Wotamin - Higaimouzou Keitai Joshi (Wara) · forum

blackabyss

Joined November 2011

blackabyss 2014-08-08T03:12:45+00:00

Narwhal Prime wrote:
Hi SkyDevil and blackabyss, here's a mod from my queue! uh hi o//

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I seem to have exclusively NC edits here lolol i cyannot do NC properly ugh :'/
00:54:753 (1) - NC... maybe? This one is debatable; I like NC since the actual measure starts on the next slider.
00:56:798 (1) - remove NC no, i follow the vocal and since it started on the big white tick
01:00:435 (1) - remove NC, 01:02:707 (7) - add NC added but i didn't remove the nc before sry
01:05:435 (8) - Debatable NC again, for a different reason. NC here would add emphasis to the kickoff before the kiai, which I think is cool. Again, it's up to you.
Kiai sections: NCs are not consistent in several places where the music sounds similar: 01:07:480 (5) - does not have NC while 01:58:389 (1) - does. 02:09:298 (1) - has while 01:18:389 (5) - doesn't. And so on. Change it up to the way you want it. i did something thou, np? owo
01:34:753 (8) - Covered up by (6)... though other than somehow moving surrounding notes around, I don't really have a clear way to deal with that, if it needs to be dealt at all.
02:41:344 - to 02:47:253 - Put NC on the first beat of each measure. So: add NC on 02:43:162 (4) - and 02:44:980 (4) - and 02:46:798 (4) - , then remove NC on 02:43:616 (1) - and 02:45:434 (1) - . i did something too
Nice song and beatmap! Definitely a map I can enjoy playing. Overall the diffs are already quite polished; let me know if you have any questions. Good luck! \m/

Regards,
NP

skinnyjimmy wrote:
Hi, my part of the M4M

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00:16:116 (4) - You should round out that slider a little so i blankets 3 better

Everything else looks fine to me

Well that's it for my mod! very few errors in these maps

GL getting this ranked!

paseli wrote:
Mod from modding queue~
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00:15:889 (3,4) - improve blanket of 4 i have do that. check the mod above eue

Well-formed maps overall, can't complain. Hope you getting this ranked up soon.

Greetings,
paseli

thanks for your mod!
i didn't reply to your mod means i do your suggestion without hesitation

surprise box! //no pls

osu file format v13

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[Metadata]
Title:Higaimouzou Keitai Joshi (Emi)
TitleUnicode:被害妄想携帯女子（笑）
Artist:Wotamin
ArtistUnicode:ヲタみん
Creator:SkyDevil
Version:Abyss' Normal
Source:
Tags:gigap giga p higai mousou cellphone paranoia girl lol wara persecution complex kagamine len teru21 blackabyss
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SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2014-08-08T14:25:29+00:00

Obiwan Shinobi wrote:
Hiiii :3

I just made a mod on the hard one

I think it's a pretty nice beat map, but in my opinion at
00:53:730 - the 4 should be on that place (x: 172, y: 344) and the 5 at this (x: 264, y: 344) for a better flow ~eh, but I tried to align 3 nicely so hmmm
02:01:116 - the 2 should be on (x: 244, y: 344) and the following 3 and 4 are a bit too confusing, I would place the 4 on (x: 296, y: 344) ~ ????

02:21:798 - and also this 4 should be on (x: 360, y: 300) for better game play ~its a jump .w.)/

I know it's not that important, but I would use the epilepsy warning at the beginning, it's all up to you ~I didnt update the map yet when you posted this xD aleady fixed
But in all it's a good beat map I think!

eh didnt fix anything but ehhhh im fine with modding your map i guess (will do soon)

dorillis wrote:
So there are a few things to fix but nothing serious.
General: AiMod saids more than 1/3 of the map is kiai time
There are a ton of spacing warnings too. So try using distance snap

Make sure you check the AiMod and fix any issues it detects. That should be your first step. ~yeah dont trust aimod, its full of bs half of the time, it contains a lot of bugs and for example we're allowed to have 1/3 kiai, but we cant have 1/2 of the time kiai

Hard:
01:52:025 - change slider color. It's blending in with the background. ~I doubt people will be bothered, I can easily see the difference and color blind people should probably use the bg darkener thingy the whole time anyways

Insane:

01:10:207 (2,3,4,5) - a little messy. consider revising ~its supposed to be confusing you .w.)/
01:41:116 (1,2,3,4) - this was super confusing even when I slowed it down. maybe work on some sensible spacing. ~its just a 2.0x spacing to 2.5x spacing
03:12:707 (6,7,8,9) - same here. and there's a problem with the overlap ~its teru's part but i do want to mention that as long as the circle overlaps the whole slider its fine

over all it's good. It's just a matter of making sure the circles are neat.

I hope that helped.
SPOILER

dat pic tho

thanks both, didnt change anything tho ;___________________;

Rirakusu

218 posts

Joined November 2013

Rirakusu 2014-08-09T05:06:42+00:00

From my queue.

[Easy]
1. 00:21:344 (3,1) - Strange blanket. Try to fix it.
2. 00:26:798 (2,3) - I don't really recommend this in Easy diff. Instead I think you can make a slider with a sharp point, which also brings the beat in.
3. 00:40:435 (1,2,3) - General Easy advice - try to stick with 1/1 beats. For this I think you can use a sharp pointed slider or a reversed one. Reduces difficulty.
4. Try not to change the SV throughout the Easy diff. But you will have to remap the part if you follow this advice so please think twice and don't blame me that I wasted your precious hours lol.
5. 01:22:253 (2,3) - This looks strange? Try to make it like this.

Sample

6. 02:13:389 (3,4) - I think this will look better. See screenshot.

Screenshot

[Hard]
1. 00:37:253 (3,4) - Make them identical.
2. 02:24:753 (3) and 01:19:525 (4) - I think they should be two short sliders instead of a slider that reverse for 2 times. It will make them more interesting, as players don't have the choice to 'hold' their way through.

No offense for the other two diffs

done.

Moo-Chan

405 posts

Joined November 2013

Moo-Chan 2014-08-11T00:15:33+00:00

From my modding queue~

[Insane Collab]

00:23:844 (1) - could blanket 00:23:616 (6) - better
00:29:525 (1,3) - These kinda overlap and look meh
00:31:116 (5) - What is this
00:35:662 (8,9) - Please don't do this, it looks and plays bad
00:40:435 (1) - move to x:71 y:53
00:41:344 (3) - move to x:116 y:192
00:47:707 (1) - move to x:257 y:56 (Please stack things, it looks so much better ;w;)
00:56:344 (4) - could blanket 00:56:798 (5) - better
01:13:162 (1) - This doesn't look very good
01:14:753 (1) - neither does this
01:16:571 (1) - or this
01:18:389 (7) - could blanket 01:17:934 (5) - better
01:44:298 (1,2,3) - not mapping the white ticks makes this awkward to play
01:48:616 (3) - could blanket 01:48:389 (2) - better
01:53:162 (1,2) - This overlap is meh
02:24:866 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - why the new combos
03:11:344 (3) - could blanket 03:11:116 (2) - better

Good Luck~

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2014-08-11T12:22:58+00:00

Will mod as soon as i can ;;

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2014-08-11T20:54:25+00:00

jinhang_ang wrote:
From my queue.

[Easy]
1. 00:21:344 (3,1) - Strange blanket. Try to fix it. ~kaykay
2. 00:26:798 (2,3) - I don't really recommend this in Easy diff. Instead I think you can make a slider with a sharp point, which also brings the beat in. ~ errr ill keep it in for now, but i do see your point, I just liked how it sounded xD
3. 00:40:435 (1,2,3) - General Easy advice - try to stick with 1/1 beats. For this I think you can use a sharp pointed slider or a reversed one. Reduces difficulty. ~its okay since its low bpm
4. Try not to change the SV throughout the Easy diff. But you will have to remap the part if you follow this advice so please think twice and don't blame me that I wasted your precious hours lol. ~that feel when 2 sliders and a circle = precious hours, ill still keep it tho, im 100% sure easy players dont need to think twice
5. 01:22:253 (2,3) - This looks strange? Try to make it like this. ~okay
Sample
6. 02:13:389 (3,4) - I think this will look better. See screenshot. ~prefer it currently ;;
Screenshot

[Hard]
1. 00:37:253 (3,4) - Make them identical. ~its really fine as it is now
2. 02:24:753 (3) and 01:19:525 (4) - I think they should be two short sliders instead of a slider that reverse for 2 times. It will make them more interesting, as players don't have the choice to 'hold' their way through. ~uhhhh ill consider

No offense for the other two diffs done.

Moo-Chan wrote:
From my modding queue~

[Insane Collab]
00:23:844 (1) - could blanket 00:23:616 (6) - better ~I tried to end it on (2) - so its hard to make it look nicer
01:13:162 (1) - This doesn't look very good ~YOU JUST DON'T KNOW WHAT PURE ART IS ./hairflip in your face
01:14:753 (1) - neither does this ~ ^
01:16:571 (1) - or this ~ ^
01:18:389 (7) - could blanket 01:17:934 (5) - better ~ ./tries my best to make it look nice
01:44:298 (1,2,3) - not mapping the white ticks makes this awkward to play ~im following the music
01:48:616 (3) - could blanket 01:48:389 (2) - better ~yeah I really do not understand what you exactly mean with making the blanket better, if i put it closer the spacing would be wrong and if i need a faster sv in order to put it around it =A=)/
01:53:162 (1,2) - This overlap is meh ~ fineeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Good Luck~

thanks both~

Eni

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Eni 2014-09-08T00:37:55+00:00

Hello from Railgun's Quality Appreciation Queue,

[General]

The kiai end on 02:11:116 - and 03:10:207 -, I would personally put these on a 1/4 or a 1/8. It helps keep the flow of the kiai without the flash/stars stopping
Try this background image instead (I reverse image searched, btw). You may need to change some scaling if acceptable:

~
What is the "Guest" for in the storyboard? I do not see any text associated with it in any difficulties.
Will there be storyboard names on the Insane difficulty to determine who mapped each part?
Totally up to you, but you may want to disable the "letterbox during breaks" to showcase the storyboard a bit more.

Rather short mods, but I couldn't really find anything too striking in my eyes. Take these suggestions as a general rule, and use them throughout as a whole.

[Easy]

The easy is somewhat difficult and osu! actually reads this difficulty as a Normal. Changing 1/2 triplets to simple sliders, etc., should solve this problem, however, it's up to you to apply the changes.
01:49:525 (1,2) - What are these following? I think it would be better to try a more simpler slider(s).

[Abyss]

The mapset is ok, but I feel like it is more so a low-SV hard difficulty. If possible, please try to add more 1/1 waits.
02:55:434 (1) - Note that the other difficulties do not map this part. Because it's your GD, it's completely up to you to remove this circle or keep it.

[Hard]

Overall this difficulty fits the mapset rather nice with the balance of 1/4s and mini jumps. I found no major problems.

[Insane]

The slider velocity for the kiai time during this difficulty feels somewhat too high. Please try decreasing it.
Some parts to not have consistent new combo, despite the same pattern being used (e.g: 03:14:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -). Is this intended? If not, please fix those patterns.

Good luck.

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2014-09-09T11:18:26+00:00

~~oh I'll check it this night (my map graved just cause I couldnt access osu till end august =A=)~~

Project Railgun wrote:
Hello from Railgun's Quality Appreciation Queue,

[General]
The kiai end on 02:11:116 - and 03:10:207 -, I would personally put these on a 1/4 or a 1/8. It helps keep the flow of the kiai without the flash/stars stopping ~hmm,,, I personally dont see much difference when its disabled for such a short time so ithink its fine as it is
Try this background image instead (I reverse image searched, btw). You may need to change some scaling if acceptable:

~yeah uh teru stopped playing on osu > stopped storyboarding so im gonna switch the bg to the original video soon..
~
What is the "Guest" for in the storyboard? I do not see any text associated with it in any difficulties. ~hmm I should prob do that
Will there be storyboard names on the Insane difficulty to determine who mapped each part? ~ ^
Totally up to you, but you may want to disable the "letterbox during breaks" to showcase the storyboard a bit more. ~teru stopped ;;

Rather short mods, but I couldn't really find anything too striking in my eyes. Take these suggestions as a general rule, and use them throughout as a whole.

[Easy]
The easy is somewhat difficult and osu! actually reads this difficulty as a Normal. Changing 1/2 triplets to simple sliders, etc., should solve this problem, however, it's up to you to apply the changes. ~thats mainly cause of those 1/2's indeed, but its low bpm so i thought it would be fine
01:49:525 (1,2) - What are these following? I think it would be better to try a more simpler slider(s). ~they are following wotamin's autotune XDD
[Hard]
Overall this difficulty fits the mapset rather nice with the balance of 1/4s and mini jumps. I found no major problems. ~thank you *A*)/
[Insane]
The slider velocity for the kiai time during this difficulty feels somewhat too high. Please try decreasing it. ~ive seen people playing this with DT on on their first time and only making like 2 mistakes lmao
Some parts to not have consistent new combo, despite the same pattern being used (e.g: 03:14:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -). Is this intended? If not, please fix those patterns. ~fixed
Good luck.

thanks for mod owo

Mei

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Mei 2014-09-13T19:34:21+00:00

this song is in GigaP's alblum ぎがばななざべすと~NORISHIO味~ as well. Maybe add it to tags
one of my fav song yey. star~

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2014-09-13T22:35:42+00:00

Mei wrote:
this song is in GigaP's alblum ぎがばななざべすと~NORISHIO味~ as well. Maybe add it to tags
one of my fav song yey. star~

oh yeah, it used to be in the source but source isnt used for album names so I had to remove it, forgot to add it in the tags though

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-09-16T07:41:45+00:00

From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]
gigap wotamin >///<❤❤❤
okay，let‘s mod

Easy

00:07:707 (1) - normal is a bit weak, um……try normal finish here.
00:29:525 the begining of vocal，and a strong beat，I highly recommend that hitnormal
00:36:798 (1) - drum finish
00:40:435 (1,2,3) - hard for newbie……and00:40:662 is weak，try
00:41:344 (6,7) - I think ctrl g them feels more better lol：
01:10:889 (2,3,4) - wow,I think it hard for easy diff
01:27:707 normal hit
01:43:162 (2,3,4) - the rhythm is so odd……try this:

Hard

00:48:616 (3,3) - stack?
00:59:071 (2) - move to 00:59:071 and add note at 00:59:753 - 01:00:662
01:05:435 add note here will feels so cool
02:40:889 ^
02:50:889 add a note ，I'm not sure if hard allowed 02:50:434 (1,2,3,4) -
02:53:844 (4) - make a slider，cause of a beat here02:54:071 :
02:55:434 add note

