1. Easy (0,58 stars, 35 notes)
2. Normal (1,22 stars, 46 notes)

yoshilove wrote:

http://puu.sh/605Pv.png

nice song ~~~
わふ～ >ω<

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00:21:100 (3,1) - Can it do in this way?

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Oriance wrote:

Helloo m4m.

Honestly, i think you should bump this to Easy and Normal and change the CS to 3 on Hard, up to you.
The Grid size is pretty big, and some of the placements aren't even on the grid snap. Ex: 00:38:926 (2) on Hard diff.

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It's probably just me, but there are some distance issues if you care about it.

00:00:231 (1) - This should have a normal soft sound whistle for the head, and MAYBE a SC:1 whistle on the tail. It sounds pretty nice.
00:02:839 (2) - Same as above, and it should be a NC
00:05:448 (1) - Same as 00:00:231 (1). Also comparing to the previous sliders, this one looks off.
00:08:057 (1) - Same as 00:00:231 (1), but with a whistle on the tail too.
00:10:665 (2) - Normal Soft Sound Whistle here sounds nice.
00:13:274 (2) - Could blanket the previous slider with this?
00:33:274 (1) - Normal Soft Sound Whistle here sounds nice.
00:56:752 (3) - Maybe NC here, since you made one at 00:59:361 (1) (Assuming you make the NCs after the singer pauses)

Hard

Pretty much the same hitsounds on the Normal diff applies here.
00:56:752 (3) - Maybe NC here, since you made one at 00:59:361 (1) (Assuming you make the NCs after the singer pauses)

Pretty all I can find. Can't mod things like flow so i hope this helps. The song is as expected with Clannad. ;w;

YOURS wrote:

Sup!

First off, no offense, but a Hard mode shouldn't be this easy.

Hard :

00:13:709 I don't really understand this slider.

Nothing really else to say.

Awesome map set.

IRC mod

15:03 *Wafu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/343672 yukizakurasou - Pulse]
15:08 Oyatsu: last spinner really is double
15:08 Oyatsu: instrument finished sooner than spinner but you still make it longer
15:10 Wafu: That spinner follows different instrument than you thing
15:10 Oyatsu: no hear at the end of spin
15:10 Oyatsu: =w=
15:10 Wafu: There are something like "bells" in the background that starts on 01:00:230 and fades out on ~01:07:187
15:12 Wafu: If you listen correctly, you can still hear it on 01:06:970, but if you move it one 1/4 early, on 01:06:970, you hear it after that, so it imo deserves to be on 01:07:187 -
15:12 Oyatsu: ah i think easy/normal are better for name
15:13 Wafu: y, I think I will even change settings a bit
15:23 Oyatsu: 00:25:448 (3,4,5) - 00:22:839 (1,2) - I think 2 rhythm are the same but after one is not have note? add?
15:24 Wafu: There's nothing I could follow in music, sorry.
15:24 Wafu: I followed vocal when I placed note into the same part.
15:24 Oyatsu: Sotyboard: 00:22:404 - I prefer this moves slower, because other lines move slow also, i think this is abit fast
15:25 Wafu: you mean the first lyrics?
15:26 Wafu: I mean, second
15:26 Oyatsu: 2
15:26 Wafu: yeah
15:26 Oyatsu:
15:26 Wafu: fixed
15:26 Oyatsu: first fixed, yea!!~
15:26 Oyatsu: lol xD
15:27 Oyatsu: my mean is notes in map
15:27 Oyatsu: =w=
15:28 Oyatsu: 00:35:883 (3) - I prefer blanket slider, it will be nicer to play, old one-pattern is bad: 00:35:883 (3) -
15:29 Oyatsu: if you fix, don't forget fix DS afterward
15:30 Oyatsu: 00:37:622 (1,3) - I think NC at (3) will be more sensible, because vocal sings long from 00:35:883 (3) - to 00:37:622 (1) - , so it should be the same color maybe
15:30 Wafu: You mean only making a shape more rounded?
15:30 Oyatsu: yea
15:31 Oyatsu: 01:00:230 - put a note here, and delay spinner after, you can add hitsound to perfect while map ?
15:32 Wafu: nc fixed, slider too
15:33 Wafu: sure, fixed
15:34 Oyatsu: 00:31:535 (4) - I prefer this is at 40/268, straight isn't nice fore me =w=
15:35 Wafu: yup, makes better flow with next slider, fixed.
15:38 Oyatsu: ok
15:38 Oyatsu: easy!
15:40 Wafu:
15:40 Oyatsu: lol, also only add note and delay spinner
15:40 Oyatsu: !!
15:40 Wafu: I've already done it when you told me to do it on normal

1. Change name difficult set
2. Change 1 NC stuff
3. Fix shape of slider
4. Add note before last slider and delay
5. Change flow
6. Make slow 2nd lyrics line

Oyatsu wrote:

HI there Baka Wafu-chan!!
Some IRC mod:

IRC mod

15:03 *Wafu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/343672 yukizakurasou - Pulse]
15:08 Oyatsu: last spinner really is double
15:08 Oyatsu: instrument finished sooner than spinner but you still make it longer
15:10 Wafu: That spinner follows different instrument than you thing
15:10 Oyatsu: no hear at the end of spin
15:10 Oyatsu: =w=
15:10 Wafu: There are something like "bells" in the background that starts on 01:00:230 and fades out on ~01:07:187
15:12 Wafu: If you listen correctly, you can still hear it on 01:06:970, but if you move it one 1/4 early, on 01:06:970, you hear it after that, so it imo deserves to be on 01:07:187 -
15:12 Oyatsu: ah i think easy/normal are better for name
15:13 Wafu: y, I think I will even change settings a bit
15:23 Oyatsu: 00:25:448 (3,4,5) - 00:22:839 (1,2) - I think 2 rhythm are the same but after one is not have note? add?
15:24 Wafu: There's nothing I could follow in music, sorry.
15:24 Wafu: I followed vocal when I placed note into the same part.
15:24 Oyatsu: Sotyboard: 00:22:404 - I prefer this moves slower, because other lines move slow also, i think this is abit fast
15:25 Wafu: you mean the first lyrics?
15:26 Wafu: I mean, second
15:26 Oyatsu: 2
15:26 Wafu: yeah
15:26 Oyatsu:
15:26 Wafu: fixed
15:26 Oyatsu: first fixed, yea!!~
15:26 Oyatsu: lol xD
15:27 Oyatsu: my mean is notes in map
15:27 Oyatsu: =w=
15:28 Oyatsu: 00:35:883 (3) - I prefer blanket slider, it will be nicer to play, old one-pattern is bad: 00:35:883 (3) -
15:29 Oyatsu: if you fix, don't forget fix DS afterward
15:30 Oyatsu: 00:37:622 (1,3) - I think NC at (3) will be more sensible, because vocal sings long from 00:35:883 (3) - to 00:37:622 (1) - , so it should be the same color maybe
15:30 Wafu: You mean only making a shape more rounded?
15:30 Oyatsu: yea
15:31 Oyatsu: 01:00:230 - put a note here, and delay spinner after, you can add hitsound to perfect while map ?
15:32 Wafu: nc fixed, slider too
15:33 Wafu: sure, fixed
15:34 Oyatsu: 00:31:535 (4) - I prefer this is at 40/268, straight isn't nice fore me =w=
15:35 Wafu: yup, makes better flow with next slider, fixed.
15:38 Oyatsu: ok
15:38 Oyatsu: easy!
15:40 Wafu:
15:40 Oyatsu: lol, also only add note and delay spinner
15:40 Oyatsu: !!
15:40 Wafu: I've already done it when you told me to do it on normal

What we've fixed:

1. Change name difficult set
2. Change 1 NC stuff
3. Fix shape of slider
4. Add note before last slider and delay
5. Change flow
6. Make slow 2nd lyrics line

Really Nice beatmap!! I'm sure BAT will be difficult to find any stuffs. ^^ Good luck! I will wait this ranked

-Kirito wrote:

clannad song good<3

all difficulty: Slide tick rate 1 is suitable.
passing of the slide, the song fits, there is no sound.

1. I think this can have other hitsound without bell sound, but however, this just my comment

1. 00:41:100 (3,4) - Move a circle note and the point of slider a bit like this picture may be look better, I think.
   
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1. 00:19:361 (3,4) - It doesn't the problem, but I want to make these to flow better by I move the points of slider (3) and (4) by this picture, which it may cause the flow better when play DT, I guess.
   
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   172,332,19361,2,0,B|228:336|256:296|256:296|296:312,1,140
   376,340,20665,1,0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:49:796 (2) - Ehh... It stacks with 00:47:187 (4) - , which I think it isn't good idea. So, trying to avoid stacking will be better, which I suggest that Ctrl+H and move to x:364 y:184. However, it's up to you, too. Because you can fix it is other pattern. (If you want fix it)

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, Wafu >w<

[General]

1. I think this can have other hitsound without bell sound, but however, this just my comment -I wanted to keep purity of this song untouched, I think it doesn't need more hitsounds, only those which are supposed to emphasize an important sounds, so no change here

[Easy]

1. 00:41:100 (3,4) - Move a circle note and the point of slider a bit like this picture may be look better, I think. -fixed
   
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1. 00:19:361 (3,4) - It doesn't the problem, but I want to make these to flow better by I move the points of slider (3) and (4) by this picture, which it may cause the flow better when play DT, I guess. -fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

   172,332,19361,2,0,B|228:336|256:296|256:296|296:312,1,140
   376,340,20665,1,0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:49:796 (2) - Ehh... It stacks with 00:47:187 (4) - , which I think it isn't good idea. So, trying to avoid stacking will be better, which I suggest that Ctrl+H and move to x:364 y:184. However, it's up to you, too. Because you can fix it is other pattern. (If you want fix it) -I think it fits the map, but if there'll be more people hating this, I'll fix it, but I probably won't like change in this

I hope this map can get to be ranked soon
Give a star~

Good luck~

JeZag wrote:

M4M please

Easy
00:13:274 (2) - position the head of the slider so that 00:11:535 (1) makes a more perfect blanket over it
00:55:013 (2,3,4,1) - maybe its me, but this could look more symmetrical left/right as well as up/down (i think its just me >.<)
^^ these were only personal issues that I came up with because it was honestly too good to correct T_T

Normal
As the hardest diff you offer, i feel that the player should be clicking all three notes in some phrases (eg. i would like to click 33.2, 33.7, and 33.4 except 33.2 is a slider end >.<)
00:15:883 (4) - flip this slider upside down and re-position to make it more smooth
00:18:491 (2) - might be better in line with or to the right of 00:17:622 (1) - right now its a bit to its left
00:23:709 (2) - rotate clock wise a bit ~45 degrees?
00:26:317 (5) - could point down at the end of the slider - make as \/\ shape
00:34:144 (2) - end could point up a bit more
00:49:796 (2) - place it to the right of 00:48:926 (1) instead of on 00:47:187 (4) to keep flow