mike91lau wrote:

7K KiVi's MX

OD 8
00:08:040 (8040|4) - move to last column
00:14:897 (14897|4) - ^
00:14:683 (14683|1) - remove
00:15:326 (15326|4) - ^
00:17:040 (17040|4) - extent till 00:18:111 -
00:16:397 (16397|5) - LN end 00:17:040 -
00:22:183 (22183|5) - till 00:23:897 -
00:23:897 - add note
00:29:254 - ^
00:30:540 - ^
00:31:397 - ^
00:39:754 (39754|6) - move to left 1 column
00:40:290 (40290|6) - move to 00:40:397 -
00:40:397 (40397|5) - remove
00:40:611 - add to last 2nd column
00:41:040 (41040|4) - move to last 2nd column
01:11:254 - add
01:14:469 (74469|3) - remove
01:17:897 (77897|3) - ^
01:18:111 - add

Thank you for modding!
I accepted your mod partially. Some advices seem unreasonable since you don't give any explanation and some have reasons not to follow them (for example, OD 8 is not recommended for diffs that have a lot of LN's)

Shana Huee >///<
Such a Relaxing song, makes me fly so high >.<

Hi From Queheheheheh

Mod Before Bubble >///<

Ignore my mod if it's not usefull T.T





Remember there's must be something that didn't need to change

Go Go for ranked <3

DE-CADE wrote:

Shana Huee >///<
Such a Relaxing song, makes me fly so high >.<

Hi From Queheheheheh

Mod Before Bubble >///<

Ignore my mod if it's not usefull T.T

EZ

00:09:540 (9540|0) - Move to 2 since you put LN on 2 then 6 before

00:19:826 - Well how about put LN on 1 End 00:20:469 and move this 00:19:826 (19826|2) Here 00:20:469 well imo this will keep the player stay focus since the song very relaxing xD

00:20:469 - Same as above put LN on 7 and delete 00:23:254 (23254|0) The LN should end here 00:23:897

00:23:897 (23897|4) - Move to 6 (You Put Clap on 6 next)

00:24:754 (24754|0) - Move to 1 (According Pitch Relevancy)

01:03:754 (63754|4) - Wrong Clap position ? Move to Red Line Above at col 4 then Delete 01:04:183 (64183|1)

01:05:469 (65469|5) - Remove Clap
01:05:683 - Add Note to 1
01:06:111 (66111|4) - Remove Clap

^ Nah better hitsound imo

NM

00:11:897 (11897|4,11897|6) - Move to 1 n 3 (Same Pitch just Like Before)

00:48:111 - Add to 3

00:48:540 - Add to 7

00:31:397 - Ctrl + J (it's More like hitting same cymbal) and 00:31:397 (31397|3) should be Finish 00:31:826 (31826|5) should be normalhitsound
00:34:826 (34826|2,34826|0) - just like above move to 4(finish) n 6 then Move this 00:35:254 (35254|6,35254|4) to 1 n 3
00:37:826 (37826|5,37826|3) - Move to 1 n 2
00:45:111 (45111|0,45111|1,45540|6,45540|4) - Ctrl H then 00:45:111 (45111|6) move to 5
00:48:540 (48540|1,48540|0,48969|2,48969|4) - Ctrl H then 00:48:111 (48111|2) Move to 1

01:02:040 (62040|1) - Move to 2 (Pitch)

01:03:754 (63754|6) - Normal Hitsound
01:05:469 (65469|5) - ^

01:06:540 (66540|3) - Delete, i haven't hear any sound

HD

01:03:754 (63754|6) - Normal Hitsound

01:03:969 (63969|3) - Clap
01:05:254 (65254|2) - ^

01:05:469 (65469|5) - Normal Hitsound

01:07:826 (67826|3) - Clap

01:08:040 (68040|6) - Normal Hitsound

Kivi's MX

00:20:469 - Add to 5

00:22:183 - Add to 3

01:12:326 (72326|1,72540|3,72754|2) - Make it Stair 1 2 3

01:16:397 (76397|3) - Move to 2

01:18:969 (78969|3) - Delete

01:21:540 (81540|5,81540|1) - End Here 01:24:540 just like other diff, if you follow the sprinkle >.< sound ignore this

01:19:397 (79397|5) - Move to 4

Remember there's must be something that didn't need to change

Go Go for ranked <3

Thank you DE-CANYAN
very useful mod, all corrected

P.S Thanks for 2 star *O*

DE-CADE wrote:

Kivi's MX

00:20:469 - Add to 5 Ok

00:22:183 - Add to 3 Ok

01:12:326 (72326|1,72540|3,72754|2) - Make it Stair 1 2 3 Lazy pattern

01:16:397 (76397|3) - Move to 2 Ok

01:18:969 (78969|3) - Delete There's strong beat, so 2 notes

01:21:540 (81540|5,81540|1) - End Here 01:24:540 just like other diff, if you follow the sprinkle >.< sound ignore this Fixed

01:19:397 (79397|5) - Move to 4 No, thanks

Thank you for such useful mod! You can see my marks for each suggestion in quote

Beatmap updated, ready for Bubble

I can't mod O!M but good luck with rank ~ >w<

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I can't mod O!M but good luck with rank ~ >w<

Thank you *O*

begginer? i tot is beginner lol

Yay, your first map bubbled >w< Good luck on ranking 'w'

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Yay, your first map bubbled >w< Good luck on ranking 'w'

Thank you Kuo >w<

Gratzz on bubbled shana Deviluke i mean hehe

bilqiscutee wrote:

Gratzz on bubbled shana Deviluke i mean hehe

Thanks x3

p.s call me Shana

Congratz Shana wwww >///<

DE-CADE wrote:

Congratz Shana wwww >///<

Thank you DE-CANYAN >\\\\\\\<

edit: nvm | congrats shana! godd luck for rank! =w=)b

Shinnzan wrote:

edit: nvm | congrats shana! godd luck for rank! =w=)b

Thank you x3

Kyaaa~

Go go!!

ichia7x wrote:

Kyaaa~

Go go!!

>w<
i wait PROGUY

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Bubble repaired owo

Thanks [Shi-Ra]
sorry to trouble

GO GO GO!!! RANK!! >///< kyaa!~

Maou - sama wrote:

GO GO GO!!! RANK!! >///< kyaa!~

Thank you >w<
i wait PROGUY

AndyThien wrote:

all I can say GOOD JOB

Thank you

Begginer ? Beginner

just important typo as name difficult.

i suggest to explain your tags in beatmaps information, so people would understand for what the tags for. well i don't understand some your tags

Reikosaka wrote:

Begginer ? Beginner

just important typo as name difficult.

i suggest to explain your tags in beatmaps information, so people would understand for what the tags for. well i don't understand some your tags

Thanks
my fail x_x

UPD : Fixed

жаль, не шарю в манию. хороший трек, сразу напоминает ту игру, которую делали кучу лет, а потом запили ценцуру.
но играя хорошая всё равно

Aleks719 wrote:

жаль, не шарю в манию. хороший трек, сразу напоминает ту игру, которую делали кучу лет, а потом запили ценцуру.
но играя хорошая всё равно

да, игра действительно хорошая
я бы замапал много треков с нее, но мало времени

Maybe Proguy just forgot? ._.

Kiviman wrote:

Maybe Proguy just forgot? ._.

have no idea
he is not an asset

UPD : Proguy in QAT

poor shana...
i checked instead BAT~

[Easy]
00:09:540 (9540|2) - add
00:27:326 (27326|1,27433|5,27540|1,27647|5,27754|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1978830
00:28:397 (28397|0) - to 00:38:254 (38254|1) - why different rhythm...
for example,00:28:397 (28397|0,28611|4,29040|5,29254|6,29254|3) - and 00:31:826 (31826|1,31826|3,32254|2,32469|6,32683|0,32683|4) -
i think 00:31:826 (31826|3) - to 00:35:254 (35254|2) - pattern is best
same thing to 00:52:397 (52397|5) - ~
[Normal]
00:18:754 (18754|6) - add
00:18:754 (18754|6,22183|2) - until 00:19:826 - 00:23:254 - each
00:31:826 - to 00:38:683 - and 00:42:111 - to 00:52:397 - same Easy thing~
[Hard]
00:17:040 (17040|4) - until 00:17:683 - ,conflict 00:23:897 (23897|6) -
00:37:826 (37826|6) - delete hitsound and 00:37:826 (37826|2,38254|1) - change whistle
00:42:111 (42111|0,42111|6) - add finish
00:44:683 (44683|0,45111|4) - change whistle
00:51:540 (51540|2,51969|1) - ^
00:54:326 (54326|2) - delete hitsound or 00:53:040 (53040|2) - change finish