Insane Collab

00:07:707 (1) - normal and end at 00:13:162

00:28:162 (2,3,4,5,6) - the shape would be pretty,I'd suggest you like this
http://puu.sh/bBjgZ/7a6f6b05f8.png
00:30:889 (4) - stack with 00:28:957 (6) - :
http://puu.sh/bBjiE/36d63d5eda.png
here the code and fixed it feel free

:

392,208,28162,2,0,P|352:176|312:180,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,304,28616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,316,28730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,328,28844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,340,28957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,332,29071,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,336,29185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,341,29299,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,345,29412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,320,29525,6,0,P|20:220|96:172,1,180,6|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,176,30207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,30435,2,0,P|132:164|156:120,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,256,30889,1,8,0:0:0:0:

00:33:162 (1,2,3) - a little close，make them like this:
http://puu.sh/bBjAE/039ede7c29.png
00:45:662 (4) - seems not very beautiful ，try this:
SPOILER
the start of 00:45:662 (4) - stack with the tail of 00:46:798 (6) - ，and 00:45:207 (3) - blanket the tail of 00:45:662 (4) -
01:05:435 add note which stack with start of 01:05:889 (1) - would feels so cool~
01:31:344 the empty feels odd……add a hitnormal circle
01:55:889 (3,4) - try make some jump it's a insane diff right？
02:04:753 (1,4) - fix the stack plz

General

That's all what I‘m able to point out【taken my star】and in insane collab，i think the placement should be improve better imo

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2014-09-19T23:24:30+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]
gigap wotamin >///<❤❤❤
okay，let‘s mod

Easy
00:07:707 (1) - normal is a bit weak, um……try normal finish here. ~increased volume instead
00:29:525 the begining of vocal，and a strong beat，I highly recommend that hitnormal ~doesnt soundthat well imo
00:36:798 (1) - drum finish ~dont feel any difference so i dont see the use
00:40:435 (1,2,3) - hard for newbie……and00:40:662 is weak，try ~decided to just leave (2) out and change their spacing
00:41:344 (6,7) - I think ctrl g them feels more better lol： ~I just focussed on the part where she said keitai
01:10:889 (2,3,4) - wow,I think it hard for easy diff~kaykay
01:27:707 normal hit ~made it a normal-hitifinish
01:43:162 (2,3,4) - the rhythm is so odd……try this:
~following the music
Hard
00:48:616 (3,3) - stack? ~doesnt really matter imo
00:59:071 (2) - move to 00:59:071 and add note at 00:59:753 - 01:00:662 ~mehh I prefer how it is now
01:05:435 add note here will feels so cool ~hmmm maybe =3=
02:40:889 ^ ~ ^ (now we have a smiley o3o)
02:50:889 add a note ，I'm not sure if hard allowed 02:50:434 (1,2,3,4) - ~errrrrrrr I havent seen anyone else tell me aboutt this so... ill consider if it will be mentioned too much
02:53:844 (4) - make a slider，cause of a beat here02:54:071 : ~added a circle instead
02:55:434 add note ~eh
Insane Collab
00:07:707 (1) - normal and end at 00:13:162 ~no it ends early
00:28:162 (2,3,4,5,6) - the shape would be pretty,I'd suggest you like this
http://puu.sh/bBjgZ/7a6f6b05f8.png
00:30:889 (4) - stack with 00:28:957 (6) - : ~.... can you explain to me once more what you did? I didnt really understand it honestly lol...
http://puu.sh/bBjiE/36d63d5eda.png
here the code and fixed it feel free :
392,208,28162,2,0,P|352:176|312:180,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,304,28616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,316,28730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,328,28844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,340,28957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,332,29071,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,336,29185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,341,29299,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,345,29412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,320,29525,6,0,P|20:220|96:172,1,180,6|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,176,30207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,30435,2,0,P|132:164|156:120,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,256,30889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
00:33:162 (1,2,3) - a little close，make them like this: ~it looks so weird like that D:
http://puu.sh/bBjAE/039ede7c29.png
00:45:662 (4) - seems not very beautiful ，try this: ~oh i like this
SPOILER
the start of 00:45:662 (4) - stack with the tail of 00:46:798 (6) - ，and 00:45:207 (3) - blanket the tail of 00:45:662 (4) -
01:05:435 add note which stack with start of 01:05:889 (1) - would feels so cool~ ~eh
01:31:344 the empty feels odd……add a hitnormal circle ~done
01:55:889 (3,4) - try make some jump it's a insane diff right？~symmetry pls
02:04:753 (1,4) - fix the stack plz ~trust me you wont see any difference while playing
General
That's all what I‘m able to point out【taken my star】and in insane collab，i think the placement should be improve better imo ~i know :< it was the diff i (and teru) first made of this map

thanks owo

blackabyss

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blackabyss 2014-10-03T03:10:29+00:00

Project Railgun wrote:
Hello from Railgun's Quality Appreciation Queue,

[Abyss]
The mapset is ok, but I feel like it is more so a low-SV hard difficulty. If possible, please try to add more 1/1 waits.
02:55:434 (1) - Note that the other difficulties do not map this part. Because it's your GD, it's completely up to you to remove this circle or keep it.
Good luck.

i'll try to look at it later owo/
thanks for mod

Tarrasky

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Tarrasky 2014-11-29T16:36:44+00:00

Easy

nothing in special, nice map

Abyss' Normal

Sequencial of circles like 02:14:298 (4,5,6) - and 02:22:480 (2,3,4,5) - sounds really cool in kiai moment (patterns a bit more hard), but in moments like this 00:15:662 (2,3,4) - i think better you utilize more flow, for example you make in this form http://puu.sh/dablt/5b72a33003.png, the flow not is so "fine" to play, i recommend you make like this http://puu.sh/dabsD/5438b24da9.png, sounds pretty better to play ^^
in 00:25:207 (8) - i recommend you put in this form http://puu.sh/dabsD/5438b24da9.png
00:46:116 (5) - this can be a bit confuse for a novices, maybe this form sounds cool http://puu.sh/dabDq/8ebe334b65.png, when he look simmilar slides, he think is playable like this 01:54:753 (1,2) -
01:08:616 (4) - in this form have better flow http://puu.sh/dabMf/22749c0c6d.png
I like the map, this instability rhythms gets quite dynamic, very fun and playable

Hard

In this moment 00:27:707 - have no sound, but in the moment before, have a tick in slider, like 00:23:844 (1) - 00:20:207 (1) -, you can mod something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2292214
00:39:980 (5) - put this slider more in this position, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2292224, the players may be confused and miss in 00:40:662 (1) -
00:47:253 (6) - y=80 sounds good
01:34:980 (1) - uncessecary circle, just remove
01:37:480 (4,5,1) - the distance snap in this slides is a little high for the moment
in 02:54:071 - until 02:55:889 - and 01:04:071 - until 01:05:889 - have the same distance, in one have breaktime in the other dont have, OR you delete the first breaktime or add in the 2 moment
the 2 other last kiais is really more hard than the first x.x
nice map, i like, beatiful flow and cool

Collab Insane

looking not think have problems, so hard for me D;

Good luck in get this ranked ;D

SkyDevil

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Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2014-11-29T17:46:30+00:00

Tarrasky wrote:
Easy
nothing in special, nice map
~thanks c:

Hard
In this moment 00:27:707 - have no sound, but in the moment before, have a tick in slider, like 00:23:844 (1) - 00:20:207 (1) -, you can mod something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2292214 ~oh I changed it in my own way
00:39:980 (5) - put this slider more in this position, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2292224, the players may be confused and miss in 00:40:662 (1) - ~uhhhh dont see much difference actually xD
00:47:253 (6) - y=80 sounds good ~uhh also changed it in my own way owo
01:34:980 (1) - uncessecary circle, just remove ~just kept it there to keep the flow
01:37:480 (4,5,1) - the distance snap in this slides is a little high for the moment ~it's just a 1.50x jump xD
in 02:54:071 - until 02:55:889 - and 01:04:071 - until 01:05:889 - have the same distance, in one have breaktime in the other dont have, OR you delete the first breaktime or add in the 2 moment ~hhh didnt notice that wwww //fixes
the 2 other last kiais is really more hard than the first x.x ~yep I know, I did that on purpose to slowly increase in difficulty
nice map, i like, beatiful flow and cool ~thank you ><

Collab Insane
looking not think have problems, so hard for me D; ~you'll be able to play that soon ok

Good luck in get this ranked ;D

thanks for random mod

Axarious

Former osu! Champion: 2016

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Axarious 2014-11-30T22:14:38+00:00

[General]
From Astral Horizon
[Easy]

Map with grid snap off. Change to slider tick 1, maybe OD2 or 3.
00:16:344 (2) - Move to x:276 y:74 for a better blanket with (1).
00:18:616 (1,2) - Blanket. Easy way out: move the center white point to x:339 y:206.
00:21:344 (3,1) - Blanket. Easy way out: move the end white point to x:370 y:150.
00:23:616 (2,3) - Rotate (2) -5 degrees around selection center.
00:36:798 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:385 y:160.
00:51:798 (2) - The red point should line up with the slider tick.
00:53:616 (4) - Move center red point to x:158 y:166.
01:00:889 (2) - Move center red point to x:350 y:137.
01:10:889 (2) - Move to x:231 y:246.
01:11:798 (3) - If ^ is followed, move to x:223 y:85.
01:29:526 (3) - Move to x:320 y:166.
01:29:980 (4) - If ^ is followed, move to x:383 y:188.
01:35:435 (2) - Move to x:126 y:224.
02:04:071 (1) - Move to x:403 y:308.
02:04:980 (2) - Ctrl H ^
03:16:798 (5,1) - Blanket better.
03:17:707 (1,2) - Make the end of slider (1) parallel with slider (2).
03:25:662 (2) - Confusing rhythm for an "Easy", maybe make a half beat slider starting on 03:25:889 - where the vocal is instead of the drums.
03:29:298 (2) - ^

[Abyss' Normal]

OD4, AR5
May want to look over some stacks, they can be confusing for a "Normal".
00:15:889 (3,4) - Probably intentional, but (4) would look nicer if it was less curved and created a perfect blanket with (3).
00:25:889 (1) - Make the left and right side of this slider symmetrical.
00:31:798 (5,6) - (6) would look nicer if it had a smaller curve and blanketed nicely with (5).
00:35:889 (7,8,9) - Slider on (8), circle on (9).
00:50:435 (6,7,8) - Slider on (6) and (7), circle on (8).
01:09:525 (1,4) - Ctrl HJ (1) to make (4), (4) isn't the same as (1).
01:11:571 (1) - Make the top and bottom have the same length of curve.
01:16:571 (1) - Make the left and right side symmetrical.
01:39:525 (2,3) - Move (3) to x:165 y:196.

[Hard]

OD6 HP6
Work on double blankets around centers.
00:07:707 (1) - Spinner on Hard ends at 00:12:935 - but the spinner on Easy ends on 00:13:162 - . Choose one.
00:18:389 (5,1) - Blanket better.
00:20:207 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:125 y:136.
00:22:253 (1) - Make the first bend less extreme.
00:23:616 (5,1) - Blanket better.
00:27:707 - Weird pause, might catch a player off guard.
00:29:525 (1,2,3) - Blanket this better.
00:34:753 (1,2) - Blanket better.
00:35:889 (3) - Ctrl G.
00:41:344 (4,5) - Blanket, move (5) to x:186 y:376.
00:42:025 (1,2,3) - Blanket (2) within (1) and (3).
00:45:207 (3,1) - Blanket (1) with the tail of slider (3).
00:49:980 (2) - Move to x:162 y:319.
00:59:071 - Why no note here?
01:00:662 - ^
01:07:025 (4,1) - Blanket fix, move (4) to x:286 y:258.
01:14:753 (6,7) - Blanket fix, move (7) to x:243 y:23.
01:16:344 (3,1) - Blanket or continue momentum.
01:20:435 (1,2) - Rotate (1) -4 degrees around selection center.
01:27:139 (4) - New combo for the change in rhythm.
01:28:843 (3,1) - Blanket fix.
01:38:389 (1) - This slider sounds weird, maybe end it 01:38:616 - here and add a circle on 01:38:844 - .
01:50:889 (5) - Simplify this slider. Use double bends on longer 1/1 sliders.
01:56:798 (1) - Rotate 1 degree around selection center.
02:19:753 (5,1) - On the head of slider (1), use two points before the red for a smoother curve and apply a better blanket with the tail of (5).
02:52:253 (1,2) - (2) isn't parallel with (1). Consider scaling (1) up 2.00x to make slider (2).
03:20:889 (3,1) - This isn't close to a blanket, probably intentional placement. If not, fix this blanket.

[Insane Collab]

00:07:707 (1) - Easy's slider ends on 00:13:162 - while Hard and Insane end on 00:12:935 - . Choose one.
00:29:071 (7) - NC.
00:35:662 (8,9) - Awkward use of Ctrl H here. Consider changing.
01:05:889 (1) - Amazing slider velocity change, way to make kiai time stand out!
01:17:934 (5,7) - Maybe move (7) to x:314 y:315 to blanket with (5).
01:22:025 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:344 y:164.
01:25:662 (1,2,3) - Fix double blanket. Use the approach circle as a means of determining distance from the center.
01:27:139 (1,2) - Unstack and new combo.
01:40:207 (4,5) - Move (5) to x:441 y:245 for a better blanket. You don't need to follow 1.00x -> 2.00x distance snap in an insane as you would need to have it set-in-stone on easier difficulties.
01:44:980 - Why no note here? Follow the melody (singing) rather than the drums/instrumental in the background.
01:45:662 - ^
01:48:389 (2,3) - Move (2) to x:325 y:198.
01:51:685 (4,5) - If you're going to stack (4) on the head of (5), change the momentum of the slider into an "n" shape rather than a "u" shape.
02:11:230 - Needs a note here, most players will play this as a stream of 4 circles leading into 1 slider. If there is no note, move (1) higher.
02:16:116 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:310 y:372.
02:18:616 (1) - Move to x:44 y:352.
02:24:753 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Unless a player single taps this, this is really difficult to hit with alternation. Consider not having /too/ large a ds between jumpstreams.
03:08:389 (1,2) - Make (2) parallel with (1)'s tail.
03:09:525 (3) - If so ^, then make (3) an HJ of (2).
03:11:116 (2,3) - Move (2) to x:215 y:51.
03:12:707 (2) - May want to move this so it isn't confused as the tail of slider (3), if moved I suggest x:297 y:230.
03:15:662 (1) - The red points at the end of the slider aren't necessary.
03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Difficult to hit with the jump.
03:24:525 (9) - New combo, prepares players for the immediate slow down of the next slider if "Ignore all beatmap skins" is ticked on.
03:30:434 (5,6) - Hard to see a slow slider stack like this, consider moving (5) elsewhere.
03:31:798 (1) - Move this elsewhere for a climactic finish.

