Tamura Yukari - Himitsu no Door kara Ai ni Kite (TV Size) [O · forum

Little

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-03-01T16:06:12+00:00

Tari wrote:
Super Late, but hey I modded it

[Easy]

01:00:653 (4) - Add a soft whisle to the end of the slider? maybe that's better nah, I think it's fine
00:56:740 (1) - You need to add a finish+whistle here also to match with the finish+whistle you added at 01:07:175 (1) - yup, fixed
01:14:348 (4) - Starting from here, you should make the volume decrease because this part isn't as loud and the kiai is starting to end at around this spot as well. There are no hitsounds on the head or body of (4), and I prefer to have the same volume for the part after this.
01:15:979 (5) - You need to add a new combo here, the end of the 01:14:348 (4) - is the end of the downbeat and where the combo would end, because you can imagine you put a spinner there. Well this is one of those awkward 4 beat phrases, and honestly I don't think a new combo is necessary here, as it creates a single object combo and I want to give players the follow points so they can see the movement from (4) to (5)
01:21:522 (1) - Move the end of the slider somewhere else, I don't particularly like that end because your going back to the previous note's with the slider end and that might look messy No, those objects are long gone by the time this slider appears.
00:19:566 (4) - The end could use a whistle. No, I want silence there.
00:21:522 (3) - Little minor issue, but since's it's already really close to being centered to the grid, maybe you can center it? No
00:29:348 (3) - The start of the slider sound's great with a whistle I don't think so...
00:58:044 (3) - I don't think fancy slider's like this are necessary, but if your trying new sliders this one doesn't particularly look nice. It's fine imo
01:03:262 (3) - End of the slider needs to have a whistle. No, it doesn't
Really great map, just some hitsound's and it ill be perfect <3
That's all <3 Nice map!

Thanks

Cloud's Easy

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: no-rin.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 54132
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 80707,88045
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Himitsu no Door kara Ai ni Kite (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:秘密の扉から会いにきて (TV Size)
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:keeeeeeko
Version:Cloud's Easy
Source:のうりん
Tags:no-rin nourin opening CloudSplash16 TKSalt
BeatmapID:354602
BeatmapSetID:141664

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.7
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2014-03-10T11:14:30+00:00

From my test playing queue~

So many fun jumps in this map that feels good along with vocal and instrument here! Nice !

General
http://puu.sh/7q00Q/0e0fcb5aa0.png I am not sure sure if this one is correct. I'm not sure about its resolution ....

Hard
00:15:001 (1) - I think this should be unstacked. It's under the slider and it can confuse people for Hard diff.
00:20:544 (3) - You may unstack it again and place it this way. I believe it's much easier to read!

SPOILER

00:45:001 (1) - this new combo is not needed imo
01:02:772 (1) - ^
01:13:044 (1) - ^
01:20:218 (1) - ^

You can call me back for a recheck for an osu!icon!

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-03-10T12:26:10+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
From my test playing queue~

So many fun jumps in this map that feels good along with vocal and instrument here! Nice ! thanks owo!

General
http://puu.sh/7q00Q/0e0fcb5aa0.png I am not sure sure if this one is correct. I'm not sure about its resolution .... I think that this is all right. cuz this new video dimension rule.
Ranking Criteria wrote
The video's dimensions must not exceed 1280x720. As well, upscaling lower resolution video to a higher resolution should be avoided. This ensures video files do not become excessively large or resource intensive.

Hard
00:15:001 (1) - I think this should be unstacked. It's under the slider and it can confuse people for Hard diff.
00:20:544 (3) - You may unstack it again and place it this way. I believe it's much easier to read!
SPOILER
00:45:001 (1) - this new combo is not needed imo
01:02:772 (1) - ^
01:13:044 (1) - ^
01:20:218 (1) - ^ 01:19:566 (1) - this place removed.

You can call me back for a recheck for an osu!icon!

all fixed!
thanks for modding

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2014-03-10T12:51:37+00:00

Good luck finding taiko icon and bubble!

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-03-10T13:03:36+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Good luck finding taiko icon and bubble!

thanks Frost~!!!

