1. Easy (1.52 stars, 88 notes)
2. Hard (3.09 stars, 229 notes)
3. Insane (3.8 stars, 299 notes)
4. Normal (2 stars, 132 notes)

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1. Widescreen Support is unchecked only for Insane. Make sure it's checked or unchecked consistently for each difficulty as you intend.

1. 00:02:274 - Unsnapped and unnecessary green line since the SV isn't changing. Delete the green line here and put 50% on the red line.
2. 00:10:342 (1) - The placement here gets kind of messy. Try and make a triangle formation with 00:08:687 (3,4,1) would look neat.
3. 00:13:653 (4) - NC here to fit the strong downbeat and pattern change.
4. 00:17:067 - The green line here isn't necessary, I would delete it.
5. 00:20:273 (4) - The slider seems to be structured on the old algorithm. I would remake it to get a nicer blanket. Also use a NC here to indicate that you've switched to following the vocal for this part:
   Example

   
6. 00:26:480 (4) - Spacing inconsistency here, make sure to correct it to a 1.0x interval.
7. 00:51:722 (5) - I would NC here to break up this combo, it feels rather long for an Easy. Also try a whistle on the tail for the high sound.
8. 01:05:584 (4) - NC to indicate you've switched to follow the vocal here.
9. 01:06:618 (6) - Shortening this slider to reverse on the blue tick would follow the music more accurately.
10. 01:14:894 (1) - Definitely could use a whistle on the head to catch the high sound. You can also use one on the tail if you would like.
11. 01:18:204 (6) - NC here to break up the combo, it's also rather long.
    
    Well I'm not too keen on using slider shapes like 00:26:894 (1) and 00:41:791 (3) for an Easy but we'll see what other modders think.

1. 00:06:204 (4) - Since the previous slider ends on a vocal, it feels more intuitive to have this circle on 00:06:411.
2. 00:31:860 - Unneeded green line. Either delete or make use of it.
3. 00:55:860 (2) - Spacing inconsistency, make sure to correct it to a 1.4x interval.
4. 01:05:791 (3,4,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is a bit ambiguous because it's not quite clear what you're following. Try a rhythm like this to more carefully follow the sounds in the background music:
   Example

   
5. 01:23:584 (1) - This note appears rather soon after a spinner and may feel comfortable for beginners/amateurs. I would delete it.

1. 00:12:825 (1) - Remove NC, I don't see any reason to have this note as it's own combo.
2. 00:36:825 (2,3) - Swap these two on the timeline to fit the music better. You should be able to click something on 00:37:032.
3. 01:06:825 (1,2,3) - Similar suggestion as Normal, you should follow the significant background sounds here. Try something like this:
   Example

   
4. 01:15:101 (1) - The jump here is way too big and doesn't feel good to play. I would reduce the spacing.
5. 01:20:273 (2) - Should have a NC here to indicate the large SV increase.

1. 00:06:618 (3) - Needs a NC for the large SV increase.
2. 00:20:273 (3,4) - This would look a lot nicer if you stacked the tails perfectly and/or used the same curve for both of them.
3. 00:36:825 (2,3) - Same as Hard, swap these two on the timeline so you can catch the sound on 00:37:032 to fit the music.
4. 00:48:411 (1,2,3,4) - I don't agree with using a stream here with nothing in the music to warrant it. A 3/4 slider would make more sense.
5. 00:51:101 (5,6,7) - Are the small spacing increases intentional? It looks kinda strange and spacing this triplet normally would play better.
6. 00:53:377 (4,5,6,7,8) - Looks like you're making a pentagon shape with this placement but it doesn't look very clean given the spacing changes. I provided an example of a clean pentagon pattern, try it out:
   
   Example

   
   

   320,60,53377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   143,99,53584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   127,278,53791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   293,349,53998,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   411,213,54204,1,2,0:0:0:0:

7. 00:56:480 (4) - The jump here is excessive considering you didn't use a jump this big for 00:55:653 (2) which is a similar sounding part. Move this note to x:206 y:217 to keep the distance consistent.
8. 00:56:687 (5,7) - Try to avoid making overlaps like these, they don't look very nice.

