tellertheworld wrote:

開不到喔~!
failed了.. 是我問題?

Eggache0 wrote:

From qq

[General]
真是屌 没了
懒的改很不错啊 我可以随便提意见 请谨慎考虑后再改（喂

[balabala NAMIDA]

00:01:274 (1) - 蛤？不是蓝线停吗？.其实哪条线都不是啦，不过这滑条快了没感觉，长了不好看，慢了没劲。于是保持原样
00:06:899 (1,2,3,4,5) - 挺好打 就是读不出来是四分跳 把2挪近点和3粘上边应该就行了不改
00:11:469 - 这好像有个音 可以把1改成滑条太微弱了，不改
00:12:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这1/8海藻酸钠这1/8真是……没有更好的主意了吗我也想有更好的主意啊。
00:22:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

SPOILER

反正后面也拆了 这里拆开是不是帅一点√
00:35:024 (3) - clapno
01:20:493 (7) - 01:21:430 (1) - 换到这nc？×
01:36:430 (3,4,5) - 说实话我感觉这个四分跳挺莫名 不懂为啥要这么做所以说我这图烂、节奏屎，不过也不改
01:37:250 (6) - ^不改
01:42:524 (1,2) - 1用1/2滑条好点啊no
01:49:321 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 在长白线拐弯是不是好点 跳接大spacing还拐个大弯真是玩死纯鼠啊，那就不会改了啊
01:56:352 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 有点乱啊 整理一下nc？√
01:57:055 (3,4) - 这又不是四分跳了 看不出来√
02:16:743 (1) - 怀疑要碰血条不改…
02:31:274 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉应该ctrl+g 跟前面的flowno
02:38:657 (2) - 停红线上就行了吧×
02:43:696 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - 前面还没这么多四分跳来的啊 因为我是先做完第二段kiai才从头开始的：（ 于是no change
02:58:578 (5,6) - 这梗略前卫啊 我还是觉得5去了 6ctrl+g舒服点不好看了
03:34:789 (1,2,3) - 跳可以小点不缩小，我要够得着星星
03:50:493 (3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2) - 卧槽中间居然是断开了 这怎么猜得到应该可以的
04:00:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 姑且试着帮你调整了一下位置 漏了音效的话麻烦你加回去让我考虑考虑，十分抱歉。

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216,136,240805,5,12,0:0:0:0:
185,199,240922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,264,241039,1,12,0:0:0:0:
228,256,241157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,248,241274,1,12,0:0:0:0:
327,185,241391,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,120,241508,1,12,0:0:0:0:
284,128,241626,1,8,0:0:0:0:

04:23:188 (8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 拐的不太舒服 建议调整一下中间一段不好。
04:27:993 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实这段我觉得直接下个break更带感（砖 其实我也这么觉得啊，但...
04:49:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -

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太难看
05:03:735 (3,4) - 建议在05:03:618 - 加个圈搞成三连 考虑一下
05:47:446 (4,5,6,7) - 漏了好多音啊 斟酌一下节奏好不好非常抱歉。

gxytcgxytc wrote:

from lkx
[NAMIDA]
00:07:836 (5,6) - 请改成下面这样 现在的节奏是错误的 5和6随意放 但是时间轴最好像我那样放 仔细听听你就知道了 "あなだ"三个字不是按均匀时间唱出来的其实我知道啦，不过一直觉得有个折返会更合曲子，所以就没改。不过现在改了

我是图

00:12:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这几个音是四分拍的就没啥感觉了啊

我是图

00:39:008 (1) - 不是故意的话请结束在蓝线是故意的
00:42:758 (1) - ^^
00:46:157 (1) - ^^
04:20:258 (8) - ^娇喘很萌不是吗
03:58:696 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 我觉得应该是下面这样√

抱歉我还是图

05:03:735 (3,4) - 可以往前移动1/4 然后在05:03:969 - 加一个note 不过现在这样也可以 看喜好吧好
05:47:446 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个部位也是建议下面这样不变

img

01:56:352 (5) - 尾巴加上whistle√
02:05:493 (1) - finish×
03:09:243 (1) - ^×
03:52:368 (1) - ^×
03:35:024 (2) - whistle×
没了
图不错
good luck

fanzhen0019 wrote:

123

fanzhen0019 wrote:

以后我有kd就射这里了 不要辜负我啊

axschiming wrote:

Hello，m4m

[._.]

