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Hashimoto Miyuki - New SPARKS! (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]
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換成那個clap我會很感謝你........ 待我换完MP3
[Easy]
沒啥，把無用綠線刪一下吧懒
[Normal]
01:19:126 - 01:20:610 弄成轉圈?跟easy照应的啊 不换
[Hard][Insane]
- 00:24:895 - 00:26:873 看看這樣那恩
- 雖然說你不是跟vocal，但 00:26:049這個vocal開始太明顯了，在slider中間很突兀啊...这个问题不大吧反正
SPOILER392,200,24895,2,0,L|456:208,1,64
168,304,25390,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,232,25555,2,0,L|40:224,1,64
24,128,25884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,128,26049,2,0,L|88:136,1,64
184,112,26379,1,0,0:0:0:0:- 00:58:687 (2,4) 沒包好
- 01:00:665 (1,2) ^修了下
- 01:15:005 - 01:19:126 這段是kiai, slider的速度卻很慢感覺眞的好怪.......恩 不偷懒了
尤其是 01:15:005 (3) 這個音效下完我再回來看吧
- 00:21:104 (6,7,1) 移一下好點，你test的時候會發現重疊的地方都巨醜，因為皮皮的蠢更新跟原来好像没啥区别啊
- 00:49:456 (3,4,5) ^
- 00:29:181 (1) 跟 00:28:687 (6) 重疊跟part啊
- 00:55:555 x0.6；00:55:884 x0.8；00:56:214 x1.5 (其實我怎麼弄都感覺不順现在我感觉还行。。
竟然叫我苦力 我要抱抱啊5555
[General]
add tag: opening op
[Easy]
none.
[Normal]
none.
[Hard]
00:43:851 (1) - remove Newcombo.
00:56:214 (1) - ^
[Insane]
00:36:516 (9,11,13,15) - remove the whistle?
00:48:796 (1) - move second waypoint x:172 y:160. in this way the blanket are good for each slider
00:55:555 (1,1,1) - add the whistle? sound is better imo.
01:10:555 (5,6,7) - Missing hitsound? adding normal hitsound is better imo.
01:12:698 (1,2,3,1) - ^
nice mapset
add tag: opening op
[Easy]
none.
[Normal]
none.
[Hard]
00:43:851 (1) - remove Newcombo.
00:56:214 (1) - ^
[Insane]
00:36:516 (9,11,13,15) - remove the whistle?
00:48:796 (1) - move second waypoint x:172 y:160. in this way the blanket are good for each slider
00:55:555 (1,1,1) - add the whistle? sound is better imo.
01:10:555 (5,6,7) - Missing hitsound? adding normal hitsound is better imo.
01:12:698 (1,2,3,1) - ^
nice mapset
[Mod Info]
- Black: Suggestions
- Blue: Importance.You might consider
- Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix
[Insane]
- 00:37:423 (3) –这两重音放在滑条尾不怎么好啊，我觉得换成两个圈再在00:37:588 –来个大跳比较好
- 00:43:027 (5,6) –间距有点小
- 00:44:181 (3) –加个nc?方便读图
- 00:52:917 (1,2,3) –略坑
- 00:53:906 (7) –感觉这个可以拖出来，配合重音来个小跳
- 01:05:280 (4,5) –合并成一个1/1滑条吧反正你前面也没跟人声就跟鼓点吧。
- 01:10:555 (5,6,7) –别stack啊，放远点比较好
- 01:13:851 (1) –减速坑
- 01:20:280 (4) –尖角拐角有点难看
[Hard]
- HP/OD-1吧，和normal差的有点远
- Widescreen support去掉吧，其他几个难度也是
- Stack leniency 弄大点吧，现在这00:10:060 (1,2,3) –几个打起来都重合的看起来很不习惯
- 00:30:500 (1,2) –难读图，读成1/1了。。
- 00:31:489 (3) –滑条头没压什么强音打起来难受，建议改成压00:31:818 –这个鼓点。
- 00:32:972 -00:33:302 –空着不怎么好
- 01:01:818 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) –间距略大难啊，而且还是AR7对于hard难读图
- 01:18:961 (15) –combo太长了，中间断开
[Normal]
- 00:23:906 –加个note？我觉得后面空着那段不怎么好，本来曲子就不长
- 00:38:082 (3) –重音最好别滑条尾
- 00:45:829 (2,3,4) –normal的sl还那么低，这都完全重合了怎么读啊-.-
[Easy]
- 00:16:983 (3) –我觉得应该滑条头在00:17:148 -，这才是重音
- 00:19:291 (2) –没音啊，怎么塞note了，重音在00:19:126 –
- 00:23:082 (4) –我觉得easy出现这个难
- 01:10:060 (1,1) –偷懒-.-
- 01:23:577 (2,3) – 没踩到重音同开头
hello ~
m4m from your queue
poor english here :3
[General]
i don't know why you set a break at 00:23:906 on easy and normal diff. it's kinda odd
[Easy]
so much useless green line in this diff. better to remove them
00:15:994 (1) - make this slider toward to the next pattern to make a triangle like this for a better looking. and make sure the tail stacked with 00:18:632 (1)
00:23:906 - add note here?
00:41:049 (3,4) - better to make those slider curve headed each other like this
[Normal]
same as easy about the green line issues
00:23:906 - add note here?
00:58:851 (6) - can be a better blanket here
01:07:258 (5) - flows better if you move this to x:196 y:368
01:24:401 (3) - blanket problem yeah
01:25:060 (5) - ^
[Hard]
00:11:544 (4) - whistle on head and finish on tail
00:20:445 (4) - fix the blanket
00:22:753 (1) - remove NC
00:43:522 (2,1,2) - i just dislike how all these note stacked, really don't fit with the song. suggest to change like your insane
00:43:851 (1) - there's no reason to add NC here
00:52:753 (3) - remove this note to be consistency with the previous pattern
01:06:434 (8) - should add NC here
[Insane]
00:11:544 (4) - same as hard
00:14:346 (4) - whistle here?
00:15:335 (4) - whistle on head
i think that's all
good luck
m4m from your queue
poor english here :3
[General]
i don't know why you set a break at 00:23:906 on easy and normal diff. it's kinda odd
[Easy]
so much useless green line in this diff. better to remove them
00:15:994 (1) - make this slider toward to the next pattern to make a triangle like this for a better looking. and make sure the tail stacked with 00:18:632 (1)
00:23:906 - add note here?
00:41:049 (3,4) - better to make those slider curve headed each other like this
[Normal]
same as easy about the green line issues
00:23:906 - add note here?
00:58:851 (6) - can be a better blanket here
01:07:258 (5) - flows better if you move this to x:196 y:368
01:24:401 (3) - blanket problem yeah
01:25:060 (5) - ^
[Hard]
00:11:544 (4) - whistle on head and finish on tail
00:20:445 (4) - fix the blanket
00:22:753 (1) - remove NC
00:43:522 (2,1,2) - i just dislike how all these note stacked, really don't fit with the song. suggest to change like your insane
00:43:851 (1) - there's no reason to add NC here
00:52:753 (3) - remove this note to be consistency with the previous pattern
01:06:434 (8) - should add NC here
[Insane]
00:11:544 (4) - same as hard
00:14:346 (4) - whistle here?
