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Sakaue Nachi wrote:

Meramipop wrote:

我觉得hard做的有些难了, 又是小圈 要不然我做个hard然后把那个图改成insane吧。。
0.0 mod我迟点看,话说你真的帮我做个hard吗_(:з」∠)_
hard很好做啊, 只有两分钟应该没问题的说
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Sakaue Nachi

Meramipop wrote:

hard很好做啊, 只有两分钟应该没问题的说
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Sakaue Nachi

Meramipop wrote:

我来mod了0.0

标题后面的每个逗号后面加个空格.. 并且据歌词里唱的是kutsu no ne ("音"这个字有好几种读法, 主要是oto和ne.. 吧)

所以改成 Kutsu no Ne o, Hibikasete, Sono Te o 已改

Hard:
00:18:724 (1,2) - 把这个滑条的曲率缩小一点看起来好一点 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465902 已改
00:22:388 (1) - 这个形状好看一点? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465906 这个和之后那个对称的
00:31:319 (6) - 和前面的隔得太近了, 往左边移上40左右的距离比较好 搞远了一点
00:32:234 (3,4) - 这里我觉得应该改成这个节奏 什么节奏?没图。。。
00:39:104 (2,3) - 不是正方形啊 fixed
00:41:165 (2,3,4) - 这里可以弄个逐渐减速的什么的。。。 貌似可以有
00:51:699 (1) - 我觉得这样好看一点 http://xiangce.baidu.com/picture/detail ... 2f8acfbd4d 嗯好
00:58:111 (5,3) - 这两个滑条可以配合一下 http://xiangce.baidu.com/picture/detail ... 2ecaab14a7 ^
01:08:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个梗好难啊 还行吧。。。
01:30:856 (2) - 这个移到x:64 y:264左右
01:32:230 (1) - 把滑条曲率缩小一点, 和(2)对称 fixed
01:34:062 (2,3,4) - 这个跳的好大 改小了点
01:35:665 (4) - 像这样摆 http://xiangce.baidu.com/picture/detail ... rom=dialog 嗯好
01:44:595 (7,8) - 这个跳摆成这样https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1465938 好,顺便那个滑条拉到蓝线感觉良好
01:45:512 (2) - 这个也跳的太远了, 放在x:292 y:48附近好一些 后面的滑条也放到中间去 摆近了点
01:52:152 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 好难啊这个 缩小了些。。。
02:02:686 (1,2,3) - 最后这里的重复打起来有些不舒服。。 感觉最后节奏是重复没什么问题吧。。
Thank you~
[ Lilith ]
你好Nachi~
随机mod,只是建议!

[Sharlo's Normal]

01:04:751 (4) - Move end of slider to white tick

01:24:444 (1) - Repeat (1) two times

01:32:688 (2) - I would put like this

[Hard]

好~

我喜欢很多!GL!
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我的diff
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Title:Kutsu no Ne o, Hibikasete, Sono Te o
TitleUnicode:靴の音を、響かせて、その手を
Artist:Meramipop
ArtistUnicode:めらみぽっぷ
Creator:Sakaue Nachi
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Sharlo

Meramipop wrote:

我来mod了0.0

标题后面的每个逗号后面加个空格.. 并且据歌词里唱的是kutsu no ne ("音"这个字有好几种读法, 主要是oto和ne.. 吧)

所以改成 Kutsu no Ne o, Hibikasete, Sono Te o
罗马音是我问KSHR拿的
他大概没仔细听曲子?
我也觉得要根据歌词来标注罗马音
回头我再问问他/
RandF
from in-game request~

good job meramipop!
let me mod your map, too (and recheck a little)

[merami's Hard]
  1. 00:34:066 (2) - start at 00:34:295?
  2. 00:40:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer to conform DS
  3. 01:01:774 (1) - rotete 15 degrees anticlockwise for smoother cursor moving
  4. 01:42:076 (3) - I prefer this (triplet is better, imo)
[Sharlo's Normal]
  1. 01:04:751 (4) - end at 01:05:896
  2. 02:02:914 (3) - end at 02:03:601
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:44:142 (1,2) - swap NC
  2. 00:45:287 (4,5,6) - stack in common with other parts
  3. 01:18:032 (2,1) - how about stack?
mmm, I think "without leaf" is not suitable for this song's tags...
good luck <3
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

RandomEffect wrote:

from in-game request~
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:44:142 (1,2) - swap NC I think it is ok now
  2. 00:45:287 (4,5,6) - stack in common with other parts OK
  3. 01:18:032 (2,1) - how about stack? OK
mmm, I think "without leaf" is not suitable for this song's tags... removed,yeah it's unnecessary
good luck <3
Thank you~
MeraMiPoP_old

RandomEffect wrote:

[merami's Hard]
  1. 00:34:066 (2) - start at 00:34:295? I think my rhythm can add some variation against the music repeat, so no change
  2. 00:40:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer to conform DS moved the note to the bottom
  3. 01:01:774 (1) - rotete 15 degrees anticlockwise for smoother cursor moving keep this for the square at slider end
  4. 01:42:076 (3) - I prefer this (triplet is better, imo) ok~
mmm, I think "without leaf" is not suitable for this song's tags... 凋叶棕= withered leaf (not "without" ww)
good luck <3
diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 06..mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 94977
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Kutsu no Ne o, Hibikasete, Sono Te o
TitleUnicode:靴の音を、響かせて、その手を
Artist:Meramipop
ArtistUnicode:めらみぽっぷ
Creator:Sakaue Nachi
Version:merami's Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:zun rd sounds 明治十七年の上海アリス sharlo hong meirin irodori
BeatmapID:394481
BeatmapSetID:141354

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CircleSize:4
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Sellenite
BBQ
好歌

[Sharlo's Normal]
有些是会改了你的节奏的,请尝试一下再判断是否使用
我觉得normal节奏可以丰富点,歌词与歌词之间的鼓点并不用空,而且这不是长歌,如00:51:240、01:16:887、01:20:551、01:24:215、01:25:131、01:26:963后面三个白线 etc,请尽量填满它,使歌更漂亮,只留下finish前一条的白线空起来

00:42:539 (3) - 头finish
01:04:751 (4) - 我觉得是拉短了,听起来节奏好像被切断一样,建议拉到01:05:896
01:10:704 (3) - 为何也是要切断两部分...既然是跟歌词,建议把01:10:933填起来,3用1/2滑条代替
01:12:307 (3) - 这个单点太空了,歌词还没唱完呢。后面节奏直接无视了01:12:765和01:13:223,建议拉成一条滑条或滑条折返
01:46:198 add note,有歌词和鼓点,kiai不加太浪费

[merami's Hard]
slider tick rate+1?很多tick经过鼓点
有些看起来是用whistle代替finish的,但finish比whistle听起来好很多,建议每段重音都用finish

00:17:579 (4,5) - 考虑一下尾stack?00:18:151这里有个音,我觉得是好机会
00:29:372 (5) - 尾finish,回音的感觉很好
00:44:371 (1) - 头finish
00:59:026 (2) - 头finish
01:05:438 (5) - add whistle?好像听起来不错
01:13:681 (2) - 头finish
01:28:337 (1) - 头最好加一下finish,然后用绿线把音降低,这里BGM也有类似finish的声音,但就这么加上去太吵
01:34:519 (4) - change to finish
01:35:664 (2) - add finish
01:49:175 (5) - 跳一下?
01:50:320 (2) - change to finish
02:02:914 (4) - 尾加whistle?
02:04:517 突然空了一下感觉不好,建议把它填充了

