sjoy wrote:

M4M
[Kodora's Normal]
00:20:284 add a note ? nope
00:20:695 ^ nope
00:21:106 (1) - add a whis on the head? nope
00:23:571 (3) - ^ nope
00:37:955 (6) - ^ nope
00:49:462 (1) - add a fin nope
00:54:393 (1) - add a whis on the head? here yes
00:56:448 (3) - ^nope
01:01:379 (2) - ^nope
01:02:612 (4) - ^nope
01:03:845 (2) - ^nope
01:09:188 (5) - add a clap?nope
01:12:886 (4) - whistle on the head^nope
01:14:119 (1) - clap on the head?^nope
01:19:873 (4) - end on 01:20:695?^there are actually beat at 01:20:078 - but no cymbal sound at place what you linked

Sieg wrote:

Kodora's Normal:
00:12:475 (3) - задевает хп бар его тут хер подвинешь, да и не критично, там лишь небольшой оверлап
00:58:092 (5) - может разнообразить как-нибудь его? http://puu.sh/6wtnR.jpg можно, да, хорошая идея
круто <3

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Normal:
>00:48:845 This slider should be moved using 1/6 divisor to here 00:48:777 In fact it is just wrong timing at this section.
>01:21:722 This spinner should start at 01:21:516 like in the hard and easy difficulty but i guess it's hard to say which timing is better lol.because timing at this part is too late i can't find correct place for it so i'll leave it as-it for now

kajiyatta wrote:

[Normal]
Placement
00:12:475(3) Maybe it's fine but move down this slider a bit better since the end of slider placed too upward. it just slighty overlaps HP Bar, it is fine. There are no other place to put it due to distance snap anyway
00:37:133(5,6) You can make a nice blanket here, current looks a bit odd. i like my linear

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Rhythm
00:37:133 Unnecessary green line Please don't mod this kind of stuff. They don't change anything in gameplay and won't add much to filesize.
00:29:736(5,1) Swap these notes better to follow the vocal properly.At 00:30:558, the vocal is independent so circle is better. i feel mine one correct, your one starts new part of lyrics on slidertail which is not sounds good for me

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Hit Sound
00:48:229(1,2) Turn down volume better, I just hear loudly on here. Done

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

[hai moe kodora]

1. cs4 what the fuck what? see my signature
2. 00:10:010 (2) - Ewww, fix the stack. Done
   00:14:941 (3) - ctrl+g better imo for me. current one feels better for me
   00:18:743 (1) - this spinner too fast coming. too hard in playing that was so short. 4000 on auto mode with enough low OD, it is fine
   00:25:626 (1) - what NC did here? is the rhythm is changing? at least comboing is always doing in big white tick >w< add NC at big white tick. (i mean 00:24:804 (5) ) comboing follow lyrics
   00:35:900 (3,4) - make a better blanket here. they are not supposed to be blanket
   01:03:023 (1) - try to stack. can't due to spacing. also this stacking won't be visible while playing anyway due to fast enough AR

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

[Kodora's Normal]

1. close widescreen support plz Please don't suggest this. Widescreen support always enabled by default and does pretty much nothing without storyboard
2. 00:23:571 (3) - whistle on its head? agreed
3. 00:48:229 (1,2) - reduce its volume? it sounds a little big agreed

sjoy wrote:

[alacat's Easy]
00:11:243 (1) - add a fin? it is too loud and also does not fit with this kind of sound.
00:18:640 (1) - try this http://puu.sh/6wt4M.jpg no change.
00:30:969 (1) - the same as 00:18:640 (1) ? ^
00:47:818 (4) - remove fin add whis ? followed background music here.
00:56:448 (2) - adjust the pattern and stack with 00:54:804 (2) - ? for what ?
01:02:201 (3) - add whis ? Same as above.

