1. 00:17:349 (1,2,3) - 3/2 gaps are pretty hard for new players. It actually suits the song better to use a reverse slider like this: http://puu.sh/7XmSR.jpg | This makes you hit the key notes but still resume the standard 1/1 pattern that makes an Easy.. well Easy.
2. 00:19:916 (3,2) - Right here you should probably move these two apart from each other. They overlap, and because there isn't any sort of blanket or such, it looks fairly ugly. A bit more below..
3. 00:20:771 (1,2) - This can be tricky to play for new players. They might be expecting to hit 00:21:200 - because its the last syllable in "never" so players might join that up. Easy solution would be to apply another 3/2 slider (believe me, these things can really make an Easy feel more comfortable!) | At this point you should try rearranging the positioning of these notes, maybe try different slider shapes etc to see what you can figure out.
4. 00:24:623 - how about mapping to this? Try using a slider starting where 00:24:195 (2) - is and ending at 00:24:623 - | This will catch the key vocals and make it a ton more fun to play.
5. 00:27:619 (3) - This is a bit large and a bit awkward, especially with the upcoming notes. Since the vocals are a bit complicated here, sticking with a basic 1/1 beat would probably be your best option. This one is more up to you what you want to do. | Try something like this: http://puu.sh/80aC4.jpg | (3) is where (3) is currently. I suggest adding a note at 00:30:187 - (which is 5 in the screenshot) as this helps people skip over the vocals and follow the beat here. Having this blank space will probably make new players try to hit the vocal note so it'll get pressed early.
6. 00:35:109 (2,3) - this is a bit tricky. Join these up as a slider so it'll be easier to hit.
7. 00:40:886 (1) - Very very important. I highly highly recommend you delete this. Following natural rhythm and feel to the song, you do not need to map this lead-in vocal note. 2/1 gap allows players to recover after a spinner as well.
8. 00:44:309 (1) - add whistle to the head of this slider
9. 00:48:161 (1,2) - This will probably be more comfortable as a 3/2 slider. The vocals vary a bit here, so having this slider will help people realize they don't need to hit them.
10. 00:51:585 (1) - how about a slider here. start it back at 00:50:943 - and end where the (1) is. This will follow the vocals very nicely and it doesn't leave such a big gap in the music.
11. 00:55:008 (1,2,3) - Try something more like this. | http://puu.sh/80bfv.jpg or http://puu.sh/80h4m.jpg | The idea for the first one is to make it look more symmetrical, and the second one is to create more of an circular flow so it's easy to play.
12. 01:11:271 - A bit optional, but it would make your map more lively, how about a 1/1 slider here? (1/1 is the length of what 01:10:415 (3) - is)
13. 01:14:695 - same as above 1/1 slider
14. 01:15:550 (1,2) - because of "the" which you can hear at 01:15:978 - I suggest making this a 3/2 slider as well.
15. 01:18:974 (1) - same suggestion as 00:51:585 (1) - Make a slider starting at 01:18:332 - and extending it to where the (1) is.
16. 01:19:402 - more life could be added. Try a circle here.
17. 01:21:114 - same idea, this time try a 1/1 slider
18. 01:22:826 - add circle
19. 01:26:249 - and finally, you can try adding a circle here as well.
20. go into 1/8 beat snap divisor and end this at 01:30:369 - like my diffs. it sounds much better.

