Mao wrote:

M4M Request hi~

General

1. Disable widescreen support on all diffs since you haven't got a story board ok, fixed

Easy

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  00:22:091 (5) - Avoid letting the slider end on the big white tick. The big white tick here should be more emphasized imo
  ok, fixed
  
  There are some more, otherwise the diff seems fine to me. Try to avoid some small DS variation though. i'll pay attention to such issues, thx

Normal

1. 00:26:310 (7,1) - Fix Blanket ok, fixed
2. 00:30:295 (1) - A curved one would fit the music better imo keep the current one
3. 00:45:295 (6) - NC ok, added
4. 00:58:185 (7,1) - Blanket ok, fixed
   
   I have one problem with this normal. You have no consistens DS. Try to avoid using 1,00 for 1/1 notes since it's harder to read for beginners. may consider about that

Hard

1. 00:04:630 (2,3) - On all the other doubles you used DS 0,10. Consider using it here too. ok, fixed
2. 00:04:982 (4) - How about stacking with the end of 00:04:045 (1) - . Or at least using DS 0,10 as a distance between the head of 00:04:982 (4) - and the tail of 00:04:045 (1) - you're right, made them stack
3. 00:07:795 (1) - Curved upwards would be better imo seems fine, fixed
4. 00:15:295 (1) - Remove repeat and place a circle at 00:17:638 for better emphasize, since slider tail isn't good for emphasizing stuff. :c considered about such issues, and i fixed some of them, nice opinion
5. 00:17:170 (1) - ^
6. 00:19:045 (1) - ^ Not going to list all of these though. Would be better imo but you don't have to fix since it would be lot of work I guess. Just wanted to point out.
7. 00:32:638 (2) - CTRL + G here prefer the original one
8. 00:33:576 (4) - Stack better ok, fixed
9. 00:52:326 (4) - ^ fixed
10. 00:54:435 (4,1) - Fix blanket ok, fixed
11. 00:59:357 (3) - Stack with 00:57:482 (4) - oops, i missed such issue, really thx, fixed
12. 01:08:966 (3) - CTRL+H version of this on the same persion would be better imo :c keep the current one
13. 01:27:951 (4) - CTRL + G keep the current one
14. 01:26:076 (4) - Stack better. (Going to stop listing them since I don't know if you want them like this :c) ok, fixed. actually when i fix such stack issues every time, they appears automatically next time, don't know why……orz

I hop this helps! Good luck :3

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey Random mod here, because your music is awesome! hi, crystal~ :3

[Hard]
00:16:584 - Consider adding a note here. Since this is the highest difficulty in this map set, triplets can make this diff look more challenging and fun! umm……i may consider about that, since in the forepart of this diff i don't want to make the rhythm too dense, as you see, triplets mostly appear in the climax part of this song
00:18:459 - ^
00:20:334 - ^
00:22:209 - ^
00:45:295 (1) - Consider removing. no
01:21:623 (4,5) - Swap their positions, to form a triangular flow. it looks better then the current forward-back flow since it looks sort of confusing to read. prefer to keep the current one

[Normal]
*Be sure to fix the DS, that should be your top priority for this diff! (I think your current one is at 1.2?) actually DS in this diff is: 1 beat apart 1.0 and 1/2 beat apart 1.2, i'm not sure it's a must-fix problem or not, i may ask more people about this
00:45:295 (1) - Add whistle? no, seems no necessary to add whistle here
01:02:170 - Consider adding a note here with NC and a finish. It creates a more completed feel for this playtime, before the break. since this break time is shorter than usual, don't want to add note here

[Easy]
00:00:295 (1) - This spinner is really too short. New players won't be able to complete this slider in time. Spinners in an Easy diff is best to be at least 3-4 beats long, not 2. ok……i extended these spinners 1 beat longer
Another option is to transform this spinner into a slider instead. But, that would need a lot of re-arranging for your objects, so it's up to you.
Remove 00:02:170 (1) - , and extend 00:00:295 (1) - to 00:02:170. as above, just extended spinner 1 beat longer
Or turn this spinner into a slider.
00:03:810 (1) - Same suggestion as above. Remove 00:05:920 (1) - , and extend the spinner to 00:05:920 Or replace spinner with a slider.
00:07:795 (1) - Remove 00:09:670 (1) - and extend spinner's tail to here. Or replace spinner with a slider.
00:11:310 (1) - Remove 00:13:420 (1) - and extend spinner's tail to here. Or replace spinner with a slider.
01:02:170 - Consider adding a note here with NC and a finish. It creates a more completed feel for this playtime, before the break. seems fine, added
01:17:170 (5) - turn into a curved slider like this for better flow: ok, fixed