[Lunatic]
关于whistle..可能下得比较随意,玩着突然出来一个whistle会很不习惯,要不整首歌都适当下一些whistle,而不是某个地方突然加一两个,有些明显可以加whistle却没有加,以下说要加的whistle可能会说漏

00:17:922 这里有音,但滑条却在00:18:037这停,有点怪怪的
00:22:159 有音。建议加个note,三连,或者00:22:045 (7) - 改成滑条也可以
00:29:486 ^
00:34:295 (5) - whistle
00:37:960 (3) - 头whistle
00:39:791 (5) - whistle
00:42:081 (4) - 为什么突然转clap呢..改为whistle
00:47:118 有音
01:01:774 ^
01:09:102 (5) - whistle
01:10:934 (5) - ^
01:12:766 (4) - 头和折返都可以加whistle
01:16:430 (6) - whistle
01:18:261 (3) - 头whistle
01:21:926 (3) - whistle
01:23:758 (5) - ^
01:25:589 (3) - 头whistle
01:30:856 (2) - 尾whistle
接下来就到kiai了,请把该加的whistle都加了吧,这里就省略了

hope it help you!
good luck~
MeraMiPoP_old

Sellenite wrote:

[merami's Hard]
slider tick rate+1?很多tick经过鼓点
有些看起来是用whistle代替finish的,但finish比whistle听起来好很多,建议每段重音都用finish

00:17:579 (4,5) - 考虑一下尾stack?00:18:151这里有个音,我觉得是好机会 这个声音太小了, hard不要做那么难比较好
00:29:372 (5) - 尾finish,回音的感觉很好
00:44:371 (1) - 头finish
00:59:026 (2) - 头finish
01:05:438 (5) - add whistle?好像听起来不错 不好听 不加
01:13:681 (2) - 头finish
01:28:337 (1) - 头最好加一下finish,然后用绿线把音降低,这里BGM也有类似finish的声音,但就这么加上去太吵
01:34:519 (4) - change to finish
01:35:664 (2) - add finish
01:49:175 (5) - 跳一下? 音乐不符合跳的那种旋律啊
01:50:320 (2) - change to finish
02:02:914 (4) - 尾加whistle?
02:04:517 突然空了一下感觉不好,建议把它填充了 跟歌词嘛, 可以的

finish都加了

hope it help you!
good luck~
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140,132,49179,5,0,0:0:0:0:
48,112,49408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,40,49637,2,0,P|168:28|276:44,1,160
344,100,50324,2,0,L|372:132,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,172,50782,2,0,P|272:216|288:344,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,364,51469,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,316,51698,2,0,P|464:264|460:236,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,272,52385,2,0,L|204:272,1,160
148,200,53072,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,156,53301,2,0,P|248:200|244:316,1,160
160,360,53988,2,0,L|116:360,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,284,54446,6,0,L|312:284,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,244,54904,2,0,P|404:200|404:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,96,55362,2,0,L|176:96,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,60,56049,2,0,P|88:104|100:228,2,160,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,16,57194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,88,57423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,168,57652,2,0,P|204:220|184:328,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,324,58225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,324,58339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,368,58568,6,0,P|92:328|100:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,59026,2,0,L|324:216,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,59713,2,0,L|176:120,1,160
96,156,60400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
8,116,60629,2,0,P|0:168|8:280,1,160
72,348,61316,2,0,L|104:376,2,40,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,61774,6,0,P|184:276|224:280,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,252,62232,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,344,62461,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,372,62690,2,0,P|232:328|232:204,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,160,63377,2,0,P|311:80|289:3,1,160
208,56,64064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,32,64293,6,0,P|104:76|104:128,1,80
172,232,64751,2,0,P|184:188|184:136,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,153,65094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,153,65209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,184,65438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,65667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,356,65896,2,0,P|360:368|464:356,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,168,66812,5,8,0:0:0:0:
512,168,67041,2,0,P|460:156|356:168,1,160
276,224,67728,2,0,L|188:212,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,260,68186,2,0,P|96:216|100:96,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,104,68758,1,8,0:0:0:0:
97,104,68873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,28,69102,6,0,L|244:28,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,28,69560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,28,69789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,70018,2,0,P|328:120|456:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,192,70704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,264,70933,5,0,0:0:0:0:
472,356,71162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,264,71391,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,320,71620,2,0,P|308:328|184:316,1,160
124,248,72307,5,8,0:0:0:0:
124,248,72422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,248,72536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,176,72765,2,0,P|192:136|188:96,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,32,73223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,64,73452,5,0,0:0:0:0:
8,160,73681,2,0,P|52:172|172:168,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,116,74368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,74597,2,0,P|400:168|484:176,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,267,75284,2,0,P|370:275|286:267,1,160
200,236,75971,5,8,0:0:0:0:
112,272,76200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,368,76429,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,336,76658,2,0,L|0:324,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,208,77116,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,124,77345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,168,77574,2,0,P|204:172|248:168,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,140,78032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,48,78261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,68,78490,2,0,P|444:64|484:48,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,184,78948,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,273,79177,2,0,L|508:293,2,80,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,320,79864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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52,308,81009,6,0,P|40:256|48:136,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,68,81696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,56,81925,2,0,P|204:108|196:228,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,284,82612,2,0,P|316:296|428:292,1,160
488,216,83299,5,8,0:0:0:0:
400,176,83528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,216,83757,2,0,L|500:128,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,24,84215,2,0,L|356:112,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,164,84673,5,0,0:0:0:0:
284,164,84902,2,0,P|232:172|116:164,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,108,85589,1,2,0:0:0:0:
4,196,85818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,284,86047,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,264,86276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,348,86505,6,0,P|224:356|344:352,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,352,87077,1,8,0:0:0:0:
338,352,87192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,272,87421,2,0,L|364:188,1,80
332,104,87879,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,20,88337,6,0,P|516:64|508:188,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,212,89024,2,0,P|408:168|416:44,1,160
328,12,89711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,12,90169,6,0,L|164:12,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,90856,2,0,L|108:104,1,160
32,156,91543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,156,92001,6,0,P|20:248|32:316,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,376,92688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,316,92917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,380,93146,2,0,P|272:344|276:304,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,212,93603,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,93832,2,0,L|408:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,100,94290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,100,94519,1,12,0:0:0:0:
304,16,94977,6,0,P|312:56|312:104,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,8,95664,1,4,0:0:0:0:
124,72,95893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,156,96122,2,0,P|176:208|172:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,280,96580,2,0,P|36:228|44:116,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,122,97267,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,48,97496,2,0,L|192:48,1,80
256,188,97954,2,0,L|168:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,276,98412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,348,98641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,348,98756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,348,98870,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,312,99099,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,99328,2,0,L|376:376,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,320,99786,2,0,P|500:264|484:160,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,172,100473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,56,100702,2,0,L|424:88,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,101160,6,0,L|176:104,1,80
128,236,101618,2,0,L|212:236,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,292,102076,2,0,L|292:336,2,40
360,232,102534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,60,102992,5,0,0:0:0:0:
488,144,103221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,103450,2,0,L|288:128,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,103908,2,0,P|164:180|60:172,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,96,104595,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,60,104824,2,0,P|104:112|100:228,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,300,105511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,300,105969,6,0,L|112:356,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,292,106427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,364,106656,2,0,P|316:372|428:364,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,288,107343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,288,107572,2,0,L|460:120,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,40,108259,5,8,0:0:0:0:
352,8,108488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,100,108717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,120,108946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,100,109175,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,140,109633,6,0,L|128:232,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,44,110320,1,4,0:0:0:0:
72,24,110549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,100,110778,2,0,P|12:144|16:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,256,111236,2,0,L|248:256,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,160,112152,6,0,L|432:80,1,80
336,80,112610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,156,112839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,113068,2,0,L|344:172,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,196,113411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,232,113526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,320,113755,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,360,113984,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,272,114213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,232,114442,2,0,P|304:224|180:236,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,312,115129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,380,115358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,268,115816,5,2,0:0:0:0:
52,176,116045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,212,116274,2,0,P|156:164|156:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,52,116731,2,0,L|200:52,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,117075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,52,117189,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,200,117647,6,0,P|424:208|464:212,1,80
472,116,118105,2,0,P|432:108|392:104,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,140,118563,2,0,P|296:188|304:312,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,352,119250,2,0,L|216:352,1,160
144,300,119937,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,352,120166,2,0,P|48:308|48:192,1,160
104,120,120853,2,0,L|188:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,72,121311,6,0,P|300:116|300:232,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,264,121998,2,0,P|168:220|168:104,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,12,122685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,92,122914,2,0,L|444:96,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,172,123601,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,172,123830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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244,276,124746,2,0,P|244:328|236:364,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125090,12,0,127723,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