Good Luck~

hutunohito wrote:

poor shana...
i checked instead BAT~

[Easy]
00:09:540 (9540|2) - add
00:27:326 (27326|1,27433|5,27540|1,27647|5,27754|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1978830
00:28:397 (28397|0) - to 00:38:254 (38254|1) - why different rhythm...
for example,00:28:397 (28397|0,28611|4,29040|5,29254|6,29254|3) - and 00:31:826 (31826|1,31826|3,32254|2,32469|6,32683|0,32683|4) -
i think 00:31:826 (31826|3) - to 00:35:254 (35254|2) - pattern is best
same thing to 00:52:397 (52397|5) - ~
[Normal]
00:18:754 (18754|6) - add
00:18:754 (18754|6,22183|2) - until 00:19:826 - 00:23:254 - each
00:31:826 - to 00:38:683 - and 00:42:111 - to 00:52:397 - same Easy thing~
[Hard]
00:17:040 (17040|4) - until 00:17:683 - ,conflict 00:23:897 (23897|6) -
00:37:826 (37826|6) - delete hitsound and 00:37:826 (37826|2,38254|1) - change whistle
00:42:111 (42111|0,42111|6) - add finish
00:44:683 (44683|0,45111|4) - change whistle
00:51:540 (51540|2,51969|1) - ^
00:54:326 (54326|2) - delete hitsound or 00:53:040 (53040|2) - change finish

Good Luck~

Thanks hutunyan
I think that it does not fall into the rank
never in my life

Hi here is mod as your requested.
Red Color:Must Fix
Green Color:Big Suggestions
[General]
Please change Diff Names
Beginner-->Easy
Easy-->Normal
Normal-->Hard
About Kivi's Diffcult.Already talking with you.If have decision please call me.

[Beginner]
00:00:326 -~ 00:22:183 - Though this is Beginner.But you need catch piano sound completely and it won't be increase too many Diffculty. You can't catch unsuitable and half-baked sound.It will only give players strange feeling.

00:38:254 - The same sounds likes 00:37:826 - So i suggest you add a Note at 5

00:52:397 (52397|3) - I think move to 7 can press more relaxed.

00:57:111 (57111|4,57969|3) - Um i can't understand these 2 Notes meaning.Here i can't here any sound.So i suggest you remove them

01:00:540 (60540|3) - Here has sound but it is unsuitable to place at that moment.I Suggest you remove too.

01:01:183 - Seems here you catch Instrumental sound.So you maybe can Add 3 Notes at 01:00:326 - 01:00:540 - 01:00:754 -

01:03:754 - ^

01:09:969 - Miss piano sound here.

01:10:826 - 01:11:469 - You should Add Note at that places Since you catch Instrumental sound here.

01:14:254 - Miss Instrumental Sound here.

01:17:897 - ~ 01:18:754 - Listen carefully here.Has Miss sound.

[Easy]
00:18:111 (18111|6,18326|4,18540|2) - Take a reverse.Ctrl+H is more comfortable imo.

00:23:897 - Choose 1 Note to remove.The sound is not powerful you needn't use Double Notes to underline it.

00:35:683 - 00:36:969 - Suddenly here hasn't Note but 00:32:254 - 00:33:111 - Have.They are the same.

00:37:826 (37826|1) - Move to 5
00:38:254 (38254|0,38254|1) - Then Move to 3 and 7 to make a different pattern

00:45:969 - 00:47:254 - ^

00:52:397 (52397|3,53040|1,53683|3,54326|5) - Suddenly here use piano sound.But you not use them to Hold before.I suggest you Delete them

01:07:826 (67826|3,68683|0) - These 2 Notes haven't any sounds.Please delete them.

01:20:040 - Still have Piano sound here.Add a Note at 2

[Normal]
00:11:897 (11897|1,11897|5) - If you catch background sound you should let these Holds end at 00:13:826 -
00:12:969 (12969|4,12969|2) - If these you catch piano sounds.You should end at00:14:254 - and make another Hold end at 00:14:683 -

00:17:254 (17254|3) - Overmapped.Please delete

00:19:719 - This is mistake?If yes please end at 00:19:826 -

00:22:826 - The same likes ^ End at 00:22:719 -

00:26:790 (26790|3) - Overmapped.Please delete this

00:32:683 (32683|0) - Very uncomfortable placement.Please move to 6

00:34:397 - Have overmapped and here i have a suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1996638

00:43:719 - Here has bass sound since you catch 00:43:183 (43183|0) -

00:43:183 (43183|0,47361|4) - Move this to 00:47:147 -
00:47:254 - Then add a Note here.

00:50:469 - The same likes ^For bass sound.

00:51:111 (51111|3) - Move to 2 to make a simply stair.

00:52:826 (52826|6,53469|4) - Move to comfortable places.This place is too weird when my testplay

01:00:540 (60540|4) - Remove clap sound.This hitsound sounds weird here.

