Azmato wrote:

[Easy]

00:14:542 (3) - spacing. only this note's distance is 1.3 The distance seems fine to me o3o

00:36:859 (2) - x472 y228 I did minor changes for these two.

00:37:225 (3) - 480 156

00:59:908 (1) - curve more to completely blank (2) http://puu.sh/61VZc.jpg ( 01:19:664 (3) )

if you applied ^, (3)'s slider have to blank (1)'s end I can't blanket them anymore or else itll alter the distance spacing >.<

01:04:298 (1) - up 1 grid to blank (2) completely Ok

01:47:103 (2) - spacing Fixed.

01:50:396 (2) - same reason as 00:59:908 (1) Applies here as well

I recommend you to use grid level 4 to make consistent distance

[Normal]

00:00:640 (1) - 1: x172 y132 , 2 : x216 y80 ,3 : x296 y76 I think this looks fine enough.

00:02:835 (4) - blank (1) completely I think i made it better?

00:16:737 (4) - how about blank (1) ?? ^

00:44:542 (1) - how about blank previous (3)? ^

00:56:981 (6) - ctrl g? I'll leave it like this, but I'll change it if someone else says it too.

01:14:908 (2) - make completely S. http://puu.sh/61WCc.jpg I'll leave it like this, i like my slider.

01:37:225 (1) - blank (2) i think i did?

01:47:469 (4) - y 212 Got it.


that's all.

Nice map and nice song! I like this

lZenxl wrote:

Sb check as requested o/

No problems actually, just some comments and suggestions

: Very Smooth SB, appropriate usage of stars!

: Are you going to use the quotes? I don't hear them in the song yet o.o

-=- Maybe fade out to a completely black picture at the end? Since the music also fades out, you might want to follow the flow

Good job on the SB o/

neonat wrote:

Easy

00:02:835 (3) - change it to a circle at 00:02:835 and a slider at 00:03:566 because the beat at 00:03:566 is strong, just has to have a slider start there! so it can be click-able :< (you could then NC the slider) I don't really know, I like this idea... But I'm just going to leave it. Don't think it makes much of a difference :s
00:49:664 (3) - clap on start of slider with (addition of normal?) How did i forget?
just find it weird some look like they touch each other but most of the time they don't. like 01:57:713 (4,1) - seem so close Fixed, Dem you Grid Snap!

Normal

00:02:835 (4) - same opinion as easy, I think something should start at 00:03:565 and not something ending there because of the music Same as above.
01:05:030 (3) - clap at the end of the slider with (addition of normal?) How did i forget?
01:39:420 (4) - similar to 00:02:835 (4) - still think starting on the white line instead of ending there would be nicer Looks alright to me

Good luck

Thanks

1. Apparently "black.jpg" isn't used. If that's the case, remove it.
2. Offset feels a bit early. I'm getting 664ms as offset. (and I modded normal with this offset because I suck and forgot to change it back before modding orz)
3. I'm pretty sure I have a 192kbps track of this song somewhere on my external HDD, buuut the HDD isn't with me right now so I can't do much about it. I'll see if I can find something tomorrow for you.

1. 00:22:981 - I'd rather not have the white thing in the middle here, and save it for use only before kiai. Same for 01:36:517 - . Gives a little more impact to the kiai I guess, though it's just my opinion, so feel free to disagree
2. Nothing much here.

1. HP and AR -1? It's a pretty gentle and slow song, so yeah.
2. 00:18:224 (1,2,3,4) - I'd remove the whistle from (2) and (4) head. It works better with less whistles, since you don't use a lot of whistles before this part imo.
3. 00:39:078 (4) - New combo for consistency.
4. 00:41:639 (1,2,3,4) - Same as before.
5. 00:51:517 (3) - Try moving the midpoint to 16;272 to blanket (2).
6. 00:56:639 (5) - Add NC, then remove from 00:58:103 (1) - , and add another one at 00:59:200 (2) - , and swap NC at 01:01:761 (1,2) - , 01:04:322 (1,3) - , remove it from 01:06:151 (1) - and add it at 01:07:981 (4) - . This will make every combo more or less be over 1 stanza, and more consistent.
7. 01:05:054 (3) - Missed a clap on end.
8. 01:14:200 (1) - Remove NC. Keeps this part of the kiai more consistent. (Or you can go with every stanza like the previous kiai if you'd like to)
9. 01:55:542 (2,3) - Same as before, I'd remove whistles from (2) head and (3) tail.

1. HP -1 if you did that in Normal, for consistency.
2. 00:12:347 (1,2) - Swap the order of these notes, as the stronger piano notes land on 00:12:347 - and 00:13:810 - , so it feels more natural to click then.
3. 00:24:054 (1,2) - ^Same as above.
4. 00:49:664 (3) - Sampleset Normal on end.
5. 00:54:054 (2) - Shorten to 00:54:786 - ? So you get that piano note.
6. As in Normal, you can go through the kiai and tidy up the NCs.
7. 01:28:444 (1) - Sampleset Normal.

