RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. I suggest to add "Yuki" for tags OK
   (SB creator)
2. For BG, it is better to use not .png but .jpg OK
3. Don't you add guest names for diff names?

Norman's Normal is Weird o_O
[SB]

1. According to Ranking Criteria, several images are too big
   " the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. "
   "The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively." Changed BGW, BGB, and All Fine Rankable...
2. BG7.png, BG8.png: I feel vertically long. aspect ratio is correct? Well, I think it's not unrankable.
3. BuzzG.png: buzzG OK
4. Mapset.png: how about adding guest names like this ?

That's too hard ;_;
[Insane]

1. 00:04:779 (3,1) - I prefer to avoid overlap

OK

Azmato wrote:

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:04:131 (3) - 332 l 44 O

00:50:185 (2) - 빨간점 156 l 192 O

00:59:915 (1) - 4번째점 516 l 120, 마지막 500 l 36 O

01:18:077 (1) - 빨간점 136 l 148, 그다음 80 l 124 O

01:32:671 (4) - 마지막점 500 l 128 O

01:39:969 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/695qL.jpg 어프로치 서클에 맞추시면 비교적 완벽하게 담요를 만들수 있습니다. O

01:59:590 (1) - 빨간점 428 l 280, 마지막점 524 l 192 X

02:02:185 (1) - 빨간점 184 l 320, 3번째점 144 l 380 X

02:08:023 (2) - http://puu.sh/695zV.jpg 이렇게 배치하는게 나을겁니다. X

02:09:969 (1) - 마지막점 104 l 376 X

03:45:320 (4) - NC (02:22:293 (1) - 여기랑 맞춰주세요.) O

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:06:401 (4) - ctrl g (?) X

00:27:482 (2) - ^ X

01:23:915 (3) - ctrl g (?) X

01:57:644 (3) - 01:23:266 (1)과 같습니다. X

02:03:158 (3) - (1) 아래에 놓는게 좋을것 같습니다. 03:15:482 (1,2,3) 와 맞춰주세요. X

02:04:617 (5,6,1) - 그냥 차라리 겹치는게 좋을것 같습니다. 아니면 02:04:293 (2,3,4) 도 띄워놓거나 O

03:44:509 (7,8,1) - ^ 위와 비슷한 이유입니다. O

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:20:671 (4) - 00:20:185 (2) 와 맞추지 말고 00:20:996 (5) 와 맞추는게 좋을것 같습니다. 00:20:671 (4)를 점순서대로 96 l 188, 132 l 188, 172 l 168 에 놔주시고
00:20:996 (5) 스페이싱 처리 해주시면 완벽! O

00:26:185 (1) - 첫번째 점을 168 l 328로 옮겨주시면 완벽! http://puu.sh/6968T.jpg O

00:47:104 (4) - 마지막 점을 220 l 88 O

01:02:023 (6) - 424 l 132 X

01:25:861 (1) - 마지막 점을 80 l 60 X

02:03:158 (4) - ctrl g (?) X

03:12:888 (3) - 뭔가 좀 이상합니다... O

하으... 몸살감기인데 무리해서 모딩했더니 죽을맛이네요 ㅠㅠ 암튼 랭크기대해봅니다!

Konei wrote:

Yoooo fixed a lot of nazi things and some hitsounds by my own.

Update

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: shiwa.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 33644
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Shiwa
TitleUnicode:しわ
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:W h i t e
Version:Easy
Source:
Tags:utaite yurica nicovideo vocaloid coredelia flower buzzG dingggu norman konei nico nico douga [ yuki ]
BeatmapID:342421
BeatmapSetID:136902

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"shiwabg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,70493,76757
2,88655,92324
2,145736,152000
2,174277,183135
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
2834,324.324324324324,4,2,0,60,1,0
33969,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
49374,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
49536,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
67698,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
109212,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
124617,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
124779,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
142942,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
184455,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
197266,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
197428,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
215590,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
220779,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
225969,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 239,96,0
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 122,204,0

