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Hashimoto Miyuki - New SPARKS! (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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No_Gu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月14日 星期五 at 23:40:31

Artist: Hashimoto Miyuki
Title: New SPARKS! (TV Size)
Source: Saki: Zenkoku-hen
Tags: 咲-Saki- 全国編 spboxer3 opening
BPM: 182
Filesize: 14498kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.74 stars, 78 notes)
  2. Hard (4.99 stars, 215 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 334 notes)
  4. Normal (4.02 stars, 103 notes)
  5. Sp3's Taiko Muzukashii (4.67 stars, 353 notes)
  6. Sp3's Taiko Oni (4.78 stars, 501 notes)
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - New SPARKS! (TV Size)
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - New SPARKS! (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Taiko - spboxer3
Azure
<3
換成那個clap我會很感謝你........

[Easy]
沒啥,把無用綠線刪一下吧

[Normal]
01:19:126 - 01:20:610 弄成轉圈?

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:895 - 00:26:873 看看這樣那
  2. 雖然說你不是跟vocal,但 00:26:049這個vocal開始太明顯了,在slider中間很突兀啊...
    SPOILER
    392,200,24895,2,0,L|456:208,1,64
    168,304,25390,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    104,232,25555,2,0,L|40:224,1,64
    24,128,25884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    24,128,26049,2,0,L|88:136,1,64
    184,112,26379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:58:687 (2,4) 沒包好
  4. 01:00:665 (1,2) ^
  5. 01:15:005 - 01:19:126 這段是kiai, slider的速度卻很慢感覺眞的好怪.......
    尤其是 01:15:005 (3) 這個
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:104 (6,7,1) 移一下好點,你test的時候會發現重疊的地方都巨醜,因為皮皮的蠢更新
  2. 00:49:456 (3,4,5) ^
  3. 00:29:181 (1) 跟 00:28:687 (6) 重疊
  4. 00:55:555 x0.6;00:55:884 x0.8;00:56:214 x1.5 (其實我怎麼弄都感覺不順
音效下完我再回來看吧
竟然叫我苦力 我要抱抱啊5555
Milo
:? INSANE哭瞎
Hatori-kun
More Gu <33
Konei

Hatori-kun wrote:

More Gu <33
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Azure wrote:

<3
換成那個clap我會很感謝你........ 待我换完MP3

[Easy]
沒啥,把無用綠線刪一下吧

[Normal]
01:19:126 - 01:20:610 弄成轉圈?跟easy照应的啊 不换

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:895 - 00:26:873 看看這樣那
  2. 雖然說你不是跟vocal,但 00:26:049這個vocal開始太明顯了,在slider中間很突兀啊...这个问题不大吧反正
    SPOILER
    392,200,24895,2,0,L|456:208,1,64
    168,304,25390,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    104,232,25555,2,0,L|40:224,1,64
    24,128,25884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    24,128,26049,2,0,L|88:136,1,64
    184,112,26379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:58:687 (2,4) 沒包好
  4. 01:00:665 (1,2) ^修了下
  5. 01:15:005 - 01:19:126 這段是kiai, slider的速度卻很慢感覺眞的好怪.......恩 不偷懒了
    尤其是 01:15:005 (3) 這個
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:104 (6,7,1) 移一下好點,你test的時候會發現重疊的地方都巨醜,因為皮皮的蠢更新跟原来好像没啥区别啊
  2. 00:49:456 (3,4,5) ^
  3. 00:29:181 (1) 跟 00:28:687 (6) 重疊跟part啊
  4. 00:55:555 x0.6;00:55:884 x0.8;00:56:214 x1.5 (其實我怎麼弄都感覺不順现在我感觉还行。。
音效下完我再回來看吧
竟然叫我苦力 我要抱抱啊5555
Naichatta
[General]
add tag: opening op

[Easy]
none.

[Normal]
none.

[Hard]
00:43:851 (1) - remove Newcombo.
00:56:214 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:36:516 (9,11,13,15) - remove the whistle?
00:48:796 (1) - move second waypoint x:172 y:160. in this way the blanket are good for each slider
00:55:555 (1,1,1) - add the whistle? sound is better imo.
01:10:555 (5,6,7) - Missing hitsound? adding normal hitsound is better imo.
01:12:698 (1,2,3,1) - ^

nice mapset :D
Fycho
[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[Insane]
  1. 00:37:423 (3) –这两重音放在滑条尾不怎么好啊,我觉得换成两个圈再在00:37:588 –来个大跳比较好
  2. 00:43:027 (5,6) –间距有点小
  3. 00:44:181 (3) –加个nc?方便读图
  4. 00:52:917 (1,2,3) –略坑
  5. 00:53:906 (7) –感觉这个可以拖出来,配合重音来个小跳
  6. 01:05:280 (4,5) –合并成一个1/1滑条吧反正你前面也没跟人声就跟鼓点吧。
  7. 01:10:555 (5,6,7) –别stack啊,放远点比较好
  8. 01:13:851 (1) –减速坑
  9. 01:20:280 (4) –尖角拐角有点难看