1. 00:10:073 (1) - instead of a straight slider. how about starting the song off with something interesting? Maybe try a slider like this? | http://puu.sh/80i2o.jpg
2. 00:27:405 (2) - Finish is a bit excessive here. A simple whistle would work great.
3. 00:28:689 (5) - try adding a bit of curve into this so it wraps around the tail end of the (6) a little bit nicer | http://puu.sh/80icd.jpg
4. 00:31:685 (1,2,3) - Not really feeling these circles. Why not just make them into one long slider?
5. 00:32:754 (5) - Fitting rhythm and flow structure, maybe try ending this 1/4 earlier as it feels more natural to swap what you are following, in this case instrumentals to vocals on a dominant key note.
6. 00:35:108 (4) - try a whistle on the head.
7. 00:36:179 (6) - How about adding a circle 1/2 earlier and then trying to mimic this picture? | http://puu.sh/80ipY.jpg
8. 00:40:886 (1) - Orange? | http://puu.sh/80isJ.jpg | Click the arrow by the new combo button and you can change the combo color to Sailor Venus' Orange! This will make the rest of the colors Blue, Red, and then Green!
9. 00:48:161 (1,3) - it would be best if these were stacked. but it would be better if you moved the (3) somewhere else. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/80iSm.jpg | Of course, you'd have to adjust the next few circles as well, but it won't be hard.
10. 00:54:366 (3) - honestly I've never figured out why you decided to use a 3/4 slider here as there is a more dominant hit at 00:54:580 - and 00:54:794 - Just my thoughts since I think these would sound better playing all 1/2 notes instead.
11. 00:56:720 (5,6) - blanket? Try to create something similar to this. Use the approach circle to help. | http://puu.sh/80ja7.jpg | Note that you can hold shift if grid snapping is enabled to temporary disable it for more precise movements.
12. 01:03:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you are trying to follow the guitar, you have to use 1/3 beat snap divisor like I do in my normal diff. | http://puu.sh/80jmb.jpg
13. 01:14:695 (1) - I notice you've gotten a few things saying this doesn't really fit. | you can try something like this if you want to keep the streamy bits | http://puu.sh/80jyN.jpg
14. 01:16:192 (3) - no doubt about it. this end should be snapped on the red tick at 01:16:620 - I highly recommend you fix this.
15. 01:20:472 (5) - you should stack this where 01:18:760 (2) - is. To do this. Take off Distance Snapping and place (5) where the (2) is. After that adjust
16. 01:19:830 (4) - so the tail end is 1.00 away from the (5).. How do you know this? Look at the top right when the (4) selected | http://puu.sh/80jP2.jpg | This shows how far it is to the next or previous note and one of the most handy tools in the beatmap editor.
17. 01:21:328 - The (2) coming up is a very awkward note to feel and hit. It would definitely feel a lot better if you added a circle to this spot here to follow the drums properly.
18. 01:21:756 (1,2) - These aren't a perfect flip of each other.. If you want to, Copy and paste the (1) in the (2)'s spot. then rotate it 180° by either going to Edit -> Rotate 90° Clockwise twice, or simply press the hotkey combo of Control + > on your keyboard!
19. after that you may be wondering.. well how the hell do you get the tail ends to stack perfectly on each other? Simple. Control+G the (1) first. stack it on 01:21:543 (2) - , and the control+g again. Repeat for the next slider. If you are having trouble stacking, you can also look at the coords (see the earlier picture with the distance of each objects and that will help you know if the circle is placed properly on top. You can also click the coords and manually put in numbers as well. There are a lot of hidden things in the editor... and you'll slowly learn more and more as you play around with it.. For now this should be enough. Try a few of these out!
20. 01:27:533 (1) - same as Easy. try ending this spinner on the same spot as I do on Normal.

Lanturn wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:17:349 (1,2,3) - 3/2 gaps are pretty hard for new players. It actually suits the song better to use a reverse slider like this: http://puu.sh/7XmSR.jpg | This makes you hit the key notes but still resume the standard 1/1 pattern that makes an Easy.. well Easy. fixed
2. 00:19:916 (3,2) - Right here you should probably move these two apart from each other. They overlap, and because there isn't any sort of blanket or such, it looks fairly ugly. A bit more below.. fixed
3. 00:20:771 (1,2) - This can be tricky to play for new players. They might be expecting to hit 00:21:200 - because its the last syllable in "never" so players might join that up. Easy solution would be to apply another 3/2 slider (believe me, these things can really make an Easy feel more comfortable!) | At this point you should try rearranging the positioning of these notes, maybe try different slider shapes etc to see what you can figure out. done
   