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2014-12-01T09:01:33+00:00

Axarious wrote:
[General]
From Astral Horizon

[Easy]
Map with grid snap off. Change to slider tick 1, maybe OD2 or 3. ~I prefer not to use no grid snap, slider tick 2 is fine and OD seems ok too since AR is higher
00:16:344 (2) - Move to x:276 y:74 for a better blanket with (1). ~^
00:18:616 (1,2) - Blanket. Easy way out: move the center white point to x:339 y:206. ~which one of the two?, tried to change anyways
00:21:344 (3,1) - Blanket. Easy way out: move the end white point to x:370 y:150. ~^
00:23:616 (2,3) - Rotate (2) -5 degrees around selection center. ~why? barely any different
00:36:798 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:385 y:160. ~it'll crush the spacing
00:51:798 (2) - The red point should line up with the slider tick. ~wat
00:53:616 (4) - Move center red point to x:158 y:166. ~...
01:00:889 (2) - Move center red point to x:350 y:137. ~changed it a little bit i guess?
01:10:889 (2) - Move to x:231 y:246. ~it'll crush the spacing again
01:11:798 (3) - If ^ is followed, move to x:223 y:85.
01:29:526 (3) - Move to x:320 y:166. ~I don't see the use
01:29:980 (4) - If ^ is followed, move to x:383 y:188.
01:35:435 (2) - Move to x:126 y:224. ~moved the white point instead
02:04:071 (1) - Move to x:403 y:308. ~dont see the use again
02:04:980 (2) - Ctrl H ^
03:16:798 (5,1) - Blanket better. ~fix
03:17:707 (1,2) - Make the end of slider (1) parallel with slider (2). ~^
03:25:662 (2) - Confusing rhythm for an "Easy", maybe make a half beat slider starting on 03:25:889 - where the vocal is instead of the drums. ~eerrrr ill keep it for now, will consider later
03:29:298 (2) - ^ ~^
so nazi ;_;

[Hard]
OD6 HP6 ~hard is pretty difficult so I needed tht lower hp/od
Work on double blankets around centers. ~eh
00:07:707 (1) - Spinner on Hard ends at 00:12:935 - but the spinner on Easy ends on 00:13:162 - . Choose one. ~fixed
00:18:389 (5,1) - Blanket better. ~it's fine as it is
00:20:207 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:125 y:136. ~tried to fix in my own way
00:22:253 (1) - Make the first bend less extreme. ~tried again
00:23:616 (5,1) - Blanket better. ~its fine as it is x2
00:27:707 - Weird pause, might catch a player off guard. ~?? did you accidently remove a slider or something while modding lol
00:29:525 (1,2,3) - Blanket this better. ~its fine as it is x3
00:34:753 (1,2) - Blanket better. ~guess this kind does look bad, fixed
00:35:889 (3) - Ctrl G. ~its a jump
00:41:344 (4,5) - Blanket, move (5) to x:186 y:376. ~its fine as it is x4
00:42:025 (1,2,3) - Blanket (2) within (1) and (3). ~fixed .w.
00:45:207 (3,1) - Blanket (1) with the tail of slider (3). ~fixed
00:49:980 (2) - Move to x:162 y:319. ~its fine as iti is x5
00:59:071 - Why no note here? ~did it on purpose like thsi
01:00:662 - ^ ~ ^
01:07:025 (4,1) - Blanket fix, move (4) to x:286 y:258. ~its fine as it is x6
01:14:753 (6,7) - Blanket fix, move (7) to x:243 y:23. ~fix
01:16:344 (3,1) - Blanket or continue momentum. ~ehh did it on ppurpose like this
01:20:435 (1,2) - Rotate (1) -4 degrees around selection center. ~lol..
01:27:139 (4) - New combo for the change in rhythm. ~hmmmmm okay
01:28:843 (3,1) - Blanket fix. ~its fine as it is x7
01:38:389 (1) - This slider sounds weird, maybe end it 01:38:616 - here and add a circle on 01:38:844 - . ~i dont see how it doesnt fit, it follows the vocals
01:50:889 (5) - Simplify this slider. Use double bends on longer 1/1 sliders. ~ehhh consider it for later
01:56:798 (1) - Rotate 1 degree around selection center. ~..............................
02:19:753 (5,1) - On the head of slider (1), use two points before the red for a smoother curve and apply a better blanket with the tail of (5). ~1 point is fine, i changed it anyways
02:52:253 (1,2) - (2) isn't parallel with (1). Consider scaling (1) up 2.00x to make slider (2). ~tried to fix
03:20:889 (3,1) - This isn't close to a blanket, probably intentional placement. If not, fix this blanket. ~oh lol that was just lazy of me, fixed
[Insane Collab]
00:07:707 (1) - Easy's slider ends on 00:13:162 - while Hard and Insane end on 00:12:935 - . Choose one. ~spinner* and okay owo
00:29:071 (7) - NC. ~dont see the use
00:35:662 (8,9) - Awkward use of Ctrl H here. Consider changing. ~hmmmmmm,, not so sure,, but ill consider maybe
01:05:889 (1) - Amazing slider velocity change, way to make kiai time stand out! ~thanks *A*)/
01:17:934 (5,7) - Maybe move (7) to x:314 y:315 to blanket with (5). ~errr tried to change something i guess
01:22:025 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:344 y:164. ~^
01:25:662 (1,2,3) - Fix double blanket. Use the approach circle as a means of determining distance from the center. ~forgot that that method existed lol
01:27:139 (1,2) - Unstack and new combo. ~already has a new combo hue and I think I prefer it as it is imo
01:40:207 (4,5) - Move (5) to x:441 y:245 for a better blanket. You don't need to follow 1.00x -> 2.00x distance snap in an insane as you would need to have it set-in-stone on easier difficulties. ~tried to fix and i know ;_; but im still used to doing that
01:44:980 - Why no note here? Follow the melody (singing) rather than the drums/instrumental in the background. ~I have no idea acutally, thought it was interesting t ofollow something else
01:45:662 - ^ ~^
01:48:389 (2,3) - Move (2) to x:325 y:198. ~its fine as it is imo
01:51:685 (4,5) - If you're going to stack (4) on the head of (5), change the momentum of the slider into an "n" shape rather than a "u" shape. ~I have no idea what youre talking about but (5) flows in with (6)
02:11:230 - Needs a note here, most players will play this as a stream of 4 circles leading into 1 slider. If there is no note, move (1) higher. ~told teru to fix this ;-; but at least now i did
02:16:116 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:310 y:372. ~fixed
02:18:616 (1) - Move to x:44 y:352. ~^
02:24:753 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Unless a player single taps this, this is really difficult to hit with alternation. Consider not having /too/ large a ds between jumpstreams. ~yeaahh i kinda agree llol,, fixed
03:08:389 (1,2) - Make (2) parallel with (1)'s tail. ~ok
03:09:525 (3) - If so ^, then make (3) an HJ of (2). ~^
03:11:116 (2,3) - Move (2) to x:215 y:51. ~tried to fix
03:12:707 (2) - May want to move this so it isn't confused as the tail of slider (3), if moved I suggest x:297 y:230. ~^
03:15:662 (1) - The red points at the end of the slider aren't necessary. ~but it looks so cool ;A;)/
03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Difficult to hit with the jump. ~much easier than the other jump imo, its fine
03:24:525 (9) - New combo, prepares players for the immediate slow down of the next slider if "Ignore all beatmap skins" is ticked on. ~eh most players wlll hold that anyways so its okay imo
03:30:434 (5,6) - Hard to see a slow slider stack like this, consider moving (5) elsewhere. ~err consider changing
03:31:798 (1) - Move this elsewhere for a climactic finish. ~nonoo its really sexy there

Really nazi but helpful mod, some of the things like "rotate 3%" is kinda awkward but I guess it did make me look critically at my map

thanks *A*)/

blackabyss

494 posts

Joined November 2011

blackabyss 2014-12-01T14:54:47+00:00

Tarrasky wrote:
Abyss' Normal
Sequencial of circles like 02:14:298 (4,5,6) - and 02:22:480 (2,3,4,5) - sounds really cool in kiai moment (patterns a bit more hard), but in moments like this 00:15:662 (2,3,4) - i think better you utilize more flow, for example you make in this form http://puu.sh/dablt/5b72a33003.png, the flow not is so "fine" to play, i recommend you make like this http://puu.sh/dabsD/5438b24da9.png, sounds pretty better to play ^^
in 00:25:207 (8) - i recommend you put in this form http://puu.sh/dabsD/5438b24da9.png hm i think no. i prefer this one beside, it'll ovelap if the circle aren't arranged nicely. sry
00:46:116 (5) - this can be a bit confuse for a novices, maybe this form sounds cool http://puu.sh/dabDq/8ebe334b65.png, when he look simmilar slides, he think is playable like this 01:54:753 (1,2) - ah sry no, cause there's reverse arrow.
01:08:616 (4) - in this form have better flow http://puu.sh/dabMf/22749c0c6d.png
I like the map, this instability rhythms gets quite dynamic, very fun and playable thanks for your mod!

Good luck in get this ranked ;D

Axarious wrote:
[General]
[Abyss' Normal]
OD4, AR5 i'll keep the AR sry cause, 5 too fast fir newbie i think
May want to look over some stacks, they can be confusing for a "Normal". i try to reduce it orz
00:15:889 (3,4) - Probably intentional, but (4) would look nicer if it was less curved and created a perfect blanket with (3). i try to figure something here.
00:25:889 (1) - Make the left and right side of this slider symmetrical.
00:31:798 (5,6) - (6) would look nicer if it had a smaller curve and blanketed nicely with (5).
00:35:889 (7,8,9) - Slider on (8), circle on (9).
00:50:435 (6,7,8) - Slider on (6) and (7), circle on (8).
01:09:525 (1,4) - Ctrl HJ (1) to make (4), (4) isn't the same as (1).
01:11:571 (1) - Make the top and bottom have the same length of curve.
01:16:571 (1) - Make the left and right side symmetrical.
01:39:525 (2,3) - Move (3) to x:165 y:196.
thanks for your mod!

i'm not replying it means, i done it without hesitation

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Kaguya Hourain

514 posts

Joined October 2012

Kaguya Hourain 2014-12-09T18:01:25+00:00

Hello o/

General

Make letterbox in breaks consistent in all difficulties (currently conflicts with Abyss' Normal)
Get someone to check the video offset I feel it might be a little late.

Easy

OD to 3 to match the AR
I would definitely avoid SV changes in easier difficulties. You should remove those x0,75 and turn them into x1.00 like everything else.
01:16:798 (1) - x:372 y:284 should play better because it follows the cursorpath after the previous slider. Don't forget to resnap!
01:43:162 (2,3) - These ones are not perfectly parallel, move 3's endpoint down a little bit.
01:49:525 (1,2) - Nice I like those :3
02:19:525 (2,3,4) - I wouldn't do that on the Easy actually. Try the reverse you do on the rest of the diff XD
Wow decent Easy me likey!

Abyss' Normal

AR and OD to 5
01:25:662 - I think you should start a 1/2 slider here because you're missing quite the strong vocal actually.
This is really nice bravo!

Hard

Don't be afraid of OD, raise it to 7 :3
00:16:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an issue occuring throughout the intro. The red tick clearly has more impact in the music than the the first two white ticks there. Sliders play pretty poorly when you go from a weak beat to a strong beat on the slider's end. This is why I suggest redoing the pattern like so:
box=kawaii~
00:20:889 (2,3,4,5) - See here you've done by yourself what I just now suggested. Doesn't this feel/play better than the previous one?
00:24:525 (2,3,4,5,6) - Here the slider should go on the red tick instead of where it is right now.
00:37:707 (4,5) - For the same reason I believe you should swap the order of these two objects in the timeline.
00:38:389 (1,2,3,4,5) - For the same reasons, I believe you should rearrange/remake this pattern like this:
so kawaii o:
01:28:389 (2) - Maybe turn this into two circles? Not feeling the slider there right.

Insane Collab

OD to 8 please /o/
00:17:480 (3,4) - A slider would be very nice here!
00:17:935 (5,6) - Not feeling the sliders here though, maybe make a cute small circlejump :3
00:20:889 (2,3) - Swap slider with circle for reasons I mentioned in Hard.
00:24:525 (2,3) - Same!
00:28:162 (2) - Two circles would play better I think.
00:48:616 (3,4) - Exchange positions here as well!
00:49:298 (5,6,7,8) - This here would definitely play better:
so kawaii stop being so cute already!
01:13:162 (1,2,3,4) - Try this here:
kawaii level over 9000
01:15:435 (2,3) - These would be very nice as circlejumps imo
01:20:094 (3,4) - I think you should skip the first blue tick and go slider > circle next.
01:28:389 (2) - Two circles would feel better here.
01:43:162 (2,3) - According to the music it would be better to go like this:
almost death to kawaii
Plus you fill a beat there!
01:44:980 - Add a circle there yo
01:45:662 - Here too yo~
02:24:753 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spaced jump should be at 4 not 5, fits the music better.
02:55:434 - Why do you have a kiai fountain there if it's not gonna be played anyway? Add a circle there.
02:58:162 (2,3) - This would be better off like so:
oh my god so close to dying
Just circles would also play nice!
03:01:798 (2) - Would make these two circles!
03:05:434 (1,2) - Same as last screenshot actually!
03:12:934 (3,4) - Same again lel
03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The space should come at 4 again, not 5.
This diff could use a lot of work still.

