Setsurei wrote:

[H'z Normal]
00:02:748 (3,4) - please don't do this, people will think of 1/4 beat there I don't think so, this is a Normal diff, and 1/4 beat in Normal diff is unrankable afaik
00:08:941 (1,1,1) - wendao y u do this, Normal ini pake stack macam gitu apa gak bingung playernya? it's cool
00:41:070 (1,2) - overlap, 00:41:845 (2) - make it like this? why everybody hate a little overlap slider

SPOILER

00:46:877 (3,4) - and again same reason as 00:02:748 (3,4) - ^^
01:00:038 (1,1,1) - stack bertubi, mending pindahin ke visible area aja done for this
01:54:232 (1,2) - and again same reason as 00:02:748 (3,4) - ^^
01:55:780 (1,2) - ^ ^^

MMd- wrote:

mungkin maksudnya mod pertama entar dikira itu 1/4 beat

Setsurei wrote:

M4M as requested
cuma bisa mod std so, I ignored the other modes
[Beginner]
00:01:974 (2) - fix blanket?

SPOILER

00:21:329 (2) - imo bagusan diginikan, copy dari (1) lalu rotate aja

SPOILER

00:27:522 (2) - flip, lalu fix slidernya biar flownya enak

SPOILER

00:37:587 (1,2) - bikin gini? (karena 00:37:587 (1,2) - flownya ga enak dan 00:38:748 (2,1) - overlap)

SPOILER

00:43:780 (1,2) - overlap to previous object (rotate all of them 00:43:780 (1,2,1) - 90º clock wise, dalam kondisi 3 object terseleksi pindah ke 451 275)
01:09:329 (1) - DS inconsistent (01:09:329 (1,2,1,2) - scale 1.3x) lalu make this curve 01:07:780 (1) - like this

SPOILER

01:35:651 (2,1) - overlapnya jelek D: - I did some rotating and repositioning on these objects 01:34:877 (1,2,1,2) -

SPOILER

01:41:845 (1,2) - pindah and flip?

SPOILER

All fixed

[Goiso's Easy]
DSnya ga konsisten di diff ini, di awal 0.9x lalu 1.0x, ada yang 0.3x, 0.5x, 0.6x orz
dibenerin dulu dah, ini easy diff newbs can't differentiate the differences of the beats (dempetan 0.3x dikira stream)
will continue mod later if you managed to fix the DS Untuk ini gw masih ga yakin antara gw suruh remap atau benerin satu-satu

[Hard]
00:02:748 (3) - flip and rotate?

SPOILER

00:08:941 (4,1) - stack properly (177 88) done
00:14:554 (3) - rotate?

SPOILER

done
00:15:135 (1) - ini juga rotate?

SPOILER

done
00:33:716 (2,3) - ugly overlap, rotate (3)

SPOILER

intentional
00:36:232 (1,2) - make them like this?

SPOILER

^

[Insane]
Mmd- pls don't torture people on Insane (you already have Expert diff)
00:01:200 (1,1) - overlap intentional
00:19:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make it tidier kalo maksudnya dirapiin dsnya, enggak. pattern gw ganti doang
01:09:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same case ^ ^
02:00:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^

[Expert]
00:34:974 (7,8) - remove clap? serasa ada yang janggal kalo ada clapnya gw ngikut backsound, jadi no.
01:00:812 (5,6,7,8) - streamnya ngikut flow 01:01:199 (9) - aja gw bikin 01:01:199 (9) - jadi satu bagian dengan stream, ganti arah

ku tak bisa kasih saran banyak di 2 diff mu, karena gak bisa mainnya kawkawkawk surem diffs
well, good luck

jyapper wrote:

hey there, just checked out the map. in terms of osu! difficulty, hard just does not compare to expert or insane. expert/insane feels too samey for me. possibly change hard to normal+ and make a new hard map? I'll reconsider about making Hyper diff and/or deleting Insane diff

some nitpicks on hard:
0:12:232 - put filler? ok
0:19:780 - way too easy. some circle beats mixed in with the sliders would help. ok
0:22:887 - spinner is about half a beat too long. It should end after the piano scale (00:24:425) fixed
1:18:232 - 3 notes instead of a slider might be better. yep you're right
1:28:623 - put filler? err i think no
1:34:877 - put beat 2 farther away, or at least in line. i don't really get it. you mean something like this? note that 2 & 3 are stacked osu.ppy.sh/ss/1482718
1:44:941 - THIS BIT IS GOOD. you should have this kind of spacing instead of your very clumped up spacing.
1:56:554 - a simple slider just won't cut it. Use a "riff" kind of slider. Basically, it's just a normal slider but zig zag the path of the slider. val0108's "without a dance number" has a riff slider. since this is a Hard diff, I think mine was good enough (also I can't make good riff >.>)