4. 00:24:623 - how about mapping to this? Try using a slider starting where 00:24:195 (2) - is and ending at 00:24:623 - | This will catch the key vocals and make it a ton more fun to play. done
5. 00:27:619 (3) - This is a bit large and a bit awkward, especially with the upcoming notes. Since the vocals are a bit complicated here, sticking with a basic 1/1 beat would probably be your best option. This one is more up to you what you want to do. | Try something like this: http://puu.sh/80aC4.jpg | (3) is where (3) is currently. I suggest adding a note at 00:30:187 - (which is 5 in the screenshot) as this helps people skip over the vocals and follow the beat here. Having this blank space will probably make new players try to hit the vocal note so it'll get pressed early. i agree that it may be a bit awkward, but I think it's still good as it is.
   
6. 00:35:109 (2,3) - this is a bit tricky. Join these up as a slider so it'll be easier to hit.
7. 00:40:886 (1) - Very very important. I highly highly recommend you delete this. Following natural rhythm and feel to the song, you do not need to map this lead-in vocal note. 2/1 gap allows players to recover after a spinner as well.
8. 00:44:309 (1) - add whistle to the head of this slider
9. 00:48:161 (1,2) - This will probably be more comfortable as a 3/2 slider. The vocals vary a bit here, so having this slider will help people realize they don't need to hit them.
10. 00:51:585 (1) - how about a slider here. start it back at 00:50:943 - and end where the (1) is. This will follow the vocals very nicely and it doesn't leave such a big gap in the music. fixed this and all above
11. 00:55:008 (1,2,3) - Try something more like this. | http://puu.sh/80bfv.jpg or http://puu.sh/80h4m.jpg | The idea for the first one is to make it look more symmetrical, and the second one is to create more of an circular flow so it's easy to play. would lose DS
12. 01:11:271 - A bit optional, but it would make your map more lively, how about a 1/1 slider here? (1/1 is the length of what 01:10:415 (3) - is)
13. 01:14:695 - same as above 1/1 slider sorry, i think I wont be doing this or the above one, unless it starts to be recommended by like tons of people
14. 01:15:550 (1,2) - because of "the" which you can hear at 01:15:978 - I suggest making this a 3/2 slider as well. done
15. 01:18:974 (1) - same suggestion as 00:51:585 (1) - Make a slider starting at 01:18:332 - and extending it to where the (1) is. done
16. 01:19:402 - more life could be added. Try a circle here. added
17. 01:21:114 - same idea, this time try a 1/1 slider should be fine. Keeping pause unless it is heavily recommended.
18. 01:22:826 - add circle added
19. 01:26:249 - and finally, you can try adding a circle here as well. I think its fine.
20. go into 1/8 beat snap divisor and end this at 01:30:369 - like my diffs. it sounds much better. done

[Hard]