Sellenite wrote:

BBQ
好歌
[Lunatic]
关于whistle..可能下得比较随意,玩着突然出来一个whistle会很不习惯,要不整首歌都适当下一些whistle,而不是某个地方突然加一两个,有些明显可以加whistle却没有加,以下说要加的whistle可能会说漏

00:17:922 这里有音,但滑条却在00:18:037这停,有点怪怪的 跟了另一个轨,这个就不跟了
00:22:159 有音。建议加个note,三连,或者00:22:045 (7) - 改成滑条也可以 加了感觉打起来有点怪,那个音不跟也行感觉
00:29:486 ^ ^
00:34:295 (5) - whistle
00:37:960 (3) - 头whistle
00:39:791 (5) - whistle
00:42:081 (4) - 为什么突然转clap呢..改为whistle
00:47:118 有音 改成滑条
01:01:774 ^ ^
01:09:102 (5) - whistle
01:10:934 (5) - ^
01:12:766 (4) - 头和折返都可以加whistle
01:16:430 (6) - whistle
01:18:261 (3) - 头whistle
01:21:926 (3) - whistle
01:23:758 (5) - ^
01:25:589 (3) - 头whistle
01:30:856 (2) - 尾whistle
接下来就到kiai了,请把该加的whistle都加了吧,这里就省略了

hope it help you!
good luck~
音效部分基本该加的都加了
Thank you for modding
rinsukir
sry for late.

[General]
sc1为什么要用这样的hitnormal啦..
统一一下enable countdown

[Sharlo's Normal]
00:15:060 (1) - ds
00:29:028 (2,1) - 这样摆对于新手来说会不会有点难读?
00:42:539 (3) - 尾whistle?
00:48:034 (2,3) - 这样好点?
00:49:637 (4,1) - 头whistle?
00:56:049 (3) - 中间whistle?
00:59:026 (1) - 尾clap
01:03:377 (3,4) - 3中间whistle 4头whistle?
01:18:032 (2) - 中间whistle?
01:21:009 (1) - 头whistle?
01:24:444 (1,2) - 1中间whistle 2中间clap?
02:02:914 (3,4) - 3尾4头whistle 顺便4音量变化幅度太大了吧..

[merami's Hard]
00:17:464 (3) - 有点意义不明
00:22:960 (2) - ^
00:26:624 (2) - ^
00:24:448 (2) - 头whistle
01:35:664 (2) - nc
01:52:839 (3) - 意义不明的大跳..

[Lunatic]
瞎 cs5
01:38:413 (3) - 有点不顺.-.
01:56:846 (6) - 这里有个音哦
挑不出什么 柑橘whistle下的乱 可以试试跟歌词下 没vocal的段落可以跟主旋律下

goodluck~ :)
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

rinsukir wrote:

sry for late.

[General]
sc1为什么要用这样的hitnormal啦.. 迟点看下有没更合适的。。。
统一一下enable countdown 貌似统一了吧。。。
[Lunatic]
瞎 cs5 _(:з」∠)_
01:38:413 (3) - 有点不顺.-. 感觉还行吧
01:56:846 (6) - 这里有个音哦 我有note啊,如果说的是蓝线那里就可以忽略了
挑不出什么 柑橘whistle下的乱 可以试试跟歌词下 没vocal的段落可以跟主旋律下 嗯whistle迟点要重新搞过

goodluck~ :)
Thanks~
sjoy
[Lunatic]
HARD变L了
00:19:640 (7) - 我建议用1/1
00:22:388 (1) - FIN
00:37:044 (1) - FIN
00:48:035 (1) - 这个很不顺
00:51:699 (1) - WHISTLE
01:06:125 (1,2,3) - 不顺
01:09:331 (6) - 非常变扭
01:10:476 (2) - 太远了,会读错成1/2 间距
01:21:010 (1) - WHIS
01:32:001 (1) - 这样节奏好点
01:35:665 (4) - CTRL+G?
01:50:320 (4) - 不顺
为什么老是会提到不顺?现在的人太挑,打的图基本都是FLOW图所以要想RANK只要遵循这个原则
你的图主要一个问题就是太缩,可以按CTRL+A看看 基本全部蜷缩在中间,做得不够开,铺面不够均匀。
[merami's Hard]
AR3思考
00:17:464 (3) - 删了吧
00:44:371这段可以考虑 大白线加个WHIS
01:21:009 (1) - WHIS
01:57:647 (1) - FIN
[Sharlo's Normal]
圈圈只有16闹哪样,小心嘉文又找你 之前有一张泡图就是因为低难度圈圈太少被嘉文喷了(咦又是嘉文)
00:42:539 (3) - FIN
01:18:032 (2) - 01:18:261开始 01:18:948结束
01:33:603 (3) -
01:46:198加个NOTE
02:01:998 (2) -
美丽
moonlightleaf
M4M 债务: 小建议如下

[general]

tag 不加 Meramipop 整个ID 有什么特殊地方吗,不是的话请加全

[Sharlo's Normal]

AR+1

01:25:360 add note

02:04:059 (4,5) - return ? then 5 delete

no much to say

[merami's Hard]

00:34:066 (2) - note at 00:34:066 + slider at 00:34:295 - 00:34:524 will be better

01:59:250 (4) - ↑

00:59:713 (3) - same way ↑ , but this is slider + note

00:49:179 (1,2) - ctrl+g will be better

01:04:751 (2) - change to note and then add a note at

01:04:980 the same like 01:38:412 (4,5,6,7)

01:10:933 (1) - delete ?