I don't speak tagalog, I can't help there.

sheela901 wrote:

Yo. M4M from your queue.

Beginner

1. 00:06:619 (2,1,2,1) - Follow the following suggestions:
   
   1. 00:06:619 (2) - Move this to x:469 y:132, to have a better flow.
   2. 00:07:393 (1) - Ctrl + J, and move it to x:438 y:58.
   3. 00:08:941 (2) - Ctrl + G, and move it to x:234 y:152.
   4. 00:10:490 (1) - Stack it with the tail of the previous slider, which means, move it to x:219 y:311.
2. 00:10:877 - You add a spinner that starts here to 00:12:812 , so it could fill the big empty space.
3. 00:18:232 (3) - Move this to x:359 y:131. It's just a little thing, so either you move it or not.
4. 00:29:070 (1) - Remove the new combo, and it to 00:31:393 (2) .
5. 00:30:232 - Add a slider that starts here to 00:31:006 , to fill the space.
6. 00:34:490 (2) - Make a blanket combo with 00:33:716 (1) ?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:36:038 - Add a slider that starts here to 00:36:812 .
8. 00:41:458 (2) - Move the second point to x:215 y:266, and the last point to x:135 y:290 to fix the blanket.
9. 00:43:780 (1) - It got a little overlap, so move it to x:345 y:285. Don't forget to move 00:44:554 (2,1) .
10. 00:44:554 (2,1) - Make them both blankets. Also, fix the blanket of 00:44:554 (1) :
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:47:651 to 00:50:748 - Add some notes:
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:52:296 (1) - Make something like in the image below. It makes a better pattern.
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:07:780 (1) - Remove the new combo.
14. 01:17:070 - Add a note? I just felt it.
15. 01:34:877 (1,2) - Fix the blanket.
16. 01:40:296 - Delete the green point.
17. 01:40:683 - ^
18. 01:41:070 - ^
19. 01:41:458 - ^
20. 01:40:296 to 01:41:458 - It needs something here.
21. 01:41:845 - Normally, in easy difficulties, you don't change the slider velocity.

- In this difficulty, there's lot of empty space. Consider it to fill these spaces.
- The distance snap is too little. It confused me a bit when I played it. Considering this is an old difficulty, seems like I need to remap this difficulty. And this diff is aimed for beginner player who still learning this game (hence the name), that's why I use small distance snap and not so much object.

Hard

1. 00:02:361 (2) - This note is out of nowhere, as I see. I suggest to move it somewhere else. done
2. 00:04:296 (1) - Fix the blanket with the approach circle of 00:03:329 (4) . done
3. 00:07:974 (3) - In hard difficulties, you can do mini-jumps, but still, you have to respect the distance snap. So, make something like in the image below err i don't know how to apply this but i make this instead http://puu.sh/9QjdW/5e9a6fec1c.jpg
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:10:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Use the same distance between the notes. fixed
5. 00:12:425 (1) - The previous note is on the first white tick, while this note is on the second white tick, but has a lower distance. It's confusing because some players might click it earlier, due to the distance. So move it further. ee, will change this if someone mentioned it later
6. 00:13:587 to 00:19:780 - Use the same distance snap. fixed, although it will around 1.17 - 1.21. An accurate distance snap is more likely impossible because the grid snap. remapping 00:13:587 - until 00:24:232 -
7. 00:21:716 (2,3) - Ctrl + G? ^
8. 00:41:070 (4) - Move it to x:171 y:209. It'll be closer to the next note.
9. 00:42:038 (6,7,8) - Use the same distance. It's confusing. nope
10. 00:46:683 (2) - Move it to x:108 y:168, so it's closer to the previous note, and the tail can make a blanket. But 00:47:167 (3) must be moved to x:244 y:101. it look bad somehow, so, no.
11. 00:52:877 (4) - Move it closer to the previous note. fixed
12. 01:37:974 (4) - Weird placement. Try to make something else.
13. 01:41:264 (2) - Move it closer to the next note. no

Muzukashii

I'm new to modding Taiko, so there'll be not much suggestions.

