Ringating's Insane


There's also some unsnapped inheriting sections here: http://puu.sh/6EodP.png. Fix them.
Why no hitsounds on the kiai? You don't have to use the drums hitsounds there, you can change hitsounds at anytime by either adding a inheriting section or changing the sampleset. I actually didn't know that different hitsounds for kiai was a normal thing; it does seem to add to the feel of the map pretty well
00:36:831 (1,1) - Feels kinda empty, you could have added something at 00:37:062 - to emphasize the vocals. Here's an example of the pattern:
Example that makes sense, good call
00:51:597 (5,6) - Pretty much the same as above.
01:48:123 (1,1) - What happened here? If the gap between them is intentional, then at least add a break so the HP won't run out. But I think you should keep mapping at this part. a previous modder suggested having be a drain period, though i do agree that it is better just having it mapped
02:16:732 (4) - Two arrows seems a bit unnecessary, try removing one arrow, it follows the song better imo since there's no drums at 02:17:424 - on the song itself. .
02:26:422 (6) - Try making it more smoother, to improve visuals:
Example
02:33:343 (4,5) - Just move a grid to the left (5), that way you can improve the blanket. not really sure what you mean by blanket, but i changed it
03:04:490 (5,6,7) - Add NC at (5), it'll give a better emphasis with those drums hitsounds you've added. indeed
Pretty good here, although you should work a bit more on the hitsounds. noted

Ringating's Insane:
00:46:291 (4,5) - well, I think this sliders can be improved to something like http://puu.sh/6Gcim.jpg changed
00:55:750 (1) - maybe just curve this?http://puu.sh/6GcwG.jpg changed
01:27:820 (4,5,6) - try different pattern, straight sliders to center you used already.http://puu.sh/6GcJa.jpg changed
43,191,87820,2,0,P|168:176|203:106,1,199.999990463257
469,193,88512,2,0,P|344:208|309:278,1,199.999990463257
315,51,89204,2,0,P|306:108|277:142,1,99.9999952316285
01:37:971 (11) - put this one a bit away changed
01:39:356 (2,3) - this flow is awkward a little I think i fixed it now,
02:26:422 (6) - this slider is not looking any good. orz jk, fixed it

Papcio wrote:

From modding queue~~

[Ringating's Insane]

General: Awesome! AR- or --, HP- imo, making the AR lower makes the map less comfortable to play (purely personal preference, really).

Hitsounds: Good use, 01:54:006 (3) mustn't be whistle already has no whistle there... ._. 02:16:732 (4) too loud. changed

Notes: 00:37:524 (1) Don't make New Combo XD good call 00:38:216 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move it little right I see you were bothered by the slight lack of symmetry

Sliders: 01:48:123 (1,2,3) - Move these near these XD not quite sure what you mean by this. If u mean move their ends closer together, I refrained from doing so because it looks better with the second slider outlining the end of the first one, imho.

Hello! Form Modding Queue here, sorry I took a long time, but my mis-terms... ><

[General]
I think you change too brutaly between Vocal and music such as in hard: 01:30:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You are using vocals, and the second after 01:33:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You are using music. This is distributing...

[Easy]
00:52:751 (1,2,3) - Wrong Spacing. DS must be used for Easier difficulty.
00:56:442 (1) - I find this spinner kind of random... You should place note instead.
01:15:592 (1) - This can get harder to begginer player (like me ><) I suggest you use a 1/2 slider starting at 01:15:361 and ending at current note position.
01:16:053 (2,3) - Spacing! Use Distance Snap.
01:19:745 (3,4) - Spacing!
01:35:203 (2,3,4) - This part get hard for begginers, and can really be confused with 1/1.

Please Review Easy by following Distance Snap!

[Normal]
01:16:515 (4) - This note doesn't feel really well here. Place it at 01:16:745 Instead.
01:16:976 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I don't think 6 1/2 note is acceptable on Normal. I think you should convert at least 2 circle into 1 slider.
01:26:897 (3,4) - Please, Spacing!
01:30:127 (2,3,4,5,6) - Don't just try to follow vocals, it can be distriibuting using a 1/4 for nothing!
01:52:276 (2,3) - Spacing Please!
02:02:889 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - This doesn't sound well. Try This : (02:03:119 (2) Go to 02:03:350) (02:03:581 (1) - Remove)
02:32:420 (1) - Remov NC, There is no special sounding, or SV change.