01:18:490 (6) - end point move down will be better

01:33:832 (2,3) - ctrl+g will be better

01:48:946 (4,5) - can copy 01:48:488 (2,3) to be better play

[Lunatic]

我不会看版, 但是全选好像基本集中在中间= =我被人说过这个

00:42:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里连打不知道合适不合适 我看不来 就提醒提醒

01:08:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - 下面2个和上面3个调换 5离6太远

01:13:453 (1) - 换2连

01:22:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个怎么越看越美 摆的好啊

01:34:061 (2,3) - 我觉得重叠好

01:34:520 (4) - 上面改的话,放在后面1上面

01:40:932 (7) - 感觉能删

如果上面照做的话 能把1放6上开始 就不会像先前那样在最左上角 好像要出界的即视感

01:45:512 (2) - 会不会太远 而且有点突然

01:51:694 (1,2) - 这么远= =、

01:54:442 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 试试

02:01:770 (5,6,1,2) - 感觉偷懒了


歌还不错 good luck
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

sjoy wrote:

[Lunatic]
HARD变L了
00:19:640 (7) - 我建议用1/1 红线上有个音,没改
00:22:388 (1) - FIN 已加
00:37:044 (1) - FIN 已加
00:48:035 (1) - 这个很不顺 换了位置
00:51:699 (1) - WHISTLE 已加
01:06:125 (1,2,3) - 不顺 换了节奏和位置
01:09:331 (6) - 非常变扭 换了位置
01:10:476 (2) - 太远了,会读错成1/2 间距 调小了
01:21:010 (1) - WHIS 已加
01:32:001 (1) - 这样节奏好点
01:35:665 (4) - CTRL+G? 我把 1,2换了位置
01:50:320 (4) - 不顺 换了位置
为什么老是会提到不顺?现在的人太挑,打的图基本都是FLOW图所以要想RANK只要遵循这个原则
你的图主要一个问题就是太缩,可以按CTRL+A看看 基本全部蜷缩在中间,做得不够开,铺面不够均匀。
美丽
感谢sjoy摸图
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

moonlightleaf wrote:

M4M 债务: 小建议如下

[general]

tag 不加 Meramipop 整个ID 有什么特殊地方吗,不是的话请加全 artist是meramipop所以不用加了啊,可能你看错了吧,那个是hong meirin

[Lunatic]

我不会看版, 但是全选好像基本集中在中间= =我被人说过这个

00:42:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里连打不知道合适不合适 我看不来 就提醒提醒 额,暂时保留意见

01:08:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - 下面2个和上面3个调换 5离6太远 之前调整了

01:13:453 (1) - 换2连 我试下换成了单点

01:22:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个怎么越看越美 摆的好啊 好你也要说出来吗_(:з」∠)_

01:34:061 (2,3) - 我觉得重叠好 试过打起来没那么好

01:34:520 (4) - 上面改的话,放在后面1上面 ^

01:40:932 (7) - 感觉能删

如果上面照做的话 能把1放6上开始 就不会像先前那样在最左上角 好像要出界的即视感 思考了片刻,把前一个note换成滑条

01:45:512 (2) - 会不会太远 而且有点突然 已调小了点

01:51:694 (1,2) - 这么远= =、 ^

01:54:442 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 试试

02:01:770 (5,6,1,2) - 感觉偷懒了 改成别的了。。。


歌还不错 good luck
感谢mod~ :)
Sharlo
尼玛怎么这么多mod

RandomEffect wrote:

from in-game request~

good job meramipop!
let me mod your map, too (and recheck a little)

[Sharlo's Normal]
  1. 01:04:751 (4) - end at 01:05:896 fixed
  2. 02:02:914 (3) - end at 02:03:601 fixed
mmm, I think "without leaf" is not suitable for this song's tags...
good luck <3

Sellenite wrote:

BBQ
好歌

[Sharlo's Normal]
有些是会改了你的节奏的,请尝试一下再判断是否使用
我觉得normal节奏可以丰富点,歌词与歌词之间的鼓点并不用空,而且这不是长歌,如00:51:240、01:16:887、01:20:551、01:24:215、01:25:131、01:26:963后面三个白线 etc,请尽量填满它,使歌更漂亮,只留下finish前一条的白线空起来
这个mapper实在太懒了自己不想做Easy所以我只能拼命压星

00:42:539 (3) - 头finish fixed
01:04:751 (4) - 我觉得是拉短了,听起来节奏好像被切断一样,建议拉到01:05:896 fixed
01:10:704 (3) - 为何也是要切断两部分...既然是跟歌词,建议把01:10:933填起来,3用1/2滑条代替
01:12:307 (3) - 这个单点太空了,歌词还没唱完呢。后面节奏直接无视了01:12:765和01:13:223,建议拉成一条滑条或滑条折返
01:46:198 add note,有歌词和鼓点,kiai不加太浪费 fixed

hope it help you!
good luck~

rinsukir wrote:

sry for late.

[General]
sc1为什么要用这样的hitnormal啦..
统一一下enable countdown

[Sharlo's Normal]
00:15:060 (1) - ds fixed
00:29:028 (2,1) - 这样摆对于新手来说会不会有点难读?
00:42:539 (3) - 尾whistle?
00:48:034 (2,3) - 这样好点? fixed
00:49:637 (4,1) - 头whistle?
00:56:049 (3) - 中间whistle?
00:59:026 (1) - 尾clap fixed
01:03:377 (3,4) - 3中间whistle 4头whistle? 你听到的那些whistle都是在白线处的
01:18:032 (2) - 中间whistle?
01:21:009 (1) - 头whistle?
01:24:444 (1,2) - 1中间whistle 2中间clap? fixed
02:02:914 (3,4) - 3尾4头whistle 顺便4音量变化幅度太大了吧.. 那我改成80%吧

goodluck~ :)

sjoy wrote:

[Sharlo's Normal]
圈圈只有16闹哪样,小心嘉文又找你 之前有一张泡图就是因为低难度圈圈太少被嘉文喷了(咦又是嘉文) 哭哭哦 都怪我太善良惹
00:42:539 (3) - FIN fixed
01:18:032 (2) - 01:18:261开始 01:18:948结束 fixed
01:33:603 (3) - 我比较喜欢原来的节奏
01:46:198加个NOTE fixed
02:01:998 (2) - fixed
美丽

moonlightleaf wrote:

M4M 债务: 小建议如下

[general]

tag 不加 Meramipop 整个ID 有什么特殊地方吗,不是的话请加全

[Sharlo's Normal]

AR+1 fixed

01:25:360 add note

02:04:059 (4,5) - return ? then 5 delete

no much to say

歌还不错 good luck
Update
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Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

Sharlo wrote:

尼玛怎么这么多mod
夏萝菊苣终于来看惹_(:з」∠)_
MeraMiPoP_old

rinsukir wrote:

[merami's Hard]
00:17:464 (3) - 有点意义不明 有鼓声啊..
00:22:960 (2) - ^
00:26:624 (2) - ^
00:24:448 (2) - 头whistle 加了
01:35:664 (2) - nc 加了
01:52:839 (3) - 意义不明的大跳.. 我放到另一边了

sjoy wrote:

[merami's Hard]
AR3思考
00:17:464 (3) - 删了吧 鼓声有这个音啊 为什么要删..
00:44:371这段可以考虑 大白线加个WHIS 有点多 不改了..
01:21:009 (1) - WHIS
01:57:647 (1) - FIN

moonlightleaf wrote:

tag 不加 Meramipop 整个ID 有什么特殊地方吗,不是的话请加全 title里有了, 不用加的。

[merami's Hard]

00:34:066 (2) - note at 00:34:066 + slider at 00:34:295 - 00:34:524 will be better ok

01:59:250 (4) - ↑ following the lyrics here, so no change

00:59:713 (3) - same way ↑ , but this is slider + note

00:49:179 (1,2) - ctrl+g will be better i don't feel this way sorry..

01:04:751 (2) - change to note and then add a note at

01:04:980 the same like 01:38:412 (4,5,6,7) i think my pattern is more fun than the usual triple stream www

01:10:933 (1) - delete ? ok

01:18:490 (6) - end point move down will be better good

01:33:832 (2,3) - ctrl+g will be better i don't feel this way..

