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Hanatan - Shiwa

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Beige
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 1월 13일 월요일 at 오전 3:41:30

Artist: Hanatan
Title: Shiwa
Tags: utaite yurica nicovideo vocaloid coredelia flower buzzG dingggu norman konei nico nico douga [ yuki ]
BPM: 185
Filesize: 17715kb
Play Time: 03:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. GGu's Hard (4.95 stars, 484 notes)
  2. Insane (4.82 stars, 737 notes)
  3. Konei's Easy (2.37 stars, 233 notes)
  4. Norman's Normal (3.97 stars, 288 notes)
Download: Hanatan - Shiwa
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
By Konei
By Norman
By DingGGu
By Me

By Yuki


Andrea Frostmourne
Abe Nana
via #modreqs

[General]

audio bitrate higher than 192kbps.
The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps

[Easy]

03:45:927 - delete this section. same to other diffs

[Normal]

AR + 1 ?
00:49:332 - kiai's end here 모든 난이도의 키아이타임은 동일하게 하는걸 권장합니다.
01:07:656 - kiai's end here
02:04:575 - kiai's end here
02:22:981 - kiai's end here
03:23:062 (2) - move to white line (03:23:224). and change it 1/1 slider with finish
03:45:927 - kiai's end here


[Hard]

01:02:467 (4) - NC


[Insane]

01:07:656 - kiai's end here
02:22:981 - kiai's end here
03:45:927 - kiai's end here



짧네염
Topic Starter
Beige

-Chata- wrote:

via #modreqs

[General]

audio bitrate higher than 192kbps.
The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps

[Easy]

03:45:927 - delete this section. same to other diffs

[Normal]

AR + 1 ?
00:49:332 - kiai's end here 모든 난이도의 키아이타임은 동일하게 하는걸 권장합니다.
01:07:656 - kiai's end here
02:04:575 - kiai's end here
02:22:981 - kiai's end here
03:23:062 (2) - move to white line (03:23:224). and change it 1/1 slider with finish
03:45:927 - kiai's end here


[Hard]

01:02:467 (4) - NC


[Insane]

01:07:656 - kiai's end here
02:22:981 - kiai's end here
03:45:927 - kiai's end here



짧네염
Fixed it! Thanks~ I changed only kiai time.
Natteke
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Topic Starter
Beige

Natteke wrote:

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XD Thanks~
HabiHolic
인센겟난 해도됩니까 ㅋ
Topic Starter
Beige

HabiHolic wrote:

인센겟난 해도됩니까 ㅋ
해도 되는데 난이도 이름이 Extra나 Insane중 하나일거에요 ㅋ;
[ Yuki ]_old
스토리보드 만들어도 될까요?

혹시 이미 만들사람 정햐져있나?흑
Topic Starter
Beige

[ Yuki ] wrote:

스토리보드 만들어도 될까요?

혹시 이미 만들사람 정햐져있나?흑
원래 DingGGu님이 만들려고 했는데 접었으니까... 만들어주시면 정말 감사하죠 ㅎㅎ...
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ W h i t e

[ Konei's Easy ]

00:05:412 (1) - > Change

00:07:358 (2) - Add circle

00:29:088 (2) - nc off

01:20:655 (1) - 00:05:412 (1) -This is the same way

01:44:331 (2) - nc off

03:35:574 (1) - delete

03:35:574 (1) - spin
[ Norman's Normal ]

으... 문제 없는것 같아요 !!

[ DingGGu's Hard ]

00:18:061 (1) -
00:43:845 (1) - 여기 조금 힛사가 필요할듯 싶어요 .. 힛사없으니 조금 ..밋밋하다는느낌... ( 클랩 넣어주시면 괜찮을듯 ... 전부다 )

00:59:412 (1) - ^

01:38:331 (5) - ^

01:59:088 (2) - ^

02:04:439 (2) - 여기는 02:04:115 (1) - 이것처럼 해주시면 좋겠어요 'ㅅ'!! ( 힛사 )

02:04:763 (3) - 슬라이더의 머리 = 휘슬 , 꼬리 = 클랩 넣어주세요 'ㅅ'!!

02:10:601 (1) - 뉴콤보 추가해주는게 어떨까요 .. 해깔려하시는분도 조금 있으실듯 한데 ...

