• Easy
  
  SPOILER

  1. 00:02:309(3) - Curve this one like you did with (1,2).
  2. 00:19:728 - Feels weird with nothing here. Try adding a circle.
  3. 00:31:341(1,2,3) - Curve these.
  4. 00:49:728 - This one is more personal preference but try a hit rather than the end of a slider on the start of a kiai. Something like this:
     
  5. 01:58:825(1) - Beatsound here.
  6. 03:03:083 - Finish
  • Hard
    
    SPOILER

    1. 00:46:825(12) - Finish here. Lots of empty space afterwards, changing this to a slider (ending at 00:48:180) could help.
    2. 01:03:664(6) - You can stack this with the (1).
    3. 01:08:309(1) - Beatsound here
    4. 01:11:599(8) - ^
    5. 01:26:503(8) - NC.
    6. 01:27:083(1) - No NC.
    7. 01:29:599(10) - NC.
    8. 01:29:986 - Add a circle
    9. 01:30:180(1) - No NC.
    10. 01:32:503(8) - NC.
    11. 01:33:277(1) - No NC.
    12. 02:48:954(5) - NC.
    13. 02:53:793(10) - Hitsound
    • Insane
      
      SPOILER

      1. 00:07:922(5) - This would be better as a repeat slider.
      2. 00:08:890(4) - ^
      3. 00:25:148(5) - Hitsound
      4. 01:45:664(1) - ^
      5. 02:43:728(3) - ^
      6. 03:05:793(5) - ^
      7. 03:08:890(4) - ^
      Hope this helps!

Sfjck wrote:

Hi! From #modreqs

• Easy
  
  SPOILER

  1. 00:02:309(3) - Curve this one like you did with (1,2). no, I think is ok also in this way
  2. 00:19:728 - Feels weird with nothing here. Try adding a circle. yeah, you're right
  3. 00:31:341(1,2,3) - Curve these. nope
  4. 00:49:728 - This one is more personal preference but try a hit rather than the end of a slider on the start of a kiai. Something like this: I prefere my way
     
  5. 01:58:825(1) - Beatsound here.
  6. 03:03:083 - Finish
  • Hard
    
    SPOILER

    1. 00:46:825(12) - Finish here. Lots of empty space afterwards, changing this to a slider (ending at 00:48:180) could help.
    2. 01:03:664(6) - You can stack this with the (1).
    3. 01:08:309(1) - Beatsound here
    4. 01:11:599(8) - ^
    5. 01:26:503(8) - NC.
    6. 01:27:083(1) - No NC.
    7. 01:29:599(10) - NC.
    8. 01:29:986 - Add a circle
    9. 01:30:180(1) - No NC.
    10. 01:32:503(8) - NC.
    11. 01:33:277(1) - No NC.
    12. 02:48:954(5) - NC.
    13. 02:53:793(10) - Hitsound
    • Insane
      
      SPOILER

      1. 00:07:922(5) - This would be better as a repeat slider. no
      2. 00:08:890(4) - ^
      3. 00:25:148(5) - Hitsound
      4. 01:45:664(1) - ^
      5. 02:43:728(3) - ^
      6. 03:05:793(5) - ^
      7. 03:08:890(4) - ^
      Hope this helps!

popner wrote:

Timing check as request:
BPM: 155.000
offset: 390(+16 on current)

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

I'll be putting this on behalf of Winek.

Winek's Mod from the modding queue

[General]
Nothing to say there.

[Easy]
Difficulty for Easy should really be different from Normal, y'know. in any case if you think they are similar (I don't think they are anyway) this doesn't change anything...
02:09:873 (4) - This is really confusing! Place a note 02:09:680 and 02:10:067 or a slider if you want. ok, changed
02:31:357 (3) - Exept if you did on purpose, the clap is sipposed to be at the end of slider. fixed
03:22:454 (2,4) - Have them the same y axis? fixed

[Hard]
AR 8 is much too hard for Hard difficulty. It fits more Insane. Put AR 7. nope, this is quite fast, I think with AR7 will be worst :/
00:08:325 (6) - Move it to avoid overlap why? there are several overlap in the map, and it was also made on purpose...
00:57:486 (6) - NC? ok
02:08:712 (6) - Same, NC? ok
02:09:680 (8,9) - Clap is supposed to be on the 8. ok
02:37:938 (8) - Remove clap at the end of slider ok
02:41:809 (2) - ^ ok
02:48:970 (5) - NC? All of your combo in hard are very long. ok and I know... if other mention this I'll change all
03:26:519 (5) - NC? ok but in the previous one

[Insane stuff]
CS should be 5... for now no change
Nothing else.

baraatje123 wrote:

Cool map, but please, Make normal have a lower CS. Normal CS = Insane CS, What?
All diff should have the same Slider Tick. I recommend 2, just like in Easy. I didn't knew about that, maybe I'll change if others mention this
Some jumps feel weird, but there are so many weird jumps, I can't list it. DS just doubles, and because of the location you think you can wait, but then, MISS
Here are a few. All in Insane diff:
00:27:873 (6) - 00:34:454 (1) - 00:42:002 (5) These just feel weird. You think they ar 1/2 beat later, but they are are right after the previous. The other jumps feel good, but things likke these just don't. Sorry ok fixed these, I'll check the rest also when I have time >.<

Now for the Testplay

Easy

Good, It is easy, but fun. I played with HR/NC because I think Easy maps are too Easy, and too slow.

Anre's Normal

Nice. I like AnreFM's Maps, just like this one!

Hard

Not that hard. I think this is even better than Insane.