01:03:969 (63969|3) - ^

01:13:397 (73397|0) - Move to 6 or 7

01:14:040 (74040|3) - Move to 6

01:18:754 (78754|3,79183|3) - Move to 5.It is uncomfortable.

OK That's all.If Finish fix mod and have a decision for Kivi's Diff please call me back

good luck shana><

Go for the 1st map rank, Shana >w<

Simple_Star wrote:

Hi here is mod as your requested.
Red Color:Must Fix
Green Color:Big Suggestions
[General]
Please change Diff Names
Beginner-->Easy
Easy-->Normal
Normal-->Hard
About Kivi's Diffcult.Already talking with you.If have decision please call me.

[Beginner]
00:00:326 -~ 00:22:183 - Though this is Beginner.But you need catch piano sound completely and it won't be increase too many Diffculty. You can't catch unsuitable and half-baked sound.It will only give players strange feeling.

00:38:254 - The same sounds likes 00:37:826 - So i suggest you add a Note at 5

00:52:397 (52397|3) - I think move to 7 can press more relaxed.

00:57:111 (57111|4,57969|3) - Um i can't understand these 2 Notes meaning.Here i can't here any sound.So i suggest you remove them

01:00:540 (60540|3) - Here has sound but it is unsuitable to place at that moment.I Suggest you remove too.

01:01:183 - Seems here you catch Instrumental sound.So you maybe can Add 3 Notes at 01:00:326 - 01:00:540 - 01:00:754 -

01:03:754 - ^

01:09:969 - Miss piano sound here.

01:10:826 - 01:11:469 - You should Add Note at that places Since you catch Instrumental sound here.

01:14:254 - Miss Instrumental Sound here.

01:17:897 - ~ 01:18:754 - Listen carefully here.Has Miss sound.

[Easy]
00:18:111 (18111|6,18326|4,18540|2) - Take a reverse.Ctrl+H is more comfortable imo.

00:23:897 - Choose 1 Note to remove.The sound is not powerful you needn't use Double Notes to underline it.

00:35:683 - 00:36:969 - Suddenly here hasn't Note but 00:32:254 - 00:33:111 - Have.They are the same.

00:37:826 (37826|1) - Move to 5
00:38:254 (38254|0,38254|1) - Then Move to 3 and 7 to make a different pattern

00:45:969 - 00:47:254 - ^

00:52:397 (52397|3,53040|1,53683|3,54326|5) - Suddenly here use piano sound.But you not use them to Hold before.I suggest you Delete them

01:07:826 (67826|3,68683|0) - These 2 Notes haven't any sounds.Please delete them.

01:20:040 - Still have Piano sound here.Add a Note at 2

[Normal]
00:11:897 (11897|1,11897|5) - If you catch background sound you should let these Holds end at 00:13:826 -
00:12:969 (12969|4,12969|2) - If these you catch piano sounds.You should end at00:14:254 - and make another Hold end at 00:14:683 -

00:17:254 (17254|3) - Overmapped.Please delete

00:19:719 - This is mistake?If yes please end at 00:19:826 -

00:22:826 - The same likes ^ End at 00:22:719 -

00:26:790 (26790|3) - Overmapped.Please delete this

00:32:683 (32683|0) - Very uncomfortable placement.Please move to 6

00:34:397 - Have overmapped and here i have a suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1996638

00:43:719 - Here has bass sound since you catch 00:43:183 (43183|0) -

00:43:183 (43183|0,47361|4) - Move this to 00:47:147 -
00:47:254 - Then add a Note here.

00:50:469 - The same likes ^For bass sound.

00:51:111 (51111|3) - Move to 2 to make a simply stair.

00:52:826 (52826|6,53469|4) - Move to comfortable places.This place is too weird when my testplay

01:00:540 (60540|4) - Remove clap sound.This hitsound sounds weird here.

01:03:969 (63969|3) - ^

01:13:397 (73397|0) - Move to 6 or 7

01:14:040 (74040|3) - Move to 6

01:18:754 (78754|3,79183|3) - Move to 5.It is uncomfortable.

OK That's all.If Finish fix mod and have a decision for Kivi's Diff please call me back

All red and green suggestion fixed, thanks S_Starnyan

p.s Thanks Kuonyan and hutunonyan

UPD : map will be updated later, problems with internet, because of the military situation in Ukraine

Посоны, ну запилите уже кто-нибудь играбельную стандарт версию, хочу в кружочки потыркаться и дат фил заново словить(((
С меня нефть.