Alternative

348 posts

Joined June 2010

Alternative 2014-03-13T05:14:18+00:00

GO GO

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-03-13T07:56:18+00:00

just passing by. (random mod from #modreqs)
BATじゃなくてごめんなさい

[TK'S Muzukashii]

00:27:066 (114) - delete --> 00:27:229 - don追加? // たぶん後ろのキラキラ音に合わせてるのかもしれませんが、切れ目がわかりづらいキラキラ音よりもバスやドラムの音に合わせたほうが自然に聞こえました。
00:27:392 (115) - もし^を採用したらこっちをkatにした方がピッチに合いそうです
00:39:131 (166) - 移動して00:38:968 - に? // 好みの問題だとは思いますがボーカルに添えるところは添ってあげたい...!

[TK'S Oni]

初見Score
;w; 油断した

00:04:892 (14) - 移動して00:04:729 - に? // 割かしどうでもいいんですがMuzukashiiの方ではこっちに置いてあったので一応書いておきます
00:08:968 (37,38,39,40) - [k ddd] --> [kkd d] もしくは [ddd d]? // 00:08:153 (31,32,33,34) - あたりの流れからこっちも3連打を赤線スタートにしたほうが合うかなと思いました
00:29:348 - kat追加? // なんか空白多いなと思ってなんでだろうなーって思ったら手前の似たようなパターンの00:24:131 - にはkat置いてありました。小節の頭でボーカルもいい感じに入ってますし置いてみるか、逆に00:24:131 - を除くのもありかもです
best kiai time ever

TKS

Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014

1,380 posts

Joined July 2011

TKS 2014-03-13T13:29:35+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
just passing by. (random mod from #modreqs)
BATじゃなくてごめんなさい

[TK'S Muzukashii]
00:27:066 (114) - delete --> 00:27:229 - don追加? // たぶん後ろのキラキラ音に合わせてるのかもしれませんが、切れ目がわかりづらいキラキラ音よりもバスやドラムの音に合わせたほうが自然に聞こえました。 - 自分の譜面補正が入ってるせいもあるけど、kkk のパターンが見えた時点でプレイヤー側も音取りが変わったのかなと何となく推測して身構えれると思うし、他の部分でもちょっと変な感じのバスの音を拾わずにシンプルな配置にしてるのでこのままにします！
00:27:392 (115) - もし^を採用したらこっちをkatにした方がピッチに合いそうです

00:39:131 (166) - 移動して00:38:968 - に? // 好みの問題だとは思いますがボーカルに添えるところは添ってあげたい...! - 前にも言われたんで移動しました。
[TK'S Oni]

初見Score
;w; 油断した
- リザルト貼ってくれるの初めてで嬉しいです！！意図した部分でミス出してくれてもっと嬉しいです！！
00:04:892 (14) - 移動して00:04:729 - に? // 割かしどうでもいいんですがMuzukashiiの方ではこっちに置いてあったので一応書いておきます - hontoda;; MuzuをOniに合わせました。
00:08:968 (37,38,39,40) - [k ddd] --> [kkd d] もしくは [ddd d]? // 00:08:153 (31,32,33,34) - あたりの流れからこっちも3連打を赤線スタートにしたほうが合うかなと思いました - ddd d にしましま
00:29:348 - kat追加? // なんか空白多いなと思ってなんでだろうなーって思ったら手前の似たようなパターンの00:24:131 - にはkat置いてありました。小節の頭でボーカルもいい感じに入ってますし置いてみるか、逆に00:24:131 - を除くのもありかもです - なんとなく 00:24:131 よりはボーカルが弱い感じしてたんですが置いた方がグッドっぽいので置きました！
best kiai time ever

ありがとうございました！！ ~~ゅ

onegaisimasu!

そしてCircle'dおめでとう！！
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... ize%29.rar

keeeeeeko

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Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-03-13T13:43:49+00:00

@Nyarugaさん
moddingありがとうございます！助かります

@TKSaltさん
Updated

TKSalt wrote:
そしてCircle'dおめでとう！！

ありがとうございますouo！

OnosakiHito

osu!taiko Paragon

6,812 posts

Joined March 2010

OnosakiHito 2014-04-13T00:52:01+00:00

Hi ho, hi ho! Just sneaking in to check the Taikos since this is already osu-iconed.