Insane

Very Very hard. I had to use EZ. The map itself is very good! I like it. If you want a testplay w/o EZ, PM me

Good Luck!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, M4M mod o̿ ̭ o̿

[General]
*Overall, I'd only say that the custom hitsound your using (clap,slider tick) is too loud. It makes the music itself sound muffled, and low quality. Try decreasing it to 40% or 50% in all your diffs
[Easy]
01:00:002 (2) - Add finish on the tail.
01:10:841 (5) - Whistle on the head?
01:11:809 (1) - I'd prefer that this spinner end with vol 5%, or a whistle. A finish hitsound just doesn't fit here.
01:47:228 (2) - Add finish on the tail.
02:40:648 (2) - Finish instead of clap to match the cymbal crash.

Very nice blankets

[Hard]
00:24:777- Sounds a bit odd, how this slider drags on over nothing really. So from 00:24:583 - 00:25:744 I have a new rhythm suggestion for you:

Add clap on the heads of slider 8 and 2. and add a finish on 8's tail an 1.
01:00:583 (3) - Add finish on the head.
01:01:551 (6,7,8,9,10) - Idea! Try adding the drum-clap on all these notes. Create a timing point here, with vol 40%, and another one at 01:02:131. Tell me how it goes
01:11:809 (1) - Get rid of the finish. Same suggestion from Easy diff.
01:32:906 (8) - and 01:33:293 (1) - should blanket 01:32:519 (6,7) - with equal spacing.
01:36:002 (9) - Add finish on the head.
01:46:648 (4) - Add clap?
01:57:099 (3) - Add drum-clap on this object, and make the vol go down to about 40%
02:00:389 (9,10,11,12,13) - Same suggestion as 01:01:551 (6,7,8,9,10)
02:09:873 (4) - I suggest shrinking the tail to 02:10:067, so it hits the 'lo' in melody.
02:40:454 (8) - Add finish on the tail.
03:04:454 (6) - Add finish?
03:14:712 (6,7,8,9,10) - Same suggestion as 01:01:551 (6,7,8,9,10)
03:23:035 (6,7) - switch timing spots please. The slider would fit better here, because it follows the vocals long hold on the 'me', and its tail will hit the 'di' at 03:23:422, in medikaru

[Insane]
Can't play it, can't mod it That's my new rule in modding.

Hope this helps!

1. You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example : http://puu.sh/6ZEny.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/6ZEo1.jpg )
   This will help you making your map's quality higher

1. 00:30:777 (1) - Do we need NC here?
2. 01:26:519 (5,1) - 5(add NC), 1(remove NC)
3. 02:09:680 (1) - same reason as first one
4. 02:53:809 (1) - ^

1. AR -1
2. 00:25:357 (1) - better move one beat away http://puu.sh/6ZF3o.jpg
3. 00:28:454 (2,3) - put some notes between 2,3 http://puu.sh/6ZF6G.jpg

1. OD -1
2. 03:01:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this jump pattern is not good better fix it

Neta wrote:

HI~ From my Modding Queue

All of my modding is suggestion

[Before modding]

1. You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example : http://puu.sh/6ZEny.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/6ZEo1.jpg )
   This will help you making your map's quality higher yes, I know this, but it's also trye that checking every single slider is really too much. and also this is not an unrankable thing, so it's ok also in this way.

[Hard]

1. AR -1 no, I don't want to change AR I think this is enough fast to be ar 8
2. 00:25:357 (1) - better move one beat away http://puu.sh/6ZF3o.jpg not a bad idea
3. 00:28:454 (2,3) - put some notes between 2,3 http://puu.sh/6ZF6G.jpg

here no change for now


[Insane]

1. OD -1 not sure about it
2. 03:01:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this jump pattern is not good better fix it

I think is ok. you could have posted some better ideas id you had.


Pretty NICE MAP

GOOD LUCK

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my queue~ owo
[General]
The video is so not in a good quality, better find another one cause if you keep this video, it'll disturb some players. you're right but the fact is that there is a problem with the video and the mp3. that's because the video has a different offest. I mean the only good mp3 I found is this one that start immediately, instead every HQ video has a pause at the beginning. cince I don't know if it's eaven possible to change the video offest, I tryed to cut the video XD
[Easy]
02:08:712 (3) -How about making it till 02:09:389 ~ ? :3 nah. there is no beat in there

Sorry, poor mod~ T^T Mappu is really good, gonna give it a star when I have one~ o3o

Zentui wrote:

Hi, I'm not really a mod, just helping out with the video.

You can change the video offset in the design tab in the editor.

Here

It's not very accurate though, for better accuracy you can change it by going under File -> Open .osu in Notepad and going down to [Events]. The number after "Video," is the offset.

Like this

And of course, add - for an earlier start, no - for delay.

Hope that was helpful!

1. 00:07:744 (5) - This slider sounds too silent and weird imo. Probably change with anything that will add a note/slider end/whatever to the red tick.
2. 00:36:777 (5) - NC?
3. 00:37:938 (2) - Change to a one beat long slider (end at 00:38:325 - )
4. 00:42:970 (3,4,5,6,7) - The stream doesn't fit the music imo. Remove notes 4 and 6.
5. 01:35:809 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (My, my, there are a lot of these short streams. Some fits, though.)
6. 02:53:228 (5) - Somehow, I want to add NC here.
7. 03:05:422 (5) - Remove repeat and add a circle at 03:05:809 - instead?
8. 03:23:035 (1) - [Nazi] Blanket can be better. http://puu.sh/7mdX1

1. 00:28:841 - Feels too silent without a note.
2. 02:26:131 (2) - NC here instead of 02:25:744 (1) - ?
3. 02:35:035 (10) - Why not move between sliders 9 and 1 and have slider 8 blanket this instead? (Something like this http://puu.sh/7mehq)

1. 00:30:777 (1) - I think the NC is unnecessary.

Eyenine wrote:

Yo.
From my queue.
Mods are just suggestions. Feel free to ignore them.