02:14:817 (3) - 힛사 추가 'ㅅ'.. ( 그냥 이런거 전부 클랩 떡칠하시면 될듯... )

03:27:466 (3) - 클랩 ㄱㄱ!

킄.. 모양 좋네요!!

[ Insane ]

HP + 1

음.. 딱히 잡을깨 없는듯 싶어요 'ㅅ'..

그나저나 하나땅 노래는 정말 좋은듯!! = Star!! GL~ : )
Topic Starter
Beige

[ Zzz ] wrote:

[ DingGGu's Hard ]


00:43:845 (1) - 여기 조금 힛사가 필요할듯 싶어요 .. 힛사없으니 조금 ..밋밋하다는느낌... ( 클랩 넣어주시면 괜찮을듯 ... 전부다 ) X

00:59:412 (1) - ^ X

01:38:331 (5) - ^ X

01:59:088 (2) - ^ X

02:04:439 (2) - 여기는 02:04:115 (1) - 이것처럼 해주시면 좋겠어요 'ㅅ'!! ( 힛사 ) X

02:04:763 (3) - 슬라이더의 머리 = 휘슬 , 꼬리 = 클랩 넣어주세요 'ㅅ'!! 수정

02:10:601 (1) - 뉴콤보 추가해주는게 어떨까요 .. 해깔려하시는분도 조금 있으실듯 한데 ... 수정

02:14:817 (3) - 힛사 추가 'ㅅ'.. ( 그냥 이런거 전부 클랩 떡칠하시면 될듯... ) X]

03:27:466 (3) - 클랩 ㄱㄱ! X

킄.. 모양 좋네요!! 이외에 수정 완료

[ Insane ]

HP + 1 X 다른 모딩 받아보고 수정해 보겠습니다 ㅎㅎ

음.. 딱히 잡을깨 없는듯 싶어요 'ㅅ'..

그나저나 하나땅 노래는 정말 좋은듯!! = Star!! GL~ : )
모딩 감사합니다~
[ Yuki ]_old
Coming soon [ Yuki ]'s Storyboard!!

Storyboard Video

lol~
[ Yuki ]_old
Complete Storyboard!!~:D

Storyboard
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F,0,199358,200007,0,1
M,0,199358,204223,165,133,185,133
F,0,200007,203574,1
F,0,203574,204223,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\j1.png",320,240
F,0,204547,205196,0,1
M,0,204547,209088,430,163,410,163
F,0,205196,208439,1
F,0,208439,209088,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\k1.png",320,240
F,0,209412,210061,0,1
M,0,209412,218169,171,128,191,128
F,0,210061,215574,1
F,0,215574,218169,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\l1.png",320,240
M,0,219790,,320,240
F,0,219790,220439,0,1
F,0,220439,222061,1
F,0,222061,222709,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\m1.png",320,240
F,0,223034,223682,0,1
F,0,223682,225953,1
F,0,225953,228547,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Name\Touching.png",320,240
M,0,70601,71250,340,196,320,196
F,2,70601,71250,0,1
F,0,71250,76763,1
M,0,71250,77412,320,196,300,196
F,0,76763,77412,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Name\Love Story.png",320,240
M,0,71574,72223,330,251,350,251
F,0,71574,72223,0,1
F,0,72223,76763,1
M,0,72223,77412,350,251,370,251
F,0,76763,77412,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Name\Hanatan.png",320,240
M,0,145845,,320,163
F,0,145845,146493,0,1
F,0,146493,153304,1
F,0,153304,153953,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Name\Mapset.png",320,240
F,0,147142,147790,0,1
F,0,147790,153304,1
F,0,153304,153953,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Name\Storyboard.png",320,240
M,0,148439,,319,312
F,0,148439,149088,0,1
F,0,149088,153304,1
F,0,153304,153953,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

http://puu.sh/60b3I.zip <SB File

음 님이 지적하신 손은 차후 수정하겠습니다
대체 일러스트를 못찾겠네영..GL~
Topic Starter
Beige

[ Yuki ] wrote:

Complete Storyboard!!~:D

Storyboard
[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG4.jpg",320,240
F,0,2818,12547,0,0.7783092
S,0,2818,12547,1.142516,1.12668
M,0,2818,12872,320,-79,320,182
F,0,12547,12872,0.7783092,0
S,0,12547,12872,1.12668,1.03167
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG6.jpg",320,240
F,0,12872,13196,0,1
S,0,12872,13196,0.7941443,0.8574843
M,0,12872,23574,319,240,363,240
F,0,13196,23250,1
F,0,23250,23574,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG8.png",320,240
F,0,23574,23899,0,1
S,0,23574,23899,0.9366596,1.015835
F,0,23899,32980,1
S,0,23899,32980,1.015835,1.114041
F,0,32980,33304,1,0
S,0,32980,33304,1.114041,1.030452
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG7.png",320,240
F,0,33628,33953,0,1
S,0,33628,33953,0.96833,1.03167
F,0,33953,49196,1
S,0,33953,49196,1.03167,1.124703
F,0,49196,49520,1,0
S,0,49196,49520,1.124703,1.03167
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG9.png",320,240
F,0,49520,49845,0,1
S,0,49520,49845,0.7941445,0.8416494
M,0,49520,68980,298,300,350,300
F,0,49845,67682,1
F,0,67682,68980,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG10.jpg",320,240
S,0,78061,,1.06334
F,0,78061,78385,0,1
M,0,78061,88439,320,351,320,76
F,0,78385,88115,1
F,0,88115,88439,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG2.jpg",320,240
F,1,88439,92331,0,0.4512991
F,0,92331,92655,0.4512991,0
S,0,92655,,1
Sprite,Background,Centre,"shiwabg.png",320,240
S,0,99142,,0.6753816
F,0,99142,107899,1
M,0,99142,108547,326,240,274,240
F,0,107899,108547,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG3.jpg",320,240
F,0,92980,97520,0,0.8235081
M,0,92980,98493,320,240,247,240
F,0,97520,98493,0.8235081,0
F,0,98493,98817,0
F,0,98817,99142,0,1
F,2,99142,100115,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG12.jpg",320,240
F,0,108872,109196,0,1
M,0,108872,124763,320,82,320,362
F,0,109196,124115,1
F,0,124115,124763,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG11.png",320,240
F,0,124763,125412,0,1
S,1,124763,125412,0.9683298,1.039587
M,0,124763,144223,312,240,337,240
F,0,125412,142926,1
F,0,142926,144223,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG12-B.jpg",320,240
S,0,164331,,1
M,0,164331,173736,320,240,320,351
F,0,173088,173736,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG9-B.jpg",320,240
S,0,154277,,0.8258144
F,0,154277,154926,0,1
M,0,154277,164980,344,309,302,309
F,0,154926,164331,1
F,0,164331,164980,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG13.png",320,240
F,0,174061,179250,0,0.4512991
M,0,174061,183142,319,258,320,344
S,0,174061,183142,0.9762475,0.9049903
F,2,179250,183142,0.4512991,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG14.jpg",320,240
M,0,183790,,320,240
F,0,183790,184439,0,1
S,0,183790,196763,0.7228868,0.6437117
F,0,184439,196763,1
F,0,196763,197412,1,0
S,1,196763,197412,0.6437117,0.604124
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG15.jpg",320,240
F,0,197412,198061,0,1
S,1,197412,198061,0.8178967,0.8970721
F,0,198061,215574,1
S,0,198061,215574,0.8970721,1.142515
M,0,209412,,320,241
F,0,215574,218169,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG\BG13.png",320,240
M,0,219790,,319,342
S,0,219790,,0.9129071
F,0,219790,220763,0,1
F,0,220763,225953,1
F,0,225953,228547,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\a.png",320,240
M,0,2818,,320,240
F,0,2818,3466,0,1
F,0,3466,6709,1
F,0,6709,7358,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\b.png",320,240
F,0,8007,8655,0,1
F,0,8655,11899,1
F,1,11899,12547,1,0
S,1,11899,12547,1,0.8495669
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\c.png",320,240
F,0,13196,13845,0,1
M,0,13196,17412,222,357,202,357
F,0,13845,16763,1
F,0,16763,17412,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\d.png",320,240
F,0,17736,18385,0,1
M,0,17736,23574,308,314,288,314
F,0,18385,22926,1
F,0,22926,23574,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\e.png",320,240
F,0,23250,23574,0,1
M,0,23250,24547,320,240,330,240
F,0,23574,24223,1
F,0,24223,24547,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\f.png",320,240
F,0,24223,24872,0,1
M,0,24223,28763,320,300,320,320
F,0,24872,28115,1
F,0,28115,28763,1
F,0,28763,30061,1
M,0,28763,30709,320,320,320,326
F,0,30061,30709,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\g.png",320,240
M,0,31034,,320,240
F,0,31034,31682,0,1
S,0,31034,33628,1.007918,1.118763
F,0,31682,32980,1
F,0,32980,33628,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\h.png",320,240
F,0,33628,34277,0,1
M,0,33628,41088,227,380,247,380
F,0,34277,40439,1
F,0,40439,41088,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\i.png",320,240
F,0,41088,41736,0,1
M,0,41088,51142,418,317,388,317
F,0,41736,50493,1
F,0,50493,51142,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\j.png",320,240
F,0,51466,52115,0,1
M,0,51466,56331,133,384,153,384
F,0,52115,55682,1
F,0,55682,56331,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\k.png",320,240
F,0,56655,57304,0,1
M,0,56655,64439,438,332,408,332
F,0,57304,63790,1