[

Muzukashii]

SPOILER

00:22:827~00:33:262 - To be honest TK, I think you should follow here more the songs beat instead of the vocal. This part is really calmy, so you should use less notes as well. Acchieving this would be possibly by following only beats at this point. Also, having some 2/1 breaks would be good.
-> You can deleted this note for example 00:23:153 (95) - in this way you have a bigger gap between the notes and less notes in general.
00:23:479 (97) - Could be a don. "to" is low pitched. Note at 00:23:805 would be more emphasized in this way.
00:24:457 - Could be deleted. Again: For having less notes in this part. It is a calmy part, so if you ask me, it's better to map in a calmy way.
00:25:762 - delete
00:27:392 - move to 00:27:229 and add don at 00:27:555 maybe? Or just use from 00:26:577 to 00:28:044 finishers or single kat/don which follow the high pitch in the background.
00:28:370 - delete
00:28:533~00:30:653 - In case you follow my recommendation to follow more the beats, you could do this:

In this way note at 00:30:653 would emphasize the "ni" as kat really nice and as finisher the crash in the song.
00:30:653 - K dK d kkk...

00:33:262 - If you did something I suggested above, this part should be by now better emphasized than before.
00:43:696~00:47:609 - This part is even calmer. Don't you think you should use less notes here? _ _ " No emphasising. I feel nothing when playing. :s
01:00:979 - k d might be better here when considering the pattern constellation.
01:03:751 - Are you sure about not using finisher here?

In general I like the Muzukashii. Nice :3

[

Oni]

SPOILER

Hope its okay if my explanations are short. I don't think I have to tell you why I suggest something since you are already experienced.

00:07:827 (29) - Recommending to delete the note. You mapped to 1/1 and 1/2 mostly and suddenly long pattern with 1/4 appears.
00:08:397 - Move this note to 00:08:560 because of the vocal? I think it fits better.
00:09:050 - ^ 00:09:213
00:09:783 - Maybe just have single K x K here? I feel like this fits better. Personal opinion.
00:22:827~00:33:262 - Same like in Muzukashii. Personally, I just feel nothing when playing first part, this part and upcoming one. Amount of notes is mostly similar. I miss some emphasising. orz
00:32:772 - K K x D might be enough here. ddd d doesn't sound well if you ask me.
00:43:696 - This time I feel difference (and fun?) because you used a SV change.
00:42:229 - This should be finisher while 00:42:392 can be deleted. Afterwards changing this 00:42:555 to kkdK or so might be better.

Oh, I like the kiai~

In general I have to say, that I think you could use the finisher in a way they stand more alone. Maybe it's just me, but bounding them together with other 1/2 patterns make them feel less emphasized. Just my personal opinion. Maybe you want to check this once again since I didn't mentioned all in my mod.

So far everything is fine. Recall me afterwards to do a recheck.

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-14T05:22:35+00:00

thanks for modding OnosakiHito!
Waiting for TKS's reply

@たかしさん
Tagの件ですが、ユーザー名が変わったのでTKSも追加します。
一応TKSaltも残す方向で大丈夫ですか？

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,231 posts

Joined June 2010

kanpakyin 2014-04-14T14:50:18+00:00

Random mod for taiko diffs:

[TK'S Oni]

00:10:598 (50,51) - Personally would prefer using dd here, so this will be a ddddk. I would like to recommend this as there is no any sound, either drum or vocal could fit kkddk well.
00:12:555 (63) - it would be great if you could change this don to kat as kat could fit the high pitch there pretty well.
00:13:533 - add a kat here to fit the high pitch?
00:16:305 (85) - , 00:16:631 (87) - , 00:16:957 (89) - I think you could change these notes to big kat as to correspond to the previous big notes uses: (81,83) This also fits the music pretty good tho.
00:45:164 (263,264,265,266,267,268) - dkdkdk here sounds better to me.
00:52:990 (308,309) - Changed to big don to emphasize the strong accents here?
01:16:957 (474,475,476) - To be honest, the triplet doesn't fit well to the music here, probably just remove the 01:17:039 (475) - , so that it will become a normal 1/2 note?
Kiai part was nicely mapped.