Sieg wrote:

alacat's Easy : 00:46:996 (3) - maybe try something http://puu.sh/6wtBw.jpg not fit to me.

kajiyatta wrote:

[Easy]
Placement
00:05:900(1,3) 見栄えの問題ですが、ここはスタックさせてみては？十分な間隔が開いているので、初心者でもこの重なりは十分見えると思います。 (1)の位置まで上に移動させたくないのでこのままで。
00:30:147(3) 終点を少し下側に曲げてやると次のnoteへの流れが良くなると思います。 ok !!!

SPOILER

00:38:982(2) ここも、同じような提案です。ここは音に合わせてるのでこのままで。

SPOILER

00:47:818(4) 252:236あたりに置いてやると、(3)からの流れがスムーズで今よりもより打ちやすいと思います。☆の形を維持したいのでこのままで。

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

[hai alacat]

1. 00:01:380 (2) - maybe curve it all like this : i prefer my slider
   
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   00:07:544 (3) - this object bit look bad if this object is touched (1). move it to some place. no problem for playing.
   00:09:599 (1,2,3) - this is really bad imo at playing. try symmetricaly this. like this: no change.
   
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   00:23:571 (1,2) - (1) new combo rhythm is not changing. but (2) is changing. also delete (1) and add (2). broken my pattern.
   00:46:996 (3) - move it to 376,108 or not. no change.
   00:51:927 (2) - try blanket? it seems bad.

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

[alacat's Easy]

1. close widescreen support plz ok
2. 00:51:927 (2,1) - blanket here,it will be looked better. Same.
3. 01:19:873 (5) - suggest use 5% volume on its tail,it sounds a little noisy This sudden silenced slider tail confuses players and your suggestion is unrankable imo.

Momochikun wrote:

[Easy]

1. I think you need to increase either HP / OD by +1 for better spread balance here, the gap Diff setting gap between Normal and Easy is a bit wide imo it's enough for easy diff.
2. 00:10:010 (2,3) - Delete (3) and add reverse on (2) instead ? 1/1 reverse slider would follow the vocal more smoothly especially at 00:10:421 - imo my pattern is better to follow the vocal.
3. 00:21:106 (1,2) - Swap this rhytm would be more better to follow the high vocal at 00:21:106 - i don't think so.
4. 00:33:434 (1,2) - Same as Normal no change.
5. 00:38:366 (1) - Would emphasize the drum on the BGm better if you replace the Normal sampleset on the end with a soft clap instead o/ mmm...
6. 00:46:174 (2) - Remove whistle from ends.. it feels too odd with 1/1 whistle rhytm followed the vocal here.
7. 00:47:818 (4) - The linear flow here seems really weird to play and rather broke the transition from 3. I'd prefer place this on a curved area of (3) so it would make better transition. Like this for example : no change.
   
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8. 00:55:215 (3,1) - A little bit nazi.. but i really think you can make them blanket better for smoother playability >< This one was look so bad imo what? it's enough.
9. 01:20:695 - Maybe silent the slider's end like other diffs ? It will fit much better considering that there're no music and vocal played at that time. The sound of it will practically disturb players. Same as above.
10. 01:21:516 (1) - Same as Hard but without note XD (just move this 1/2 later ) If Rika change it i'll do this.

sjoy wrote:

[Hard]
00:02:818 (5) - nazi move to 244,278 ?
00:05:489 (5) - 491,276
00:12:886 (1) - whis on 00:13:297?
00:14:941 (5) - NC?
00:32:407 (1) - change this http://puu.sh/6wu0u.jpg? no,i followed melody to here.
00:42:065 (5) - add a whistle? i don't wanna add whistle in kiai part.
00:51:928 (3) - ^
00:55:626 (1) - add a fin? no need to here.
01:01:791 (5) - add a whistle?
01:05:078 (4) - ^
01:05:489 (1) - add a fin?
01:07:544 (6) - whistle on the head?
01:10:010 (1,2) - I prefer this http://puu.sh/6wulr.png what?
01:15:352 (1,2) - the same as 01:10:010 (1,2)
01:16:585 (3) - whistle on the head
hope it can help you

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
clear

Hard:
od+1 6 seems really low for hardest diff in mapset 6 is enough for relax song,that's why i use AR8
00:18:640 (1) - maybe curve this a bit http://puu.sh/6wsZX.jpg i think enough for now.
00:24:393 (2,3) - and blanket here http://puu.sh/6wt2l.jpg looks ugly for mow sorry ;w;
00:26:037 (5) - inversing this will improve flow http://puu.sh/6wt4s.jpg The current is better for me.
01:15:969 (2) - and maybe blanket here? http://puu.sh/6wtao.jpg fixed to this http://puu.sh/6xQx3.jpg

Good Luck!

