Kitamura Eri - Be Starters!

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on January 7, 2014 at 11:37:40 AM

Artist: Kitamura Eri
Title: Be Starters!
Source: Mayo Chiki!
BPM: 168
Filesize: 2326kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.99 stars, 424 notes)


Download: Kitamura Eri - Be Starters!
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sammy711
2014-01-08 00:49 sammy711: 感觉
2014-01-08 00:49 sammy711: 节奏有些微妙 还有就是排版有些可以更漂亮一点的
2014-01-08 00:49 sammy711: flow的话有几个地方不太顺手
2014-01-08 00:49 FreeSongs: 哪里。
2014-01-08 00:49 sammy711: 首先先Ctrl+A
2014-01-08 00:50 sammy711: 然后Ctrl
2014-01-08 00:50 sammy711: +G
2014-01-08 00:50 sammy711: 观察最右面
2014-01-08 00:50 sammy711: 把off screen slider调整好
2014-01-08 00:50 FreeSongs: Ctrl+G?
2014-01-08 00:50 sammy711: 对
2014-01-08 00:50 sammy711: 显现出滑条尾的位置
2014-01-08 00:50 FreeSongs: 没变化啊= =
2014-01-08 00:50 sammy711: 有一个滑条出去了
2014-01-08 00:51 FreeSongs: 怎么算出去
2014-01-08 00:51 sammy711: 中心不在网格内
2014-01-08 00:52 FreeSongs: 01:04:175 (1) - 这个吗?
2014-01-08 00:53 sammy711: 应该不是
2014-01-08 00:53 FreeSongs: 那是哪个= =
2014-01-08 00:53 sammy711: 我找下
2014-01-08 00:54 sammy711: 好吧 是我看错了
2014-01-08 00:54 sammy711: QAQ
2014-01-08 00:54 FreeSongs: = =
2014-01-08 00:54 FreeSongs: QAQ
2014-01-08 00:54 sammy711: 先说flow吧
2014-01-08 00:54 FreeSongs: 撒米难道又在玩麻将?
2014-01-08 00:54 FreeSongs: 。。。嗯
2014-01-08 00:54 sammy711: 麻将打完啦
2014-01-08 00:54 sammy711: 刚开始的SV太低了
2014-01-08 00:54 FreeSongs: ……= =
2014-01-08 00:55 FreeSongs: 太低了吗。。。
2014-01-08 00:55 sammy711: 00:10:425 (4,1) - 对于1/2来说距离略蛋疼
2014-01-08 00:55 sammy711: 毕竟玩家会本能地按着前面的滑调速度移动
2014-01-08 00:57 FreeSongs: 改成互相垂直怎么样
2014-01-08 00:57 FreeSongs: 都往外侧旋转
2014-01-08 00:57 sammy711: 不用你只要调整下1的位置就行
2014-01-08 00:57 sammy711: 和4稍微重叠一点
2014-01-08 00:57 sammy711: 00:12:389 (11) - 位置不好
2014-01-08 00:58 sammy711: 不爽还不漂亮= =
2014-01-08 00:58 FreeSongs: 右一?
2014-01-08 00:59 sammy711: 如果是我的话
2014-01-08 00:59 sammy711: 会扔10 下面
2014-01-08 00:59 sammy711: 不过既然已经这么放了
2014-01-08 01:00 sammy711: 右移保持没关吧
2014-01-08 01:00 sammy711: 美观
2014-01-08 01:01 FreeSongs: 好
2014-01-08 01:01 sammy711: 00:15:157 (11) -
2014-01-08 01:01 sammy711: 1/4就不要用前面的1/2间距啦
2014-01-08 01:02 FreeSongs: 10尾12头中间?
2014-01-08 01:02 sammy711: 顺便其实这里的1/4滑条也挺奇怪的。。
2014-01-08 01:03 FreeSongs: 13又移到和12一条直线?
2014-01-08 01:03 sammy711: 00:16:675 (6,7) - flow不好。。
2014-01-08 01:03 sammy711: 我的意见的话
2014-01-08 01:03 sammy711: 最好是让两个短滑条的方向更改一下
2014-01-08 01:04 sammy711: 00:16:854 (7) - 浪费了个blanket
2014-01-08 01:05 FreeSongs: 好
2014-01-08 01:05 FreeSongs: 6指向blanket?
2014-01-08 01:06 sammy711: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1234016
2014-01-08 01:06 sammy711: 我会这么摆
2014-01-08 01:06 sammy711: 一个顺时针的flow+一个甩尾
2014-01-08 01:07 sammy711: 00:17:568 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - 这部分的特殊节奏没有很好地表达出来
2014-01-08 01:07 sammy711: 四个重音就这么美丽/.\
2014-01-08 01:08 FreeSongs: 特殊节奏
2014-01-08 01:08 FreeSongs: = =
2014-01-08 01:08 FreeSongs: 故意弄没得= =
2014-01-08 01:08 FreeSongs: ……
2014-01-08 01:08 sammy711: 00:19:711 (8) - weird 1/4 slider?
2014-01-08 01:08 sammy711: flow和节奏都不好
2014-01-08 01:09 sammy711: 节奏先不说
2014-01-08 01:09 FreeSongs: 89重叠?
2014-01-08 01:09 sammy711: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1234022
2014-01-08 01:09 sammy711: 我会这样