[Insane]

1. 00:07:744 (5) - This slider sounds too silent and weird imo. Probably change with anything that will add a note/slider end/whatever to the red tick. added whistle hitsounds to all this part
2. 00:36:777 (5) - NC? not a bad idea
3. 00:37:938 (2) - Change to a one beat long slider (end at 00:38:325 - ) nah, the beat will be the same, and I think is readable also in this way O.o
4. 00:42:970 (3,4,5,6,7) - The stream doesn't fit the music imo. Remove notes 4 and 6. yeh, probebly, changed
5. 01:35:809 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (My, my, there are a lot of these short streams. Some fits, though.) not changed here
6. 02:53:228 (5) - Somehow, I want to add NC here. no change here
7. 03:05:422 (5) - Remove repeat and add a circle at 03:05:809 - instead? ok, eaven if I'm not totally convinced >.<
8. 03:23:035 (1) - [Nazi] Blanket can be better. http://puu.sh/7mdX1 ok

[Hard]

1. 00:28:841 - Feels too silent without a note. ok, it's time to fix this
2. 02:26:131 (2) - NC here instead of 02:25:744 (1) - ? fixed
3. 02:35:035 (10) - Why not move between sliders 9 and 1 and have slider 8 blanket this instead? (Something like this http://puu.sh/7mehq) no, the flow will be worst imo

I suck at modding o.o
Sorry if my mod isn't of any help.
Anyway, good luck~

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Queue. How beautiful this song is, can't be described with words T_T

[General]
03:02:906 - I'd love this part as the preview time personally o:

[Easy]
There is only 390 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Fix it from the .osu file. fixed, also in other diffs

00:00:390 (1) - Move this 3 grids right. ok
00:37:551 (1,2,3,4) - That part seems kinda difficult for new players but it's alright in the flow. Not sure about it ._. nah, I think it's ok :3
01:00:002 (2) - You can make a pretty blanket if you ignore a very little the distance snap just for this o: there was a blancket... I teyed but I don't think I can make better
Nothing else.

[Anne's Normal]
There is only 390 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Fix it from the .osu file.
This difficulty is alright

[Hard]
There is only 390 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Fix it from the .osu file.
00:49:164 (7,8,9,10,11) - I'd personnally avoid to use such streams in hards, it increases lot the difficulty rating. I like these streams, I don't know how to change :/
Nothing else.

[Insane]
There is only 390 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. Fix it from the .osu file.
00:12:196 (3) - NC here so it will warn the player that the slider has something different on it. In that case, the speed decrease. ok
01:01:551 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream is same as the ones in hard, makes it no unique to the difficulty. :c I personally find it boring to see same patterns in Hard and Insane that are so obvious. But that's a personal opinion. no change for now.

Dude have dis star and rank this o: I love the song so much and you did great on the mapset :3

Kirin wrote:

dato che sei italiano, la mod la faccio in italiano (al massimo la diff di anre la faccio in inglese)

[Easy]
00:01:551 (2) Ruotalo di -4° con CTRL+SHIFT+R ok
00:08:519 (3) Perchè gli hai messo questa forma? Se lo facevi uguale a 00:07:357 (2) (ovviamente non nella stessa posizione) poteva venire fuori un pattern carino l'ho messo così perchè la pattern c'è, semplicemente è la stessa dei due slider precedenti. probabilmente non l'hai notato, ma siccome la pattern c'è non cambio qui.
01:37:164 (2) Ruotalo di 2° ok

[Anre's Normal]
Nothing to say here

[Hard]
00:52:260 (8,9,10) hmm troppo spacing secondo me per una hard hai ragione, è da un po' che pensavo di cambiarlo, ora l'ho fatto finalmente XD
01:07:744 (8,9,10) ^ ^
01:41:035 (6,7) Puoi fare meglio questa blanket http://puu.sh/7OfI7.jpg non mi fa vedere l'immagine :/ comunque non vedo che problema ha il blancket
03:00:002 (1,2,3,4) Questo stack è brutto, metti il ds su 0,1x e fai così http://puu.sh/7Ogbd.jpg oppure se ti viene in mente qualcosa di meglio fallo, però stackati così son abbastanza noiosi :v sistemato anche se non mi faceva vedere l'immagine

[Insane]
00:09:486 (5,1,2,1) Questo spacing è esagerato. giusto, finalmente mi sono deciso a cambiarlo

Non ho altro da dire
Buona fortuna!

Pururut wrote:

hi~ o/ from MQ

[General]
video is corrupted
Hard hp7 Insane hp8 ar9 od9?
easy and normal is fine.

[Hard]
00:48:583 (4) - Clap 00:48:777 (5) - remove Clap add Drum
00:48:970 (6) - Drum 00:49:164 (7) - Clap
00:49:357 (9) - Drum
00:51:873 (7) - miss Clap?
00:53:422 (2) - ^
00:54:970 (7) - ^
01:07:357 (7) - ^
01:08:906 (2) - ^
01:06:583 (4) - stack correctly
01:03:293 (4) - ^
01:34:067 (3,5) - hmmmm dont make the reverse cover another slider's head
03:03:099 (1) - remove nc
03:03:486 (3) - nc

[Insane]
00:04:648 (4,3) - stack correctly
00:48:583 (2) - nc
00:55:357 (4) - 352,36
01:09:293 (4) - 72,124
01:32:325 (4) - 216,300
01:32:519 (5) - 248,216
01:32:712 (6) - 84,156
01:32:906 (7) - 104.200
01:33:099 (8) - 120,288
01:33:293 (1) - 216,300
01:33:680 (2) - 184,156
01:34:454 (4) - 176,128
01:34:841 (1) - 44.228
02:22:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - strange rhythm
try
02:44:906 (2,3) - nc

poor mod
overall the maps looks nice
Good luck!