F,0,63790,64439,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\l.png",320,240
M,0,64763,,320,240
F,0,64763,65412,0,1
S,0,64763,68980,1,1.166268
F,0,65412,67682,1
F,0,67682,68980,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\m.png",320,240
M,0,78061,,138,251
F,0,78061,78709,0,1
F,0,78709,81628,1
F,0,81628,82277,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\n.png",320,240
M,0,83250,,195,255
F,0,83250,83899,0,1
F,0,83899,87142,1
F,0,87142,87790,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\o.png",320,240
F,0,88439,89088,0,0.8907217
F,0,89088,92007,0.8907217,1
F,0,92007,92655,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\p.png",320,240
F,0,92980,93628,0,1
M,0,92980,98493,300,240,320,240
F,0,93628,97845,1
F,0,97845,98493,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\q.png",320,240
F,0,98817,99142,0,0.9619793
M,0,98817,100763,320,240,330,240
F,0,99142,100115,0.9619793,1
F,0,100115,100763,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\s.png",320,240
F,0,101088,101736,0,1
M,0,101088,105953,175,320,195,320
F,0,101736,105304,1
F,0,105304,105953,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\t.png",320,240
M,0,105953,,320,240
F,0,105953,106601,0,1
S,0,105953,108547,1,1.150433
F,0,106601,107899,1
F,0,107899,108547,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\u.png",320,240
S,0,108872,,1
F,0,108872,109520,0,1
F,0,109520,115358,1
F,0,115358,116007,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\v.png",320,240
F,0,116331,116980,0,1
F,0,116980,120547,1
F,0,120547,121196,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\w.png",320,240
F,0,121520,122169,0,1
F,0,122169,125736,1
F,0,125736,126385,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\x.png",320,240
F,0,126709,127358,0,1
M,0,126709,131574,127,360,146,360
F,0,127358,130926,1
F,0,130926,131574,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\y.png",320,240
F,0,131899,132547,0,1
M,0,131899,136439,438,395,418,395
F,0,132547,135790,1
F,0,135790,136439,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\z.png",320,240
F,0,136763,137412,0,1
M,0,136763,139682,185,358,195,358
F,0,137412,139034,1
F,0,139034,139682,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\a1.png",320,240
F,0,140007,140655,0,1
M,0,140007,144223,409,395,394,395
F,0,140655,142926,1
F,0,142926,144223,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\b1.png",320,240
F,0,154277,154926,0,1
M,0,154277,163034,320,240,320,260
F,0,154926,162385,1
F,0,162385,163034,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\c1.png",320,240
F,0,164655,165304,0,1
M,0,164655,172439,320,240,320,260
F,0,165304,171790,1
F,0,171790,172439,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\d1.png",320,240
F,0,172763,173412,0,1
F,0,173412,177628,1
F,0,177628,178277,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\e1.png",320,240
F,0,178601,179250,0,1
S,0,178601,181845,1,1.213773
F,0,179250,181196,1
F,0,181196,181845,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\f1.png",320,240
S,0,183790,,1
F,0,183790,184439,0,1
F,0,184439,188007,1
F,0,188007,188655,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\g1.png",320,240
F,0,188980,189628,0,1
F,0,189628,193196,1
F,0,193196,193845,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\h1.png",320,240
F,0,194169,194817,0,1
F,0,194817,198385,1
F,0,198385,199034,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\i1.png",320,240
F,0,199358,200007,0,1
M,0,199358,204223,165,133,185,133
F,0,200007,203574,1
F,0,203574,204223,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\j1.png",320,240
F,0,204547,205196,0,1
M,0,204547,209088,430,163,410,163
F,0,205196,208439,1
F,0,208439,209088,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\k1.png",320,240
F,0,209412,210061,0,1
M,0,209412,218169,171,128,191,128
F,0,210061,215574,1
F,0,215574,218169,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\l1.png",320,240
M,0,219790,,320,240
F,0,219790,220439,0,1
F,0,220439,222061,1
F,0,222061,222709,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\m1.png",320,240
F,0,223034,223682,0,1
F,0,223682,225953,1
F,0,225953,228547,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Name\Touching.png",320,240
M,0,70601,71250,340,196,320,196
F,2,70601,71250,0,1
F,0,71250,76763,1
M,0,71250,77412,320,196,300,196
F,0,76763,77412,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Name\Love Story.png",320,240
M,0,71574,72223,330,251,350,251
F,0,71574,72223,0,1
F,0,72223,76763,1
M,0,72223,77412,350,251,370,251
F,0,76763,77412,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Name\Hanatan.png",320,240
M,0,145845,,320,163
F,0,145845,146493,0,1
F,0,146493,153304,1
F,0,153304,153953,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Name\Mapset.png",320,240
F,0,147142,147790,0,1
F,0,147790,153304,1
F,0,153304,153953,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Name\Storyboard.png",320,240
M,0,148439,,319,312
F,0,148439,149088,0,1
F,0,149088,153304,1
F,0,153304,153953,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