00:15:335 (4) - whistle on head
i think that's all
good luck
Hello, m4m from your queue ~
Firstly, you might want to delete those 2 little KIAI time from 01:15:335 and 01:20:610 - the big one should be enough
EASY:
First of all, you should change Beat snap divisor from 1/4 to 1/2 since it is Easy
00:23:082 (4) - I would replace this with a circle at 00:23:247
00:37:423 (2,3) - these might be too hard for Easy, try to replace them with something similar to this 00:36:104 (3)
01:00:500 (3,4) - ^ same (you might want to use 2 circles instead of one slider this time)
01:19:126 - I would add a circle here
NORMAL:
This map has 4.5 stars, I think it's too much for a Normal diff
00:16:324 (2) - I would replace this slider with a circle
00:17:148 (4) - ^ same
00:19:621 (3) - better delete this to reduce the difficulty
00:20:280 (5) - ^ same
00:20:939 (5) - ^ same
01:14:840 (3) - just a suggestion, but you may want to delete this and then put a circle at 01:14:676
HARD:
00:27:862 (1) - you should replace this with a circle at 00:28:027 it sounds better imo
00:52:753 (3) - better delete this
00:56:214 (1) - no NC here
01:15:665 (4) - NC here
01:17:972 (8) - ^ same
01:19:126 (1) - no NC here because there is already a NC at 01:20:610 (1)
INSANE:
00:35:939 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - those "whistle" hitsounds don't sound too good
00:36:434 (8) - NC here
00:54:895 (7) - ^ same
01:01:654 (4) - ^ same
Nice, I like this difficulty! ^^
That's all, GL!
Firstly, you might want to delete those 2 little KIAI time from 01:15:335 and 01:20:610 - the big one should be enough
EASY:
First of all, you should change Beat snap divisor from 1/4 to 1/2 since it is Easy
00:23:082 (4) - I would replace this with a circle at 00:23:247
00:37:423 (2,3) - these might be too hard for Easy, try to replace them with something similar to this 00:36:104 (3)
01:00:500 (3,4) - ^ same (you might want to use 2 circles instead of one slider this time)
01:19:126 - I would add a circle here
NORMAL:
This map has 4.5 stars, I think it's too much for a Normal diff
00:16:324 (2) - I would replace this slider with a circle
00:17:148 (4) - ^ same
00:19:621 (3) - better delete this to reduce the difficulty
00:20:280 (5) - ^ same
00:20:939 (5) - ^ same
01:14:840 (3) - just a suggestion, but you may want to delete this and then put a circle at 01:14:676
HARD:
00:27:862 (1) - you should replace this with a circle at 00:28:027 it sounds better imo
00:52:753 (3) - better delete this
00:56:214 (1) - no NC here
01:15:665 (4) - NC here
01:17:972 (8) - ^ same
01:19:126 (1) - no NC here because there is already a NC at 01:20:610 (1)
INSANE:
00:35:939 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - those "whistle" hitsounds don't sound too good
00:36:434 (8) - NC here
00:54:895 (7) - ^ same
01:01:654 (4) - ^ same
Nice, I like this difficulty! ^^
That's all, GL!
Hello,No_Gu. M4M from your queue.
[General]
1.Insane的widecreen沒有勾，勾一下。
2.有些大白線蠻適合放finish可以試試看。
[Easy] 有多餘的同樣音量綠線:00:10:718、00:34:785、00:45:005等..
00:23:577 (5) - 個人感覺這個note刪掉放個1/2長條，以人聲做個break結束似乎不錯。
00:56:873 (1) - 這明顯是一個重音，怎麼沒加finish?
01:07:423 (1) - ^
01:12:698 (1) - 試試這個節奏:01:15:335 (1) - 滑條頭finish?
01:25:884 (1) - 最後一個綠線85% ?歌曲都結束了finish還那麼大聲，調50~60%看看?
[Normal] 同Easy diff一樣也是很多同音量的綠線沒去除。 圈圈再大一點?
00:13:027 (7) - 滑條另外變速要設一個NC，個人意見。
00:25:884 (3) - 建議Ctrl+g比較順。
00:36:599 (10) - 感覺有點長，人聲從這邊唱出來要不要加個NC?
00:55:884 (1,1) - 這個音樂可以大跳，推薦可放遠點:01:14:511 (2) - 這邊不跟人聲嗎? 也許這邊能放個連打。
01:25:720 (6) - Ctrl+g一下會很flow。
01:27:780 (2) - 突然來個變速加個NC吧?
[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
- Red words: Should be fix it.
- Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my personal opinion.
[General]
1.Insane的widecreen沒有勾，勾一下。
2.有些大白線蠻適合放finish可以試試看。
[Easy] 有多餘的同樣音量綠線:00:10:718、00:34:785、00:45:005等..
00:23:577 (5) - 個人感覺這個note刪掉放個1/2長條，以人聲做個break結束似乎不錯。
00:56:873 (1) - 這明顯是一個重音，怎麼沒加finish?
01:07:423 (1) - ^
01:12:698 (1) - 試試這個節奏:01:15:335 (1) - 滑條頭finish?
01:25:884 (1) - 最後一個綠線85% ?歌曲都結束了finish還那麼大聲，調50~60%看看?
[Normal] 同Easy diff一樣也是很多同音量的綠線沒去除。 圈圈再大一點?
SPOILER
[Hard]00:11:049 (2) - 感覺有點空洞，跟著人聲加個1/2滑條試試?
00:12:533 (4) - ^
00:15:005 (3) - ^ 這個就加1/1滑條看看?
00:23:247 (6) - 後面那個大白的建議跟一下，看要不要加個折返或一個note.
00:39:731 (1) - 開頭finish?
00:45:005 (1) - ^
00:56:873 (1) - ^
01:07:423 (1) - ^
01:14:511 - 加個1/2滑條? 有人聲。
01:15:335 (1) - 這邊也很適合開頭加finish。
01:23:906 (2,3) - 似乎開頭加個finish蠻適合。
01:25:884 (1) - 同Ez。
00:12:533 (4) - ^
00:15:005 (3) - ^ 這個就加1/1滑條看看?
00:23:247 (6) - 後面那個大白的建議跟一下，看要不要加個折返或一個note.
00:39:731 (1) - 開頭finish?
00:45:005 (1) - ^
00:56:873 (1) - ^
01:07:423 (1) - ^
01:14:511 - 加個1/2滑條? 有人聲。
01:15:335 (1) - 這邊也很適合開頭加finish。
01:23:906 (2,3) - 似乎開頭加個finish蠻適合。
01:25:884 (1) - 同Ez。
SPOILER
[Insane]00:13:357 (1) - 開頭finish?