CXu wrote:

[General]

1. Apparently "black.jpg" isn't used. If that's the case, remove it. ooooohhhh.. forgot v_v
2. Offset feels a bit early. I'm getting 664ms as offset. (and I modded normal with this offset because I suck and forgot to change it back before modding orz)
   Oh god, please tell me this isn't necessary (probably is). If it is, then i gotta work on my storyboard then. I'll confirm it with you tomorrow :3
3. I'm pretty sure I have a 192kbps track of this song somewhere on my external HDD, buuut the HDD isn't with me right now so I can't do much about it. I'll see if I can find something tomorrow for you.

Okayy

[Storyboard]

1. 00:22:981 - I'd rather not have the white thing in the middle here, and save it for use only before kiai. Same for 01:36:517 - . Gives a little more impact to the kiai I guess, though it's just my opinion, so feel free to disagree Honestly i used it for the sound in the background when it gets to a new melody.
2. Nothing much here.

[Normal]

1. HP and AR -1? It's a pretty gentle and slow song, so yeah. sure
2. 00:18:224 (1,2,3,4) - I'd remove the whistle from (2) and (4) head. It works better with less whistles, since you don't use a lot of whistles before this part imo. Hmm idk.. it sounds a little barren without them tho ;w;
3. 00:39:078 (4) - New combo for consistency.
4. 00:41:639 (1,2,3,4) - Same as before.
5. 00:51:517 (3) - Try moving the midpoint to 16;272 to blanket (2).
6. 00:56:639 (5) - Add NC, then remove from 00:58:103 (1) - , and add another one at 00:59:200 (2) - , and swap NC at 01:01:761 (1,2) - , 01:04:322 (1,3) - , remove it from 01:06:151 (1) - and add it at 01:07:981 (4) - . This will make every combo more or less be over 1 stanza, and more consistent.
7. 01:05:054 (3) - Missed a clap on end.
8. 01:14:200 (1) - Remove NC. Keeps this part of the kiai more consistent. (Or you can go with every stanza like the previous kiai if you'd like to)
9. 01:55:542 (2,3) - Same as before, I'd remove whistles from (2) head and (3) tail.

PHEW, pretty much did all the NCs and blankets, I got so confused because you modded it on 664 offset LOL.

[Easy]

1. HP -1 if you did that in Normal, for consistency.
2. 00:12:347 (1,2) - Swap the order of these notes, as the stronger piano notes land on 00:12:347 - and 00:13:810 - , so it feels more natural to click then.
3. 00:24:054 (1,2) - ^Same as above.
4. 00:49:664 (3) - Sampleset Normal on end.
5. 00:54:054 (2) - Shorten to 00:54:786 - ? So you get that piano note.
6. As in Normal, you can go through the kiai and tidy up the NCs.
7. 01:28:444 (1) - Sampleset Normal.

I think i followed the NC things v_v, not sure if i did it correctly though. And fixed the samplesets.

Overall I like this mapset. Not much when it comes to note placement or anything, as everything seems to work well and looks nice. I think I would've gone with Normal/Hard for naming the difficulties though, as I feel the way you arrange the notes and the spacing changes in Normal are a bit harder than what most Normals would use (they're not hard here due to the song's speed of course). Same goes for Easy using CS4. Feel free to keep your current diffnames, but that's my opinion at least.

Here's a star for now, and I'll get back to you about that .mp3 business.

ayaka2000 wrote:

Hi
I'm afraid my expressions may be rude or hard to read,
because I'm not so good at English. But please,
please be patient! I will try hard to l]earn English!


General
of intervals, to become spaced apart from one another
This is still more difficult.
consider the following alternative
I am sorry that my English is too poor to make you understand.

Easy
00:07:957 (2) -　move　x448 y96。place for smoother cursor moving Honestly i wanted it to be a curved circle, and i wanna leave it.
00:45:640 (2) - movex24 y896 ^
01:40:518 (4) - I think that's a very hard thing to do Really? o_o
01:52:225 (3) - I think that's a very hard thing to do Really? o_o
01:52:225 (3) - No new combo Not sure if the map i had was NC or not, but I'll leave it to be consistent with my hard diff.

Normal
00:05:761 (3) - Add a circle Unecessary, It doesn't fit with anything because there is nothing there.
00:08:688 (5) - Add a circle ^
00:29:176 (3) - Add a circle^
00:58:079 - 　Ctrl+G This one has been circulating my mods for a while now i believe,so ill change it.
01:45:274 (3) - Add a circle Same as above.

Good luck on this map Thanks ;o

Wafu wrote:

I told you to find 192kbps mp3 in my mod, as I see, you haven't found it so I've been finding in my HDD and found it.
Enjoy https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/653 ... tsuiri.mp3

Ahaha, sorry ^^;. Thanks so much

Zero__wind wrote:

oh god, so efficient
I'm shocked
gj

an advice here
you should better write something like "plz redownload after 31st DEC. 2013 for the new .mp3" in the creator's words in a conspicuous way, so that people who downloaded your map earlier, like me, would be aware of this, otherwise they won't know if they don't read through the thread