[TK'S Muzu]

00:17:283 (65,66,67) - Again, the triplet sounds weird and doesn't fit to the music, imo. You could probably just remove the middle kat.
00:27:392 (115) - kat?
00:27:718 (116) - and change this to don, if you've done the above one.
00:37:175 (159) - Change this to kat so that the high pitch could be emphasized?
01:10:435 (308,309,310) - weird triplet again....I would prefer using d d ddk instead.

Last edited by kanpakyin 2014-04-15T07:25:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

keeeeeeko

353 posts

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Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-14T16:16:32+00:00

thanks for modding kanpakyin!

@たかしさん
BGが他の譜面と被るのが気になり、スタンダードのみ変えました。
太鼓譜面は前のBGのままにしてあります。

TKS

Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014

1,380 posts

Joined July 2011

TKS 2014-04-15T13:30:50+00:00

Ono

OnosakiHito wrote:
Hi ho, hi ho! Just sneaking in to check the Taikos since this is already osu-iconed.

[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
00:22:827~00:33:262 - To be honest TK, I think you should follow here more the songs beat instead of the vocal. This part is really calmy, so you should use less notes as well. Acchieving this would be possibly by following only beats at this point. Also, having some 2/1 breaks would be good.
-> You can deleted this note for example 00:23:153 (95) - in this way you have a bigger gap between the notes and less notes in general.
00:23:479 (97) - Could be a don. "to" is low pitched. Note at 00:23:805 would be more emphasized in this way.
00:24:457 - Could be deleted. Again: For having less notes in this part. It is a calmy part, so if you ask me, it's better to map in a calmy way.
00:25:762 - delete
00:27:392 - move to 00:27:229 and add don at 00:27:555 maybe? Or just use from 00:26:577 to 00:28:044 finishers or single kat/don which follow the high pitch in the background.
00:28:370 - delete
00:28:533~00:30:653 - In case you follow my recommendation to follow more the beats, you could do this:

In this way note at 00:30:653 would emphasize the "ni" as kat really nice and as finisher the crash in the song.
00:30:653 - K dK d kkk... - i have simplified the pattern by reference to these suggestions.

00:33:262 - If you did something I suggested above, this part should be by now better emphasized than before. - i think that this current pattern is already fine imo. doesnt need a big change.
00:43:696~00:47:609 - This part is even calmer. Don't you think you should use less notes here? _ _ " No emphasising. I feel nothing when playing. :s - deleted some notes.
01:00:979 - k d might be better here when considering the pattern constellation. - i dont prefer this change. because this part has a very basic rhythm(sound).
01:03:751 - Are you sure about not using finisher here? - was mistake. ;_;

In general I like the Muzukashii. Nice :3

[ Oni]
SPOILER
Hope its okay if my explanations are short. I don't think I have to tell you why I suggest something since you are already experienced.

00:07:827 (29) - Recommending to delete the note. You mapped to 1/1 and 1/2 mostly and suddenly long pattern with 1/4 appears. - sure.
00:08:397 - Move this note to 00:08:560 because of the vocal? I think it fits better.
00:09:050 - ^ 00:09:213 - got it.
00:09:783 - Maybe just have single K x K here? I feel like this fits better. Personal opinion. - also nice. but i like curren pattern. x_x
00:22:827~00:33:262 - Same like in Muzukashii. Personally, I just feel nothing when playing first part, this part and upcoming one. Amount of notes is mostly similar. I miss some emphasising. orz - well, i dont want a lot of changes. current pattern is working well for the next part 00:33:262 -
00:32:772 - K K x D might be enough here. ddd d doesn't sound well if you ask me. - i like the current simple sound. this pattern is making a good flow(sound) with 00:33:588 ~
00:43:696 - This time I feel difference (and fun?) because you used a SV change. - basically, i dont want to use a SV change on Muzukashii. SV change on only Oni is working really well imo
00:42:229 - This should be finisher while 00:42:392 can be deleted. Afterwards changing this 00:42:555 to kkdK or so might be better. - hmm i tried it but i feel that weird sound.

Oh, I like the kiai~

In general I have to say, that I think you could use the finisher in a way they stand more alone. Maybe it's just me, but bounding them together with other 1/2 patterns make them feel less emphasized. Just my personal opinion. Maybe you want to check this once again since I didn't mentioned all in my mod. - well, you might felt. my diffs of this time is a little different with my style of conventional. (in particular, about a place of using the finisher.)

