This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, August 30, 2014 at 1:38:26 AM

Artist: xi
Title: Zephyros
Tags: the diverse system instrumental skalim runamii classical ad nearly 180
BPM: 180
Filesize: 7410kb
Play Time: 04:04
Difficulties Available:

1. 4K Another - 4Key (4.83 stars, 3156 notes)
2. 4K Normal - 4Key (1.97 stars, 886 notes)
3. 7K Another - 7Key (4.22 stars, 2755 notes)
4. 7K Extra - 7Key (6.3 stars, 3882 notes)
5. 7K Normal - 7Key (2.07 stars, 1214 notes)
6. Skalim´s 7K Rage!! - 7Key (5.67 stars, 3773 notes)
7. Tanamii x Million's 4K Insane - 4Key (3.76 stars, 2500 notes)
8. Tanamii's 7K Hyper - 7Key (3.11 stars, 1951 notes)

Download: xi - Zephyros
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Old mapset. Revived for rank
This song was from " The Diverse System : AD Nearly 180D " Album
Re-working and changing some hitsounds again. Re-Download if you already download this from 25 August

• The Difficulties
  4K Normal : What an Easy-peacy diff
  4K Hyper : coming soon.
  Tanamii x Million's 4K Insane : Collab diff by me and Runamii.
  4K Another : get ready for more stream diffs!
  4K Black Another : coming soon.
  
  7K Normal : Basic patterns for those who still newbies
  Tanamii's 7K Hyper : Advanced diff by Runamii
  7K Another : Stream diff for a challenge
  Skalim's 7K Rage!! : Skalim's special arrrrrhht !!!!
  7K Extra : Extra diff for Extra-terrestial incomers

Ready for Mods and Enjoy~!

Finally submitted

Skalim wrote:

Finally submitted

pls play it :p

Skalim y u raging D:

ArcherLove wrote:

Skalim y u raging D:

To Strunck (?

uh

Mirage wrote:

uh

._. ?

add 7K on skalim rage

its already in the rule cuz you made 2 mode mania mapset (4K/7K)

no kudosu for this

EDIT:

oh wait

so I mapped it for fun and practice only

ok then.

._.

i love the maps xD

I think the music quality is a little foggy, I recommend using the audio from this website. Just download it ^^b

http://tindeck.com/listen/ebja

But considering the amount of effort you used on this beatmap, it is optional, since you will have to set the offset again etc.

eNHaHa0806 wrote:

I think the music quality is a little foggy, I recommend using the audio from this website. Just download it ^^b

http://tindeck.com/listen/ebja

But considering the amount of effort you used on this beatmap, it is optional, since you will have to set the offset again etc.

i will think about it later. thanks for this, and sorry for veryyy late reply

Wowwww this mapset is really fun to play
Really nice maps! Hope this gets ranked orz

;-; RC revive this plz... (where's 4K HD?)

This map is so good for stamina training!

The music quality is kinda low though. Might wanna change the mp3 to what eNHaHa0806 suggested. (make sure to turn it to 192kbit too)
But still, very nice mapset!

If this is for rank, call me for mod or something. I'm not sure if it's not mapped for fun anymore since you took that out.

Blocko wrote:

This map is so good for stamina training!

The music quality is kinda low though. Might wanna change the mp3 to what eNHaHa0806 suggested. (make sure to turn it to 192kbit too)
But still, very nice mapset!