[HitObjects]
45,61,2834,2,0,P|87:117|161:136,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,119,3806,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,58,4131,2,0,P|330:101|304:184,1,140
218,217,5104,1,0,1:0:0:0:
146,161,5428,6,0,P|112:90|21:89,2,175,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
75,329,7698,1,0,1:0:0:0:
154,283,8023,6,0,P|214:267|368:291,1,210,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
429,230,9320,2,0,L|452:154,1,70
318,36,10293,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,102,10617,6,0,B|220:102|220:102|186:141|121:129,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
42,91,11590,1,0,1:0:0:0:
28,272,12239,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,331,12563,2,0,P|133:335|177:328,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,247,13212,6,0,L|210:36,1,210,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
301,34,14509,2,0,L|308:243,1,210,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
273,328,15806,6,0,P|336:331|394:281,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,195,16779,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,98,17428,1,0,1:0:0:0:
100,194,18077,1,0,1:0:0:0:
95,284,18401,6,0,P|151:271|192:192,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,139,19374,2,0,P|284:127|396:145,2,140,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
165,131,20996,5,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,21320,12,0,22942,0:0:0:0:
254,76,23590,5,0,3:0:0:0:
181,132,23915,6,0,P|239:171|332:123,1,175,4|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
459,91,25212,2,0,P|476:164|457:234,1,140,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
449,316,26185,2,0,P|387:283|371:214,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,90,27320,6,0,P|274:82|208:91,1,105,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
51,159,28455,1,0,1:0:0:0:
97,237,28779,5,0,3:0:0:0:
76,325,29104,6,0,P|150:313|190:227,1,175,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,109,30401,1,0,1:0:0:0:
420,190,31050,1,0,1:0:0:0:
361,259,31374,6,0,B|321:268|321:268|303:252|261:248,3,105,0|0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
175,216,33158,1,0,1:0:0:0:
12,57,33969,6,0,P|76:82|141:60,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,119,34942,1,0,1:0:0:0:
257,196,35266,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,118,35590,1,0,1:0:0:0:
436,243,36239,1,0,1:0:0:0:
361,294,36563,6,0,P|303:330|229:315,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,242,37536,1,0,1:0:0:0:
209,189,37861,2,0,P|267:153|341:168,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,201,38833,1,0,1:0:0:0:
405,110,39158,6,0,P|361:79|274:63,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,63,40131,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,76,40455,2,0,P|121:137|197:155,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,218,41428,1,0,1:0:0:0:
321,157,41752,6,0,P|386:138|412:75,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,219,43374,2,0,L|206:278,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
147,340,44023,1,0,1:0:0:0:
110,256,44347,6,0,B|81:216|81:167|81:167|118:117|82:50,1,210,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
11,110,45644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,19,45969,1,0,1:0:0:0:
183,50,46617,1,0,1:0:0:0:
254,106,46942,6,0,P|310:100|394:108,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,137,48563,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,202,48888,2,0,P|144:230|176:232,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
254,224,49536,6,0,P|310:218|394:226,2,140,4|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,308,51158,1,0,1:0:0:0:
107,164,51806,1,0,1:0:0:0:
82,76,52131,6,0,P|144:78|198:143,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,164,53104,1,0,1:0:0:0:
130,251,53428,2,0,P|68:249|14:184,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,164,54401,1,0,1:0:0:0:
119,74,54725,6,0,B|158:82|181:111|181:111|201:140|201:185,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,245,55698,1,0,1:0:0:0:
311,173,56023,2,0,B|311:140|331:111|331:111|354:82|393:74,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,164,56996,1,0,1:0:0:0:
495,160,57320,6,0,B|495:193|475:222|475:222|452:251|413:259,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,312,58293,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,273,58617,2,0,B|202:273|202:273|165:303|106:288,1,140,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
140,202,59590,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,198,59915,6,0,P|74:134|202:136,1,210,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,204,61212,2,0,P|339:229|466:195,1,210,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
475,111,62509,5,4,1:0:0:0:
302,51,63158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,141,63482,1,0,1:0:0:0:
211,93,63806,2,0,P|145:46|81:63,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,126,64779,1,0,1:0:0:0:
43,218,65104,6,0,P|95:205|133:129,2,140,4|0|4,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67698,12,2,70293,0:0:0:0:
42,324,78077,6,0,P|84:268|158:249,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,266,79049,1,0,1:0:0:0:
305,327,79374,2,0,P|327:284|301:201,1,140
215,168,80347,1,0,1:0:0:0:
143,224,80671,6,0,P|109:295|18:296,2,175,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
72,56,82941,1,0,1:0:0:0:
151,102,83266,6,0,P|211:118|365:94,1,210,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
426,155,84563,2,0,L|449:231,1,70
315,349,85536,1,0,1:0:0:0:
253,283,85860,6,0,B|217:283|217:283|183:244|118:256,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,294,86833,1,0,1:0:0:0:
25,113,87482,1,0,1:0:0:0:
93,54,87806,2,0,P|130:50|174:57,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
230,115,88455,5,2,0:0:0:0:
46,255,93644,6,0,P|101:273|176:230,2,140,4|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,180,95266,1,0,1:0:0:0:
209,35,95915,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,192,96239,12,0,98185,0:0:0:0:
254,310,98833,5,0,3:0:0:0:
182,254,99158,6,0,P|240:215|333:263,1,175,4|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
458,293,100455,2,0,P|475:220|456:150,1,140,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
445,68,101428,2,0,P|383:101|367:170,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,295,102563,6,0,P|271:303|205:294,1,105,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
48,226,103698,1,0,1:0:0:0:
94,148,104022,5,0,3:0:0:0:
73,60,104347,6,0,P|147:72|187:158,1,175,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,273,105644,1,0,1:0:0:0:
420,195,106293,1,0,1:0:0:0:
358,126,106617,6,0,B|318:117|318:117|300:133|258:137,3,105,4|0|2|0,1:0|1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
121,146,108563,2,0,L|96:219,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
21,261,109212,6,0,P|67:299|151:287,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,222,110185,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,48,110833,1,0,1:0:0:0:
310,222,111482,1,0,1:0:0:0:
397,198,111806,6,0,P|390:265|337:308,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,222,112779,1,0,1:0:0:0:
223,250,113104,2,0,P|229:182|282:139,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,106,114077,1,0,1:0:0:0:
451,72,114401,6,0,B|463:111|447:148|447:148|485:212|451:276,1,210,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
361,279,115698,2,0,P|381:335|453:362,2,140,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,198,117320,5,0,1:0:0:0:
255,26,117969,1,0,1:0:0:0:
194,198,118617,1,0,1:0:0:0:
105,220,118942,2,0,P|127:265|156:284,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
227,307,119590,6,0,P|316:333|430:309,1,210,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
478,232,120888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
387,222,121212,1,0,1:0:0:0:
255,96,121861,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,97,122185,6,0,P|185:156|265:186,2,140,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,61,123806,1,0,1:0:0:0:
22,131,124131,2,0,L|22:209,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
45,288,124779,6,0,B|95:316|95:316|137:294|204:294|246:320,1,210,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,234,126077,2,0,P|224:211|132:209,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,201,127050,1,0,1:0:0:0:
36,111,127374,6,0,B|75:107|101:126|101:126|120:105|171:94,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,80,128347,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,96,128671,2,0,B|393:106|412:127|412:127|438:108|477:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,202,129644,1,0,1:0:0:0:
456,291,129969,6,0,B|401:282|383:240|383:240|325:266|306:331,1,210,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
217,335,131266,2,0,P|150:347|68:331,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,258,132239,1,0,1:0:0:0:
22,167,132563,6,0,B|75:168|104:205|104:205|165:195|208:135,1,210,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,73,133861,1,2,0:0:0:0:
313,143,134185,1,0,1:0:0:0:
399,171,134509,2,0,P|379:210|351:227,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
396,306,135158,6,0,P|439:281|485:206,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,114,136131,1,0,1:0:0:0:
397,82,136455,2,0,P|328:69|256:82,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,142,137428,1,0,1:0:0:0:
102,157,137752,6,0,P|125:210|202:234,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,138725,1,0,1:0:0:0:
313,234,139050,2,0,P|378:217|410:157,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,143,140023,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,77,140347,6,0,P|213:66|114:82,2,140,4|0|4,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142942,12,2,145536,0:0:0:0:
41,130,153320,5,4,1:0:0:0:
102,301,153969,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,205,154617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,301,155266,1,0,1:0:0:0:
471,130,155915,5,0,0:0:0:0:
300,193,156563,2,0,L|79:193,1,210,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,115,157861,1,0,1:0:0:0:
204,35,158509,6,0,P|217:93|293:125,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
454,192,159806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,254,160455,1,0,1:0:0:0:
124,346,161104,6,0,P|81:295|87:218,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
241,133,162401,2,0,P|284:184|278:261,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
214,315,163374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,242,163698,6,0,L|86:118,1,140
261,63,164996,2,0,L|334:187,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,261,165969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
355,348,166293,6,0,P|423:346|467:294,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
460,203,167266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,122,167590,2,0,P|385:72|304:47,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,118,168563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,46,168888,6,0,P|134:66|94:122,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
203,267,170185,2,0,P|268:247|309:191,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,171482,12,2,174077,0:0:0:0:
12,327,184455,6,0,P|76:302|141:324,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,265,185428,1,0,1:0:0:0:
257,188,185752,1,4,1:0:0:0:
304,266,186076,1,0,1:0:0:0:
436,141,186725,1,0,1:0:0:0:
276,52,187374,5,4,1:0:0:0:
272,142,187698,1,0,1:0:0:0:
189,102,188023,2,0,P|143:140|126:144,1,70,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
448,326,189644,5,4,1:0:0:0:
267,347,190293,1,0,1:0:0:0:
181,317,190617,1,0,1:0:0:0:
90,308,190941,2,0,P|115:247|191:229,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,174,191914,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,229,192238,6,0,P|393:248|419:311,2,140,4|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,193860,2,0,L|208:113,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,49,194509,1,0,1:0:0:0:
108,129,194833,6,0,B|79:169|79:218|79:218|116:268|80:335,1,210,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
6,276,196130,1,0,1:0:0:0:
3,365,196455,1,0,1:0:0:0:
183,334,197103,1,0,1:0:0:0:
254,278,197428,6,0,P|310:284|394:276,2,140,4|0|2,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,247,199049,1,0,1:0:0:0:
104,182,199374,2,0,P|144:154|176:152,1,70,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
254,160,200022,6,0,P|310:166|394:158,2,140,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,76,201644,1,0,1:0:0:0:
107,220,202292,1,0,1:0:0:0:
81,308,202617,6,0,P|143:306|197:241,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,220,203590,1,0,1:0:0:0:
133,132,203914,2,0,P|71:134|17:199,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,220,204887,1,0,1:0:0:0:
119,310,205212,6,0,B|158:302|181:273|181:273|201:244|201:199,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,139,206184,1,0,1:0:0:0:
311,211,206509,2,0,B|311:244|331:273|331:273|354:302|393:310,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,220,207482,1,0,1:0:0:0:
495,224,207806,6,0,B|495:191|475:162|475:162|452:133|413:125,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,72,208779,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,111,209103,2,0,B|202:111|202:111|165:81|106:96,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,182,210076,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,186,210401,6,0,P|74:250|202:248,1,210,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,211698,2,0,P|339:155|466:189,1,210,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
475,273,212995,5,4,1:0:0:0:
302,333,213644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,243,213968,1,0,1:0:0:0:
211,291,214293,2,0,P|145:338|81:321,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,245,215265,1,0,1:0:0:0:
95,160,215590,5,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,215915,12,2,218185,0:0:0:0:
74,220,220779,6,0,P|114:272|194:277,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,225,221752,1,0,1:0:0:0:
329,280,222077,2,0,P|396:272|439:219,1,140,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,195,223050,1,0,1:0:0:0:
337,105,223374,6,0,B|290:120|271:156|271:156|199:160|137:127|104:69,1,280,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,225969,12,2,228563,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:12:563 (1) - I actually don't really like how this slider played imo :< It's not because of the slow SV-it fit really well with the music and vocal owo It's just that, when I played this, I actually a bit confused on if the slider fully extend to become 1/1 beat at 00:13:212 - or it will become a jump to the note at 00:13:374 (1) - :< See, because of the really powerful beat on the tail of 00:12:563 (1) -, it will become really more interesting to play if you click at 00:13:212 - (the finish is quite heavy too here). So yeah, my suggestion here is to lower the slider on 00:12:563 (1) - by 1/4 tick to 00:13:131 -, and then inserting a circle at 00:13:212 -. The play italic will become more inuitive because of this and the rhythm will be easier to read and less frustating to play :3 This one is rather big, so you may consider to change this ~
2. 02:03:644 (2) - Considering you use claps on both the head and the tail of this slider, I think it will be better if you just change this slider into 2 circles imo. Besides that it will emphasize the clap on the tail better(by not making a passive hitsound on a powerful beat), the play will become better too imo By using more circles to click, it will build a higher tension into the re-kiai here, and personally I really like that :3
   02:36:888 (3,4) - I find that this part here-between the kiai and the verse(dunno what's it called xD) you used a bit too less notes than the other parts of the song imo. I feel that there are many parts (mostly the drums) that you missed mapping, one example is the slider here; 02:36:888 (3,4) -. See, by using a 1/1 beat slider here, you missed the powerful drum at 02:37:050 - because it is covered by the slider and players won't click at that powerful beat :< So yeah, my suggestion here is to arrange the pattern a bit; Try moving 02:36:888 (3) - to the next red tick at 02:37:050 -, and then insert a circle at 02:36:888 -, that way, the notes will cover the drum and therefore make the play much better with the jump to the 02:37:861 (5) - :3 So yeah, try using this pattern okay 02:37:861 (5) - ^^
3. 02:38:996 (3,4) - I don't really see any reason for stacking these notes imo o.o As it will make the readability worsen because the stack and the jump here doesn't really emphasize any strong beats too(had a hard time reading this when I played lol). Considering the previous note at 02:38:185 (1,2) - is following the vocal, you might want to unstack them and space it normally to make the pattern to be read easier owo And also, since you're following the vocal, inserting a whistle at 02:38:996 (3) - will fit too ouo
   

