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popner's modding teamthis song is really nice
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Unrankable issuesHighly recommend to fixCommon sugestions
Generalthe soft-sliderslide2 file in folder seems not used, better remove it
and why no kiai? I think it's to have it set at the kiais
Lunatic00:07:745 (4,5) - I don't really like the way you arrange the rhythm here, it feels weird and confusing to me to hit 00:07:945 (5) - as it's on a blue tick, and the distance between 4 and 5 is suddenly big, comparing to that between 3 and 4. I suggest that you try something like the pic below, which would avoid starting sliders from blue tick, and making the distance even
00:08:245 (1,2) - if I were you, I would make 1 a 1/2 slider and 2 a 3/4 slider, to actually follow the vocal more precisely, as the vocal "no" actually starts from 00:08:545 - , while there's actually no apparent sound landing on 00:08:645 -
00:09:845 (1,2) - similar case here. these are not the same as 00:17:045 (3,4) - cause there are regular drums on white ticks from 00:14:645 (7) - , but not on 00:10:245 -
00:20:045 (2) - may also whistle on head? I think it shares the same sound as its end in the music
00:24:245 (1) - also recommend whistles on both its reverse point and its end
00:48:245 (1) - not a problem, but I don't really like to put it to almost the same place as 00:46:645 (1) - . may try to put it to the left like the pic below? (forming blanket with 00:49:445 (4) - )
01:05:445 (1,5) - consider to move NC from 1 to 5? as it is 5 that divides two different parts of the music
01:05:845 (5,6) - I don't really like that you stacked 6 under 5's end, I'd prefer to arrange them differently to make the flow more smooth, instead of forcing a stop, as it's going into kiai now, try something like the pic below
01:17:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent with all the later similar parts, you need normal for them02:15:445 (6) - may NC here to divide long combo set
02:22:245 (1,3) - prefer to move the NC from 1 to 3 cause it's 3 that starts a new phrase of the music, like what I've mentioned at 01:05:845 (5) -
02:28:245 (3) - I would like to move the following stream a bit further from 02:27:445 (1) - , that would look better to me
02:45:045 - volume inconsistent with 01:15:445 - , I prefer keeping 80% here, the beat at 02:45:045 - is still quite strong to me
02:47:045 (3) - a whistle on head should be nice fitting the music
03:22:245 (4) - a bit too close to 3? may CTRL+G or place it elsewhere
03:33:045 (5) - same as 01:05:845 (5) -
03:41:045 (1) - feeling the flow a bit weird here, one posibble reason is that the angle formed by 03:40:645 (7,8,1) - is too sharp and it feels not that comfortable to jump in this way, another is that 03:41:045 (1) - is kinda close to 8, I'd prefer a bigger jump for this downbeat, maybe moving it to (328,196) or so, and try to rearrange the following jump, personal opinion below
04:02:945 - I recommend to add a circle here to form a tripple with 04:02:845 (4,5) - and arrange them like the pic below or so, in order to match with the rhythm formed by 04:01:845 (5,6,7,1,2,3) -
04:05:045 (1,2,3) - it's a pity that you don't have a stream of 5 at here, to be in pair with 04:05:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - . I think the music is really calling for two similar streams for this part, maybe remake a rhythm like the pic below and think of some interesting jumps for them
04:07:445 (1,2,3,4) - there's no technical problem for this jumping pattern but I would prefer a larger jump for these notes, instead of having 4 in the mid, as the music is going to a higher and higher pitch at time of 04:07:445 (1,2,3,4,1) -
04:10:645 (2) - CTRL+G may be pretty interesting
04:12:845 (3) - and if you accept the previous suggestion, you could also try to stack this note to 04:11:445 (1) - 's end instead, making 04:08:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - all different from each other. and this crossing jump may lead nicely to the following spinner to my understanding
Hardthis diff is a bit hard, considering it's only based on a 3-star Normal. consider to redece some jumps at verse part, for which you think don't matter much
00:40:845 (2) - weird stack, you Rarely use this kind of spacing in this diff, and I think it's not a good idea to force a stop, when players are flowing smoothly, better make them seperate03:38:445 (2,3,1) - too many whistles 0.0 ?
03:56:445 (3,4,5) - don't really like that you put them almost on a straight line, that plays a bit weird, as you've always jumping differently in the previous similar points, like 03:43:445 (2,3,4,5) - and so
Normal01:15:845 (2) - not a severe problem but not recommended to stack notes like this in the lowest diff
01:31:045 (4) - I remembered that you used normal finish in Hard?
03:14:645 (2) - maybe whistle at its end to match with the previous double whistles ?
That's all, overall nice map, regardless that the diff spread is a bit sharp
Good luck
Oh no I can't get enough of this song