01:48:946 (4,5) - can copy 01:48:488 (2,3) to be better play no www
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TitleUnicode:靴の音を、響かせて、その手を
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Neta
Hi~ from my modding queue

[Shalro's Normal]
  1. 00:24:219 (1) - Delete NC. doesn't need here following your NC
  2. 00:28:341 (1) - ^ same beat with 00:34:753 (3,4,5) -
  3. 00:38:875 (1) - Delete NC same reason with 1st one
  4. 01:23:299 (4) - i think whistle on here doesn't sounds good.

[merami's Hard]
  1. 00:32:234 (5) - add Clap on start of slider
  2. 01:21:009 (1) - add Finish on start of slider
  3. 01:42:992 (1) - add Finish
  4. 01:49:175 (5) - change whistle to Finish
  5. 02:04:746 (2) - add Finish to end of slider like Normal diff

GOOD LUCK~
MeraMiPoP_old
fixed all except 4) i don't think a finish is good there ;)

diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 06..mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 94977
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Kutsu no Ne o, Hibikasete, Sono Te o
TitleUnicode:靴の音を、響かせて、その手を
Artist:Meramipop
ArtistUnicode:めらみぽっぷ
Creator:Sakaue Nachi
Version:merami's Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:zun rd sounds 明治十七年の上海アリス sharlo hong meirin irodori withered leaf
BeatmapID:394481
BeatmapSetID:141354

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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32,156,92001,6,0,P|20:248|32:316,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,376,92688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,316,92917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,380,93146,2,0,P|272:344|276:304,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,212,93603,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,93832,2,0,L|408:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,100,94290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,100,94519,1,12,0:0:0:0:
304,16,94977,6,0,P|312:56|312:104,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,8,95664,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,72,95893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,156,96122,2,0,P|176:208|172:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,280,96580,2,0,P|36:228|44:116,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,122,97267,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,48,97496,2,0,L|192:48,1,80
256,188,97954,2,0,L|168:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,276,98412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,348,98641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,348,98756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,348,98870,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,312,99099,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,99328,2,0,L|376:376,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,320,99786,2,0,P|500:264|484:160,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,172,100473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,56,100702,2,0,L|424:88,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,101160,6,0,L|176:104,1,80
128,236,101618,2,0,L|212:236,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,292,102076,2,0,L|292:336,2,40
360,232,102534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,60,102992,5,4,0:0:0:0:
488,144,103221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,103450,2,0,L|288:128,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,103908,2,0,P|164:180|60:172,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,96,104595,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,60,104824,2,0,P|104:112|100:228,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,300,105511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,300,105969,6,0,L|112:356,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,292,106427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,364,106656,2,0,P|316:372|428:364,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,288,107343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,288,107572,2,0,L|460:120,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,40,108259,5,8,0:0:0:0:
352,8,108488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,100,108717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,120,108946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,100,109175,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,140,109633,6,0,L|128:232,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,44,110320,1,4,0:0:0:0:
72,24,110549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,100,110778,2,0,P|12:144|16:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,256,111236,2,0,L|248:256,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,160,112152,6,0,L|432:80,1,80
336,80,112610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,20,112839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,113068,2,0,L|344:172,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,196,113411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,232,113526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,320,113755,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,360,113984,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,272,114213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,232,114442,2,0,P|304:224|180:236,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,312,115129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,380,115358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,268,115816,5,2,0:0:0:0:
52,176,116045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,212,116274,2,0,P|156:164|156:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,52,116731,2,0,L|200:52,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,117075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,52,117189,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,200,117647,6,0,P|424:208|464:212,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,116,118105,2,0,P|432:108|392:104,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,140,118563,2,0,P|296:188|304:312,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,352,119250,2,0,L|216:352,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,300,119937,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,352,120166,2,0,P|48:308|48:192,1,160
104,120,120853,2,0,L|188:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,72,121311,6,0,P|300:116|300:232,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,264,121998,2,0,P|168:220|168:104,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,12,122685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,92,122914,2,0,L|444:96,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,172,123601,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,172,123830,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,228,124059,6,0,P|432:272|436:312,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,276,124746,2,0,P|244:328|236:364,1,80,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125090,12,0,127723,0:0:0:0:
Moe
[Lunatic]
00:20:556 (1,2,3,4) - 总感觉不大美观orz
00:29:716 (1,2,3,4) - 本来大概是重叠在一起的……被系统强制改了以后就略违和……特别是在CS5下
00:35:898 (2) - 消音后反而感觉不太舒服
01:10:018 (1) - ^ 还有几处滑条消音打起来也不太舒服 :o
01:19:178 (1,2,3,4) - 摆成四方会不会美观一些?
01:34:519 (4) - 可以适当加大一些间距
01:48:946 (4,5) - CTRL+G?
02:05:548 (1) - 感觉转盘在这里就结束比较好=v=
waxman
QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[Insane]
00:51:927 (2,3) - too close.
01:39:100 (1) - too high position?

02:04:517 (2,3) - change to slider?
02:04:975 (4) - change to a circle?

[Hard]

Hit sounds are injured my ears. i want to you chance like this example a bit.
01:24:215 (4) - move to x:424 y:20
01:37:267 (1) - stack on 01:37:496 (2). I think this is better.

01:48:259 (1) - delete NC
01:48:488 (2) - NC

02:04:746 (2) - you know the beginning of the slider is here. lol 02:04:517 (2) (High suggestion)

GOGO 1st RANKED
GOOD LUCK!
waxman
QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[Insane]
00:51:927 (2,3) - too close.
01:39:100 (1) - too high position?

02:04:517 (2,3) - change to slider?
02:04:975 (4) - change to a circle?

[Hard]

Hit sounds are injured my ears. i want to you chance like this example a bit.
01:24:215 (4) - move to x:424 y:20
01:37:267 (1) - stack on 01:37:496 (2). I think this is better.

01:48:259 (1) - delete NC
01:48:488 (2) - NC

02:04:746 (2) - you know the beginning of the slider is here. lol 02:04:517 (2) (High suggestion)


This map looks good as 1st ranked map. YOU CAN DO IT.
GOGO 1st RANKED
GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

Reimoe wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:20:556 (1,2,3,4) - 总感觉不大美观orz 弄成两个三角形了
00:29:716 (1,2,3,4) - 本来大概是重叠在一起的……被系统强制改了以后就略违和……特别是在CS5下 故意分开的
00:35:898 (2) - 消音后反而感觉不太舒服 变成减小音量了
01:10:018 (1) - ^ 还有几处滑条消音打起来也不太舒服 :o ^
01:19:178 (1,2,3,4) - 摆成四方会不会美观一些? 好,顺便换了节奏
01:34:519 (4) - 可以适当加大一些间距 已经够大了orz
01:48:946 (4,5) - CTRL+G?no
02:05:548 (1) - 感觉转盘在这里就结束比较好=v=
竟然有不认识的来mod图,有点感动_(:з」∠)_
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[Insane]
00:51:927 (2,3) - too close. fixed
01:39:100 (1) - too high position? fixed

02:04:517 (2,3) - change to slider?
02:04:975 (4) - change to a circle? instead I delete(3)

GOGO 1st RANKED
GOOD LUCK!
Thank you for modding,you post it 2 times man~
Natsu
Hi from my queue

I was going to mod this, but I feel your timing is really off, try this one:

BPM: 131
Offset: 403

Should be more accurate.


GL
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

Natsu wrote:

Hi from my queue

I was going to mod this, but I feel your timing is really off, try this one:

BPM: 131
Offset: 403

Should be more accurate.