Lanturn wrote:

Map is corrupted at the moment.

Tossing you a ticket until it gets fixed X_x

Might be the video, might be the tags. Considering you use that triangle/square/circle/cross thing in it, and the parenthesis around the japanese letters. (which are pointless btw, just remove them)

Let me know.

Rare wrote:

from my modding queue

[Setup]
Remove Widescreen Support.

[Easy]
01:10:841 (5,1) - Interval is too narrow. pref slider start at 01:12:002 - and end this at 01:14:325 - no, I like the spinner, no change
01:36:002 - add note? ok
02:34:454 (3,1) - hard to see for beginner imo. try this triangle http://puu.sh/8ShiG.jpg I don't think this will be less hard because there is another stack in this way..

[Hard]
SV1.8 is too high for hard diff. i like SV1.4~1.6.I don't think sv is problematic, and I don't want to change it now, since the diff is not bad anyway
00:45:293 (6) - NC ok
00:47:809 (2) - remove whistle to head ok
02:40:067 (6) - hard to see for players. you can stack (4)'s head. yes
02:41:228 (1) - finish to head ok
03:01:938 (6) - add new combo ok

[Insane]
00:49:164 (2) - add clap if you following drum added
01:36:099 (7) - remove note. fit to music imo ok, eaven if not totally sure
01:59:422 (1) - finish to head? ok
02:44:906 (1,1) - why did you speed up these sliders? not fit to music. I like them as they are. I put a speed change to enphatiza the voice volume changing
02:46:454 (1,1) - same as above. ^
03:15:196 (7) - remove this pls. not fit to music.ok
03:20:519 (1,1) - same as 02:44:906 (1,1) - ^
03:26:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - these start this at 03:26:325 - then add note here 03:26:131 -. fixed

Sinch's Testplay

nothing to say.

1. The beginning rhythm is a bit hard to follow and doesn't really capture the feel of the music especially for hitsounding, as the clap notes (as whistles) don't really fit imo. Most of the key notes are 3/2 patterns for 2 measures (see insane's first mod for a picture of what I mean)
2. 00:00:390 (1,2) - It would have been nice to use a symmetry control+j+g flip here. Consider doing this, and you can easily position these to fit.
3. 00:06:583 - I find it a bit strange that you decided to skip this dominant note. It's pretty powerful as it marks the start of a lower scale from the previous two measures. Maybe find someway to adapt this point in?
4. 00:06:196 (1) - If you didn't change the above. Then move the red node to x360 y176 for a better blanket.
5. 00:11:615 (2) - Consider ending this 1/1 earlier at 00:12:389 - so you can start the new measure on a dominant key press. Possibly make a 1/1 slider afterwards at 00:12:777 - connecting with 00:13:164 (1) -
6. 00:19:357 (1,2) - Maybe consider a small curve? | http://puu.sh/8TUB1.jpg | Coords I used are | (1) x340 y320 | (2) x423 y272 | I've never been a fan of straightness when it comes to placing circles one after the other like this, and I think this would help make it flow just a little bit better.
7. 00:24:002 (2,3) - Probably the most nazi thing ever, but consider nudging over the red node for (2) to x349 y228 | Afterwards do the (3)'s red node to x345 y176 and move the whole slider to around x382 y152.
8. 00:46:841 (1) - More nazi. Try moving the red node so it snugs the sliderball in when you are at 00:47:615 - on the timeline. http://puu.sh/8TV6R.jpg
9. 00:46:841 (1) - While you're on this note. consider reducing it by 1/2 so the tail ends on vocals instead of nothing.
10. 00:48:583 (2,1) - Maybe consider this for a rhythm? Just so the Kiai starts as it should. | http://puu.sh/8TVc2.jpg
11. 00:49:551 - if you don't do the above mod, consider a SC:2 tick here.
12. 01:09:873 - are you sure you don't want to map to this part here? It is pretty powerful, and considering you did map to similar spots like this on this note, I would really consider it. Try something like 01:07:744 (3,1) -
13. 01:35:615 (2,3,1,2) - How about selecting all of these, and moving them to x176 y256 | Adjust the (2) for distance spacing afterwards | http://puu.sh/8TZi8.jpg | You'll still keep DS from the first (2) and the previous note if you do this too.
14. 02:03:293 - I'm glad you decided to do the double clap but... Wouldn't it make sense to do this in other spots of the map as well? It feels a bit inconsistent that this is the only spot (minus the upcoming mod) that you did this in. It'd be nice if you could go apply this in other spots of the map as well during this kiai time.
15. 02:08:712 (3) - (Maybe?) End this 1/2 earlier. The vocals playing at 02:09:486 - sound really odd to map when joined by the vocals at 02:09:680 - . a simple 1/1 gap here would fit nicely.
16. 02:09:873 - maybe lower the volume or change the sound effect of this? It's completely different from all the other clap notes you use the clap/sc:2 tick for. Sounds more like a Drum addition finish to me.
17. 02:29:035 (1) - Blanket could be slightly better. | Try Control+G on the previous (4) to use the approach circle for blanketing | http://puu.sh/8TZWA.jpg | control+g the (4) back afterwards
18. 02:40:648 (2) - Hmm. I think a clap would fit this better no? If you still think the finish is better, consider lowering the volume for it.
19. 02:53:035 (3) - How about SC:2 at 02:53:228 - with about 15-30% volume? Go back to SC:1 60% on 02:53:809 -
20. 03:01:938 - This spot feels like it is missing a note no? The drums really pick up here. I guess it does break your pattern a bit, but It'd be nice to have something to play on this spot because of the drums.
21. 03:06:970 (2) - tail end can be dropped a bit. (Try control+g again to use the approach circles help from (1) and control+g it back after)
22. 03:09:099 (1,2) - More just a ramble.. It's a bit odd to see you break flow here. Looking at your map as a whole, this really sticks out. Maybe consider doing something different?