1. 00:07:780 (23,24) - Switch them? fixed
2. 00:37:587 (133) - Make it as a don? fixed
3. 00:38:941 (141) - Make it as a kat? Due to beat's pitch. nope
4. 00:43:974 (165,166,167) - If I remember, I think Muzukashii can't have kdk or dkd triplet pattern. hooh, sure. changed it with ddk
5. 00:55:393 (216) - Make it as a don? fixed
6. 00:56:361 (220) - ^ fixed
7. 00:58:490 (227) - kat? fixed
8. 01:05:845 (256) - Kat? To have the same pattern as 01:03:909 (248,249,250) . fixed
9. 01:06:233 (257) - don? To make a same pattern as 01:03:135 (245,246,247) . fixed
10. 01:07:199 (261) - don? fixed
11. 01:19:393 (298) - don? changed 01:19:199 (297) - instead.
12. 01:21:716 (304) - ^ nah
13. 02:04:103 (40) - ^ fixed
14. 02:04:877 (43) - kat? nah

That's all I can do, I guess. I want to know how to mod CtB, or osu!mania. Anyway, good luck on ranking this map.

Snowy Heart wrote:

Taiko M4M Remind me about this, ok?
My maphttps://osu.ppy.sh/s/156738
d=small red
D=Big Red
k=small blue
K= Big Blue
Start~

Muzukashii
00:03:329 (7,8) - d k? nope
00:38:941 (141) - k? nope
00:57:522 (224) - k? remapping that part instead.
01:03:522 (247) - d? nope
01:09:522 (272) - delete.No sound deleting 01:09:135 (272) - .
01:40:103 (356) - K? the pitch will sound too high 'w'
02:04:877 (43) - D fixed

ak74qbz95xm8 wrote:

Muzukashii

00:24:425 (84) - k fix
00:31:780 (109) & 00:31:974 (110,111,112) - Ctrl+G thay way sounds better I think.. fix
01:01:199 (239,240) - remove finish nope
01:08:941 (269) - k already mentioned, fix
01:15:522 - finish the slider in 01:15:135 or 01:15:329 fix
01:37:006 (345) - remove finish making it D instead.
01:57:135 - finish the slider in 01:56:941 will consider if someone mentioned it
01:59:651 (18,19) & 02:00:425 (22,23,24) - Ctrl+G nope
02:04:877 (43) - k nope

sheela901 wrote:

H'z Normal

1. 00:07:393 (3) - The slider was a bit weird, so move the red point to x:285 y:93. done in another way
   
2. 00:08:941 (1,1,1) - I don't agree having three 1/2 sliders stacking together. It's a bit unreadable. Make another pattern. nah, done
3. 00:27:135 (2) - Move this to x:82 y:323, and 00:27:522 (3) to x:104 y:225? no
4. 00:30:232 (3) - Put the curve up:
   
   SPOILER

   
   no, but will consider
5. 00:33:329 (3) - The note kind of ruin the flow. Move it to x:316 y:221 and 00:33:716 (4) to x:391 y:286. no, somehow I like it
6. 00:35:651 (1) - Move the second point to x:214 y:9 and the third point to x:185 y:91 to improve the wave slider. done in another way
7. 00:37:199 (3) - Move it to x:9 y:107, so it could be on the same line with 00:36:812 (2) ? it's a triangle pattern
8. 00:38:361 (1) - Move the second point to x:185 y:91 and the third point tox :214 y:9. ^
   
9. 00:56:554 (4) - Move this to x:93 y:69, so it could make a little blanket.
10. 01:00:812 (1) - Remove the new combo. remapped
11. 01:42:619 (2) - It has a different distance to 01:41:845 (1) . Move it further. intentional, but will consider if anyone tell me about this