00:06:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏突然紧的有点突兀…….没啥好改啊
00:22:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段连打窝感觉可以距离越来越远……这样就好
01:15:571 (8) - 210,123试试？纯建议好像非常不多但看了看感觉不太好
01:18:149 (1) - 130,190no
01:20:493 (7) - 111,164no
01:45:102 (1,2,3) - 我觉得弄个跳或者滑条带感点no
01:49:438 (6,1) - 跳很赞，但是太远了啦！ 看看后面
02:13:110 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 怎么前一半whistle后一半美丽，而且感觉whistle也不带好哦……因为歌啊
02:47:211 (5) - 有点缺手感，换成从下向上2连试试(纯脑洞no
02:58:696 (6) - 这个还是挺要命的，那么慢的滑条要跟这种大跳确实很那啥…也没啥好改啊
03:51:078 (1) - 我感觉拉红线上更爽，或者填满它？填满不高兴
03:58:696 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 468或者357的音效可以去掉为啥？
03:03:852 (1,2,3) - 我觉得这样更带感(脑洞越来越大系列no

img

03:34:789 (1,2,3) - 感觉13可以换不好看
04:14:868 (2) - 弯一弯no
04:17:446 (2) - 129,32 为何要拆散三角形
04:21:078 (2) - 换我会这样下……那跟红线跟蓝线是一伙的…… no

img

04:35:024 (1) - 从这里开始感觉可以加加速你说的队不过还是没这打算
04:52:250 (3,4,5,6) - 把蓝线的音效去掉，6换上Finish，感觉到这里我已经开始不正常了OrzFinish太长了啊Orz
05:37:602 (8) - 感觉位置不好移动到上面去了
05:49:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 柑橘一个whistle就够会吗
06:06:899 (5) - Ctrl+G，能反社会又能跟flow(滚no
06:09:828 (1) - 还能跟下铃声散点几下，纯建议没感觉了啊

[Other]
首先感觉滑条太慢了……还有一些想说的，不过都忘了:3，到后面越摸脑洞越大。。。看了下SV啊之类啥的就觉得……感觉不能按规矩出牌233，哦对了连打全clap我觉得还是有点吵，建议切一切。好像有道理，不过就这么吧

其实我很喜欢这图啊，感觉做起来就是enjoy mapping，摸起来也是十分愉快:D,射一发~十分感谢☆~

祝早日APP

IamKwaN wrote:

抱歉這app圖我不懂mod lol先给为敬

我只能摸到數個地方,要是沒有用的話請不要給我KD
- 01:11:938 (8,1) - 這裡的spacing會讓人誤以為是1/2不会吧w
- 01:34:438 (12,1) - ^no
- 01:34:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^no
- 01:48:383 (4,1,2,3) - 這裡我有些懷疑是否能rank,前面的Slider把後面大部分的circle都遮住了可以的啦
- 01:49:789 (3,4) - 把這兩個圓圈上移2個格不用啦www
- 01:50:961 (2,3,4) - 不一致的間距很難讀有道理
後面跟前面的問題我看了看都是差不多,大概都是streaming的spacing,不是kiai的可以把spacing降低,到kiai才逐漸提高,所以後面的我就先略過嚕~

tsuka wrote:

首先是全局音量太小 前奏和过门副歌声音低也就算了 主歌音量也那么小 打完的感觉就是键盘砸在水里 完全没有打击感
我承认你音效下的还不错 但是HITSOUNDS的作用不仅是贴合音乐 更有提示玩家和辅助打击的功用 试着提高音量20%以上

00:12:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里是1/4 而且节奏应该是这样的

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05:47:446 (2,3) - 退后1/4拍 05:48:266 (6,7) - 提前1/4拍 05:48:500 (8) - +note

Nymph wrote:

nazi一些东西：

diff名现在不让自定义这么写了 我估计你还是要改成Insane

00:02:446 (2) - 为了美观最好还是不接触到slider1的 不过因为你前面用的都是stack 那可能需要改一下00:01:274 (1) - 的shape 随便改不改了