Cool song guys, good luck~

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2014-12-09T18:58:38+00:00

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Hello o/

General
Make letterbox in breaks consistent in all difficulties (currently conflicts with Abyss' Normal) ~okay fixed
Get someone to check the video offset I feel it might be a little late. ~i think its currently fine (look at the snap at 01:05:435 -)

Easy
OD to 3 to match the AR ~not really I lowered od cause ar is higher
I would definitely avoid SV changes in easier difficulties. You should remove those x0,75 and turn them into x1.00 like everything else. ~fineee .w.
01:16:798 (1) - x:372 y:284 should play better because it follows the cursorpath after the previous slider. Don't forget to resnap! ~then I have to change a lot and im sure i would end up returning the same pattern
01:43:162 (2,3) - These ones are not perfectly parallel, move 3's endpoint down a little bit. ~okay
01:49:525 (1,2) - Nice I like those :3 ~yaay
02:19:525 (2,3,4) - I wouldn't do that on the Easy actually. Try the reverse you do on the rest of the diff XD ~hmm maybe owo,, idk its just 130 bpm so i thought it would be possible
Wow decent Easy me likey! ~thanks *A*)/

Hard
Don't be afraid of OD, raise it to 7 :3 ~its already 7 wat
00:16:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is an issue occuring throughout the intro. The red tick clearly has more impact in the music than the the first two white ticks there. Sliders play pretty poorly when you go from a weak beat to a strong beat on the slider's end. This is why I suggest redoing the pattern like so:
box=kawaii~
~thats honestly the only part that did that owo.. still fixed i guess
00:20:889 (2,3,4,5) - See here you've done by yourself what I just now suggested. Doesn't this feel/play better than the previous one? ~i honestly randomly picked sliders/circles for the intro LOL
00:24:525 (2,3,4,5,6) - Here the slider should go on the red tick instead of where it is right now. ~I think this should be fine actually owo
00:37:707 (4,5) - For the same reason I believe you should swap the order of these two objects in the timeline. ~ehhh hmm not sure
00:38:389 (1,2,3,4,5) - For the same reasons, I believe you should rearrange/remake this pattern like this:
so kawaii o:
~this honestly plays bad now .w. I dontsee how the red ticks are actually stronger now
01:28:389 (2) - Maybe turn this into two circles? Not feeling the slider there right. ~I dont think it will improve then

Insane Collab
OD to 8 please /o/ ~okay
00:17:480 (3,4) - A slider would be very nice here! ~used circles here actually just to increase the difficulty
00:17:935 (5,6) - Not feeling the sliders here though, maybe make a cute small circlejump :3 ~LOL
00:20:889 (2,3) - Swap slider with circle for reasons I mentioned in Hard. ~actually i did this for the other instrumental in the background owo
00:24:525 (2,3) - Same! ~eh again with the difficulty thing, I dont know how I can change this without screwing this up or making something new out of it
00:28:162 (2) - Two circles would play better I think. ~imo would feel really awkward to play circles before a stream
00:48:616 (3,4) - Exchange positions here as well! ~I dont really agree with all those verse switches tho @A@
00:49:298 (5,6,7,8) - This here would definitely play better:
so kawaii stop being so cute already!
~ ^ sorry ;A;
01:13:162 (1,2,3,4) - Try this here: ~I think I prefer bashing the slider circle thing than the playability, this plays super awkward
kawaii level over 9000
01:15:435 (2,3) - These would be very nice as circlejumps imo ~sure i guess
01:20:094 (3,4) - I think you should skip the first blue tick and go slider > circle next. ~no it fits the song
01:28:389 (2) - Two circles would feel better here. ~ehhh
01:43:162 (2,3) - According to the music it would be better to go like this:
almost death to kawaii
Plus you fill a beat there! ~lul was just randomly following the music, ill consider
01:44:980 - Add a circle there yo ~illll conssiideer ;_;
01:45:662 - Here too yo~ ~aaa
02:24:753 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spaced jump should be at 4 not 5, fits the music better. ~hmm fixed the stream
02:55:434 - Why do you have a kiai fountain there if it's not gonna be played anyway? Add a circle there. ~hue forgot ot remove it
02:58:162 (2,3) - This would be better off like so:
oh my god so close to dying
Just circles would also play nice! ~slider is love slider is life (fixed)
03:01:798 (2) - Would make these two circles! ~errrrrrrrrr
03:05:434 (1,2) - Same as last screenshot actually! ~idk why but im feeling it so much less here owo
03:12:934 (3,4) - Same again lel ~eh (im sure youre talking about the 2nd slider but it fits designwise so much better)
03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The space should come at 4 again, not 5. ~okay
This diff could use a lot of work still. ~eh

Cool song guys, good luck~

eh the reason why insane is so clunky is cause I wanted to use as many different ways to play this diffs as possible, so thats why it might feel weird but it would feel more unique too :I but you were right at some points that they really didnt fit so I guess i did fix some

thaaaankkssss ><

blackabyss

494 posts

Joined November 2011

blackabyss 2014-12-10T03:53:24+00:00

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Hello o/ hiii

General
Make letterbox in breaks consistent in all difficulties (currently conflicts with Abyss' Normal) lol wut, okay fixed xD
Get someone to check the video offset I feel it might be a little late.

Abyss' Normal
AR and OD to 5 i'll increase the AR, but i won't do it for OD. since this is normal maps thou. sry
01:25:662 - I think you should start a 1/2 slider here because you're missing quite the strong vocal actually. okay owod
This is really nice bravo! lol, thanks btw!

Cool song guys, good luck~

thanks for your mod!

update

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RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-12-14T06:53:15+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

Romanised title: Higaimousou Keitai Joshi (Wara)
Although I'm not sure, I think "Kagamine Len" is unnecessary for tags
tags suggestion:
vocaloid
gumi
megupoid
if you don't intend to add SB additionally, "Display epilepsy warning" is unnecesssary, imo

[Easy]

00:26:798 (2,3) - avoid stack. that's confusing for beginner, imo
02:19:525 (2,3,4) - 1/2 triplet is a little difficult for easy. I recommend to change to reverse slider
02:44:980 (1,2) - 1/1 slider is better because 02:44:071 (2) - is hard to find rhythm

[Hard]

00:39:980 (5,1) - increase DS or add a note at 00:40:435- . confuse with jump pattern, imo
00:59:071- add a note for following vocal
01:27:139 (1) - how about decreasing SV?
01:44:980- add a note
02:01:344 (3) - i prefer circle x2 like 02:04:980 (3,4,5) -
03:13:389 (4,5,6) - this jump is unnecessary, imo

[Insane Collab]
SkyDevil's part

01:44:980- add a note
01:49:866 (2) - I prefer to delete

Teru21's part

00:35:662 (8,9) - not good overlapping since reverse is hard to see
00:58:616 (1,2,1) - hard to play since DS is too different...

[Abyss' Normal]

add "Letterbox during breaks" in the same way as other diffs
01:26:798 (8) - since there is 1/4 rhythm sound at 01:27:139, I suggest to avoid mapping at this part
how about this?

awesome mapping! star for you~☆
~Good Luck~

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2014-12-14T11:57:04+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
Romanised title: Higaimousou Keitai Joshi (Wara) ~not 100% sure about this so ill keep it
Although I'm not sure, I think "Kagamine Len" is unnecessary for tags ~yea should remove it .w.
tags suggestion:
vocaloid
gumi
megupoid ~okay
if you don't intend to add SB additionally, "Display epilepsy warning" is unnecesssary, imo ~eh, the video is still super flashy though, so it still kinda fits
[Easy]
00:26:798 (2,3) - avoid stack. that's confusing for beginner, imo ~hmmmmm ill consider maybe
02:19:525 (2,3,4) - 1/2 triplet is a little difficult for easy. I recommend to change to reverse slider ~hmm okay
02:44:980 (1,2) - 1/1 slider is better because 02:44:071 (2) - is hard to find rhythm ~kaykay
[Hard]
00:39:980 (5,1) - increase DS or add a note at 00:40:435- . confuse with jump pattern, imo ~okay
00:59:071- add a note for following vocal ~errrrr I purposelly mapped it like that just to change the rhythm a lttle bit
01:27:139 (1) - how about decreasing SV? ~i dont see why :<
01:44:980- add a note ~ ehh was following instrumentals
02:01:344 (3) - i prefer circle x2 like 02:04:980 (3,4,5) - ~wanted to do something little different for now, guess ill consider later
03:13:389 (4,5,6) - this jump is unnecessary, imo ~errr i did it like that in other parts too so I prefer to keep it ;-;

[Insane Collab]
SkyDevil's part
01:44:980- add a note ~same as with hard owo
01:49:866 (2) - I prefer to delete ~just did that to keep up with the super autotune *A*)/
Teru21's part
00:35:662 (8,9) - not good overlapping since reverse is hard to see ~kaykay
00:58:616 (1,2,1) - hard to play since DS is too different... ~due to the fast AR its pretty possible imo
awesome mapping! star for you~☆ ~thanks *A*)/
~Good Luck~

thanks for the mooodddd

BTW blackabyss can you like redownload the map? ;_; everytime I receive your diff I have to set the video offset again

LexiaLovesU

822 posts

Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 2014-12-20T07:25:39+00:00

Mod from queue

Key:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = Highly Suggested

General

Pure White Combo color is Unrankable Your Dark Green blends in really well with the video it really hard to see it at times I suggest you make the shade a bit lighter so that the approach circle is visible
add an _ between giga p since search doesn't search any thing that is less than 3 letters so it should be "giga_p"Remove higai from tags it already in the title even if it isn't spaced in the title searching higai will still make it show up
you have audio on your video
The Normal doesn't have letter in box and epilepsy warning like the other diffs do so make it consistent and add them here

Easy

Make the OD 2 instead of one for a m
ore even spread between the easy and normal since 2>4 fits better
00:18:616 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 is pretty weird since you made 1 flow away from 2's placement which is placed completely opposite of 1's flow this make the flow very unnatural to play I suggest you make 1 flow towards 2 instead
00:24:980 (4) - The flow is odd since you made it flow away from the next note its quite odd to go upward while you made it flow downwards I suggest doing
something like this so the flow is better
00:26:798 (2,3) - 1/2 stacking in easy is too hard for noobs first 1/2s in easy aren't the best decision they are fast for noobs second stacking is hard for noobs to read. I highly suggest you don't do this instead try this rhythm
00:33:844 (2) - remove this 1/2 note that is too hard to hit in easy since you have to hit the 1/2 circle and then hit the slider which is 1/2 away its too many 1/2
00:35:889 (5) - make this flow towards the next note for a better more natural flow
00:45:435 (2) - The placement of this note is odd the flow I feel like there it too many sliders going in the shape and flow its getting too repetitive why don't you make the slider go like this instead to provide more variation
00:48:616 (2) - Make this point towards 3 for more natural flow owo
00:49:525 (3,4) - The flow between these 2 is pretty weird since you made 3 flow away from 4's placement which is placed completely opposite of 3's flow this makes the flow very unnatural to play I suggest you make 3 flow towards 4 instead
00:57:707 (4) - move this just a little its so close to overlapping with 2 XD
01:12:707 (4) - This ends on a strong note and a finish is placed there it odd to not hit when there is a finish on the note since such strong notes should be clicked to properly emphasize the stanza maybe try this rhythm instead
01:18:616 (3,4) - Placement is odd between these 2 why don't you try something like this so that it looks better
01:20:435 - you forgot to add a finish keep consistency with your pattern
01:22:253 (2,3) - Move 3 a bit so that they have symmetrical placing as of now they are symmetrical and it doesn't look very good
01:31:344 (1,2,3) - Same reason as the previous pattern like this
01:34:071 (5) - Make this point towards the net note more for a better more natural flow
01:41:344 (5) - Same as above
01:45:207 (4) - I don't suggest kick sliders in Easy they are too abrupt for the flow. the start abruptly and end abruptly it just makes odd and unnatural flow
01:59:525 (3) - maybe do this placement it flows a bit better I personally think it looks better aswell
02:04:071 - Forgot a Finish here it sounds nice owo
02:06:798 (5) - Make this point towards the next note for a more natural flow between them
02:18:616 - Forgot a Finish here it sounds nice here
02:22:253 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 is pretty weird since you made 1 flow away from 2's placement which is placed completely opposite of 1's flow this make the flow very unnatural to play I suggest you make 1 flow towards 2 instead
03:03:162 (1) - Finish on head it sounds nice also 03:03:162 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 is odd I said the reason enough already so just try making 1 flow towards 2 more for better flow
03:17:707 (1) - Finish on the head
03:24:980 (1) - Same as above
03:31:798 (1) - Remove the NC here its just gonna confuse the noobs

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2014-12-22T23:47:21+00:00

holy shit somehow i didnt see this till now will look at it later owo

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2014-12-23T00:16:03+00:00

LexiaLovesU wrote:
Mod from queue

Key:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = Highly Suggested

General
Pure White Combo color is Unrankable Your Dark Green blends in really well with the video it really hard to see it at times I suggest you make the shade a bit lighter so that the approach circle is visible ~90% white incoming, also I was thinking that that green was waayy too dark too..
add an _ between giga p since search doesn't search any thing that is less than 3 letters so it should be "giga_p"Remove higai from tags it already in the title even if it isn't spaced in the title searching higai will still make it show up ~done both
you have audio on your video ~idk how to remove it ;_;
The Normal doesn't have letter in box and epilepsy warning like the other diffs do so make it consistent and add them here ~fix

Easy
Make the OD 2 instead of one for a more even spread between the easy and normal since 2>4 fits better ~~okaaay
00:18:616 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 is pretty weird since you made 1 flow away from 2's placement which is placed completely opposite of 1's flow this make the flow very unnatural to play I suggest you make 1 flow towards 2 instead ~
00:24:980 (4) - The flow is odd since you made it flow away from the next note its quite odd to go upward while you made it flow downwards I suggest doing
something like this so the flow is better
~there isnt anything in the box.. but i guess ill try to make it something else
00:26:798 (2,3) - 1/2 stacking in easy is too hard for noobs first 1/2s in easy aren't the best decision they are fast for noobs second stacking is hard for noobs to read. I highly suggest you don't do this instead try this rhythm
~did something that looked like this
00:33:844 (2) - remove this 1/2 note that is too hard to hit in easy since you have to hit the 1/2 circle and then hit the slider which is 1/2 away its too many 1/2 ~im almost 100% sure they can get around this (especially since beginners are more enthusiast)
00:35:889 (5) - make this flow towards the next note for a better more natural flow ~oki
00:45:435 (2) - The placement of this note is odd the flow I feel like there it too many sliders going in the shape and flow its getting too repetitive why don't you make the slider go like this instead to provide more variation
~ehh then i get shittie blanket problems, its just 2 sliders so its not that repetitive
00:48:616 (2) - Make this point towards 3 for more natural flow owo ~fixx
00:49:525 (3,4) - The flow between these 2 is pretty weird since you made 3 flow away from 4's placement which is placed completely opposite of 3's flow this makes the flow very unnatural to play I suggest you make 3 flow towards 4 instead ~errr tried to change
00:57:707 (4) - move this just a little its so close to overlapping with 2 XD ~LOL SO NAZI fixed ok c:
01:12:707 (4) - This ends on a strong note and a finish is placed there it odd to not hit when there is a finish on the note since such strong notes should be clicked to properly emphasize the stanza maybe try this rhythm instead
~hmm idk how i feel about this, it would play super awkward then and it would look god awful, I will consider changing it maybe
01:18:616 (3,4) - Placement is odd between these 2 why don't you try something like this so that it looks better
~kaykay
01:20:435 - you forgot to add a finish keep consistency with your pattern ~okay
01:22:253 (2,3) - Move 3 a bit so that they have symmetrical placing as of now they are symmetrical and it doesn't look very good ~ I had to change this whole thing cause of the 2,3 placement you mentioned above ;_;
01:31:344 (1,2,3) - Same reason as the previous pattern like this ~eh
01:34:071 (5) - Make this point towards the net note more for a better more natural flow ~ok
01:41:344 (5) - Same as above ~^
01:45:207 (4) - I don't suggest kick sliders in Easy they are too abrupt for the flow. the start abruptly and end abruptly it just makes odd and unnatural flow ~hmm I see, fixed
01:59:525 (3) - maybe do this placement it flows a bit better I personally think it looks better aswell
~oki
02:04:071 - Forgot a Finish here it sounds nice owo ~yep
02:06:798 (5) - Make this point towards the next note for a more natural flow between them ~added
02:18:616 - Forgot a Finish here it sounds nice here ~mhm (I should hide things that i fixed/added this is so annoying to do xD)
02:22:253 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 is pretty weird since you made 1 flow away from 2's placement which is placed completely opposite of 1's flow this make the flow very unnatural to play I suggest you make 1 flow towards 2 instead ~hmm I honestly think i should keep this, i kinda did this on purpose
03:03:162 (1) - Finish on head it sounds nice also 03:03:162 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 is odd I said the reason enough already so just try making 1 flow towards 2 more for better flow ~LOL kkkkkkkkkkk
03:17:707 (1) - Finish on the head ~mhm
03:24:980 (1) - Same as above ~^
03:31:798 (1) - Remove the NC here its just gonna confuse the noobs ~at least it looks nice ok

thaanksssss

Moecho

267 posts

Joined October 2014

Moecho 2014-12-26T16:03:38+00:00

[General]

Video is a bit late? Feels like that owo
I recommend to adapt combo colours to the video that plays in the background.