http://puu.sh/60b3I.zip <SB File

음 님이 지적하신 손은 차후 수정하겠습니다
대체 일러스트를 못찾겠네영..GL~
정말 감사드려요~ ^^
Konei

[ Zzz ] wrote:

[ Konei's Easy ]

00:05:412 (1) - > Change I like the rhythm to follow the instruments, no change.

00:07:358 (2) - Add circle The break is cool, no?

00:29:088 (2) - nc off No, to seperate instruments.

01:20:655 (1) - 00:05:412 (1) -This is the same way Same

01:44:331 (2) - nc off Same

03:35:574 (1) - delete No, I want a finish to be there.

03:35:574 (1) - spin

Sorry, no changes. :<

But thanks for modding!
Garven
Had a quick look at the storyboard.

SPOILER
2013-12-27 21:29 Garven: Looks a lot better with that storyboard in here
2013-12-27 21:29 Garven: Kind of sad that the original set's mod posts were deleted with the creator change though.
2013-12-27 21:33 W h i t e: ... Yes
2013-12-27 21:34 Garven: Why did it change?
2013-12-27 21:34 Garven: DingGGu go afk?
2013-12-27 21:34 W h i t e: Yes, he quited osu
2013-12-27 21:34 Garven: That's unfortunate. :<
2013-12-27 21:34 Garven: Please remind me to mod this. I've been wanting to for the longest time but I keep forgetting
2013-12-27 21:35 Garven: I did notice a couple things with the storyboard that were weird, but nothing too big
2013-12-27 21:35 W h i t e: You think SB is weird for you?
2013-12-27 21:35 Garven: No no
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: There were a couple spots
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: Lets see
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: At the first break 01:10:617 -
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: The "Touching... Love Story"
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: It's just really awkward English
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: The words also don't really have any timing with the music
2013-12-27 21:37 W h i t e: oh... lol
2013-12-27 21:38 Garven: Also the BG right after that is really low quality compared to the rest of the images
2013-12-27 21:38 Garven: Especially that zoomed in.
2013-12-27 21:40 Garven: Also at 01:40:861 - when it uses the map's BG again
2013-12-27 21:40 Garven: It doesn't really fit the lyrics of "Lets get married"
2013-12-27 21:40 Garven: Finding a proposal picture would be much more fitting
2013-12-27 21:40 Garven: And would lead into the chorus that much better
2013-12-27 21:42 Garven: All of the lyrics images need to be cropped. There's a ton of unnecessary transparency
2013-12-27 21:43 Garven: Same with the images in the /Name folder
2013-12-27 21:45 Garven: Also kind of weird having 花たん alone, but having W h i t e and [ Yuki ] with labels. Have something like Vocalist: 花たん Artist: buzzG
2013-12-27 21:45 Garven: during 02:28:131 -
2013-12-27 21:45 Garven: I can remove the automatically generated Artist/Title so accomodate this storyboarding
2013-12-27 21:47 Garven: Also at 03:48:563 - have the "thank you for playing" fade in or something. All other modes can see this appear instantly since spinners don't cover the screen for the entire duration
2013-12-27 21:49 Garven: Anyway, I should be going to bed.
2013-12-27 21:49 Garven: Do you want me to post this in the thread?
2013-12-27 21:50 W h i t e: I send your SB Modding by [ Yuki ]
2013-12-27 21:51 W h i t e: But I(or He) want to post this modding in thread.
2013-12-27 21:51 Garven: Alright. I asked a friend to check the lyrics too. He's afk right now, so we'll see if he can check later
Topic Starter
Beige