If this is for rank, call me for mod or something. I'm not sure if it's not mapped for fun anymore since you took that out.

hold it, i will change the mp3 later
i need to re-arrange the pattern first xd

oh well, langsung DC.. orz

Miyamoto Usagi wrote:

oh well, langsung DC.. orz

irc varokah

00:05 Remillion Cross: bantu dong haha
00:05 Miyamoto Usagi: bantu apeu.. owo
00:07 Remillion Cross: map
00:07 Miyamoto Usagi: map.. owo
00:07 *Remillion Cross is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/350280 xi - Zephyros]
00:07 Miyamoto Usagi: D:
00:07 Miyamoto Usagi: diff apa?
00:07 Remillion Cross: check 
00:07 Remillion Cross: 7k Hypernya
00:07 Miyamoto Usagi: walah
00:07 Remillion Cross: slidernya agak aneh
00:08 Remillion Cross: yuutosan
00:08 Remillion Cross: .... 
00:09 Miyamoto Usagi: yg tanamii?
00:09 Remillion Cross: iya
00:09 Remillion Cross: i mentoring him for nothing
00:09 Remillion Cross: haha
00:09 Remillion Cross: him maksudnya si yuutosan
00:09 Miyamoto Usagi: hoo
00:10 Miyamoto Usagi: 00:37:393 (37393|1,38726|0) -  bikin 1 aja
00:11 Miyamoto Usagi: 00:57:226 (57226|1) - bikin slider sampe 00:57:393 (57393|0) - ?
00:12 Miyamoto Usagi: 01:04:059 (64059|1) - buat transisi, hapus aja
00:12 Miyamoto Usagi: (ganti jadi circle
00:13 Remillion Cross: ok

00:15 Miyamoto Usagi: 01:32:059 (92059|2) - dari sini mungkin mau ngikutin piano yg 'toterot terot'
00:15 Miyamoto Usagi: ==a menurut lu?
00:15 Remillion Cross: wkwkk
00:15 Remillion Cross: menurut kamu dulu
00:15 Miyamoto Usagi: jujur.. >:I
00:16 Miyamoto Usagi: gw dengan bilang gitu, ya berarti gw bilang gitu
00:16 Miyamoto Usagi: :v
00:17 Miyamoto Usagi: 01:30:726 (90726|0) - LN ini juga ganti lane dari 01:32:059 (92059|2) - 
00:18 Miyamoto Usagi: .-. gak enak loh dipanggil senpai sama banyak orang.. T_T
00:18 Miyamoto Usagi: rasanya mau nangis.. T__T
00:18 Miyamoto Usagi: (saking senengnya)
00:18 Miyamoto Usagi: sebentar, panggilan alam
00:19 Remillion Cross: toiler
00:19 Remillion Cross: saya ga ngerti
00:19 Remillion Cross: kenapa nangis ?
00:19 Miyamoto Usagi: kalo diliat dari kondisi irl gw
00:27 Remillion Cross: ganti topic :)
00:27 Remillion Cross: btw aku udah done seluruh dari modmu tadi
00:27 Remillion Cross: irc mod gimana ini ya
00:27 Miyamoto Usagi: nanti chatlognya gw crop
00:27 Miyamoto Usagi: ==a
00:27 *Miyamoto Usagi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/443215 ETIA. - Nippon Shiki Kata Kaku -OukaRanman-]
00:27 Remillion Cross: haha
00:28 Remillion Cross: sankyuu ya ^^
00:28 Miyamoto Usagi: ^^; iya
00:29 Miyamoto Usagi: =w= terusin lagi gk?
00:29 *Miyamoto Usagi is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/350282 xi - Zephyros [Tanamii's 7K Hyper]]
00:29 Miyamoto Usagi: 02:07:393 (127393|3) - 
00:30 Miyamoto Usagi: kalo tiba tiba 3 notes, kyknya ngagetin deh.. ==a
00:32 Miyamoto Usagi: dari 02:30:726 (150726|0) - , banyak LN yang telat.. ==a lu tau lah cara fixnya
00:32 Remillion Cross: oke
00:33 Miyamoto Usagi: 02:55:059 (175059|3) - di sebelah snare (STAAK) bisa dikasih triple notes
00:33 Miyamoto Usagi: buat klimaks ending
00:33 Miyamoto Usagi: 03:04:059 (184059|1,184059|5) - apalagi sebelah sini.. <3
00:34 Miyamoto Usagi: karena part sebelumnya udah dense, kalo akhirnya jadi 'lebih mudah', berasa... jadi sedikit.. umm.. anti klimaks? (kata hinagi)
00:36 Remillion Cross: ok
00:36 Miyamoto Usagi: <3 that's it