GL
It seems better now
Thank you~
[Twinkle]
[Lunatic]
00:22:387 (1) - 包好00:23:074 (2) - 第二个点(白点)移动到104,64 第三个点(白点)移动到184,40
00:24:906 (9) - 包好00:23:532 (4) - 第二个点(红点)移动到336,164 第三个点(白点)移动到364,132
00:35:212 (1,4,5) - 移动到和00:34:296 (5) - 重合的位置可能会好一些?
00:36:357 (3) - 这个离00:35:899 (2) - 稍微拉远一点点,再往上面摆一点,尽可能在一条曲线上~ 可能需要把00:35:899 (2) - 稍微弄弯一点。
00:42:540 (1,2,3,4) - 这里是overmap,连打声从这里00:42:998 (5) - 开始到00:43:456 (9) - slider的开头结束,slider可以不换,前面的连打还是去掉吧。
00:49:181 (6) - 这个滑条加个点弄成弯的对准00:49:639 (7) -
01:03:380 (2) - 稍微顺时针按selection center转一点blanket01:02:693 (1) -
从01:13:685 (2) - 到01:25:135 (3) - 用的slider都是直的,可以考虑换几个弯的。
把01:18:723 (6) - 和01:19:410 (2,3) - 弄成角度一样
01:44:601 (7) - 移动到28,192
01:50:326 (4) - 稍微逆时针时针按selection center转一点,这样与01:50:784 (5) -的flow更好一些
02:02:922 (2) - 包好02:02:693 (1) - 第三个点(白点)移动到248,184 第四个点(白点)移动到192,152
01:42:998 (1) - 这里跳的可能有点偏大,想想办法改的小一点?
01:54:906 (5) - 稍微往外拉一点,拉到类似于01:55:364 (7,1) - 只间的距离
01:57:654 (1) - 改成弯一点的对准01:57:196 (8,2) - 的中间方向,这样01:57:654 (1,2) - 之间flow更好
02:04:983 (3) - 滑条末尾静音或者使用sampleset soft
02:06:815 (1) - 从这里开始转盘每2分之一拍加一根绿线(包括转盘末尾的一共是三个)逐渐降低音量一直降低到5%

音效部分 only suggestions
01:12:769 (3) - 滑条中间的whistle去掉试试,感觉好一点
01:17:349 (1) - 这里头上也应该加上whistle?
01:18:265 (5) - 还有这里也是
01:57:654 (1) - 这里开头既然有finish了就把whistle去掉吧。
第三条白线的whistle好像有些没有加,除了加了finish的,很多大白线都空着,有的可以试试看加加clap,其他的whistle补好。

[merami's Hard]
01:16:662 (4) - 这里尾巴盖了一个重音,试试吧01:16:433 (3) - 换成一个2分之一拍滑条然后 01:16:662 (4) -结尾处换成note
02:05:097 (1) - 结尾滑条02:06:815 (1) - 从这里开始转盘每2分之一拍加一根绿线(包括转盘末尾的一共是三个)逐渐降低音量一直降低到5%

[Sharlo's Normal]
01:50:326 (1) - 形状也换成像01:52:158 (3) - 一样?
好diff~

低难度不会摸orz, 歌好听! 祝早日rank :) :) :)
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

[Twinkle] wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:22:387 (1) - 包好00:23:074 (2) - 第二个点(白点)移动到104,64 第三个点(白点)移动到184,40 fixed
00:24:906 (9) - 包好00:23:532 (4) - 第二个点(红点)移动到336,164 第三个点(白点)移动到364,132 fixed
00:35:212 (1,4,5) - 移动到和00:34:296 (5) - 重合的位置可能会好一些?
00:36:357 (3) - 这个离00:35:899 (2) - 稍微拉远一点点,再往上面摆一点,尽可能在一条曲线上~ 可能需要把00:35:899 (2) - 稍微弄弯一点。
00:42:540 (1,2,3,4) - 这里是overmap,连打声从这里00:42:998 (5) - 开始到00:43:456 (9) - slider的开头结束,slider可以不换,前面的连打还是去掉吧。 换成几个折返
00:49:181 (6) - 这个滑条加个点弄成弯的对准00:49:639 (7) - fixed
01:03:380 (2) - 稍微顺时针按selection center转一点blanket01:02:693 (1) - fixed
从01:13:685 (2) - 到01:25:135 (3) - 用的slider都是直的,可以考虑换几个弯的。弄了2个
把01:18:723 (6) - 和01:19:410 (2,3) - 弄成角度一样 这里重做了
01:44:601 (7) - 移动到28,192 fixed
01:50:326 (4) - 稍微逆时针时针按selection center转一点,这样与01:50:784 (5) -的flow更好一些 fixed
02:02:922 (2) - 包好02:02:693 (1) - 第三个点(白点)移动到248,184 第四个点(白点)移动到192,152 fixed
01:42:998 (1) - 这里跳的可能有点偏大,想想办法改的小一点? 思考中
01:54:906 (5) - 稍微往外拉一点,拉到类似于01:55:364 (7,1) - 只间的距离 fixed
01:57:654 (1) - 改成弯一点的对准01:57:196 (8,2) - 的中间方向,这样01:57:654 (1,2) - 之间flow更好 fixed
02:04:983 (3) - 滑条末尾静音或者使用sampleset soft fixed
02:06:815 (1) - 从这里开始转盘每2分之一拍加一根绿线(包括转盘末尾的一共是三个)逐渐降低音量一直降低到5%

音效部分 only suggestions
01:12:769 (3) - 滑条中间的whistle去掉试试,感觉好一点 保留
01:17:349 (1) - 这里头上也应该加上whistle? fixed
01:18:265 (5) - 还有这里也是 fixed
01:57:654 (1) - 这里开头既然有finish了就把whistle去掉吧。 fixed
第三条白线的whistle好像有些没有加,除了加了finish的,很多大白线都空着,有的可以试试看加加clap,其他的whistle补好。


低难度不会摸orz, 歌好听! 祝早日rank :) :) :)
Thanks~:3
Mei_coN
留名,加油rank吧www
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi
IRC mod from Mei_coN
[Lunatic]
00:07 Mei_coN: 00:29:028 (5) - NC
00:07 Mei_coN: lunatic
00:07 Sakaue Nachi: 嗯
00:10 Mei_coN: 00:42:540 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1563936
00:10 Mei_coN: 这里的滑条好难懂,还是这样好懂点
00:10 Sakaue Nachi: 我试试
00:11 Sakaue Nachi: 那里怎么有4个折返
00:12 Mei_coN: 后面也改了
00:12 Mei_coN: 就直接改成4个折返
00:13 Mei_coN: 01:50:326 (4) - add finish
00:14 Mei_coN: 01:52:158 (2) - 去掉finish
00:16 Sakaue Nachi: 感觉其实前面折返那里换成个转盘好像省事点。。
00:17 Mei_coN: 高潮段可以1,3whistle,2,4clap这样假音效,有些地方可以补上
00:17 Mei_coN: 加
00:18 Mei_coN: 那个你喜欢吧233
00:18 Sakaue Nachi: kiai那里全部都这样加 ?
00:19 Sakaue Nachi: 感觉现在好像也有很多是这样 orz
00:19 Mei_coN: 我是比较习惯这样,有些地方再加些finsih
00:19 Mei_coN: 有些地方只有clap没whistle
00:20 Sakaue Nachi: 我全部加一遍看下效果如何
00:20 Mei_coN: 恩
00:24 Sakaue Nachi: GD那些你就先发这里到时我保存一起发上去吧:3
00:25 Mei_coN: 恩
00:25 Mei_coN: 不过感觉那些没啥地方要改的...
00:25 Sakaue Nachi: orz
00:26 Sakaue Nachi: 他们太pro了
[Hard]
00:27 Mei_coN: 00:18:723 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1563981 这样感觉好点,不过原来也没啥问题
00:27 Mei_coN: hard的
00:28 Sakaue Nachi: 形状什么的看看有什么不对劲也行:3
00:29 Mei_coN: 还真没...
00:30 Sakaue Nachi: .
[Normal]
00:35 Mei_coN: normal
00:35 Mei_coN: 00:44:372 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1564011 个人觉得这样好点
00:35 Mei_coN: 00:51:700 (1) - 这里后面也是一样
00:38 Sakaue Nachi: 觉得这两个是不是弄成一样形状好点?00:55:364 (2,4) -
00:39 Sakaue Nachi: 现在有点偏差。。
00:39 Mei_coN: 那就弄呗,我看上去一样的样子...
00:40 Sakaue Nachi: 。
00:40 Mei_coN: 01:32:006 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1564023
00:41 Mei_coN: 基本就这些了,我mod很松的....
00:43 Sakaue Nachi: 好。。去留个名吧。。
00:43 Sakaue Nachi: ;w;
00:43 Mei_coN: 恩
Narcissu
[Lunatic]