Garven wrote:

Had a quick look at the storyboard.

SPOILER
2013-12-27 21:29 Garven: Looks a lot better with that storyboard in here
2013-12-27 21:29 Garven: Kind of sad that the original set's mod posts were deleted with the creator change though.
2013-12-27 21:33 W h i t e: ... Yes
2013-12-27 21:34 Garven: Why did it change?
2013-12-27 21:34 Garven: DingGGu go afk?
2013-12-27 21:34 W h i t e: Yes, he quited osu
2013-12-27 21:34 Garven: That's unfortunate. :<
2013-12-27 21:34 Garven: Please remind me to mod this. I've been wanting to for the longest time but I keep forgetting
2013-12-27 21:35 Garven: I did notice a couple things with the storyboard that were weird, but nothing too big
2013-12-27 21:35 W h i t e: You think SB is weird for you?
2013-12-27 21:35 Garven: No no
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: There were a couple spots
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: Lets see
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: At the first break 01:10:617 -
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: The "Touching... Love Story"
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: It's just really awkward English
2013-12-27 21:36 Garven: The words also don't really have any timing with the music
2013-12-27 21:37 W h i t e: oh... lol
2013-12-27 21:38 Garven: Also the BG right after that is really low quality compared to the rest of the images
2013-12-27 21:38 Garven: Especially that zoomed in.
2013-12-27 21:40 Garven: Also at 01:40:861 - when it uses the map's BG again
2013-12-27 21:40 Garven: It doesn't really fit the lyrics of "Lets get married"
2013-12-27 21:40 Garven: Finding a proposal picture would be much more fitting
2013-12-27 21:40 Garven: And would lead into the chorus that much better
2013-12-27 21:42 Garven: All of the lyrics images need to be cropped. There's a ton of unnecessary transparency
2013-12-27 21:43 Garven: Same with the images in the /Name folder
2013-12-27 21:45 Garven: Also kind of weird having 花たん alone, but having W h i t e and [ Yuki ] with labels. Have something like Vocalist: 花たん Artist: buzzG
2013-12-27 21:45 Garven: during 02:28:131 -
2013-12-27 21:45 Garven: I can remove the automatically generated Artist/Title so accomodate this storyboarding
2013-12-27 21:47 Garven: Also at 03:48:563 - have the "thank you for playing" fade in or something. All other modes can see this appear instantly since spinners don't cover the screen for the entire duration
2013-12-27 21:49 Garven: Anyway, I should be going to bed.
2013-12-27 21:49 Garven: Do you want me to post this in the thread?
2013-12-27 21:50 W h i t e: I send your SB Modding by [ Yuki ]
2013-12-27 21:51 W h i t e: But I(or He) want to post this modding in thread.
2013-12-27 21:51 Garven: Alright. I asked a friend to check the lyrics too. He's afk right now, so we'll see if he can check later
Thanks ^^ He will fix this SB
Edit)Now he is afk
KSHR
こんにちは、Whiteさん

confirmed the Japanese lyrics as Garven requested me in game.
there was neither a mistake nor a strange way to split.

btw, if this song was uploaded to Nico Nico Douga, then "nico" and "douga" should be added to Tags (don't add it to Source please. it's unrankable in the current ranking criteria.)


good luck~ :3 (ofc, no kds please!)
Norman

-Chata- wrote:

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AR + 1
이거 하나만 고치는건가요?