[Hard]
  1. HP/OD-1吧,和normal差的有点远
  2. Widescreen support去掉吧,其他几个难度也是
  3. Stack leniency 弄大点吧,现在这00:10:060 (1,2,3) –几个打起来都重合的看起来很不习惯
  4. 00:30:500 (1,2) –难读图,读成1/1了。。
  5. 00:31:489 (3) –滑条头没压什么强音打起来难受,建议改成压00:31:818 –这个鼓点。
  6. 00:32:972 -00:33:302 –空着不怎么好
  7. 01:01:818 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) –间距略大难啊,而且还是AR7对于hard难读图
  8. 01:18:961 (15) –combo太长了,中间断开

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:906 –加个note?我觉得后面空着那段不怎么好,本来曲子就不长
  2. 00:38:082 (3) –重音最好别滑条尾
  3. 00:45:829 (2,3,4) –normal的sl还那么低,这都完全重合了怎么读啊-.-

[Easy]
  1. 00:16:983 (3) –我觉得应该滑条头在00:17:148 -,这才是重音
  2. 00:19:291 (2) –没音啊,怎么塞note了,重音在00:19:126 –
  3. 00:23:082 (4) –我觉得easy出现这个难
  4. 01:10:060 (1,1) –偷懒-.-
  5. 01:23:577 (2,3) – 没踩到重音同开头
Vhy
hello ~
m4m from your queue
poor english here :3

[General]
i don't know why you set a break at 00:23:906 on easy and normal diff. it's kinda odd

[Easy]
so much useless green line in this diff. better to remove them
00:15:994 (1) - make this slider toward to the next pattern to make a triangle like this for a better looking. and make sure the tail stacked with 00:18:632 (1)
00:23:906 - add note here?
00:41:049 (3,4) - better to make those slider curve headed each other like this

[Normal]
same as easy about the green line issues
00:23:906 - add note here?
00:58:851 (6) - can be a better blanket here
01:07:258 (5) - flows better if you move this to x:196 y:368
01:24:401 (3) - blanket problem yeah
01:25:060 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:11:544 (4) - whistle on head and finish on tail
00:20:445 (4) - fix the blanket
00:22:753 (1) - remove NC
00:43:522 (2,1,2) - i just dislike how all these note stacked, really don't fit with the song. suggest to change like your insane
00:43:851 (1) - there's no reason to add NC here
00:52:753 (3) - remove this note to be consistency with the previous pattern
01:06:434 (8) - should add NC here

[Insane]
00:11:544 (4) - same as hard
00:14:346 (4) - whistle here?
00:15:335 (4) - whistle on head

i think that's all
good luck :)
deejaydray
Hello, m4m from your queue ~

Firstly, you might want to delete those 2 little KIAI time from 01:15:335 and 01:20:610 - the big one should be enough

EASY:

First of all, you should change Beat snap divisor from 1/4 to 1/2 since it is Easy
00:23:082 (4) - I would replace this with a circle at 00:23:247
00:37:423 (2,3) - these might be too hard for Easy, try to replace them with something similar to this 00:36:104 (3)
01:00:500 (3,4) - ^ same (you might want to use 2 circles instead of one slider this time)
01:19:126 - I would add a circle here

NORMAL:

This map has 4.5 stars, I think it's too much for a Normal diff
00:16:324 (2) - I would replace this slider with a circle
00:17:148 (4) - ^ same
00:19:621 (3) - better delete this to reduce the difficulty
00:20:280 (5) - ^ same
00:20:939 (5) - ^ same
01:14:840 (3) - just a suggestion, but you may want to delete this and then put a circle at 01:14:676

HARD:

00:27:862 (1) - you should replace this with a circle at 00:28:027 it sounds better imo
00:52:753 (3) - better delete this
00:56:214 (1) - no NC here
01:15:665 (4) - NC here
01:17:972 (8) - ^ same
01:19:126 (1) - no NC here because there is already a NC at 01:20:610 (1)

INSANE:

00:35:939 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - those "whistle" hitsounds don't sound too good
00:36:434 (8) - NC here
00:54:895 (7) - ^ same
01:01:654 (4) - ^ same
Nice, I like this difficulty! ^^

That's all, GL! :)
smallboat
Hello,No_Gu. M4M from your queue.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.Insane的widecreen沒有勾,勾一下。
2.有些大白線蠻適合放finish可以試試看。

[Easy] 有多餘的同樣音量綠線:00:10:718、00:34:785、00:45:005等..