00:19:639 (7) - 我建议你不使用折返,而且你的曲子版面比较空因为你在CS5+单点略多的情况下仍然大量堆叠,这一点我建议你参考hard给人的感觉,适当增加滑条的数量,取消连续的堆叠比如00:33:151 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ,我建议你摆成↓↓↓


这样就一口气用掉了很大一部分的版面同时这也是个又顺手又漂亮的梗

00:18:723 (5) - 可以加NC,4分拍的曲子用了4种颜色如果还固定一长白一NC那你会发现所有的变奏都是同一种颜色,每次副歌开头什么的,这是魔法哦

00:24:906 (9,10) - 1/4隔太开会容易断尾,另外我建议你所有隔开的1/4都使用同一个DS,这样有利于读图,在另外我不建议把1/4隔开,我觉得全部有覆盖比较好,比如00:17:120 (2,3,4) - ↓↓↓


这里也可以看出来你排版比较欠缺大局观……那些单点和滑条都占用同一个区域

00:24:906 (9) - 去掉减速,我建议你去掉所有的减速,我认为这些地方没有设置减速的理由,另外这个滑条样式有点古怪,它真的符合曲子么?

00:29:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我建议的节奏和排版,↓↓↓


这里要说一下你那个overmap的5连打,要overmap必须选对地方,恰恰长白线的后面是最不适合下连打的,反而长白前面是最适合的,往往是一串擦音合着drum接大finish然后开始下一段节奏,这样的情况几乎是一定会出现在副歌的前面&中段,如果曲子没有擦音或者drum你要额外补上是完全符合乐理的,但是一个大号finish后面接擦音就很不规范

00:37:044 (1,2) - 这是标准新人梗

00:40:250 (5,1,2,3,4) - 第一个00:40:250 (5) - 拆成2个note以和后面的4个滑条在节奏上有所区分,另外00:42:540 - 可以补一个note外带finish,转盘蓝线开始,同时我还建议你去掉这个转盘,因为00:43:227 - 的旋律很出彩,不map可惜了

01:53:303 (7,8) - 如果说前面的五角跳是应和人声高音的话,那这两个距离可以降下来了,而且距离最好不要超过3.0

00:58:570 (6,1,2,3) - 这梗我建议你任何图都不要用

02:02:922 (2) - 最高难度还为了跟人声弃长白?我还希望你能找一个沉闷的鼓点放1.3finish呢……

02:00:403 (8,9,1,2,3) - 这梗我也建议你换成更好看的

02:04:525 - 前面刚刚为了人声放弃鼓点这里就连人声都不要这是为什么……而且后面的note这么近,开了HD保证读成1/2

02:04:983 - kiai 到这里结束

总体上你还略欠缺对间距的感觉,而导致Object有时候挤成一团有时候又远到足够引起误读的程度。同时,你放弃鼓点使得这类图的节奏也很难抓,整个图的节奏听上去虽然连贯但是混乱。

唔,就先写这么多了,改完我继续摸,虽然语气比较偏向说教但是不要因为这样就爆我BP啊 :cry:
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
唔,就先写这么多了,改完我继续摸,虽然语气比较偏向说教但是不要因为这样就爆我BP啊
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

Narcissu wrote:

[Lunatic]
总体上你还略欠缺对间距的感觉,而导致Object有时候挤成一团有时候又远到足够引起误读的程度。同时,你放弃鼓点使得这类图的节奏也很难抓,整个图的节奏听上去虽然连贯但是混乱。

唔,就先写这么多了,改完我继续摸,虽然语气比较偏向说教但是不要因为这样就爆我BP啊 :cry:
All fixed except
00:58:570 (6,1,2,3) - 这梗我建议你任何图都不要用

00:37:044 (1,2) - 这是标准新人梗

02:04:525 - 前面刚刚为了人声放弃鼓点这里就连人声都不要这是为什么……而且后面的note这么近,开了HD保证读成1/2

Thanks
Okoratu


General

  1. sounds neat, a bit slow for my taste but whatever, I said I'll mod this
  2. Dunno I don't think that the standard combo colours fit this, so I prepared a sample of how they could look:
    Example

    I took some of the colours used in the background image and intensified / made them brigher
    In case you want to have the RGB values and use them:

    Format:
    Name (Explanation): R, G, B
    Color 1 (Hair): 239, 94, 98
    Color 2 (band around her leg): 178, 157, 222
    Color 3 (Eyes): 56, 190, 197
    Color 4 (Dress): 202, 158, 157
    My modding pictures will use these colors so you'll get to see them again! :D

Lunatic

  1. Plays ok, some fun jumps :D
  2. HP 6 is kinda low considering how easy this map is, could be 7 aswell
  3. I personally dislike the countdown for this song because the countdown indicates that it'll start with something exciting and not with something calm
  4. 00:19:181 (2) - might add a whistle on its start
  5. 00:21:013 (3,4) - might add a whistle on the circle and the start of the slider
  6. 00:22:387 (1) - ^
  7. 00:24:906 (9) - ^
  8. 00:24:906 (9) - also this slider could be shortened to end in 00:25:364 - so you can add a circle on 00:25:479 -
    Example


    just an example how this could look
  9. 00:26:967 (3,4) - maybe add a whistle on both starts
  10. 00:37:044 (1) - ^
  11. 00:39:563 (4) - ^
  12. 00:47:464 - this sound is quite strong, might consider making 00:47:349 (6,7) - a triplet?
  13. 01:19:639 (3,4,5,6) - might make this pattern more even like this:
  14. 01:42:883 - this sound is quite dominant, might consider mapping it??
  15. 01:49:639 (1,2,3,4) - might be able to make this look less cramped like this:
  16. 02:03:609 (4) - all your other spacings for 1/4 jumps are higher (see 01:54:448 (4,5) - or 01:47:578 (6,1) - for example)
    Example

    Based on that i think this would be more fitting
  17. 02:04:525 - judging by the sounds here I'd recommend using a triplet in the end
  18. 02:04:983 (3) - please higher the green line in 02:05:441 - to at least 25 % so that the hitsound is barely audible, not audible hitsounds are unrankable

Gl with your map!
Topic Starter
Sakaue Nachi

Okoratu wrote:



General

  1. sounds neat, a bit slow for my taste but whatever, I said I'll mod this
  2. Dunno I don't think that the standard combo colours fit this, so I prepared a sample of how they could look:
    Example