So far everything is fine. Recall me afterwards to do a recheck.

kpy

kanpakyin wrote:
Random mod for taiko diffs:

[TK'S Oni]
00:10:598 (50,51) - Personally would prefer using dd here, so this will be a ddddk. I would like to recommend this as there is no any sound, either drum or vocal could fit kkddk well. - 00:10:598 (49,50) - this point still has a bit higher vocal sound "i". so kkddk is better imo.
00:12:555 (63) - it would be great if you could change this don to kat as kat could fit the high pitch there pretty well. - this ddk is intentional pattern with this kkd 00:13:859 (71,72,73) -
00:13:533 - add a kat here to fit the high pitch? - this empty is also intentional pattern. indeed, i placed kat here 00:14:838 (79) -
00:16:305 (85) - , 00:16:631 (87) - , 00:16:957 (89) - I think you could change these notes to big kat as to correspond to the previous big notes uses: (81,83) This also fits the music pretty good tho. - its interesting idea. but it will be major change the flow. i will try this pattern next time xD
00:45:164 (263,264,265,266,267,268) - dkdkdk here sounds better to me. - i think so too. but dkdkdk is a bit bored to me. dkkddk make me fun!
00:52:990 (308,309) - Changed to big don to emphasize the strong accents here? - i wanted to avoid continuity finishers. ;_;
01:16:957 (474,475,476) - To be honest, the triplet doesn't fit well to the music here, probably just remove the 01:17:039 (475) - , so that it will become a normal 1/2 note? - i agree.
Kiai part was nicely mapped.

[TK'S Muzu]
00:17:283 (65,66,67) - Again, the triplet sounds weird and doesn't fit to the music, imo. You could probably just remove the middle kat. - sure.
00:27:392 (115) - kat? - this one has a strictly lower pitch.
00:27:718 (116) - and change this to don, if you've done the above one. - kept. current pattern is fine to me.
00:37:175 (159) - Change this to kat so that the high pitch could be emphasized? - d k k is good fit main melody imo.
01:10:435 (308,309,310) - weird triplet again....I would prefer using d d ddk instead. - i dont think so. also, ddk is a bit hard on this BPM.

thanks a lot Ono, kpy!!

@けええこさん
BGの件了解です。
タグは整合性のためにTKSaltも残していただけるとありがたいです！
そして遅くなって本当に申し訳ありません(T_T)(T_T)(T_T)
アップデートお願いします

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... ize%29.rar

keeeeeeko

353 posts

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Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-15T13:37:56+00:00

Updated

Tagの件了解です！

OnosakiHito

osu!taiko Paragon

6,812 posts

Joined March 2010

OnosakiHito 2014-04-15T21:15:25+00:00

I'm okay with it's current state. Let's go! Bubbled

osu-icon: p/2924764

Looking around osu-iconed sets has paid off I guess. lol
Good luck!

keeeeeeko

353 posts

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Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-15T22:55:07+00:00

Wow thanks!
It's my 1st bubble

BeatofIke

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-04-15T23:00:28+00:00

moe~ ♥

keeeeeeko

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Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-15T23:27:39+00:00

moe moe~o3o

Little

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Joined November 2012

Little 2014-04-15T23:33:38+00:00

yay! gogo \^^/

YGOkid8

osu! Alumni

2,729 posts

Joined February 2009

YGOkid8 2014-04-17T05:16:01+00:00

General:

Consider switching source with Romaji name in tags. As English is the world's official language, it makes more sense to use that so that more users would be able to identify the source when looking at song in Song Select.

Insane:
00:10:435 (1,2,3,4) - Back and forth sliders don't really work very well here, as due to 1/4 there's no time to do the full motion. Try ctrl + g the (1) and the (3) separately. That way there is a consistent descending pattern, and honestly it feels a lot better and is more appropriate.

