M4M
[General]
- you only yolo swag once zenbo doki desu Giralda made me do it jonathangel?
- combo color 2,3,4 is a little similar, try this?
Combo2 : 254,223,131
Combo3 : 254,165,105
Combo4 : 253,77,26
[Marathanlfj]
- 00:33:902 (4,4,4) - I think you can also add some claps on the head of these sliders;
- 00:35:931 - maybe you should move the timing point here: 00:33:612 - , although nothing will changed, but you'd better not add timing point in the middle of a slider;
- 00:36:945 (1,1,1) - add some soft whistle on the head?
- 00:40:133 (6) - when I play, I usually miss here. But I can only recommend to move left 00:40:133 (6,1,3) - a little;
- 00:51:873 (6) - stack with 00:50:568 (5) - ?
- 00:58:974 (1) - This finish doesn't fit the song, maybe you should look for a normal-hitfinish. (or use whistle and clap, additions:soft instead)
- 01:09:409 (1) - also I recommend to add soft-whistle to the head of the slider to emphasize the vocal, such as 01:10:568 (1) - 01:11:728 (1) - and so on.
- 01:43:032 (1) - to blanket 01:42:307 (2) - ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1270510
- 01:58:829 (4,5,6,7) - add drum clap?
- 02:27:090 (5,2,4) - make them in one line like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1270524
- 02:49:554 (1) - clap on the head;
- 03:25:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't care about the blanket of 03:24:264 (3,1) - , make like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1270545 to enlarge the jump of 03:26:293 (5,1,2,3,4) - , also change 03:26:365 (1) - to red.
- 04:18:684 (1,2,3,4) - change some pattern to make 04:19:554 (1) - blanket 04:18:684 (1) - ? It's better imo.
- 04:23:394 (4) - clap;
- 04:34:336 (4,5) - ctrl+g?
- 05:06:945 (5) - also add whistle on the head;
- 05:21:148 (2) - remove the whistle? sounds weird imo;
- 05:25:786 (2) - ^
- 05:32:597 (1,3) - this overlap doesn't look good, move 05:32:597 (1) - a little left is better imo.
- 05:55:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too similar with 05:54:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , changing the rhythm like http://puu.sh/6u4Fo.jpg and make another pattern?
- 05:58:249 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make stream earlier then the repeat sliders is better imo.
P.S. your flow is really similar with happy30, especially in kiai time >_>
GL, the map is great.