   416,192,158509,2,0,P|396:256|408:312,1,126.000004806519,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   512,349,158996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   491,251,159158,1,8,0:0:0:0:

4. 02:56:671 (1) - How about inserting a whistle on the head? It will emphasize the piano, and considering you used whistle on beats containing piano before this, you might want to keep the consistency owo
5. 03:45:644 (5) - Just a personal suggestion here :3 But how about reducing the SV for the last note here to maybe 0.6-0.75 ? It will create a really nice slider hold effect for the ending and it will also emphasize the silent background music imo So yeah, consider doing this~ owo

1. 02:03:158 (4) - Hmm how about ctrl g here? It will create a nice small jump to the next note on 02:03:482 (5,6) - And I also feels that the current flow from 02:02:996 (3) - to (4) is a bit bad imo, the sharp upright turn is kinda disrupting the natural flow, whilst you can keep the natural circular flow if you ctrl g this owo
2. 02:07:050 (2,3) - Ah, the blanket here is a bit off imo :b Try fixing this by moving 02:07:050 (2) - ; midpoint to approximately x91/y180 owo btw, you might also want to mirror this slider to 02:06:725 (1) - so that it will keep the symmetry and the pattern ouo
   275,163,126725,6,0,P|242:177|206:173,1,72,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   124,184,127050,2,0,P|91:180|54:196,1,72,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3. 02:38:185 (3,4) - I don't really know myself lol, but since you mainly follows the vocal on this part, it will be better if you keep following it imo You see, here the vocal is quite powerful at 02:38:996 - where the 'wa' starts. It actually feels a bit weird if you didn't insert a note here imo, considering the powerful vocal :< So yeah, consider inserting a note there at 02:38:996 - and it will make a 1/2 beat there. You can try stacking them all to make a tricky part for Hidden too here owo
4. 02:39:482 (1,2) - The blanket here can be made better too imo :p Try moving the middle point of (2) to somewhere more to the right to fix it ouo