Thanks Miya-chan

=w=)/

1/2/3/4/5/6/7
lel

sorry this mods mostly rather point out 'technically' aspect, but i will try to point out something else too.. :"<

[Normal]

00:04:039 (4039|1) - 00:06:706 (6706|5) - 00:09:373 (9373|0) - to 4 (bell, thumb, special key?)
00:30:706 (30706|1,30956|5,31206|1,31456|5) - 4 > 4 > 4 > 4 (for strong feeling in 1 lane)
00:44:039 (44039|4) - ea, stronk there, add on 4

> 00:32:873 (32873|0) - strong bass kick (and some part ahead) were missing? or?
> 00:46:373 (46373|3) - strong snare sound (and some part ahead) were missing too? or?
> 00:47:373 (47373|4) - ==a ok, not too strong, remove?
> but 00:47:539 (47539|6) - a bit strong.. add?

^ i can find these problem in most part in 1st & 3rd kiai, i know which instrument you are trying to layer, but too many mixed transitions there, i dont know, rather feels inconsistent a bit.. --a my suggestion is too keep them layered more static & precisely, but still keep the star rating below 2.. (it's ok if you think you are going to make casual patters, it's 'normal' for 'Normal' diffs)

[Skalim's RAGEE!!! AAARRGHT!]
00:20:039 (20039|3,20039|5,20039|1,20206|2,20373|3,20373|5,20539|6,20539|2,20706|3,20873|5,20873|6) - reduce some double notes here.. ==a
00:34:206 (34206|0,34373|1,34539|2) - won't hurt if you follow the pr
00:39:873 (39873|2) - instead LN, why don't you add 1/4 notes?
00:55:289 (55289|4,55539|4) - add 1/4 notes between those?
00:59:539 (59539|2) - ==a remove?
01:05:039 (65039|3,65206|5,65373|4) - add escalating stairs there? (puush not working orz) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1961749
01:10:039 (70039|6,70289|5,70539|4) - following PR wont hurt.. :">
01:21:206 - 01:23:873 - stronk there.. ==a
02:19:706 (139706|3,139706|6,140039|2,140039|5) - omg isn't it too many?
02:46:539 (166539|6,166706|6) - stroonk.. >:I hue..
02:48:039 (168039|6) - ^
02:49:206 (169206|6,169373|6) - ^

i feel 1st kiai & 3rd kiai is veerry same, but flipped or reflected.. is it? or it's just me?

03:10:206 (190206|4) - remove, 03:09:873 - add 1/4 LN on 3

[another]
00:37:289 (37289|1) - to 3?

01:21:373 - 01:21:206 - 01:23:873 - 01:24:039 - stronk.. >:I add
01:28:039 - 01:42:706 - add
02:11:873 (131873|6,132039|4) - 02:14:373 (134373|0) - 02:17:039 (137039|1) - 02:18:373 (138373|0) - 02:22:373 (142373|0) - 02:25:039 (145039|3) - 02:27:706 (147706|6) - 02:28:039 (148039|0) - stronk plz.. add
02:55:706 (175706|5) - on 3rd kiai, each snare put 3 notes plz..
03:00:039 (180039|0) - =-= add
03:04:289 (184289|3,184539|2,184789|3,184956|4,185206|5,185373|6) - add 1 more notes
03:12:039 (192039|1) - not to strong, remove
03:21:373 (201373|2) - ==a add
03:25:373 (205373|1,205623|0,205873|1,206123|2,206289|1,206539|1) - =-= add 1 more notes

[extra]

00:26:123 (26123|4,26206|4) - same sound, but many notes.. o.o? remove
00:37:039 (37039|2,37039|4) - stronk.. add
00:38:539 (38539|1) - same ^
00:52:789 (52789|6) - ==a remove
02:20:873 (140873|4,140956|4) - oh please.. D: remove?
==a
02:52:039 (172039|1) - to 1, then 02:52:039 (172039|0,174706|2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1961858

ok.. i think that's it.. x_x

overall.. this chart needs more <3

good luck!