1. Yo.
2. 00:01:938 (3) - Control+G this twice. (lol) | What? you don't want it to be perfectly symmetrical with 00:02:712 (4) - ?
3. 00:03:486 (1) - Consider blanketing this slightly better with the tail end of the previous slider | http://puu.sh/8U1AL.jpg | Mostly just for visual appeal as it'd make the map look a little bit nicer.
4. 00:07:357 (2) - It's not that I like the idea here, It's more of I think you should make this symmetrical with (1) so you can place the other notes above the slider. Currently you have a little bit strange flow with the (2) facing downwards like you do and then going into the (3) which is half covered. | Basically in a nutshell, try something like this | http://puu.sh/8U1ZS.jpg
5. 00:08:906 (5) - x114 y252 for proper stack.
6. 00:11:809 (4) - Maybe add some curve for this? So it helps the flow preparing for the next note | http://puu.sh/8U26P.jpg
7. 00:27:486 (5,6) - How about stacking the (6) on the upcoming (1)? This let's you have a bit more flow and room for the (5) | http://puu.sh/8Uh9k.jpg
8. 00:29:809 (4) - Is the extra 1/2 length even needed? I see that you're trying to keep most of it 1/1, but if you follow the vocals, it shouldn't be tough to hit it since there isn't any big instruments playing to interfere with judgement.
9. 00:30:777 (1) - I don't think this NC is needed?
10. 00:32:131 (2) - a bit nazi, but if you wanted, you could lower the tail end slightly to get a better blanket. Use the slider circle from the previous note to help judgement.
11. 00:43:164 (1) - Consider making this a 1/2 slider, and then add a circle at 00:43:744 - | This will emphasize on the drums better and allow you to start on fresh on when the vocals start. If you want, maybe join the new circle and 00:44:131 (2) - as a slider.
12. 01:03:873 (4) - Curve this tail in a bit. | http://puu.sh/8XK2x.jpg | Nazi blankets <3
13. 01:34:841 (5) - add a clap on the reverse.
14. 01:53:422 (3) - x260 y195
15. 01:56:325 (4) - Hmm, are you sure you want this reverse? It currently hits nothing in the song. A pattern like this would be a bit more fitting as it follows the music/vocals | http://puu.sh/8XKKV.jpg
16. 02:23:615 (2) - end this 1/2 earlier to match vocals?
17. 03:14:712 (5,1) - Is it possible to try to move the (1) so it flows a bit nicely from the (5)? to the up-left of it anyways. | This would require quite a bit of tweaking if you did. such as moving the upcoming or previous notes or changing some slider shapes.
18. 03:29:809 (1) - Try adding a clap on the first and last points of this slider to catch the drums, as what you have currently doesn't provide enough sound to even think about hitting these after. Consider putting a clap on the first reverse (white line) and a finish on the very very end of 03:30:389 (2) - as well.

1. See insane for whistle pattern? and maybe restructure the map to fit around them being dominant notes?
2. 00:03:293 (4) - x59 y174
3. 00:17:228 (4,5,6) - These red tick 1/2 sliders feel a bit strange mostly due to the fact the vocals mainly play on the white tick. Try rearranging this so the heads start on the white ticks.
4. 00:36:970 (6,8) - Consider deleting these two notes, and then try moving 00:37:164 (7) - to around x80 y164 (distance snapped) | The only real reason is that the (6,8) really don't hit anything in the music so it feels a bit strange to play these. They're better left unmapped.
5. 00:39:873 (6) - The fact that you didn't put a circle at 00:38:325 - really makes this part hard to understand. The way you have it set up because of the previous notes is to follow the drums, so the fact that you have a vocal note here counteracts it. I would either, remove this note, or add a note back at 38 seconds.
6. 00:42:777 (5) - Consider a whistle on the head to follow the guitar?
7. 00:52:260 (8,9) - Control+G these? the flow seems to naturally want to hit (9) first.
8. 00:57:293 (5) - Put this at 1.4 DS like you did with 00:58:841 (5) - | Try x304 y280 to have the same pattern as the upcoming one.
9. 01:01:744 (8,9,10) - A bit nazi. But these are all a bit further away from each other than (6,7) are. I suggest redoing this without gridsnap on.
10. 01:38:712 (7) - This is pretty much the same problem as 39 seconds. You go from following the drums to following the vocals and it gets kind of confusing. It would be better if you only followed one or the other.
11. 01:54:777 (1) - x419 y287 | Don't control+G this or it loses its perfect stack.
12. 01:57:680 (5,3) - Consider moving both of these to x312 y168 so the flow off the (2) is nice.
13. 02:00:583 (11) - Nazi - Nudge the Y coordinates to y191 (-1)
14. 02:32:712 (2) - x493 y194
15. 02:35:035 (10) - x95 y38
16. 02:35:228 (1) - Use the approach circle, and try to reduce the curve on this slider a bit. Right now It's a pretty sharp curve. | http://puu.sh/906zQ.jpg
17. 02:38:325 (1) - same as above. Try to blanket this to the approach circles as well.
18. 02:40:454 (8,9,1) - Move the (9,1) slightly further away. This actually feels like a jump with how the music sounds so adding that little bit of extra distance will help players be able to read it correctly.
19. 02:53:228 (7,8,9,10) - Try to place these so when you are on a blue tick like 02:53:131 - For (7) It will overlap the (5)'s approach circle. | Quick example of what it would be like finished | http://puu.sh/906Qg.jpg | As you can see the (9)'s approach circle touches the (5)'s approach circle when at 02:53:519 -
20. 03:14:906 (8) - Nazi x207 y53
21. 03:24:002 (9) - x251 y311
22. See the bottom of insane after for the clap issue.