1. 00:19:698 (3,1) - Umm blankets.. :'D Try moving (3) midpoint to approximately x116/y232 here
2. 00:24:239 (2) - I think the rhythm here can be improved imo, currently it feels a bit bad because that this 1/1 slider fully covered the beats here and therefore making the drum at 00:24:725 - covered too :< And considering the vocal also ended there, it might be better if you followed that too. My suggestion is; Reduce the slider length here to the red tick at 00:24:725 - and then use a circle at 00:24:888 - to create a 1/2 beat. The slider end at the red tick will emphasize the drum and the end of the vocal, whilst the circle on the white tick will keep the 1/1 rhythm from messing out for beginners :3 It will also make a nice similar 1/2 beat rhythm like what you did at 00:29:428 (3,4) - ouo For the pattern, you can try my suggestion here-it mainly avoid the overlaps caused by the slider reducing ouo
   
   here

   

   352,188,23590,6,0,L|404:96,1,104,2|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
   480,28,24239,2,0,P|388:68|332:44,1,156,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   296,76,24888,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:25:861 (1) - How about making the rhythm more interesting here? Full 1/1 slider plays a bit boring if it's not in Easy imo :b Here, you can try following the vocal here rather than the main beat, try reducing the repeat by moving the repeat point to the red tick at 01:26:347 - so that the note will end at 01:26:833 - where the vocal also ends :3 Then, you can insert a circle at 01:27:158 - to keep the rhythm going too For pattern suggestion, you can try mine here though you may want to neaten the curve there :b
   
   like this

   

   288,260,85861,6,0,B|356:236|376:316|448:256,2,156,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   208,328,87158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   188,228,87482,2,0,P|208:184|256:160,1,104,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:58:293 (3,4) - Hmm you can try to make (3) more curvy to make the pattern at 01:56:996 (1,2,3) - more interesting and neater imo The curve will also emphasize the pitch on the vocal nicely too owo Try this one http://puu.sh/6fOdF.jpg

1. I honestly don't find anything here lol :b Since the map is mainly about patterns and changing it without messing with other notes because of DS requires much time too orz So yeah, I won't be really picky and make you change the rhythm here(as there actually isn't any big problem) owo But you may consider to HP -1 here as I think for an Easy diff. and with a rather high bpm too, it will be too much to have 3 HP as the time to recover is fairly long and missing an entire 1/1 slider will knock you out if you don't have a full hp orz So yeah, consider reducing them by 1( by 2 is good too, but I don't think you want to reduce it that much :b)

AnreFM wrote:

Hi White~ sorry for my lateness ;w;

Umm here as requested, but apparently the map is somewhat very ready for ranking, so here's a short mod to clean a few stuffs before you can go

let's do this

If there's anything you didn't understand or if the images and links are messed up, feel free to state so and I will try my best to explain it throughly><

[Insane]

