1. Ah just pointing kiai is a bit overuse thought
2. You should rename this to Marathon

1. 00:04:753 (4,2) - nazi, stack this properly or is on purpose?
2. 00:20:978 (3,5) - you can do a better blanket here, just use the approach circle of 3
3. 00:24:957 (1,2) - ah I don't agree with this rhythm since nothing start in 2 (sound is almost inaudible), my suggestion is start a slider here 00:24:957 (1) - following the hold vocal and end it in 00:25:263, and add a circle in 00:25:570
4. 00:46:998 (1,2) - same as above
5. 00:55:263 (3,4) - the 1/4 slider in 00:55:416 (4) - is starting with nothing in the music, is not better if you reverse the rhythm here? like:
   http://puu.sh/6K9mV.jpg
6. 01:17:050 (1) - mmm I feel this slider not comfortable to play since the music is clearly 1/2 (also the vocals), I suggest you to end this slider in 01:17:322.
7. 01:58:780 (3) - move the red point of this slider 1 grid to the left, is nazi but currently the blanket with 01:57:812 (6) - look really weird imo
8. 02:28:055 (3,4,5) -, 02:35:467 (1,2,3) -, 02:34:055 (4,5,1) - , 02:37:938 (3,4,5) - , 02:46:055 (3,4,5) -, stack this properly unless they are on purpose
9. 03:05:987 (4) - mmm just my opinion this slider is really hard to notice, maybe make it a little more noticeable?
10. 03:25:815 (9,10,1) - use equal distance between them? It will be more comfortable to play imo
11. 03:29:090 (2) - There is nothing in the music on the slider start and repeat, consider to change the rhythm here.
12. 03:48:718 (1,2) - mmm is better to have a slider in 03:48:718 (1) - and a circle in 03:49:055, you'll follow the vocals and drums better.
13. 04:08:437 (6) - use a 1/2 slider instead? the 1/4 repeat doesn't sound good also is very noticeable there is nothing in the music in 04:08:521
14. 04:14:336 (1,2) - same as 03:48:718
15. 05:09:932 (1,2) - ah this jump maybe do you want to reduce is to big for a 1/4 jumps IMO
16. 05:12:932 (1,2,3) - stack this properly and 05:31:265 (2,3,1) - omg why I'm so nazy QQ
17. 05:18:099 (1) - I don't get what are you following with the repeat of this slider, since there is an almost inaudible sound in 05:18:349 and IMO is more important the one at 05:18:432 , maybe you want to change the rhythm here?
18. 05:52:679 mm reduce a bit the volume in the tail of this slider
19. 06:43:964 (4,5,1) - ah this is overlapping the whole body of 06:44:280 (1) -, maybe you can move it 1 or 2 grids just for the sake of the readability.
20. 06:49:017 (4) - hmm maybe drag the break like you did in the previous one in 01:30:141 (1) -
21. 07:49:083 (1,2,3) - personally I'm not a fan of this upbeat sliders since I don't like how they sound, starting them on the downbeats will follow the music better IMO.
22. 07:56:283 (2,3,4) - same as above idk maybe you have agood reason to do it thought
23. 08:50:025 (1) - ow why you stop mapping this song here? :c imo you can continue doing for some more secs thought
24. 09:18:009 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - IMO the nc spam is not really necesary it just make it hard to read.
25. 09:23:075 (3,1) - btw you can do a better blanket here
26. 10:01:168 (1) - stack this with 10:01:815 (2) - properly

Yuko wrote:

我最喜歡這種看上去有內容實際上都在放屁的東西

Natteke wrote:

1. There should only be one .osb file in your folder. You must delete the unused one.
2. Unused element in SB: sb\lyrics\n03-1.png

1. 00:11:794 (4) - I'd stack this circle with 00:12:712 (1) to give 00:11:182 (3,4) the same structural flow of 00:10:263 (1,2) (the circle is placed in the same direction of the previous slider's tail) like you did for 00:29:855 (1,2,3,4) as well
2. 00:29:090 (6) - I would use New Combo because of new vocal
3. 00:48:835 (5) - New combo because of 1/6
4. 01:12:686 (1) - x:296 y:12 to make this circle linear with previous slider
5. 02:30:173 (1) - I don't like how this slider flows, honestly. I would make something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1495864 This is better for some reason: it flows, it is readable, it's better. x)
6. 03:05:987 (4) - Ok, let's start with really unrankable stuff here. This slider is totally unreadable. Everyone I asked to testplay the map missed/sliderbreak here. Including me. This slider is totally covered by previous one. I even don't like how 03:05:297 (1) this is placed honestly. With this shape it's very easy to sliderbreak since his head is stacked and covered with an other slider as well. Sooo.. I would suggest you to rearrange this pattern. (I changed the red (5) as well giving it the same shape of (4))
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   164,156,184953,2,0,B|127:146|127:146|56:164,1,100,0|2,2:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
   268,236,185297,54,2,B|308:272|308:272|500:228,1,220.000006713867,4|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
   470,235,185728,1,2,0:2:0:0:
   470,235,185815,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   236,360,185987,2,0,L|228:284,1,55.0000016784668,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   268,236,186159,2,2,L|272:96,1,110.000003356934,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

7. 06:16:017 - Add a circle. This hole is really not needed and if you wanted to keep it you'd have to place the next 06:16:175 (7) elsewhere because it's placed too soon after the previous circle since it's 1/1 and not 1/2 (you are using same 1/2 spacing here, and this is not good)
8. 06:19:175 - Still, I don't like these holes. I'd suggest you something like:
   SPOILER

   
   

   223,265,379017,5,2,0:2:0:0:
   252,344,379175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,192,379333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   256,192,379490,1,2,2:0:0:0:
   196,140,379648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   196,140,379806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   240,72,379964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   240,72,380122,1,0,0:0:0:0:

9. 06:49:017 (4) - Whisle on head to emphasize piano sound
10. 07:07:087 (7,1) - This is 1/4 not 1/2. Reduce this spacing. A bit between 07:07:719 (4,5) - as well
11. 07:20:035 (1) - Is this new combo really needed? I'd remove it
12. 07:24:614 (4,1) - An other place where everyone missed. I know it's cool but still very hard to read, Yuko. You asked me to give you suggestion when I'd have modded it and well, this is what I suggest here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1495939 placing the (4) on 07:25:561 (4). I know, it's not your style, but still better than before. Change it if you have other ideas for it.
13. 07:46:533 (1) - lol. Select 07:44:733 (1) - and CTRL + J
14. 09:18:009 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - EVERYONE missed here and I failed too. I don't know, this is amazing I know, but.. this highly NEEDS to be changed in my opinion <_<
15. 09:47:591 (1) - This is so ugly placed there, same for 10:12:418 (1). Aesthetics.
16. 09:53:410 (2) - Whistle on tail
17. Last song is so hard with AR 9 omfg lool

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