using more long slider's espacially in easy, filling the whole tact with a repeat.

The other diffs are kinda unstructured to me, try to keep a structure. Snap some objects, rearrange there order on the timeline. Create some fancy patterns fixing the music and don't vary DS where it doesn't fit!
Good luck on your mapset and I hope my mod is helpful

Knotts wrote:

I don't really mod things from #modreq but... ClariS.

[General]
Overall I think you should unrestrict yourself from using DS constantly, especially on your insane. If you need help with that PM me ingame.

[Insane]

1. 00:04:503 (4) - there isn't really any bgm/vocal on this tick. My suggested fix: http://puu.sh/7nAFm.jpg
2. 00:05:615 (1,2) - Looks squished with the previous slider. Try this http://puu.sh/7nAVw.jpg
3. 00:11:170 (4) - Finish here (I'm still pretty new to hitsounding so bear with me).
4. 00:12:957 (3) - ^
5. 00:26:948 (5) - try blanketing this better
6. 00:32:503 (3) - ^
7. 00:34:281 (2) - ^
8. 00:38:948 (7) - Too much spacing.
9. 00:42:948 (2) - stack this on top of (5). You can do this to make it not look so smushed together: http://puu.sh/7nBtr.jpg
10. 00:49:392 (3) - you can blanket this better. Give a little space between this and (1).
11. 00:52:059 (2) - Finish
12. 00:57:392 - I think this sounds better http://puu.sh/7nBGz.jpg
13. 01:06:281 - Do the same thing here as above.
14. 01:01:837 (6) - Need a NC around here.
15. 01:07:837 (5) - NC here.
16. 01:07:837 (5,6,7) - I think this makes it look better since it doesn't intersect sliders like previously.
17. 01:11:615 (6) - you could blanket this with (4)
18. 01:18:726 (4) - Finish
19. 01:20:503 (3) - ^
20. 01:22:726 (5) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:06:726 (4) - I think this would play better if it was like this http://puu.sh/7nCFa.jpg
2. 00:17:392 (3) - you should move this so it doesn't touch the slider
3. 00:21:615 (3) - needs a better blanket
4. 00:32:503 (3,4,5) - sounds better like this http://puu.sh/7nCSm.jpg
5. 00:34:281 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/7nD3n.jpg
6. 00:44:726 - I think you should put a note here and move the slider to 00:44:948. Same for all the other difficulties. I like it better the way it is right now.
7. 01:23:059 (4) - you should move this to the left side of (3).

Actually just message me ingame if you want some hitsounding help because I'm not even sure if I'm making it sound better.

Mono98 wrote:

Hey

Don't forget our Mod4Mod deal :b

I looked through your map, and here is what you could make better:

General: I personally would prefer a slider tick rate of 2. Going to keep it at 1 for now. I like it there.

Easy: Everything's fine with it =) Yay!

Normal: 00:30:281 You could add a softclap here. Fits good, in my opinion =) Yeah fit's nicely.

Hard: 00:23:170 End the slider at 00:23:392 (the red line) and make another slider from 00:24:059 to 00:24:503 . Sounds much better to me =) Already a slider at slider from 00:24:059 to 00:24:503. Ended the slider at the red tick.

Insane: Could not find anything bad =) congratz Thank you!

Sorry if it was a bit short. I am new to modding and stuff :/ But this map is pretty damn good. Nice work!!

Knotts wrote:

[General]
Overall I think you should unrestrict yourself from using DS constantly, especially on your insane. If you need help with that PM me ingame.

No Dap wrote:

Hey, just a quick look from #modreqs

Timing still seems to be a bit off.. (but I might be incorrect so make sure you check and see if mine makes sense to you)

Offset 515 much better imo.

and on your spinners, I would put whistles instead of finish. Does not fit at all.

+ Why don't you just use mp3 and video files from ranked maps? -Umi's map has excellent mp3 quality :3

you won't have to worry about timing then lol.

Anyway good luck!!

Edit 1 : Forgot to say this

Knotts wrote:

[General]
Overall I think you should unrestrict yourself from using DS constantly, especially on your insane. If you need help with that PM me ingame.