[Abyss' Normal]

00:15:662 (2,3) - This flow feels awkward. Adjust it so it goes more in line instead of being so close on the X-axle.
00:17:025 (5) - NC
00:20:662 (4) - NC
00:24:298 (5) - NC and so on, break combo every 4 big ticks, they are too long in normal atm. 2-4 Combo count usually is enough for Normal.
00:26:571 (2) - Move it to (242,231) to blanket more properly.
00:27:025 (3) - Move to (146,337) if you changed the one above to get consistant distastance snapping.
00:27:935 (4,5,6) - Distance between these are a bit closer than it should be.
00:50:435 (6) - Move to (88,168) which is same spot as 00:48:616 (2).
00:50:889 (7) - Move this to (87,306) if you did the above.
01:04:071 (3) - Remove note, it's not necessary to put there and since you changed sound sample to Normal there it sounds really strange.
What I recommend for the above is that you remove 01:02:707 (1,2) - these two notes as well and use a spinner there. The spinner starts at 01:02:480 and ends at 01:04:071, and mute the sound at the end.
02:47:707 (4,1) - Blanket.
03:13:616 (5,1) - This doesn't look like it's properly done blanketing.
03:20:207 (3,4,5,6) - This part can be extremely hard to read for Normal players.

[Insane]

01:10:207 (2,3,4,5,1) - You could change the arrangement here to make it into a perfect star pattern here.
01:13:844 (2,3) - The big space in between makes it feel wierd. Suggestion is to make it closer so there's higher chance a player will be able to read it better.
01:20:094 (3,4) - Slider on blue tick here is not fitting well at all when playing(at least what I think). I'm not sure what to do here since the music is so distorted here, but the current rhythm does not fit and will probably not be approved by QAT.
01:27:139 (1,2,1) - AR 8 + this rhythm placement is not very well. You could use a slider to cover that part up instead.
01:28:389 (2,3,4,2,3,1,2,3) - Slider on red tick here does not fit well at all as there is no proper sound which makes it comfortable to click at a red rhythm. Change arrangement on timeline to make them start on a white tick please.
01:38:616 - Don't skip to place note here as there is a quite loud sound here.
01:44:071 - Don't skip.
01:44:980 - Don't skip.
01:50:548 (6) - This note actually has no sound that support it and it doesn't fit well here.
01:50:321 (4,7) - As for these two, they do have a support of some kind of click sound in the music but if you can't come up with a good rhythm pattern here, then it's fine to remove them since sound that supports them is not that loud.
01:53:844 (2) - Slider on red tick that doesn't fit.
02:25:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - This big space here doesn't feel good at all.
03:23:843 (3,4,5) - Same as above.
03:29:980 (3,4,5,6) - This was really confusing, might by high chance not be approved by QAT(not approved by me either)

If you didn't understand something, please ask me! Good luck~

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2014-12-26T23:18:05+00:00

So 4 months later I had to check this back.... lol. Let's see if I can do better work now.
From my modding queue.~

[General]

The audiobitrate of your .mp3 is too high, have someone convert it for you.
The video offset seems to be a bit late, please check that.
Delete 'giga_p' from your tags, that's just a duplicate of what you already have.
Let's hope that white CC isn't too blending...

[Easy]

00:26:798 (2,3) - Not sure about the sudden polarity change (from white to red) here, feels kind of odd to play. How about: http://puu.sh/dKqMg/c3aef59538.jpg
01:40:435 (4,5,1) - Spacing's slightly off here. Same at 02:06:344 (4,5,1) -
03:00:889 (2,3) - Uh... 1/2 beat tapping in an easy diff? Better change that by 02:59:980 (1,2) - ctrl+g'ing these and reposition.
03:14:980 (3,4,5) - Check the spacing here again.
03:21:344 (1) - The repeat should end at 03:22:707 - already, which has a stronger representation in the music than the vocal you're aiming at here.
Also set a beat at 03:24:525 - if you do so.
03:24:980 (1,2) - 03:28:616 (1,2) - Urgh, i don't know, these don't go well with the music, as the 2-sliders start on beats that are barely noticeable in the music and you miss out the important downbeats.
How about this rhythm pattern for both of them: http://puu.sh/dKqsC/0cfea6cf21.jpg .
03:16:798 (5,1) - Blanket really off, fix.
Okay diff. This song has really strong beats, so i don't know why you had to use so many sliders >< Circles put much better emphasis than sliders on these notes, so mb take care of that in future.

[Abyss' Normal]

First things first: This map could be made easier for a better spread and has some poor rhythm decisions. Make less usage of 1/2 beattaps and lowering the pressure by switching circles with sliders.
Just to give a few examples and suggestions:
1. 00:20:662 (4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/dKsNV/15b3981806.jpg
2. 00:24:753 (6,7) - Into a slider
3. 01:06:571 (2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/dKtsv/b5f4ebcf55.jpg
00:56:798 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm feels awkward because of the 3 offbeat sliders that don't go well with the music. Suggestion: http://puu.sh/dKt3N/39fe03a4b9.jpg
01:01:798 (4) - Bad offbeat slider and I feel the rhythm plays a bit dull here. How about: http://puu.sh/dKtcP/1c17df6dfe.jpg
01:02:253 (1,2,3) - Could merge into a big slider with some nice sliderart: http://puu.sh/dKtjK/796451c827.jpg (anchors lie on the ticks that go with the music). Just an idea. :p
01:32:253 (2,3) - Switch into a backslider for lower pressure.
01:43:844 - This gap feels wrong to be left out for the strong beat it has. Try: http://puu.sh/dKvlE/385d207802.jpg
01:48:389 (8) - Enlarge to the red tick.
02:22:480 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too difficult for a normal, try: http://puu.sh/dKvyN/30782e3f80.jpg
Not much more I want to say for now, it's okay. Pressure is too high at times in my opinion for a normal because of constant 1/2 beats. Structure could be better.

[Hard]

00:27:935 (6,7,8) - Weird spacing, make it equal.
00:37:253 (3,4,5) - ^
00:46:798 (4,5) - Ctrl+g, spacing between 3-4 is unreasonable compared to 4-5 because of the vocal jump.
00:52:025 (3) - Weird offbeat slider that doesn't go with the vocal, ctrl+g'ing 00:52:025 (3,4) - these and reposition them works.
00:53:616 (3,4,5) - Again, weird spacing.
00:58:616 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is pretty much chopped off and you miss out way too many beats. Are you following vocals, instruments, both?
Here's a suggestion for the latter: http://puu.sh/dKwdJ/8839f998c9.jpg
01:54:753 (1,2,3,4) - I highly doubt this pattern works well here even though it looks nice. There's four offbeat (passive) sliders in a row that just feel plain awkward to play due to the natura of offbeat sliders feeling...well...off.
This one should feel more natural to play: http://puu.sh/dKxmI/1a5cc49254.jpg . I think this is what some would call 'ideal mapping', but this is up to you.
02:06:571 (3,4,5,6) - The jump between 3-4 is unreasonable tbh, there's no clear indiccator in the music for this to happen.
02:08:162 (2,3,4,1) - I don't believe this section is so intense that you had to increase the DS to such an extent.
02:14:980 (1,2) - What indicator in the music do you use to make a jump here? I think it's better if you nerf the spacing at this point.
02:17:935 (5,6) - Are you sure you need a jump here? The last one was pretty high already. Same at 02:22:935 (3,4,5,6) - between 5-6
02:21:344 (3,4,1) - Jump between 4-1 is more reasonable.
02:55:434 - Set a beat here.
Okay. There are some spacing decisions I don't really get and overall, Structure and flow are much more improvable.

[Insane Collab]

I might take a look at this later, but I'm not able to testplay it for now to give good suggestions. :c
On first sight it should be fine, structure and flow is always improvable and there were some patterns i wouldn't recommend (like 00:40:435 (1,2,3,4) - , that pretty much rapes the flow and don't reflect the song well either).
The SV changes between kiai and non-kiai parts is pretty much over the top (0.50x difference wow), i wouldn't go higher than 1.20x for the kiai. I don't even believe the song support such high SV in the kiai, so please fix this up.

This set still needs more polishment. Probably got tired of hearing this, but you should still get more mods for this one.
If you have to wait for another 4 months, call me up again (hopefully, it won't take that long for this set to get ranked lol). Until then, good luck! /o/

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2014-12-27T01:24:47+00:00

Moecho wrote:
[General]
Video is a bit late? Feels like that owo ~eh ;A; it feels correct for me
I recommend to adapt combo colours to the video that plays in the background. ~then it would only be black and white, so I added green to it .w.
[Insane]
01:10:207 (2,3,4,5,1) - You could change the arrangement here to make it into a perfect star pattern here. ~it wasnt supposed to be a star pattern though
01:13:844 (2,3) - The big space in between makes it feel wierd. Suggestion is to make it closer so there's higher chance a player will be able to read it better. ~imo its currently very readable
01:20:094 (3,4) - Slider on blue tick here is not fitting well at all when playing(at least what I think). I'm not sure what to do here since the music is so distorted here, but the current rhythm does not fit and will probably not be approved by QAT. ~I changed it to start on the white tick ok
01:27:139 (1,2,1) - AR 8 + this rhythm placement is not very well. You could use a slider to cover that part up instead. ~I honestly mainly did this for replayability cause people will be able to do it right on the 2nd/3rd try or so, also people who know the song probably can do thsi properly
01:28:389 (2,3,4,2,3,1,2,3) - Slider on red tick here does not fit well at all as there is no proper sound which makes it comfortable to click at a red rhythm. Change arrangement on timeline to make them start on a white tick please. ~kk
01:38:616 - Don't skip to place note here as there is a quite loud sound here. ~hmm okay
01:44:071 - Don't skip. ~did on purpose, wanted to follow instrumentals
01:44:980 - Don't skip. ~^
01:50:548 (6) - This note actually has no sound that support it and it doesn't fit well here. ~^, eh I mainly did that because this is the only part where the autotune of wotamin became very obvious
01:50:321 (4,7) - As for these two, they do have a support of some kind of click sound in the music but if you can't come up with a good rhythm pattern here, then it's fine to remove them since sound that supports them is not that loud. ~^
01:53:844 (2) - Slider on red tick that doesn't fit. ~oki
02:25:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - This big space here doesn't feel good at all. ~./does something else with it
03:23:843 (3,4,5) - Same as above. ~err ill keep it for now, already changed this one multiple times and it feels like its better if I wait for more ppl to mention it
03:29:980 (3,4,5,6) - This was really confusing, might by high chance not be approved by QAT(not approved by me either)~changed
If you didn't understand something, please ask me! Good luck~

Pho wrote:
So 4 months later I had to check this back.... lol. Let's see if I can do better work now.
From my modding queue.~

