1. Futsuu (3,36 stars, 252 notes)
2. Inner Oni (5 stars, 647 notes)
3. Kantan (2,11 stars, 184 notes)
4. Muzukashii (4,75 stars, 456 notes)
5. Oni (4,89 stars, 549 notes)
6. Ura Oni (5 stars, 826 notes)

_Gezo_ wrote:

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[General]
Welp, you really to cut down your mp3 as... the picture says it all. (hit V to go to the last note) -- unless you are going to map the full version, which I doubt it.

Edit: your preview point is wrong, we don't hear "sen" from "senbonzakura". Put it at 00:45:180 - so it gets fixed. Oh, right.


[Ura Oni]
S..Seriously HP10? XD let's see what other people say. I like it. lol
00:11:409 (1,2,3,1) - On the last note, there's a pretty high-pitched sound that could be a kat. But, if you only put kat and no change, the pattern will be monotonous. Instead, you can make either kkdk or kddk to match the pitch and the song. 00:11:580 - there is a lower beat and I want to keep the 1/6 easy.
00:14:837 (1,2,1) - 1/6 pattern ? You have matched on previous instances of that "quick" instrument with 1/6, so.. Oh true. Added!
00:27:695 (1,2,3,4,1) - I'm not certain the 5-note fits here. It would fit better to have a 1+1+1, or 1+3 pattern. Hm, possible. But I would like to keep it due to the vocal.
00:34:209 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make it 1/2 to bring out the slowdown better ? Not because of slowdown, but because it fits better. that's why I changed it.

Speedup on last kiai : You're bringing about 332.5bpm worth of speed, which 4:3 players will have trouble reading on such a long time. Maybe reduce this to 1.45 ? That's about 254 bpm and it's still easy to read! Let's see what other people gonna say. I actually like it as it is.

Otherwise, no big comments, it's something that is Ono 10, you've got not many tricky patterns but you're playing more on gimmicks.

[Inner Oni]
00:09:866 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1) - I don't really know why, but I feel like the pattern here is mis-sounded. That is, I don't feel like the notes are in their place as it is. Changed to d kkd ddk k d.
01:52:552 - Hm, add a don here ? Unless you want to keep the 1/1 gap. Yeah, want to keep the gap as I did in other parts as well.

If you applied the speed change on Ura Oni, please adapt this difficulty's ending speed for a better consistency

I have no particular complaints on this difficulty, it's nicely made!

[Oni]
00:09:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Well, I'm not that certain the progression is felt here, it was a bit awkward. If I were to give a change suggestion though, I would forcibly ask to add a note at 00:11:066 - as the song's instrument stops here. I don't know what you think of a longer pattern, so let's leave it as it is for now. Hm... have ot think about this one if I'm honest. But you are kinda right.
01:11:580 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - If you don't mind having bicolor 3+ 1/4 notes, I'd recommend to change to d d k kkd d k, it gives a stronger feel on that particular pattern, as there's something strong that happens in the song. Hm, okay.
01:16:380 (1,2) - ddd, just listen to the song. :p ok
01:35:752 (1,1,1) - I found them a little disturbing and breaking a bit the flow of the song, at least move the first k to the center note so it flows a little bit better. The second may be left as it is. Hm. I understand your point, but I like it in this way more due to the vocal.

For the final speedup, if you found a nice change to the two previous, you might not need to decrease by a bit this one.

[Muzukashii]
01:16:380 (1,2,3) - To the song, we've got something that could do ddd ddd. However, I fear for the difficulty a bit, as we'd end up with ddd k k ddd ddd k. I have had this in mind: http://puu.sh/6ashF.png. talked about it in IIRC
01:30:780 (1,2,3,4,1) - I'm uncertain about this, but try dkddk instead: it'll give more depth to the map at this point. woooo, d k k d D is really nice.
01:44:495 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - I think it would flow better by putting only d d kkk d--k instead of d d k k ddd k. ok

Solid thing right here pal.

[Futsuu]
00:04:209 - I think a don would be very suitable here. ok
01:06:438 (3,1,1) - Try to make a 2/1 gap here ? I think it'll work much better this way. Also you'll break the pattern and make it a bit easier. Hm, I think it does fit in a well way with the vocal.
01:25:980 (1,2,1) - ddd, to stay consistent with 01:20:495 (4,5,6) - ? Oh, reason for this was the pattern at 01:23:238 which is connected to it.

Still solid, damn. You're going Lepidon tier.

[Kantan]
01:29:409 (1,2,3,4,1) - (and all other rhythm instances) I found that rhythm odd, honestly. I'd recommend a x x xxx rhythm (x is a note in general)
01:55:123 (2,3,1,2,1) - Instead, make it like 01:44:495 (1,2,3,1) - ? The rhythm in both parts are the same, so that doesn't really need a rhythm change.

I will think about these two points.

This whole mapset is solid as it is, good job ! Have a star here.

Tasha wrote:

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[General]

If you're not planning on mapping the rest of the song, you need to cut the mp3. More than 40% of the song isn't mapped. I'd really suggest perhaps mapping the rest of the song though, there's some really cool parts that aren't being included because of this

[Ura Oni]

00:17:838 (2) - Would suggest removing this note. ok

00:36:952 - Add a don here. It fits with the strong bass in the background. ok

01:31:809 (5) - Change to k so that the quintuplet is a reverse of 01:34:552 (1,2,3,4,1) - ok

01:38:066 (2) - Just a suggestion but this sounds better as a don to me. Give it a try. Oh, wow. You are right!

01:52:466 (6) - Remove this note. Would suggest changing the quintuplet after removing this note to be ddddk Woah, sounds much better now. Plays better as well.

01:55:209 (6) - Same as above, except change the quintuplet to kkkkd. ^

The two mods above are because those notes just seem out of place patterning wise compared to the rest of the song.

Huh, not very often I don't have something to say about easier difficulties. Well done Ono.