00:01:274 (1) - 最好在这种地方用静音的sliderslide slider头最好音量也减一些 更适合歌曲一点

00:46:157 (1) - 这种sliderslide我觉得静音很必要 甚至tick都是多余的 建议插绿线用低音量tick

00:55:180 (1) - 这里我感觉其实更适合一种类似闷鼓的音 但是或许又不需要音量太高 softclap在这听起来太脆太突出了（

02:38:657 (2) - 同46秒

02:57:524 (2,3) - 这个节奏位置很尴尬 slider基本啥都没跟 玩起来很突兀 slider和note调过来还差不多

04:39:243 (2) - 这个break略突然 不怎么舒服

总结一下排列也基本没啥好说的 不过会被人吐槽坑或者难是难免的了 不过我为啥觉得他很好 因为能看出来设计感. hitsound方面的话 有点两极分化的感觉 一方面是你跟鼓的那个音特别突出 但是他突出就反面显示出你一些鼓音弱的地方hitsound全体都很弱势 不够丰满 简单说就是我耳朵里一直听着的都是咚咚咚在敲鼓啦 然后突然就安静了好一会没有声音（也就是触卡说的打击感不足） 我觉得可以适当加一些soft whistle或者其他音效在不是鼓音主导的part 丰富一下音量和音色 大概这样

全都照做了，非常感谢。自己也加了点

@HW:也不是说喜欢不喜欢这图 我印象里 第一个图能做到这样的 一只手就数的过来吧

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Syameimaru-Aya, In-game mod req. A bit late,sor.昨天想睡覺所以現在才Post。

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

如樓上那些所說，音量實在是太小了，对，全都稍微提高了一点
像00:03:618 (5) 這種的whistle為何要調那麼小聲呢?
大一點音量不是聽得比較舒服? 這邊才41%，我建議調高到71%為最好可以試試。

[Sakura Saori so moe that Aya edit a EXTRA NAMIDA]

00:23:774 (1) - 音量+10~15%試試。全部音量都提高了↓
01:01:743 (1) - ^
01:08:774 (6,1) - 個人感覺這兩個finish聽得有點吃力要不要提高點音量?
01:11:118 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我覺得這樣放呈一個直線太沒梗了，要不要重擺一下看看? 不然跟後面交叉也行。不会啊
01:13:696 (2,3) - 個人感覺這段跳放遠感覺更好，尤其是2跟3，可以這樣放，我是建議這樣放:

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。有点不喜欢
01:18:149 (1) - 這邊音樂都是平平的，沒必要放一個antijump在這裡。。
01:27:289 (6,1) - 1/4間距有點過大，蠻坑的感覺。小黄瓜好像也说过这问题，不过这个改的话后面我觉得都要改
01:35:258 (6) - Ctrl+g蠻有感覺。很流暢。no
01:49:555 (1,2,3,4) - 似乎這四個連打有點彆扭。我喜欢啊
01:53:774 (6) - Ctrl+g 感覺能更好些。不
02:13:696 (8) - 似乎有點太長加個NC?一开始也在想，不过应该没什么大问题吧
02:54:243 (1) - 這是個重音怎沒加FINISH而且音量還太小了。忘掉了诶嘿~后来修正了，你没更新图
03:50:844 (6,7,1) - 這連打不同間距蠻坑的阿，放個同間距吧。不太想
04:01:157 (4,6) - 這兩連打微調一下，不要靠到邊或蓋到一點。會讓人想到是隨便擺的感覺又很不好看。我发现这点上我和你们想的都不同，我其实挺喜欢交错叠啥的，是因为我泰国新手了吗…
04:37:368 (5) - 這邊換了一個音調要不要考慮一個NC?其实不太愿意啦

[Other]
If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.

fanzhen0019 wrote:

我来补两星

1. Move to Pending Beatmaps since map is already completed, BSS should allow you to do so.
2. You have unused .osb in your folder, up to you to remove it or not.
3. Consider how long is this map and how slow is this BPM i'd recommend you reduse OD by 1 tick for better playability.

1. 00:01:274 (1) - If this slider follows this very-beginning sound (idk how it calls) then is should starts at 00:01:391 - (listen at 50% and you will find that too). Actually, this 1/8 snapping of slidertail sounds kinda weird for me. End this slider at 00:01:625 - to follow music properly please.
2. 00:04:555 (3) - Being a bit nazi here, but this slider isn't flows well and looks kinda out of place. Try something like this for better flow:
   