[General]
The audiobitrate of your .mp3 is too high, have someone convert it for you. ~its 192kbps, thats accepted right
The video offset seems to be a bit late, please check that. ~.. i dont see whats wrong but everyone keeps mentioning it ;A;)/ ill just move add -50
Delete 'giga_p' from your tags, that's just a duplicate of what you already have. ~kaykay
Let's hope that white CC isn't too blending... ~its greyish ;_; its pretty readable imo
[Easy]
00:26:798 (2,3) - Not sure about the sudden polarity change (from white to red) here, feels kind of odd to play. How about: http://puu.sh/dKqMg/c3aef59538.jpg ~hmm I currently think its fine though, it doesnt feel too awkward (fits the music) and shouldnt be too hard since it still ahs a 1/1 spacing
01:40:435 (4,5,1) - Spacing's slightly off here. Same at 02:06:344 (4,5,1) - ~LOL ok
03:00:889 (2,3) - Uh... 1/2 beat tapping in an easy diff? Better change that by 02:59:980 (1,2) - ctrl+g'ing these and reposition. ~okay
03:14:980 (3,4,5) - Check the spacing here again. ~holy shit how did this happen, fixed
03:21:344 (1) - The repeat should end at 03:22:707 - already, which has a stronger representation in the music than the vocal you're aiming at here.
Also set a beat at 03:24:525 - if you do so. ~personally feels worse to me, dontknow why, maybe because i follow the vocals all the time
03:24:980 (1,2) - 03:28:616 (1,2) - Urgh, i don't know, these don't go well with the music, as the 2-sliders start on beats that are barely noticeable in the music and you miss out the important downbeats.
How about this rhythm pattern for both of them: http://puu.sh/dKqsC/0cfea6cf21.jpg . ~kaykay
03:16:798 (5,1) - Blanket really off, fix. ~hmm tried to fix?
Okay diff. This song has really strong beats, so i don't know why you had to use so many sliders >< Circles put much better emphasis than sliders on these notes, so mb take care of that in future. ~er honestly because sliders are easier to play for beginners than circletapping LOL
[Hard]
00:27:935 (6,7,8) - Weird spacing, make it equal. ~lol whoops
00:37:253 (3,4,5) - ^ ~aaaa
00:46:798 (4,5) - Ctrl+g, spacing between 3-4 is unreasonable compared to 4-5 because of the vocal jump. ~seems playable yet not that unexpected,, ill keep it for now
00:52:025 (3) - Weird offbeat slider that doesn't go with the vocal, ctrl+g'ing 00:52:025 (3,4) - these and reposition them works. ~oki
00:53:616 (3,4,5) - Again, weird spacing. ~did on purpose, just random jump to keep the difficulty high
00:58:616 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The rhythm here is pretty much chopped off and you miss out way too many beats. Are you following vocals, instruments, both?
Here's a suggestion for the latter: http://puu.sh/dKwdJ/8839f998c9.jpg ~just random rhythm, but I guess i should change it
01:54:753 (1,2,3,4) - I highly doubt this pattern works well here even though it looks nice. There's four offbeat (passive) sliders in a row that just feel plain awkward to play due to the natura of offbeat sliders feeling...well...off.
This one should feel more natural to play: http://puu.sh/dKxmI/1a5cc49254.jpg . I think this is what some would call 'ideal mapping', but this is up to you. ~somewhat changed it
02:06:571 (3,4,5,6) - The jump between 3-4 is unreasonable tbh, there's no clear indiccator in the music for this to happen. ~errrr I did this all the time tho,, keep it for now
02:08:162 (2,3,4,1) - I don't believe this section is so intense that you had to increase the DS to such an extent. ~changed them to all 1.50x
02:14:980 (1,2) - What indicator in the music do you use to make a jump here? I think it's better if you nerf the spacing at this point. ~fine changed to something normal =3=)/
02:17:935 (5,6) - Are you sure you need a jump here? The last one was pretty high already. Same at 02:22:935 (3,4,5,6) - between 5-6 ~nope this is 100% fine, the diff isnt that hard actually
02:21:344 (3,4,1) - Jump between 4-1 is more reasonable. ~okay
02:55:434 - Set a beat here. ~no *A*)/ this is just a personal preference honestly
Okay. There are some spacing decisions I don't really get and overall, Structure and flow are much more improvable. ~eh
[Insane Collab]
I might take a look at this later, but I'm not able to testplay it for now to give good suggestions. :c
On first sight it should be fine, structure and flow is always improvable and there were some patterns i wouldn't recommend (like 00:40:435 (1,2,3,4) - , that pretty much rapes the flow and don't reflect the song well either). ~eh at least it looks nice ok, this diff is kinda fumbled i guess
The SV changes between kiai and non-kiai parts is pretty much over the top (0.50x difference wow), i wouldn't go higher than 1.20x for the kiai. I don't even believe the song support such high SV in the kiai, so please fix this up. ~this honestly shouldnt be troubling .w. it doesntfeel horrible and is still easily playable (seen enough people dt'ing it with an A rank first try) probably the last thing that im gonna do is remap the whole thing in 1.20x spacing (really is 1.50x that much owo...)
This set still needs more polishment. Probably got tired of hearing this, but you should still get more mods for this one. ~its so hard to find modders .w.
If you have to wait for another 4 months, call me up again (hopefully, it won't take that long for this set to get ranked lol). Until then, good luck! /o/

thaankss both *A*)/

Moecho

267 posts

Joined October 2014

Moecho 2014-12-27T20:02:00+00:00

SkyDevil wrote:
Moecho wrote:
[General]
Video is a bit late? Feels like that owo ~eh ;A; it feels correct for me
I recommend to adapt combo colours to the video that plays in the background. ~then it would only be black and white, so I added green to it .w. I mean to adapt combo colors to the video, not that the colors are wrong.
[Insane]
01:10:207 (2,3,4,5,1) - You could change the arrangement here to make it into a perfect star pattern here. ~it wasnt supposed to be a star pattern though Would look better with a star pattern.
01:13:844 (2,3) - The big space in between makes it feel wierd. Suggestion is to make it closer so there's higher chance a player will be able to read it better. ~imo its currently very readable
01:20:094 (3,4) - Slider on blue tick here is not fitting well at all when playing(at least what I think). I'm not sure what to do here since the music is so distorted here, but the current rhythm does not fit and will probably not be approved by QAT. ~I changed it to start on the white tick ok
01:27:139 (1,2,1) - AR 8 + this rhythm placement is not very well. You could use a slider to cover that part up instead. ~I honestly mainly did this for replayability cause people will be able to do it right on the 2nd/3rd try or so, also people who know the song probably can do thsi properly
01:28:389 (2,3,4,2,3,1,2,3) - Slider on red tick here does not fit well at all as there is no proper sound which makes it comfortable to click at a red rhythm. Change arrangement on timeline to make them start on a white tick please. ~kk
01:38:616 - Don't skip to place note here as there is a quite loud sound here. ~hmm okay
01:44:071 - Don't skip. ~did on purpose, wanted to follow instrumentals
01:44:980 - Don't skip. ~^
01:50:548 (6) - This note actually has no sound that support it and it doesn't fit well here. ~^, eh I mainly did that because this is the only part where the autotune of wotamin became very obvious Be afraid of QATs ;w;
01:50:321 (4,7) - As for these two, they do have a support of some kind of click sound in the music but if you can't come up with a good rhythm pattern here, then it's fine to remove them since sound that supports them is not that loud. ~^
01:53:844 (2) - Slider on red tick that doesn't fit. ~oki
02:25:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - This big space here doesn't feel good at all. ~./does something else with it
03:23:843 (3,4,5) - Same as above. ~err ill keep it for now, already changed this one multiple times and it feels like its better if I wait for more ppl to mention it
03:29:980 (3,4,5,6) - This was really confusing, might by high chance not be approved by QAT(not approved by me either)~changed
If you didn't understand something, please ask me! Good luck~
thaankss both *A*)/

- Milhofo -

683 posts

Joined February 2014

- Milhofo - 2014-12-28T13:20:58+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue

Quick note, my "~"s mean "around"

[General]

Nice video, nice background and nice map :3

[Abyss' Normal]

00:32:025 (6) - curve a bit more
00:56:798 (1) - keep same combo
01:00:435 (1) - ^
03:27:480 (5,6) - blanket?
Overall I think you could reduce the combos in every chorus by half, meaning start be removing the 2nd NC of each chorus and 1 combo every 2 combos after that. (just a suggestion ofc)
I didn't find much on this diff, sumimasen

[Hard]

00:28:844 (8) - ctrl + g?
00:32:025 (3,4) - idk if this is supposed to be a blanket, but it should be :b
01:32:934 (1,2) - blanket?
01:36:343 (5,1) - ^
02:04:980 (3,4,5) - notes should be in the same vector as slider, or slider in the same vector as notes:
SPOILER
Overall you have 2 types of triples, 1 type with 3 notes (or 2 notes 1 slider) and the other with a kick slider and the last note/slider, but imo you're separating them too much. What I mean is that there's a whole part where you use only one type and then you only change the triple type wayyy later in the song, imo you could alternate between both types more, so this is not so noticeble. (sorry about the big text c: )

[Insane Collab]

00:35:662 (8) - a bit to close to 6, move to ~ x:152 y:40
00:36:116 (9) - match y coordinate with 8 if changed
00:39:753 (9) - move to ~ x:298 y:39 to keep flow
00:40:435 (1) - this beeing an overlap fits the song, but imo it doesn't need to overlap this much, maybe move to the left? Example where I also rotated it:
SPOILER
00:47:707 (1) - ^ but in this case I would ctrl + j (if it breaks flow I would only move it to the left)
01:13:844 (2,3) - this is too sudden, imo distance should be shortened
01:20:889 (1) - why not keep this same combo as previous note?
01:24:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - this combo seems correct, you should make the above point the same as this
01:51:685 (4) - move to ~ x:296 y:140? this is the only spot where you make this triple this way
02:07:480 (3,4) - increase distance? to your discretion
02:09:298 (1,2) - ^
02:24:753 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - this is so hard ; ; idk if a lot of people can do this flawlessly, but imo the distance between streams (even though it's all the same stream) is too big
02:26:116 - 15 second break feels a big long, maybe map the part from 02:33:162 by following the beat? spaced notes/sliders still let the player rest
03:10:207 (5) - ctrl + j and move to same position?
03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same point I made above, the first one is the only one I consider do-able because we have more time to read it

My mod seems so small D: I'm still a noob, hope it helps though

have my star!

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2014-12-28T15:28:15+00:00

Milhofo wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue

Quick note, my "~"s mean "around"

[General]
Nice video, nice background and nice map :3
[Hard]
00:28:844 (8) - ctrl + g? ~ehh i prefer it the way it currently is
00:32:025 (3,4) - idk if this is supposed to be a blanket, but it should be :b ~lool okay
01:32:934 (1,2) - blanket? ~then the jump would be killed
01:36:343 (5,1) - ^ ~ ~not everything is a blanket ;A;
02:04:980 (3,4,5) - notes should be in the same vector as slider, or slider in the same vector as notes:
SPOILER
~i see fixed owo
Overall you have 2 types of triples, 1 type with 3 notes (or 2 notes 1 slider) and the other with a kick slider and the last note/slider, but imo you're separating them too much. What I mean is that there's a whole part where you use only one type and then you only change the triple type wayyy later in the song, imo you could alternate between both types more, so this is not so noticeble. (sorry about the big text c: ) ~eh ;A;)/ I dont see it as a big problem though
[Insane Collab]
00:35:662 (8) - a bit to close to 6, move to ~ x:152 y:40 ~its actually the big sliders that isnt 100% symmetric, so i changed it
00:36:116 (9) - match y coordinate with 8 if changed ~^
00:39:753 (9) - move to ~ x:298 y:39 to keep flow ~it supposed to be there to confuse you a little bit :I
00:40:435 (1) - this beeing an overlap fits the song, but imo it doesn't need to overlap this much, maybe move to the left? Example where I also rotated it:
SPOILER
~ehh its the mapping style, this was done multiple times in the verse so it fits
00:47:707 (1) - ^ but in this case I would ctrl + j (if it breaks flow I would only move it to the left) ~wat
01:13:844 (2,3) - this is too sudden, imo distance should be shortened ~ and you just suggested above here a 5.00x spacing lol... its just 1.50x not that bad
01:20:889 (1) - why not keep this same combo as previous note? ~didnt see that whoops
01:24:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - this combo seems correct, you should make the above point the same as this ~ yeayeayea
01:51:685 (4) - move to ~ x:296 y:140? this is the only spot where you make this triple this way ~okay
02:07:480 (3,4) - increase distance? to your discretion ~./tries something
02:09:298 (1,2) - ^ ~^
02:24:753 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - this is so hard ; ; idk if a lot of people can do this flawlessly, but imo the distance between streams (even though it's all the same stream) is too big ~ill change it
02:26:116 - 15 second break feels a big long, maybe map the part from 02:33:162 by following the beat? spaced notes/sliders still let the player rest ~its the only big break in the song D:
03:10:207 (5) - ctrl + j and move to same position? ~ehhh I think it looks better now
03:23:843 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same point I made above, the first one is the only one I consider do-able because we have more time to read it ~ehh ill do something else with this as well
My mod seems so small D: I'm still a noob, hope it helps though have my star!

thanks *A*)/

and to the other modder meh ;_; adapting combo colors wouldjust be not using white in the verse and not black in the refrain dont see much difference then .w. and the other 2 points,, mehhh ill see ok

polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2014-12-31T02:33:26+00:00

Request from my modding queue!

Normal:

00:17:025 NC

00:18:616 This shape is kind of strange and a bit unsightly, in my opinion. I think a simple curve will work here.

00:19:753 Try curving this in the other direction to help with the flow.

00:20:662 NC

00:23:389 Try curving this in the other direction to help with the flow

00:24:298 NC

00:26:571 (1) (2) Get (1)'s curve to blanket (2).

00:27:025 Move this to x:108 y:292. It will look neater.

00:27:935 NC

00:31:116 NC

00:32:025 This slider should blanket the circle.

00:32:707 This curve looks a little flat... Maybe curve it more?

00:34:753 A pattern like this would work better.

00:34:753 NC

00:38:844 NC

00:41:571 I don't like this curve, personally... Maybe curve it to fit with the direction of the flow?

00:42:025 NC

00:42:025 I think this will work better than what you have.

00:45:662 NC

00:45:662 I think this will work better than what you have.

00:49:298^

00:50:207 NC

01:13:162 Curve this the other way if you want better flow.

01:19:980^

01:26:798^

01:27:253 I believe Kiai Time should last to this point.

01:29:298 NC

01:30:889 Curve this the other way for better flow

01:32:935 NC

01:37:025 NC

01:37:935 (6) (7) get (7) to blanket (6).

01:40:207 NC

01:43:844 to better match the song, place a circle here.

01:46:571^

01:46:798 NC

01:55:889 NC

01:56:798 The slider ending here is really bad. On this beat, it should be either a circle or the start of a slider, because this is a very important beat.

02:13:844 NC

02:22:025 No NC

02:22:480 NC

03:05:889 Curve this in the direction of the flow.

03:06:571 No NC

03:07:253 NC

Hard:

00:20:207 (1) (2) This needs to be blanketed.

00:35:889 This slider kills the flow. You may want to work on this a bit.

01:03:844 If you want, end the slider here, then do something like this to match the words.

01:22:025 I think a simple curve will work here.

01:26:798 I think this would work better. Placing something on a 1/4 tick is really bad.

02:01:344 I think circles will work instead of a slider.

02:04:980 Tilt these to go with the curve of the slider.

02:06:344 (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) Not a fan of these jumps. They look a little messy and are hard to follow

02:10:435 Move the red points in this slider farther away from each other. It will look better.

02:53:162 A repeat slider that starts one white flips on blue and ends on red would do better here.

03:03:844 (1) (2) Unnecessary jump.

03:05:434^

03:09:753^

03:13:616^

03:28:162^

The end. Over all, spacing needs work. I just didn't start noticing how different the spacing was until the end. Nice work! Good luck!

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2014-12-31T12:41:46+00:00

PolkaMocha wrote:
Request from my modding queue!