00:14:511 (1) - ^
00:15:994 (1,4) - ^
00:18:632 (1) - ^
00:23:906 (1) - ^
00:45:005 (1) - ^
00:45:994 (3) - (336|128)?
00:50:280 (1) - 開頭finish?
00:56:873 (1) - ^
00:59:181 (4) - 似乎Blanket沒對好。
01:23:577 (2) - 尾端finish
01:24:401 (1) - 開頭finish
01:28:357 (5) - 滑條另外變速要設一個NC。
00:14:511 (1) - ^
00:15:994 (1,4) - ^
00:18:632 (1) - ^
00:23:906 (1) - ^
00:45:005 (1) - ^
00:45:994 (3) - (336|128)?
00:50:280 (1) - 開頭finish?
00:56:873 (1) - ^
00:59:181 (4) - 似乎Blanket沒對好。
01:23:577 (2) - 尾端finish
01:24:401 (1) - 開頭finish
01:28:357 (5) - 滑條另外變速要設一個NC。
00:13:027 (7) - 滑條另外變速要設一個NC，個人意見。
00:25:884 (3) - 建議Ctrl+g比較順。
00:36:599 (10) - 感覺有點長，人聲從這邊唱出來要不要加個NC?
00:55:884 (1,1) - 這個音樂可以大跳，推薦可放遠點:01:14:511 (2) - 這邊不跟人聲嗎? 也許這邊能放個連打。
01:25:720 (6) - Ctrl+g一下會很flow。
01:27:780 (2) - 突然來個變速加個NC吧?
[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
[Hard]
00:22:423 add timing point and make it normal hitsound
00:23:906 move timing point to 00:23:577
00:23:577 add finish
00:34:785 ^
00:56:873 ^
01:07:423 ^
01:20:610 ^
01:28:357 end slider at 01:29:181 and add whistle at the end
01:28:522 remove timing point
Very well made map just need to add some more hit sounds
00:22:423 add timing point and make it normal hitsound
00:23:906 move timing point to 00:23:577
00:23:577 add finish
00:34:785 ^
00:56:873 ^
01:07:423 ^
01:20:610 ^
01:28:357 end slider at 01:29:181 and add whistle at the end
01:28:522 remove timing point
Very well made map just need to add some more hit sounds
Hello there
[Easy]
00:36:104 (3) - add clap at start of slider. also move your slider start point to y:104 (nazi!!!!)
00:37:423 (2) - clap at slider start
00:37:917 (3) - clap at slider bounce
00:38:742 (4) - make this a clap slider
00:39:731 (1) - add a normal hit finish
00:45:005 (1) - clap at slider end
00:45:994 (2) - clap
00:46:324 (3) - clap at slider end
00:47:313 (4) - clap
00:47:643 (1) - clap at slider end
00:48:302 (2) - ^
00:49:291 (3) - clap
00:49:621 (4) - clap at slider end
00:50:610 (2) - clap slider
00:51:928 (4) - ^
00:57:203 (2) - ^
00:58:522 (4) - ^
00:59:511 (1) - clap at slider end
01:00:500 (3) - clap at slider start
01:00:994 (4) - clap at slider end
01:01:489 (5) - ^
01:02:478 (2) - clap slider
01:03:796 (4) - ^
01:04:785 (1) - clap slider end
01:05:280 (2) - ^
01:06:434 (3) - clap at slider start and end
01:07:753 (2) - clap slider
01:09:071 (4) - ^
01:15:335 (1) - clap slider end
01:16:324 (2) - clap
01:16:983 (3) - clap at start and end
01:17:972 (1) - clap at slider end
01:18:632 (2) - ^
01:20:939 (2) - clap slider
01:22:258 (4) - ^
01:23:577 (2) - ^
01:24:895 (3) - ^
just hitsound mods. placement is neat
[Normal]
hitsound suggestion apply here to
[Hard]
hitsounds apply here to
00:20:939 (5) - remove a bounce (a 4th bounce seems out of place to me)
01:14:840 (1) and (15) - pretty long combo...
01:28:357 (5) - make this slider at 01:29:016. feels better to me
[Insane]
00:13:027 (7) - the speed slider seems useless and un-needed
00:35:939 - 00:37:043 (1) and (15) - these hitsounds sound very very wrong and does not fit with the music. remove all the whistles. at 00:36:022, 00:36:434, and 00:36:764 add whistles sounds more appealing to me.
00:39:318 to 00:39:566 - more bad hitsound placement. 00:39:318 remove this whistle and at the two sliders move the whistles at the beginning of the sliders.
00:43:522 (1) - move this to the same place as (2)
00:54:483 (3,5,7,9,11,13) - add whistles to these
01:07:423 (1) - this slider shape is odd. perhaps reshape it?
01:28:357 (5) - make this end at 01:29:016
Thats all nice map
[Easy]
00:36:104 (3) - add clap at start of slider. also move your slider start point to y:104 (nazi!!!!)
00:37:423 (2) - clap at slider start
00:37:917 (3) - clap at slider bounce
00:38:742 (4) - make this a clap slider
00:39:731 (1) - add a normal hit finish
00:45:005 (1) - clap at slider end
00:45:994 (2) - clap
00:46:324 (3) - clap at slider end
00:47:313 (4) - clap
00:47:643 (1) - clap at slider end
00:48:302 (2) - ^
00:49:291 (3) - clap
00:49:621 (4) - clap at slider end
00:50:610 (2) - clap slider
00:51:928 (4) - ^
00:57:203 (2) - ^
00:58:522 (4) - ^
00:59:511 (1) - clap at slider end
01:00:500 (3) - clap at slider start
01:00:994 (4) - clap at slider end
01:01:489 (5) - ^
01:02:478 (2) - clap slider
01:03:796 (4) - ^
01:04:785 (1) - clap slider end
01:05:280 (2) - ^
01:06:434 (3) - clap at slider start and end
01:07:753 (2) - clap slider
01:09:071 (4) - ^
01:15:335 (1) - clap slider end
01:16:324 (2) - clap
01:16:983 (3) - clap at start and end
01:17:972 (1) - clap at slider end
01:18:632 (2) - ^
01:20:939 (2) - clap slider
01:22:258 (4) - ^
01:23:577 (2) - ^
01:24:895 (3) - ^
just hitsound mods. placement is neat
[Normal]
hitsound suggestion apply here to
[Hard]
hitsounds apply here to
00:20:939 (5) - remove a bounce (a 4th bounce seems out of place to me)
01:14:840 (1) and (15) - pretty long combo...
01:28:357 (5) - make this slider at 01:29:016. feels better to me
[Insane]
00:13:027 (7) - the speed slider seems useless and un-needed
00:35:939 - 00:37:043 (1) and (15) - these hitsounds sound very very wrong and does not fit with the music. remove all the whistles. at 00:36:022, 00:36:434, and 00:36:764 add whistles sounds more appealing to me.
00:39:318 to 00:39:566 - more bad hitsound placement. 00:39:318 remove this whistle and at the two sliders move the whistles at the beginning of the sliders.