SPOILER

00:40:598 (4,5,1) - By deleting the (1), moving (4,5) forward by 1/2 then adding a hitcircle where the (4) head originally was, it fits the vocals a lot better. You'll have to reposition some things, but it fits a LOT better.
01:00:979 (2,3) - In the timeline, having hitcircle -> slider (instead of slider -> hitcircle like you have) fits the vocals better.
01:02:609 (1,2) - Like before, back and forth sliders don't work here. Ctrl + g the (2) then reposition so that the slider stream moves into the next slider.
01:05:544 (5) - Your slider ends on a rather strong beat, which is awkward to play. Shorten the slider by 1/2, then add a hitcircle where it originally ended; it fits a lot better.
01:11:414 (2,3) - Same thing as 01:00:979 (2,3) -
01:12:555 (2) - Same as 01:02:609 (1,2) -
01:17:935 (2,3) - Here, slider -> hitcircle instead of hitcircle -> slider fits more.

Hard:
00:12:066 (5) - Consider shortening by 1/2, then adding a hitcircle where it originally ended. It fits music more.
00:22:012 (3) - ^

Normal:

Looks good to me.

Easy:
00:12:392 (1,2) - Not sure why you chose to use reverse 3/4 sliders here. It's not a big deal, but it doesn't really fit the music.
00:16:957 (4) - Having the slider end on such an important beat feels a bit weird. I suggest shortening by 1/1, then adding a hitcircle where it originally ended to fit music more.
00:18:262 (2) - Same with this. 00:19:566 (4) - This one actually works since the white tick it lands on is a weak beat, but the others don't.
01:14:348 (4) - As before.
01:16:957 - Gap here feels awkward.
01:15:979 (5) - Two hitcircles = better.

Apart from some issues, Easy looks and plays pretty nicely.

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

keeeeeeko 2014-04-17T06:44:49+00:00

YGOkid8 wrote:
General:
Consider switching source with Romaji name in tags. As English is the world's official language, it makes more sense to use that so that more users would be able to identify the source when looking at song in Song Select.
Insane:
00:10:435 (1,2,3,4) - Back and forth sliders don't really work very well here, as due to 1/4 there's no time to do the full motion. Try ctrl + g the (1) and the (3) separately. That way there is a consistent descending pattern, and honestly it feels a lot better and is more appropriate.

SPOILER
00:40:598 (4,5,1) - By deleting the (1), moving (4,5) forward by 1/2 then adding a hitcircle where the (4) head originally was, it fits the vocals a lot better. You'll have to reposition some things, but it fits a LOT better.
01:00:979 (2,3) - In the timeline, having hitcircle -> slider (instead of slider -> hitcircle like you have) fits the vocals better.
01:02:609 (1,2) - Like before, back and forth sliders don't work here. Ctrl + g the (2) then reposition so that the slider stream moves into the next slider.
01:05:544 (5) - Your slider ends on a rather strong beat, which is awkward to play. Shorten the slider by 1/2, then add a hitcircle where it originally ended; it fits a lot better.
01:11:414 (2,3) - Same thing as 01:00:979 (2,3) -
01:12:555 (2) - Same as 01:02:609 (1,2) -
01:17:935 (2,3) - Here, slider -> hitcircle instead of hitcircle -> slider fits more.

Hard:
00:12:066 (5) - Consider shortening by 1/2, then adding a hitcircle where it originally ended. It fits music more.
00:22:012 (3) - ^ chage 1/2 & add circle

Normal:
Looks good to me.

All fixed!
thanks for modding!

Waiting for Cloud's reply

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-04-17T13:41:32+00:00

YGOkid8 wrote:
Easy:
00:12:392 (1,2) - Not sure why you chose to use reverse 3/4 sliders here. It's not a big deal, but it doesn't really fit the music. I think it fits with the music. A 3/4 reverse slider covers the important beats in the rhythmic idea in the instrumentals. oo.o..o.
00:16:957 (4) - Having the slider end on such an important beat feels a bit weird. I suggest shortening by 1/1, then adding a hitcircle where it originally ended to fit music more. I see what you mean, but to me, this note feels like a build toward a release, because of how the rhythm before it builds by subdividing: 1 2 3+4, which gives me the feeling that 4 should be held through to the downbeat. Releasing at 00:17:283 just doesn't feel as good in my opinion.
00:18:262 (2) - Same with this. 00:19:566 (4) - This one actually works since the white tick it lands on is a weak beat, but the others don't. Well maybe this goes against conventions of mapping Easy... but I'm trying to emphasize the claps more, and I think it plays fine.
01:14:348 (4) - As before. Same as 00:16:957 (4)
01:16:957 - Gap here feels awkward. I don't think so. See if the change I made according to the below point makes it any better.
01:15:979 (5) - Two hitcircles = better. Changed to circle and slider.