   
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3. 00:07:836 (5) - Kinda too tricky. Try Ctrl+G - it will made 00:07:836 (5) - much easier to catch.
4. 00:27:993 (1) - Looks messy a bit - lots of anchorpoints screwed form of this slider. Try to simplify snape here:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:34:555 (1) - Try clap with S:C1 here, sounds good for me
6. 00:35:024 (3) - Also here you can try default one if you will apply my previous suggestion
7. 00:38:305 (5) - Clap with S:C1 here too?
8. 00:39:008 (1) - Any reason to snap it using 1/8? It sounds much better for me if you will end it at 00:39:125 -
9. 00:42:758 (1) - Same here, end it 1/8 earlier.
10. 00:50:493 (1) - Finish instead of clap for consistensy
11. 00:55:180 (1) - Kinda empty, i'd add hitfinish here with redused volume
12. 00:57:055 (5) - Same as above. (If you will do this, then change claps to finishes at 00:57:993 (1,1) - too)
13. 01:01:157 (4,1) - This looks kinda weird to follow. Beginning of next stream doesn't flows well, which will made players think that it is 1/2 jump while it 1/4. Try something like this to make it more intuitive:
    
    
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14. 01:18:383 (2) - Again problem with weirdly curved slider. Did you mean it to looks like that?
    
    
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    Well, i'm not going to mentiore every single one, i hope this you can fix most of them by seeing snape at this picture. If you will have any problems about that i can easily give you code
15. 01:26:821 (4,5,6) - This overlapping looks a bit messy and might be confusing for players. Move 01:27:055 (5) - to x484 y235 to avoid that. Actually, this placement will made spacing consistent.
16. 01:33:149 - 01:34:438 - If you want this part to be "build-up section" then you should reduse volume a bit. It simply goes too loud after soft part.
17. 01:35:024 (5) - Could go with NC follow pattern
18. 01:48:852 - 01:49:438 - Again, reduse volume a bit please. Too loud for build-up.
19. 01:49:672 (2,4) - Don't overlap them please, it simply looks bad.
20. 01:55:414 (1,2,3) - I find this part pretty hard to catch. This "circe + 1/4 slider + circle" pattern doesn't reflects music well, try to re-arrange it something like this to follow music better:
    
    
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    (If you wondering about placement, you can simply stack notes on top of (3) - this will improve playability a lot!
21. 01:55:883 (4) - NC to identify spacing changes
22. 02:03:618 - 02:04:555 - again too loud D: Well, i guess you can check all same sections by yourself.
23. 02:52:602 (5) - NC, for same reason as above
24. 02:57:524 (2,3) - Really very tricky to catch - slider feels kinda mismached if you want to follow lyrics here. So, try this:
    
    
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25. 03:04:321 (4) - New Combo follow pattern please
26. 03:05:493 (1,2) - Try this to improve the pattern graphically (it's played the same way)
    
    
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    code

    336,244,185493,6,0,B|388:232|408:184|408:184|448:164|488:192,1,167.889998591011,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    475,184,186196,2,0,B|432:164|396:192|396:192|351:187|305:141,1,167.889998591011

27. 03:45:102 (10,1) - I would recommend you to swap NC's here for better readability - 03:45:102 (10) - looks like next 1/4 while it 1/2 and NC will be good indicator of spacing changes
28. 03:51:078 (1,1) - That's really too tricky. I missed here twice while testplaying - the whole part looks like one huge stream while it is 1/2 note and simple NC doesn't help. Consider add note at 03:51:196 - or raise spacing bestween 03:51:078 (1,1) -
29. 03:52:368 (1,2) - Swap NCs follow lyrics?
30. 03:54:243 (7) - NC please, otherwise it will be too long
31. 04:00:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistent spacing on stream. Check this out please, it gives huge problems while playing :v
32. 04:01:743 (1) - Repeat hidden by hitburst from 04:01:391 (6) - , which is unrankable. Make it more visible please.
33. 04:07:836 (5) - This slider is pretty mismached lyrics. While beginning and repeat placed spot-on, end of slider doesn't follows anything at music. Try this rhythm:
    
    
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34. 04:27:993 (1) - Remove NC. Don't place NCs follow SV changes please - they are poor indicator for that and does pretty nothing to help read them.
35. 04:32:680 (4,5) - Uh, really dislike this overlap - it looks bad and very confusing Try this:
    
    
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36. 04:42:993 (1) - Same about NCs follow SV changes
37. 04:48:149 (3,4) - Try this to make this stream easier to catch:
    
    
    SPOILER

    
38. 05:12:524 (1,2,3,4,1) - Please consider redusing spacing at stream here. x2.00 is simply too much and extremely hard to follow. Something around x1.60 at least would be much better.
39. 05:19:086 (7) - Add finish instead of whistle to emphazire vocals?
40. 05:24:946 (2) - Same goes here
41. 05:34:555 (4) - Ctrl+G flows better
42. 06:09:243 (1) - Don't see much reason to keep it x0.50 - it doesn't reflect anything at music :c If you really wants to keep it slow raise it to x0.75 at least please

Kodora wrote:

Hi there, here is mod as promised.