00:43:522 (1) - move this to the same place as (2)
00:54:483 (3,5,7,9,11,13) - add whistles to these
01:07:423 (1) - this slider shape is odd. perhaps reshape it?
01:28:357 (5) - make this end at 01:29:016
Thats all nice map
Insane:
00:10:720 (3) make slider 1 beat long andd add a note @ 00:11:214
00:13:934 (3) shift it over to 00:13:851
00:35:939 (2-15) put the whistle hit sounds so it plays on every white/red beat
00:39:318 (5-8) whistle hit sounds don't go along with song
00:46:324 (1,2,3) remove 2 and 3, make slider 1 a beat long, add a note @ 00:46:818 and a slider 1/2 beats long @ 00:46:983
00:53:247 (3-7) I think it can be improved over here
Hard:
00:15:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6) notes should be rearranged so it looks better
01:17:643 new combo?
01:05:774 remove 4,5,6 01:05:445 make 4 repeat once
01:23:247 new combo should start at 01:23:577
01:15:665 new combo?
Normal:
00:52:423 (4,5) replace with slider 1/2 beat long that reverses once
01:05:115 (1,2,3) doesn't play well, maybe can be improved
Easy:
01:04:785 (1,2) doesn't play well
01:10:060 spinner should be replaced
00:10:720 (3) make slider 1 beat long andd add a note @ 00:11:214
00:13:934 (3) shift it over to 00:13:851
00:35:939 (2-15) put the whistle hit sounds so it plays on every white/red beat
00:39:318 (5-8) whistle hit sounds don't go along with song
00:46:324 (1,2,3) remove 2 and 3, make slider 1 a beat long, add a note @ 00:46:818 and a slider 1/2 beats long @ 00:46:983
00:53:247 (3-7) I think it can be improved over here
Hard:
00:15:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6) notes should be rearranged so it looks better
01:17:643 new combo?
01:05:774 remove 4,5,6 01:05:445 make 4 repeat once
01:23:247 new combo should start at 01:23:577
01:15:665 new combo?
Normal:
00:52:423 (4,5) replace with slider 1/2 beat long that reverses once
01:05:115 (1,2,3) doesn't play well, maybe can be improved
Easy:
01:04:785 (1,2) doesn't play well
01:10:060 spinner should be replaced
18號前不能rank我就拉黑你啊
Topic Starter
fixed some
too many to reply each piece. thank you guys
too many to reply each piece. thank you guys
Hello~ c:
[General]
It'll be better if you added the OP video
01:20:610 -Remove kiai time.
[Easy]
00:23:906 -No need for break, it's too long though.
01:10:060 -No need for spinner.
01:12:698 -^
[Normal]
-The notes are too small. Make the CS 3
00:17:643 -Move.
00:23:906 -No need for break.
[Hard]
01:11:296 -No need for spinner.
[Insane]
00:35:939 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -Remove these circles.
[General]
It'll be better if you added the OP video
01:20:610 -Remove kiai time.
[Easy]
00:23:906 -No need for break, it's too long though.
01:10:060 -No need for spinner.
01:12:698 -^
[Normal]
-The notes are too small. Make the CS 3
00:17:643 -Move.
00:23:906 -No need for break.
[Hard]
01:11:296 -No need for spinner.
[Insane]
00:35:939 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -Remove these circles.
Topic Starter
fixed some
as ur req
抢坑图蛤蛤
good luck
Insane
- 01:01:105 果然还是塞个note比较好
- 01:25:500 (6,5) - stack
- 排列很喜欢，射一星
Hard
- AR+1，你这bpm那么高跳又那么大，AR7不科学
- 00:59:127 (1,2) - 不blanket么，我是强迫症
Normal
- 00:16:764 (7,1) - 打击感超弱，我建议把7换成一个1/2滑条+note
- 00:23:687 break从这里开始
- 01:22:863 (3,4,5,6) - blanket这坨perfect，您解锁了虐待强迫症成就
Easy
- 00:23:687 break从这里开始
- 01:06:215 (2,4) - 这种滑条似乎重叠部分太多，在normal里不适合用，看bat怎么说好了
- 01:15:445 (3,1) - blanket
good luck
Topic Starter
3QHollow Wings wrote:
as ur reqInsane
- 01:01:105 果然还是塞个note比较好塞note好说但是问题放那都不得劲啊。。
- 01:25:500 (6,5) - stack我还真没注意这个
- 排列很喜欢，射一星
Hard
- AR+1，你这bpm那么高跳又那么大，AR7不科学我看AR7没堆一坨。。而且8的话感觉会快了点吧。。先保留吧
- 00:59:127 (1,2) - 不blanket么，我是强迫症成成成
Normal
- 00:16:764 (7,1) - 打击感超弱，我建议把7换成一个1/2滑条+notenormal要什么打击感。。而且我感觉还可以
- 00:23:687 break从这里开始同E
- 01:22:863 (3,4,5,6) - blanket这坨perfect，您解锁了虐待强迫症成就成吧。。
抢坑图蛤蛤Easy
- 00:23:687 break从这里开始恩 原来是在00:22:368换完MP3忘了调
- 01:06:215 (2,4) - 这种滑条似乎重叠部分太多，在normal里不适合用，看bat怎么说好了用过很多次了 萌大奶
- 01:15:445 (3,1) - blanket懒懒
good luck
太鼓MOD~
Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion
[General]
Muzukashii]
[
Oni]
大概就這些了~
GL~ ~
Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion
[General]
- Widescreen support 好像用不太到,應該可以把它刪掉
- 00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - 這4個note是否斟酌加一下finish?我覺得沒有大圓感覺會失去一些power
- 00:26:324 (76) - 建議移到00:26:160 - 因為這裡00:24:511 (69,70) - 是跟著vocal,所以後面也跟vocal下,這樣聽起來也比較不會有違和感
- 如果上面有修改的話00:24:511 (69,70) - 移到00:26:984 - 會比較好
- 00:36:544 (120) - 這個note刪掉,然後00:36:709 (121) - 改成大kat,我覺得這樣比較能加強vocal的重音
- 00:39:676 (134) - 移到00:39:346 - 然後00:39:511 (134) - 移到00:39:676 - ,個人覺得這裡跟vocal聽起來比較舒服
- 00:40:995 (142,143) - 刪掉,然後00:41:654 (147) - 移到00:41:819 - ,可以把00:40:995 (142,143,144,145,146,147) -這一段的note精簡化,也可以讓muzu的難度降低
- 00:48:907 (175) - 這裡沒有明顯的鼓聲,也沒有像00:50:061 (181,182,183,184) - 的vocal有明顯的重音,所以建議把它刪掉
- 00:57:808 (16,17) - 建議把它刪掉,因為前面那段的停頓點是在00:56:324 (7) - ,所以這裡停在00:57:643 (15) - 應該會比較好
- 如果上面那一項有改的話,建議把00:58:632 (20,21,22) - 移到00:58:467 - 然後00:58:797 - 加個d
- 01:06:215 (2) - vocal和鼓的音調明顯比其他地方還要重一點,所以這裡我建議加個finish
- 如果上面有做修改的話01:06:380 (3) - 建議把他刪掉,以加強大don的power,然後01:06:627 (4) - 移到01:06:791 - 聽起來比較舒服
[
- 00:22:368 - ~ 00:32:753 - 我覺得note有點放太多了,雖然有鼓的聲音,但這樣感覺會讓整個譜面變得不太協調,建議把一些note刪掉
- 00:34:236 (156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) - 這個串雖然也是有跟到音樂,不過跟別段比的話也是不太協調,建議把一些note刪掉
- 00:41:736 (216) - 建議把他刪掉,放太多三連音可能會失去一些鼓點上的power
- 00:45:610 (235) - 試著移到00:45:445 - 來跟vocal,我覺得聽起來比較舒服
- 如果前面有改的話00:46:929 (241,242) - 移到00:46:682 - 然後00:46:929 - 加d
- 00:52:698 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296) - 這個串我覺得也是可以做一些修剪,試著把00:52:698 (280,281,285,287,293,295) - 刪掉?
