Hey :3 I finally got time for this map >.>
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- 00:02:560 (3) - Clap sound really stands out here and doesn't merge with with the music, maybe you can remove the clap here? all whistles here is enough because there not that much instrument beats here.
- 00:05:997 (2,1) - Hmm maybe symmetry is a little off here, but judging by my personal experience of you, I'm not sure if this was intended. Anyways, I highly recommend you make it symmetrical.
- 00:10:997 (3) - Bad overlap around this time how about you move it to the same spot as 00:13:497 (3) - to fix that here? I think that would work better for this spot hmm and maybe fix the spacing.
- 00:15:685 (2) - Since your going for a more symmetry design here, I would recommend move the note down to form like this : http://puu.sh/6NOIK.jpg but your choice.
- 00:28:185 (3) - I highly say add a new combo here, so reappearing notes like 00:29:747 (4) - become a little bit more readable and to prevent some really long combo's (this combo seems short but last a long time in music)
- 00:52:247 (2,3) - Maybe you want to arrange the notes like this : since you like symmetry so much :> http://puu.sh/6P2LV.jpg well the slider 3 is your choice of design just needs to be symmetrical
- 00:59:435 (3) - Can you try to move this note, so the end of this slider is at the same start of 00:57:247 (3) - personally the symmetry doesn't look good when you have overlaps :c
- 01:18:185 (4) - Place at same spot as 01:14:747 (2) - please, and rearrange the other notes.
- 00:09:435 (4) - I'm sorry but this feels uncomfortable to play, because when you reverse the slider you have to move up again and I was kinda looking for a back-forth movement here, what you should really do is rotate I believe clockwise and aim for this : http://puu.sh/6P39R.jpg that way you have smoother circular movement.
- 00:39:591 - I am starting to hear a lot of clap beats here perhaps you want to add a note here and a clap? or probably revise the rhythm and put a slider here instead
- 01:00:841 (1,2) - For this part, the normal hits don't fit well, I suggest you change the sample to soft for these two notes and maybe decrease the volume by 5%
- 01:20:372 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps you can do a different pattern like change the slider shape rather than copy the same one from 00:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - can be little boring sometimes to play.
- 01:27:560 (5) - Maybe you can make this a separate combo? to add some spice and pizzazz
- 00:01:153 (2,3,4,5) - What a hard way to start the relaxing part , anyways maybe try something more simple like sliders rather than this? I know your trying to make a pentagon owo
- 00:08:810 (3) - Maybe you can make it more exciting by Ctrl+G this? (actually I find it easier owo when you Ctrl+G because you have to just hold and move your cursor slightly.
- 00:57:872 (4) - Same as above, I highly recommend you do the same there here
- 00:37:560 (2) - I recommend you increase spacing here, feels rather too easy if you put slider's that close (and a slider jump would fit here owo since you do them alot like this : http://puu.sh/6P4fQ.jpg
- 01:00:841 (1,2,3) - Same as normal, soft sampleset is better for these two notes.
- 01:17:716 (4) - Slider's like these should have jump's after them in my personal oppinion, that being said can you Ctrl+G this one also?
- 01:20:372 (4) - Use the next slider to form this slider, basically copy the next slider and flip it by 180 degrees here, that way you get the sense of a little jump here. 01:20:216 (3) - oh and might need to change position of this note too http://puu.sh/6P4DK.jpg
- 00:09:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really like how all these notes are closely squished together, maybe you can move them all farther so they don't touch but still keep the pattern you are going for?
- 00:14:122 (7) - I think a better place to stack it would be at the end of 00:13:653 (5) - maybe little better to read that way owo then that back and forth movement maybe try this : http://puu.sh/6P5rq.jpg ?
- 00:19:747 (1,2,3,4) - Uh, you should remove the two circles at the end and move the slider to the white tick and put triplets somewhere else http://puu.sh/6P5Bm.jpg find it musically off with current
- 00:54:747 (9,10) - These notes can be placed farther here and then a jump after 10 can be occurred because it's not much clicking and more hold, about this http://puu.sh/6P5Ki.jpg
- 00:02:403 - Add note and put it around here : http://puu.sh/6P6bi.jpg to match with 00:00:997 (2,3,4) - so there is back and forth movement in here? and there?
- 00:12:403 (3) - Maybe a bit too much upward movement, better to place around http://puu.sh/6P6pm.jpg is much better here, and its match spacing of 00:07:403 (3) - and maybe you can move 00:07:403 (3) - to http://puu.sh/6P6n5.jpg would be better.
- 00:15:685 (5) - Maybe add new combo here?
- 00:21:622 (5) - Place at here : for better flow and a nice jump to next note : http://puu.sh/6P6vA.jpg
- 00:26:622 (5) - If you do above, you must place this note like this : http://puu.sh/6P6yq.jpg
- 00:25:372 (5) - Wouldn't hurt to place them a little farther I guess : http://puu.sh/6P6Es.jpg like that.
- 00:38:185 (1) - I think finish for these notes would be better.
- 00:33:185 (1) - Use Finish instead of whistle for the start.
- 00:47:403 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 is little major and harsh, how about you use triangular jump pattern here intead like : http://puu.sh/6P6Ro.jpg for less harsh jump?
- 01:18:028 (6) - Little hard to read maybe, should place them like this : http://puu.sh/6P6ZW.jpg would be better.