1. 00:10:073 (1) - instead of a straight slider. how about starting the song off with something interesting? Maybe try a slider like this? brilliant idea. Changed
2. 00:27:405 (2) - Finish is a bit excessive here. A simple whistle would work great.
3. 00:28:689 (5) - try adding a bit of curve into this so it wraps around the tail end of the (6) a little bit nicer done along with above one
4. 00:31:685 (1,2,3) - Not really feeling these circles. Why not just make them into one long slider? should be fine as is. Removed the earlier NC on the circles to indicate that it's still a part of the vocals but later follows the drum.
5. 00:32:754 (5) - Fitting rhythm and flow structure, maybe try ending this 1/4 earlier as it feels more natural to swap what you are following, in this case instrumentals to vocals on a dominant key note.
6. 00:35:108 (4) - try a whistle on the head. done along with above
7. 00:36:179 (6) - How about adding a circle 1/2 earlier and then trying to mimic this picture? really feels like overmapping/mapping an empty unnecessary spot imo. sorry
8. 00:40:886 (1) - Orange? | http://puu.sh/80isJ.jpg | Click the arrow by the new combo button and you can change the combo color to Sailor Venus' Orange! This will make the rest of the colors Blue, Red, and then Green! all hail Editor. done
9. 00:48:161 (1,3) - it would be best if these were stacked. but it would be better if you moved the (3) somewhere else. done
10. 00:54:366 (3) - honestly I've never figured out why you decided to use a 3/4 slider here as there is a more dominant hit at 00:54:580 - and 00:54:794 - Just my thoughts since I think these would sound better playing all 1/2 notes instead. yeah...BSS was stupid yesterday so I couldn't update what I changed it too. Ninja'd much, soz
11. 00:56:720 (5,6) - blanket? Try to create something similar to this. Use the approach circle to help. | http://puu.sh/80ja7.jpg | Note that you can hold shift if grid snapping is enabled to temporary disable it for more precise movements. fixed
12. 01:03:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you are trying to follow the guitar, you have to use 1/3 beat snap divisor like I do in my normal diff. sounds way better! About 20% cooler now
13. 01:14:695 (1) - I notice you've gotten a few things saying this doesn't really fit. the deed has been done
14. 01:16:192 (3) - no doubt about it. this end should be snapped on the red tick at 01:16:620 - I highly recommend you fix this. done
15. 01:20:472 (5) - you should stack this where 01:18:760 (2) - is. To do this. Take off Distance Snapping and place (5) where the (2) is. After that adjust 01:19:830 (4) - so the tail end is 1.00 away from the (5).. How do you know this? Look at the top right when the (4) selected | http://puu.sh/80jP2.jpg | This shows how far it is to the next or previous note and one of the most handy tools in the beatmap editor. done
16. 01:21:328 - The (2) coming up is a very awkward note to feel and hit. It would definitely feel a lot better if you added a circle to this spot here to follow the drums properly. done
17. 01:21:756 (1,2) - These aren't a perfect flip of each other.. If you want to, Copy and paste the (1) in the (2)'s spot. then rotate it 180° by either going to Edit -> Rotate 90° Clockwise twice, or simply press the hotkey combo of Control + > on your keyboard! after that you may be wondering.. well how the hell do you get the tail ends to stack perfectly on each other? Simple. Control+G the (1) first. stack it on 01:21:543 (2) - , and the control+g again. Repeat for the next slider. If you are having trouble stacking, you can also look at the coords (see the earlier picture with the distance of each objects and that will help you know if the circle is placed properly on top. You can also click the coords and manually put in numbers as well. There are a lot of hidden things in the editor... and you'll slowly learn more and more as you play around with it.. For now this should be enough. Try a few of these out! Fixed. Indiana Ninja and the Editor of Doom: Coming to a Beatmap near you.
18. 01:27:533 (1) - same as Easy. try ending this spinner on the same spot as I do on Normal. done.

I didn't use the above mod when making this since well.. I don't think you updated it. Some things may be a bit off.
not much else to say. If you want to learn about how I hitsounded my diff then you can read below XD thx for following up the mod :3 I'll look over your hitsounding essay section in a bit

smallboat wrote:

#modreq

[General]

Maybe you can add a sliderslide mute the slide sound ? A bit noise. think it should be fine.

[Easy]

00:16:920 (4) - Make the pattern neat,try to stack 00:15:208 (2) ? ninjad
00:35:109 (2) - Add whistle follow vocal? added to the end. Just didnt fit in at the head
00:35:536 (3) - ^ nope.avi, sorry
00:49:874 (3) - A bit noise, cancel medium whistle? ninjad
01:03:996 (3) - A bit noise, cancel clap here? keeping

[Hard]

00:12:854 (4) - Cancel clap here? A bit noisy. done
00:15:636 (4) - Add NC (Big white line) no. It's still in the current combo's vocals
00:16:492 (1) - Cancel NC no, since it's a combo following the drum part
00:17:348 (4) - Add NC done
00:28:689 (5) - Forget add whistle in the end? no, it's just that it really doesn't fit.
00:38:746 (5) - Cancel clap here? A bit noisy. ninjad. Sorry, wasn't able to update yesterday bcuz BSS hate me
00:49:445 (3) - Forget add whistle in the end? doesnt fit
01:20:472 (5) - Stack 01:18:760 (2) ? ninjad
01:21:543 (2,1,2) - Feel hard to read ,imo. ^^

Good Luck. thx! Sorry about all the ninja'ds.