- 01:02:753 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365) - 這串我覺得跟別段比起來感覺有點違和,試著把01:02:835 (360) - 刪掉然後01:03:165 - 改成d會比較好
- 01:10:335 (412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422) - 這串也是可以做一些修剪,像是把01:10:418 (413,415,421) - 刪掉
大概就這些了~
GL~
~[Muzukashii]
00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - 這邊是重音，改成大圓?
00:24:841 - 加個o? 這邊有vocal又有鼓音
00:31:203 - ^
00:41:984 (148,149,150,151) - 同 00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) -
00:52:286 - 加個x?
00:54:841 - 刪掉spinner在這邊加o o o
00:56:489 - ooo，然後把00:56:819 (9) - 拿掉?
00:59:621 - 加個o，有明顯鼓音
01:12:313 (38) - 改成大圓
01:13:797 (43) - ^
01:18:577 (63) - 試試ooooooo?
01:21:379 (73) - 改成o?
[Oni]
00:11:654 (13) - o
00:16:269 (41) - 改成X?
00:35:555 (172) - o 雖然rank允許，但真心不喜歡1/4finish
00:43:138 (225) - x
00:44:127 - 加個o?
00:46:764 - ^
00:47:258 (244) - 改成x?
00:50:061 (262,263,264,265,266) - x ooo x?
00:52:698 (280) - ~ 00:54:017 (296) - 這裡只有純色不幸福阿
01:04:896 (375) - ~ 01:05:885 (384) - 感覺顏色對調一下比較合vocal
01:24:429 - ~ 01:25:995 - 感覺太空反而有點違和，加點啥吧
00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - 這邊是重音，改成大圓?
00:24:841 - 加個o? 這邊有vocal又有鼓音
00:31:203 - ^
00:41:984 (148,149,150,151) - 同 00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) -
00:52:286 - 加個x?
00:54:841 - 刪掉spinner在這邊加o o o
00:56:489 - ooo，然後把00:56:819 (9) - 拿掉?
00:59:621 - 加個o，有明顯鼓音
01:12:313 (38) - 改成大圓
01:13:797 (43) - ^
01:18:577 (63) - 試試ooooooo?
01:21:379 (73) - 改成o?
[Oni]
00:11:654 (13) - o
00:16:269 (41) - 改成X?
00:35:555 (172) - o 雖然rank允許，但真心不喜歡1/4finish
00:43:138 (225) - x
00:44:127 - 加個o?
00:46:764 - ^
00:47:258 (244) - 改成x?
00:50:061 (262,263,264,265,266) - x ooo x?
00:52:698 (280) - ~ 00:54:017 (296) - 這裡只有純色不幸福阿
01:04:896 (375) - ~ 01:05:885 (384) - 感覺顏色對調一下比較合vocal
01:24:429 - ~ 01:25:995 - 感覺太空反而有點違和，加點啥吧
Taiko的部分:
我先表達我打完兩個難度的感想，不久後貼上我mod的部分。
Muzukashii:
感覺在加點東西就可以當ONI用了
開頭的部分不少可以放大圓的爽快NOTE沒有下
剩下感覺麼什麼問題
Oni:
音樂比較平的地方塞了很多note感覺不太適合
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Muzukashii
00:09:182 - 3,4,5,6 加大圓?
00:20:885 - 57,58,59,60 加大圓?
00:41:984 - 148,149,150,151 加大圓?
我先表達我打完兩個難度的感想，不久後貼上我mod的部分。
Muzukashii:
感覺在加點東西就可以當ONI用了
開頭的部分不少可以放大圓的爽快NOTE沒有下
剩下感覺麼什麼問題
Oni:
音樂比較平的地方塞了很多note感覺不太適合
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Muzukashii
00:09:182 - 3,4,5,6 加大圓?
00:20:885 - 57,58,59,60 加大圓?
00:41:984 - 148,149,150,151 加大圓?