2014-01-08 01:09 sammy711: 重叠的话重音又美丽
2014-01-08 01:10 FreeSongs: 好
2014-01-08 01:10 sammy711: 00:21:318 (7,9,11) - 尝试使这三个头
2014-01-08 01:10 sammy711: 在一条直线上且距离相等
2014-01-08 01:10 sammy711: 00:23:104 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 节奏略奇怪
2014-01-08 01:11 FreeSongs: 嗯
2014-01-08 01:11 sammy711: 00:23:104 (4,5,6,7) - 这里应该是一起的
2014-01-08 01:12 sammy711: 00:23:818 (9,10,11,12,1,3) - 不好看
2014-01-08 01:12 FreeSongs: 00:23:014 - 这个地方没鼓点
2014-01-08 01:12 sammy711: 00:26:139 (7,8,9,10,11) - 这段最好等距 原来这样既不好看打起来也蛋疼
2014-01-08 01:13 sammy711: 感觉那个风声需要强调
2014-01-08 01:13 sammy711: 可以换成1/4滑条
2014-01-08 01:14 FreeSongs: 好等距
2014-01-08 01:14 sammy711: 00:23:461 (7) - 而且这个重鼓点
2014-01-08 01:14 sammy711: 就这么美丽/.\
2014-01-08 01:14 sammy711: 没打击感 sad
2014-01-08 01:14 sammy711: 00:27:032 (1,2) - 不好看。。
2014-01-08 01:14 sammy711: 要不就完全重合 要不就blanket
2014-01-08 01:15 sammy711: 这种半遮挡不好看。
2014-01-08 01:15 sammy711: 00:28:282 (5) - 调整5 使得345和456和356均能构成等腰三角形
2014-01-08 01:16 sammy711: 00:28:997 (7,8,9,10) - 完全没感觉到需要距离减小0 0 建议调等距
2014-01-08 01:16 FreeSongs: 好
2014-01-08 01:17 sammy711: 00:41:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) -
2014-01-08 01:17 sammy711: 这一段的间距。。
2014-01-08 01:17 sammy711: 要美观啊
2014-01-08 01:17 sammy711: 00:41:675 (2,3,4) - 这种
2014-01-08 01:17 sammy711: 00:41:675 (2,3,4) -
2014-01-08 01:17 sammy711: 00:42:032 (4,5,6) -
2014-01-08 01:18 sammy711: 00:45:247 (6) - 跳的时机不太合适
2014-01-08 01:18 FreeSongs: 咦这是跳啊
2014-01-08 01:19 sammy711: 00:45:068 (5,6) - 这这这这还不跳?
2014-01-08 01:19 sammy711: 00:45:247 (6,7) - 这两个点都需要跳
2014-01-08 01:19 sammy711: 感觉你这么一放后面的不爽了
2014-01-08 01:19 sammy711: 最主要的是后面的音更重一点
2014-01-08 01:21 FreeSongs: 啊感觉你说的又到了
2014-01-08 01:21 FreeSongs: 有道理
2014-01-08 01:21 sammy711: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1234042我会这样就是啦
2014-01-08 01:21 sammy711: 后面还有一些美观问题
2014-01-08 01:21 sammy711: 我不详细说啦
2014-01-08 01:21 FreeSongs: 好
2014-01-08 01:22 sammy711: 这个注意一些就好啦
2014-01-08 01:22 sammy711: 00:56:318 (3) - 位置
2014-01-08 01:22 FreeSongs: ……
2014-01-08 01:22 FreeSongs: 向下吗?
2014-01-08 01:22 sammy711: 往右
2014-01-08 01:23 sammy711: 也属于美观
2014-01-08 01:23 sammy711: 或者稍微上移
2014-01-08 01:23 FreeSongs: 可不可以构成个等边三角形?
2014-01-08 01:23 sammy711: 可以的 只要这个note放的有道理就行
2014-01-08 01:24 sammy711: 01:06:497 (12) - 这个跳略牵强
2014-01-08 01:25 FreeSongs: 那就11 12 13划过去?
2014-01-08 01:27 sammy711: 可以
2014-01-08 01:27 sammy711: 01:07:032 (1,4) -
2014-01-08 01:27 sammy711: 难看
2014-01-08 01:28 sammy711: 01:07:389 (2) - 另外没关
2014-01-08 01:28 sammy711: 美观
2014-01-08 01:28 sammy711: 01:09:711 (13) - 和12和1
2014-01-08 01:28 sammy711: 01:12:747 (1) - 这个Ctrl G会不会更爽
2014-01-08 01:29 FreeSongs: 嗯确实
2014-01-08 01:30 sammy711: 01:15:068 (12,13,14,1) - 这个不是平行四边形
2014-01-08 01:30 sammy711: 微调
2014-01-08 01:30 FreeSongs: 嗯
2014-01-08 01:30 sammy711: 01:26:854 (6) - NC
2014-01-08 01:31 FreeSongs: 好
2014-01-08 01:31 sammy711: 01:26:854 (6) - kiai time重开一次以求喷泉效果
2014-01-08 01:31 sammy711: 没啦><
2014-01-08 01:32 sammy711: 啊顺便
2014-01-08 01:32 FreeSongs: 撒米好厉害
2014-01-08 01:32 sammy711: Artist要写日文名
2014-01-08 01:32 FreeSongs: 不会写
2014-01-08 01:32 sammy711: 喜多村 英梨
2014-01-08 01:32 sammy711: 应该是吧
2014-01-08 01:32 sammy711: 对是这个
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