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Hard:
> 00:45:455 and 0:45:558 The stream should continue with these 2 notes i just shortend 2 notes.
> 00:48:736 This slider should be moved using 1/6 divisor to here 00:48:777 ? The current on 00:48:777.
> 01:13:708 Maybe add a note here? no.

I hope this helped, ciao!

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Uncheck "Widescreen Support" on Easy and Normal since there is no SB. ok.
[Hard]
Placement
00:14:325(3,4) I just suppose this liner placement looks a bit odd, so to make a natural flow to next note, it would be more better. i don't think so.

SPOILER

00:21:516(2) The spacing looks a bit large and suddunly changed, so you can change this spacing smaller better. ^
00:24:804(3) Bent this slider, and the pflow (2) to (3) looks nice. i just wanna keep this slider,no blankent to here.

SPOILER

00:39:599(4,5,6,7,8) This stream looks a bit odd since the movement of playnig looks forced, so here is a code. feel free to use it. thanks,but i think it's fine.

SPOILER

304,124,39599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,156,39702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,192,39804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,224,39907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,40010,2,0,L|352:288,3,45

00:56:859(4) Nazi, move this note at 76:156, and the line from (3) to (5) looks consistence. ok,fixed.
Rhythm
00:40:421(1) I highly suggest that the end of slider is at 00:40:626 better. 00:40:832 is beginning of KIAI TIME, so I suppose you can put notes on here. Also put NC at the beginning of KIAI. e.g.) sound werid for me sorry.

SPOILER

00:45:455 Why did you stop to put notes? The music has lasted so add notes here to make stream better. this is break jump

Good Luck.

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

Trying to m4m, just ignore me if my mod is not helpful.

[General]

1. delete "loli" "moe" to tags add "Light Novel" to tags. no need.
2. BG dimensions is just unrankable. no,pls check Ranking Criteria first.

[Hard]

1. 00:04:667 (3) - Cursor movement always poor at this. consider add distance snap on this make better way cursor to move.
   00:18:640 (1) - Move it to 236,224 for better distance way to before note.
   00:34:667 (5,6) - this patterns always bad because (5). try to not curve (5). like :
   
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Goodluck moe rika! no fixed, but thanks.

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:05:900 (1) - spacing different here move to (312,224)? blanket with 00:05:078 (4) - no need.
2. 00:32:202 (6) - suggest delete whistle here,I find it a little inappropriate when playing you can hear a piano to here.
3. 00:43:503 (2,3) - more better blanket？ ?

very nice map,I'm not a quick modder sorry

Momochikun wrote:

Hello ~ :3

[General]

1. The BG is 1280 x 720 which differ from the recommended size (1024 x 768 ). How about using this instead ? I've resized it for you.. dunno if it's good enough no,it's ok.
2. How about adding silent normal-sliderslide.wav ? the sound on some part of the music was bother me a bit o/ normal sliderslide sound not bad for me.

[Hard]

1. 00:01:380 (2,3) - This part seems too stress and suddenly after the song starts when the vocal actually still calm and smooth. How about change them into a 1/1 slider instead for better follow to the vocal ? i don't wanna spam 1/1 always.
2. 00:11:345 (1) - It would be alot more interesting if you map this part instead of spinner. I feel that the pole that be used to point this spinner is quite confusing. If it want to follow the vocal, then it should be ended at 00:14:941 - when the high vocal was ends. Just my own opinion though :3 i don't think so.
3. 00:12:886 (1) - How about changing this into a simple 1/1 slider instead that connected with (2) for a smoother play around with the instrument ? It was plays really better like you used at 00:16:174 (1,2,3,4) - same.
   