qoot8123 wrote:
太鼓MOD~
Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion
[General][
- Widescreen support 好像用不太到,應該可以把它刪掉
- 00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - 這4個note是否斟酌加一下finish?我覺得沒有大圓感覺會失去一些power 好 改了
- 00:26:324 (76) - 建議移到00:26:160 - 因為這裡00:24:511 (69,70) - 是跟著vocal,所以後面也跟vocal下,這樣聽起來也比較不會有違和感 恩...其實這段我是參照本家的做法 d k ddk d kd dk這種pattern來下的 所以覺得不改還是會好點
- 如果上面有修改的話00:24:511 (69,70) - 移到00:26:984 - 會比較好 ^
- 00:36:544 (120) - 這個note刪掉,然後00:36:709 (121) - 改成大kat,我覺得這樣比較能加強vocal的重音 讓我考慮一下吧 因為我覺得目前這樣也不錯 muzu並沒有打算在一般的段落用大圓 所以讓我考慮一下
- 00:39:676 (134) - 移到00:39:346 - 然後00:39:511 (134) - 移到00:39:676 - ,個人覺得這裡跟vocal聽起來比較舒服 我只做了前半部
- 00:40:995 (142,143) - 刪掉,然後00:41:654 (147) - 移到00:41:819 - ,可以把00:40:995 (142,143,144,145,146,147) -這一段的note精簡化,也可以讓muzu的難度降低 k
- 00:48:907 (175) - 這裡沒有明顯的鼓聲,也沒有像00:50:061 (181,182,183,184) - 的vocal有明顯的重音,所以建議把它刪掉 我的想法正好相反 因為後頭那段有vocal, pattern會感覺很不均勻 所以我才在這放note
- 00:57:808 (16,17) - 建議把它刪掉,因為前面那段的停頓點是在00:56:324 (7) - ,所以這裡停在00:57:643 (15) - 應該會比較好 恩...其實我的看法是這樣的 前頭的那個是對應最開頭的位置 所以這邊是另外一段的開頭 因此我想用3連連接上去
- 如果上面那一項有改的話,建議把00:58:632 (20,21,22) - 移到00:58:467 - 然後00:58:797 - 加個d
- 01:06:215 (2) - vocal和鼓的音調明顯比其他地方還要重一點,所以這裡我建議加個finish k
- 如果上面有做修改的話01:06:380 (3) - 建議把他刪掉,以加強大don的power,然後01:06:627 (4) - 移到01:06:791 - 聽起來比較舒服k
[
- 00:22:368 - ~ 00:32:753 - 我覺得note有點放太多了,雖然有鼓的聲音,但這樣感覺會讓整個譜面變得不太協調,建議把一些note刪掉 做點修改了
- 00:34:236 (156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) - 這個串雖然也是有跟到音樂,不過跟別段比的話也是不太協調,建議把一些note刪掉 好
- 00:41:736 (216) - 建議把他刪掉,放太多三連音可能會失去一些鼓點上的power 也好
- 00:45:610 (235) - 試著移到00:45:445 - 來跟vocal,我覺得聽起來比較舒服 為什麼我覺得改了以後聽起來怪怪的 還是保留現在的吧;w;
- 如果前面有改的話00:46:929 (241,242) - 移到00:46:682 - 然後00:46:929 - 加d
- 00:52:698 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296) - 這個串我覺得也是可以做一些修剪,試著把00:52:698 (280,281,285,287,293,295) - 刪掉? 這邊我就不修改了
- 01:02:753 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365) - 這串我覺得跟別段比起來感覺有點違和,試著把01:02:835 (360) - 刪掉然後01:03:165 - 改成d會比較好 改成兩串3連好了
- 01:10:335 (412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422) - 這串也是可以做一些修剪,像是把01:10:418 (413,415,421) - 刪掉 01:10:583 (407) - 改成k
大概就這些了~
GL~
感謝你們的mod^^ http://puu.sh/6yMTx.rarFirce777 wrote:
[Muzukashii]
00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - 這邊是重音，改成大圓? 改了
00:24:841 - 加個o? 這邊有vocal又有鼓音 同qoot那邊所說的
00:31:203 - ^ ^
00:41:984 (148,149,150,151) - 同 00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - k
00:52:286 - 加個x? 這樣有點太亂了 所以我沒有改
00:54:841 - 刪掉spinner在這邊加o o o 我覺得用spinner比較好些
00:56:489 - ooo，然後把00:56:819 (9) - 拿掉? 這個可以有
00:59:621 - 加個o，有明顯鼓音 我想法是跟著後頭的音 並不是跟著鼓聲 因為這地方後頭的電子音比鼓更重
01:12:313 (38) - 改成大圓加了幾個地方
01:13:797 (43) - ^ 好
01:18:577 (63) - 試試ooooooo? 恩 這樣好像也不錯
01:21:379 (73) - 改成o? 好
[Oni]
00:11:654 (13) - o 如果改了後面的那個音就爆發不出來了 沒法區別
00:16:269 (41) - 改成X? 好
00:35:555 (172) - o 雖然rank允許，但真心不喜歡1/4finish 改了
00:43:138 (225) - x好
00:44:127 - 加個o? 同前面的 我沒有改
00:46:764 - ^ ^
00:47:258 (244) - 改成x?^
00:50:061 (262,263,264,265,266) - x ooo x? 這邊我是跟著歌詞走的 所以不改
00:52:698 (280) - ~ 00:54:017 (296) - 這裡只有純色不幸福阿 嘛...
01:04:896 (375) - ~ 01:05:885 (384) - 感覺顏色對調一下比較合vocal 好
01:24:429 - ~ 01:25:995 - 感覺太空反而有點違和，加點啥吧 保留吧 這地方是故意的說
Topic Starter
up'd
Hi~
Request from spboxer3.
that's all~
star and good luck ~
Request from spboxer3.
Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue
[Sp3's Taiko Muzukashii]
- 00:09:511 - feel a little weird for there, because I think there should have note to follow the vocal or music. Try to add k for there, would be better
- 00:39:346 (133) - change to k to follow the vocal would be more suitable.
- 01:03:083 - try to add d for there to follow the vocal, it is weird for me that there lack a beat
- 01:04:731 - add d to follow the kick, reason is same as ^
- 01:11:489 (34) - I think k would more suitable for the part
- 01:21:379 (78) - why there isn't same as 00:14:127 (21) - ? I think these two parts is same
[Sp3's Taiko oni]
- 00:15:610 (37) - change to K would be better for vocal
- 00:16:434 (42,43) - it is unnecessary for music, because I can't find anything what they are following
- 00:21:709 (72) - try to chang to D, I think "K D KD" would have different rhythm
- 00:46:764 - try to add d for there to follow the kick?
- 00:59:456 (327) - change to k would be better, "d d ddk" is a little weird for me when I hear the song
- 01:04:731 - same as Muzukashii
- 01:18:989 - I think there miss a note, try to add d for there, if you changed this, remember change 01:19:072 (6) - to K
- 01:25:171 - ~ 01:25:500 - It is weird that there not have beats, try to add notes to follow the guitar? like
star and good luck ~
ty ~<3Loneight wrote:
Hi~
Request from spboxer3.that's all~
Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue[Sp3's Taiko Muzukashii]
- 00:09:511 - feel a little weird for there, because I think there should have note to follow the vocal or music. Try to add k for there, would be better keep 我這邊是跟後頭歌聲的
- 00:39:346 (133) - change to k to follow the vocal would be more suitable. k
- 01:03:083 - try to add d for there to follow the vocal, it is weird for me that there lack a beat 本來是有的 但是改掉了
- 01:04:731 - add d to follow the kick, reason is same as ^ ^
- 01:11:489 (34) - I think k would more suitable for the part k
- 01:21:379 (78) - why there isn't same as 00:14:127 (21) - ? I think these two parts is same k
[Sp3's Taiko oni]
- 00:15:610 (37) - change to K would be better for vocal keep,主要是因為打法會很不舒服 而且D其實很適合鼓聲
- 00:16:434 (42,43) - it is unnecessary for music, because I can't find anything what they are following 這就是Taiko打法的不同了
- 00:21:709 (72) - try to chang to D, I think "K D KD" would have different rhythm 如果改了後頭的1/6會很難打的
- 00:46:764 - try to add d for there to follow the kick? 和前面的mod一樣
- 00:59:456 (327) - change to k would be better, "d d ddk" is a little weird for me when I hear the song 00:59:127 (326,327,330) - 我主要是抓這三個音
- 01:04:731 - same as Muzukashii same as Muzukashii
- 01:18:989 - I think there miss a note, try to add d for there, if you changed this, remember change 01:19:072 (6) - to K 我也考慮過 但是後頭的D讓我不得不刪掉 不然會很奇怪
- 01:25:171 - ~ 01:25:500 - It is weird that there not have beats, try to add notes to follow the guitar? like 這邊是故意的._.
star and good luck ~
http://puu.sh/6zZOI.rar
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[Insane]
00:34:401 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - 這段的whistle下得不太好聽阿- - 試試rearrange the whistles?
