Squirrel wrote:

hi there!
mod from my queue. ~ c:
sorry for the delay! ><

General

1. 
   I'm not too familiar with this, so I'm not sure how this affects rankability.. o-o Silly aimod :3

Insane
haha, I usually don't mod diffs I can't play, but I'll try. Sorry if this mod sucks (I'll be focusing on visuals, I guess..). |:

1. 00:01:361 (3) - a jump is fine, but it seems a bit too much to me. maybe try placing it differently or try sth like this -
   screen

   
   I like where it currently is and I don't think it's too much to manage, especially since it's all circular flow. Also: blankets, blankets!
2. 00:27:028 (7) - hmh, maybe it's just me, but this feels slightly off. replace with short stream? Sure, go ahead and try that 1/6 triplet out of nowhere orz
3. 00:47:695 (1,2) - blanket this maybe? looks better to me Possibly, but I feel it plays much better than if I forced a blanket here. Playability > aesthetics on this point.
4. 00:58:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - if you round this out so it perfectly blankets 00:59:861 (2) - this could look much nicer, I think
   screen

   
   Ooohh looks very pretty, but the distance to (2) would be too great and ruin the set up that I'm going for!
5. 04:22:695 (3) - ctrl+g? Possibly, but this plays just fine and it would mess up the following pattern otherwise. Sometimes directional changes can work really nicely.
6. 04:38:028 (1,2,3) - movement doesn't match with the previous. instead of moving up, moving down feels nicer (imo) haha i dunno about that. Plays nice for me

sorry that's all. :c

Hope I was of some help, good luck to you! Thanks for checking~
*squee*~

1. 00:10:028 (2) - 和00:08:695 (1) - 不要連接比較好 ,可以將00:10:028 (2) - 左移1個grid.
2. 00:29:695 (3) - 將這個搬到 00:28:361 - 會否更好? 因為00:33:695 - 和 00:29:361 - 相似 (聲調上)
3. 01:08:695 (3) - 和 01:09:361 (4) - 不同. 01:09:361 (4) - 明顯的重音 但01:08:695 (3) - 不明顯. 可以試試將01:08:695 (3) - 改做圈 (單個)
4. 01:12:695 - 可以試試這個節奏.
   
5. 01:42:695 - 至 01:55:028 - 好似用過多1/4 位. 但節奏比較慢 我覺得你這樣的節奏有點快. (和02:38:028 - (02:53:695 - )至 03:04:695 - 相反)
6. 04:03:028 (5) - remove finish
7. 04:40:028 (2,3) - 改做反彈的slider 好似比較溫和.

1. 00:25:195 (2) - repeat once time. may be match the rhythm well.
2. 00:42:695 - there is strange. Rhythm is not separate here but you make space 3/4 here. You can try this and this is my sytle.
   
3. 01:47:361 (1,2) - there is not overlap in the slidertail.
4. 02:33:028 - add note? Rhythm is not separate here. IMO, no important reason to space here.
5. 03:42:695 (2) - remove it can make 03:43:028 (3) - outstanding.
6. 03:49:583 (2,3) - should be 03:49:611 - / 03:49:861 -
   

1. 00:06:028 - remove green line. repeated.
2. 00:14:028 - ^
3. 01:43:695 (3,4) - Ctrl + G , I think it is match rhythm as well.
4. 02:52:361 (3,4,5) - balance the distance. same at 03:03:028 (4,5,6) -

tellertheworld wrote:

From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

[Gerenal]

1. remove the fhana - Hajimari no Sayonara (Unsfamiliar).osb if you not need SB.

Insane

1. 00:06:028 - remove green line. repeated.
2. 00:14:028 - ^ Hey, you're right! Fixed both :3
3. 01:43:695 (3,4) - Ctrl + G , I think it is match rhythm as well. Ctrl + g the rhythm? I think this rhythm works pretty well; separating the 2 bass notes with sliders 01:43:695 (3,5).
4. 02:52:361 (3,4,5) - balance the distance. same at 03:03:028 (4,5,6) - Ok fine you guys win! Fixed~

Nice mapset~
Good luck
(╯°□°)╯彡 Thanks for mod and star Teller!