[General]

1. Move to Pending Beatmaps since map is already completed, BSS should allow you to do so.
2. You have unused .osb in your folder, up to you to remove it or not.how to do?..
3. Consider how long is this map and how slow is this BPM i'd recommend you reduse OD by 1 tick for better playability.ok

[Marathon]

1. 00:01:274 (1) - If this slider follows this very-beginning sound (idk how it calls) then is should starts at 00:01:391 - (listen at 50% and you will find that too). Actually, this 1/8 snapping of slidertail sounds kinda weird for me. End this slider at 00:01:625 - to follow music properly please.ok,start in 00:01:391 (1) - ,but other no fix
2. 00:04:555 (3) - Being a bit nazi here, but this slider isn't flows well and looks kinda out of place. Try something like this for better flow:fix
   
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:07:836 (5) - Kinda too tricky. Try Ctrl+G - it will made 00:07:836 (5) - much easier to catch..
4. 00:27:993 (1) - Looks messy a bit - lots of anchorpoints screwed form of this slider. Try to simplify snape here:I try change shape
   
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:34:555 (1) - Try clap with S:C1 here, sounds good for meok
6. 00:35:024 (3) - Also here you can try default one if you will apply my previous suggestion.
7. 00:38:305 (5) - Clap with S:C1 here too?ok
8. 00:39:008 (1) - Any reason to snap it using 1/8? It sounds much better for me if you will end it at 00:39:125 -
9. 00:42:758 (1) - Same here, end it 1/8 earlier....keep this
10. 00:50:493 (1) - Finish instead of clap for consistensyadd finish
11. 00:55:180 (1) - Kinda empty, i'd add hitfinish here with redused volumeadd clap
12. 00:57:055 (5) - Same as above. (If you will do this, then change claps to finishes at 00:57:993 (1,1) - too)add finish 00:57:993 (1) -
13. 01:01:157 (4,1) - This looks kinda weird to follow. Beginning of next stream doesn't flows well, which will made players think that it is 1/2 jump while it 1/4. Try something like this to make it more intuitive:keep this
    
    
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14. 01:18:383 (2) - Again problem with weirdly curved slider. Did you mean it to looks like that?.
    
    
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    Well, i'm not going to mentiore every single one, i hope this you can fix most of them by seeing snape at this picture. If you will have any problems about that i can easily give you code
15. 01:26:821 (4,5,6) - This overlapping looks a bit messy and might be confusing for players. Move 01:27:055 (5) - to x484 y235 to avoid that. Actually, this placement will made spacing consistent.ok
16. 01:33:149 - 01:34:438 - If you want this part to be "build-up section" then you should reduse volume a bit. It simply goes too loud after soft part.ok
17. 01:35:024 (5) - Could go with NC follow patternno
18. 01:48:852 - 01:49:438 - Again, reduse volume a bit please. Too loud for build-up..
19. 01:49:672 (2,4) - Don't overlap them please, it simply looks bad.yes
20. 01:55:414 (1,2,3) - I find this part pretty hard to catch. This "circe + 1/4 slider + circle" pattern doesn't reflects music well, try to re-arrange it something like this to follow music better:it likes so good but I...
    
    
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    (If you wondering about placement, you can simply stack notes on top of (3) - this will improve playability a lot!
21. 01:55:883 (4) - NC to identify spacing changeswhat?
22. 02:03:618 - 02:04:555 - again too loud D: Well, i guess you can check all same sections by yourself.ok
23. 02:52:602 (5) - NC, for same reason as aboveyes
24. 02:57:524 (2,3) - Really very tricky to catch - slider feels kinda mismached if you want to follow lyrics here. So, try this:ok
    
    
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25. 03:04:321 (4) - New Combo follow pattern please.
26. 03:05:493 (1,2) - Try this to improve the pattern graphically (it's played the same way)..no,thanks
    
    
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    336,244,185493,6,0,B|388:232|408:184|408:184|448:164|488:192,1,167.889998591011,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    475,184,186196,2,0,B|432:164|396:192|396:192|351:187|305:141,1,167.889998591011