00:23:577 (5) - 個人感覺這個note刪掉放個1/2長條,以人聲做個break結束似乎不錯。
00:56:873 (1) - 這明顯是一個重音,怎麼沒加finish?
01:07:423 (1) - ^
01:12:698 (1) - 試試這個節奏:01:15:335 (1) - 滑條頭finish?
01:25:884 (1) - 最後一個綠線85% ?歌曲都結束了finish還那麼大聲,調50~60%看看?

[Normal] 同Easy diff一樣也是很多同音量的綠線沒去除。 圈圈再大一點?

SPOILER
00:11:049 (2) - 感覺有點空洞,跟著人聲加個1/2滑條試試?
00:12:533 (4) - ^
00:15:005 (3) - ^ 這個就加1/1滑條看看?
00:23:247 (6) - 後面那個大白的建議跟一下,看要不要加個折返或一個note.
00:39:731 (1) - 開頭finish?
00:45:005 (1) - ^
00:56:873 (1) - ^
01:07:423 (1) - ^
01:14:511 - 加個1/2滑條? 有人聲。
01:15:335 (1) - 這邊也很適合開頭加finish。
01:23:906 (2,3) - 似乎開頭加個finish蠻適合。
01:25:884 (1) - 同Ez。
[Hard]

SPOILER
00:13:357 (1) - 開頭finish?
00:14:511 (1) - ^
00:15:994 (1,4) - ^
00:18:632 (1) - ^
00:23:906 (1) - ^
00:45:005 (1) - ^
00:45:994 (3) - (336|128)?
00:50:280 (1) - 開頭finish?
00:56:873 (1) - ^
00:59:181 (4) - 似乎Blanket沒對好。
01:23:577 (2) - 尾端finish
01:24:401 (1) - 開頭finish
01:28:357 (5) - 滑條另外變速要設一個NC。
[Insane]

00:13:027 (7) - 滑條另外變速要設一個NC,個人意見。
00:25:884 (3) - 建議Ctrl+g比較順。
00:36:599 (10) - 感覺有點長,人聲從這邊唱出來要不要加個NC?
00:55:884 (1,1) - 這個音樂可以大跳,推薦可放遠點:01:14:511 (2) - 這邊不跟人聲嗎? 也許這邊能放個連打。
01:25:720 (6) - Ctrl+g一下會很flow。
01:27:780 (2) - 突然來個變速加個NC吧?

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
okamiratsu
[Hard]
00:22:423 add timing point and make it normal hitsound
00:23:906 move timing point to 00:23:577
00:23:577 add finish
00:34:785 ^
00:56:873 ^
01:07:423 ^
01:20:610 ^
01:28:357 end slider at 01:29:181 and add whistle at the end
01:28:522 remove timing point

Very well made map just need to add some more hit sounds
RatedNC17
Hello there

[Easy]
00:36:104 (3) - add clap at start of slider. also move your slider start point to y:104 (nazi!!!!)
00:37:423 (2) - clap at slider start
00:37:917 (3) - clap at slider bounce
00:38:742 (4) - make this a clap slider
00:39:731 (1) - add a normal hit finish
00:45:005 (1) - clap at slider end
00:45:994 (2) - clap
00:46:324 (3) - clap at slider end
00:47:313 (4) - clap
00:47:643 (1) - clap at slider end
00:48:302 (2) - ^
00:49:291 (3) - clap
00:49:621 (4) - clap at slider end
00:50:610 (2) - clap slider
00:51:928 (4) - ^
00:57:203 (2) - ^
00:58:522 (4) - ^
00:59:511 (1) - clap at slider end
01:00:500 (3) - clap at slider start
01:00:994 (4) - clap at slider end
01:01:489 (5) - ^
01:02:478 (2) - clap slider
01:03:796 (4) - ^
01:04:785 (1) - clap slider end
01:05:280 (2) - ^
01:06:434 (3) - clap at slider start and end
01:07:753 (2) - clap slider
01:09:071 (4) - ^
01:15:335 (1) - clap slider end
01:16:324 (2) - clap
01:16:983 (3) - clap at start and end
01:17:972 (1) - clap at slider end
01:18:632 (2) - ^
01:20:939 (2) - clap slider
01:22:258 (4) - ^
01:23:577 (2) - ^
01:24:895 (3) - ^
just hitsound mods. placement is neat