Indeed wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

Uuuu song so pretty, I have nothing else to add <3

[Insane]

• HUUUU THIS DIFFICULTY ;w; There's literally next to nothing I can add about this one, the placement, flow and everything is nice. Only thing is that long without a break makes Johnny a dull boy. Idk, add a break in the beginning? That's literally all I have to add, I looked at and played this map like 7 times. *as soon as I get star I gib to dis map* Who's johnny? owo
  Anyway, I couldn't fit a break anywhere else! I really didn't want to leave the bit after the first chorus or the start of the second verse unmapped ;w; Also the difficulty was intentionally decreased during the guitar part (after the bridge) to account for the long play time :3
  
  Thanks for your feedback, it's greatly appreciated!

xChippy wrote:

77777 years later that's a long time
yay a mod arrives! phew haven't mod in a while owo
Absolutely everything is optional owo, as the map seems cool as-is
[Insane]

1. 00:24:528 (9) - Instead of stacking this on (1), you could also stack this under 00:23:695 (6) - end. This way you have that similiar flow that you used here aswell 00:23:695 (6,7) - which makes it comfy to play. Also you have a nice jump for (1) this way as it has a pretty loud and clear beat I see where you're coming from but they way it is now plays super cool for me but seriously, I was just trying to isolate the beats at 00:24:528 (9,1) - with the stack.
2. 00:30:528 (2) - You could make this a blanket with (3), looks neater~. Also it doesnt seem to give any trouble doing it. I have more than enough blankets! It's scary... Honestly though, it plays better this way for some reason and it's hard to make the spacing right without (even uglier) overlap.
3. 00:31:361 (3) - Hmm.. maybe move this a little bit down and ease the angle of the slider a bit, as the current angle from (3) to (4) might be a bit sharp. something like this: k. well it plays exactly the same for me.. and yesss cool skin
   
   box

   yeee such flashy skin owo
4. 01:01:695 (7,8) - naziiii, Hmm... maybe do some tweeking with those two so it will become a square, it will make it look neater and gives the map more structure owo. b-but the spacing from 6 to 7 is too large
   
   box

   
5. 01:30:195 (4) - Just my personal opinion here. You could do a ctrl+g here, for me atleast it flows better and it flows nicely with an oval flow to (5) this way. Just my opinion owo I feel it's nice to have it in the same direction as 01:28:695 (1). Also having it the same direction as 01:30:695 (5) leaves an awkward 'hanging' gap which I don't particularly want here.
6. 01:36:695 (1) - a bit weird for this to be a single NC o-o, maybe just remove the NC here? 01:37:028 (2) -. There is a sv change!
7. 01:44:028 (4) - Instead of stacking this under (3) you could move it around 34|14. This way its parallel to 01:44:195 (5,6) - imo flows nice like this owo orz I feel bad for denying like everything, but this was intentionally not parallel. Having it slightly above makes you move your cursor over the (3) slider head into the next pattern for which I create circular flow 01:44:195 (5,6,1). Yes, the flow is real.
8. 02:18:028 (2,3,4) - TBH I expected some bigger jumps here, as this is a perfect place to build tension and so some jumps. I came up with this on the spot: Well I couldnt get (6) on the picture but its ctrl+g too. Its pretty simple just some ctrl+g's, since I'm lazy lol. If you can come up with something else would also be cool! Hmm, really? I like the smaller jump and steady feel to it owo
   
   box

   
9. 02:55:361 (5) - maybe do a blanket here owo? will look neater. If you agree with this. Copy this slider and use it here too 02:55:861 (6) - with a blanket owo Ok!
   
   box

   
10. 02:59:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Nice tension build up owo! I like it. but starting here 03:03:028 (4,5,6,7,8) - after those 1/4 you go back to 1/2 IMO you should keep it up with the 1/4 as it gives a reaaaaally nice effect Could work nice as well, but I think it's fine how it currently is. I was actually just following the lyrics for that part because it felt weird to leave it out.
    Maybe use a rythm like this for example:
    
    If you agree with above, you could use something like this for the pattern:
    
    box

    
    uuhm yeah a bit messy but here coordinates if you need them: My god... that looks crazy! It's the skin!
    (7) stacked on (1)
    (8) is just changed from a circle to a slider
    (9) 312|60
11. 03:14:528 - consider adding a note here as the guitar is still playing. imo it really fits with the music as the guitar is doing a Hammer If I hear it correctly.Ah, I think it's just the guitar changing pitch ever so slightly. It's not as prominent as 03:14:861 for example.
12. 04:08:361 (6,1) - naziii move this a liiiitle bit to the right as it is really close to (5) now which makes it looks a bit untidy. around the same as (7) They're not touching (with default skin)
13. 04:19:695 (1) - remove the NC here as it is a bit weird to start the NC here and to be consistent with 04:30:361 (2) - would be cool if you use the same NC meassure in the latter one for the whole pattern yeah possobly, but for this pattern in particular I added a new combo because of the funny two-stack thing I tried. i.e. isolating patterns. That sole combo with the slider is only there because of the new measure