폰으로 확인해보니깐 Easy도 AR이 4였네요..

노말 AR 대신 올려주시면 감사하겠습니다!
Topic Starter
Beige

Norman wrote:

이거 하나만 고치는건가요?

폰으로 확인해보니깐 Easy도 AR이 4였네요..

노말 AR 대신 올려주시면 감사하겠습니다!
03:23:062 (2) - move to white line (03:23:224). and change it 1/1 slider with finish 이것도 고쳐야 하는데 ㅋㅋ;

이것도 제가 대신 고치겠습니다
Sylith

Natteke wrote:

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DingGGu
My map T-T..

Go Rank!
Frostmourne

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Also http://puu.sh/66Oko.wav for soft-hitnormal3 and soft-hitnormal4
I think the current soft-hitnormal3 and soft-hitnormal4 are unrankable due to to its inaudibility so I got the soft from the template skin and reduced volume by myself that I think it should be audible enough (hopefully you consider using it...) because some parts like 02:21:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - would be problem.

You can still reduce it a bit more but I guess this should be ok enough. Probably better if you ask Garven about the current soft hitnormal here ;)

also

:)
Topic Starter
Beige

Frostmourne wrote:

Natteke wrote:

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Also http://puu.sh/66Oko.wav for soft-hitnormal3 and soft-hitnormal4
I think the current soft-hitnormal3 and soft-hitnormal4 are unrankable due to to its inaudibility so I got the soft from the template skin and reduced volume by myself that I think it should be audible enough (hopefully you consider using it...) because some parts like 02:21:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - would be problem.

You can still reduce it a bit more but I guess this should be ok enough. Probably better if you ask Garven about the current soft hitnormal here ;)

also

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Oh~ Thanks :D Fixed it!
jieusieu
[Easy]
fine


[Normal]
03:38:833 (2) - 슬라이더 전체에 휘슬을 주셔서 공굴러가는소리가 나네요


[Hard]
00:38:833 (6) - 2따운1롸이트
00:52:617 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1223033 ??
02:43:698 (1) - 끝에 클랩
02:49:536 (3) - 끝에 휘슬


[Insane]
01:51:158 (3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1223002 이것도 괜찮지 않을까요
02:43:050 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1223025 좀 애매하지만
Topic Starter
Beige

jieusieu wrote:

[Easy]
fine


[Normal]
03:38:833 (2) - 슬라이더 전체에 휘슬을 주셔서 공굴러가는소리가 나네요 수정


[Hard]
00:38:833 (6) - 2따운1롸이트 1 up으로 수정
00:52:617 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1223033 ?? 수정, 좋은 패턴
02:43:698 (1) - 끝에 클랩 수정
02:49:536 (3) - 끝에 휘슬 수정


[Insane]
01:51:158 (3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1223002 이것도 괜찮지 않을까요 X 너무 딱딱함
02:43:050 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1223025 좀 애매하지만수정
Thanks~ ^^
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. I suggest to add "Yuki" for tags
    (SB creator)
  2. For BG, it is better to use not .png but .jpg
  3. Don't you add guest names for diff names?
[SB]
  1. According to Ranking Criteria, several images are too big
    " the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. "
    "The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively."
  2. BG7.png, BG8.png: I feel vertically long. aspect ratio is correct?
  3. BuzzG.png: buzzG
  4. Mapset.png: how about adding guest names like this ?
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:779 (3,1) - I prefer to avoid overlap
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:185 (3,1) - I prefer this
  2. 00:31:374 (1,2) - a little difficult for beginner, imo. how about this?
  3. 01:04:779 (5,1) - blanket correctly
    SPOILER

    42,133,64779,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    48,225,65104,6,0,P|110:197|133:132,2,140,4|0|4,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:42:563 (1) - end at 01:43:212
  5. 02:36:563 (2,1) - avoid overlap
[Normal]

  • Good!
[Hard]

  • Good!
SB is so fine! ~☆
~Good Luck~
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