Usally, easy and normal difficulties don't use different slider velocity. then this is unusual Normal

Snowy Heart wrote:

Pulongong's Oni
00:11:651 (32) - k? O
00:25:974 (126) - K? X
01:01:393 (276) - D may be better O;and 01:52:490,too
01:35:651 (34) - k? 01:35:458 - change to k

ak74qbz95xm8 wrote:

Pulongong's Oni

00:22:877 - Don't you think the section is too difficult for an Oni?
My idea:●●●●● ●●●●●●● ●●●（kkddd ddkkkkd ddk）X
00:53:458 (234) - remove finish O
00:55:393 - I think a section like ●●●●●,is better than three successive D here. change to d ddd K
00:59:264 (262,263) - remove finish and change to ddd X
01:12:425 - similar as 00:22:877 ,in fact I think it's too strange._. keep it
01:22:877 (99,100) - remove finish O
01:37:006 (38) - remove finish,or you can choose to add finish in 01:38:748 (45), 01:39:329 (47) and 01:40:103 (49) removed finisher
01:40:296 - delete the spinner and add some notes remove spinner and keep clear here
02:03:522 - Well... ._< still keep it

The final battle of two Holy Knight
All of their memories, their stories, written in a single piece of music - Holy Knight.

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Hmm.. I read the description.. And i .. Disagree with that..
That story was refer to "The Fallen Bloom" not "Holy Knight" [I thought]

Especially, on this part

The final battle of two Holy Knight
All of their memories, their stories, written in a single piece of music - Holy Knight.

And, btw.. The older BG was suitable to the song than this one..
The original Holy Knight..

Because this BG is taken from the other song.. The Fallen Bloom ..

No kds

Genocide wrote:

Requested from modhuehue
by MMd-chan

[Muzukashii]
00:03:522 (8) - delete this no, listen the backsound
00:09:329 (27,28,29) - why you put this note as kdd ? it's hard for muzukashii try to replace them with kkk/ddd changed with ddd
00:49:974 (192) - d fixed
01:47:264 (26) - d ^
01:50:554 (39) - d nah

[Rain]
00:59:264 (4) - HDash please oQ


good luck!~
nice

Genocide wrote:

[Pulo's Oni]
00:00:620 (1) - kat please | i hear a piano sound X
00:12:425 (35,36) - ^ X
00:29:651 (138) - why don? change it to kat O
00:27:522 (131) - kat here and put 1 don here 00:27:716 (132) - 00:27:522 - keep d & 00:27:716 - add d
00:39:909 (179,180) - ugh, Big Kat, change it to D d change to DD & 00:39:716 - change to k
00:43:006 (192,193) - ^ same as above ^

Nwolf wrote:

[Pulongong's Oni]

00:01:200 (5) - Big kat O
00:31:780 (147) - Kat here too, fits piano better O
00:51:135 (222) - I would randomly guess that this triplet is here for the drums - then this has to be a kat for the snare 00:51:329 - change to k & 01:42:425 - ,too
00:55:780 (247) - This big note is very random remove finisher
01:23:264 (101) - ^ ^
01:42:232 (8) - Same as 222 ^
01:44:554 (22) - Same as 247 ^
02:09:716 - Get rid of this 2x section or I will make BATs force you :> 1X

Nwolf wrote:

Woof from queue :3

[Muzukashii]

00:05:941 (15,18) - Kinda random that you mapped triplets here and not before - Try deleting these notes and making 00:06:232 (17,19) - dons fixed it in different way
00:09:425 (27) - Delete too, same reason fix
00:23:458 (79) - should be 00:23:651 - here sounds a bit late for me D: and it's intended
00:31:780 (106) - Change to kat, you seemed to follow snare rhythm a lot and it also fits piano no, it's fits the drum
00:49:006 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193) - Too many triplets for a Muzukashii changed 1st - 3rd triplet with spinner
01:13:006 (284) - Same as 79 same
01:15:522 - You shouldn't use SV changes like this, if anything: Change to 0.9, else delete. It makes the big notes look incredibly ugly and it's hard to read. Change the other green sections too, then. whoops, it's the sv change for stds. fixed
01:39:329 - These green sections don't even fit the pace of the song. Delete this and the next two same as above
01:58:683 (12) - This 1/2 is too long, delete this note fixed
01:59:264 (16) - Kat also fits better err, i don't think so.