Trust wrote:

hi meetmeetdee! looks like i'm first~

Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended/very questionable
Black: Suggestion
[General]

1. Widescreen Support is unchecked only for Insane. Make sure it's checked or unchecked consistently for each difficulty as you intend. Fix

[Easy]

1. 00:02:274 - Unsnapped and unnecessary green line since the SV isn't changing. Delete the green line here and put 50% on the red line. OK
2. 00:10:342 (1) - The placement here gets kind of messy. Try and make a triangle formation with 00:08:687 (3,4,1) would look neat. OK
3. 00:13:653 (4) - NC here to fit the strong downbeat and pattern change. OK
4. 00:17:067 - The green line here isn't necessary, I would delete it. OK
5. 00:20:273 (4) - The slider seems to be structured on the old algorithm. I would remake it to get a nicer blanket. Also use a NC here to indicate that you've switched to following the vocal for this part:
   Example

   
   OK
6. 00:26:480 (4) - Spacing inconsistency here, make sure to correct it to a 1.0x interval. Fix
7. 00:51:722 (5) - I would NC here to break up this combo, it feels rather long for an Easy. Also try a whistle on the tail for the high sound. OK
8. 01:05:584 (4) - NC to indicate you've switched to follow the vocal here. OK
9. 01:06:618 (6) - Shortening this slider to reverse on the blue tick would follow the music more accurately. OK
10. 01:14:894 (1) - Definitely could use a whistle on the head to catch the high sound. You can also use one on the tail if you would like. add in head
11. 01:18:204 (6) - NC here to break up the combo, it's also rather long. OK
    
    Well I'm not too keen on using slider shapes like 00:26:894 (1) and 00:41:791 (3) for an Easy but we'll see what other modders think.

[Normal]

1. 00:06:204 (4) - Since the previous slider ends on a vocal, it feels more intuitive to have this circle on 00:06:411. use slider instead
2. 00:31:860 - Unneeded green line. Either delete or make use of it. Fix
3. 00:55:860 (2) - Spacing inconsistency, make sure to correct it to a 1.4x interval.
4. 01:05:791 (3,4,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is a bit ambiguous because it's not quite clear what you're following. Try a rhythm like this to more carefully follow the sounds in the background music:
   Example

   
   OK
5. 01:23:584 (1) - This note appears rather soon after a spinner and may feel comfortable for beginners/amateurs. I would delete it. OK

[Hard]
You may need to use Tick Rate 2 for this to make the large slider velocity increases discernible. OK

1. 00:12:825 (1) - Remove NC, I don't see any reason to have this note as it's own combo. I prefer keep this for the combo consistency at that part, may consider change it if others point out this again
2. 00:36:825 (2,3) - Swap these two on the timeline to fit the music better. You should be able to click something on 00:37:032. OK
3. 01:06:825 (1,2,3) - Similar suggestion as Normal, you should follow the significant background sounds here. Try something like this:
   Example

   
   OK
4. 01:15:101 (1) - The jump here is way too big and doesn't feel good to play. I would reduce the spacing. Fix
5. 01:20:273 (2) - Should have a NC here to indicate the large SV increase. OK

[Insane]
Same as mentioned for Hard with the tick rate. OK

1. 00:06:618 (3) - Needs a NC for the large SV increase. OK
2. 00:20:273 (3,4) - This would look a lot nicer if you stacked the tails perfectly and/or used the same curve for both of them. Fix the stack, but the different in curve is made intentionally
3. 00:36:825 (2,3) - Same as Hard, swap these two on the timeline so you can catch the sound on 00:37:032 to fit the music. OK
4. 00:48:411 (1,2,3,4) - I don't agree with using a stream here with nothing in the music to warrant it. A 3/4 slider would make more sense. OK
5. 00:51:101 (5,6,7) - Are the small spacing increases intentional? It looks kinda strange and spacing this triplet normally would play better. Fix
6. 00:53:377 (4,5,6,7,8) - Looks like you're making a pentagon shape with this placement but it doesn't look very clean given the spacing changes. I provided an example of a clean pentagon pattern, try it out:
   
   Example

   
   

   320,60,53377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   143,99,53584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   127,278,53791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   293,349,53998,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   411,213,54204,1,2,0:0:0:0:

   Thanks, it looks cleaner
7. 00:56:480 (4) - The jump here is excessive considering you didn't use a jump this big for 00:55:653 (2) which is a similar sounding part. Move this note to x:206 y:217 to keep the distance consistent. Fix
8. 00:56:687 (5,7) - Try to avoid making overlaps like these, they don't look very nice. Fix

Nice song!
Good luck with this~

1. Tag裡, opening和Ricotta之間有兩個空格, 雖然不是什麼大問題但請把其中一個空格刪掉吧=w=
   
2. 把Shoujo Kishi Monogatari加進tag中, 中譯直翻是這個樣子的
   其他都沒有什麼問題~

1. 00:00:204 - 也許能在這個地方加個轉盤, 然後在00:02:067 - 這個地方結尾? 這樣可以讓前面的部分沒那麼空. 如果要加的話, 最好全diff都加一遍, 然後把lead-in調整好
2. 00:02:894 (4) - / 00:04:549 (3) - 這兩個clap在剛開始安靜的部分顯得很突兀, 而且音樂本身並沒有什麼明顯的clap音. 建議還是刪掉為妙
3. 00:06:618 (1) - 這個能夠延長到00:06:929 - 再結束吧? 畢竟都加速了空一拍有點沒那麼激情(?)的感覺
4. 00:21:722 (6,7,8,9) - 這兩個兩連有點怪怪的, 音樂並不是什麼很空的地方, 所以基本上沒必要自創節奏, 用1/2節奏走大概就夠了. 如果要我來改的話, 我會把現在的(7,8,9)都刪掉, 然後在00:21:929 - 加個1/2長的滑條
5. 00:30:411 (1,2) - 照音樂來講的話, 這個部分的節奏應該是長成這樣才對:
   
