Requested mod by Taiko mappers.
[ Shiro's Muzukashii]
[ Oni]
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[ Shiro's Muzukashii]
SPOILER
Map is so far solid. But recommending to have bigger breaks between some parts. The map is nice, but lacks a bit of emphasis because, you map most of the time -with the exception at 00:11:682 - continuously through the song with 1/2 patterns. So making other parts have a bigger impact is hard. That's why having some more breaks, with a bigger range, would be nice if you ask me. I will give some suggestions in this matter:
00:17:167 (57,58) - You map to both beats, but consider deleting either both hitcircles or only (57). The high 1/4 sound can compensate the break I think.
00:30:539 - Not a must, but still worth considering to delete. It's a calmer part, so having more spaces between notes is an option. Beside that, the finisher at 00:30:025 - would fade out with the sound you mapped to. So it does fit on its own way?
00:33:282 - ^
00:33:282 - I guess here you can leave it since it becomes denser anyway. Just consider changing this note to don due to beat in background (00:36:025 - here it's fine I guess, sounds lighter?).
00:39:453 - Maybe delete. But not sure if I'm honest.
00:42:196 - Here it's optional. You can leave it if you really want to. But I think pattern wise it might be a bit more interesting - sound- but also play-wise. You have in this way clear "pattern-sections" which make the stanzas more noticeable. Also, every finisher on a new stanza would have a bigger impact as well.
00:44:939 - ^
00:47:682 - ^ (and change 00:46:996 to - kat? Would be consistent to previous stanzas.)
01:01:225 - Good. a -more or less- alone standing ddk which isn't bounded together with 1/2 patterns. I wish I would see more of these moves in other maps. Which means, having no 1/2+ddk.
01:12:710 - Not a must either. Maybe delete. I'm neutral about this.
01:23:682 - This part becomes a little bit calmer. Consider removing some hitcircles at 01:25:053 , 01:25:225 , 01:27:796 and 01:27:967 .
01:51:110 - Have little deletions from here as well...?
That's it. You don't have to remove everything, but I do recommend to have at least some deletions. The map is already nice mapped, so all it lacks of in my opinion is emphasis and impact of certian parts / patterns.
00:17:167 (57,58) - You map to both beats, but consider deleting either both hitcircles or only (57). The high 1/4 sound can compensate the break I think.
00:30:539 - Not a must, but still worth considering to delete. It's a calmer part, so having more spaces between notes is an option. Beside that, the finisher at 00:30:025 - would fade out with the sound you mapped to. So it does fit on its own way?
00:33:282 - ^
00:33:282 - I guess here you can leave it since it becomes denser anyway. Just consider changing this note to don due to beat in background (00:36:025 - here it's fine I guess, sounds lighter?).
00:39:453 - Maybe delete. But not sure if I'm honest.
00:42:196 - Here it's optional. You can leave it if you really want to. But I think pattern wise it might be a bit more interesting - sound- but also play-wise. You have in this way clear "pattern-sections" which make the stanzas more noticeable. Also, every finisher on a new stanza would have a bigger impact as well.
00:44:939 - ^
00:47:682 - ^ (and change 00:46:996 to - kat? Would be consistent to previous stanzas.)
01:01:225 - Good. a -more or less- alone standing ddk which isn't bounded together with 1/2 patterns. I wish I would see more of these moves in other maps. Which means, having no 1/2+ddk.
01:12:710 - Not a must either. Maybe delete. I'm neutral about this.
01:23:682 - This part becomes a little bit calmer. Consider removing some hitcircles at 01:25:053 , 01:25:225 , 01:27:796 and 01:27:967 .
01:51:110 - Have little deletions from here as well...?
That's it. You don't have to remove everything, but I do recommend to have at least some deletions. The map is already nice mapped, so all it lacks of in my opinion is emphasis and impact of certian parts / patterns.
[ Oni]
SPOILER
00:30:367 (193) - I believe having kkkd plays and sounds better. Beside that, it would be a nice contrast to the ddk pattern.
00:33:367 (212) - I guess you don't have to, yet I would suggest to delete this note. dkdk(1/6)dkdk(1/4) is something I see a bit problematic, even though it fits good to the song. I will leave it to you.
00:39:453 (251) - Unrankable. Finishers are not allowed at the beginning of a 1/4 pattern / stream. Remove it.
01:05:339 (421) - Recommending to delete this note so it fits better to 01:04:653.
01:32:767 (634) - Recommending to delete this note so it fits better to 01:32:082.
01:39:796 - Unrankable as well. You are allowed to accelerate down notes which are far away from each other and don't overlap the other notes. In this case the notes are too dense an overlap each other (http://puu.sh/aAfPo/6184d98cb9.jpg). You must changed this. Add at 01:39:796 - x1.20 and delete the other 4 timlines would be my suggestion.
01:39:625 - Suggesting to change to normal kat. A finisher isn't really needed here if you ask me.
01:39:796- How about kkkkd ? I find this to fit better and makes the end of this part a bit easier, which gives upcoming part a bigger impact.
Oni is okay I guess. Personally I say there is too much 1/4, but the song is also pretty intense, whatever.
00:33:367 (212) - I guess you don't have to, yet I would suggest to delete this note. dkdk(1/6)dkdk(1/4) is something I see a bit problematic, even though it fits good to the song. I will leave it to you.
00:39:453 (251) - Unrankable. Finishers are not allowed at the beginning of a 1/4 pattern / stream. Remove it.
01:05:339 (421) - Recommending to delete this note so it fits better to 01:04:653.
01:32:767 (634) - Recommending to delete this note so it fits better to 01:32:082.
01:39:796 - Unrankable as well. You are allowed to accelerate down notes which are far away from each other and don't overlap the other notes. In this case the notes are too dense an overlap each other (http://puu.sh/aAfPo/6184d98cb9.jpg). You must changed this. Add at 01:39:796 - x1.20 and delete the other 4 timlines would be my suggestion.
01:39:625 - Suggesting to change to normal kat. A finisher isn't really needed here if you ask me.
01:39:796- How about kkkkd ? I find this to fit better and makes the end of this part a bit easier, which gives upcoming part a bigger impact.
Oni is okay I guess. Personally I say there is too much 1/4, but the song is also pretty intense, whatever.
After changes has been applied, recall me. I see it read for rank.