Gooood luck desu owo Thanks, thanks! Sorry for declining to change most things. Again, thanks for taking the time to take a look. First mod from Chippy I believe hehe

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Mod!

INSANE

00:03:028 (3) - suggest removing NC on this note because the sudden change in color can be confusing for players to interpret, especially when there is a jump right after this The new combo is meant to signify that jump by isolating 00:03:028 (1,2) out of the previous anti-jump(s).

00:17:861 (4) - suggest adding a note here since the vocal does end here. (could stack on top of 00:17:695 (3) - ) I'm assuming you meant 00:17:861, but really if you add a note there it feels a bit strange, especially since it is emphasised by the piano at 00:18:028 (4).

00:46:528 (2) - try stacking this on top of 00:47:028 (5) - . that way, the triangular pattern can be identified more easily as the notes only revolve around that pattern Perhaps, but why do I need to revolve around a triangle?

01:21:861 (5,6) - Ctrl + G might make the flow slightly better Ehhhh? I have to disagree with you there sorry ;w; The way the 01:21:361 (4) slider is aimed down necessitates that the note immediately following it is in the same vector. If I were to swap (5) and (6) as you suggested it would be detrimental to the flow I've tried to build up, in my honest opinion.

02:10:528 (6) - suggest adding a note here to keep the rhythm flowing, isntead of having a break when there is vocal. a good suggestion would be stack a note on top of 02:11:028 (8) - For some reason I feel the vocal isn't snapped to 1/4, and the vocal is mainly emphasised by that clap.

02:19:028 (5,6) - I dont want to ruin your style and make bad changes to it, but are you sure a 1/8 slider jump would be appropriate? Like I mention to you in-game, I've mapped a 90 bpm song as if it were 180 bpm. So then 1/8 is essentially 1/4 :3

02:47:861 (7) - might sound better if clap was added to the end of this slider Yeah I sort of have to agree with you there. Even though I thought a clap wasn't really prominent enough in the song, it really does sound strange without one.

03:26:028 (1) - suggest adding finish on this note to emphasize the final finish cymbal sound Added~

04:11:028 (1) - you kept streams at combos of 8s before, so I suggest to remove NC just for consistency I actually changed stream spacing a bit here to ease into the next slider.
04:16:361 (7) - I suggest ctrl + g at this slider, the opposite flow somehow feels better to me when I tried it I don't see the problem here in terms of flow. You're a mouse player too, right?

Good luck, hope I helped! Thanks! I really appreciate you spending the time to look over the map

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[_Crystal] wrote:

Hi! From my queue! Hi hi o/ I don't even remember posting in your queue, so this was a pleasant surprise!
sorry for late!
(if you have problem understanding what i say, poke me ingame and i will explain )

[Insane]
00:15:695 (6,7,8,9) - the jumps are too hard since it's just the beginning of the song? Ehh? It's 1/1 and easy to hit imo.
00:22:861 (3) - i think you'd better keep some distance to 00:22:528 (2) - , for better reading the notes. i suggest x:368 y:244 Hmm, I think it's fine here since I used my normal distance snap (1.2x)
00:49:695 (3) - NC? :o why? The 1/1 is quite readable even without a new combo.
01:11:195 (4) - use 1 circle+1 slider instead? the reverse makes no sense with the music, imo The reason I used a reverse is so that I can emulate the hold effect for the vocals and that sound effect I can hear Plus, the beats on 01:11:361 and 01:11:528 aren't as strong
02:38:528 (4) - looks weird, imo ;w; i suggest x:264 y:220 B-but it's just a simple stack!
02:40:028 (1) - stack the head to 02:39:695 (2), it seems better Hmm, well for this particular pattern I wanted the player to move their cursor after playing 02:39:695 (2); it feels much more comfortable to play this way, rather than a stack.

nice map! take my star!
hope it helps.. lol Yes! Of course any help is appreciated Thanks~