6. 00:38:067 (5,6) - 只是個小建議: 因為音樂上00:37:963 - 和00:38:273 - 都有很明顯的音, 雖然跟不上vocal, 不過我覺得可以試著去follow一下. 可以試著像這樣排排看:
   
7. 00:56:687 (5) - 照著圓形flow來說, 這個slider應該要頭尾相反過來才對. 這樣的話(6)大概也要找個位置重擺
8. 01:00:618 (3,1,2) - 這個地方我覺得就(3,1)跟(1,2)上的銜接來說, 是不太能準確的跟上節奏的. 因為(3,1)之間其實是個所謂的anti-jump, 而(1,2)之間又回到了原本1/2之間該有的距離, 這樣的話在點擊完(1)之後要直接進入狀況點(2)是非常困難的 (因為玩家們會認為(1,2)之間還是anti-jump, 但事實上他已經回歸正常了) 也許要把(1)跟(2)之間的距離重新調整一下.
9. 01:07:239 - 這裡的音實在太明顯了, 不跟一下大概會愧對自己的心靈(?) 把01:07:032 (1) - 拆成一個note + 一個1/2滑條吧
   有些部分的節奏有點亂亂的, 當然你需要更多的modder來一一指出

1. 00:04:549 - 如同在Insane裡面所說的, 這個clap應該不必要
2. 00:07:653 (2) - 這跳有點太大了吧?
3. 00:29:377 (3,4) - 這兩個slider交換位置可能會flow些 (指的是(2,3)之間的flow)
4. 01:15:515 - / 01:16:135 - 這兩個地方上finish
   實際上挑不出太多問題, 但是整體來講顯得有點亂亂的. 而且好像有點偏難..

1. 00:04:549 - 同I
2. 00:06:204 (4) - 我覺得這個slider沒什麼存在的必要性, 反而是刪掉之後(3)直接延長1/2就夠了
3. 01:12:825 - clap

1. 00:06:411 (5) - 直接在00:06:618 - 下一個note就能代替這個slider了吧

• General

  Good
  
  
  

  • Easy

    00:02:273 (1,2) - i'm not recommend this rhythm on Easy
    00:22:756 (4,1) - arranged to be parallel.
    00:48:411 (1) - reduce a little bit curved.
    00:51:722 (1,2,3,4) - my suggestion.
    

    SPOILER

    

    00:55:860 (2,3) - try blanket
    01:03:308 (1,2) - ^
    
    
    

    • Normal

      00:05:170 (3) - separate into two sliders.
      

      SPOILER

      

      00:18:411 - add circle?
      00:33:101 (3) - more bent
      00:39:308 (2) - ^
      01:02:480 (3) - move to (200,311) for natural flow.
      01:05:791 (3) - end on 01:06:411 -
      01:06:618 (4,5) - arranged to be parallel.
      
      
      

      • Hard

        00:25:446 (2,4) - remove
        01:17:170 (3) - same like 01:16:756 (2) -
        01:27:722 (3) - i'm not recommend overlap.
        
        
        

        • Insane

          00:16:135 (6) - NC
          00:25:342 - add circle
          ┗ 00:25:756 - ^
          00:28:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a better pentagon pattern
          00:33:204 (7) - move to 00:33:308 -
          ┗ 00:33:204 - add circle
          00:36:618 (1,2) - distance
          
          I suck at modding Hard/Insane ._.

Flask wrote:

SPOILER

你好!

[General]

1. Tag裡, opening和Ricotta之間有兩個空格, 雖然不是什麼大問題但請把其中一個空格刪掉吧=w=
   
2. 把Shoujo Kishi Monogatari加進tag中, 中譯直翻是這個樣子的
   其他都沒有什麼問題~

[Insane]