[Normal]
hitsound suggestion apply here to

[Hard]
hitsounds apply here to
00:20:939 (5) - remove a bounce (a 4th bounce seems out of place to me)
01:14:840 (1) and (15) - pretty long combo...
01:28:357 (5) - make this slider at 01:29:016. feels better to me

[Insane]
00:13:027 (7) - the speed slider seems useless and un-needed
00:35:939 - 00:37:043 (1) and (15) - these hitsounds sound very very wrong and does not fit with the music. remove all the whistles. at 00:36:022, 00:36:434, and 00:36:764 add whistles sounds more appealing to me.
00:39:318 to 00:39:566 - more bad hitsound placement. 00:39:318 remove this whistle and at the two sliders move the whistles at the beginning of the sliders.
00:43:522 (1) - move this to the same place as (2)
00:54:483 (3,5,7,9,11,13) - add whistles to these
01:07:423 (1) - this slider shape is odd. perhaps reshape it?
01:28:357 (5) - make this end at 01:29:016

Thats all nice map 8-)
Swayzo_old
Insane:
00:10:720 (3) make slider 1 beat long andd add a note @ 00:11:214
00:13:934 (3) shift it over to 00:13:851
00:35:939 (2-15) put the whistle hit sounds so it plays on every white/red beat
00:39:318 (5-8) whistle hit sounds don't go along with song
00:46:324 (1,2,3) remove 2 and 3, make slider 1 a beat long, add a note @ 00:46:818 and a slider 1/2 beats long @ 00:46:983
00:53:247 (3-7) I think it can be improved over here

Hard:
00:15:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6) notes should be rearranged so it looks better
01:17:643 new combo?
01:05:774 remove 4,5,6 01:05:445 make 4 repeat once
01:23:247 new combo should start at 01:23:577
01:15:665 new combo?

Normal:
00:52:423 (4,5) replace with slider 1/2 beat long that reverses once
01:05:115 (1,2,3) doesn't play well, maybe can be improved

Easy:
01:04:785 (1,2) doesn't play well
01:10:060 spinner should be replaced
Main Black
it's good map! :)
i want this map ranked

Skystar
18號前不能rank我就拉黑你啊
Topic Starter
No_Gu
fixed some
too many to reply each piece. thank you guys
Xiaolin
Hello~ c:
[General]
It'll be better if you added the OP video
01:20:610 -Remove kiai time.
[Easy]
00:23:906 -No need for break, it's too long though.
01:10:060 -No need for spinner.
01:12:698 -^
[Normal]
-The notes are too small. Make the CS 3
00:17:643 -Move.
00:23:906 -No need for break.
[Hard]
01:11:296 -No need for spinner.
[Insane]
00:35:939 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -Remove these circles.
Topic Starter
No_Gu
fixed some
Hollow Wings
as ur req

Insane

  1. 01:01:105 果然还是塞个note比较好
  2. 01:25:500 (6,5) - stack
  3. 排列很喜欢,射一星

Hard

  1. AR+1,你这bpm那么高跳又那么大,AR7不科学
  2. 00:59:127 (1,2) - 不blanket么,我是强迫症

Normal

  1. 00:16:764 (7,1) - 打击感超弱,我建议把7换成一个1/2滑条+note
  2. 00:23:687 break从这里开始
  3. 01:22:863 (3,4,5,6) - blanket这坨perfect,您解锁了虐待强迫症成就

Easy

  1. 00:23:687 break从这里开始
  2. 01:06:215 (2,4) - 这种滑条似乎重叠部分太多,在normal里不适合用,看bat怎么说好了
  3. 01:15:445 (3,1) - blanket
抢坑图蛤蛤

good luck
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req

Insane

  1. 01:01:105 果然还是塞个note比较好塞note好说但是问题放那都不得劲啊。。
  2. 01:25:500 (6,5) - stack我还真没注意这个
  3. 排列很喜欢,射一星

Hard

  1. AR+1,你这bpm那么高跳又那么大,AR7不科学我看AR7没堆一坨。。而且8的话感觉会快了点吧。。先保留吧
  2. 00:59:127 (1,2) - 不blanket么,我是强迫症成成成

Normal

  1. 00:16:764 (7,1) - 打击感超弱,我建议把7换成一个1/2滑条+notenormal要什么打击感。。而且我感觉还可以
  2. 00:23:687 break从这里开始同E
  3. 01:22:863 (3,4,5,6) - blanket这坨perfect,您解锁了虐待强迫症成就成吧。。