1. 00:12:563 (1) - I actually don't really like how this slider played imo :< It's not because of the slow SV-it fit really well with the music and vocal owo It's just that, when I played this, I actually a bit confused on if the slider fully extend to become 1/1 beat at 00:13:212 - or it will become a jump to the note at 00:13:374 (1) - :< See, because of the really powerful beat on the tail of 00:12:563 (1) -, it will become really more interesting to play if you click at 00:13:212 - (the finish is quite heavy too here). So yeah, my suggestion here is to lower the slider on 00:12:563 (1) - by 1/4 tick to 00:13:131 -, and then inserting a circle at 00:13:212 -. The play italic will become more inuitive because of this and the rhythm will be easier to read and less frustating to play :3 This one is rather big, so you may consider to change this ~
2. 02:03:644 (2) - Considering you use claps on both the head and the tail of this slider, I think it will be better if you just change this slider into 2 circles imo. Besides that it will emphasize the clap on the tail better(by not making a passive hitsound on a powerful beat), the play will become better too imo By using more circles to click, it will build a higher tension into the re-kiai here, and personally I really like that :3
   02:36:888 (3,4) - I find that this part here-between the kiai and the verse(dunno what's it called xD) you used a bit too less notes than the other parts of the song imo. I feel that there are many parts (mostly the drums) that you missed mapping, one example is the slider here; 02:36:888 (3,4) -. See, by using a 1/1 beat slider here, you missed the powerful drum at 02:37:050 - because it is covered by the slider and players won't click at that powerful beat :< So yeah, my suggestion here is to arrange the pattern a bit; Try moving 02:36:888 (3) - to the next red tick at 02:37:050 -, and then insert a circle at 02:36:888 -, that way, the notes will cover the drum and therefore make the play much better with the jump to the 02:37:861 (5) - :3 So yeah, try using this pattern okay 02:37:861 (5) - ^^
3. 02:38:996 (3,4) - I don't really see any reason for stacking these notes imo o.o As it will make the readability worsen because the stack and the jump here doesn't really emphasize any strong beats too(had a hard time reading this when I played lol). Considering the previous note at 02:38:185 (1,2) - is following the vocal, you might want to unstack them and space it normally to make the pattern to be read easier owo And also, since you're following the vocal, inserting a whistle at 02:38:996 (3) - will fit too ouo
   

   416,192,158509,2,0,P|396:256|408:312,1,126.000004806519,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   512,349,158996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   491,251,159158,1,8,0:0:0:0:

4. 02:56:671 (1) - How about inserting a whistle on the head? It will emphasize the piano, and considering you used whistle on beats containing piano before this, you might want to keep the consistency owo
5. 03:45:644 (5) - Just a personal suggestion here :3 But how about reducing the SV for the last note here to maybe 0.6-0.75 ? It will create a really nice slider hold effect for the ending and it will also emphasize the silent background music imo So yeah, consider doing this~ owo

[Hard]

1. 02:03:158 (4) - Hmm how about ctrl g here? It will create a nice small jump to the next note on 02:03:482 (5,6) - And I also feels that the current flow from 02:02:996 (3) - to (4) is a bit bad imo, the sharp upright turn is kinda disrupting the natural flow, whilst you can keep the natural circular flow if you ctrl g this owo
2. 02:07:050 (2,3) - Ah, the blanket here is a bit off imo :b Try fixing this by moving 02:07:050 (2) - ; midpoint to approximately x91/y180 owo btw, you might also want to mirror this slider to 02:06:725 (1) - so that it will keep the symmetry and the pattern ouo
   275,163,126725,6,0,P|242:177|206:173,1,72,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   124,184,127050,2,0,P|91:180|54:196,1,72,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3. 02:38:185 (3,4) - I don't really know myself lol, but since you mainly follows the vocal on this part, it will be better if you keep following it imo You see, here the vocal is quite powerful at 02:38:996 - where the 'wa' starts. It actually feels a bit weird if you didn't insert a note here imo, considering the powerful vocal :< So yeah, consider inserting a note there at 02:38:996 - and it will make a 1/2 beat there. You can try stacking them all to make a tricky part for Hidden too here owo
4. 02:39:482 (1,2) - The blanket here can be made better too imo :p Try moving the middle point of (2) to somewhere more to the right to fix it ouo

[Normal]