Hard:

00:20:207 (1) (2) This needs to be blanketed. ~it is sorta blanketed, im not gonna put it in the slider any further

00:35:889 This slider kills the flow. You may want to work on this a bit. ~its a jump tho

01:03:844 If you want, end the slider here, then do something like this to match the words. ~which slider? did you mean the spinner,,, I didnt do that on any diff, and I feel like its better the way it currently is or else ill be following the vocals the whole time o-o

01:22:025 I think a simple curve will work here. ~errr its just the stlye I took post refrain

01:26:798 I think this would work better. Placing something on a 1/4 tick is really bad. ~its very playable though

02:01:344 I think circles will work instead of a slider. ~err ill consider maybe

02:04:980 Tilt these to go with the curve of the slider. ~I dont see why, it doesnt improve flow, it just makes it looks awkward

02:06:344 (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) Not a fan of these jumps. They look a little messy and are hard to follow ~hehehe actually did that to confuse

02:10:435 Move the red points in this slider farther away from each other. It will look better. ~errrr its just how i like this slider ok ;; people used this slider a lot in the past

02:53:162 A repeat slider that starts one white flips on blue and ends on red would do better here. ~errr something different once in a while is nice

03:03:844 (1) (2) Unnecessary jump. ~no

03:05:434^ ~no

03:09:753^ ~no

03:13:616^ ~no

03:28:162^ ~no

The end. Over all, spacing needs work. I just didn't start noticing how different the spacing was until the end. Nice work! Good luck!

errr didnt change anythng but stilll thanks tho ;o I might change a thing or so if more ppl mention it

Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-01-01T20:42:08+00:00

hoi

happy new year \o/

General

* Add 'collab' and 'collaboration' to the tags? Like this mapset.
* Please, the black combo colour is basically death for a lot of people, because people these days play with screen dim 100%.
* Well... the background is almost 1MB, and I think you can really reduce it >_>

Insane

SkyDevil
* 00:18:389 (6) - I don't really like it that you made this slider offbeat, and by doing that skipping the cymbal crash. Especially with slow songs like these you want to make them clickable, but I must say it fits ok owo
* 00:19:525 (3,4,5) - Optional, but it'd be nice if you move this triplet up a bit, to create a kind of blanket effect.

* 00:28:616 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Meh, I'd really add a NC on each 1/4 jump you have for readability.
* 01:12:480 (4) - Uhmm, is the whistle on the slider end really needed here? I can't really hear a electronic-beep-ish sound here x_x
* 01:41:798 (3,4,1) - I'd put the large jump at (4,1) instead here. The vocals are stronger on (1) where also the downbeat is, so the emphasis with a jump should be there imo.
* 01:46:116 (2) - I already find it quite weird that you suddenly changed from following vocal + instruments, to instrument-only. The sudden change in rhythm feels a bit weird to me, but I guess it's your style then. Anyways, what I wanted to say was that you might want to remove this note. There's no electric sound here, only a hi-hat like sound - which you clearly don't map in this section of the song.
* 01:49:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suddenly, right after a such an empty/calm part you start to overmap on the blue ticks. This might sound nice at all, but there's nothing on the blue ticks here - nothing. I can understand why you mapped the mini-stream at the end, because of the vibrato in the vocals, but that's not present in 01:52:253 (6,7) - so I don't recommend doing it here.
* 01:53:162 (1,2) - Uhmm.. dunno if intended, but this blanket looks really off to me, move (2) a bit more to the left?
* 02:47:025 (5) - No whistle here? Sound is quite strong here o_o None of the diffs hacve it except Easy.. I wonder why.

Teru21
* 00:30:435 (3) - Woah, this bass is quite strong you know o_o. I don't really know why you'd use 0.8x distance here. I'd actually create a jump here, and if you do want to keep your DS this distance is too low, and using 1.0 like 00:39:071 (6,7,8) - is much better imo.
* 00:43:162 (7,8,9,10) - I personally think that the spacing you used in this square is way too big. I'd lower it to around 2.0x here, so it's at least smaller than the jumps in the KIAI time.
* 00:44:753 (2) - Considering splitting these into two circles? Would give more emphasis on the bass on vocals that are present on 00:44:980 - . This combo is slider only anyway, so it'd be nice if you added some circles here ans there :3
* 00:47:253 (8,1) - I think you already know what I am going to say, but I find this spacing really inappropiate here. 5x spacing for a 1/4 for such a calm song is not good, and the flow is broken here as well, which makes the player break his/her combo. This is really unneeded.
* 00:58:616 (1,2) - The spacing here also bothers me. This is still reasonable, but the SV changes by a lot here, making this very hard to actually read. Consider reducing the spacing to about 3.5 here so it's consistent with 01:01:798 (2) - and so it's easier to play.
* 02:02:025 (5,6) - and 02:03:162 (7,8) - The anti-DS is getting real here x_x . 0.8/0.5x spacing combined with a large SV doesn't flow/play good at all imo. COnsider moving (5,8) down, or (6,7) a bit up. You could also try a loop-flow - seeing how the sliders are placed here, it'd fit quite well.

* 02:12:025 (2) - and 02:19:298 (2) - Same anti-DS here.
* 02:25:889 (7) - Add a new combo here? There's a new combo after every KIAI time, and it's also present in the other diffs.
* 03:13:389 (4,5,1) - The jump should be at (5,1) imo, because the downbeat should get more emphasis than (5) imo. You can always try constant DS.
* 03:13:389 (4) - Depending on what SkyDevil does, remove the whistle on the end?
* 03:15:662 (1) - Going to be nitpicky here, but shouldn't the wiggles on this slider go like, on top of the slider? There's no real sound here, and placing the red dots near the slider head would make more sense with the vocals.

Needs more work in my point of view. The anti-DS in some places, combined with a high SV in the KIAI, just plays a bit awkward ;w; I do think the rest of the mapping is fine though, so it should be good to go after some more modding. I really do like the overall flow and how you used the default whistle in this mapset. Blends really well with the electronic sounds ^^

meh, ik vind dit liedje zelf niet zo leuk sorry skydevil x)
ik mod alleen de collab-diff want ik denk niet dat ik de rest wel kan modden als ik het liedje zelf niet echt leuk vind >_>

ik geef je wel een ticket ;w;
veel suc6 :3

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2015-01-02T20:50:31+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
hoi

happy new year \o/

:idea: General

* Add 'collab' and 'collaboration' to the tags? Like this mapset. ~eh kvind t niet echt zon reden om dan een tag neer te gooien (meeste maps doen t sws niet)
* Please, the black combo colour is basically death for a lot of people, because people these days play with screen dim 100%. ~ehh okay
* Well... the background is almost 1MB, and I think you can really reduce it >_> ~soon(tm)

Insane

SkyDevil
* 00:18:389 (6) - I don't really like it that you made this slider offbeat, and by doing that skipping the cymbal crash. Especially with slow songs like these you want to make them clickable, but I must say it fits ok owo ~ehhhhhhhh khou t voor nu ;i
* 00:19:525 (3,4,5) - Optional, but it'd be nice if you move this triplet up a bit, to create a kind of blanket effect.
~kay
* 00:28:616 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Meh, I'd really add a NC on each 1/4 jump you have for readability. ~zo onreadable is ie niet .-.
* 01:12:480 (4) - Uhmm, is the whistle on the slider end really needed here? I can't really hear a electronic-beep-ish sound here x_x ~lool ik lette niet veel op de whistle spamming
* 01:41:798 (3,4,1) - I'd put the large jump at (4,1) instead here. The vocals are stronger on (1) where also the downbeat is, so the emphasis with a jump should be there imo. ~oki
* 01:46:116 (2) - I already find it quite weird that you suddenly changed from following vocal + instruments, to instrument-only. The sudden change in rhythm feels a bit weird to me, but I guess it's your style then. Anyways, what I wanted to say was that you might want to remove this note. There's no electric sound here, only a hi-hat like sound - which you clearly don't map in this section of the song. ~wisselde langzaam terug naar vocals
* 01:49:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suddenly, right after a such an empty/calm part you start to overmap on the blue ticks. This might sound nice at all, but there's nothing on the blue ticks here - nothing. I can understand why you mapped the mini-stream at the end, because of the vibrato in the vocals, but that's not present in 01:52:253 (6,7) - so I don't recommend doing it here. ~fjinn =3= veel te veel mensen complainde hierover
* 01:53:162 (1,2) - Uhmm.. dunno if intended, but this blanket looks really off to me, move (2) a bit more to the left? ~oeps
* 02:47:025 (5) - No whistle here? Sound is quite strong here o_o None of the diffs hacve it except Easy.. I wonder why. ~klinkt beter nu imo

Teru21 (kmoet ook haar stuk modden omdat ze nauwelijks osu meer speelt .-.)
* 00:30:435 (3) - Woah, this bass is quite strong you know o_o. I don't really know why you'd use 0.8x distance here. I'd actually create a jump here, and if you do want to keep your DS this distance is too low, and using 1.0 like 00:39:071 (6,7,8) - is much better imo. ~is design, ligt meer aan de positionering hoe het eruit ziet
* 00:43:162 (7,8,9,10) - I personally think that the spacing you used in this square is way too big. I'd lower it to around 2.0x here, so it's at least smaller than the jumps in the KIAI time. ~naar 2.5x verandert
* 00:44:753 (2) - Considering splitting these into two circles? Would give more emphasis on the bass on vocals that are present on 00:44:980 - . This combo is slider only anyway, so it'd be nice if you added some circles here ans there :3 ~sliders are love sliders are life
* 00:47:253 (8,1) - I think you already know what I am going to say, but I find this spacing really inappropiate here. 5x spacing for a 1/4 for such a calm song is not good, and the flow is broken here as well, which makes the player break his/her combo. This is really unneeded. ~HOW DID THIS HAPPEN LOL kheb peronngeluk op ctrl + j gedrukt ofzo .-.
* 00:58:616 (1,2) - The spacing here also bothers me. This is still reasonable, but the SV changes by a lot here, making this very hard to actually read. Consider reducing the spacing to about 3.5 here so it's consistent with 01:01:798 (2) - and so it's easier to play. ~dit is eigenlijk heel erg goed te doen, vooral als je opmerkt dat er vaak heen en weer wordt gesprongen, juist omdat de SV daarvoor hoger was en ook best wel wat hoge jumps waren is dit imo best wel goed te lezen
* 02:02:025 (5,6) - and 02:03:162 (7,8) - The anti-DS is getting real here x_x . 0.8/0.5x spacing combined with a large SV doesn't flow/play good at all imo. COnsider moving (5,8) down, or (6,7) a bit up. You could also try a loop-flow - seeing how the sliders are placed here, it'd fit quite well.
~hmm leuk idee, ik maak er wel wat van
* 02:12:025 (2) - and 02:19:298 (2) - Same anti-DS here. ~fix
* 02:25:889 (7) - Add a new combo here? There's a new combo after every KIAI time, and it's also present in the other diffs. ~oki
* 03:13:389 (4,5,1) - The jump should be at (5,1) imo, because the downbeat should get more emphasis than (5) imo. You can always try constant DS. ~imo ik vind em persoonlijker wel wat beter nu spelen
* 03:13:389 (4) - Depending on what SkyDevil does, remove the whistle on the end? ~oki
* 03:15:662 (1) - Going to be nitpicky here, but shouldn't the wiggles on this slider go like, on top of the slider? There's no real sound here, and placing the red dots near the slider head would make more sense with the vocals. ~hmmmmmmm okay

Needs more work in my point of view. The anti-DS in some places, combined with a high SV in the KIAI, just plays a bit awkward ;w; I do think the rest of the mapping is fine though, so it should be good to go after some more modding. I really do like the overall flow and how you used the default whistle in this mapset. Blends really well with the electronic sounds ^^

meh, ik vind dit liedje zelf niet zo leuk sorry skydevil x)
ik mod alleen de collab-diff want ik denk niet dat ik de rest wel kan modden als ik het liedje zelf niet echt leuk vind >_>

ik geef je wel een ticket ;w;
veel suc6 :3

loool das okay, de mod was veel meer behulpzaam dan alle NC HERE en PLS MOVE TO X*** Y*** dus
oh en bedankt voor de ticket kben namelijk aan een nieuwe map begonnen xDD

thank youuu

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-01-06T16:57:58+00:00

Hello, From my queue! Sorry if i'm late.

The first time i heard this song, i unexpectedly liked it. And the background music is really familiar to....... ehhh.. (*3*'''')

[> General <]

- I think you need to Re-import the video by removing the audio track or reducing the volume to 0%. Well, The ranking criteria mentioned this.
- You should darken the white combo colour, or change it to a different colour. Because it'd be too bright to help players see the number of the circle, numbers are white as well with a small black stroke, so it'd be a serious ranking process.
- Spread is fine, timing is fine, Nice~

[> Easy <]

00:19:980 (2,1) - I'm not sure if this little overlap is optional to be fixed, i'm just saying...
00:44:525 (1,2) - Recorrect the blanket here.
00:48:616 (2) - I don't think this rhythm sounds fitting here, i have two preference: one/two.
01:12:707 (4) - I think this downbeat shouldn't be on the strong beat on the long white tick. I think replacing with circles would sound the rhythm nice.
01:22:253 (2,1) - You should split these two to avoid overlap. I know you want a head-on-head for slider (3) to get to circle (1) for flow, but overlapping like this won't make it great.
01:49:525 (1,2) - I think these two sliders are quite nice to follow vocals, but making the anchors nearby themselves would just be like slowing-down speed of sliders and might confuse beginners.
02:16:798 (3,4,1) - Try to parallelize these sliders perfectly. It might improve the pattern's flow.
02:46:798 (1,2) - Double blanket?
02:59:980 (1,2) - Likely nazi on this one, recorrect the blanket.
03:07:707 (2,4) - I think you should swap their rhythm placement, Ctrl + G and remake the spacing. Try following the vocals here like you've did on the previous parts.
03:14:753 (2) - Remove this circle, i know you wanted to follow the vocals here, but you haven't done this on other tracks.
03:17:707 (1,3) - Why would you overlap here? just asking...
03:31:344 (5,1) - You haven't did this stack on other tracks, so mind you split?
- Overall, the diff looks nice, but not much work you need to put here, just nice.

[> Abyss's Normal <]

- Inactive?
00:25:889 (1,2) - nazi, blanket perfectly?
00:36:798 (9,1) - Swap NC?
00:48:616 (2,6) - Why not stacking? It's a normal diff tho
01:40:662 (4,5) - Since this part is a little strong, you should make some movements of flow instead of stacking.
02:14:525 (5,6) - Ctrl + G?
03:08:844 (2,3) - Same as 01:40:662 (4,5) -
- This diff is quite neat. Great~

[> Hard <]

00:18:389 (5,1) - nazi, curve slider (1) a little more for perfect blanket over circle (5).
00:19:639 (4) - You should remove this circle. I don't hear any, especially the guitar, instruments on this tick.
00:21:571 (4) - Ctrl + G? just for better playstyle.
00:23:275 (3) - Same as 00:19:639 (4) -
- I'm really sorry, but i won't find more of those ^, trying to avoid huge mods. So try finding them yourself. It's up to you, remove some, or keep some.
00:42:935 (3,1,2,3,1) - These jumps are quite big for a Hard diff. I'm unsure if it's okay or not, but just saying...
00:46:798 (4,5) - Ctrl + G? better playstyle.
00:47:707 - Add circle? It shouldn't be empty when a strong track came up. If done this, swap NC with slider (1).
01:14:753 (6,1) - Swap NC, a bit short.
01:27:139 (1) - Remove NC? still on the same track. It's too much for draining HP too.
01:31:344 - Same as 00:47:707 -
01:39:525 (3) - Ctrl + G?
01:59:525 (3,4) - ^, not both. Slider (3) or (4).
02:06:798 (4,5,6) - Mind this pattern to be symmetric? or not really making one?
02:19:753 (5,1) - Recorrect the blanket here, almost the same reason as 00:18:389 (5,1) -
02:22:935 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:42:935 (3,1,2,3,1) -
02:58:162 (2,3,4) - ^
03:20:889 (3,1) - Recorrect blanket?
03:28:162 (3) - I think a downbeat for the rhythm here is enough for this track. Repeat arrow sounds too weak for a white long tick.
- Few blanket problems and some jumps' spacings are too high for this kind of diff. But i've seen nice patterns over it.