Easy

  1. 00:23:687 break从这里开始恩 原来是在00:22:368换完MP3忘了调
  2. 01:06:215 (2,4) - 这种滑条似乎重叠部分太多,在normal里不适合用,看bat怎么说好了用过很多次了 萌大奶
  3. 01:15:445 (3,1) - blanket懒懒
抢坑图蛤蛤

good luck
3Q
qoot8123
太鼓MOD~

Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. Widescreen support 好像用不太到,應該可以把它刪掉
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - 這4個note是否斟酌加一下finish?我覺得沒有大圓感覺會失去一些power
  2. 00:26:324 (76) - 建議移到00:26:160 - 因為這裡00:24:511 (69,70) - 是跟著vocal,所以後面也跟vocal下,這樣聽起來也比較不會有違和感
  3. 如果上面有修改的話00:24:511 (69,70) - 移到00:26:984 - 會比較好
  4. 00:36:544 (120) - 這個note刪掉,然後00:36:709 (121) - 改成大kat,我覺得這樣比較能加強vocal的重音
  5. 00:39:676 (134) - 移到00:39:346 - 然後00:39:511 (134) - 移到00:39:676 - ,個人覺得這裡跟vocal聽起來比較舒服
  6. 00:40:995 (142,143) - 刪掉,然後00:41:654 (147) - 移到00:41:819 - ,可以把00:40:995 (142,143,144,145,146,147) -這一段的note精簡化,也可以讓muzu的難度降低
  7. 00:48:907 (175) - 這裡沒有明顯的鼓聲,也沒有像00:50:061 (181,182,183,184) - 的vocal有明顯的重音,所以建議把它刪掉
  8. 00:57:808 (16,17) - 建議把它刪掉,因為前面那段的停頓點是在00:56:324 (7) - ,所以這裡停在00:57:643 (15) - 應該會比較好
  9. 如果上面那一項有改的話,建議把00:58:632 (20,21,22) - 移到00:58:467 - 然後00:58:797 - 加個d
  10. 01:06:215 (2) - vocal和鼓的音調明顯比其他地方還要重一點,所以這裡我建議加個finish
  11. 如果上面有做修改的話01:06:380 (3) - 建議把他刪掉,以加強大don的power,然後01:06:627 (4) - 移到01:06:791 - 聽起來比較舒服

[ Oni]
  1. 00:22:368 - ~ 00:32:753 - 我覺得note有點放太多了,雖然有鼓的聲音,但這樣感覺會讓整個譜面變得不太協調,建議把一些note刪掉
  2. 00:34:236 (156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) - 這個串雖然也是有跟到音樂,不過跟別段比的話也是不太協調,建議把一些note刪掉
  3. 00:41:736 (216) - 建議把他刪掉,放太多三連音可能會失去一些鼓點上的power
  4. 00:45:610 (235) - 試著移到00:45:445 - 來跟vocal,我覺得聽起來比較舒服
  5. 如果前面有改的話00:46:929 (241,242) - 移到00:46:682 - 然後00:46:929 - 加d
  6. 00:52:698 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296) - 這個串我覺得也是可以做一些修剪,試著把00:52:698 (280,281,285,287,293,295) - 刪掉?
  7. 01:02:753 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365) - 這串我覺得跟別段比起來感覺有點違和,試著把01:02:835 (360) - 刪掉然後01:03:165 - 改成d會比較好
  8. 01:10:335 (412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422) - 這串也是可以做一些修剪,像是把01:10:418 (413,415,421) - 刪掉

大概就這些了~
GL~ :) ~
Firce777
[Muzukashii]
00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - 這邊是重音,改成大圓?
00:24:841 - 加個o? 這邊有vocal又有鼓音
00:31:203 - ^
00:41:984 (148,149,150,151) - 同 00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) -
00:52:286 - 加個x?
00:54:841 - 刪掉spinner在這邊加o o o
00:56:489 - ooo,然後把00:56:819 (9) - 拿掉?
00:59:621 - 加個o,有明顯鼓音
01:12:313 (38) - 改成大圓
01:13:797 (43) - ^
01:18:577 (63) - 試試ooooooo?
01:21:379 (73) - 改成o?