Can't agree more. Your insane really not so inane to be honest. it's not bad, it's just too easy and simple. Try to follow some drums instead of long melodies.
ie, 00:10:059 (1,5) -

Also, DS is really so constant, I have not taken a closer look, but I don't remember seeing any jumps.

[Kamiya] wrote:

hi~
[Insane]
00:26:292 (2,3,4,5) - distance is close
00:39:626 (1,2) - ^
00:57:181 (4,5) - distance is close
01:17:626 (1) - ^

that all

gl and gj~~

HouseForever wrote:

MOD

EASY:

I think its good like it is Thank you!


NORMAL:

00:28:737 (4,1) The distance between the two hitcircles irritated me... maybe put 1 further away from 4 with distance snap. Agreed and fixed.

Everything else is allright


HARD:

01:18:737 (3) Maybe let this slider end here: 01:18:959, i think this would fit better ;-)
01:20:514 (3) Same as above I like it the way it is right now, it felt weird when I made it longer.

INSANE:

01:24:070 (1,2,1,2) Maybe order it a little bit more clear ;-) Changed the combo here to something more pleasing to the eye.


A very nice beatmap, I really like it and only can a few ideas for improvement, because I really like it like it is actually ;-)
Anyway I hope, that the suggestions helped you

1. AR 2 or 3 and OD 1~2 , And OD is usually not higher than AR
2. 00:41:181 (1) - end timing is confused
3. 01:02:737 (1,2,3,4) - this part hard for New player I think (In my Opinion)

1. AR and the OD is too high right? I think it looks good to change AR5 and OD4.
2. 00:02:292 (5,6) - sound is unnatural.
3. 00:15:181 (3) -Reverse Arrows to repeat only once and it is up to those who will have less clutter.
4. 00:17:181 (2) - ^
5. 00:18:959 (1) - ^
6. 00:22:514 (1) - ^
7. 00:30:514 - add circle
8. 00:43:626 (3,4,5,6) - how about tihs? http://puu.sh/8Igsi.jpg
9. 00:47:181 (1,1,1) - change one combo
10. 00:53:848 (2) - Reverse Arrows to repeat only once and it is up to those who will have less clutter.
11. 01:25:403 - spinner start this , and end this 01:27:403

1. HP6 AR8 OD7 ?? << what's this? this is not Insane diff change AR7 , OD5~6 and In my Opinion HP5 is looks good.
2. 00:39:848 (3,4,5) - change slider , more natural I think
3. 00:49:848 (4,1) - fix here not following song
4. 00:58:292 (7,1) - ^
5. 01:16:959 (2) - Accrete one track

1. not wrong I think ~

K i b i y a - wrote:

Random #modreqs

[Easy]

1. AR 2 or 3 and OD 1~2 , And OD is usually not higher than AR
2. 00:41:181 (1) - end timing is confused
3. 01:02:737 (1,2,3,4) - this part hard for New player I think (In my Opinion)

All fixed.

[Normal]

1. AR and the OD is too high right? I think it looks good to change AR5 and OD4.
2. 00:02:292 (5,6) - sound is unnatural.
3. 00:15:181 (3) -Reverse Arrows to repeat only once and it is up to those who will have less clutter.
4. 00:17:181 (2) - ^
5. 00:18:959 (1) - ^
6. 00:22:514 (1) - ^
7. 00:30:514 - add circle
8. 00:43:626 (3,4,5,6) - how about tihs? http://puu.sh/8Igsi.jpg
9. 00:47:181 (1,1,1) - change one combo
10. 00:53:848 (2) - Reverse Arrows to repeat only once and it is up to those who will have less clutter.
11. 01:25:403 - spinner start this , and end this 01:27:403

I thought all the repeats were good, otherwise, fixed.

[Hard]

1. HP6 AR8 OD7 ?? << what's this? this is not Insane diff change AR7 , OD5~6 and In my Opinion HP5 is looks good.
2. 00:39:848 (3,4,5) - change slider , more natural I think
3. 00:49:848 (4,1) - fix here not following song
4. 00:58:292 (7,1) - ^
5. 01:16:959 (2) - Accrete one track

Fixed.

[Insane]

1. not wrong I think ~

GL