Hi,Laurier,PM mod req. A bit late,sorry.
[General]
00:40:667 (5) - Perhaps can stack 00:39:261 (4) ?
00:43:011 (4) - (129|308)? I think about place here is read to easy. (Make keep the same DS.)
00:43:480 (1,2,3) - A bit not a smooth flow,imo.
01:16:044 (5,6) - Select all use ctrl+ g , I think it is good flow.
01:17:279 (3) - Ctrl+g?
01:55:701 (1,2) - Maybe you can try to use 1/6 or 1/8 sliders,it will fit the music.
01:57:896 (1) - Move to (484|160)?
02:01:371 (5) - Try to use Ctrl+g?
02:02:652 (2) - 02:22:042 (5) - This part change different vocal,try to add NC?
02:38:726 (8) - Feel stack 02:37:110 (6) is flow better.
02:39:187 (1) - I feel no need add finish at this here,listen,thier is no strong beat.
02:48:418 (1) - The vocal is turn up,so I suggest add finish this here.
03:28:644 (1) - Forget add finish? I feel add it is good effect.
03:35:675 (5) - A bit close 03:34:269 (1) ,move a bit?
03:38:839 (4) - Place a bit far,it will feel fit the vocal?
04:02:394 (1) - Strong beat,add finish?
05:22:691 (5) - Stack 05:23:395 (1) ?
05:50:570 (2,3,4,5) - Feel not very flow,imo. Recommended move to (352|260)?
06:44:474 (7) - Try to use Ctrl+g?
06:46:030 (6) - (212|348),be a triangle and good flow.
07:46:669 (3) - Try to use Ctrl+g?
08:35:718 (8) - Feel this slider have a bit noisy ,turn down 20% or 30%? (Because front part is quiet,this suddenly have a noise sound slider ,I feel not fit here.)
08:58:856 (4) - I feel this a strong beat,maybe can add finish at the head.
09:53:749 (3) - Suddenly come a big jump,try add NC at this here?
12:42:081 (6,7) - As the same 08:35:718 (8).
13:08:475 (4) - I think this rhythm is good better : (Listen the vocal , is from the 13:08:475 start. )
14:07:477 (3) - Move a bit ,be a pentagon?
15:49:115 (2) - Nazi,stack crooked off.
15:49:936 (2) - (220|336)? (I think about you do not cover the slider.)
[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.Star for you ~!
- Red words: Should be fix it.
- Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my personal opinion.
[General]
00:40:667 (5) - Perhaps can stack 00:39:261 (4) ?
00:43:011 (4) - (129|308)? I think about place here is read to easy. (Make keep the same DS.)
00:43:480 (1,2,3) - A bit not a smooth flow,imo.
01:16:044 (5,6) - Select all use ctrl+ g , I think it is good flow.
01:17:279 (3) - Ctrl+g?
01:55:701 (1,2) - Maybe you can try to use 1/6 or 1/8 sliders,it will fit the music.
01:57:896 (1) - Move to (484|160)?
02:01:371 (5) - Try to use Ctrl+g?
02:02:652 (2) - 02:22:042 (5) - This part change different vocal,try to add NC?
02:38:726 (8) - Feel stack 02:37:110 (6) is flow better.
02:39:187 (1) - I feel no need add finish at this here,listen,thier is no strong beat.
02:48:418 (1) - The vocal is turn up,so I suggest add finish this here.
03:28:644 (1) - Forget add finish? I feel add it is good effect.
03:35:675 (5) - A bit close 03:34:269 (1) ,move a bit?
03:38:839 (4) - Place a bit far,it will feel fit the vocal?
04:02:394 (1) - Strong beat,add finish?
05:22:691 (5) - Stack 05:23:395 (1) ?
05:50:570 (2,3,4,5) - Feel not very flow,imo. Recommended move to (352|260)?
06:44:474 (7) - Try to use Ctrl+g?
06:46:030 (6) - (212|348),be a triangle and good flow.
07:46:669 (3) - Try to use Ctrl+g?
08:35:718 (8) - Feel this slider have a bit noisy ,turn down 20% or 30%? (Because front part is quiet,this suddenly have a noise sound slider ,I feel not fit here.)
08:58:856 (4) - I feel this a strong beat,maybe can add finish at the head.
09:53:749 (3) - Suddenly come a big jump,try add NC at this here?
12:42:081 (6,7) - As the same 08:35:718 (8).
13:08:475 (4) - I think this rhythm is good better : (Listen the vocal , is from the 13:08:475 start. )
14:07:477 (3) - Move a bit ,be a pentagon?
15:49:115 (2) - Nazi,stack crooked off.
15:49:936 (2) - (220|336)? (I think about you do not cover the slider.)
[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.Star for you ~!