[Oni]
00:11:654 (13) - o
00:16:269 (41) - 改成X?
00:35:555 (172) - o 雖然rank允許,但真心不喜歡1/4finish
00:43:138 (225) - x
00:44:127 - 加個o?
00:46:764 - ^
00:47:258 (244) - 改成x?
00:50:061 (262,263,264,265,266) - x ooo x?
00:52:698 (280) - ~ 00:54:017 (296) - 這裡只有純色不幸福阿
01:04:896 (375) - ~ 01:05:885 (384) - 感覺顏色對調一下比較合vocal
01:24:429 - ~ 01:25:995 - 感覺太空反而有點違和,加點啥吧
TW-KUMA01
Taiko的部分:
我先表達我打完兩個難度的感想,不久後貼上我mod的部分。
Muzukashii:
感覺在加點東西就可以當ONI用了
開頭的部分不少可以放大圓的爽快NOTE沒有下
剩下感覺麼什麼問題
Oni:
音樂比較平的地方塞了很多note感覺不太適合
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Muzukashii
00:09:182 - 3,4,5,6 加大圓?
00:20:885 - 57,58,59,60 加大圓?
00:41:984 - 148,149,150,151 加大圓?
spboxer3

qoot8123 wrote:

太鼓MOD~

Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. Widescreen support 好像用不太到,應該可以把它刪掉
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - 這4個note是否斟酌加一下finish?我覺得沒有大圓感覺會失去一些power 好 改了
  2. 00:26:324 (76) - 建議移到00:26:160 - 因為這裡00:24:511 (69,70) - 是跟著vocal,所以後面也跟vocal下,這樣聽起來也比較不會有違和感 恩...其實這段我是參照本家的做法 d k ddk d kd dk這種pattern來下的 所以覺得不改還是會好點
  3. 如果上面有修改的話00:24:511 (69,70) - 移到00:26:984 - 會比較好 ^
  4. 00:36:544 (120) - 這個note刪掉,然後00:36:709 (121) - 改成大kat,我覺得這樣比較能加強vocal的重音 讓我考慮一下吧 因為我覺得目前這樣也不錯 muzu並沒有打算在一般的段落用大圓 所以讓我考慮一下
  5. 00:39:676 (134) - 移到00:39:346 - 然後00:39:511 (134) - 移到00:39:676 - ,個人覺得這裡跟vocal聽起來比較舒服 我只做了前半部
  6. 00:40:995 (142,143) - 刪掉,然後00:41:654 (147) - 移到00:41:819 - ,可以把00:40:995 (142,143,144,145,146,147) -這一段的note精簡化,也可以讓muzu的難度降低 k
  7. 00:48:907 (175) - 這裡沒有明顯的鼓聲,也沒有像00:50:061 (181,182,183,184) - 的vocal有明顯的重音,所以建議把它刪掉 我的想法正好相反 因為後頭那段有vocal, pattern會感覺很不均勻 所以我才在這放note
  8. 00:57:808 (16,17) - 建議把它刪掉,因為前面那段的停頓點是在00:56:324 (7) - ,所以這裡停在00:57:643 (15) - 應該會比較好 恩...其實我的看法是這樣的 前頭的那個是對應最開頭的位置 所以這邊是另外一段的開頭 因此我想用3連連接上去
  9. 如果上面那一項有改的話,建議把00:58:632 (20,21,22) - 移到00:58:467 - 然後00:58:797 - 加個d
  10. 01:06:215 (2) - vocal和鼓的音調明顯比其他地方還要重一點,所以這裡我建議加個finish k
  11. 如果上面有做修改的話01:06:380 (3) - 建議把他刪掉,以加強大don的power,然後01:06:627 (4) - 移到01:06:791 - 聽起來比較舒服k

[ Oni]
  1. 00:22:368 - ~ 00:32:753 - 我覺得note有點放太多了,雖然有鼓的聲音,但這樣感覺會讓整個譜面變得不太協調,建議把一些note刪掉 做點修改了
  2. 00:34:236 (156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) - 這個串雖然也是有跟到音樂,不過跟別段比的話也是不太協調,建議把一些note刪掉
  3. 00:41:736 (216) - 建議把他刪掉,放太多三連音可能會失去一些鼓點上的power 也好
  4. 00:45:610 (235) - 試著移到00:45:445 - 來跟vocal,我覺得聽起來比較舒服 為什麼我覺得改了以後聽起來怪怪的 還是保留現在的吧;w;
  5. 如果前面有改的話00:46:929 (241,242) - 移到00:46:682 - 然後00:46:929 - 加d
  6. 00:52:698 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296) - 這個串我覺得也是可以做一些修剪,試著把00:52:698 (280,281,285,287,293,295) - 刪掉? 這邊我就不修改了
  7. 01:02:753 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365) - 這串我覺得跟別段比起來感覺有點違和,試著把01:02:835 (360) - 刪掉然後01:03:165 - 改成d會比較好 改成兩串3連好了
  8. 01:10:335 (412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422) - 這串也是可以做一些修剪,像是把01:10:418 (413,415,421) - 刪掉 01:10:583 (407) - 改成k