Apart from some issues, Easy looks and plays pretty nicely.

Thanks.

Cloud's Easy

osu file format v12

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ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
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keeeeeeko

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keeeeeeko 2014-04-17T13:50:34+00:00

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YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2014-04-19T03:05:48+00:00

Easy:
00:12:392 (1,2) - I can see where you're coming from, but if you listen to the music carefully the synthy instrumental thing (which is what I'm assuming you're mapping to) is a repeating pattern of 4 notes. It starts at 00:12:392 - , then starts again from 00:13:044 - and again 00:13:696 - . The last time is also a repeat, except there's a note change on 00:14:675 - .

For that reason, I believe a rhythm like this would be more appropriate. The change at the end is to show that there's actually a change in the music here, and not exactly the same. If you prefer, repeating the same rhythm as the first time also works. Not telling you to make the rhythm like this, it's just to better show where I'm getting at.

00:15:001 (1,2,3,4) - Reading your response, if you feel that way, what about replacing the (3) with two hitcircles instead, followed by the 1/2 shortening of (4)? That way you get the build up in tension, you're consistent with (1,2) (as you're mapping the same thing in the music), and the slider 1/4 has a greater effect as it's following a hitcircle rather than a slider.

00:17:935 (1,2,3,4) - I dunno just messing around here, this feels a lot more natural if you move them 1/2 earlier, then stick a hitcircle on the end. Well I'll let you decide, but my main problem now is inconsistency with 00:17:609 - here, as you've mapped the same thing in two completely different ways.

01:01:631 (5) - Playing this again, consider starting it 1/2 earlier (ending in the same place), so it continues on from (4) better.
01:12:066 (5) - ^
01:16:957 - The main reason the gap feels awkward is again, because of inconsistency between how you mapped the same tune earlier on in the song. I'm not saying you have to use exactly the same rhythm, but you should keep the idea the same so that when played it feels familiar yet still different.

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-04-19T04:15:10+00:00

YGOkid8 wrote:
Easy:
00:12:392 (1,2) - I can see where you're coming from, but if you listen to the music carefully the synthy instrumental thing (which is what I'm assuming you're mapping to) is a repeating pattern of 4 notes. It starts at 00:12:392 - , then starts again from 00:13:044 - and again 00:13:696 - . The last time is also a repeat, except there's a note change on 00:14:675 - . I hear the synth as a repeating 1+2+_+4+ which is why beats 1 and 4 and the + of 2 (because of space after it) feel the strongest to me, hence why I mapped it as a reverse 3/4 slider. It doesn't make sense to me to put anything on beat 3 because I am following this rhythm.

For that reason, I believe a rhythm like this would be more appropriate. The change at the end is to show that there's actually a change in the music here, and not exactly the same. If you prefer, repeating the same rhythm as the first time also works. Not telling you to make the rhythm like this, it's just to better show where I'm getting at.

00:15:001 (1,2,3,4) - Reading your response, if you feel that way, what about replacing the (3) with two hitcircles instead, followed by the 1/2 shortening of (4)? That way you get the build up in tension, you're consistent with (1,2) (as you're mapping the same thing in the music), and the slider 1/4 has a greater effect as it's following a hitcircle rather than a slider. Star rating exceeds 3.25 if I do this ;_;

00:17:935 (1,2,3,4) - I dunno just messing around here, this feels a lot more natural if you move them 1/2 earlier, then stick a hitcircle on the end. Well I'll let you decide, but my main problem now is inconsistency with 00:17:609 - here, as you've mapped the same thing in two completely different ways. Changed.

01:01:631 (5) - Playing this again, consider starting it 1/2 earlier (ending in the same place), so it continues on from (4) better. I think it's better to start the slider on a beat, because it is stronger than the vocal pickup. Starting 1/2 earlier could actually be more confusing in my opinion.
01:12:066 (5) - ^ ^
01:16:957 - The main reason the gap feels awkward is again, because of inconsistency between how you mapped the same tune earlier on in the song. I'm not saying you have to use exactly the same rhythm, but you should keep the idea the same so that when played it feels familiar yet still different. Changed to match the rhythm of the other part.

Thanks again.

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