1. 00:00:204 - 也許能在這個地方加個轉盤, 然後在00:02:067 - 這個地方結尾? 這樣可以讓前面的部分沒那麼空. 如果要加的話, 最好全diff都加一遍, 然後把lead-in調整好 OK
2. 00:02:894 (4) - / 00:04:549 (3) - 這兩個clap在剛開始安靜的部分顯得很突兀, 而且音樂本身並沒有什麼明顯的clap音. 建議還是刪掉為妙 OK
3. 00:06:618 (1) - 這個能夠延長到00:06:929 - 再結束吧? 畢竟都加速了空一拍有點沒那麼激情(?)的感覺 還好吧，感覺上太長了
4. 00:21:722 (6,7,8,9) - 這兩個兩連有點怪怪的, 音樂並不是什麼很空的地方, 所以基本上沒必要自創節奏, 用1/2節奏走大概就夠了. 如果要我來改的話, 我會把現在的(7,8,9)都刪掉, 然後在00:21:929 - 加個1/2長的滑條 OK
5. 00:30:411 (1,2) - 照音樂來講的話, 這個部分的節奏應該是長成這樣才對: OK
   
6. 00:38:067 (5,6) - 只是個小建議: 因為音樂上00:37:963 - 和00:38:273 - 都有很明顯的音, 雖然跟不上vocal, 不過我覺得可以試著去follow一下. 可以試著像這樣排排看: OK
   
7. 00:56:687 (5) - 照著圓形flow來說, 這個slider應該要頭尾相反過來才對. 這樣的話(6)大概也要找個位置重擺 其實也不是刻意要放圓形
8. 01:00:618 (3,1,2) - 這個地方我覺得就(3,1)跟(1,2)上的銜接來說, 是不太能準確的跟上節奏的. 因為(3,1)之間其實是個所謂的anti-jump, 而(1,2)之間又回到了原本1/2之間該有的距離, 這樣的話在點擊完(1)之後要直接進入狀況點(2)是非常困難的 (因為玩家們會認為(1,2)之間還是anti-jump, 但事實上他已經回歸正常了) 也許要把(1)跟(2)之間的距離重新調整一下. OK
9. 01:07:239 - 這裡的音實在太明顯了, 不跟一下大概會愧對自己的心靈(?) 把01:07:032 (1) - 拆成一個note + 一個1/2滑條吧 OK
   有些部分的節奏有點亂亂的, 當然你需要更多的modder來一一指出

[Hard]

1. 00:04:549 - 如同在Insane裡面所說的, 這個clap應該不必要 OK
2. 00:07:653 (2) - 這跳有點太大了吧? 還好吧，不過縮短了
3. 00:29:377 (3,4) - 這兩個slider交換位置可能會flow些 (指的是(2,3)之間的flow) OK
4. 01:15:515 - / 01:16:135 - 這兩個地方上finish OK
   實際上挑不出太多問題, 但是整體來講顯得有點亂亂的. 而且好像有點偏難..

[Normal]

1. 00:04:549 - 同I OK
2. 00:06:204 (4) - 我覺得這個slider沒什麼存在的必要性, 反而是刪掉之後(3)直接延長1/2就夠了 還不錯
3. 01:12:825 - clap F谄

[Easy]

1. 00:06:411 (5) - 直接在00:06:618 - 下一個note就能代替這個slider了吧 OK

我沒有細細地看, 但總體來說你需要更多時間去學習如何把排版弄得更乾淨一點. 另外音效的部分也可以下的更好, 更燃. 在這方面我不太能提供什麼意見, 只能靠你自己慢慢地去看別人的圖去研究了
加油!

[ Raphael ] wrote:

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Hi~! from my queue!

• General

  Good
  
  
  

  • Easy

    00:02:273 (1,2) - i'm not recommend this rhythm on Easy I don't see the reason but I changed the pattern there
    00:22:756 (4,1) - arranged to be parallel. Fix
    00:48:411 (1) - reduce a little bit curved. OK
    00:51:722 (1,2,3,4) - my suggestion. Sorry, I don't think your suggestion fit there. Pattern there maybe difficult, but I think it is acceptable. I may change it if I can find a better arrangement
    

    SPOILER

    

    00:55:860 (2,3) - try blanket OK
    01:03:308 (1,2) - ^ OK
    
    
    

    • Normal

      00:05:170 (3) - separate into two sliders. To keep the difficult as normal, this maybe too difficult
      

      SPOILER

      

      00:18:411 - add circle? keeping consistent, nope
      00:33:101 (3) - more bent OK
      00:39:308 (2) - ^ seems it is OK imo
      01:02:480 (3) - move to (200,311) for natural flow. OK
      01:05:791 (3) - end on 01:06:411 - it is fine
      01:06:618 (4,5) - arranged to be parallel. OK
      
      
      

      • Hard

        00:25:446 (2,4) - remove nope, sound strange to me
        01:17:170 (3) - same like 01:16:756 (2) - I make it intentionally
        01:27:722 (3) - i'm not recommend overlap. OK
        
        
        

        • Insane

          00:16:135 (6) - NC OK
          00:25:342 - add circle constant beat will be fine for me
          ┗ 00:25:756 - ^ ^
          00:28:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a better pentagon pattern OK
          00:33:204 (7) - move to 00:33:308 - OK
          ┗ 00:33:204 - add circle triple will be too much at that point for me
          00:36:618 (1,2) - distance OK
          
          I suck at modding Hard/Insane ._.