1. 00:00:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - (and the rest of the intro) Consider using whistles in a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/8YEN9.jpg | This captures the big sounds in the music.
2. 00:18:873 (7) - Consider adding a clap here. It feels empty when 1/4 notes don't get mapped with any kind of hitsounds and the note doesn't fit in with the song. Basically feels like this is O*er*ap*in* without the extra sound. Adding a clap would let the note fit in sound-wise.
3. 00:24:777 (5) - Finish to capture the first cymbal? The first cymbal is actually a bit louder than the second one (or it seems anyways)
4. 00:24:777 (5) - While we're on this note, very nazi but try to move the second red node to have the ball snug on the corner when at 00:24:970 - | Example after playing around with it for a bit | http://puu.sh/8YFCj.jpg
5. 00:30:777 (4) - slider tick clap at 00:30:970 - and also a clap on the tail? (at least put one on the tail)
6. 00:36:777 (1,2,3) - I found these a bit strange to play since (2) hits nothing in the music. Maybe consider making them one long slider?
7. 00:42:002 (5,1) - Shouldn't the whistle be on the (5)? Also.. you should try to use more whistles in the song if possible to help follow the lyrics. They fit nicely.
8. 00:46:260 (3,4) - Consider Control+G on these so it leaves more of a gap for the upcoming 1/1 to the slow slider.
9. 00:46:841 (1) - Maybe reduce this by 1/2 to match the vocals?
10. 00:53:422 (2) - So for this you add an extra clap on the tail. In the rest of the kiai you don't. I think it'd be cool if you could double clap all of the notes like you did for this for all of your kiai. I highly suggest this. | Otherwise.. remove the clap from the tail lol.
11. 00:56:712 (3,4,5,3,4,5) - This might be outside what you prefer to hitsound but I think it sounds a bit nice. | (3) -> Clap | (4) -> Drum Clap | (5) -> Drum Finish |
12. 01:01:551 (3,4,5,6) - Normal sampleset for this stream? (leaving 7 as a clap of course)
13. 01:02:131 (1) - Consider moving (1) to about x396 y312 for better flow. This also makes the gap between the previous (7) and this a bit less intense.
14. 01:06:583 (4) - x209 y247 for the proper stack (This can't be 100% stacked, but it's closer than what you currently have)
15. 01:06:970 (1) - x216 y120 ^ | You should also consider Control+G twice on 01:05:228 (1,2,3,4,1) - to make the slider nodes balance out and have proper positions.
16. 01:09:873 (1) - x92 y212 for even spacing and nice flow?
17. 01:34:454 (4) - This (4) should be at x176 y128 if you want even spacing between (1,2) and (3,4) | You'll have to adjust 01:34:841 (1) - afterwards since it'll be close to (4)
18. 01:40:744 (1) - For a proper blanket, move the tail end in a bit | At 01:40:493 - http://puu.sh/903Pb.jpg | Middle node: x271 y263 | Tail Node: x328 y177
19. 01:41:809 (3,4,5,6,7) - I really recommend you redo this stream. If you select 01:42:002 (5) - alone, you'll have a prev 0.97 and a next 0.88 and it really doesn't look pretty with the inconsistent spacings. Try using 0.9 distance snap and no grid snap so you'll have 0.89 to 0.91 everytime.
20. 01:48:583 (1,2) - Blanket? | http://puu.sh/9045R.jpg | Middle node: x387 y210 | Tail node: x466 y169
21. 01:55:551 (3,4,5,3,4,5) - same suggestion about hitsounds as earlier with the clap / drum clap / drum finish.
22. 02:00:680 (7) - bit of a gap on this stream as well. Try redoing this with 0.9 DS and no gridsnap.
23. 02:07:164 (1) - Middle Node: x223 y69 | Tail node: x155 y150 for a better blanket. Make sure to readjust the upcoming slider as needed.
24. 02:28:260 (5) - Maybe consider moving this further away and have the slider facing south? | Something like this: http://puu.sh/904u5.jpg | That way the gap between (4,5) won't be so small.
25. 02:29:035 (1) - Lift the tail end up slightly on this if you want a better blanket.
26. 02:46:067 (6) - NC this so the pattern is recognizable like you did for 02:44:519 (1,1,1) -

Lanturn wrote:

Heya, Late M4M. I should have had this done a few days ago, but some stuff came up that I had to deal with.
Super late on the M4M. I lost too much motivation and never got around back to this. Hopefully the time you had to wait can be made up with the mod itself.

[General]
Consider putting a silent sliderslide in for SC:1 and SC:2. the rumbly noise, especially at the beginning of your map is a bit distracting. | http://puu.sh/7DeZY

[Easy]
http://puu.sh/8UgMX.osr ;_; last note too. omg! really nice replay! also with flashlights :3 I know you play well with that mod (due to a little bit of stalking XD)