Chloe wrote:

M4M and since you're no-rank mapper, I'll give some opinion in quality.


[Easy]
00:15:636 (3) - it's not a perfect blanket right here ,see here http://puu.sh/835If.jpg you can follow the

approach circle to bulid a perfect blanket,the one I made is like this, take a look here http://puu.sh/835N6.jpg
00:27:619 (1) - add nc for more readable
00:44:309 (1,2,3,1) - you can build a square here instead of putting everywhere

honestly to said the arrangement is not beautiful, but it's ok since you're a newbie.
ps:I said ok means some bat would bubble after they modded your map.

all fixed

[Hard]
00:16:492 (1) - move to 188 271 move to 176 191 since a straight line circles don't look nice and also not funny in playing its fine
00:19:916 (1,2,3) - same as previous, I prefer this http://puu.sh/836lB.jpg the hard is highest diff in this set , don't follow the distance everywhere, make some special patterns is also ok, this is my opinion, also 00:19:916 (1) - here's a nc, so this pattern I gave can be look clearly in first trying. also plz fix the next patterns if you wanna change it. will consider if more people bring it up, but I think a hard diff should essentially follow distance nearly everywhere.
00:23:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a good pattern. You didn't seem to specify how it's not a good pattern, so I can't really fix it. Sorry! ;_;
00:26:977 (1) - ctrlg since flow is not good here and also design, trust me. may consider if more people bring it up
00:46:021 (1,2) - plz don't overlap them, looks bad now Fixed! Thanks for spotting that
00:47:305 (1) - same as normal what I said I think it should be good as is.
00:55:437 (1) - cancel nc here, it makes no sence
01:26:249 (1) - nc here done along with above one

maybe need more work imo, I guess the quality is not enough to bubble, sry x.x going to update this post when I finish doing your hard mod later today

moonlightleaf wrote:

M4M from my queue, just some suggestion for you

[Easy]

00:26:763 (1,3) - i don't think strack those, maybe should part , just imo should be fine for now. Thats why I added the NC thx to a previous modder, so a new player will know "OH LOOK NEW APPROACH CIRCLE ER MER GERD THATS WHERE I SHOULD GOOOO"

01:12:127 (1,2) - maybe to close to paly on easy ? 01:12:127 (1)change to note | 01:12:769 (2)start from 01:12:555 - 01:13:411 should be fine


[Hard]

00:16:920 (3) - remove clap , add finish

00:20:344 (3) - ^

00:22:482 (8,9) - ^

01:17:262 (6,7) - ^ no for this and all the above ones

00:28:689 (5,6) - blanket fixed it a bit more

00:40:030 (3,4) - change to slider nope

00:46:021 (1,2) - blanket , no bond fixed

01:20:472 (5) - remove clap done

01:23:896 (5) - ^ done

maybe all the clap should change to finish , you can check it

good luck

LilyWhite wrote:

Hello! Catch my mod,

Easy

00:23:767 1/2 slider is strongly not recommended for an easy. should be fine
00:25:693 Finish instead of clap?
00:27:619 Finish instead of whistle?
00:30:615 Move circle to x:40 and y:348 for symmetry. done
00:32:754 Whistle instead of clap?
00:38:318 Clap
00:39:174 ^
00:43:026 Same as 00:23:767. Also, remove clap at start of slider.
00:44:309 Same problem as 00:23:767.
00:49:445 Clap.
00:49:873 Same problem as 00:23:767.
00:51:585 Finish.
00:52:441 Finish.
00:53:083 Finish instead of clap.
01:01:856 Not only the slider feels weird to me, but put finish instead of whistle at the beginning of it.
01:03:568 What's with all the claps? The only one that feels necessary to me is the one at (3). Remove all the others and also add a finish at 3. I hear something in the background fitting enough to put a finish.
01:12:555 1/2 rhythms for an easy, nonono.
01:21:970 ^
01:26:891 ^
rest no change