27. 03:45:102 (10,1) - I would recommend you to swap NC's here for better readability - 03:45:102 (10) - looks like next 1/4 while it 1/2 and NC will be good indicator of spacing changesok
28. 03:51:078 (1,1) - That's really too tricky. I missed here twice while testplaying - the whole part looks like one huge stream while it is 1/2 note and simple NC doesn't help. Consider add note at 03:51:196 - or raise spacing bestween 03:51:078 (1,1) - ok
29. 03:52:368 (1,2) - Swap NCs follow lyrics?no
30. 03:54:243 (7) - NC please, otherwise it will be too longok
31. 04:00:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Inconsistent spacing on stream. Check this out please, it gives huge problems while playing :vo...
32. 04:01:743 (1) - Repeat hidden by hitburst from 04:01:391 (6) - , which is unrankable. Make it more visible please.ok
33. 04:07:836 (5) - This slider is pretty mismached lyrics. While beginning and repeat placed spot-on, end of slider doesn't follows anything at music. Try this rhythm:ok
    
    
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34. 04:27:993 (1) - Remove NC. Don't place NCs follow SV changes please - they are poor indicator for that and does pretty nothing to help read them.remove 04:27:055 (3) - nc
35. 04:32:680 (4,5) - Uh, really dislike this overlap - it looks bad and very confusing Try this:ok
    
    
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36. 04:42:993 (1) - Same about NCs follow SV changes.
37. 04:48:149 (3,4) - Try this to make this stream easier to catch:no
    
    
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38. 05:12:524 (1,2,3,4,1) - Please consider redusing spacing at stream here. x2.00 is simply too much and extremely hard to follow. Something around x1.60 at least would be much better...
39. 05:19:086 (7) - Add finish instead of whistle to emphazire vocals?add finish
40. 05:24:946 (2) - Same goes hereno
41. 05:34:555 (4) - Ctrl+G flows better
42. 06:09:243 (1) - Don't see much reason to keep it x0.50 - it doesn't reflect anything at music :c If you really wants to keep it slow raise it to x0.75 at least pleaseI like x0.50 in this

Well, pretty impressive. Nicely done marathon, just needs some work, mainly estetically (bad slider snapes, little inconsistent hitsounds, streams with spacing issues etc) - but i believe it can be resolved with couple of mods. Best of luck & have star!

very thanks

jyc-Binggan wrote:

fanzhen是不是喜欢上你了啊，怎么狂射。顺便说一下，你跟钢琴音的时候感觉像消音了，最好加点什么音效

Syameimaru-Aya wrote:

Nymph wrote:

nazi一些东西：

diff名现在不让自定义这么写了 我估计你还是要改成Insane

00:02:446 (2) - 为了美观最好还是不接触到slider1的 不过因为你前面用的都是stack 那可能需要改一下00:01:274 (1) - 的shape 随便改不改了

00:01:274 (1) - 最好在这种地方用静音的sliderslide slider头最好音量也减一些 更适合歌曲一点

00:46:157 (1) - 这种sliderslide我觉得静音很必要 甚至tick都是多余的 建议插绿线用低音量tick

00:55:180 (1) - 这里我感觉其实更适合一种类似闷鼓的音 但是或许又不需要音量太高 softclap在这听起来太脆太突出了（

02:38:657 (2) - 同46秒

02:57:524 (2,3) - 这个节奏位置很尴尬 slider基本啥都没跟 玩起来很突兀 slider和note调过来还差不多

04:39:243 (2) - 这个break略突然 不怎么舒服

总结一下排列也基本没啥好说的 不过会被人吐槽坑或者难是难免的了 不过我为啥觉得他很好 因为能看出来设计感. hitsound方面的话 有点两极分化的感觉 一方面是你跟鼓的那个音特别突出 但是他突出就反面显示出你一些鼓音弱的地方hitsound全体都很弱势 不够丰满 简单说就是我耳朵里一直听着的都是咚咚咚在敲鼓啦 然后突然就安静了好一会没有声音（也就是触卡说的打击感不足） 我觉得可以适当加一些soft whistle或者其他音效在不是鼓音主导的part 丰富一下音量和音色 大概这样

全都照做了，非常感谢。自己也加了点
00:55:180 (1) - 最后还是保留了clap，非常抱歉。

@HW:也不是说喜欢不喜欢这图 我印象里 第一个图能做到这样的 一只手就数的过来吧

95648 wrote:

這歌洗腦啊
射星算了

Syameimaru-Aya wrote:

95648 wrote:

這歌洗腦啊
射星算了

哇
;w;其实我正想找你给我说说怎么下音效呢

1. tags加上 avenew a.k.a.dRESS
2. 我觉得BG不够萌, 请把眼睛PS成彩色的
3. 怎么说呢, 有的地方一个慢速长滑条, 有的是大间距四分拍, 反差好大..
4. 00:06:782 (3) - 我觉得去掉比较好
5. 00:07:719 (4) - ^
6. 00:21:547 (3,4) - 把间距拉大点啊, 还以为是连打 (最好把5,6放到别的地方, 叠的太乱了。。)
7. 00:25:414 (2) - 可以加几个的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318631
8. 00:27:289 (3) - ^
9. 00:29:164 (2) - ^
10. 00:30:688 (2) - 这个可以去掉吗
11. 00:39:008 (1) - 打的时候根本看不清啊
12. 01:01:157 (4,1) - 这个连打不科学。。各种意义上
13. 01:34:555 (1,2,3,4) - 这样好难的
14. 01:49:438 (6,1) - 6到1的间距太夸张啦, 把5-6改成滑条多好
15. 02:53:188 (6,1) - ^
16. 02:38:422 (2) - 建议去掉这个note.. 这里连上感觉节奏变化太快了 而且也挺难打
17. 03:07:016 (4) - 这里节奏好像是这样的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318604
18. 03:08:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这太难了;w;
19. 03:41:469 (8,9) - 这样摆 不然不美观.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318803
20. 03:48:969 (8,9) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318810
21. 03:50:844 (6) - 音乐里没这个音, 建议去掉
22. 03:50:961 (6,1) - 这里大概是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318815
23. 04:01:743 (1,3) - 回转箭头挡住了啊 我的推荐是 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318823 滑条是1.33x
24. 04:06:196 (2) - 太靠底部了.. 这里可以和前面一个note一起往上一点的
25. 04:24:125 (4,1) - 4到1怎么玩 请把04:23:774 (1,2,3,4) - 用短滑条代替
26. 04:57:524 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318835 请改成这样的
27. 05:27:641 (6,7,8) - 这里加点弧度比较好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318839 或者往另一边弯

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

送一分


Marathon

1. tags加上 avenew a.k.a.dRESS好，加了
2. 我觉得BG不够萌, 请把眼睛PS成彩色的我也觉得不够萌啦…不过我找了两个月BG，这已经是目前来说最合适的了。眼睛我应该会去做吧www
3. 怎么说呢, 有的地方一个慢速长滑条, 有的是大间距四分拍, 反差好大..www
4. 00:06:782 (3) - 我觉得去掉比较好对
5. 00:07:719 (4) - ^不去
6. 00:21:547 (3,4) - 把间距拉大点啊, 还以为是连打 (最好把5,6放到别的地方, 叠的太乱了。。)第一pc的话通常不会这么想吧 大概要看了后面
7. 00:25:414 (2) - 可以加几个的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318631虽然想过要加啦，但最后还是放弃了
8. 00:27:289 (3) - ^
9. 00:29:164 (2) - ^
10. 00:30:688 (2) - 这个可以去掉吗不太好吧……
11. 00:39:008 (1) - 打的时候根本看不清啊找了几个test play基本都可以打啊
12. 01:01:157 (4,1) - 这个连打不科学。。各种意义上www
13. 01:34:555 (1,2,3,4) - 这样好难的确实如此，但后面也不少吧..
14. 01:49:438 (6,1) - 6到1的间距太夸张啦, 把5-6改成滑条多好真的不太想啊
15. 02:53:188 (6,1) - ^
16. 02:38:422 (2) - 建议去掉这个note.. 这里连上感觉节奏变化太快了 而且也挺难打我也这么觉得，非常想改啊不过总是有种不情愿(?
17. 03:07:016 (4) - 这里节奏好像是这样的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318604我觉得不是啊
18. 03:08:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这太难了;w;;w;原来更难的，我觉得这已经很容易了，除了最后一个note有点大
19. 03:41:469 (8,9) - 这样摆 不然不美观.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318803让我想想
20. 03:48:969 (8,9) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318810确实不太好看稍微换了换不过还是和原来一样..
21. 03:50:844 (6) - 音乐里没这个音, 建议去掉好难抉择
22. 03:50:961 (6,1) - 这里大概是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318815和上面一个问题嘛
23. 04:01:743 (1,3) - 回转箭头挡住了啊 我的推荐是 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318823 滑条是1.33x已经有段时间了吧，应该不会被300挡住
24. 04:06:196 (2) - 太靠底部了.. 这里可以和前面一个note一起往上一点的带着上一个一起移动好像要移动不少，和下一个note一起看感觉不太好看，一斜一直
25. 04:24:125 (4,1) - 4到1怎么玩 请把04:23:774 (1,2,3,4) - 用短滑条代替我觉得挺好打啊。反正打不了这里的也FC不了这图啦www应该没关系的
26. 04:57:524 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318835 请改成这样的不太想
27. 05:27:641 (6,7,8) - 这里加点弧度比较好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318839 或者往另一边弯

