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gah. here it is rena. my best try yet for this song. please if you want to rage on how i suck go ahead i can take the critism

Download: Groove Coverage - God is a Girl (Rena-chan) [Crimson's Hard].osu
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Just here to star, looks good.

Only thing I have to say is the spinner approach circle is rather hard to see imo. Could you use a color other that black? The spinner itself is rather nice looking.
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So tired and yawning. I'll come back around 10 hours later for some hitsound/minor changes (just in case nobody modded this yet.)

I also have an issue with that offset, perhaps it is just me.
(For the record, every time I readjust Offset, I always get '~20ms late' when tested.)

Download: Groove Coverage - God is a Girl (Rena-chan) [GolGate's Easy].osu
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Offset is good.
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Coming here to say that I think my hitsounds are ok, so I won't do the selfmod.

Also, SteRRuM's hitsounds are awesome. <3
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JarJarJacob wrote:

Real1's Normal:

00:28:57 (1) - Remove finish. Nuh uh
00:42:88 - Remove that inherited section.Okay
00:45:47 - Normal sounds start here. Deal
00:57:94 (1,2) - No reason for these notes to have the soft section starting on them. They didn't do that with the old mp3. My bad for not noticing.
01:53:92 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Learn to new combo, please. I fixed this in the other file, apparently Rena didn't add it. And I didn't make that mistake. When x3ns0r used my map as the experiment for timing with a new mp3, this happened. So don't blame the bad combo'ing on me. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
02:05:54 - Remove soft section.Hmm, ok
02:07:44 (1) - Shorten 1/1, place soft section on end. Hey, sounds cool.
02:09:98 (4) - 1/2 back. Yup.
02:17:37 (1) - Remove finish. Meeeh, ok.
02:26:03 (1) - Needs more bezier. We have reached an agreement.
02:27:72 (1) - Remove new combo.My bad.
02:34:48 (1) - Remove new combo.Fixed.
02:36:17 - Remove normal sound section. We have reached a disagreement.
02:36:91 - Place normal sound section. We have reached a disagreement.
Thank you for modding. :)

Download: Groove Coverage - God is a Girl (Rena-chan) [Real1's Normal].osu
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JarJarJacob wrote:

SteRRuM's Hard:

00:58:57 (1,2,3,4) - This is silly. You too. Lol.
01:58:68 (1) - Silly. ^
02:30:47 - Out of place break. It's ok.
02:48:85 (4) - New combo. Fixed.
02:49:70 (5) - New combo. No.
03:01:95 (6) - New combo. No.
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Very NICE MAP
Thanks for such a nice map :P wating for getting it ranked.-STAR-
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Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[GolGate's Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
00:51:38 (1,2,3) - This shape looks kinda uneven there...
01:23:50 (2,2) - The sliders that overlap here seems very questionable. Especially since this is supposed to be an "easy" difficulty.

Notes: Seems okay so far but the setup is a bit questionable mostly towards the slider shapes. They might look a bit too complex for completely novice users.


[Real1's Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
02:15:68 (5,6,7,8) - There's a funny gap between the slider end and these notes.
02:38:71 (1) - I thought it was just me, but it looks like hte flash at this beat is kinda out of sync...

Notes: Not much to look at, but you should try double checking the map for any minor errors to fix.


[SteRRuM's Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
00:47:16 (5) - Bottomed out of the grid.
01:26:46 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The shape is not even.
03:15:47 (1,2,3) - The spacing inbetween the notes are not really equal here.
03:20:12 (3,1,2,3) - ^

Notes: The map is good, but sometimes feel like some of the notes are randomly placed... Make sure to double check the spacing though.


[Rena's Insane] (Done)

SPOILER
01:58:78 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing looks a bit uneven around here.
02:18:85 (1) - I think the spinner sounds better ending at 02:20:96. It could even have more impact if it ended silently as well.

Notes: Looks good so far. Just make sure to double check the spacing though.


Overall: Another thing to point out. The SB is nice, but I noticed when the sb_light_.png's flash, it looks 1 pixel off (at the right) when you look at it real carefully. Also, the spinner circle is not purely centered since it looks a bit wobbly even in slow speeds. Other than that and the minor stuff, the map looks good so far. I'll drop my star in then...

Extra Note - Don't forget to add in the Source and Tags if you want other players to find your map easier...
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whymeman wrote:

[SteRRuM's Hard] (Done)

00:47:16 (5) - Bottomed out of the grid. Fixed.
01:26:46 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The shape is not even. Wat? It's ok :o Fixed. (Look at post down here)
03:15:47 (1,2,3) - The spacing inbetween the notes are not really equal here. Fixed, but it wasn't my false. >:(
03:20:12 (3,1,2,3) - ^ ^.
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Nice map and the song is awesome ^^
Star~
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whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[GolGate's Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
00:51:38 (1,2,3) - This shape looks kinda uneven there...
01:23:50 (2,2) - The sliders that overlap here seems very questionable. Especially since this is supposed to be an "easy" difficulty.

Notes: Seems okay so far but the setup is a bit questionable mostly towards the slider shapes. They might look a bit too complex for completely novice users.


[Real1's Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
02:15:68 (5,6,7,8) - There's a funny gap between the slider end and these notes.
02:38:71 (1) - I thought it was just me, but it looks like hte flash at this beat is kinda out of sync...

Notes: Not much to look at, but you should try double checking the map for any minor errors to fix.


[SteRRuM's Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
00:47:16 (5) - Bottomed out of the grid.
01:26:46 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The shape is not even.
03:15:47 (1,2,3) - The spacing inbetween the notes are not really equal here.
03:20:12 (3,1,2,3) - ^

Notes: The map is good, but sometimes feel like some of the notes are randomly placed... Make sure to double check the spacing though.


[Rena's Insane] (Done)

SPOILER
01:58:78 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing looks a bit uneven around here.
02:18:85 (1) - I think the spinner sounds better ending at 02:20:96. It could even have more impact if it ended silently as well.

Notes: Looks good so far. Just make sure to double check the spacing though.


Overall: Another thing to point out. The SB is nice, but I noticed when the sb_light_.png's flash, it looks 1 pixel off (at the right) when you look at it real carefully. Also, the spinner circle is not purely centered since it looks a bit wobbly even in slow speeds. Other than that and the minor stuff, the map looks good so far. I'll drop my star in then...

Extra Note - Don't forget to add in the Source and Tags if you want other players to find your map easier...
'Kay, done.
No source, by the way.
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00:51:38 (1,2,3) - This shape looks kinda uneven there... - dundundone
01:23:50 (2,2) - The sliders that overlap here seems very questionable. Especially since this is supposed to be an "easy" difficulty. - dundundone

Notes: Seems okay so far but the setup is a bit questionable mostly towards the slider shapes. They might look a bit too complex for completely novice users.

01:07:44 (1) - Hi I'm a slider change.
01:33:21 (5) - ^
01:57:30 (1) - ^
02:04:06 (1) - ^
02:12:09 (2) - ^
02:15:68 (4) - ^
02:17:79 (2) - ^
02:34:90 (3) - ^

I wouldn't change the others though, because they should be smooth and not too complex.
Unless more people complain, at least. >_>
Download: Groove Coverage - God is a Girl (Rena-chan) [GolGate's Easy].osu
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