Hard

00:21:414 I suggest that the third pin's position is x:260, y:324.
00:43:026How about this? great idea! changed
00:46:877 Circle could be at x:204, y:156. done
00:47:412 Clap?
00:47:733 ^
00:49:873 There's a problem of alignment with the sliders and the following hitcircles. fixed
01:04:994 is where slider 5's end must be.
01:27:961 How about moving the spinner's beginning here? done along with above one
unmarked = no change

Hope it was helpful!

Oracle wrote:

Easy
00:26:763 (1,1) - Certain stacking is pretty hard to read and even tricky for beginners. I'd suggest you unstack these if you ask me. And here's a potential solution: http://puu.sh/85dwS.jpg any other way would essentially break DS, so I regretfully reject this. If there are more people that mention this however, then I may change it.
00:58:432 (1,1) - That 3/2 gap is pretty confusing. You may want to try this: http://puu.sh/85ecl.jpg. Also take note that in lower diffs. If you ever want to create some rhythm like 3/2. It's better for you to use a slider or even slider tail. fixed it up a bit
01:01:856 (1,2,3,4) - If you want the slider prettier along with the coming notes symmetrical. done
01:08:703 (1,2) - Exchange these 2? As I mentioned before, if you ever want to place something on redtick. Make it land on slider tail because there's no accuracy requirement to follow the slider tail. But 01:12:127 (1,2) - stuff like this is okay because there's no gap between the beats. Very easy to understand the rhythm. exchanged
01:17:690 (3,1) - A 3/2 gap again. Why don't you try something similar to 01:21:970 (1,2) - . Works pretty fine here. did what was in 01:21:970
01:26:249 - I suggest you add a note here to catch the drum. added


Hard
00:32:754 (1) - The 1/4 reverse feels bland due to lack of hitsounding. Try to add whistle on certain repeats in 00:32:754 - ,00:32:968 - ,00:33:182 - ,00:33:396 - ,00:33:610 - Added whistles, but only on the 2nd and 4th suggestion. It felt a bit too much of whistles with all 4 whistles.
00:56:720 (5,6) - They're not followint the song very well... Try this? tried what you suggested, it sounds much better and in with the music! Changed
01:03:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - The 1/3 here is REALLY unexpected. The spacing difference is not large enough to tell they're 1/3 rather than 1/4. I'd change 01:03:567 (1,2,3) - into a 1/3 reverse slider. rather than changing it to a repeat slider, I increased the spacing to 1.1x. Hopefully it'll be an indicator of 1/3 timing. If it doesn't work out so well, I'll go ahead and switch to reverse slider. Essentially changed
01:26:890 (1) - I don't think the new combo here is really necessary. removed
01:27:961 (1) - The spinner end has different snap than other diffs.Try to keep them consistent didn't notice that, thanks for spotting that! Fixed

You got the idea of mapping. Good luck on this and your future maps!

Milhofo wrote:

[General]

- Pretty accurate, it's going to be hard to find something to mod

[Easy]

- 00:26:763 (1,2) - These are following the drums while all others are on the voice (in that part), minor thing ._. Would only put one at 00:26:977 - and take the others off, matter of taste.
- 00:57:148 - Would really like a circle there

SPOILER

[Hard]

- 01:24:538 (1) - Before this note I can hear some drums aswell, with a different sound, I would add 2 more notes before that (with a different hitsound):

SPOILER

- I really think there should be a circle at 01:26:035 - , I even clicked the second time I played through it.

