I really dislike holes in difficulties for muzukashii or higher. It feels horrible.
OnosakiHito wrote:[ Shiro's Muzukashii]Map is so far solid. But recommending to have bigger breaks between some parts. The map is nice, but lacks a bit of emphasis because, you map most of the time -with the exception at 00:11:682 - continuously through the song with 1/2 patterns. So making other parts have a bigger impact is hard. That's why having some more breaks, with a bigger range, would be nice if you ask me. I will give some suggestions in this matter:
00:17:167 (57,58) - You map to both beats, but consider deleting either both hitcircles or only (57). The high 1/4 sound can compensate the break I think. That's a good idea, actually. I like the sound of it.
00:30:539 - Not a must, but still worth considering to delete. It's a calmer part, so having more spaces between notes is an option. Beside that, the finisher at 00:30:025 - would fade out with the sound you mapped to. So it does fit on its own way? This one follows the very obvious drum, deleting it sounds really weird. I'd rather leave it.
00:33:282 - ^ Same, also structure.
00:33:282 - I guess here you can leave it since it becomes denser anyway. Just consider changing this note to don due to beat in background (00:36:025 - here it's fine I guess, sounds lighter?). Changed to d.
00:39:453 - Maybe delete. But not sure if I'm honest.
00:42:196 - Here it's optional. You can leave it if you really want to. But I think pattern wise it might be a bit more interesting - sound- but also play-wise. You have in this way clear "pattern-sections" which make the stanzas more noticeable. Also, every finisher on a new stanza would have a bigger impact as well. Both above removed, as it sounds kind of better
00:44:939 - ^ but I'm leaving this one because it helps lead into the repeat
00:47:682 - ^ (and change 00:46:996 to - kat? Would be consistent to previous stanzas.) changed both
01:01:225 - Good. a -more or less- alone standing ddk which isn't bounded together with 1/2 patterns. I wish I would see more of these moves in other maps. Which means, having no 1/2+ddk. :3
01:12:710 - Not a must either. Maybe delete. I'm neutral about this. This one's on the beginning of a measure, I need to keep it !
01:23:682 - This part becomes a little bit calmer. Consider removing some hitcircles at 01:25:053 , 01:25:225 , 01:27:796 and 01:27:967 . This is exactly the same as in the beginning 00:12:367 (37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) -
01:51:110 - Have little deletions from here as well...?
That's it. You don't have to remove everything, but I do recommend to have at least some deletions. The map is already nice mapped, so all it lacks of in my opinion is emphasis and impact of certian parts / patterns.
Thanks for the mod !