1. Video have underwear. Creator's word add caution this problem.

1. 00:03:722 (2) - add whistle slider head and end. follow keyboard.
2. 00:26:377 - this is strong part. but, why volume very low. I can't understand this.
3. 00:33:722 (4) - Add NC.
4. 00:40:135 (1) - add whistle slider end.
5. 00:43:446 (5) - add NC. and add whistle slider head.
6. 00:50:894 (4) - add whistle slider head.
7. 01:06:618 (3) - add whistle slider head and end.
8. 01:11:998 (5) - add NC.

1. 00:02:480 (1) - add whistle slider head.
2. 00:03:308 (2) - add whistle slider end.
3. 00:04:342 (1) - add whistle.
4. 00:04:549 (2) - add whitsle slider head.
5. 00:26:377 - same as easy.
6. 00:37:653 (2) - add whitsle slider head and end.

1. 00:02:480 (1,2,5) - add whitsle slider head and end.
2. 00:03:308 (3,4) - add whistle.
3. 01:13:239 (1) - add whistle slider reverse.
4. 00:35:998 (4) - add whistle slider head.
5. 01:23:584 (1,3) - add whistle slider head.
6. 01:24:204 (2) - add whistle.

1. 00:02:480 (1,5) - add whistle slider head.
2. 00:03:101 (4) - add whistle.
3. 00:35:998 (4) - add whistle slider head.
4. 00:36:825 (2) - add finish slider end.
5. 01:11:584 (9,1) - switch NC.

1. 00:12:825 (3) - 104, 232 will be better
2. 00:33:722 (1) - NC
3. 00:58:342 (5,6) - bend little more will be nice

1. 01:11:998 (2,3) - make these two's shape same will be nice
2. 01:15:308 (1,3) - ^
3. 01:24:825 (2) - remove NC

1. 00:24:204 (5,6) - use 1.0 distance will be better users can be confused in hard diff
2. 00:45:929 (3,4) - how about this one?
   SPOILER

   
   SPOILER

   

1. AR+1 will be better for this song
2. 00:14:791 (4) - move to 280. 220 stream looks little weird
3. 00:54:825 (4) - ^ 244, 232
4. 00:54:929 (5) - ^ 220, 252
5. 01:11:584 (9,10) - how about use 1.0 distance
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:17:377 (7) - ^
7. 01:13:653 (5,6) - ^
8. 01:18:101 (3) - move to 396, 276
9. 01:24:618 (3) - i think 88, 264 is better but your choice
10. 01:27:101 (2,3) - same reason with 5th one
    SPOILER

    

P o M u T a wrote:

SPOILER

Hi. from queue
[General]

1. Video have underwear. Creator's word add caution this problem.

[Easy]

1. 00:03:722 (2) - add whistle slider head and end. follow keyboard.
2. 00:26:377 - this is strong part. but, why volume very low. I can't understand this.
3. 00:33:722 (4) - Add NC.
4. 00:40:135 (1) - add whistle slider end.
5. 00:43:446 (5) - add NC. and add whistle slider head.
6. 00:50:894 (4) - add whistle slider head.
7. 01:06:618 (3) - add whistle slider head and end.
8. 01:11:998 (5) - add NC.

[Normal]

1. 00:02:480 (1) - add whistle slider head.
2. 00:03:308 (2) - add whistle slider end.
3. 00:04:342 (1) - add whistle.
4. 00:04:549 (2) - add whitsle slider head.
5. 00:26:377 - same as easy.
6. 00:37:653 (2) - add whitsle slider head and end.

[Hard]

1. 00:02:480 (1,2,5) - add whitsle slider head and end.
2. 00:03:308 (3,4) - add whistle.
3. 01:13:239 (1) - add whistle slider reverse.
4. 00:35:998 (4) - add whistle slider head.
5. 01:23:584 (1,3) - add whistle slider head.
6. 01:24:204 (2) - add whistle. I prefer no whistle for this

[Insane]

1. 00:02:480 (1,5) - add whistle slider head.
2. 00:03:101 (4) - add whistle.
3. 00:35:998 (4) - add whistle slider head.
4. 00:36:825 (2) - add finish slider end.
5. 01:11:584 (9,1) - switch NC.

good luck~

Neta wrote:

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Hi~ from my modding queue

[Easy]

1. 00:12:825 (3) - 104, 232 will be better
2. 00:33:722 (1) - NC
3. 00:58:342 (5,6) - bend little more will be nice