[Hard]
Like I said in general, It's too brutal, the way you change between music and vocals.
01:47:661 (7,1) - Spacing please, Or stack.
01:49:046 (2) - NC due to SV changes
01:55:044 (7) - This note could be better as simple circle, like you did at 01:53:198 (5) -
02:19:500 (1) - Please remove that spinner ; It feel random, since there is no tune up, or anything.
02:24:576 (1) - Why did you NC? Serve nothing.
02:29:421 (3,4) - Little spacing confusion, just move (4) a bit.
02:56:876 (5) - Always NC when you change the Slider Velocity (SV)
02:58:260 (1,2,3) - The spacing here look kind of ugly. Try using Distance Snap, It will help you have a correct spacing between notes.

[Insane]
00:31:294 (2,3) - Pure overmap. Please use circles... Review oyur map, and avoid overmapping like these.
00:35:909 (6,7) - Please, this jump has no sense.
01:03:364 (8,1) - ... 1/4 not.. with a giant jump like that...

I will ask you to review your Insane, avoiding Overmap, Using 1/4 slider for nothing, And Impossible Jump for Approval only.

[Ringphone' Insane]
00:25:065 (1,2,3) - Can you try making a something straight? The actual is... ;~;
01:09:593 (2,3) - Please rapproach them, and same for every similar 1/4 sliders.
01:14:323 (3) - This note doesn't fit here...
01:49:968 (3) - Too bezier...

Lack Hitsound.

fixed spacing on the first 3 difficulties and made insane a bit easier not overmapped hopefully (that part was especially painful). and... you wrote to fix just that over and over again mostly so i won't comment on everything (ringating fixed stuff too; he won't make a post in response though)

Good luck on it! Star for luck!

21:23 Tari: okkk
21:24 Tari: I can finally mod your map now
21:24 pishifat: lul thanks :P
21:33 Tari: erm
21:34 Tari: next time, don't put notes where they can touch each other
21:34 Tari: especially in easy
21:34 Tari: it makes it haaaard
21:34 pishifat: like where?
21:35 Tari: 00:16:990 (3,4) - no
21:35 Tari: and
21:35 Tari: you need to make it more fun
21:35 Tari: omg
21:35 Tari: I feel like I am hitting the same thing
21:35 Tari: again and again
21:36 Tari: for 00:16:990 (3) - 
21:36 Tari: You don't need the reverse.
21:36 Tari: it's extra
21:37 Tari: Also for every combo
21:37 Tari: 00:19:528 (1) - 
21:37 pishifat:  mkay
21:37 Tari: You don't need to start it with a circle
21:37 Tari: it's boring to play
21:37 Tari: >.>
21:38 pishifat: i don't really play easy diffs so i don't know how they're supposed to be played :P
21:38 Tari: orz
21:38 pishifat: i guess i'll have to actually do that
21:38 Tari: for 00:19:528 (1) - 
21:38 Tari: Can you change it to 
21:38 Tari: http://puu.sh/74hy1.jpg
21:39 Tari: and kinda switch it
21:39 Tari: 1 combo you start it with a circle
21:39 pishifat: more variety, got it
21:39 Tari: and then next start with a circle
21:39 Tari: should be fine after that.
21:40 Tari: oh and you don't need to curve
21:40 Tari: 00:31:756 (3) - 
21:40 Tari: These sliders all the time
21:40 Tari: oh no
21:40 Tari: You can make them look like this : http://puu.sh/74hDw.jpg
21:41 Tari: Oh and like I said before
21:41 Tari: 00:35:447 (3) - 
21:41 Tari: You don't need the reverse
21:41 Tari: XDDD
21:41 Tari: just makes your easy haaard
21:41 pishifat: i prefer curves so i normally make them like that, but i can change for the sake of making it "less boring"
21:42 Tari: Little minor issue
21:42 Tari: 00:46:522 (3) - But the blanket looks better if you curve it less
21:42 Tari: like move the midpoint up
21:42 pishifat: http://gyazo.com/b55b2a039ed563e83d54e4b6d82efdbb
21:42 pishifat: like that?
21:43 Tari: yeeaaah
21:43 Tari: 00:42:830 (3) - and you need to change the slider here
21:43 Tari: OTL
21:43 Tari: you used it last combo
21:43 Tari: gets boring
21:43 pishifat: k
21:44 Tari: actually I am just going point them all out
21:44 Tari: oh do so for this one too
21:44 Tari: 00:50:213 (3) - 
21:44 Tari: That's it
21:44 pishifat: lol.. go for it
21:46 Tari: erm
21:46 Tari: 01:01:518 (2) - Spacing
21:46 Tari: 01:10:747 (2) - Same
21:47 Tari: 01:01:980 (1) - Oh since  your going have to fix spacing anyway
21:48 Tari: Change that slider to http://puu.sh/74i0t.jpg
21:48 Tari: that blanket looks nicer.
21:49 Tari: .
21:49 Tari: just tell me
21:49 Tari: if I'm going too fast
21:49 Tari: XD
21:53 Tari: pishi?
21:58 pishifat: asdf
21:59 pishifat: so... my internet happened to die at a bad time -.-
21:59 Tari: oh uhmm
21:59 Tari: Did you get my last message
21:59 Tari: at 21:48
22:34 Tari: .