both taikos are fine (其實是我懶mod = =
no kuds
00:34:401 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - 這段的whistle下得不太好聽阿- - 試試rearrange the whistles?
both taikos are fine (其實是我懶mod = =
no kuds
Topic Starter
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As requested by 薯片, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3
Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions
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Sp3's Taiko Oni]
• 00:05:720 (1) - Reduce the hitsound volume a bit for the spinner ? ( Sounds better to me because the music is softer than 00:08:522 where the vocal starts )
• 00:33:247 green line - Increase the hitsound volume ? ( Since this is louder than section 00:22:368 ~ 00:33:247 )
Overall quite nice. The hitsounds and patterns both fit the music rather well :3
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Sp3's Taiko Muzukashii]
• 00:22:368 green line - You might want to follow oni's hitsound volume for consistency ? ( Oni used 50% )
• 00:43:797 (151) - Remove finish ? ( I can't think of a reason adding a finish here ? )
• This is quite hard for a muzu (Esp kiai) but still acceptable I think ? Next time you might want to make muzus easier
Overall ok. Most patterns are used reasonably
Although this might be quite hard for a muzu ?
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Both diffs seem to be quite nice
Find me after checking the above, then I'll taiko-icon this :3
Star and good luck ~
Let's go :3
Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions
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• 00:05:720 (1) - Reduce the hitsound volume a bit for the spinner ? ( Sounds better to me because the music is softer than 00:08:522 where the vocal starts )
• 00:33:247 green line - Increase the hitsound volume ? ( Since this is louder than section 00:22:368 ~ 00:33:247 )
Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.
00:20:885 (69~72) - O O OO ( See if you prefer pitch-oriented finishes here. If so, K K KD is probably a better choice )
00:41:984 (209~212) - O O OO ( Same reason. Also add finish for 211 for consistency with (69~72) )
00:31:599 (135, 138) - Remove finishes ? ( Optional. Unlike 144, these two notes are actually not that strong imo and so you might want to remove finishes )
00:50:061 (253~255) - ooo / ooo ? ( Just personally think kdk doesn't fit the other parts of the diff which are mostly drum-oriented )
00:52:698 (271~288) - Consider this ? ( Seems that this fits the background music better than pure d ? )
00:57:149 (310~315) - ooooo o ? ( Having a sudden 4+2 plets isn't consistent to the other parts of the diff. I'll say a 5-plet will just work fine :3 )
01:11:489 (416) - Add finish ? ( So that (414~419) are all finishes which emphasize the vocal quite well )
01:14:951 (433) - Red note ? ( Seems (426~437) has a continuous ddkd trend, and I'm not sure why you used k here )
01:24:182 (41,42) - o o ? ( So that this becomes kkd d k. imo this is a good place to follow instrumental pitch because of the incoming short break and the significant music )
00:20:885 (69~72) - O O OO ( See if you prefer pitch-oriented finishes here. If so, K K KD is probably a better choice )
00:41:984 (209~212) - O O OO ( Same reason. Also add finish for 211 for consistency with (69~72) )
00:31:599 (135, 138) - Remove finishes ? ( Optional. Unlike 144, these two notes are actually not that strong imo and so you might want to remove finishes )
00:50:061 (253~255) - ooo / ooo ? ( Just personally think kdk doesn't fit the other parts of the diff which are mostly drum-oriented )
00:52:698 (271~288) - Consider this ? ( Seems that this fits the background music better than pure d ? )
00:57:149 (310~315) - ooooo o ? ( Having a sudden 4+2 plets isn't consistent to the other parts of the diff. I'll say a 5-plet will just work fine :3 )
01:11:489 (416) - Add finish ? ( So that (414~419) are all finishes which emphasize the vocal quite well )
01:14:951 (433) - Red note ? ( Seems (426~437) has a continuous ddkd trend, and I'm not sure why you used k here )
01:24:182 (41,42) - o o ? ( So that this becomes kkd d k. imo this is a good place to follow instrumental pitch because of the incoming short break and the significant music )
Overall quite nice. The hitsounds and patterns both fit the music rather well :3
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• 00:22:368 green line - You might want to follow oni's hitsound volume for consistency ? ( Oni used 50% )
• 00:43:797 (151) - Remove finish ? ( I can't think of a reason adding a finish here ? )
• This is quite hard for a muzu (Esp kiai) but still acceptable I think ? Next time you might want to make muzus easier
Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.
00:10:006 (5) - Red note ? ( So that it becomes d d k, and the first 6 notes fit the vocal pitch )
00:20:885 (57~60) - O O OO ( Same as oni )
00:41:984 (209~212) - O O OO ( ^ )
00:50:555 (183) - Red note ? ( Since 182 is d, I guess you're abandoning the ddkd pattern here. You may consider this d to create k k d d which fits the vocal better )
00:55:335 (1) - Add finish ? ( Start of kiai with strong beat )
01:17:094 (57~60) - o o o o (Since 56 is d, I guess you're once again stopping the ddkd pattern, so you might want this to fit the vocal better ? )
00:10:006 (5) - Red note ? ( So that it becomes d d k, and the first 6 notes fit the vocal pitch )
00:20:885 (57~60) - O O OO ( Same as oni )
00:41:984 (209~212) - O O OO ( ^ )
00:50:555 (183) - Red note ? ( Since 182 is d, I guess you're abandoning the ddkd pattern here. You may consider this d to create k k d d which fits the vocal better )
00:55:335 (1) - Add finish ? ( Start of kiai with strong beat )
01:17:094 (57~60) - o o o o (Since 56 is d, I guess you're once again stopping the ddkd pattern, so you might want this to fit the vocal better ? )
Overall ok. Most patterns are used reasonably
Although this might be quite hard for a muzu ?
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Both diffs seem to be quite nice
Find me after checking the above, then I'll taiko-icon this :3
Star and good luck ~
thx your helpful mod >w<aabc271 wrote:
As requested by 薯片, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3
Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions
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• 00:05:720 (1) - Reduce the hitsound volume a bit for the spinner ? ( Sounds better to me because the music is softer than 00:08:522 where the vocal starts )
• 00:33:247 green line - Increase the hitsound volume ? ( Since this is louder than section 00:22:368 ~ 00:33:247 )
fixed both recommendSuggested patterns ~Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.