[Normal]

1. 01:11:998 (2,3) - make these two's shape same will be nice
2. 01:15:308 (1,3) - ^
3. 01:24:825 (2) - remove NC

[Hard]

1. 00:24:204 (5,6) - use 1.0 distance will be better users can be confused in hard diff keeping it for reminding the change in timing between notes
2. 00:45:929 (3,4) - how about this one?
   SPOILER

   
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[Insane]

1. AR+1 will be better for this song AR 8 seems fine for me
2. 00:14:791 (4) - move to 280. 220 stream looks little weird
3. 00:54:825 (4) - ^ 244, 232
4. 00:54:929 (5) - ^ 220, 252
5. 01:11:584 (9,10) - how about use 1.0 distance I think it is fine
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6. 01:17:377 (7) - ^ ^
7. 01:13:653 (5,6) - ^ ^
8. 01:18:101 (3) - move to 396, 276
9. 01:24:618 (3) - i think 88, 264 is better but your choice
10. 01:27:101 (2,3) - same reason with 5th one ^
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GOOD LUCK~

1. 00:04:963 - add a note here? imo it's too hard to read, cause of the white/red tick change
   I know there is no sound, but just from the distance from 00:03:308 (1,2) - beginner players will assume it's the same rhythm here
2. 00:11:998 (2,3,1) - overlap of 2 and 1 doesn't look nice, place 2 differently?
   example

   
3. 00:16:549 (4,1) - red/white tick change again, might be confusing
   since there is a beat at 00:17:377 - you might want to add a note there
4. 00:21:308 (2,3) - blanket could be better here
5. 00:22:135 (3,4) - basically same as 00:16:549 (4,1) -
6. 00:26:480 (4) - move to 284|252 for triangle pattern? :3 -triangle pattern hug- so beautiful QwQ
7. 00:28:549 (3) - move middle anchor a bit further from 00:29:791 (4) - for better blanket
8. 00:31:032 (1,2) - movement here isn't great, place 2 differently maybe?
   example

   
9. 00:36:825 (1,2,3) - blankets could be better ><
10. 00:52:963 (3,4,1) - change up so 3 and 1 don't overlap?
    example

    
11. 00:58:342 (5,6,7) - try to shape/place them a little more accurate? maybe it was intentional, Idk. xD
    but imo it looks better like this > comparison

    
    

1. 00:26:894 (1,2,3) - blanket could be a tiny bit better, just move last anchors a grid closer to 3
2. 00:39:308 (2,3) - ^, but middle anchor further away
3. 00:44:273 (2) - I'd prefer a flipped version of 00:43:446 (1) - here
   screen

   
4. 00:53:998 (2) - stack below 00:51:722 (1) - maybe and adjust 00:53:377 (1,3) - to it?
   why? .. just personal preferance. >3
5. 01:10:963 (3) - rotate by ~35° (sel centre)? improves the movement to 01:11:791 (1) -

1. 00:06:618- I don't really get why youchange SV to 1.5 here. o.o
   I see the change fitting for 00:16:963 (1) - .. but why 00:06:618 (1) - ?
2. 00:18:825 (4,7) - stack correctly?
3. 00:39:308 (5,2) - ^
4. 00:59:584 (4) - use the same shape as for the others? that'd look better imo

1. same about SV changes here as in Hard
2. 00:03:722 (1) - could blanket 00:02:480 (1) - better
3. 00:20:273 (1,2) - use more similar shape for them? 2 looks ugly to me (sorry ><)
4. 00:31:446 (5,1) - stack correctly
5. 00:49:860 (5,1) - the blanket.. >:
6. 01:25:446 (2,4) - they don't overlap, but just barely, increase distance between them a bit?

Squirrel wrote:

SPOILER

hi there!
mod from my queue. sorry, a bit late. ><

[Easy]

1. 00:04:963 - add a note here? imo it's too hard to read, cause of the white/red tick change
   I know there is no sound, but just from the distance from 00:03:308 (1,2) - beginner players will assume it's the same rhythm here no at this moment, i may consider if some others point out this
2. 00:11:998 (2,3,1) - overlap of 2 and 1 doesn't look nice, place 2 differently? OK
   
   example

   
3. 00:16:549 (4,1) - red/white tick change again, might be confusing
   since there is a beat at 00:17:377 - you might want to add a note there OK
4. 00:21:308 (2,3) - blanket could be better here OK
5. 00:22:135 (3,4) - basically same as 00:16:549 (4,1) - may consider later
6. 00:26:480 (4) - move to 284|252 for triangle pattern? :3 -triangle pattern hug- so beautiful QwQ OK
7. 00:28:549 (3) - move middle anchor a bit further from 00:29:791 (4) - for better blanket OK
8. 00:31:032 (1,2) - movement here isn't great, place 2 differently maybe? fine imo
   
   example

   
9. 00:36:825 (1,2,3) - blankets could be better >< OK
10. 00:52:963 (3,4,1) - change up so 3 and 1 don't overlap? OK
    
    example

    
11. 00:58:342 (5,6,7) - try to shape/place them a little more accurate? maybe it was intentional, Idk. xD it is intentional XD
    
    but imo it looks better like this > comparison

    
    