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4. 00:20:284 (3) - Add drum finish to this one, and drum clap to these 00:20:489 (4,5) - for obvious reason. First the drum that played there is different with others that just a simple drum, it has a bit echo sound for them, And it wil emphasize much better to match the drum that played on the BGM imo. normal clap is enough.
5. 00:22:955 (5) - I would like to delete this circle to let 00:22:750 (4,6) - following the vocal more precisely. no,don't think so simple orz.
6. 00:26:037 (5) - Just my random suggestion, but i feel an perfect U section here will be quite plan compared to circular flow that you used at 00:23:982 (1,2,3) - . How about bend them a bit left to create neater transition ? Like this : no D: sorry.
   
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7. 00:31:585 (4) - Unstack this circle then placed it on the top of (3) instead ? The flow would be more smooth to play imo. hides note is more fun
8. 00:32:202 (6,1) - I would like to see a slider start from (6) to follow the instrument here,, the start of (1) seems really awkward to play because there're no sound that playing there. How about 2 1/2 slider instead so it would follow the vocal at 00:32:612 - more smoothly ? If you did this you can fix your NCs pattern that following the vocal i just followed melody to here.
   
9. 00:42:065 (5) - I feel that there's should be a finish here at the head due to the slightly cymbal crash on the BGM, if you found that some of them is too loud. Try reducing the volume no finish to here.
10. 00:46:996 (4,3) - ^
11. 00:42:886 (1) - ^ on slider end
12. 00:45:558 - Why not adding circle here to complete the stream pattern ? although the 1/4 drum streams were still continued until 00:45:660 - , i feel that is kinda unnecessary to keep this part unmapped. Although kick from 00:44:941 - to 00:45:660 - would be a better choice. But consider this pls !
13. 00:56:037 (2,3) - I know that you're trying to follow the vocal on the 1/1 slider.. but skipping drum at 00:56:243 - will break hitsound pattern. How about changing them into 2 1/2 slider instead ? It would match really better with the drum and high beat vocal that emphasized with note here 00:56:859 (4) - imo.
    
14. 00:59:736 (1) - Maybe add drum finish here for same reason as 00:20:284 (3) -
15. 01:05:078 (4) - ^
16. 01:04:256 (3) - Same as before.. i would like to see 1/2 slider + note here instead for better emphasize with the vocal o/
17. 01:07:544 (6) - Clap seems don't give enough pressure to the instrument imo. Try replacing the clap on ends with Finish instead ?
18. 01:11:654 (4) - Same as 00:42:065 (5) - same
19. 01:21:517 (1) - I would like to start this spinner 1/2 later ( 01:21:722 - ) then add note here 01:21:516 - instead to following the piano. That would give much sense and match with 01:19:873 (4) - which following vocal too imo. spinner on piano is enough,that's why i don't start on vocal.

Good Luck !

jacob wrote:

[General]
-add "original soundtrack second season" to tags, says that in mp3 data ok,added
-source should be "GOSICK -ゴシック-", check the japanese wikipedia.. also look at these - 1 2 3 ok,i see fixed xDl
[Hard]
00:04:667 (3,4) - this is really weird and doesn't flow well. stack (4) under (3), that's better to play i test play and flow is ok for me.
00:27:681 (2) - reverse this to make a jump. would flow well and be fun ok,fixed.
00:52:339 (4) - same as above, reversing this would flow better ^
01:02:202 (6,7) - i think it's weird to have a note right after a short slider right here. delete the note after the slider and extend the slider by 1/4 or just make this a stream using all circles i used this so many time ><

gl ^^

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. It would be nice if you can use the same Kiai Time on Kodora's difficulty as well.
2. Remove the black color from the colors and change it with something else, it's annoying to see if you disable the background. changed color.

~Hard~

1. 00:39:907 (7,8) - Spacing is inconsistent here, make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled. it's fun point, no probleam

Good map, will try to see if I can find a better timing, though.