02:07:795 (2) - Consider turning this into a hit circle, then moving 02:08:263 (1) - back so it starts at 02:08:263 instead (but keeping it's tail at 02:09:670). Spinner should be long enough now, for new players to complete it effectively. ok, but make the spinner begin at 02:08:029
02:10:138 (1) - Remove note. umm……prefer to keep it

Good luck!

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing my individual opinion Ignore them if you think they are helpless

[Important]
中国风的曲子重复的部分是很多的……做出有新意不重复的梗是非常重要的一件事情……
edit的时候没感觉，但是play的时候感觉太过于横平竖直，这一点请务必注意 其实这图风格就是这样，因为考虑到本身这曲子风格就比较凌厉，中国风的感觉并不浓厚，相反由于是反派角色的武戏曲更有肃杀之意，因此做图时有意模仿一些俄式map的风格，多用近似直滑条的微弧滑条，排列上以平行垂直和叠notes较多，以及一些跳，而尽量少用会平添圆滑流畅之感的blanket。而曲子前段由于节奏尚且平和，因此滑条也都确实很平直，在进入较高潮的段落之后（00:47:170 (1) 起），则排列都偏斜，这都是有意为之的。大概是这样

[Hard]
00:55:607 (2) - 可以考虑采用（任何一处这样的地方都可以修改，避免太死板，而且可以略微提升难度，这个hard略简单） 这里暂时保留，本来就没想跟那条音轨。简单的话，毕竟这是hard不是insane嘛～
00:57:482 (4) - 比如这个位置，可以和之前我建议的1/4折返对换，或者把1/4放到第三个小节，就有了难度和节奏感 唔，这里可以考虑一下……
01:25:607 (3,4) - 这一种连接方式和01:25:607 (3,4,3,4) - 这一种方式，两者最好成对出现，一个部分全是第一种一个部分全是第二种为好，否则会给我人不协调感，严重的……如果不明白我在说什么可以PM我 没觉得，3/4接1/2滑条stack或是overlap首先于读图上并无影响，其次这两种摆法在此图中并不是突兀少量出现，应不致有违和感。你可以多看看诸如La Cataline，Natteke，tieff，IceBeam，Reiji-RJ等人的图 战斗种族刷屏
01:50:451 (6) - 可以换个音效，还有01:54:201 (6) - 换成什么呢？你不具体说我怎知你是什么意思惹？ 这里滑条尾加finish是根据旋律来的，与前方的whistle高低对比以增加打击感
02:01:232 (3) - 和前边同样的部分换个顺序01:57:716 (3) - 那样这块pattern就完全不一样了……先保留吧
02:20:920 (1,2) - 合成一个slider 先保留……orz
可以使用一些同心圆梗，例如 （个人偏好，从头到尾一个都没见到有点难过…… 嗯，blanket，就像我一开始说的那样，这图包多了就变味了。喜欢包的话，如不嫌弃可以随意看看我其他图，没少blanket

[Normal]
可以把开头这一部分和hard换一下，hard的降低难度放到normal，normal排列改成跳放到hard，效果应该会不错
01:02:170 - break略短 好，再三纠结是填满还是删之后终于删了一部分，谢建议【我是懒人
别的没有什么令人难过的……总觉得normal难度略大，可以是normal+ 不少modder很不喜欢带加号的难度，还是算了

[Hitsound]
推荐http://osu.ppy.sh/b/107085这首歌的音效，类似的配合你的歌应该效果拔群 这里是铁斧流音效，要改就麻烦惹。而且这曲子本身中国风就很淡，古风音效不太合适……
[url]搞个皮肤来也不错……[/url] 嗯，会考虑

That's all! Good luck and remember to make reply to me

Mintong wrote:

Hey hi~

[General]
中国风的话soft-hitfinish不适合, 这个是电子kick音. 我觉得太鼓的鼓声会比较适合 關於這個問題，這首曲子聽原曲的話會發現它的古風其實是很淡的，恰恰是電子味比較濃，所以刻意地選擇這個finish音，並通過音效半自創節奏
其实我觉得这曲子可以填个Insane... 你萌都這麼說……冷門向我要送分口牙

[Hard]
看了上面的解释, 虽然是这样, 但是也要弄得让人感觉舒服些啊, 你用重复的梗甚至是 00:07:795 (1,2,1,2) - 重复的排版玩起来会很闷的... 嗯……較平和的前奏段落想讓節奏疏一點排版平一點，那我改一些好了

00:00:880 (2,4) - 对于这种风格, 你可以试试CTRL+G这个然后把(3)放远点. 虽然看起来很僵硬, 但是把节奏排排下玩起来还是好玩的. 然后flow也会好些.

SPOILER

這裡暫時保留orz 2ctrl+g的話個人感覺與音高不相和
00:04:630 (2,3) - 怎么叠那么挤, 拉远点也比较好玩些.; 這個……我不知你是說他倆跟別的notes太擠還是他倆本身擠啊，這是故意微錯開的說
00:04:630 (2,3) - ^ 然后还有类似的 話說這畢竟是hard難度……如果擺得再開放一點可能就偏insane了>.< 這圖裡通過ctrl+g等方式體現的跳應是不少了……
00:07:795 (1,2) - 这个的话我建议弄个"八"形还比现在的美 ok, fixed
00:16:349 - 这声音是1/4的, 我觉得你放note会比较好. 藍線起會比較不好打……試過
00:18:107 - ^还有类似的
00:18:341 (4) - 这个我不建议和(5)叠, 看起来真的好僵硬...试试放在(5)slider的尾端 (靠近, 不要叠) 因為通過後面的mod改了別處的滑條是這種樣式的，所以這裡保留……要不然都成同類梗了惹
00:45:295 (1) - 好空虚, +finish吧 嗯……加了降音量的whistle，謝建議
00:51:857 (3) - 依照刚刚的风格这个是不是会太curve了 果然blanket在這圖裡顯得突兀嗎……我想想怎麼改……
01:27:951 (4) - 我觉得CTRL+G还比较有flow 這裡先保留……就是想做成一種“往左上角使勁飛”的感覺……@ @【什麼形容
01:51:857 (3,4,5) - 这个真心怪, 人的感觉不是"正方形"的, 我觉得弯会比较适合 這一段都是橫平豎直這裡彎會不會很突兀……改了一下間距以呼應周圍的同類梗

[Normal]
AR+1 太慢了 ar5還慢嗎……;w; 剛被人教育了normal合適ar最高就是5，這曲子bpm不高啊……
这normal真心不错, 还自带音效. 很好啊 謝謝 >.<

Easy也没什么
以上都是个人感觉, 不喜可无视. 加油

[Hijiri Byakuren] wrote:

啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
没什么问题啊
祝RANK。。。

rEdo wrote:

From my queue. hi~
[Easy]
00:00:295 (1) - Spinners like 2/1 are way too short to be in an Easy. Consider either making them longer or replacing them with long sliders. Obviously applies to 00:03:810 (1)­ and the other two spinners. ok, fixed
00:45:295 - Insert Break Time. umm……will consider that
02:08:029 (1) - This one's quite short, too. Increase its length to the huge white tick, and delete (1) after it. ok, fixed

[Normal]
00:45:295 - Insert Break Time.
01:02:170 - Add an extra note here? seems fine, added
02:08:732 (1) - You really should avoid using 2/1 spinners in difficulties that are below Hard. Convert that into a slider. yes, you're right, deleted the spinner and added notes instead

[Hard]
Looks nice and smooth.
­
00:45:295 - Insert Break Time.
02:24:435 (6) - Increase the distance snap between (5) and (6), so the jump to (1) isn't as sudden as it is now. Try something like this. ok, fixed