1. The beginning rhythm is a bit hard to follow and doesn't really capture the feel of the music especially for hitsounding, as the clap notes (as whistles) don't really fit imo. Most of the key notes are 3/2 patterns for 2 measures (see insane's first mod for a picture of what I mean)
2. 00:00:390 (1,2) - It would have been nice to use a symmetry control+j+g flip here. Consider doing this, and you can easily position these to fit. ok, fixed
3. 00:06:583 - I find it a bit strange that you decided to skip this dominant note. It's pretty powerful as it marks the start of a lower scale from the previous two measures. Maybe find someway to adapt this point in? ok, now it's not skipped anymore :3
4. 00:06:196 (1) - If you didn't change the above. Then move the red node to x360 y176 for a better blanket.
5. 00:11:615 (2) - Consider ending this 1/1 earlier at 00:12:389 - so you can start the new measure on a dominant key press. Possibly make a 1/1 slider afterwards at 00:12:777 - connecting with 00:13:164 (1) - yes good idea
6. 00:19:357 (1,2) - Maybe consider a small curve? | http://puu.sh/8TUB1.jpg | Coords I used are | (1) x340 y320 | (2) x423 y272 | I've never been a fan of straightness when it comes to placing circles one after the other like this, and I think this would help make it flow just a little bit better. ok, changed XD
7. 00:24:002 (2,3) - Probably the most nazi thing ever, but consider nudging over the red node for (2) to x349 y228 | Afterwards do the (3)'s red node to x345 y176 and move the whole slider to around x382 y152. hm... don't really understand here, or you wrote the points wrong or I misunderstood O.o
8. 00:46:841 (1) - More nazi. Try moving the red node so it snugs the sliderball in when you are at 00:47:615 - on the timeline. http://puu.sh/8TV6R.jpg ok
9. 00:46:841 (1) - While you're on this note. consider reducing it by 1/2 so the tail ends on vocals instead of nothing. no, I like it as it is
10. 00:48:583 (2,1) - Maybe consider this for a rhythm? Just so the Kiai starts as it should. | http://puu.sh/8TVc2.jpg ok, I was not convinced at first but I tryed and while playing also with dt it's not a problem
11. 00:49:551 - if you don't do the above mod, consider a SC:2 tick here.
12. 01:09:873 - are you sure you don't want to map to this part here? It is pretty powerful, and considering you did map to similar spots like this on this note, I would really consider it. Try something like 01:07:744 (3,1) - ok changed
13. 01:35:615 (2,3,1,2) - How about selecting all of these, and moving them to x176 y256 | Adjust the (2) for distance spacing afterwards | http://puu.sh/8TZi8.jpg | You'll still keep DS from the first (2) and the previous note if you do this too. good, fixed
14. 02:03:293 - I'm glad you decided to do the double clap but... Wouldn't it make sense to do this in other spots of the map as well? It feels a bit inconsistent that this is the only spot (minus the upcoming mod) that you did this in. It'd be nice if you could go apply this in other spots of the map as well during this kiai time. tryed to fix these things :3
15. 02:08:712 (3) - (Maybe?) End this 1/2 earlier. The vocals playing at 02:09:486 - sound really odd to map when joined by the vocals at 02:09:680 - . a simple 1/1 gap here would fit nicely. yes, I agree
16. 02:09:873 - maybe lower the volume or change the sound effect of this? It's completely different from all the other clap notes you use the clap/sc:2 tick for. Sounds more like a Drum addition finish to me. tryed something
17. 02:29:035 (1) - Blanket could be slightly better. | Try Control+G on the previous (4) to use the approach circle for blanketing | http://puu.sh/8TZWA.jpg | control+g the (4) back afterwards ok
18. 02:40:648 (2) - Hmm. I think a clap would fit this better no? If you still think the finish is better, consider lowering the volume for it. yes, maybe tryed with clap and volume 30
19. 02:53:035 (3) - How about SC:2 at 02:53:228 - with about 15-30% volume? Go back to SC:1 60% on 02:53:809 - ok
20. 03:01:938 - This spot feels like it is missing a note no? The drums really pick up here. I guess it does break your pattern a bit, but It'd be nice to have something to play on this spot because of the drums. ok
21. 03:06:970 (2) - tail end can be dropped a bit. (Try control+g again to use the approach circles help from (1) and control+g it back after)
22. 03:09:099 (1,2) - More just a ramble.. It's a bit odd to see you break flow here. Looking at your map as a whole, this really sticks out. Maybe consider doing something different? hm... I don't understand here if you're talking about the rhythm.. the flow seems ok to me O.o

Really nice Easy <3

Lanturn wrote:

[Anre's Normal]

Yo./o/
00:01:938 (3) - Control+G this twice. (lol) | What? you don't want it to be perfectly symmetrical with 00:02:712 (4) - ? lol sure sure
00:03:486 (1) - Consider blanketing this slightly better with the tail end of the previous slider | http://puu.sh/8U1AL.jpg | Mostly just for visual appeal as it'd make the map look a little bit nicer. yupp
00:07:357 (2) - It's not that I like the idea here, It's more of I think you should make this symmetrical with (1) so you can place the other notes above the slider. Currently you have a little bit strange flow with the (2) facing downwards like you do and then going into the (3) which is half covered. | Basically in a nutshell, try something like this | http://puu.sh/8U1ZS.jpgyeah sure
00:08:906 (5) - x114 y252 for proper stack.lol yes
00:11:809 (4) - Maybe add some curve for this? So it helps the flow preparing for the next note | http://puu.sh/8U26P.jpgmmm
00:27:486 (5,6) - How about stacking the (6) on the upcoming (1)? This let's you have a bit more flow and room for the (5) | http://puu.sh/8Uh9k.jpgyes
00:29:809 (4) - Is the extra 1/2 length even needed? I see that you're trying to keep most of it 1/1, but if you follow the vocals, it shouldn't be tough to hit it since there isn't any big instruments playing to interfere with judgement.uhh I'm using this 1/2 for the upcoming note, I just really like how the vocal played on this one, so I'd keep it ;w;
00:30:777 (1) - I don't think this NC is needed?:'(
00:32:131 (2) - a bit nazi, but if you wanted, you could lower the tail end slightly to get a better blanket. Use the slider circle from the previous note to help judgement.suree
00:43:164 (1) - Consider making this a 1/2 slider, and then add a circle at 00:43:744 - | This will emphasize on the drums better and allow you to start on fresh on when the vocals start. If you want, maybe join the new circle and 00:44:131 (2) - as a slider.ya
01:03:873 (4) - Curve this tail in a bit. | http://puu.sh/8XK2x.jpg | Nazi blankets <3<3
01:34:841 (5) - add a clap on the reverse.yes
01:53:422 (3) - x260 y195mm
01:56:325 (4) - Hmm, are you sure you want this reverse? It currently hits nothing in the song. A pattern like this would be a bit more fitting as it follows the music/vocals | http://puu.sh/8XKKV.jpglol yes ofc, this one is so ugly
02:23:615 (2) - end this 1/2 earlier to match vocals?yea
03:14:712 (5,1) - Is it possible to try to move the (1) so it flows a bit nicely from the (5)? to the up-left of it anyways. | This would require quite a bit of tweaking if you did. such as moving the upcoming or previous notes or changing some slider shapes.I guess it's fine as is actually, the small slider leniency would make players not really need to move along with the slider. i'll keep this one
03:29:809 (1) - Try adding a clap on the first and last points of this slider to catch the drums, as what you have currently doesn't provide enough sound to even think about hitting these after. Consider putting a clap on the first reverse (white line) and a finish on the very very end of 03:30:389 (2) - as well.