ExUsagi wrote:

=w=)/

1/2/3/4/5/6/7
lel

sorry this mods mostly rather point out 'technically' aspect, but i will try to point out something else too.. :"<

[Normal]

00:04:039 (4039|1) - 00:06:706 (6706|5) - 00:09:373 (9373|0) - to 4 (bell, thumb, special key?) agree
00:30:706 (30706|1,30956|5,31206|1,31456|5) - 4 > 4 > 4 > 4 (for strong feeling in 1 lane) 1 lane was not good idea, knowing if this is for normal diff
00:44:039 (44039|4) - ea, stronk there, add on 4added in 7th column

> 00:32:873 (32873|0) - strong bass kick (and some part ahead) were missing? or? perhaps you're right..
> 00:46:373 (46373|3) - strong snare sound (and some part ahead) were missing too? or? added
> 00:47:373 (47373|4) - ==a ok, not too strong, remove? re-mapping the pattern near of this
> but 00:47:539 (47539|6) - a bit strong.. add? yes i will

^ i can find these problem in most part in 1st & 3rd kiai, i know which instrument you are trying to layer, but too many mixed transitions there, i dont know, rather feels inconsistent a bit.. --a my suggestion is too keep them layered more static & precisely, but still keep the star rating below 2.. (it's ok if you think you are going to make casual patters, it's 'normal' for 'Normal' diffs) i know what you mean. inconsistent isn't a good idea after all...

[Skalim's RAGEE!!! AAARRGHT!]
00:20:039 (20039|3,20039|5,20039|1,20206|2,20373|3,20373|5,20539|6,20539|2,20706|3,20873|5,20873|6) - reduce some double notes here.. ==a
00:34:206 (34206|0,34373|1,34539|2) - won't hurt if you follow the pr
00:39:873 (39873|2) - instead LN, why don't you add 1/4 notes?
00:55:289 (55289|4,55539|4) - add 1/4 notes between those?
00:59:539 (59539|2) - ==a remove?
01:05:039 (65039|3,65206|5,65373|4) - add escalating stairs there? (puush not working orz) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1961749
01:10:039 (70039|6,70289|5,70539|4) - following PR wont hurt.. :">
01:21:206 - 01:23:873 - stronk there.. ==a
02:19:706 (139706|3,139706|6,140039|2,140039|5) - omg isn't it too many?
02:46:539 (166539|6,166706|6) - stroonk.. >:I hue..
02:48:039 (168039|6) - ^
02:49:206 (169206|6,169373|6) - ^

i feel 1st kiai & 3rd kiai is veerry same, but flipped or reflected.. is it? or it's just me?

03:10:206 (190206|4) - remove, 03:09:873 - add 1/4 LN on 3

[another]
00:37:289 (37289|1) - to 3?nope, it isn't necessary

01:21:373 - 01:21:206 - 01:23:873 - 01:24:039 - stronk.. >:I addokay~
01:28:039 - 01:42:706 - add ok
02:11:873 (131873|6,132039|4) - 02:14:373 (134373|0) - 02:17:039 (137039|1) - 02:18:373 (138373|0) - 02:22:373 (142373|0) - 02:25:039 (145039|3) - 02:27:706 (147706|6) - 02:28:039 (148039|0) - stronk plz.. add done, some suggestion i didn't follow it
02:55:706 (175706|5) - on 3rd kiai, each snare put 3 notes plz.. my bad
03:00:039 (180039|0) - =-= add ok
03:04:289 (184289|3,184539|2,184789|3,184956|4,185206|5,185373|6) - add 1 more notes i will ask other if they agree with you then i will change
03:12:039 (192039|1) - not to strong, remove deleted
03:21:373 (201373|2) - ==a add ok
03:25:373 (205373|1,205623|0,205873|1,206123|2,206289|1,206539|1) - =-= add 1 more notes i'm not sure, but i will ask other later

