This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November 30, 2009 at 7:57:58 PM

Artist: Wiklund
Title: Joy of Living
Tags: Chiptune
BPM: 188
Filesize: 7841kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.49 stars, 84 notes)
2. Hard (4.95 stars, 410 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 530 notes)
4. Normal (4.16 stars, 181 notes)

Download: Wiklund - Joy of Living
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It's so happy

An awesome chiptune for yeahyeahyeahhh's Wiklund project.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

easy and normal are very challenging
didn't find any technical problems
good map

star!

Easy
-

Normal
01:44:039 (5) - Whistle doesn't really sound good.
Sorry, nothing else here. ._.

Hard
00:42:031 (5,6) - This is kinda' hard to see while playing
01:48:070 (6,7,8,9) - I don't like this pattern Actually, if you change (7) to a new combo I wouldn't mind, but totally up to you. This is kinda' opinion.
02:20:013 (3) - I really don't like this, possibly change it just hit circles?
02:50:045 (6) - This is hard to see while playing the map

Insane
00:35:061 (8,1) - I think this was intentional, but the distance snap here is off
00:51:009 (1) - Maybe I'm just an idiot, but I was thrown off by this part and was attempting to do 16th beats here. So maybe increase the distance spacing? Possibly darken the BG image just for this part?
01:16:062 (1,2,3,4) - This part until the spinner sounded void of hit sounds. I suggest on the heads of the sliders Finish, Clap, Finish, Clap
01:26:020 (1) - Finish sound here
=02:23:064 (1,1,1) - Not a problem, I'm just saying I really like these. =3
02:24:092 (1) - Add a Finish sound here.
02:35:013 (1) - ^
02:48:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I know it's overused, but I'd like if this hit sound pattern was used throughout the whole map (claps on with the song). But you already have your own hit sound thing going on, and it sounds pretty good, so it's fine changed or not to me.

Star'd

[Easy]
00:16:308 - I think it will be better to move it to the next white tick
01:02:266 - same
00:21:096 - Extend to the next white tick
00:26:202 - same

For me the song sounds better this way.

[other diffs]
All ok.

Star~

[Easy]

00:16:046 (3) - 2,3 felt a bit close compared to, say, 4,5. Stumbled a bit there.
00:36:025 (1) - Move 1/2 later?

As a whole, the 3/2 spacing time might get a bit confusing for a beginner, since it may become hard to distinguish between 3/2, 1/1, and 2/1.

[Normal]
00:20:013 (7,1,2) - Make this a triangle?
00:45:003 (4) - I'd move this up by a grid or so, so that the spacing between 4,5 is the same as 1,2.

A bit hard for Normal.

[Hard]

00:28:091 (3) - Move the endpoint of this slider a bit to the right for symmetry?
01:16:062 (1) - I didn't understand your new combo scheme for this section; sometimes a combo lasted 1 phrase, sometimes 2.
01:17:074 (4,1) - Throughout the map, I didn't like these little hops. Too small to seem like jumps, but just big enough to look awkward (although I didn't find them that bad to hit). Maybe stretch them a bit, or squish them back to normal spacing.
01:40:072 (5,6,7) - I'd try to line up the endpoint of 5 with 6, and then put 7 either also line up with those or right under the endpoint of 5.

[Insane]

Oh geez, 1/4 streams at 188 BPM. I can't pull that off. XD

00:26:068 (6,9) - Move these down a bit to line up with 7,8.
00:48:022 (5,6) - I'd move these a bit to line up with the endpoint of 4 and start of 1.
00:56:084 (2) - Add a note before this one?
00:58:011 (2) - ^
01:00:003 (1) - Line this up with the yellow 1 slider before?
01:00:083 (4) - I'd start this stack a bit later.
01:09:012 (1) - Dunno why, felt this note was a bit high when playing it.
01:50:093 (6) - Move this to the left for a smoother curve, or to the right to line up with 5.
02:26:020 (5) - Move up a grid, looks a little sloppy.
02:23:001 (1) - I don't like the variations in spacing from this note onwards in this section, please fix.
02:36:025 (1,2,3,4) - A bit weirdly placed, the zig-zag is crooked.
02:37:085 (4) - New combo, at least to warn of jump.
02:42:079 (1) - Inconsistent new combo.

Starred for a fun map, and interesting song.

Same comment about the little miniature hops, although they're far less noticeable here since you're rushing to hit the notes.

[General]

1. Looking at the Beatmap project thread...
   

   3. Your songs MUST have the following tags: Wiklund, Chiptune. Maps ranked before this thread are not subject to this (obviously), but I think there's only one and it already has those tags.

   Your map still needs the Wiklund tag, and Spin said Wing Beats is not a source.

[Easy]

1. Is the slow countdown on purpose? D=

Everything else is fine. Awesome beatmap btw (Wiklund <3)

Easy
01:14:007 (3,4) - finish on 3rd, clap on 4th
01:43:043 (2) - clap here
01:52:037 (1) - finish here
01:54:028 (3) - start this slider with a clap

Normal
00:27:015 (4,6) - clap here (and remove finish from 6th)
00:49:018 (2) - end this slider with a clap...
01:06:009 (6) - ... and start this one with clap

Hard
Sounds fine for me! ^^

Insane
00:30:035 (6,8) - clap here
01:22:005 (2,4,2,4,2,4,2) - start these sliders with clap
01:26:020 (spinner) - finish here

Star for you ^^

I'm new at modding, so you may ignore them all...

[General]
OMG I LOVE THIS SONG REALLY!! But sorry.. I can't hep you mod the hitsounds because I really don't know how your hitsounds' structures are.

[Easy]
Seems fine to me..

[Normal]
00:56:020 (3) - Add finish at the begining.

[Hard]
02:58:755 - Maybe you can stop the Kiai Time section on this point?

[Insane]
02:23:064 (1,1,1) - Maybe you have to change the sliders, or them longer. Before, I thought they like the normal short sliders..

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Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *~

Feels good, man.

Insane
Hit sounds sound soft or something. Dunno.

Otherwise, all good. =]

Another faceman map where nothing wrong is found. Star.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

All suggestions, take what you like ignore what you don't

General:

Source?

Easy:

00:55:056 (1) - Remove new combo? (Seems a little pointless to me ) If you want color contrast then maybe put it a new combo at 00:54:060 (6) - instead.
01:00:067 (1) - ^ alternative new combo at 00:59:071 (5) -
01:24:028 (4) - New combo?

That's all, fun for an easy.

Normal

No problems

Hard:

Great

Insane:

02:25:056 (3) - Make this slider like 02:24:092 (1) - ?
02:33:086 (4,1,1) - You could use the same idea for these sliders (I only suggest it because I like it )

All awesome ~~ Star!

halloooooooo >_<

er.. suugestions = ??? at the end

Easy:
01:39:606 [4] abit to close to the previous beat???

Hard:
00:23:170 [1] maybe 2 tiny squares to the right???

meh =___= i can't see anything >_<;;;;;;;;

well i think most of the things lol (only 2) >_< was your mapping style i have no right

star star for you you ^^

haisha_

i didn't find anything to point out.
nice map

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Hard:

01:41:084 (7) - Covered by slider, looks bad.

Overall

Remove the .osb file

Easy
Why is the countdown speed normal. Double seems to suit it better.

Other than that, very good

OK I've made changes, thanks for the mods

The joy of bubbling.

Ranked

Nice Beatmap =D