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DJ YOSHITAKA - MANA

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eeezzzeee
979 posts
Joined August 2013
eeezzzeee
Hi, from modding queue

[Vass' Beginner]
Fine!

[Standard]
00:50:483 (6,1) - new combo on (6) instead of (1)
00:40:329 - 00:59:714 - how about breaking up the combos one every two downbeats? times for new combo are - 00:40:329 (7) - 00:42:791 (2) - 00:45:560 (1) - 00:47:714 (1) - 00:50:483 (6) - 00:52:637 (1) - I like the new combo here at 00:53:868 (1) - too so maybe keep that one - 00:55:098 (1) - 00:57:560 (1) -
01:33:252 (1,2,1,2) - make this one combo

[Kloyd's Hyper]
I think this should be a little easier because it shows up as so theres no
OD = 5 try because some of these timings might be hard
00:20:021 (2,1) - this looks really cool but maybe make these two closer since its only 1/4 between them
00:35:406 (5,1) - new combo on (5) instead of (1)

[Kiiwa's Another]
00:58:791 (1,2,3,4,1) - how about make (1,2) a combo and (3,4,1) second combo
01:33:098 (4,1) - it would be nice if you filled this space with something

[Another]
00:03:406 (1,2,1,2) - make this one combo to be consistent with 00:13:252 - 00:13:714
00:09:868 (1,2) - this is a random combo.. maybe try 00:09:560 (6,7,1,2) as one combo?
00:20:637 - 00:25:406 - how about breaking this section up with one combo every downbeat? times would be - 00:20:637 (1) - 00:21:868 (5) - 00:23:098 (3) - 00:24:329 (1) -
00:28:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - try a new combo on either (6) or (8)

That's all! Mapping is awesome! mostly just combo fixes. Best of luck :)
Vita-VVA
58 posts
Joined March 2013
Vita-VVA
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing my individual opinion :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Important]
I have hardly difficulty in catching rhythm for pops song as mentioned.. so my mod may helpless and seems ridiculous(hope you never mind it...)

[Another]
The high-speed sliders are really abrupt, it may fit the rhythm better.......such as
00:40:329 (1) - This one
01:10:483 (1) - could make it earlier to here 01:10:175 -
01:20:329 (1) - it's not suitable

00:32:637 (4) - may remove and change the slider?
00:58:791 (1) - cut into two shorter slider? may like
01:50:329 (3) - another rhythm

[Standard]
I prefer to fit the rhythm.....for the beginning of the songs....
01:43:714 (3) - I prefer this rhythm
And for the damn website crashed....I forget where this pic should be used....

Hope I could help you... :)
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Natteke desu
fixed some stuff, thanks guys
and i can't update this cuz of bss D:

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have my freezers
wowwowDamnae'sfreezersO:
thank you !
Aka
1,777 posts
Joined January 2012
Aka
КОГДА УЖЕ РОНК, ЭЛВИС, НУ
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
[Vass’ Beginner]
  1. 00:19:406 (1) - Starting this spinner from 00:19:252 - sounds more natural than the current idea since the drum stress goes there. Well there is no big difference, it’s your call.
[Standard]
  1. IRC modded
[Kloyd’s Hyper]
  1. This difficulty includes unnecessary green lines. Check by yourself and remove them.
  2. 00:02:483 - Missing a clap here. Same goes for 00:08:791 - 00:15:406 - .
  3. 00:20:021 (2,1) - It’d be better to make this pattern easier to read. Players who mainly play Hard-level or so probably mistake this 1/4 gap with a 1/2 one.
  4. 01:00:483 (2,3,1) - I don’t have any complaints with making a jump here, but it’s hard to play this pattern because of the flow. It’d be nice if you make this pattern more friendly like 01:05:406 (2,3,1) - . e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1595075
  5. 01:41:560 (3,4,5,6) - Is it just me or does this stream not fit with the song well? 2 circles should be more fitting here.
[Another]
  1. 00:03:714 (1,3) - Swap the new combo to make consistent with 00:13:252 (1,2,1) - .
  2. 01:42:945 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream should be started from 01:43:098 - since the guitar kinda gets toned up from there. e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1595567

Call me back in forum pm.
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Natteke desu
and all done O:
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
'`ｨ (ﾟдﾟ)/



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Sieg
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Joined February 2012
Sieg

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Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Natteke desu
<3
grumd
1,790 posts
Joined October 2010
grumd
рааанкед блять сука ёбаная карта нахуй
сука молодец элвис ебанул норм мапку
блять

edit: well we did some minor changes so pls kudos
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
gratz~~
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ

grumd wrote:

рааанкед блять сука ёбаная карта нахуй
сука молодец элвис ебанул норм мапку
блять

edit: well we did some minor changes so pls kudos
pr0 bat >w<
gratz all!
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Natteke desu

grumd wrote:

рааанкед блять сука ёбаная карта нахуй
сука молодец элвис ебанул норм мапку
блять

edit: well we did some minor changes so pls kudos
бля спасибо сука нахуй люблю тебя ты самый охуенный ты у меня второй такой я тебя никогда не забуду


правда спасибо!
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Sylith
722 posts
Joined September 2012
Sylith
congratulations elvis!

you really deserve much more ranked map :)
caren_sk
782 posts
Joined October 2010
caren_sk
congrats !!

EliteEvileElvis !!

epoch-making it !!
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Kyubey
osu! Alumni
3,097 posts
Joined December 2012
Kyubey
ГРАЦ ПРО МАППЕР!
GRATZ OTHER PRO MAPPERS TOO!
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Natteke desu
thank guys!
ранкнуто так сильно что мое осу отказывается работать
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
ово грац!
гиперпроняша
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Natteke desu

Vass_Bass wrote:

ово грац!
гиперпроняша
и тебя же грац!
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
i just checked this map hours ago and


lol'd
congrats!
grumd
1,790 posts
Joined October 2010
grumd
i hope nobody googletranslates my rankpost
Kyubey
osu! Alumni
3,097 posts
Joined December 2012
Kyubey

grumd wrote:

i hope nobody googletranslates my rankpost
Untranslatable lol.
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible

grumd wrote:

i hope nobody googletranslates my rankpost
already happened.. xD
Liiraye
1,354 posts
Joined December 2011
Liiraye

Irreversible wrote:

grumd wrote:

i hope nobody googletranslates my rankpost
already happened.. xD
Congratulations though! Really cool map :)
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
wow!? well.. Gratz, EvilElvis~

P.S.
grumd, I also google-translated..lol Your post made me wanna do that!
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
gratz!! elvis!!
arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
And he should make JOMANDA for JOMANA(JOMANDA + MANA)
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
gratz :D
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
Congratz ! :)
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
u're all awesome.
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
gratz <3
Sapphiire_old_1
1,301 posts
Joined July 2013
Sapphiire_old_1
Gratz !!
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,191 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
<3<3<3 Gratz~!!!
Mercurial
Mercurial
DUUUUUUUUUUDE.
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DeletedUser_1574070
u did it !
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