[extra]

00:26:123 (26123|4,26206|4) - same sound, but many notes.. o.o? remove ok
00:37:039 (37039|2,37039|4) - stronk.. add done
00:38:539 (38539|1) - same ^ ok
00:52:789 (52789|6) - ==a remove already removed
02:20:873 (140873|4,140956|4) - oh please.. D: remove? just one note
==a
02:52:039 (172039|1) - to 1, then 02:52:039 (172039|0,174706|2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1961858 nice, added

ok.. i think that's it.. x_x

overall.. this chart needs more <3 <3

good luck!

Thanks for the mod :3
Waiting Skalim for the Rage Arrrrhhhtt GD

ExUsagi wrote:

=w=)/

1/2/3/4/5/6/7
lel

sorry this mods mostly rather point out 'technically' aspect, but i will try to point out something else too.. :"<

[Skalim's RAGEE!!! AAARRGHT!]
00:20:039 (20039|3,20039|5,20039|1,20206|2,20373|3,20373|5,20539|6,20539|2,20706|3,20873|5,20873|6) - reduce some double notes here.. ==a why o_o is the same sound of before
00:34:206 (34206|0,34373|1,34539|2) - won't hurt if you follow the pr what do you mean XD
00:39:873 (39873|2) - instead LN, why don't you add 1/4 notes? here is no sound lol
00:55:289 (55289|4,55539|4) - add 1/4 notes between those? no thanks
00:59:539 (59539|2) - ==a remove? no thanks, and what is ==a?
01:05:039 (65039|3,65206|5,65373|4) - add escalating stairs there? (puush not working orz) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1961749
01:10:039 (70039|6,70289|5,70539|4) - following PR wont hurt.. :">
01:21:206 - 01:23:873 - stronk there.. ==a
02:19:706 (139706|3,139706|6,140039|2,140039|5) - omg isn't it too many?
02:46:539 (166539|6,166706|6) - stroonk.. >:I hue..
02:48:039 (168039|6) - ^
02:49:206 (169206|6,169373|6) - ^

i feel 1st kiai & 3rd kiai is veerry same, but flipped or reflected.. is it? or it's just me?

03:10:206 (190206|4) - remove, 03:09:873 - add 1/4 LN on 3

ok.. i think that's it.. x_x

overall.. this chart needs more <3

good luck!

sorry for no complete the mod, but this map will got a radical modification, i´ll post again the reply when i finish all ^^, just wait

Hey hey

mostly suggestions ^^

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[7K Normal]
01:44:706 - add note? for the gong and synth thing
01:47:623 (107623|4) - should be at 01:47:706
02:43:039 - probably shouldn't be a jack, since this is the only jack in the entire section

[Tanamii's 7K Hyper]
00:17:373 - lmao the single note is hidden under the LN here
00:40:289 - there's no drum here ^^' delete?
01:13:039 - I suggest 2 1 2 3 instead of 1 2 3 2 here. It follows pitch and I think it looks better ^^
01:33:706 - I think this rhythm feels weird without a note here
01:36:539 - same
01:47:123 (107123|2,107123|0) - should be at 01:47:206
01:52:206 - you should maybe put a note here to make the single-note rhythm in this section more consistent (since it keeps repeating)
02:02:873 - same
02:09:373 - interesting that all of you guys chose to follow the background sounds instead of the 1/3 melody here it avoids polyrhythms, which is nice