I liked everything here, except for the ninja spinners. After fixing these, I'd say this map should be ready for a BAT to take a look at it. Good luck! oh, glad you said that, but i still prefer to find more mods to improve this map

yurunneram wrote:

I REFUSE TO MOD IN COMIC SANS ÒAÓ haha, the day passed :3

GENERAL

Missing Kiai. Unrankable actually i'm not sure if missing kiai is unrankable or not, i may ask someone to confirm this

EASY

nothin

NORMAL

Suggestion: All the way from 00:00:295 - 00:14:826 I think it's better to follow the sticks (or whatever it is) in the background rather than just randomly making a rhythm. i think the rhythm here is understandable, no change, sorry

Also, I find inconsistencies in the DS. Some are 1.00x and some are 1.20x I think it should be standardised for a normal diff but it's quite unnoticeable though. Whatever ya want yeah, 1/1 beat 1.00x and 1/2 beat 1.20x, i asked a BAT and he said it's acceptable if it's totally clear to read

AGGGHHH EVEN THE EDIT SCREEN IS IN COMIC SANS ÒAÓ

HARD

01:20:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd call this unreadable but since this is ur hard diff it's not that bad (still, unreadable because of 6) umm……will consider that

01:27:951 (4) - Ctrl+G? Better flow I'd say well, fixed

Not bad. I'd give a star if not for the starting of Normal. If you change it tel me and I'll come back to star sorry for that but i prefer to keep the current pattern in Normal

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

OblivioN wrote:

觉得已经改的很不错了，shoot star~(='w<=）~☆

Alarido wrote:

[Hard]
00:33:107 (3,4) - Try stacking better the (3)'s tail with the (4)'s head. It can be easily made by moving the 00:33:107 (3)'s tail node a bit to right (x:256). And then move 00:33:576 (4) - into x:256 y:312.
01:10:607 (5) - Snap it on the grid (x:268 y:208), so it will stack perfectly with 01:11:545 (1)'s head.

[Normal]
♥ No complaints here. Feels good (:

[Easy]
♥ I liked the initial spinners ^^

01:19:982 (5) - This blanket can be improved in this mode → move the slider to x:16 y:160 (this step will improve flow too), then move the 2nd node to x:60 y:136 and, finally, move the last node (tail) to x:128 y:140. Tip: the Approach Circle also can help you on making perfect blankets (:

02:00:295 (4) - Well, you just need three anchors (: but simply removing 1 node will not help, because slider got 'contamined' with a kinda flexibility that becomes our work more hard. It's easier delete it and make a new slider with same length (on timeline) but with just three nodes, and then adjust it to x:48 y:156, set the 2nd node to x:104 y:108 and the 3rd node to x:180 y:112. Image: → http://puu.sh/858yb.jpg ← as seen here, Approach Circle of the prior note (or another one) can help you on making blankets.

02:24:670 (1) - Move it 1 grid down and then move the last node (tail) by 1 grid up, so the blanket will get improved.

Well, that's it. Not much to point out, the mapping style fits well to the song theme, and hitsounding is amazing too (:

Att.

Narcissu wrote:

m4m：@#￥%……&*（

查不出东西啊啊啊……在好友来摸图前先弄点纰漏不是常识来的嘛【喂！ 赫赫，這回我知道了

[hard]

00:52:560 - 考虑到附近的音效……大概是clap？ 其實是想多點變化，那改掉好了

01:31:701 (6,7,8) - 短滑跳是很简单的，我建议你分开不要有遮挡，不会难的 分開不好看啊……我再想想吧 【霧

02:13:420 (1,2) - 间隔不是1/2的note我建议分开，因为玩家一般都是当1/2打的 這塊我覺得挺好認得啊……那我加個note湊三連？

然后有个建议……叠滑条尾的那些note，你既有1/4的也有1/2的，我觉得这样很烧ACC，可以考虑所有1/2都叠尾，1/4全带都有偏移比如00:42:482 (4,5,6) - ，这样玩家能更容易看出规律【目押党√ 你揍似目押派的表率……

[easy]

00:03:810 - 00:11:310 - 连续转盘开头挺无聊的……这两个地方可以考虑加note，转盘白线起 我也覺得…… ok, added，希望到時候不被吐槽……

请允许我做一个“水”的表情233