    I took some of the colours used in the background image and intensified / made them brigher
    In case you want to have the RGB values and use them:

    Format:
    Name (Explanation): R, G, B
    Color 1 (Hair): 239, 94, 98
    Color 2 (band around her leg): 178, 157, 222
    Color 3 (Eyes): 56, 190, 197
    Color 4 (Dress): 202, 158, 157
    My modding pictures will use these colors so you'll get to see them again! :D

Lunatic

  1. Plays ok, some fun jumps :D
  2. HP 6 is kinda low considering how easy this map is, could be 7 aswell
  3. I personally dislike the countdown for this song because the countdown indicates that it'll start with something exciting and not with something calm
  4. 00:19:181 (2) - might add a whistle on its start
  5. 00:21:013 (3,4) - might add a whistle on the circle and the start of the slider
  6. 00:22:387 (1) - ^
  7. 00:24:906 (9) - ^
  8. 00:24:906 (9) - also this slider could be shortened to end in 00:25:364 - so you can add a circle on 00:25:479 -
    Example


    just an example how this could look
  9. 00:26:967 (3,4) - maybe add a whistle on both starts
  10. 00:37:044 (1) - ^
  11. 00:39:563 (4) - ^
  12. 00:47:464 - this sound is quite strong, might consider making 00:47:349 (6,7) - a triplet?
  13. 01:19:639 (3,4,5,6) - might make this pattern more even like this:
  14. 01:42:883 - this sound is quite dominant, might consider mapping it??
  15. 01:49:639 (1,2,3,4) - might be able to make this look less cramped like this:
  16. 02:03:609 (4) - all your other spacings for 1/4 jumps are higher (see 01:54:448 (4,5) - or 01:47:578 (6,1) - for example)
    Example

    Based on that i think this would be more fitting
  17. 02:04:525 - judging by the sounds here I'd recommend using a triplet in the end
  18. 02:04:983 (3) - please higher the green line in 02:05:441 - to at least 25 % so that the hitsound is barely audible, not audible hitsounds are unrankable

Gl with your map!
All fixed except
  1. 00:19:181 (2) - might add a whistle on its start
  2. 00:47:464 - this sound is quite strong, might consider making 00:47:349 (6,7) - a triplet?
  3. 02:04:525 - judging by the sounds here I'd recommend using a triplet in the end
Really great help, thanks :)
MeraMiPoP_old

waxman wrote:

[Hard]

Hit sounds are injured my ears. i want to you chance like this example a bit. ok, lowered by ~10%
01:24:215 (4) - move to x:424 y:20 I think that place is too far from the next, no change
01:37:267 (1) - stack on 01:37:496 (2). I think this is better. This place calls for a jump, not the 1/2 before; I think the previous stack provides a better feeling of this

01:48:259 (1) - delete NC done
01:48:488 (2) - NC

02:04:746 (2) - you know the beginning of the slider is here. lol 02:04:517 (2) (High suggestion) I changed the previous one to a reversed slider

GOGO 1st RANKED gogogo
GOOD LUCK!

[Twinkle] wrote:

[merami's Hard]
01:16:662 (4) - 这里尾巴盖了一个重音,试试吧01:16:433 (3) - 换成一个2分之一拍滑条然后 01:16:662 (4) -结尾处换成note 我觉得hard难度的话 滑条尾重音没什么关系吧
02:05:097 (1) - 结尾滑条02:06:815 (1) - 从这里开始转盘每2分之一拍加一根绿线(包括转盘末尾的一共是三个)逐渐降低音量一直降低到5% 好麻烦啊, 我只放了白线

Mei_coN wrote:

[Hard]
00:27 Mei_coN: 00:18:723 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1563981 这样感觉好点,不过原来也没啥问题
00:27 Mei_coN: hard的
00:28 Sakaue Nachi: 形状什么的看看有什么不对劲也行:3
00:29 Mei_coN: 还真没...
00:30 Sakaue Nachi: .
不想改这个, 不过颜色为什么不一样。。

diff
osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: 06..mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 94977
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

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Title:Kutsu no Ne o, Hibikasete, Sono Te o
TitleUnicode:靴の音を、響かせて、その手を
Artist:Meramipop
ArtistUnicode:めらみぽっぷ
Creator:Sakaue Nachi
Version:merami's Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:zun rd sounds 明治十七年の上海アリス sharlo hong meirin irodori withered leaf
BeatmapID:394481
BeatmapSetID:141354

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
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368,24,84219,2,0,L|356:112,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,164,84677,5,0,0:0:0:0:
284,164,84906,2,0,P|232:172|116:164,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,108,85593,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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180,348,86509,6,0,P|224:356|344:352,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,352,87082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
338,352,87196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,272,87425,2,0,L|364:188,1,80
332,104,87883,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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420,212,89028,2,0,P|408:168|416:44,1,160
328,12,89715,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,12,90173,6,0,L|164:12,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,90861,2,0,L|108:104,1,160
32,156,91548,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,156,92006,6,0,P|20:248|32:316,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,376,92693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,316,92922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,380,93151,2,0,P|272:344|276:304,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,212,93609,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,93838,2,0,L|408:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,100,94296,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,100,94525,1,12,0:0:0:0:
304,16,94983,6,0,P|312:56|312:104,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,8,95670,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,72,95899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,156,96128,2,0,P|176:208|172:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,280,96586,2,0,P|36:228|44:116,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,48,97502,2,0,L|192:48,1,80
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288,312,99105,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,99334,2,0,L|376:376,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,320,99792,2,0,P|500:264|484:160,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,172,100479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,56,100708,2,0,L|424:88,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,101166,6,0,L|176:104,1,80
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284,292,102082,2,0,L|292:336,2,40
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440,60,102998,5,4,0:0:0:0:
488,144,103227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,103456,2,0,L|288:128,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,103914,2,0,P|164:180|60:172,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,96,104601,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,60,104830,2,0,P|104:112|100:228,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,300,105517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,300,105975,6,0,L|112:356,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,292,106433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,364,106662,2,0,P|316:372|428:364,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,288,107349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,288,107578,2,0,L|460:120,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,40,108265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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332,100,108723,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,120,108952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,100,109181,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,140,109639,6,0,L|128:232,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,44,110326,1,4,0:0:0:0:
72,24,110555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,100,110784,2,0,P|12:144|16:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,256,111242,2,0,L|248:256,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,160,112158,6,0,L|432:80,1,80
336,80,112616,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,20,112845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,113074,2,0,L|344:172,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,196,113418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,232,113532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,320,113761,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,360,113990,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,272,114219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,232,114448,2,0,P|304:224|180:236,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,312,115135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,380,115364,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,268,115822,5,2,0:0:0:0:
52,176,116051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,212,116280,2,0,P|156:164|156:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,52,116738,2,0,L|200:52,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,52,117082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,52,117196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,200,117654,6,0,P|424:208|464:212,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,116,118112,2,0,P|432:108|392:104,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,140,118570,2,0,P|296:188|304:312,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,352,119257,2,0,L|216:352,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,300,119944,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,352,120173,2,0,P|48:308|48:192,1,160
104,120,120861,2,0,L|188:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,72,121319,6,0,P|300:116|300:232,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,264,122006,2,0,P|168:220|168:104,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,12,122693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,92,122922,2,0,L|444:96,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,172,123609,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,172,123838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,228,124067,6,0,P|432:272|436:312,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,276,124754,2,0,P|320:328|312:364,1,80,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125097,12,0,127731,0:0:0:0:
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