[Normal]

1. 00:26:894 (1,2,3) - blanket could be a tiny bit better, just move last anchors a grid closer to 3 fine imo
2. 00:39:308 (2,3) - ^, but middle anchor further away seems that it is ok
3. 00:44:273 (2) - I'd prefer a flipped version of 00:43:446 (1) - here i think the anchor should be pointing upward at this point
   
   screen

   
4. 00:53:998 (2) - stack below 00:51:722 (1) - maybe and adjust 00:53:377 (1,3) - to it? OK
   why? .. just personal preferance. >3
5. 01:10:963 (3) - rotate by ~35° (sel centre)? improves the movement to 01:11:791 (1) - OK

[Hard]

1. 00:06:618- I don't really get why youchange SV to 1.5 here. o.o
   I see the change fitting for 00:16:963 (1) - .. but why 00:06:618 (1) - ?
2. 00:18:825 (4,7) - stack correctly? OK
3. 00:39:308 (5,2) - ^
4. 00:59:584 (4) - use the same shape as for the others? that'd look better imo OK

[Insane]

1. same about SV changes here as in Hard
2. 00:03:722 (1) - could blanket 00:02:480 (1) - better not really a blanket for it
3. 00:20:273 (1,2) - use more similar shape for them? 2 looks ugly to me (sorry ><) OK
4. 00:31:446 (5,1) - stack correctly OK
5. 00:49:860 (5,1) - the blanket.. >: not really need to be a blanket
6. 01:25:446 (2,4) - they don't overlap, but just barely, increase distance between them a bit? OK

.. not much to say, nice mapset! sorry. ;n;
and good luck. *squee* ^__^/

moonlightleaf wrote:

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From my queue

[General]

NC很乱需要改改（嘛我自己也不会NC 晚點再看

[Easy]

00:16:549 (1,2) - 感觉有点近 新手会跟不上吧？ Fix

00:34:135 (2,3,4) - ^ 加一點難度也可以吧

00:17:584 (1) - 删 后面23 都往前拉2根线 改成別的pattern

00:26:894 (1) - 不好看 Fix

00:29:791 (4) - flow不好 应该在5那个位置 還好嘛

01:19:446 (2,3,4) - 这梗应该出现在Normal OK

2连地方可以考虑合并

[Normal]

感觉乱NC 需要检查下

00:28:549 (1) - 包前面2？ 不了

00:44:273 (2) - 把1复制过来 OK

00:55:653 试试这样 DS你自己摆好 不太好imo

SPOILER

01:05:791 (3) - 太弯，不好看 Fix

01:16:549 (1,2) - 这么遮，不好看 Fix

[Hard]

00:06:618 (1) - 不建议变速 再考慮一下

00:05:170 (3) - 单点 而且太远 其實還好

00:24:204 (5) - 拉后面白线 然后6删掉 OK

00:39:308 (5,2) - 遮好 Fix

00:42:825 (4) - 感觉1次就行 OK

00:54:722 (2) - 删 OK

01:19:549 (6) - 删 OK

01:20:273 (1) - 不变速 再考慮一下

01:27:722 (3) - 换地方？ OK

[Insane]

00:57:101 (2,3) - flow 不好

00:14:894 (5) - (288,184) OK

00:16:963 (1,4) - 叠好 OK

00:20:894 (2,1) - ^ OK

00:16:963 (1) - 不变速 再考慮一下

00:38:273 (5) - 单点？ 這樣子較好

00:54:618 (7) - NC 音不太重

01:01:239 (5) - ^ ^

01:01:653 (1) - 位置歪了 右点（你从5拉一条长滑条上去比比就知道 OK

SPOILER

01:10:342 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这打着很不舒服 我覺得還好

01:12:411 (3) - 移到前面蓝线？或者蓝线加note OK

01:19:446 (7) - 歪 Fix

01:20:273 (1) - 不变速 再考慮一下

加油~

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1. Mp3檔可以改為更有質素既192Kbps
2. AudioLeadIn: 0 > 1500
3. 顏色 combo3 灰白色: 好似比較陰沈 換一換係唔係會好d?

tellertheworld wrote:

From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

早晨~

有d野做 所以停下又mod下 搞左咁耐 真係唔好意思.

blue : suggestion


[General]