00:20:885 (69~72) - O O OO ( See if you prefer pitch-oriented finishes here. If so, K K KD is probably a better choice )
00:41:984 (209~212) - O O OO ( Same reason. Also add finish for 211 for consistency with (69~72) )
這兩個我故意做的有對應的 :3 所以keep吧
00:31:599 (135, 138) - Remove finishes ? ( Optional. Unlike 144, these two notes are actually not that strong imo and so you might want to remove finishes )
有考慮過 但這地方我想做點自己風格的嘗試 所以還是保留吧:3
00:50:061 (253~255) - ooo / ooo ? ( Just personally think kdk doesn't fit the other parts of the diff which are mostly drum-oriented )
好
00:52:698 (271~288) - Consider this ? ( Seems that this fits the background music better than pure d ? )
改了一點 但是我還是偏向00:53:934 (287,288) - 要做轉換音符的動作 所以後頭改的不太一樣
00:57:149 (310~315) - ooooo o ? ( Having a sudden 4+2 plets isn't consistent to the other parts of the diff. I'll say a 5-plet will just work fine :3 )
好吧
01:11:489 (416) - Add finish ? ( So that (414~419) are all finishes which emphasize the vocal quite well )
k
01:14:951 (433) - Red note ? ( Seems (426~437) has a continuous ddkd trend, and I'm not sure why you used k here )
改了 順便把前頭的也一同改了
01:24:182 (41,42) - o o ? ( So that this becomes kkd d k. imo this is a good place to follow instrumental pitch because of the incoming short break and the significant music )
keep this
Overall quite nice. The hitsounds and patterns both fit the music rather well :3
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• 00:22:368 green line - You might want to follow oni's hitsound volume for consistency ? ( Oni used 50% )k
• 00:43:797 (151) - Remove finish ? ( I can't think of a reason adding a finish here ? )
本來是k後來不知道為甚麼變成D了 可能是bug吧ˊ_>ˋ (fixed)
• This is quite hard for a muzu (Esp kiai) but still acceptable I think ? Next time you might want to make muzus easier
好wwwSuggested patterns ~Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.
00:10:006 (5) - Red note ? ( So that it becomes d d k, and the first 6 notes fit the vocal pitch )
00:20:885 (57~60) - O O OO ( Same as oni )
00:41:984 (209~212) - O O OO ( ^ )
00:50:555 (183) - Red note ? ( Since 182 is d, I guess you're abandoning the ddkd pattern here. You may consider this d to create k k d d which fits the vocal better )
00:55:335 (1) - Add finish ? ( Start of kiai with strong beat )
k
01:17:094 (57~60) - o o o o (Since 56 is d, I guess you're once again stopping the ddkd pattern, so you might want this to fit the vocal better ? )
change
其他的那幾條我就沒動了 基本上和oni的理由一樣;w;
Overall ok. Most patterns are used reasonably
Although this might be quite hard for a muzu ?
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Both diffs seem to be quite nice
Find me after checking the above, then I'll taiko-icon this :3
Star and good luck ~
http://puu.sh/6Nijh.zip
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offset-10感覺比較準
offset-10感覺比較準
Topic Starter
恩。。不知道怎么回事offset变了。。改-9了TW-KUMA01 wrote:
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update sp3's and fixed timing
http://puu.sh/6QJjn.osu muzukashii更新 as aabc's QQ recheck
Topic Starter
update
Taiko diffs look fine now ~
Good luck on ranking this
Good luck on ranking this
Topic Starter
3Qaabc271 wrote:
Taiko diffs look fine now ~
Good luck on ranking this
thx ><aabc271 wrote:
Taiko diffs look fine now ~
Good luck on ranking this
[General]
... 1/6 ?!
- How about adding " opening " to tag ? as you know ,it's a opening song of this anime.
- 00:01:260 - Timing point should be placed at here on all difficulties.
- 00:09:997 (2) - add a finish to the tail of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music.
- 00:20:381 (2,3) - hmm ... i don't agree 1/2 rhythm for this difficulty. so i hope you remove these sliders and remake this part.
for example : - 01:03:238 (1,2) - ^
- 01:08:513 (1) - I have a sense of discomfort on this spinner. it is better to put circle/slider to here. would fit well with this kind of music.
- 01:17:085 (2,3) - Same as above.
As you can see star difficulty, i still think that the normal diff is a bit hard for this difficulty (big spacing ,many 1/2 rhythm ,circle size) so please reduce them for simply.
- 00:09:171 - please snap this green section. don't forget to check insane diff.
- 00:54:337 - add a whistle to the head of the slider here to follow the piano sound in the music. so you should consider changing a green section to soft custom : 1
- 01:03:898 (3) - why did you make a big jump ? i feel it's not strong sound here so you should not make it imo.
- 01:05:793 (10) - 5 hits ... Q_Q i'd remove this note for players.
- 01:07:195 (1,2,3,4) - a bit nazi mod, please make the spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going.
- 01:26:810 - i recommend you to finish at here same as easy/normal diff since it has storong sound on the climax :>
... 1/6 ?!
- 01:02:085 (1) - flow suggestion: it's better to make a right hand turn at here imo. so i recommend you to use ctrl + G command.
- 01:18:568 - i feel this clap of stream volume is too loud. so please turn down the volume around 20 ~30%.
- 01:26:810 - Same as Hard diff.
Topic Starter
alacat wrote:
[General][Easy]
- How about adding " opening " to tag ? as you know ,it's a opening song of this anime.hmm ok
- 00:01:260 - Timing point should be placed at here on all difficulties.k
[Normal]
- 00:09:997 (2) - add a finish to the tail of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music.not so good I think...
- 00:20:381 (2,3) - hmm ... i don't agree 1/2 rhythm for this difficulty. so i hope you remove these sliders and remake this part.
for example : k- 01:03:238 (1,2) - ^^
- 01:08:513 (1) - I have a sense of discomfort on this spinner. it is better to put circle/slider to here. would fit well with this kind of music.^
- 01:17:085 (2,3) - Same as above.^
[Hard]
As you can see star difficulty, i still think that the normal diff is a bit hard for this difficulty (big spacing ,many 1/2 rhythm ,circle size) so please reduce them for simply.remapped[Insane]
- 00:09:171 - please snap this green section. don't forget to check insane diff. k
- 00:54:337 - add a whistle to the head of the slider here to follow the piano sound in the music. so you should consider changing a green section to soft custom : 1added
- 01:03:898 (3) - why did you make a big jump ? i feel it's not strong sound here so you should not make it imo. changed a litte
- 01:05:793 (10) - 5 hits ... Q_Q i'd remove this note for players.changed to another formation,ok now imo
- 01:07:195 (1,2,3,4) - a bit nazi mod, please make the spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going.k
- 01:26:810 - i recommend you to finish at here same as easy/normal diff since it has storong sound on the climax :>in fact there is a prolonged sound started at 1:16:810.I didn't do this in easy/Normal cuz that will increase the diffculty for newbies.but hard/insane requires this imo
... 1/6 ?! I didn't used it..maybe mistakeI think that requires reconsideration about normal diff. Let me know whenever you checked my mod.
- 01:02:085 (1) - flow suggestion: it's better to make a right hand turn at here imo. so i recommend you to use ctrl + G command. hmm.my thought: http://puu.sh/6Z7ay.png plays funner than ctrl+g imo
- 01:18:568 - i feel this clap of stream volume is too loud. so please turn down the volume around 20 ~30%. reduced
- 01:26:810 - Same as Hard diff.same
Recheck
[Hard]
[Hard]
- 00:15:272 (5,6) - Unsnapped
- 00:28:623 (4) - ^
- 01:06:536 (3,5) - Unsnapped