SPOILER

Right there:

Like I said the map is really accurate, tried to find everything I could. Good luck no changes on any because I felt that none of the mods really fit in with the map style and current state and difficulty of the map

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

Icee (I see)

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs
[Easy]

00:15:636 (3) - move: x: 196 y: 124. (Better blanket) and move 00:16:920 (4) - circle here x: 360 y: 308 ? fixed
00:25:051 (3) - make blanket? slider 2nd white point: x: 56 y: 184, and last (3rd) point: x: 88 y: 240 ? done
00:37:248 (1) - move: x: 276 y: 136? (blanket) http://puu.sh/86m1u.jpg blanket is fine
00:46:021 (1) - move: x: 344 y: 160 ? It's fine as is, there's no real point I see in doing this.
01:10:415 (3) - make nice blanket? http://puu.sh/86m9p.jpg fixed it a small bit. It wasn't that bad
01:12:769 (2) - ^ fine as is
01:23:254 (3,1) - 01:25:180 (1) - it's too close. -> http://puu.sh/86mlK.jpg fixed

[Hard]
AR: -1 done

00:27:405 (2) - blanket? Slider end (last) tick: x: 312 y: 256 ? done
00:34:466 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/86mXo.jpg ? done
01:00:358 (1) - move: x: 344 y: 24 ? blanket is fine
01:08:703 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/86n8r.jpg ? and 01:08:703 (1) - CTRL +G & move 01:08:275 (1) - circle here: x: 200 y: 120? fixed in my own way

Don wrote:

Easy
TL;DR Blegh, perpindicular sliders
00:13:924 (1) - This slider I feel would be better off flowing when slightly slanted akin to http://puu.sh/86nQs.jpg
00:26:763 (1) - This stack doesn't look correct, consider splitting it, letting go of distance snap.
00:19:916 (3) - This note overlaps because of low AR, doesn't look good, try to replace it so it doesn't
00:50:943 (1) - This note doesn't flow well. Consider making it a long slider.
00:58:432 (1,2,1) - Consider adding a clap at the end of the sliders, removing the claps at 01:03:568 (2,3)
01:18:546 (1,2,3) - Straight sliders don't look good http://puu.sh/86Buw.jpg
01:26:891 (3) - Consider reshaping http://puu.sh/86BvV.jpg
all fixed!


Hard
TL;DR Straight lines aren't fun patterns
00:11:785 (1,2) - Curved sliders would do the map more justice.
00:16:492 (1,2,3) - This pattern seems somewhat uninspired, consider making it more triangular
00:39:602 (1,2,3,4,5) - Notes in a straight line are blegh, you might want to make it a little jumpier.
00:40:671 (6) - This note feels quite hard to read, consider making 00:40:457 (5) into a slider perhaps?
00:49:872 (4,5,6) - Straight line notes again.
01:00:999 (2,3,4,5) - This feels awkward to play. Perhaps try a jigsaw-pattern here?
01:14:695 (1,2) - Give the notes some space apart so they can breathe.

no changes. Even if the patterns may seem too linear or "uninspired", it fits with the map right now and keeps flow going.

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hey there~ Remodding Easy and Hard on creators request. Any questions about my mod post then feel free to PM me ingame.

Both diffs seem to have lots of new combo inconsistencies, so I recommend checking all these and make sure that NC's only start on the large white tick. A slider ends on a large white tick? Then NC the note after.

Easy

00:17:348 (1) - You should curve this so it's looks like a shorter version 00:15:636 (3) - and is at the same sort of angle. Doing this would create a nice symmetrical pattern that looks somewhat like this done

00:19:916 (3,1) - Bad blanket, try adjusting the anchor points of both sliders until you get something that's spaced well and looks like this fixed

00:23:767 (1) - You should move this 1/2 of a beat back and add a repeat so that you can catch all the vocals. At the moment it just seems kinda empty that there isn't a hitsound on these vocals. I'd rather have that than to have multiple repeats on this diff, especially considering that new players will be playing Easy diffs. This also allows me to add emphasis on is the one and of the downbeat.