[7K Another]
00:28:706 to 00:29:373 - looks like maybe too many jacks in lane 1. I suggest moving 00:29:206 (29206|0) to lane 2
00:40:289 - i think this pattern makes more sense if you delete this note
01:36:039 - maybe delete one of these, because in all the other repetitions there's only one note
01:59:706 - personally i think this pattern feels weird, mostly because the chord in lanes 5 and 7 gets repeated three times in a row. just nitpicking though
02:00:206 - based on what you did earlier in this section, I think there should be a note here
02:00:789 - delete maybe. no violin sound here
02:01:539 - same
hmmm for the sake of consistency I think you should either add notes at 02:04:206 or delete the notes at 02:05:539

[7K Extra]
00:48:623 - no violin sound here but I see why you'd do it like this
03:20:623 - same
03:57:956 - maybe add a note?

Good luck getting this ranked

Nivrad00 wrote:

Hey hey

mostly suggestions ^^

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[7K Normal]
01:44:706 - add note? for the gong and synth thing i'm not sure is this will going well...
01:47:623 (107623|4) - should be at 01:47:706 thanks, this is actually from my laziness haha
02:43:039 - probably shouldn't be a jack, since this is the only jack in the entire section i understand, done~

[Tanamii's 7K Hyper]
00:17:373 - lmao the single note is hidden under the LN here thanks for checking about this -_-b
00:40:289 - there's no drum here ^^' delete? okay
01:13:039 - I suggest 2 1 2 3 instead of 1 2 3 2 here. It follows pitch and I think it looks better ^^ sure
01:33:706 - I think this rhythm feels weird without a note here blame the gd-er :p
01:36:539 - same same as ^
01:47:123 (107123|2,107123|0) - should be at 01:47:206 ok
01:52:206 - you should maybe put a note here to make the single-note rhythm in this section more consistent (since it keeps repeating) ok
02:02:873 - same ok
02:09:373 - interesting that all of you guys chose to follow the background sounds instead of the 1/3 melody here it avoids polyrhythms, which is nice

[7K Another]
00:28:706 to 00:29:373 - looks like maybe too many jacks in lane 1. I suggest moving 00:29:206 (29206|0) to lane 2 ok
00:40:289 - i think this pattern makes more sense if you delete this note ok
01:36:039 - maybe delete one of these, because in all the other repetitions there's only one note ok
01:59:706 - personally i think this pattern feels weird, mostly because the chord in lanes 5 and 7 gets repeated three times in a row. just nitpicking though re-move the pattern
02:00:206 - based on what you did earlier in this section, I think there should be a note here yeah, thanks for reminding me
02:00:789 - delete maybe. no violin sound here well i agree
02:01:539 - same i didn't get it o_o
hmmm for the sake of consistency I think you should either add notes at 02:04:206 or delete the notes at 02:05:539 delete the pattern

[7K Extra]
00:48:623 - no violin sound here but I see why you'd do it like this ok
03:20:623 - same ok
03:57:956 - maybe add a note? i think not

Good luck getting this ranked

Thanks for help Nivrad00 !

Go ahead and I wish your Beatmap get ranked soon

I got to the conclusion you're following your own rhythm instead of accurately matching the song. I'm not used to this kind of map so everything I'm going to do is point out at patterns or things that are "too" innacurate.
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[7k Extra]
01:16:956 (76956|4) - The pattern looks beautiful but... there's no violin sound there and it just sounds strange for that reason. Remove pls.
01:42:206 (102206|2,102373|2,102539|2) - Inconsistent. You never make those notes jack. Why are you doing it just this time? I recommend rearranging this section.
02:01:039 (121039|1,121123|2,121206|3,121289|4) - Change those to something like this? Just to make it sound different than the pattern before.
02:11:456 - You kinda broke the stream here. Even if it's expressed by an LN end that's the ONLY moment in the entire stream a note is expressed by an LN end, you have to put in mind that it would also be inconsistent. After this long explanation, I declare that my suggestion is that you add an LN here. xp
02:19:706 - The notes are actually supposed to descend here. Change to a 7531 pattern perhaps?
02:20:956 (140956|6) - This jack doesn't happen anywhere else in the section. You should probably rearrange stuff here.
If I was better at LNs i'm sure I'd be able to give more advice, but I think that's it. xp

