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Chata - Love Rice

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Senbon
[Overall]

  • - Add tags and source to all difficulties
    + Nice clean, cute map
    + Nice use of hit sounds
[Normal]

  • * 00:23:55 (6) - I'd align it to (3) and then space accordingly.
    * 00:55:50 (6,7) - I don't know what this is snapped to in the song. :(
    * 00:57:15 (1) - ^ Perhaps shortening the slider one tick and add a beat on the white tick after shortening?
    * 01:07:65 (6) - New combo.
    * 01:08:55 (1) - Remove new combo if you wish.
    * 01:10:65 (5) - New combo.
    * 02:43:65 (11) - Align with (10)
    * 02:48:30 (7) - New combo and snap the end to 1/6
[JL's Short Version]

  • * No problems found
[Hard]

  • * 1/8th divisor? o_0

    * 00:51:15 (2) - Repeat isn't necessary.
    * 01:07:50 (1) - Snap to 1/6th
    * 01:22:35 (7) - Inconsistent spacing.
    * 01:57:15 (3) - Seems outta place to me, vocal snapping-wise.
    * 02:48:30 (1) - Snap to 1/6th
    * 02:58:20 (5,6,7) - Align with (4)
    * 03:17:11 (2) - Seems too big of a jump, IMO..
    *03:27:46 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Hi-light this all yourself and then you can see the outline and you can try to make the shape more definite and look better.
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
thx all fixed
EEeee
Normal
00:25:05 (9) - new combo
00:28:65 (9) - ^

JL's short ver.
00:08:854 - re-add break here
well that's it, just fix all breaks in this diff, they don't end right

Hard
Fix all breaks in this
01:04:65 (5) - new combo
01:06:15 (10) - ^
v2b
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
v2b
lag
v2b
为什么莫名其妙的三连发了 >_>
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

v2b wrote:

两弹一星 >_>
两弹一星很强力<_<
谢谢你的mod -w-
修改完成
JamesLeao
[JL's Short ver]

Why is the BPM correct here and not in Normal? =w= =v=

In my opinion claps don't fit the song too well but if you must use them, reduce their volume a bit. reduced , you says right

I also didn't like a couple places at the start where notes were stacked on the opposite end of sliders, I recommend not stacking these. i think everyone has their style , so i think i don't need fix them but thank you !

00:09:00 - Redo break
00:20:55 - Redo break
00:39:00 - Redo break 3 breaks were fixed

Sorry for my poor english :P
tsuka
awesome map, cute !? charming!?
whatever
star

P.S:I'm very suck in last confusing streams......T_T
ACC
拘泥于人声又忽而转向伴奏……
Alace
Well you need to use 1/6 snap to map this song (if you want to follow those vocals)
1/4 divisors don`t fit the song well

<Hard>
-1 overall diff is better
Nekomiya Nono
你有よつのはova的op吗?
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

Nekomiya Nono wrote:

你有よつのはova的op吗?
http://pickup.mofile.com/1721029147152933
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Offset = 1055
Set a preview point


[Normal]

Resnap all notes.
00:19:804 - Add a break

[JL's Short ver.]

It's ok

[Hard]

Resnap all notes.
01:07:050 (1) - End this slider on red tick (01:07:954)

Starred~
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Offset = 1055
Set a preview point


[Normal]

Resnap all notes.
00:19:804 - Add a break

[JL's Short ver.]

It's ok

[Hard]

Resnap all notes.
01:07:050 (1) - End this slider on red tick (01:07:954)

Starred~
before i fix this, i have to fix that alace said. ._.
I'll remake this map ,but it nees time.
Cyril Scarlet
:P
Alace
back to WIP
Kotone
lol...?
Rare
;)
Alace
zpking
STAR!
Colin Hou
first map :D
DeadAlready
:OOO
tsuka
net45291
<3~!
DJPop
Oh, Yotsunoha =D
And the song

Can you send the Yotsunoha albums? >_<


BPM should be 200 imo.

~Normal~
03:26:754 (5) - 1/6 snapped

~Collab~
00:17:854 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6 snapped
00:19:054 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:30:054 (4,5) - move right 1 grid (Lv4)
01:16:854 (2,3) - move left 2 grids (Lv4)
01:36:454 (9) - should be ended on red tick
01:39:354 (5) - 1/4 snapped
02:25:204 >>> 02:43:654 - I don't know this part, they're both 1/6 and 1/4 rhythm mixed >.<
But I recommend using 1/6 snaps (instrument sync)
03:07:054 (1,2,3) - 1/6 snapped
03:11:854 (3,1,2,3) - ^
03:16:654 (1,2,3) - ^
03:19:504 (4) - ^
03:21:154 (4,5,6) - ^
03:23:704 (3,4,5) - ^
03:26:104 (4,1) - ^
03:36:829 - add note
03:36:904 (1) - end on 03:39:604 and silence it

Not sure if I missed something, it's a bit difficult to mod >_<


+Star
tsuka

DJPop wrote:

Oh, Yotsunoha =D
And the song

Can you send the Yotsunoha albums? >_<


BPM should be 200 imo.