[> Insane Collab <]

00:29:980 (1) - Dem, remove those senseless hitsounds on this tail, the song track is not really intense enough for this.
00:33:616 (3) - ^
- Sorry, won't get them all, same reason as previous diff.
00:54:071 (9,1) - Not really important, but recorrect the blanket tails.
01:49:980 (2,3,4,5,6) - What does this stream follows? don't tell me it's the vocals.
02:03:616 (8) - Same issue as the previous diff for the repeat arrow.
02:59:071 (5) - Ctrl + G? dem
- I've testplayed this diff, it was really fun on Teru's part with those slider overlaps and a few jumps. And sometimes, the SV changes might almost get me a miss, but it was fun at least! But imo, this diff is well-mapped.

Best example of the song on which kind of music i liked. Might this be Pop or something? lol >w>
Good Luck anyway!

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

SkyDevil 2015-01-06T18:39:51+00:00

Gray Veyron wrote:
Hello, From my queue! Sorry if i'm late.

The first time i heard this song, i unexpectedly liked it. And the background music is really familiar to....... ehhh.. (*3*'''') ~holy shit you just made me realize that aswell LOL
[> General <]
- I think you need to Re-import the video by removing the audio track or reducing the volume to 0%. Well, The ranking criteria mentioned this. ~~~I will do that soon ;_;~~ nvm did it owo
- You should darken the white combo colour, or change it to a different colour. Because it'd be too bright to help players see the number of the circle, numbers are white as well with a small black stroke, so it'd be a serious ranking process. ~kk fixed
- Spread is fine, timing is fine, Nice~ ~yey
[> Easy <]
00:19:980 (2,1) - I'm not sure if this little overlap is optional to be fixed, i'm just saying... ~whoops
00:44:525 (1,2) - Recorrect the blanket here. ~oki
00:48:616 (2) - I don't think this rhythm sounds fitting here, i have two preference: one/two. ~errrr ill change it to the 1st one i guess
01:12:707 (4) - I think this downbeat shouldn't be on the strong beat on the long white tick. I think replacing with circles would sound the rhythm nice. ~hmmm ok
01:22:253 (2,1) - You should split these two to avoid overlap. I know you want a head-on-head for slider (3) to get to circle (1) for flow, but overlapping like this won't make it great. ~okay, even though i dont see it as much of a problem lol
01:49:525 (1,2) - I think these two sliders are quite nice to follow vocals, but making the anchors nearby themselves would just be like slowing-down speed of sliders and might confuse beginners. ~it barely slows them down though, Ill keep them for now but idk what bats might think
02:16:798 (3,4,1) - Try to parallelize these sliders perfectly. It might improve the pattern's flow. ~//not sure if its now right
02:46:798 (1,2) - Double blanket? ~that might be kinda overkill xD
02:59:980 (1,2) - Likely nazi on this one, recorrect the blanket. ~lolwat uhh I guess I moved it a little bit?
03:07:707 (2,4) - I think you should swap their rhythm placement, Ctrl + G and remake the spacing. Try following the vocals here like you've did on the previous parts. ~err i was kinda following the instrumentals a little bit here, but I guess its easier to follow vocals
03:14:753 (2) - Remove this circle, i know you wanted to follow the vocals here, but you haven't done this on other tracks. ~ehhhhhhhh finee =3=
03:17:707 (1,3) - Why would you overlap here? just asking... ~its not like i overlapped it beneath a combo burst D: its probably nicely readable
03:31:344 (5,1) - You haven't did this stack on other tracks, so mind you split? ~meh ;A; only for this part pls cause its the end of the song :<
- Overall, the diff looks nice, but not much work you need to put here, just nice.
[> Abyss's Normal <]
- Inactive? ~her pc is broken, she is planning to get it fixed, I hope she doesnt mind getting hit with 100 mods LOL
[> Hard <]
00:18:389 (5,1) - nazi, curve slider (1) a little more for perfect blanket over circle (5). ~okeokeoke
00:19:639 (4) - You should remove this circle. I don't hear any, especially the guitar, instruments on this tick. ~but the electric music does indicate it tho ;o
00:21:571 (4) - Ctrl + G? just for better playstyle. ~hmmmmmmmm maybe...
00:23:275 (3) - Same as 00:19:639 (4) - ~same as the other ww
- I'm really sorry, but i won't find more of those ^, trying to avoid huge mods. So try finding them yourself. It's up to you, remove some, or keep some. ~a
00:42:935 (3,1,2,3,1) - These jumps are quite big for a Hard diff. I'm unsure if it's okay or not, but just saying... ~just 2.0x spacing ;_; but I guess its kinda sudden... ill reduce it a bit
00:46:798 (4,5) - Ctrl + G? better playstyle. ~was thinking about this or the pattern i currently have.. Ill consider maybe later
00:47:707 - Add circle? It shouldn't be empty when a strong track came up. If done this, swap NC with slider (1). ~since I did that on all the other parts sure
01:14:753 (6,1) - Swap NC, a bit short. ~didnt notice that till now owo fixed
01:27:139 (1) - Remove NC? still on the same track. It's too much for draining HP too. ~I wanna keep it cause its the switch to a very different rhythm, and its off rhythm as well
01:31:344 - Same as 00:47:707 - ~oke
01:39:525 (3) - Ctrl + G? ~oh I guess it does make a nice jump
01:59:525 (3,4) - ^, not both. Slider (3) or (4). ~ehhhh then the jump would be super random ;A; ill keep it
02:06:798 (4,5,6) - Mind this pattern to be symmetric? or not really making one? ~hhhh okay
02:19:753 (5,1) - Recorrect the blanket here, almost the same reason as 00:18:389 (5,1) - ~errr I dont see whats wrong with it but I guess i changed it a bit
02:22:935 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:42:935 (3,1,2,3,1) - ~eeh the circles are nicely randomly placed here
02:58:162 (2,3,4) - ^ ~^ or well sliders
03:20:889 (3,1) - Recorrect blanket? ~I do see why this one looks bad, fixed
03:28:162 (3) - I think a downbeat for the rhythm here is enough for this track. Repeat arrow sounds too weak for a white long tick. ~eeeehhh I think this fits as well tho
- Few blanket problems and some jumps' spacings are too high for this kind of diff. But i've seen nice patterns over it. ~im okay with that, the bpm is low so I wanted to make some stronger jumps
[> Insane Collab <]
00:29:980 (1) - Dem, remove those senseless hitsounds on this tail, the song track is not really intense enough for this. ~nonoo the electric music really makes a triplet sound ;_;
00:33:616 (3) - ^ ~a
- Sorry, won't get them all, same reason as previous diff. ~a
00:54:071 (9,1) - Not really important, but recorrect the blanket tails. ~I dont get it? .w.
01:49:980 (2,3,4,5,6) - What does this stream follows? don't tell me it's the vocals. ~LOL yes it does c8 I always wanted to make something interesting at this part, did that (as you saw) at easy and also at hard
02:03:616 (8) - Same issue as the previous diff for the repeat arrow. ~it also fits somewhat well here ;_;
02:59:071 (5) - Ctrl + G? dem ~okay
- I've testplayed this diff, it was really fun on Teru's part with those slider overlaps and a few jumps. And sometimes, the SV changes might almost get me a miss, but it was fun at least! But imo, this diff is well-mapped. ~yaay thanks, a lot of peopel have been mentioning how the mix between anti jumps and jumps doesnt fit, but I honestly think they do ;_;

Best example of the song on which kind of music i liked. Might this be Pop or something? lol >w> ~yea maybe electric/pop? waw
Good Luck anyway!

thanks for the mod *A*)/

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-01-09T09:17:00+00:00

Hello! Sorry for the delay.
Here's my mod:

Easy:
One DS error, according to AiMod. Please fix.00:26:798 (2) – Maybe this will look better.

Picture

Make a sort of blanket with 00:25:889 (1) – 01:14:525 (3,4) – Make a nice blanket here:

Picture

For better flow and to avoid 01:28:616 (2) – overlapping 01:26:798 (5) – rather place 01:27:707 (1) – more to the right side of the grid. Like this:

Picture

01:45:889 (1,2) – Blanket here?

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01:58:616 (2) – Ctrl+H?02:41:344 (1,2,3) – Try to make more of a triangle shape here and avoid placing them in a straight line.

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02:47:707 (2) – Move this slider a bit to the left to make a better blanket with 02:46:798 (1) –

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02:50:434 (1) – Rather Ctrl+H this. It will improve flow with 02:51:344 (2) – 03:04:979 (3,4) – Blanket?

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03:07:707 (2,3) – Nazi. Please improve the blanket03:11:798 (2,3) – Blanket.

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03:31:344 (5,1) – Rather not stack in an Easy diff. Unstack the two notes.

Abyss' Normal:
Your tags conflict with other diffs. Please fix.00:23:389 (4) – Rather do this?

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Looks better in my opinion.00:35:889 (7) – Maybe make this a straight slider to support 00:35:207 (5) - Like:

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01:37:935 (6,7) – Improve this blanket please.

Picture

01:43:389 (4) – Curve less please. If you curve a slider too much, it tends to look ugly.01:47:935 (7,8) – Rather make a blanket here?

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02:17:480 (3,4) - ^

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02:22:480 (2,3,4,5) – Rather do this?

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Looks neater in my opinion.03:10:434 (1,2) – Also maybe rather make a blanket here03:24:298 (4) – Rather place it here:

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To avoid the side of the slider almost touching 03:24:071 (3) –

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Tags conflict with collab. Please fix.00:14:980 (1,2) – Blanket?

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00:25:662 (6) – Maybe stack this circle on the head of 00:25:889 (1) – 00:30:435 (3) – Move this slider a bit to the right to improve the blanket with 00:30:207 (2) – and then you can also try to stack these two notes 00:28:844 (8,4) – perfectly on top of each other.00:35:889 (3) – Rather do this?

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Copy and paste 00:35:435 (2) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G00:37:253 (3,4) – Blanket?

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00:51:571 (2,4) – Make sure these two sliders are the same. (If they already are, ignore)
Use the copy and paste option.00:54:298 (6) – Rather do this?

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Ctrl+H and then rotate it 50 degrees.00:56:344 (4) – Move this slider a bit downwards to make this flower pattern 00:56:344 (4,5,6,7,8) – look better.

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01:29:980 (2,3,4,5,6) – Rather do this?

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Looks better in my opinion.01:33:616 (2,3) – Maybe this?
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02:17:707 (4,5) – Maybe this?

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02:55:889 (1,2) – Blanket?03:29:298 (1,2,3,4) – Try to make a nicer half circle pattern.

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Overall, very nice mapset and I love the song.
So I’ll shoot a star for you~
Good Luck! Hope this gets ranked soon

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2015-01-09T16:05:35+00:00

lool couldnt quote that post in the thread so i had to quote it int he reply box thing

-Nya- wrote:

Hello! Sorry for the delay.
Here's my mod:

Easy:
One DS error, according to AiMod. Please fix. ~aimod says nothign here ;o00:26:798 (2) – Maybe this will look better. ~how am I gonna do thatw ithout rearranging everything ;_; it currently doesn't look bad anyways
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Make a sort of blanket with 00:25:889 (1) – 01:14:525 (3,4) – Make a nice blanket here: ~not everything should be blanket :<
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For better flow and to avoid 01:28:616 (2) – overlapping 01:26:798 (5) – rather place 01:27:707 (1) – more to the right side of the grid. Like this: ~hmm okay
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01:45:889 (1,2) – Blanket here? ~not everythings a blanket .A.
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01:58:616 (2) – Ctrl+H? ~the way it currently is improves flow02:41:344 (1,2,3) – Try to make more of a triangle shape here and avoid placing them in a straight line. ~ehhh i put it in a straight line cause a lot of those sliders are straight too
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02:47:707 (2) – Move this slider a bit to the left to make a better blanket with 02:46:798 (1) – ~sighh only this time ok=3=
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02:50:434 (1) – Rather Ctrl+H this. It will improve flow with 02:51:344 (2) – ~but it will kill the flow between the (2) before him03:04:979 (3,4) – Blanket? ~no
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03:07:707 (2,3) – Nazi. Please improve the blanket ~./doesnt see whats wrong but okay03:11:798 (2,3) – Blanket. ~stop making blankets happen its not gonna happen
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03:31:344 (5,1) – Rather not stack in an Easy diff. Unstack the two notes. ~hhhh okay

Hard:
Tags conflict with collab. Please fix. ~theyre teh same? ;o00:14:980 (1,2) – Blanket? ~a
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00:25:662 (6) – Maybe stack this circle on the head of 00:25:889 (1) – ~eh it will suddenly stop movement ;_; dont think thats a good idea00:30:435 (3) – Move this slider a bit to the right to improve the blanket with 00:30:207 (2) – and then you can also try to stack these two notes 00:28:844 (8,4) – perfectly on top of each other. ~oki 00:35:889 (3) – Rather do this? ~did something that looks like it
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Copy and paste 00:35:435 (2) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G00:37:253 (3,4) – Blanket? ~no
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00:51:571 (2,4) – Make sure these two sliders are the same. (If they already are, ignore)
Use the copy and paste option. ~its almost the same, I dont see the use of changing it owo00:54:298 (6) – Rather do this? ~ehh idk,, I think I prefer it currently
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Ctrl+H and then rotate it 50 degrees.00:56:344 (4) – Move this slider a bit downwards to make this flower pattern 00:56:344 (4,5,6,7,8) – look better. ~okaay
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01:29:980 (2,3,4,5,6) – Rather do this? ~ehh i myself am thinking about changing it,, ill consider later maybe
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Looks better in my opinion.01:33:616 (2,3) – Maybe this? ~I did it like that cause the jumps are even then and itt will improve the flow
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02:17:707 (4,5) – Maybe this? ~ehhhh dont like overused symmetry
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02:55:889 (1,2) – Blanket? ~err no03:29:298 (1,2,3,4) – Try to make a nicer half circle pattern. ~I did this on purpose too *A*)/ cause again the sliders are somewhat straight
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Overall, very nice mapset and I love the song.
So I’ll shoot a star for you~ ~thanks ><)/
Good Luck! Hope this gets ranked soon

thank you for modddddd

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