[7k Another]
00:28:789 (28789|0,28956|0) - At this section, I suggest you to make jacks exclusive to sounds like 00:25:873 (25873|6,25956|6,26123|6,26206|6) - , so yeah, change those to column 2 maybe?
00:25:873 (25873|6,25956|6,26123|6,26206|6) - Add a note to 3 pls!1!1!!!11
02:35:373 (155373|6,155456|5,155539|4,155623|3,155706|2) - change the pattern to this? just so it's diferent from the one before.

[Tanamii's 7k Hyper]
01:54:873 (114873|1) - Move to 4 so it's consistent with 01:49:539 (109539|1) -
01:57:539 (117539|2) - Move to 1 so it's consistent with 01:52:206 (112206|2) -
02:02:873 (122873|3) - ^

[7k Normal]
Seems nice.

Sorry for the short mod, but that's all I could caught. Now go get ranked. For our sake. For everyone's sake. You must do it. Don't you dare give up. If you dare give up I will... uh...
...
Idk.

Thanks -KousakaHonoka-

Paulmrm wrote:

I got to the conclusion you're following your own rhythm instead of accurately matching the song. I'm not used to this kind of map so everything I'm going to do is point out at patterns or things that are "too" innacurate.
1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[7k Extra]
01:16:956 (76956|4) - The pattern looks beautiful but... there's no violin sound there and it just sounds strange for that reason. Remove pls. ok, i will fix. i though if it was my bad lol
01:42:206 (102206|2,102373|2,102539|2) - Inconsistent. You never make those notes jack. Why are you doing it just this time? I recommend rearranging this section. changed the pattern
02:01:039 (121039|1,121123|2,121206|3,121289|4) - Change those to something like this? Just to make it sound different than the pattern before.

SPOILER

re-make the pattern myself, but thanks for remind and suggestion :3
02:11:456 - You kinda broke the stream here. Even if it's expressed by an LN end that's the ONLY moment in the entire stream a note is expressed by an LN end, you have to put in mind that it would also be inconsistent. After this long explanation, I declare that my suggestion is that you add an LN here. xp yes, i will
02:19:706 - The notes are actually supposed to descend here. Change to a 7531 pattern perhaps? ok, i also changed the stream from 1/8 to 1/12, reminding of the piano sounds
02:20:956 (140956|6) - This jack doesn't happen anywhere else in the section. You should probably rearrange stuff here. done
If I was better at LNs i'm sure I'd be able to give more advice, but I think that's it. xp

[7k Another]
00:28:789 (28789|0,28956|0) - At this section, I suggest you to make jacks exclusive to sounds like 00:25:873 (25873|6,25956|6,26123|6,26206|6) - , so yeah, change those to column 2 maybe? i will
00:25:873 (25873|6,25956|6,26123|6,26206|6) - Add a note to 3 pls!1!1!!!11 haha fine fine XD
02:35:373 (155373|6,155456|5,155539|4,155623|3,155706|2) - change the pattern to this? just so it's diferent from the one before. i created and re-make the pattern myself, thanks for remind and suggestions :3

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[Tanamii's 7k Hyper]
01:54:873 (114873|1) - Move to 4 so it's consistent with 01:49:539 (109539|1) -
01:57:539 (117539|2) - Move to 1 so it's consistent with 01:52:206 (112206|2) -
02:02:873 (122873|3) - ^
all fixed~

[7k Normal]
Seems nice. thanks ! ><

Sorry for the short mod, but that's all I could caught. Now go get ranked. For our sake. For everyone's sake. You must do it. Don't you dare give up. If you dare give up I will... uh...
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Idk.

whoa don't kill me ;-;
thanks for the mod anyway, i don't mind about short mods. every helps was meaningful for me !

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