pkmnyab wrote:

From my modding queue~

I think it should be fine if you change your BPM from 130.03 to 130 just to make it more exact, but if you don't want to it's still fine because the 0.03 is barely noticeable. I just think it looks nicer as a whole number sound gets slightly out of sync later on if it's at exactly 130. may be the fault of a bad offset though

I suggest using the same hitsounds from Ringating's Insane as they sound better. done

[Normal]
I suggest running through your map again but with 1.0x distance snap active to fix any beat spacing errors. done

00:39:139 (2) - this is too close to the previous object, make sure you stick to the same distance snap throughout the song done

00:43:522 (3,4,5) - here is another example of a beat spacing error. The three ntoes are the same time apart on the timeline, but you place them different distance apart. They should be the same distance apart. done

01:16:976 (1,2,3,1) - this part looks a bit messy, try to move the (2) to the left a little and rearrange (3) (1) so that the curve they make isn't so sharp, something like this:

SPOILER

done

01:37:048 (1) - try shortening this and adding a note after so it sounds better because right now it is sort of awkward as it ends on a blue tick done. it ends on a blue tick because i messed with the timing sections last time and autosnap didn't autosnap very well :/

02:03:581 (1) - try to have this end on a white or red tick instead of a blue tick since all your other notes end on white/red ticks done

02:05:888 (4) - try to make this parallel with 02:04:734 (1,2,3) - to make it look nicer done

02:21:577 (1) - try to have this start on the white tick before, it's hard to read if you put it on a red tick especially if it's the first note after the break done

02:54:569 (1) - I suggest ending this at the white tick instead done

[Hard]
00:40:062 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - make sure the distance between (9)(1) is the same as from (5) to (9) done

00:46:868 (5,6) - try to avoid this overlap here to make it look nicer done

00:50:213 (3,4) - make sure you space this section out, because this part is the same as 00:16:990 (3,4) - in the beginning, but the spacing you used is different, make sure it is consistent throughout the song! changed

01:48:123 (1,1) - try not to have these overlap, it will look better. In fact, I suggest arranging the three sliders like this:

SPOILER

This gives it better flow and looks nicer done

02:23:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - should be same distance apart from each other, use distance snap. You can change the distance snap multiplier if you want bigger jumps, but make sure the space between each note here is the same since they are same distance apart on timeline~! done

02:49:493 (5) - move this down a little so the stream before it creats a smooth curve line, also mvoe (2) to the left a little, this is what I mean:

SPOILER

done

02:58:722 (3) - make this less curved and move to the left a little to improve flow, here is what I mean:

SPOILER

. Try to use this logic to fix all the other parts in your map like this when you come across them! done

[Insane]
01:04:748 (2) - I would prefer a more curvy slider, maybe something like this to match the music better:

SPOILER

done

01:49:968 (1,1) - this sudden SV change is hard to read and unexpected...hmm I think you can try shortening both of them by one tick, I think it sounds better this way and maybe help players adjust to SV change: changed (not to what you did though )

02:50:416 (8,1) - this jump might be too big, see if you can decrease the distanace between these notes or reduce the number of repeats on the slider by like 1 changed

02:52:031 (6,7) - make sure you space these out since the rest of the notes in this section are spaced farther out changed

[Ringating's Insane]
01:36:125 (1) - perhaps start a new combo to indicate start of new vocal

02:23:422 (1) - maybe start a new combo here also since the current combo goes too far into the double digits and may not make the map look nice