我刻意两边直着的啊

我觉得做得挺好的啊 mod的比较细 请务必不要增加调教度(这是什么

另外如果你把creator's words里面每句话前面的点去掉, 看起来会更萌一些

仔细思考了一番，我发现只要我把你的mod all fix 掉，那我这图就可以改成AR8看着榜上一堆DT了，可玩性必定上升不少，请让我犹豫一下是让玩家们DT还是none。哪天恍然大悟我应该就会回来all fix吧

Syameimaru-Aya wrote:

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

送一分


Marathon

1. tags加上 avenew a.k.a.dRESS好，加了
2. 我觉得BG不够萌, 请把眼睛PS成彩色的我也觉得不够萌啦…不过我找了两个月BG，这已经是目前来说最合适的了。眼睛我应该会去做吧www
3. 怎么说呢, 有的地方一个慢速长滑条, 有的是大间距四分拍, 反差好大..www
4. 00:06:782 (3) - 我觉得去掉比较好对
5. 00:07:719 (4) - ^不去
6. 00:21:547 (3,4) - 把间距拉大点啊, 还以为是连打 (最好把5,6放到别的地方, 叠的太乱了。。)第一pc的话通常不会这么想吧 大概要看了后面
7. 00:25:414 (2) - 可以加几个的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318631虽然想过要加啦，但最后还是放弃了
8. 00:27:289 (3) - ^
9. 00:29:164 (2) - ^
10. 00:30:688 (2) - 这个可以去掉吗不太好吧……
11. 00:39:008 (1) - 打的时候根本看不清啊找了几个test play基本都可以打啊
12. 01:01:157 (4,1) - 这个连打不科学。。各种意义上www
13. 01:34:555 (1,2,3,4) - 这样好难的确实如此，但后面也不少吧..
14. 01:49:438 (6,1) - 6到1的间距太夸张啦, 把5-6改成滑条多好真的不太想啊
15. 02:53:188 (6,1) - ^
16. 02:38:422 (2) - 建议去掉这个note.. 这里连上感觉节奏变化太快了 而且也挺难打我也这么觉得，非常想改啊不过总是有种不情愿(?
17. 03:07:016 (4) - 这里节奏好像是这样的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318604我觉得不是啊
18. 03:08:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这太难了;w;;w;原来更难的，我觉得这已经很容易了，除了最后一个note有点大
19. 03:41:469 (8,9) - 这样摆 不然不美观.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318803让我想想
20. 03:48:969 (8,9) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318810确实不太好看稍微换了换不过还是和原来一样..
21. 03:50:844 (6) - 音乐里没这个音, 建议去掉好难抉择
22. 03:50:961 (6,1) - 这里大概是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318815和上面一个问题嘛
23. 04:01:743 (1,3) - 回转箭头挡住了啊 我的推荐是 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318823 滑条是1.33x已经有段时间了吧，应该不会被300挡住
24. 04:06:196 (2) - 太靠底部了.. 这里可以和前面一个note一起往上一点的带着上一个一起移动好像要移动不少，和下一个note一起看感觉不太好看，一斜一直
25. 04:24:125 (4,1) - 4到1怎么玩 请把04:23:774 (1,2,3,4) - 用短滑条代替我觉得挺好打啊。反正打不了这里的也FC不了这图啦www应该没关系的
26. 04:57:524 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318835 请改成这样的不太想
27. 05:27:641 (6,7,8) - 这里加点弧度比较好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318839 或者往另一边弯

我刻意两边直着的啊

我觉得做得挺好的啊 mod的比较细 请务必不要增加调教度(这是什么

另外如果你把creator's words里面每句话前面的点去掉, 看起来会更萌一些

好

仔细思考了一番，我发现只要我把你的mod all fix 掉，那我这图就可以改成AR8看着榜上一堆DT了，可玩性必定上升不少，请让我犹豫一下是让玩家们DT还是none。哪天恍然大悟我应该就会回来all fix吧

（二次）啊啊啊啊真是令人犹豫，我又放弃了……