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hi~
General
- There is a video file in your folder but I think you forgot to put it in your difficulties xD (Likewise, if you're not using it, delete it)
Normal
00:42:586 (4,5,1) - Consider this rhythm instead: The repeat slider fit the quickening pace of the percussion more imo and then the single note emphasizes the "i" ~!
01:12:586 (3) - Clap
01:16:740 (5) - perhaps make a repeat slider like this to avoid leaving the 1/2 slider kinda hanging? might make a less awkward gap with the next note
01:26:894 (4,1) - something feels like it really needs to be here imo lol. Spinner may be a bit risky but maybe some long sliders...
Hard
00:16:740 (5) - NC? On that note, I suggest to double check your NC patterns since I've noticed similar inconsistencies. for example, you could go the classic every 4 white ticks, stanza, etc. (unique parts like 01:34:509 (1,2) - are fine ofc lol) Just a precaution
00:23:548 - Add note to catch the vocals too maybe
00:40:971 (1) - not a big deal but you could blanket this better over the pink (2)
00:51:817 (5) - NC would be fitting imo
Insane
00:01:971 (1,2) - consider pulling these out a little & unstacking from (5)'s tail. This could lessen rhythm/spacing confusion between (5,1) & (1,2) imo
00:03:817 (1,2) - ^
00:05:663 (1,2) - ^
00:50:432 (5) - try Ctrl + G, creates a nice pinwheel flow from the previous note
and again just in case, I'd quickly go over the NCs =v=
Lovely map~! pls call anytime lol
General
- There is a video file in your folder but I think you forgot to put it in your difficulties xD (Likewise, if you're not using it, delete it)
Normal
00:42:586 (4,5,1) - Consider this rhythm instead: The repeat slider fit the quickening pace of the percussion more imo and then the single note emphasizes the "i" ~!
01:12:586 (3) - Clap
01:16:740 (5) - perhaps make a repeat slider like this to avoid leaving the 1/2 slider kinda hanging? might make a less awkward gap with the next note
01:26:894 (4,1) - something feels like it really needs to be here imo lol. Spinner may be a bit risky but maybe some long sliders...
Hard
00:16:740 (5) - NC? On that note, I suggest to double check your NC patterns since I've noticed similar inconsistencies. for example, you could go the classic every 4 white ticks, stanza, etc. (unique parts like 01:34:509 (1,2) - are fine ofc lol) Just a precaution
00:23:548 - Add note to catch the vocals too maybe
00:40:971 (1) - not a big deal but you could blanket this better over the pink (2)
00:51:817 (5) - NC would be fitting imo
Insane
00:01:971 (1,2) - consider pulling these out a little & unstacking from (5)'s tail. This could lessen rhythm/spacing confusion between (5,1) & (1,2) imo
00:03:817 (1,2) - ^
00:05:663 (1,2) - ^
00:50:432 (5) - try Ctrl + G, creates a nice pinwheel flow from the previous note
and again just in case, I'd quickly go over the NCs =v=
Lovely map~! pls call anytime lol
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thank you lunarsakuya >,<LunarSakuya wrote:
hi~
General
- There is a video file in your folder but I think you forgot to put it in your difficulties xD (Likewise, if you're not using it, delete it)i met this problem several times ...now gonna fixing it again ;_;
Normal
00:42:586 (4,5,1) - Consider this rhythm instead: The repeat slider fit the quickening pace of the percussion more imo and then the single note emphasizes the "i" ~!ok
01:12:586 (3) - Clapfixed
01:16:740 (5) - perhaps make a repeat slider like this to avoid leaving the 1/2 slider kinda hanging? might make a less awkward gap with the next noterepeat slider also sounds awkward for me so i change this to a long slider
01:26:894 (4,1) - something feels like it really needs to be here imo lol. Spinner may be a bit risky but maybe some long sliders...ok put a long slider there
Hard
00:16:740 (5) - NC? On that note, I suggest to double check your NC patterns since I've noticed similar inconsistencies. for example, you could go the classic every 4 white ticks, stanza, etc. (unique parts like 01:34:509 (1,2) - are fine ofc lol) Just a precautioni redo all NCs
00:23:548 - Add note to catch the vocals too maybeok
00:40:971 (1) - not a big deal but you could blanket this better over the pink (2)fixed
00:51:817 (5) - NC would be fitting imodone
Insane
00:01:971 (1,2) - consider pulling these out a little & unstacking from (5)'s tail. This could lessen rhythm/spacing confusion between (5,1) & (1,2) imo
00:03:817 (1,2) - ^
00:05:663 (1,2) - ^ok fixed these
00:50:432 (5) - try Ctrl + G, creates a nice pinwheel flow from the previous noteok
and again just in case, I'd quickly go over the NCs =v=woked on these..and done!!
Lovely map~! pls call anytime lol
doki doki~~ 
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love you LunarSakuya!!!!!!!!!!! And everyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!LunarSakuya wrote:
doki doki~~
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受喜是什么奇怪的东西啊！还有神大人不许叫！！rinsukir wrote:
受喜神大人
congrats xD
wow, your 1st rank? :3
おめでとう！！！
おめでとう！！！
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Thank you!!CakiP wrote:
gratz!!!
( ´∀`)Yasora wrote:
congrats xD
Pandiar SAMA kita!!!!!Pandiar wrote:
congrats Mei chan~!
image san arigato(`・ω・´)iMage-- wrote:
wow, your 1st rank? :3
おめでとう！！！
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wahahahuafenshaonv wrote:
哇哈哈
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nya~Melt wrote:
gratz :3
Graaaaaatz! (Btw I remember I checked the metadata for this map :p)
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lol yes and i will bold you name in the list xDKSHR wrote:
Graaaaaatz! (Btw I remember I checked the metadata for this map :p)
Congrats! 
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(ゝ∀･)BeatofIke wrote:
Congrats!
gratz for 1st rank
恭喜~（真的是好几个月了吧。。。
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thankyou | ω・´)Minakami Yuki wrote:
gratz for 1st rank
重做了好几次，也找了好多厉害的modder，感觉是蛮辛苦啊Kamio Misuzu wrote:
恭喜~（真的是好几个月了吧。。。
摸摸屁股Pururut wrote:
一拳打爆mei妹
来晚了gratz
Big Gratz for your first rank ^^
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ww谢谢Fycho wrote:
来晚了gratz
big thanks to youSoG Tava wrote:
Big Gratz for your first rank ^^
竟然rank 怀疑毁灭世界
迟来的Cong
迟来的Cong
Gratz for first ranked!!
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>,<Ethercastle wrote:
竟然rank 怀疑毁灭世界
迟来的Cong
thank you No DapNo Dap wrote:
Gratz for first ranked!!
omedetou for first ranked
\:3/
\:3/
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>,<Sharlo wrote:
哇
祝贺>,<
thank you \:3/kosiga wrote:
omedetou for first ranked
\:3/
啊好像我比你还晚= =Oracle wrote:
>~<gratz!!!!
原来我忘记post!! ;-;不要beat我
Anyway, Gratzzzzzzz!