00:26:763 (1) - Spacing error. This note is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to close to the previous one, so I highly recommend you move this somewhere that is spaced right. Easy's need to have consistent spacing. le fix

00:27:191 (2,1) - Meh, (2) isn't perfectly centred with (1), so I suggest you move around some notes to see if you can get it perfectly in the middle. fixed

00:31:043 (2,3) - I find that these sliders need to be curved a bit because at the moment they seem very bland. The cursor also doesn't flow well with 90 degree angle changes. fixed

00:37:248 (1,2) - This blanket has a lot of room for improvement, so I suggest moving (2) to x: 376 y:155. After doing this I suggest you move 00:38:746 (3) - as well so it's on the same y axis as (2) done

00:40:886 (1) -Add a clap here? I personally think it would sound better and less empty. added whistle instead to keep consistency

00:41:314 (2) - You could curve this in such a way that it blankets over 00:40:886 (1) - since it'll look nicer. curved it in such a way that it blankets over the upcoming circle instead in a most likely shitty attempt to keep flow going

01:18:332 (1) - I think you should move this down 1/2 and then add a repeat because that way, the repeats would be hitting all of the vocals, rather than skipping a word which causes that empty feeling. not changing for the same reason as the one before that I rejected

01:21:970 (1,2,3) - You should align these three to the same y axis so it would look neater. fixed

01:25:180 (1) - As it is right now, this note isn't in a position where it would flow well, so I would recommend moving this to a place like x:120 y:352. Please remember to adjust the next two notes so it's spaced well and flows nice. attempted fix

Hard

00:11:785 (1,2) - This square thingy isn't really a fun pattern, so try moving (2) to x:314 y:272 to make the pattern a more exiting shape. You may need to adjust 00:12:640 (3,4) - afterwards fixed

00:21:414 (5,6,7,8) - Flow here seems kind of rough to me. Maybe you could make the end of (5) part of the zig-zag as well, like this: kinda went with adifferent way since I had to move a ton of different notes around

00:26:549 (2,3,4) - This triplet breaks flow, which is bad because the flow has only just started in that section, creating an awkward feeling as you hit the notes. I would recommend a spaced triple, or a repeater slider. spaced

00:26:977 (1,2) - Bad blanket, I'd suggest moving (1) to x:390 y:197 to fix this. fixed

00:47:305 (1) - In my opinion, I really don't think this fits. It's overmapped and it plays funny so I think the map would be better off without it. removed. RIP slider 2014-2014

00:49:445 (3) - Move this slider up to x:267 y:202 so it can perfectly stack with the slider end of 00:48:161 (1) - assuming that you actually meant y:302, fixed

00:49:872 (4,5,6) - This straight line seems a bit uninspired, try moving (4) to x:157 y:184, (5) to x:115 y:155 and (6) x:115 y:34 so that there is a nice curve shape, that flows well and looks nice. fixed

00:50:943 (1,2,3) - This sort of slider-square thing doesn't look nice or flow well. Either turn 00:50:943 (1) - into two circles, making it a perfect square pattern. Or you could keep the slider and move (2) to x:432 y:110 and (3) to x:478 y:175, creating a nicer looking flowier pattern. changed to a square


Well, guess that's it from me~ Good luck!

1. i think preview point is unsnapped better reset

1. 01:00:358 (1) - i think this beat is little hard for beginners move to 01:00:144 is better and relocate 01:01:000 (2) -
2. 01:26:249 (2) - add Finish

1. 00:44:737 (3) - add finish on the reverse point
2. 00:47:305 (3) - ah.. i think this slider is not good for normal diff better make like this
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3. 01:26:891 (2) - add finish on the reverse point i think finish needs here too

1. 00:53:938 (2) - why don't you make this watching 00:53:726 (1) - ? like
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2. 01:01:427 (4,1) - i think this overlap doesn't look good. better make not to overlap
3. 01:03:567 (1) - i think clap doesn't fit here..
4. 01:26:890 (2,3) - add finish on these two will be nice. to give high impress