Nwolf wrote:

[XK's Inner Oni]

00:37:103 (242) - Hm doesn't fit as 1/4 doublets imo, move 00:37:006 - here already a kick (?) sound on there though... besides, I'll have to split the previous ddd if I am to do this
Kinda dislike the overmapped 1/4 in the calm part

1. Overall your slider art is a bit off everywhere. It plays well, so I'll focus on aesthetics.
2. 00:19:780 (1) - This could be moved so it doesn't appear under 00:18:231 (2)
3. 00:31:393 (1,2,1,2) - These could all be shaped/moved to look and play nicer.
4. 00:39:716 (2,1) - The fact that you have note stacking on makes this look weird. Either turn it off or change the shape of this.
5. 01:17:070 - Consider adding some things during this break, because it's very long.
6. 01:43:006 (2,3) - Maybe raise these up a bit so they flow nicer with 01:44:941 (1).

1. 02:04:103 (39,40,41) - Consider changing to this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Other than that very good Muzu map.

1. 00:17:458 (5) - Consider making this slider start along with the previous curve.
2. 01:03:909 (2,3,4,5) - A lot of this section could put notes like this in shapes, rather than stacking them.
3. 01:40:683 (1) - RC
4. 01:41:458 (1) - RC
5. 00:29:845 and 00:35:541 - Unnecessary Break
6. 01:58:103 (3,4) - Spread these out
7. 02:00:425 (1,2,3,4) - Consider adding some variance in this, like zig-zagging them back-and-forth

1. 00:21:329 (1,2,3,4) - Weird jump from 1,2, consider revising
2. Overall - I think your sliders should have more back-and-forth motion
   
   SPOILER

   For example, doing the lower one instead of the top one gives it the same length, but is more difficult and visually appealing.
3. Overall - Really good map.

1. Overall - I'm not good enough to play this, but it seems as though a lot of your doubles aren't spaced the same way ever. That might be intentional, but it seems awkward.

Learning25 wrote:

Apologies for taking so long!

[Beginner]

1. Overall your slider art is a bit off everywhere. It plays well, so I'll focus on aesthetics. This was my first attempt to do Beginner diff, so I'm sorry if there's so many thing that feel off.
2. 00:19:780 (1) - This could be moved so it doesn't appear under 00:18:231 (2) fixed
3. 00:31:393 (1,2,1,2) - These could all be shaped/moved to look and play nicer. ee, I think it's nice enough. Could you give me some suggestion about how to change it?
4. 00:39:716 (2,1) - The fact that you have note stacking on makes this look weird. Either turn it off or change the shape of this. changed the slider shape
5. 01:17:070 - Consider adding some things during this break, because it's very long. it's intentional for all the easier diff
6. 01:43:006 (2,3) - Maybe raise these up a bit so they flow nicer with 01:44:941 (1). fixed

[Muzu]

1. 02:04:103 (39,40,41) - Consider changing to this
   
   SPOILER

   
   no change here
2. Other than that very good Muzu map.

[Hard]

1. 00:17:458 (5) - Consider making this slider start along with the previous curve. done
2. 01:03:909 (2,3,4,5) - A lot of this section could put notes like this in shapes, rather than stacking them. I take this as 'do manual stack for the notes'. fixed
3. 01:40:683 (1) - RC done
4. 01:41:458 (1) - RC ^
5. 00:29:845 and 00:35:541 - Unnecessary Break fixed
6. 01:58:103 (3,4) - Spread these out done
7. 02:00:425 (1,2,3,4) - Consider adding some variance in this, like zig-zagging them back-and-forth only the last combo

[Rain]

1. 00:21:329 (1,2,3,4) - Weird jump from 1,2, consider revising fixed
2. Overall - I think your sliders should have more back-and-forth motion
   
   SPOILER

   For example, doing the lower one instead of the top one gives it the same length, but is more difficult and visually appealing.
3. Overall - Really good map.

Hopefully this helped somewhat.