~Normal~
03:26:754 (5) - 1/6 snapped

~Collab~
00:17:854 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6 snapped
00:19:054 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:30:054 (4,5) - move right 1 grid (Lv4)
01:16:854 (2,3) - move left 2 grids (Lv4)
01:36:454 (9) - should be ended on red tick
01:39:354 (5) - 1/4 snapped
02:25:204 >>> 02:43:654 - I don't know this part, they're both 1/6 and 1/4 rhythm mixed >.<
But I recommend using 1/6 snaps (instrument sync)
03:07:054 (1,2,3) - 1/6 snapped
03:11:854 (3,1,2,3) - ^
03:16:654 (1,2,3) - ^
03:19:504 (4) - ^
03:21:154 (4,5,6) - ^
03:23:704 (3,4,5) - ^
03:26:104 (4,1) - ^
03:36:829 - add note
03:36:904 (1) - end on 03:39:604 and silence it

Not sure if I missed something, it's a bit difficult to mod >_<


+Star

those rhythm was confused me when im mapping , thx for your great help > <~
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
thank you! DJPop

fixed :P

SPOILER
よつのは初回特典オリジナルサウンドトラック
http://u.115.com/file/t6884ae4f6
click and dl it ;)
NatsumeRin
[General]
countdown有必要么?

[Normal]
圈小一号感觉好看些
00:44:854 (1) - 和前面对应的话这里的开头该有个whistle?和后面接的也可以
00:51:354 (2) - 虽然是重音,但之前都歌词的话似乎该提前1/3?
01:01:954 (5) - whistle换到4
01:12:054 (3) - 本来就比较散了,都finish是不是有点重...
01:41:854 (1,4) - 这里提一串,可以在相应位置上加sliderwhistle,不过01:47:554 (3) - 可能要略变,想法是这里吵一点后面静下来就更明显
02:04:654 (5) - 建议减两个重复然后空拍-单circle开kiai
02:14:454 (3) - 和前面同
03:21:354 (1) - 换circle?
03:27:454 (1) - 这slider结尾点这么诡异有啥寓意么..

[Collab]
00:10:254 (5) - 这应该是1/6*4而不是1/8*5吧,别扭
00:55:654 (8) - 删,一直是vocal的话这加拍平添混乱
01:39:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 其实这排版连续起来不好么为什么一定要分着来
02:27:654 (1) - 和前面连贯应该有whistle,后面一串同,或者索性把02:25:254 (1)的删了,但因为都是同音高再滑下去所以应该加
02:48:304 (3) - 删sliderwhistle和尾whistle
02:59:854 (4) - 删sliderwhistle
03:27:454 (1) - 从这里开始 xooxooxooxooxxxo oxxoxxoo xoxoxoox oxxoxoox xoxoxoxo oxoxoxox, 03:29:254 (1,2) - 这两个的sliderwhistle删掉.
Lesjuh
Disable countdown on both difficulties!
Mp3 is 320 kbps! I'm gonna have to ask you to compress it.

whymeman wrote:

320kbit = ask to recompress the bitrate to 192. They should not be ranked as of now; no exceptions.
You can get away with 256kbps as well ;3

Collab
03:07:204 (2) - Snap to 1/6
03:12:004 (1,2,3) - ^
03:19:504 (4) - ^

That's it!
Jarby

Lesjuh wrote:

You can get away with 256kbps as well ;3
Not on my watch. Also, make an easier difficulty or something.

peppy wrote:

Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love.
JauiPlaY
HI~
一些建議

[General]

Derekku wrote:

*256kbps mp3... You submitted this before the 192kbps rule, right? o:
這時間絕對已經夠早了
OSB文件需要嗎?

[Normal]
雖然打起來其實挺簡單的卻是3星以上...不做點降星措施大丈夫嗎?
AR-1
00:09:435(4,5,6) - 這樣會不會好一些?
00:16:935(x) - 加個note?
00:39:535(4) - new combo?
01:02:335(6) - ^
01:09:535(6) - 用一個沒折返的長slider會不會比較合歌詞?
01:35:035(5) - new combo?
02:04:735(5) - ^
03:10:135(4) - 用一個circle應該夠了吧?

[Collab]
我還是覺得加個collab姓名SB會比較好...
00:16:735(3) - 我覺得結束在00:16:885會好很多
00:25:135(6) - new combo
00:55:135(5) - ^
01:19:935(x) - 加個note?
01:34:135(4) - 換成3個1/4note去合歌詞?
01:38:935(4) - ^
01:46:335(x) - 加個note?
01:46:435(x) - ^
02:24:835(7) - 雖然聲音本身并不小但是跟前面的一對比幾乎聽不到了...加點音量?
03:20:185(x) - 加個note?
03:36:085(1) - 這個間距略顯犀利啊...

nice map.
so
star~
DerekMcD
*Star*
tsuka
````fuck shabi chao ji QQ

Download: Chata - Love Rice (xierbaliti) [Collab].osu
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
uploaded. :P
Dangaard
[Collab]
03:36:085 (1) - move this a bit away from the previous slider
03:36:985 (1) - you should "silence" the whole spinner
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
all fixed :P
Dangaard
wait, shouldn't it be tsukamaete in the tags?
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

Dangaard wrote:

wait, shouldn't it be tsukamaete in the tags?
ohhh my bad :P

fixed~
Dangaard
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