Sorry I kind of rushed this part at the end ;_;lol it's K, thanks for your mod Lanturn!

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Anre's Normal


00:06:002 - This is dodged, i say this because you added a hitsound here : 00:05:422, why don't to make this instead ?
00:36:777 (5) - wrong direction imo, should be left, not right for a better movement.
00:40:648 (1) - this slider is not necessary because its end does not follow anything, add a note instead of this slider.
01:02:131 (1) - this should be improved, like this
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01:25:551 (4,5) - First polarity issue of this diff, add a note here : 01:26:325
01:28:648 (4,5) - same thing ^
01:31:744 (5,6) - and here ^ etc. I wont repeat it.
01:56:325 (4) - please no, it ruins the hitsounding pattern you used, find another solution. This 01:56:906 is dodged !
03:30:970 - should be a note here to enphasize the end.

fixed pretty much all kind of dodged thingy, thanks for the mod!

CDFA wrote:

Normal:
00:31:357 (1) - Remove NCssure
01:56:325 (4) - no please dontyes
03:29:809 (1,2) - hitsounds are coolit is

Thanks for your mod CDFA!

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392,372,184260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,300,184648,2,0,L|188:304,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,312,185422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,228,185809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,228,186002,6,0,P|4:180|32:104,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,80,186583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,60,186970,2,0,L|224:56,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,80,187744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,176,188131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,260,188519,2,0,L|308:256,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,240,189099,6,0,P|408:224|496:272,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,336,190067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,364,190454,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,364,190648,2,0,P|236:380|148:332,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,248,191615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,152,192002,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,152,192196,6,0,B|112:100|144:192|208:132,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,193164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,40,193551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,40,193744,2,0,P|416:116|392:192,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,194712,2,0,L|336:336,2,55,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,268,195293,6,0,P|180:296|84:244,1,181.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,168,196260,2,0,B|76:144|76:144|148:160,1,121,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,168,196841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,197035,2,0,P|308:140|324:72,2,121,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,108,198196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,108,198389,6,0,B|96:168|148:228|148:228|144:292,1,181.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,376,199357,2,0,P|36:372|16:360,2,60.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,380,200131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,200519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,336,200906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,236,201293,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,236,201486,6,0,P|448:140|404:80,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,12,202454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,84,202841,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,84,203035,2,0,B|168:104|168:104|92:64,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,156,204002,2,0,L|140:216,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,240,204583,6,0,P|284:288|376:248,1,198,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,180,205551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,80,205938,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,80,206131,2,0,B|356:76|356:76|312:84,1,66,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,148,206712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,216,207099,2,0,B|94:222|94:222|62:218,2,66,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207873,12,0,209422,0:0:0:0:
220,136,209809,6,0,L|312:124,2,66,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,188,210389,2,8,L|96:200,3,66

Lapis Aoki wrote:

This song is nice ~ <3
This must be ranked now ~ :3

Sieg wrote:

Hello luxoDeh

General

1. widescreen in inconstant across diffs, turnoff or turnon depend what you prefer with video :3 fixed
2. combo colors are not set on Anre's Normal

Insanel

1. OD is quite low, there is no variable timing or complicated rhythms so no point to keep OD low, set to 8 fixed
2. Also since this is just 155 bpm think about setting AR ~8.5 so difficulty will be less tiring with dt and will keep good playability nomod ok
3. check unsnapped circles fixed
4. 00:12:196 (1,1) - you can put jump here to emphasize strong beat on 00:12:777 ()
5. 00:14:131 (6,1) - ^same here 0.9x DS after some jump to downbeat plays not so good as it can
6. 00:56:519 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - flow is a bit awkward here, you can just try to swap 6 and 7
7. 00:58:648 (6,7,1) - same here^
8. 01:09:873 (1) - you can try to place jump here, seems more consistent with your placement 148:264 (stack with 01:09:099 (3) - )
9. 02:09:293 (2) - offscreen no, I checked
10. 02:46:841 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
11. 03:04:260 (4) - finish on slider end is generally not a great style for insane difficulties, either think about not stressing slider end or allow player to actually click that beat
12. 03:07:357 (4) - ^ same

Hard

1. OD to 7 for same reason as for Insane
2. 00:43:551 (7,1) - jump here to emphasize strong beat better
3. 01:36:002 (9) - I've already explained part with finishes on sliderends
4. 02:06:777 (8,9) -jump is inconstant with what you did previously so will be random on play
5. 03:06:583 (2) - touches hp bar but I don't know where else to place it :/

Easy

1. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   

   Slider tick hitsounds are discouraged. If you want to use them, then make sure that their volume is balanced (i.e. notably quieter than regular hitsounds). A very loud slider tick, especially when only used once or twice, would be extremely jarring.

   well I'm not really fun of 00:13:551 (2) - placing clap sounds on slider ticks but this is up to you I put all that part to 40% volume

Nice mapset. Good Luck!