大概就這些了~
GL~ :) ~

Firce777 wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - 這邊是重音,改成大圓? 改了
00:24:841 - 加個o? 這邊有vocal又有鼓音 同qoot那邊所說的
00:31:203 - ^ ^
00:41:984 (148,149,150,151) - 同 00:20:885 (57,58,59,60) - k
00:52:286 - 加個x? 這樣有點太亂了 所以我沒有改
00:54:841 - 刪掉spinner在這邊加o o o 我覺得用spinner比較好些
00:56:489 - ooo,然後把00:56:819 (9) - 拿掉? 這個可以有
00:59:621 - 加個o,有明顯鼓音 我想法是跟著後頭的音 並不是跟著鼓聲 因為這地方後頭的電子音比鼓更重
01:12:313 (38) - 改成大圓加了幾個地方
01:13:797 (43) - ^
01:18:577 (63) - 試試ooooooo? 恩 這樣好像也不錯
01:21:379 (73) - 改成o?

[Oni]
00:11:654 (13) - o 如果改了後面的那個音就爆發不出來了 沒法區別
00:16:269 (41) - 改成X?
00:35:555 (172) - o 雖然rank允許,但真心不喜歡1/4finish 改了
00:43:138 (225) - x
00:44:127 - 加個o? 同前面的 我沒有改
00:46:764 - ^ ^
00:47:258 (244) - 改成x?^
00:50:061 (262,263,264,265,266) - x ooo x? 這邊我是跟著歌詞走的 所以不改
00:52:698 (280) - ~ 00:54:017 (296) - 這裡只有純色不幸福阿 嘛...
01:04:896 (375) - ~ 01:05:885 (384) - 感覺顏色對調一下比較合vocal
01:24:429 - ~ 01:25:995 - 感覺太空反而有點違和,加點啥吧 保留吧 這地方是故意的說
感謝你們的mod^^ http://puu.sh/6yMTx.rar
Topic Starter
No_Gu
up'd
Loneight
Hi~
Request from spboxer3.


  • Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[Sp3's Taiko Muzukashii]

  1. 00:09:511 - feel a little weird for there, because I think there should have note to follow the vocal or music. Try to add k for there, would be better
  2. 00:39:346 (133) - change to k to follow the vocal would be more suitable.
  3. 01:03:083 - try to add d for there to follow the vocal, it is weird for me that there lack a beat
  4. 01:04:731 - add d to follow the kick, reason is same as ^
  5. 01:11:489 (34) - I think k would more suitable for the part
  6. 01:21:379 (78) - why there isn't same as 00:14:127 (21) - ? I think these two parts is same

[Sp3's Taiko oni]

  1. 00:15:610 (37) - change to K would be better for vocal
  2. 00:16:434 (42,43) - it is unnecessary for music, because I can't find anything what they are following
  3. 00:21:709 (72) - try to chang to D, I think "K D KD" would have different rhythm
  4. 00:46:764 - try to add d for there to follow the kick?
  5. 00:59:456 (327) - change to k would be better, "d d ddk" is a little weird for me when I hear the song
  6. 01:04:731 - same as Muzukashii
  7. 01:18:989 - I think there miss a note, try to add d for there, if you changed this, remember change 01:19:072 (6) - to K
  8. 01:25:171 - ~ 01:25:500 - It is weird that there not have beats, try to add notes to follow the guitar? like
that's all~
star and good luck ~
spboxer3

Loneight wrote:

Hi~
Request from spboxer3.


  • Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[Sp3's Taiko Muzukashii]

  1. 00:09:511 - feel a little weird for there, because I think there should have note to follow the vocal or music. Try to add k for there, would be better keep 我這邊是跟後頭歌聲的
  2. 00:39:346 (133) - change to k to follow the vocal would be more suitable. k
  3. 01:03:083 - try to add d for there to follow the vocal, it is weird for me that there lack a beat 本來是有的 但是改掉了
  4. 01:04:731 - add d to follow the kick, reason is same as ^ ^
  5. 01:11:489 (34) - I think k would more suitable for the part k
  6. 01:21:379 (78) - why there isn't same as 00:14:127 (21) - ? I think these two parts is same k

[Sp3's Taiko oni]

  1. 00:15:610 (37) - change to K would be better for vocal keep,主要是因為打法會很不舒服 而且D其實很適合鼓聲
  2. 00:16:434 (42,43) - it is unnecessary for music, because I can't find anything what they are following 這就是Taiko打法的不同了
  3. 00:21:709 (72) - try to chang to D, I think "K D KD" would have different rhythm 如果改了後頭的1/6會很難打的
  4. 00:46:764 - try to add d for there to follow the kick? 和前面的mod一樣
  5. 00:59:456 (327) - change to k would be better, "d d ddk" is a little weird for me when I hear the song 00:59:127 (326,327,330) - 我主要是抓這三個音
  6. 01:04:731 - same as Muzukashii same as Muzukashii
  7. 01:18:989 - I think there miss a note, try to add d for there, if you changed this, remember change 01:19:072 (6) - to K 我也考慮過 但是後頭的D讓我不得不刪掉 不然會很奇怪
  8. 01:25:171 - ~ 01:25:500 - It is weird that there not have beats, try to add notes to follow the guitar? like 這邊是故意的._.
that's all~
star and good luck ~
ty ~<3
http://puu.sh/6zZOI.rar
Topic Starter
No_Gu
up
kanpakyin
[Insane]
00:34:401 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - 這段的whistle下得不太好聽阿- - 試試rearrange the whistles?

both taikos are fine (其實是我懶mod = =

no kuds
Topic Starter
No_Gu
up
aabc271
As requested by 薯片, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

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[ Sp3's Taiko Oni]

00:05:720 (1) - Reduce the hitsound volume a bit for the spinner ? ( Sounds better to me because the music is softer than 00:08:522 where the vocal starts )

00:33:247 green line - Increase the hitsound volume ? ( Since this is louder than section 00:22:368 ~ 00:33:247 )

Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:20:885 (69~72) - O O OO ( See if you prefer pitch-oriented finishes here. If so, K K KD is probably a better choice )
00:41:984 (209~212) - O O OO ( Same reason. Also add finish for 211 for consistency with (69~72) )

00:31:599 (135, 138) - Remove finishes ? ( Optional. Unlike 144, these two notes are actually not that strong imo and so you might want to remove finishes )

00:50:061 (253~255) - ooo / ooo ? ( Just personally think kdk doesn't fit the other parts of the diff which are mostly drum-oriented )

00:52:698 (271~288) - Consider this ? ( Seems that this fits the background music better than pure d ? )

00:57:149 (310~315) - ooooo o ? ( Having a sudden 4+2 plets isn't consistent to the other parts of the diff. I'll say a 5-plet will just work fine :3 )

01:11:489 (416) - Add finish ? ( So that (414~419) are all finishes which emphasize the vocal quite well )

01:14:951 (433) - Red note ? ( Seems (426~437) has a continuous ddkd trend, and I'm not sure why you used k here )

01:24:182 (41,42) - o o ? ( So that this becomes kkd d k. imo this is a good place to follow instrumental pitch because of the incoming short break and the significant music )

Overall quite nice. The hitsounds and patterns both fit the music rather well :3

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[ Sp3's Taiko Muzukashii]

00:22:368 green line - You might want to follow oni's hitsound volume for consistency ? ( Oni used 50% )

00:43:797 (151) - Remove finish ? ( I can't think of a reason adding a finish here ? )

This is quite hard for a muzu (Esp kiai) but still acceptable I think ? Next time you might want to make muzus easier

Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:10:006 (5) - Red note ? ( So that it becomes d d k, and the first 6 notes fit the vocal pitch )

00:20:885 (57~60) - O O OO ( Same as oni )
00:41:984 (209~212) - O O OO ( ^ )

00:50:555 (183) - Red note ? ( Since 182 is d, I guess you're abandoning the ddkd pattern here. You may consider this d to create k k d d which fits the vocal better )

00:55:335 (1) - Add finish ? ( Start of kiai with strong beat )

01:17:094 (57~60) - o o o o (Since 56 is d, I guess you're once again stopping the ddkd pattern, so you might want this to fit the vocal better ? )

Overall ok. Most patterns are used reasonably
Although this might be quite hard for a muzu ?

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Both diffs seem to be quite nice :)

Find me after checking the above, then I'll taiko-icon this :3

Star and good luck ~ ;)
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