02:52:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make sure the spacing is consistent here, I suggest using distance snap

everything changed except the last one 10:01 PM - 『Ringating』: cause spacing seemed pretty consistent. i had distance snapping on, and inconsistencies were due to grid sice and thus insignificant

Cool song! Have fun mapping!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod from queue

3 ~ 4 mins = 3 diffs.
[Ringating's Insane]
00:41:215 (1,2) - Stack these notes for consistency (similar to what you did for 00:33:832 (1,2) - ). Another thing to note is that they should be farther apart, not in the same spacing as your other notes, such as 00:41:907 (1,2,3) - . 00:41:907 (1,2,3) - are all 1/2 beat apart. And 00:41:215 (1,2) - is 1 beat apart.
00:43:522 (4,5) - Move more apart, so their tails aren't attached to each other. And while you at it, try doing something creative with these sliders, since straight sliders are not really appealing to the eye.
00:58:057 (7) - NC
01:06:825 (6,1) - Move more apart, so there's at least some space in between the two notes.
01:20:437 (5) - NC instead of 01:21:129 (1) - . And remove NC on 01:21:821 (1) - too while your at it, so it helps emphasize the change in DS.
01:25:513 (1,2) - Stack.
01:36:125 (1,3) - ^ On the head.
02:06:580 - Consider adding a note here with a clap, or turning 02:06:119 (9) - into a full 1/1 slider with a clap on its tail. Either way, it makes a more complete finish to the chorus of the song.

The flow of you objects looks rather unorganized if you ask me. How and where you created jumps in the mapset are very questionable.
[Insane]
00:44:214 - Missed the beat here. changed
01:28:512 - ^
01:35:203 - ^
01:35:895 - ^ ^^^
02:06:926 - 02:07:503 Add these notes to help put a better end to the chorus:
just decided to map the break. it was pretty short anyway
03:02:875 (3) - Really doesn't sound good here, mainly because it overruns many of the beats you can hear within the music itself. changed

The rhythm gets a little in comprehensible whenever it 's in the vocals.

[Hard]
00:37:062 (1) - Remove NC yeah...no -.-
01:13:054 (1) - Could actually blanket 01:12:131 (2) - if you tried. changed

This diff has a similar issue with the diff above. Somehow, whenever you objects appear in the vocals, it starts to sound off. Still trying to find a way to fix this..

Good luck.

Irie Miyuki wrote:

hi there :3 from modding queue

cool song lol


just minor things

[Insane]
00:42:138 (2,3,4,5) - these 4 sliders are quite awkwark imo. compared with other parts with the same rhythm, i think 4 circles here should be fine changed to something else
00:56:673 (1,2,3) - try this to follow vocal? changed to something else

SPOILER

01:14:438 (3,4) - use a larger spacing here? some players may mis-read this changed
02:10:271 (1,2) - i suggest you still use 3/4 sliders or just circles to follow the drum, a 1/1 slider makes me confused changed
02:12:117 (1,2,3) - ^ the same, and this is not 1/3 changed to somehting else

[Ringating's Insane]
00:24:373 (3,2) - why not stack these two lol < don't forget to move 00:26:449 (3) - a little bit to keep the ds between 00:25:757 (2,3) -
01:36:125 (1) - this slider can blanket 01:34:972 (5) - 's head better~
02:50:877 - i think you can use soft sampleset here because you followed the instrumental, and you can use drum sampleset from here 02:54:569 -

sorry i don't like copy&paste.. so just these things lol

[Hard]
the sv is too low 1.0 lolol changed
AR-1 i think it's fine as is
00:32:909 (7,8) - these two circles didn't overlap each other, but 00:33:371 (9,10) - did, so i think it's better to make them consistent changed that section to something else
00:57:596 (3) - remove this circle and change 00:57:827 (4) - to a circle seems better the way it is now
01:30:588 (3,4,5) - a 3/4 reversed slider would be much better since circles appear unexpectly here changed

[Normal]
00:42:369 (2,3) - blanket them better? changed
00:56:442 (1) - would it be better if the spinner stops at 00:59:211 ? changed

[Easy]
Seriously you used the same sv for Hard, Normal and Easy, and I don't think it's very good slider velocity multiplier is different though at least for between easy and normal
00:47:906 (4,5,1) - check the distance snap here changed


Good Luck