1. 00:19:698 (3,1) - Umm blankets.. :'D Try moving (3) midpoint to approximately x116/y232 here
2. 00:24:239 (2) - I think the rhythm here can be improved imo, currently it feels a bit bad because that this 1/1 slider fully covered the beats here and therefore making the drum at 00:24:725 - covered too :< And considering the vocal also ended there, it might be better if you followed that too. My suggestion is; Reduce the slider length here to the red tick at 00:24:725 - and then use a circle at 00:24:888 - to create a 1/2 beat. The slider end at the red tick will emphasize the drum and the end of the vocal, whilst the circle on the white tick will keep the 1/1 rhythm from messing out for beginners :3 It will also make a nice similar 1/2 beat rhythm like what you did at 00:29:428 (3,4) - ouo For the pattern, you can try my suggestion here-it mainly avoid the overlaps caused by the slider reducing ouo
   
   here

   

   352,188,23590,6,0,L|404:96,1,104,2|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
   480,28,24239,2,0,P|388:68|332:44,1,156,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   296,76,24888,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:25:861 (1) - How about making the rhythm more interesting here? Full 1/1 slider plays a bit boring if it's not in Easy imo :b Here, you can try following the vocal here rather than the main beat, try reducing the repeat by moving the repeat point to the red tick at 01:26:347 - so that the note will end at 01:26:833 - where the vocal also ends :3 Then, you can insert a circle at 01:27:158 - to keep the rhythm going too For pattern suggestion, you can try mine here though you may want to neaten the curve there :b
   
   like this

   

   288,260,85861,6,0,B|356:236|376:316|448:256,2,156,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   208,328,87158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   188,228,87482,2,0,P|208:184|256:160,1,104,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:58:293 (3,4) - Hmm you can try to make (3) more curvy to make the pattern at 01:56:996 (1,2,3) - more interesting and neater imo The curve will also emphasize the pitch on the vocal nicely too owo Try this one http://puu.sh/6fOdF.jpg

I fixed Some Pattern, but Guest Mapper didn't want to suggestion mod(blanket etc...)
I guess that's all then, sorry for the short mod, the map is really good; The mapsets are really balanced with each other and Yuki's storyboard is awesome!

Anyway, I hope this can be ranked as soon as possible and hope my mod helps

(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ☆

Natteke wrote:

░░░░░░░░░░░████
░░░░░░░░░░█░░░█
░░░░░░░░░█░░░░█
███████▄▄█░░░░░██████▄
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░ BATs Rank This ░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░ Please! ░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█████░░░░░░░░░█
░░░░░░░░░░░████████

Frostmourne wrote:

Natteke wrote:

░░░░░░░░░░░████
░░░░░░░░░░█░░░█
░░░░░░░░░█░░░░█
███████▄▄█░░░░░██████▄
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░ BATs Rank This ░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░ Please! ░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█████░░░░░░░░░█
░░░░░░░░░░░████████

Now it's real haha xD

Good luck

Ami wrote:

Good luck :3

HabiHolic wrote:

Enon wrote:

랭크 기대하고 있습니다!!

Andrea wrote:

Why there aren't the guest mappers mentioned in the difficulty names? I highly disapprove this.

Andrea wrote:

That's much better :3

Re-Bubbled~

Natteke wrote:

░░░░░░░░░░░████
░░░░░░░░░░█░░░█
░░░░░░░░░█░░░░█
███████▄▄█░░░░░██████▄
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░ BATs Rank This ░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░ Please! ░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█████░░░░░░░░░█
░░░░░░░░░░░████████

Frostmourne wrote:

Natteke wrote:

░░░░░░░░░░░████
░░░░░░░░░░█░░░█
░░░░░░░░░█░░░░█
███████▄▄█░░░░░██████▄
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░ BATs Rank This ░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░ Please! ░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█
▓▓▓▓▓▓█████░░░░░░░░░█
░░░░░░░░░░░████████

This must be miracle that I can rank this finally. (used Natteke's posts for 3 times in this thread)
Congratulation~