• BG for osu size

  
  1024 x 768 也沒甚麼問題

1. Mp3檔可以改為更有質素既192Kbps 找找看吧
2. AudioLeadIn: 0 > 1500 OK
3. 顏色 combo3 灰白色: 好似比較陰沈 換一換係唔係會好d? OK

Easy

1. 00:03:308 (1) - 與 00:03:722 (2) - 之間只1個小拍 (4/4) 的距離, 而00:03:722 (2) -同 00:05:170 (3) - 同埋 00:05:170 (3) - 同00:06:618 (4) - 之間係1個半小拍(3/2) 的距離. 我感覺00:03:308 (1,2) - 之間既點擊好似快左 係節奏上. 你可以係00:02:480 - 加個Slider 而slider係00:03:101 - 完結 你可以試下. 感覺上沒甚麼問題，而且轉盤後想給新手一些空間去準備
   
2. 00:28:135 (2) - blanket ,仲有DS 1.04X 應該可以去番0.98X~ 1.03X. Fix
3. 00:31:860 - e條綠條係法國餐~ Fix
4. 00:36:411 - 加個NOTE 因為我覺得e度冇停頓 / 而00:37:032 - 有個停頓位(起伏位) 節奏時快時慢 唔建議係度用長SLIDER帶過 會有失首歌既感覺. 或者可以試下下面e個節奏 , 個3字slider可以改為反彈1次. 這兒跟vocal，而且前面想給新手一個停頓，
   可能做得唔好
   
5. 00:55:860 (2,3) - DS太高 改番做合理水平 Fix
6. 00:58:342 (5,6) - e度音樂同節奏都係比較溫和流暢 唔建議用反. 或者可以用d比較輕鬆d既排版. 個人感覺這裏是用反的較好
   
7. 00:59:998 (7) - 用長sldier (6/4) 加上01:01:032 (1) - 同 01:01:239 (2) - (2/4) 既距離 感覺有d慢之後 快得太突然 其實都冇咩既 可以唔改 但可以試下面果個節奏 用了別的節奏
   

Normal

1. NP

Hard

• 
  有點眼訓 可能mod得差d

1. 00:09:308 (5) - 感覺CTRL+G 會比較好FLOW. 感覺向下較好
2. 00:16:963 (1) - 這個個人感覺用2/4 既slider好似太長 因為感覺上e度係好快完(個音) 你可將佢改成1/4 slider 之後係00:17:377 - 加個圈 好像太短了，再考慮一下
3. 00:20:894 (4) - blanket 這弧度夠了
4. 00:27:722 - 加個note 因為感覺e度冇斷開 唔太建議將e度空左 用了slider
5. 00:37:653 (1,2) - e度建議做得快小小 因為e度起伏比較大 可能試下改用短slider (1/4) 或者用同e度差唔多00:36:618 (1,2,3) - 既(1/4)距離黎map e度 (注意:但對住hard又有d難度.. 所以都係睇你) OK

Insane

• 
  有點眼訓 可能mod得差d

1. 00:21:515 (3,4,1,2,3) - 前面果幾個小節(例如:00:18:825 (1,2,3) - 同00:19:653 (4,5,6,7) - ) 你普遍用左反手flow, 但係e度冇咩大既改變 而你用左順時針既flow 變得有d平靜 感覺有d奇怪 你可以係度改為反手 同埋小小jump係度 可能比較好. 依d咁溫柔既flow留番副歌先用個人覺得會比較好. 好像沒甚麼大分別，而且這兒音樂較為平靜，jump似乎不太合適
   上面的補充: 00:28:549 (1,2,3,4) - 因為比上面果度平和 e度用順時針我覺得係無問題~
2. 00:31:860 - 刪左條綠線. Fix
3. 00:43:446 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 前面既00:43:446 (1,2,3) - 同後面既 00:44:273 (1,2,3) - 成6個圈都可以睇成順時針 對於咁起伏既節奏 唔太建議咁溫柔 同上面差唔多意思. OK
   
4. 01:01:032 (4) - NC 唔係會唔知e度唔係同一個速度 OK
5. 01:11:998 (2,3,4) -放低小小好似flow會好d 差不多，不改了
6. 01:27:929 - 可以係e度加個圈 而個spinner結束點維持現狀不了

vahn10 wrote:

[Easy]

00:17:377 (1) - add clap OK
00:30:204 (5) - NC OK
00:58:342 (5) - ^ OK

nothing found anymore

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy
00:44:273 (2) Maybe like this Current one is fine imo

SPOILER

Normal
00:07:032 (1) The change of the SV could be very confusing There is no SV change

Hard
Srsly, i cant find anything here after 2 times watching. This is vell mapped.

Insane
Same here. Very good mapped. I am looking forward to see it ranked.


I am sorry. This mod is totally useless. Your Map is very good.